Lilith Sakaki wrote:

Can I do an Extra diff ?(It will be polished this time )

1. 00:07:230 (1) - Reduce its volume to 20% or so
2. 00:10:648 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Whole part feels weird, because the volume is way too high for this part, and you're mapping on pretty much nothing (apart from two or three objects)
3. 00:15:870 (3) - On nothing, delete, and replace (2) and (4)
4. 00:21:281 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This part is wrongly mapped to me, I guess you should rework it
5. Break - A lot of potential stuff wasted, please consider mapping this part
6. 00:29:636 (1,2) - There's a beat on the blue tick between these two (Will be marked as -1- for the next instances it occurs)
7. 00:31:344 (3,4,1) - Beat on blue ticks between all objects + on the middle of the slider
8. 00:32:674 (1,2) - -1-
9. 00:33:433 (1,2,3,4,5) - There's nothing on the blue ticks, but there's one just after (1)
10. 00:34:003 (1) - No beat on the red tick
11. 00:34:382 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Please, make a proper curve (Ctrl+Shift+F)
12. 00:34:952 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - This whole part is 1/4 for the drum. I would make this a regular alternate of 8 notes 1/4 (circle) and 4 notes 1/2 (circle + sliders) + make proper curves.
13. 00:47:863 (2,3,4,5) - Delete (3) on nothing (will be noticed as -2- for the next times it happens) + -1- between (4) and (5)
14. 00:48:623 (1,2,3,4) - -1- between (1) and (2) + (3) is on nothing
15. 00:49:477 (2) - -2-
16. 00:49:952 (6,7) - 1-
17. 00:50:806 (2) - -2-
18. 00:51:091 (4) - Can be a triplet
19. 00:51:471 (5,6,7,8) - -1- between (5) and (6) + -2- for (7)
20. 00:52:325 (2,4) - 2-
21. 00:52:990 (1,2) - -1-
22. 00:54:509 (4,5,6,7) - -1- for (4) and (5) + -2- for (6)
23. 00:55:648 (9) - Can be a triplet
24. 00:56:123 (2) - -2-
25. 00:56:218 (3,4) - -1-
26. 00:57:737 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Whole stuff is 1/4, please rework it and make proper curves
27. 00:59:256 (7,1) - -1-
28. 01:00:205 (3,4) - -1-
29. 01:00:585 (5,6) - 1-
30. 01:01:344 (7,8) - 1-
31. 01:02:294 (1) - Beat on the middle of slider
32. 01:03:243 (4,5) - -1-
33. 01:03:813 (7) - Beat on the middle of the first half
34. 01:04:762 (9,1) - 1-
35. 01:05:142 (2,3) - 1-
36. 01:06:281 (1,2) - 1-
37. 01:06:851 (3,4) - 1-
38. 01:07:610 (6,1) - 1-
39. 01:08:180 (2,3) - 1-
40. 01:09:034 (5) - 2-
41. 01:09:319 (7,1) - 1-
42. 01:09:604 (2,4) - -2-
43. 01:09:889 (5) - Beat on the middle of the slider
44. 01:10:838 - Triplet here
45. 01:11:218 - Circle here
46. 01:11:408 (1) - Pure waste of rhythm here, map it 1/2 (red tick) - 3/4 (blue tick) - 1/4 (white tick) - 1/2 - 1/2
47. 01:12:357 - Triplet
48. 01:12:927 (2,3,4) - The drum is actually 1/6 here, so maybe switch it to a slider
49. 01:13:306 (5) - ^
50. 01:13:781 (7) - -2-
51. 01:13:876 (8,9) - Drum 1/6 + the reverse is on nothing
52. 01:14:446 (1) - Extend it by one tick
53. 01:15:205 (3,4) - 1- + Reduce the volume of the end of (4)
54. Kiai part : Whole stuff kiai is 1/4 on drums : I suggest that you play more on this fact, and keep part of 1/4 mapping of 4 or 8 notes (3 is acceptable, notably for 01:24:699 (4,5,1) - , but 5 is not actually nice to play. Also, your kiai end is wrongly placed, it should end there 01:31:155 (1) -
55. From 01:31:155 - to 01:43:117 - Same stuff as the 00:28:876 - part
56. 01:43:306 - Part : See 00:47:104 - Part
57. Last kiai : First half of the kiai is 1/4, while second part is 1/2, but still heavier (at least for me, don't know if it's your feeling), so here's what I suggest : Do a quite streamy first half with a bit lower SV and do a powerful and hard jumpy, high SV for second part
58. Last stream : I recommend you to NC every three white ticks to be regular here
59. 02:39:414 (16,1) - Quite harsh jump, consider reducing a bit the DS
60. 02:45:585 (1) - Make it end on the red tick before and from 02:45:585 (1) - to 02:47:863 - Do a 1/6 stream