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Topic Starter
-SoraGami-

NlHIL wrote:

00:27:770 - add? ok
00:38:056 - addwill break consistency with 00:27:085 -
00:38:742 - add? if for clap, i think it's not that audible
00:43:542 - add? rest part xD
00:43:970 - add? no
01:00:685 - add too hard making this double maybe cuz of previous triple
00:28:456 - 00:29:142 - 00:29:827 - 00:30:513 - and... add? no, just adding triples in the kiai part for the clap sound
01:00:685 - add will reconsider this

Hello World XD xD
Thanks NlHIL! :)

will update later, still graveyarded on my oss ;w; Updated
Feerum
OH NICE
Its back!

ogogog Spam the BN's to get this Ranked! \:D/

From 01:06:513 - to 01:17:485 - Why not only follow the Piano? Some Notes looks random while play :/
When you follow Piano Only you should Delete following Notes:
01:07:542 (67542|0) - Delete. No Piano Sound.
01:07:885 - Add (for LN sound and Additional Piano)
01:09:256 - Add for Same reason
01:09:942 (69942|3) - Delete. No Piano Sound
01:10:285 (70285|0) - Delete. No Piano Sound
01:10:627 - Add same Reason like the First one.
01:12:685 (72685|2) - Delete. No Piano Sound
01:13:027 (73027|1) - Delete. No Piano Sound
01:13:370 - Add for Same reason like above.
01:14:399 (74399|0) - Delete. No Piano Sound.
01:14:742 - Add. Same Reason like above.
01:15:427 (75427|1) - Delete. No Piano Sound.
01:15:770 (75770|2) - Delete. No Piano sound.
Please try it out. It plays really good when you follow only the Piano sound.
Should you accept this Please no Kudosu because i already Mod this once.

Ayy and now. gogo Rank :D

Edit: Oh i forgot to say. Should you accept this dont forget to fix the other diffs too!

Edit 2nd: OHSHIT. I already mention this all with my Mod xD But please rethink this. It plays really Strange it feels like you follow Random Sounds in this Part :cc
Topic Starter
-SoraGami-

Feerum wrote:

OH NICE
Its back!

ogogog Spam the BN's to get this Ranked! \:D/

From 01:06:513 - to 01:17:485 - Why not only follow the Piano? Some Notes looks random while play :/
When you follow Piano Only you should Delete following Notes:
01:07:542 (67542|0) - Delete. No Piano Sound.
01:07:885 - Add (for LN sound and Additional Piano)
01:09:256 - Add for Same reason
01:09:942 (69942|3) - Delete. No Piano Sound
01:10:285 (70285|0) - Delete. No Piano Sound
01:10:627 - Add same Reason like the First one.
01:12:685 (72685|2) - Delete. No Piano Sound
01:13:027 (73027|1) - Delete. No Piano Sound
01:13:370 - Add for Same reason like above.
01:14:399 (74399|0) - Delete. No Piano Sound.
01:14:742 - Add. Same Reason like above.
01:15:427 (75427|1) - Delete. No Piano Sound.
01:15:770 (75770|2) - Delete. No Piano sound. followed all except for this one, idk but im 100% sure that it has solid piano sound here
Please try it out. It plays really good when you follow only the Piano sound.
Should you accept this Please no Kudosu because i already Mod this once.

Ayy and now. gogo Rank :D

Edit: Oh i forgot to say. Should you accept this dont forget to fix the other diffs too!

Edit 2nd: OHSHIT. I already mention this all with my Mod xD But please rethink this. It plays really Strange it feels like you follow Random Sounds in this Part :cc
Yay!~ :)

omg Thanks Feerum xD
ill review it again but im still at school so maybe later when im already at home Done!

yah, i decided to continue this so my hardwork will not go to waste xD silly me

UPDATED



Feerum's mod done + some self-mod + finalized hitsounds

Ok.. will start to hunt for BNs again xD
(i wish they will notice me ;w;)
Marirose
bubbled
gl
Topic Starter
-SoraGami-

Marirose wrote:

bubbled
gl
Wow... Thanks a lot Marirose :'D
sobs..
Feerum
I told you! Nice. Almost there :D:D
Topic Starter
-SoraGami-

Feerum wrote:

I told you! Nice. Almost there :D:D
lol, thanks a lot Feerum for encouraging me <3
Topic Starter
-SoraGami-
re-updated because the map can't be downloaded x.x

fixed
Topic Starter
-SoraGami-
lol
Topic Starter
-SoraGami-
updated,

changed the ending because it is,... ehhh
Lefrave
Hellu~ ^-^
I'm sorry, but I'm afraid I won't be of much help. This will be a really short mod, sorry. .__.

COLUMN: |0|1|2|3|


'NOVICE' is fine.


This is the only thing that made me go "I guess that needs a little modding..?":
01:03:770 (63770|2,63770|1,63942|0,63942|3,64113|1,64113|2,64285|0,64285|3,64456|1,64456|2,64627|3,64627|0,64799|1,64799|2) - This is too long for that pattern. I guess, here 01:04:456 - you could do this:
01:07:199 - There's a sound here, you should add a note, preferably in column 2.
01:09:942 - Same as the one above. Add one in column 0, or mess around with the 3 previous notes and place it in column 3.
01:39:427 (99427|2,99427|1,99599|0,99599|3,99770|2,99770|1,99942|0,99942|3,100113|2,100113|1,100285|0,100285|3,100456|2,100456|1) - First I suggested that you keep like half of the pattern and change it into another pattern, now let's change it up 8-) and add another pattern, like this one and then add half of the other one.


*cough* Sorry, I'm still in no place to talk about 4* maps.


I apologize for not being of much help. If I was then I'm glad ^-^


Good luck with your map! =^-^=
Topic Starter
-SoraGami-

Web Box wrote:

Hellu~ ^-^
I'm sorry, but I'm afraid I won't be of much help. This will be a really short mod, sorry. .__.

COLUMN: |0|1|2|3|


'NOVICE' is fine.


This is the only thing that made me go "I guess that needs a little modding..?":
01:03:770 (63770|2,63770|1,63942|0,63942|3,64113|1,64113|2,64285|0,64285|3,64456|1,64456|2,64627|3,64627|0,64799|1,64799|2) - This is too long for that pattern. I guess, here 01:04:456 - you could do this: rearranged
01:07:199 - There's a sound here, you should add a note, preferably in column 2. i only followed piano sound same as below
01:09:942 - Same as the one above. Add one in column 0, or mess around with the 3 previous notes and place it in column 3.
01:39:427 (99427|2,99427|1,99599|0,99599|3,99770|2,99770|1,99942|0,99942|3,100113|2,100113|1,100285|0,100285|3,100456|2,100456|1) - First I suggested that you keep like half of the pattern and change it into another pattern, now let's change it up 8-) and add another pattern, like this one and then add half of the other one. rearranged


*cough* Sorry, I'm still in no place to talk about 4* maps.


I apologize for not being of much help. If I was then I'm glad ^-^


Good luck with your map! =^-^=
Thanks Web Box~ :)
Cipse
Hello world! SoraGami :P

Here's a mod in return :)

NOVICE


The only thing I found was a slight inconsistency at 00:43:713 (43713|0,43799|3,44056|2) -, 01:19:370 (79370|0,79456|3,79713|1) - and 01:41:313 (101313|1,101399|3,101656|0) -. Basically, these three notes are mapping the percussion but there is another percussive sound that you didn't map at 00:43:970 -, 01:19:627 - and 01:41:570 -

ADVANCED


I'd say that both 00:43:799 (43799|3) - and 00:44:056 (44056|0,44056|1) - have the same sound. Add a second note to 00:43:799 (43799|3) -. The same applies to 01:19:456 - and 01:41:399 -
Also note that 00:21:856 - and 00:22:113 - have the same percussive sounds as the above group

EXHAUST


Change 00:12:256 (12256|1,12256|0) - to a single note. You've been using doubles for the bass only - it seems weird to see doubles here when the music is similar to that at 00:12:170 -, 00:12:085 -, 00:11:913 -, etc
Note that making these changes will cause the SR to drop from 3.92 to 3.81

00:12:427 (12427|1,12427|0) -
00:13:627 (13627|3,13627|0) -
00:13:799 (13799|0,13799|3) -
00:14:999 (14999|3,14999|2) -
00:15:170 (15170|3,15170|2) -
00:17:742 (17742|0,17742|1) -
00:17:913 (17913|0,17913|1) -
00:19:113 (19113|3,19113|0) -
00:19:285 (19285|0,19285|3) -

01:42:770 (102770|1,102770|0) -
01:42:942 (102942|0,102942|1) -
01:44:142 (104142|1,104142|3) -
01:44:313 (104313|3,104313|1) -
01:45:513 (105513|2,105513|3) -
01:45:685 (105685|2,105685|3) -
01:48:256 (108256|2,108256|3) -
01:48:427 (108427|3,108427|2) -
01:49:627 (109627|3,109627|0) -
01:49:799 (109799|3,109799|0) -

Isn't the patterning of 01:28:456 (88456|3,88456|0,88627|2,88627|1,88799|0,88799|3,88970|2,88970|1,89142|0,89142|3,89313|2,89313|1,89485|0,89485|3) - slightly boring? My comfortable "S" range is about 3* but even then that pattern is a bit easy. Also, you've used a different pattern between 01:03:770 - and 01:04:627 - then, later, 01:39:427 - and 01:40:285 -, which has a similar bass occuring every 1/2 beat

The last thing, maybe take out 01:53:142 (113142|0) -. I don't think the sound is strong enough to justify three notes and I think that a simple {0+2,1+3,0+2} feels nice to play, even if they aren't all the same types of notes. Also, I doubt that keeping 01:53:142 (113142|0) - is going to make someone miss/get a 200 :lol:

__

Very fun beatmap to play and mod - even if I can't play EXHAUST well :oops:
If I recall correctly, I think this is the shortest mod I've ever given - there's almost no inconsistencies at all and everything is comfortable to play. Good luck :D
Topic Starter
-SoraGami-

Cipse wrote:

Hello world! SoraGami :P

Here's a mod in return :)

NOVICE


The only thing I found was a slight inconsistency at 00:43:713 (43713|0,43799|3,44056|2) -, 01:19:370 (79370|0,79456|3,79713|1) - and 01:41:313 (101313|1,101399|3,101656|0) -. Basically, these three notes are mapping the percussion but there is another percussive sound that you didn't map at 00:43:970 -, 01:19:627 - and 01:41:570 - sorry, i only mapped only which sounds are strong and since it is normal diff and the easiest it is fine and i dont want to make all diffs to have similar structures

ADVANCED


I'd say that both 00:43:799 (43799|3) - and 00:44:056 (44056|0,44056|1) - have the same sound. Add a second note to 00:43:799 (43799|3) -. The same applies to 01:19:456 - and 01:41:399 - same with Normal diff
Also note that 00:21:856 - and 00:22:113 - have the same percussive sounds as the above group this one are different, that's why the notes are added because of the melody and the chimes while the one you mentioned above dont have so i only followed the strong sounds

EXHAUST


Change 00:12:256 (12256|1,12256|0) - to a single note. You've been using doubles for the bass only - it seems weird to see doubles here when the music is similar to that at 00:12:170 -, 00:12:085 -, 00:11:913 -, etc someone has told me, there's nothing special if i only map 2 notes in every 1/1, and when i hear it in 25% playback, the sounds are actually have melody so i try to add it and when i test it, it plays actually better
Note that making these changes will cause the SR to drop from 3.92 to 3.81

00:12:427 (12427|1,12427|0) -
00:13:627 (13627|3,13627|0) -
00:13:799 (13799|0,13799|3) -
00:14:999 (14999|3,14999|2) -
00:15:170 (15170|3,15170|2) -
00:17:742 (17742|0,17742|1) -
00:17:913 (17913|0,17913|1) -
00:19:113 (19113|3,19113|0) -
00:19:285 (19285|0,19285|3) -

01:42:770 (102770|1,102770|0) -
01:42:942 (102942|0,102942|1) -
01:44:142 (104142|1,104142|3) -
01:44:313 (104313|3,104313|1) -
01:45:513 (105513|2,105513|3) -
01:45:685 (105685|2,105685|3) -
01:48:256 (108256|2,108256|3) -
01:48:427 (108427|3,108427|2) -
01:49:627 (109627|3,109627|0) -
01:49:799 (109799|3,109799|0) -

Isn't the patterning of 01:28:456 (88456|3,88456|0,88627|2,88627|1,88799|0,88799|3,88970|2,88970|1,89142|0,89142|3,89313|2,89313|1,89485|0,89485|3) - slightly boring? My comfortable "S" range is about 3* but even then that pattern is a bit easy. Also, you've used a different pattern between 01:03:770 - and 01:04:627 - then, later, 01:39:427 - and 01:40:285 -, which has a similar bass occuring every 1/2 beat well, okay repatterned xD

The last thing, maybe take out 01:53:142 (113142|0) -. I don't think the sound is strong enough to justify three notes and I think that a simple {0+2,1+3,0+2} feels nice to play, even if they aren't all the same types of notes. Also, I doubt that keeping 01:53:142 (113142|0) - is going to make someone miss/get a 200 :lol:ehh, it actually plays really nice, and double LNs at the end gives this diff feel more like an EXH diff

__

Very fun beatmap to play and mod - even if I can't play EXHAUST well :oops:Thanks xD
If I recall correctly, I think this is the shortest mod I've ever given - there's almost no inconsistencies at all and everything is comfortable to play. Good luck :D
Thanks for mod :)
Cipse
That feeling when nothing in your mod was accepted :(
:P
Topic Starter
-SoraGami-
lol sorry :( but i accepted one tho

i repatterned this 01:28:456 (88456|3,88456|0,88627|2,88627|1,88799|0,88799|3,88970|2,88970|1,89142|0,89142|3,89313|2,89313|1,89485|0,89485|3)
Cipse
Oh, my bad. I still wish it was more helpful though :)
Topic Starter
-SoraGami-
np~ any help will be appreciated :D
jukkaduei
Hello from M4M

Column |0|1|2|3|

Great diff
01:23:999 (83999|2) - Move to column 1 for balance
01:26:399 (86399|3) - Move this note to column 2 and move 01:26:742 (86742|0) - to column 3 for balance
Perfect diff I can't find a defect
Perfect diff too

Good luck with your beatmap
Topic Starter
-SoraGami-

jukkaduei wrote:

Hello from M4M

Column |0|1|2|3|

Great diff
01:23:999 (83999|2) - Move to column 1 for balance it's already balance, if i move it it will be unbalance with the next note and i actually have a pattern basis for that
01:26:399 (86399|3) - Move this note to column 2 and move 01:26:742 (86742|0) - to column 3 for balance ok
Perfect diff I can't find a defect
Perfect diff too

Good luck with your beatmap
Thanks for mod :)
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