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Topic Starter
-SoraGami-
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, July 03, 2016 at 8:52:22 PM

Artist: Music by Minamotoya, Vocal by SOPHY
Title: Hello world!
Source: SOUND VOLTEX BOOTH
Tags: Kazuma Minamoto jubeat saucer sdvx x dtm magazine collaboration contest floor infection
BPM: 175
Filesize: 2732kb
Play Time: 01:55
Difficulties Available:
  1. ADVANCED - 4Key (2.85 stars, 928 notes)
  2. EXHAUST - 4Key (3.9 stars, 1242 notes)
  3. NOVICE - 4Key (1.95 stars, 545 notes)
Download: Music by Minamotoya, Vocal by SOPHY - Hello world!
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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"HELLO WORLD"

Thank you for the help and support for this map ^^
by : Marirose
by : me
by : Kawawa
by : Avalon
Fubukicat
Hi sora-chan

probably really short mod incoming
Munya!
4K=1/2/3/4
[Exhaust]
01:01:027 - It should be 3 notes In my opinion
01:19:799 (79799|1) - should have a note here
01:19:885 (79885|2) - move to 2 ^ so you add a note to 3
01:36:685 - optional , add another note
01:43:285 (103285|3) - add note
01:44:656 (104656|0) - add note
nice diff
[Advanced]
00:16:627 (16627|3) - add to 4 (should be 3 notes imo)
00:22:285 (22285|0) - add to 1 ? (louder sound)
00:32:742 (32742|3) - should be 3 notes ,(atleast make it 2 notes imo)
01:20:570 (80570|1,80913|1) - this part on all diffs is really cool
[Novice]
Sounds fine to me :3
mood isn't at the top sorry, stuffs happened
Good Luck for this , nyami~ have a nice day ^^/
Topic Starter
-SoraGami-

Eternalie wrote:

Hi sora-chan

probably really short mod incoming
Munya!
4K=1/2/3/4
[Exhaust]
01:01:027 - It should be 3 notes In my opinion yah ur right
01:19:799 (79799|1) - should have a note here i dont know because the sound here is caused by the end this 01:19:713 (79713|0,79713|1) -
01:19:885 (79885|2) - move to 2 ^ so you add a note to 3 ok
01:36:685 - optional , add another note
01:43:285 (103285|3) - add note no, the note has only a high pitch
01:44:656 (104656|0) - add note ^
nice diff
[Advanced]
00:16:627 (16627|3) - add to 4 (should be 3 notes imo) ohh right
00:22:285 (22285|0) - add to 1 ? (louder sound) no thanks, followed only the melody there
00:32:742 (32742|3) - should be 3 notes ,(atleast make it 2 notes imo) cuz i flloed only the melody in that part, okay then added
01:20:570 (80570|1,80913|1) - this part on all diffs is really cool thanks
[Novice]
Sounds fine to me :3
mood isn't at the top sorry, stuffs happened
Good Luck for this , nyami~ have a nice day ^^/
Thanks again Eter! :)
Satoshi Kazuki
Hi...here my M4M :D
feel free to not kudos me if you dont like my mod

My Column:1|2|3|4

4K NOVICE
00:05:485 (5485|3) - move LN at 4th column at 00:05:313
00:33:085 (33085|2) - move to 1st column
00:33:256 (33256|1) - move to 4th column
00:33:256 - add 1 LN at 3rd
00:34:113 (34113|2,34285|2) - i think it's kinda hard for 2 stars beatmap...
00:38:913 - add LN at 4th column
01:11:313 (71313|1) - remove
01:11:656 - add LN 2nd column

4K ADVANCE
00:01:199 - add 1 note at sec column
00:10:456 (10456|0) - add LN at 1st column
00:10:627 (10627|3) - add note at 4th column
00:10:970 (10970|2) - move LN to 00:10:799
00:10:799 - note at sec column
00:11:313 - ^ 1st column
00:11:485 - ^ 4th column
00:11:485 - jack
00:56:913 (56913|1) - move LN here 00:56:742
00:56:742 - LN end here...follow the voice
00:56:742 - jack

sorry i cant mod EXHAUST :( im still new in Modding :(

like the song ^^ hope this song got ranked
Topic Starter
-SoraGami-

Satoshi Kazuki wrote:

Hi...here my M4M :D
feel free to not kudos me if you dont like my mod

My Column:1|2|3|4

4K NOVICE
00:05:485 (5485|3) - move LN at 4th column at 00:05:313 nice notice
00:33:085 (33085|2) - move to 1st column no breaking balance
00:33:256 (33256|1) - move to 4th column ^
00:33:256 - add 1 LN at 3rd no not following stream there just melody
00:34:113 (34113|2,34285|2) - i think it's kinda hard for 2 stars beatmap... its fine, same sound, and i ask a friend to play this, its okay
00:38:913 - add LN at 4th column no main melody only
01:11:313 (71313|1) - remove no tone rise there
01:11:656 - add LN 2nd column i here no sound

4K ADVANCE
00:01:199 - add 1 note at sec column followed piano-like sound there but illl add it if someone else point this out
00:10:456 (10456|0) - add LN at 1st column its not that hearable
00:10:627 (10627|3) - add note at 4th column ^
00:10:970 (10970|2) - move LN to 00:10:799 i think not
00:10:799 - note at sec column ^
00:11:313 - ^ 1st column no im just aking it simple
00:11:485 - ^ 4th column ^
00:11:485 - jack
00:56:913 (56913|1) - move LN here 00:56:742
00:56:742 - LN end here...follow the voice
00:56:742 - jack

sorry i cant mod EXHAUST :( im still new in Modding :( its okay

like the song ^^ hope this song got ranked
Thanks for mod
i also fixed some notes in exhaust
Satoshi Kazuki

-SoraGami- wrote:

Satoshi Kazuki wrote:

Hi...here my M4M :D
feel free to not kudos me if you dont like my mod

My Column:1|2|3|4

4K NOVICE
00:05:485 (5485|3) - move LN at 4th column at 00:05:313 nice notice
00:33:085 (33085|2) - move to 1st column no breaking balance
00:33:256 (33256|1) - move to 4th column ^
00:33:256 - add 1 LN at 3rd no not following stream there just melody
00:34:113 (34113|2,34285|2) - i think it's kinda hard for 2 stars beatmap... its fine, same sound, and i ask a friend to play this, its okay
00:38:913 - add LN at 4th column no main melody only
01:11:313 (71313|1) - remove no tone rise there
01:11:656 - add LN 2nd column i here no sound

4K ADVANCE
00:01:199 - add 1 note at sec column followed piano-like sound there but illl add it if someone else point this out
00:10:456 (10456|0) - add LN at 1st column its not that hearable
00:10:627 (10627|3) - add note at 4th column ^
00:10:970 (10970|2) - move LN to 00:10:799 i think not
00:10:799 - note at sec column ^
00:11:313 - ^ 1st column no im just aking it simple
00:11:485 - ^ 4th column ^
00:11:485 - jack
00:56:913 (56913|1) - move LN here 00:56:742
00:56:742 - LN end here...follow the voice
00:56:742 - jack

sorry i cant mod EXHAUST :( im still new in Modding :( its okay

like the song ^^ hope this song got ranked
Thanks for mod
i also fixed some notes in exhaust
i see
Satoshi Kazuki
sorry about my last mod *that jack was my mistake

*no kudos

4K ADVANCE
00:10:970 (10970|2,11742|2) - jack
01:41:827 (101827|2,102256|2) - jack
Topic Starter
-SoraGami-

Satoshi Kazuki wrote:

sorry about my last mod *that jack was my mistake

*no kudos

4K ADVANCE
00:10:970 (10970|2,11742|2) - jack its better than sn-sn jack
01:41:827 (101827|2,102256|2) - jack ^
Thanks :3
Ginshu
great map >w<)b
Topic Starter
-SoraGami-

LNP- wrote:

great map >w<)b
Thanks LNP- and for the star! :3
Gomuryuu
Hi~

From MODHOUSE

Here's my mod as requested

Column 1|2|3|4
[NOVICE]
00:27:085 - add note?
no more issues found. Already well-mapped

[ADVANCED]
---
treat the mod on this part as one mod. only testplay after applying all mod.
00:01:285 - add note. i hear sound (try listening on 50% playback)
00:01:799 - ^
00:02:656 - ^
00:03:170 - ^
00:04:027 - ^
00:04:542 - ^
00:05:399 - ^
00:05:742 - ^
00:05:913 - ^

and
00:01:713 (1713|0) - remove this note
00:03:085 (3085|2) - ^
00:04:456 (4456|1) - ^
00:05:313 - ^
00:05:827 (5827|2) - ^
and you can still vary the pattern for balance. e.g. on 00:01:027 v

etc. basically its two note 1/4 beat apart for every 1/2 beat pattern
here's the code, just in case you don't really get what i'm trying to suggest
SPOILER
replace all notes before the first hitsounded note (448,192,6170,1,0,0:0:0:30:normal-hitnormal.wav) with these on notepad
64,192,685,5,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,685,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,856,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,1027,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,1113,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,1285,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,1370,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,1542,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,1627,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,1799,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,1885,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,2056,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,2227,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,2399,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,2485,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,2656,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,2742,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,2913,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,2999,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,3170,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,3256,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,3427,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,3599,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,3770,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,3856,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,4027,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,4113,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,4285,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,4370,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,4542,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,4627,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,4799,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,4885,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,4970,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,5142,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,5227,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,5399,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,5485,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,5656,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,5742,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,5913,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,5999,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,6170,1,0,0:0:0:0:
---
00:03:513 (3513|2) - i didn't put this mod above because this note doesn't follow even your original pattern. remove this
00:04:885 - this one has sound so add note maybe^

No more issues found. Already well-mapped

[EXHAUST]
00:00:685 ~ 00:06:170 - do something like my mod on ADVANCED
00:22:970 ~ 00:26:399 - why not use triplets for clap+kick sound and use double for kick-only sound to emphasize the different sound. you might want to apply this on the other parts
01:17:313 (77313|3) - move to 3 for balance
01:30:170 - add note
No more issues found. Already well-mapped too

Fun song + Nice Pattern => Deserve a star, take this~ :)

GO RANK!~
Topic Starter
-SoraGami-

Gomuryuu wrote:

Hi~

From MODHOUSE

Here's my mod as requested

Column 1|2|3|4
[NOVICE]
00:27:085 - add note? ok
no more issues found. Already well-mapped

[ADVANCED]
---
treat the mod on this part as one mod. only testplay after applying all mod.
00:01:285 - add note. i hear sound (try listening on 50% playback)
00:01:799 - ^
00:02:656 - ^
00:03:170 - ^
00:04:027 - ^
00:04:542 - ^
00:05:399 - ^
00:05:742 - ^
00:05:913 - ^

and
00:01:713 (1713|0) - remove this note
00:03:085 (3085|2) - ^
00:04:456 (4456|1) - ^
00:05:313 - ^
00:05:827 (5827|2) - ^
and you can still vary the pattern for balance. e.g. on 00:01:027 v

etc. basically its two note 1/4 beat apart for every 1/2 beat pattern
here's the code, just in case you don't really get what i'm trying to suggest
SPOILER
replace all notes before the first hitsounded note (448,192,6170,1,0,0:0:0:30:normal-hitnormal.wav) with these on notepad
64,192,685,5,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,685,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,856,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,1027,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,1113,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,1285,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,1370,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,1542,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,1627,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,1799,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,1885,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,2056,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,2227,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,2399,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,2485,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,2656,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,2742,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,2913,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,2999,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,3170,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,3256,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,3427,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,3599,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,3770,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,3856,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,4027,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,4113,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,4285,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,4370,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,4542,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,4627,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,4799,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,4885,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,4970,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,5142,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,5227,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,5399,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,5485,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,5656,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,5742,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,5913,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,5999,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,6170,1,0,0:0:0:0:
---
00:03:513 (3513|2) - i didn't put this mod above because this note doesn't follow even your original pattern. remove this
00:04:885 - this one has sound so add note maybe^

i still haven't given it a thought, still fixing this... (in progress)
sorry, i have to reject this :( , cuz i map there only the bell-like sound (i dont know what sound is that, but its like a bell, lol
alright, i fixed some parts here based on your mod, i kinda missed some bell-like sound lol
No more issues found. Already well-mapped

[EXHAUST]
00:00:685 ~ 00:06:170 - do something like my mod on ADVANCED
00:22:970 ~ 00:26:399 - why not use triplets for clap+kick sound and use double for kick-only sound to emphasize the different sound. you might want to apply this on the other parts i was planning to do it when im still mapping this. but there will be many awkward minijack (even we both love minijack. lol), and some parts will have 4 notes when cymbals enter the song.... but i even put this in the kiai time (since its the chorus, so i think its okay) cuz the chorus is too easy with just double notes, so i put it in the chorus, so yeah
01:17:313 (77313|3) - move to 3 for balance nice, i was confused in this part, thanks
01:30:170 - add note nice
No more issues found. Already well-mapped too

Fun song + Nice Pattern => Deserve a star, take this~ :) woah. Thanks

GO RANK!~
Thanks for the mod and star Gomu! :)
Verniy_Chan

Hi Sora-san >.<)/
NM as requested from ❅ Верный Mania Queue ❅

4K = |1|2|3|4|


(Focus : Note Presence , Hand/Row Balance, Variation/Consistency Pattern)

[NOVICE]
00:00:685 (685|2) move to 2, hand balance
00:09:599 (9599|2,9942|2) move to 4, then 00:09:770 (9770|1) move to 1 fun to play and relax finger (up to you)
00:10:113 (10113|3) move to 2 or 3
00:54:685 (54685|1,55027|0) Ctrl + G
00:57:599 (57599|0,57770|1,57942|2,57942|3) Ctrl + H
01:29:142 suggest like my previous mod

[ADVANCED]
00:03:770 (3770|2,3856|1) Ctrl + G
00:15:599 - 00:15:942 - suggest pattern like 00:11:656 - 00:11:999 - for consistency
00:48:856 (48856|0,48856|1) move to right 2x
01:04:970 (64970|1) move to 2
01:40:627 (100627|2) move to 2

really nice pattern~
Good Luck
Topic Starter
-SoraGami-

Verniy_Chan wrote:


Hi Sora-san >.<)/
NM as requested from ❅ Верный Mania Queue ❅

4K = |1|2|3|4|


(Focus : Note Presence , Hand/Row Balance, Variation/Consistency Pattern)

[NOVICE]
00:00:685 (685|2) move to 2, hand balance ok
00:09:599 (9599|2,9942|2) move to 4, then 00:09:770 (9770|1) move to 1 fun to play and relax finger (up to you) keep, ill stick to the original
00:10:113 (10113|3) move to 2 or 3 since ^ is rejected
00:54:685 (54685|1,55027|0) Ctrl + G nice
00:57:599 (57599|0,57770|1,57942|2,57942|3) Ctrl + H nice
01:29:142 suggest like my previous mod keep

[ADVANCED]
00:03:770 (3770|2,3856|1) Ctrl + G ok
00:15:599 - 00:15:942 - suggest pattern like 00:11:656 - 00:11:999 - for consistency i did it on purpose to prevent repetitive pattern
00:48:856 (48856|0,48856|1) move to right 2x ok
01:04:970 (64970|1) move to 2 its already in to, maybe typo? moved to 3 then
01:40:627 (100627|2) move to 2 ok

really nice pattern~
Good Luck
Thanks Verniy_chan! :)
DanSparce
hie~!
mod from my queue
Column:
/1/2/3/4/
NOVICE
00:10:799 (10799|1) - uhh, add ln here to end at 00:11:656 (11656|2) - ? like what you did here 00:05:313 (5313|3) - ?
00:16:113 - add note here? preferrably at /3/
00:27:770 - add note here too (coz drum + cymbals) preferrably at /2/ and don't forget to move 00:27:942 (27942|1) - at /1/
00:32:742 - double note?
00:34:285 (34285|2) - not that nuch of a problem, but better if you move it at /4/ for hand balance/pattern
00:35:656 (35656|1) - " but to /1/ instead
00:37:027 (37027|3) - " to /2/

Hitsound suggestion:
00:22:970 - here for example has also a drum beat, not only clap. You could also put your normal-hitnormal hitsound here, and in 00:23:656, and etc.
ADVANCED
Just a suggestion: OD & HP 7.5
omg no mistakes done at notes (well at least i passed through everything and testplayed it). Ok. 1 star!
But still, base on NOVICE for hitsound suggestion.
EXHAUST
01:04:970 (64970|3,64970|0,64970|2,64970|1) - Delete one, saw your pattern with finishes, and I saw no four notes.
01:51:599 (111599|0,111599|3,111599|1,111599|2) - "
Nice 4K map!!!
Oh, yeah, and your star!!! *pew
Topic Starter
-SoraGami-

DanSparce wrote:

hie~!
mod from my queue
Column:
/1/2/3/4/
NOVICE
00:10:799 (10799|1) - uhh, add ln here to end at 00:11:656 (11656|2) - ? like what you did here 00:05:313 (5313|3) - ? i chaned it, its a bit too hard, just making it simple
00:16:113 - add note here? preferrably at /3/ no thanks, i followed drum there
00:27:770 - add note here too (coz drum + cymbals) preferrably at /2/ and don't forget to move 00:27:942 (27942|1) - at /1/ ok and also i repatterned thr next note for balance
00:32:742 - double note? no, just aking it simple, for the melody to be a little more lead
00:34:285 (34285|2) - not that nuch of a problem, but better if you move it at /4/ for hand balance/pattern no, i like minijack and it is the only part where i can put minijacks, lol
00:35:656 (35656|1) - " but to /1/ instead ^
00:37:027 (37027|3) - " to /2/ ^

Hitsound suggestion:
00:22:970 - here for example has also a drum beat, not only clap. You could also put your normal-hitnormal hitsound here, and in 00:23:656, and etc. will keep it for now
ADVANCED
Just a suggestion: OD & HP 7.5
omg no mistakes done at notes (well at least i passed through everything and testplayed it). Ok. 1 star!
But still, base on NOVICE for hitsound suggestion. same with NOV diff
EXHAUST
01:04:970 (64970|3,64970|0,64970|2,64970|1) - Delete one, saw your pattern with finishes, and I saw no four notes. no, i did it on purpose the claps in the others parts is only in 2 notes because when i put 3 notes there, there will have a akward minijacks and makes the song not fun to play cuz when finishes enters in all parts in the song there will have 4 notes, so i just put the additional note for clap in the kiai section, cuz it will turn out to be same as ADV diff and to make it harder since its the Hardest diff, so when finishes enters in the song, there will be only 4 notes in the kiai time, so it will not break the flow in the entire song (lol, sorry for my bad english)
01:51:599 (111599|0,111599|3,111599|1,111599|2) - " ^
Nice 4K map!!!
Oh, yeah, and your star!!! *pew yey, thanks
Thanks Dan! :D
DanSparce
ok maybe it doesn't need a star. It needs two stars! *Pew
Topic Starter
-SoraGami-

DanSparce wrote:

ok maybe it doesn't need a star. It needs two stars! *Pew
Woah. Thanks munch munch! :)
Frim4503
M4M from your Queue
col.1,2,3,4

NOVICE
00:08:570 (8570|2) - move to 3
00:08:913 (8913|3,9085|0,9256|3,9427|0) - it will good if you can make somthing like this http://puu.sh/hT9vs/6ade2270e5.png
00:32:742 (32742|2) - make double for cybal sound
00:38:742 - add note to 3
00:38:913 - ^2
00:43:713 (43713|2,43799|3) - ctrl+h
01:28:456 (88456|2,88627|1,88799|2,88970|1) - same with prev. case
01:47:485 (107485|1,107570|2,107656|3) - swap col. it more esy for newbide player

ADVANCED
00:32:399 (32399|0) - move to 3

EXHAUST
00:23:313 (23313|2) - move to 1 for hand balnce
00:24:170 (24170|1) - ^3
00:25:542 (25542|0) - ^3
00:26:227 (26227|2) - ^3
00:53:313 (53313|3) - ^2
01:11:827 (71827|3) - ^1
01:11:999 - add note to 1
Topic Starter
-SoraGami-

Frim4503 wrote:

M4M from your Queue
col.1,2,3,4

NOVICE
00:08:570 (8570|2) - move to 3 ok
00:08:913 (8913|3,9085|0,9256|3,9427|0) - it will good if you can make somthing like this http://puu.sh/hT9vs/6ade2270e5.png nice
00:32:742 (32742|2) - make double for cybal sound no, in this part i make the instrument a little bit more lead like a solo lol
00:38:742 - add note to 3 ok
00:38:913 - ^2 ok
00:43:713 (43713|2,43799|3) - ctrl+h no, breaking balance
01:28:456 (88456|2,88627|1,88799|2,88970|1) - same with prev. case ok
01:47:485 (107485|1,107570|2,107656|3) - swap col. it more esy for newbide player no, it's fine

ADVANCED
00:32:399 (32399|0) - move to 3 no, low pitch

EXHAUST
00:23:313 (23313|2) - move to 1 for hand balnce no its fine, i put the jacks in alternating column for it to become balance, and since its the hardest diff why not, and minijacks really suit there :3
00:24:170 (24170|1) - ^3 ^
00:25:542 (25542|0) - ^3 ^
00:26:227 (26227|2) - ^3 ^
00:53:313 (53313|3) - ^2no i really like this
01:11:827 (71827|3) - ^1^
01:11:999 - add note to 1 no need for double notes, its just a simple piano
Thanks Frim! :)
Feerum
Hello -SoraGami-

Suprise! \:D/

You requestet to me with PM so i'm here to mod your Map :3

It's time for..

Feru's PM Mania Mod!


Alright. Let's beginn :3

---------------------------------------------------------------

Red means Unrankable stuff
Big means high recommend to accept this Suggestion
Normal or with // are just comments or other stuff :3
^ means same as above

Column: | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

General


Artist: Looks good
Title: Looks good
BPM/Offset: Looks good
Source: Looks good
Tags: Looks good
BG: Looks good
Audio: Looks good!

NOVICE


00:05:313 (5313|3) - When this LN follow the "wooosh" sound it should begin here: 00:05:485 -
00:41:142 (41142|3) - Move to 1 and 00:41:313 (41313|2) - to 4 for some variation
Nothing more found. Nice! :)

ADVANCED

From 01:06:513 - to 01:17:313 - i suggest to follow the (Piano?) all the time. So you have to delete some notes:
01:08:913 (68913|0) - This one
01:09:942 (69942|3) - This one (01:10:113 (70113|2) - Move this one then to 4)
01:10:285 (70285|0) - This one
01:12:685 (72685|3) - This one
01:13:027 (73027|2) - This one
01:14:399 (74399|0) - This one
01:15:427 (75427|3) - This one
01:16:113 (76113|1) - This one
--Suggestion End's--
I know it looks a little bit strange, but it play's really good because then all notes follow only the Piano :) But it's only a suggestion and it's up to you :3
Oh yeah maybe you rearrange some notes when you accept my suggestion. As best as possible to pitch :)

EXHAUST

00:05:313 (5313|3) - Like in the NOV this LN when it follows the "wooosh" sound should begin 00:05:485 - here
00:16:285 (16285|1) - Suggestion for this part: 00:17:056 (17056|1) - Move to 3, 00:17:142 (17142|2) - to 2, 00:17:227 (17227|1,17313|2) - CTRL + H, 00:17:399 (17399|3) - to 1 aaaand 00:17:485 (17485|0) - to 4. Fore more Balance and for some pitch.
00:17:999 (17999|3) - Move to 3 for more Balance
00:19:370 (19370|3) - To 1 and 00:19:456 (19456|1) - to 4. Again more Balance
01:06:513 - For this whole Part like in the Advance. I recommend you follow only the Piano andt the LN's are a nice extra for the Exhaust.
01:35:142 (95142|1) - Move to 4, 01:35:313 (95313|3) - to 2 and 01:35:485 (95485|1) - to 4. More balance.
01:42:170 - From here to 01:47:656 - . When i hear right which sound you follow here you should delete some notes.
01:42:685 (102685|1) - This one.
01:43:113 (103113|2) - This one.
01:44:056 (104056|0) - This one.
01:45:427 (105427|0) - This one
01:45:856 (105856|1) - This one
01:46:627 (106627|2) - This one.
--Suggestion End's-- Most of these notes are echos of the previous sound.
When you accept my suggestion don't forget to rearrange some notes :)

Well, that's all. I hope my Mod helps you a little bit. This song is really cool. Take this star :)
Good luck! ^_^
Topic Starter
-SoraGami-

Feerum wrote:

Hello -SoraGami-

Suprise! \:D/

You requestet to me with PM so i'm here to mod your Map :3

It's time for..

Feru's PM Mania Mod!


Alright. Let's beginn :3 ( ^o^)/

---------------------------------------------------------------

Red means Unrankable stuff
Big means high recommend to accept this Suggestion
Normal or with // are just comments or other stuff :3
^ means same as above

Column: | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

General


Artist: Looks good
Title: Looks good
BPM/Offset: Looks good
Source: Looks good
Tags: Looks good
BG: Looks good
Audio: Looks good!

NOVICE


00:05:313 (5313|3) - When this LN follow the "wooosh" sound it should begin here: 00:05:485 - mm.. i dont know but i think the first soft wooosh lol started at 00:05:313 (5313|3) - , so will keep it for now, ill w8 the other modders to point out this :3
00:41:142 (41142|3) - Move to 1 and 00:41:313 (41313|2) - to 4 for some variation nice and moved the next pattern for balance
Nothing more found. Nice! :) thanks

ADVANCED

From 01:06:513 - to 01:17:313 - i suggest to follow the (Piano?) all the time. So you have to delete some notes:
01:08:913 (68913|0) - This one there's a piano sound there
01:09:942 (69942|3) - This one (01:10:113 (70113|2) - Move this one then to 4)
01:10:285 (70285|0) - This one
01:12:685 (72685|3) - This one
01:13:027 (73027|2) - This one
01:14:399 (74399|0) - This one
01:15:427 (75427|3) - This one
01:16:113 (76113|1) - This one
--Suggestion End's--
I know it looks a little bit strange, but it play's really good because then all notes follow only the Piano :) But it's only a suggestion and it's up to you :3 i like this suggestion, but i think ill stick to the old, i dont know but something is bugging me, lol :3
Oh yeah maybe you rearrange some notes when you accept my suggestion. As best as possible to pitch :)

EXHAUST

00:05:313 (5313|3) - Like in the NOV this LN when it follows the "wooosh" sound should begin 00:05:485 - here same with NOV, actually when this is not yet modded, this ln is still at 00:05:485 - but someone said it is at 00:05:313 (5313|3) - and i tried to listen many times
00:16:285 (16285|1) - Suggestion for this part: ill stick to the old, it actually fits the pitch ( i think)00:17:056 (17056|1) - Move to 3, 00:17:142 (17142|2) - to 2, 00:17:227 (17227|1,17313|2) - CTRL + H, 00:17:399 (17399|3) - to 1 aaaand 00:17:485 (17485|0) - to 4. Fore more Balance and for some pitch. repatterned, and also here 00:18:513 - i repatterned also
00:17:999 (17999|3) - Move to 3 for more Balance ok
00:19:370 (19370|3) - To 1 and 00:19:456 (19456|1) - to 4. Again more Balance no, im balancing the weight of both hands because of the previous pattern
01:06:513 - For this whole Part like in the Advance. I recommend you follow only the Piano andt the LN's are a nice extra for the Exhaust. keep
01:35:142 (95142|1) - Move to 4, 01:35:313 (95313|3) - to 2 and 01:35:485 (95485|1) - to 4. More balance. nice catch
01:42:170 - From here to 01:47:656 - . When i hear right which sound you follow here you should delete some notes.
01:42:685 (102685|1) - This one. there is a sound there but i dont know what sound is that, i cant name it lol
01:43:113 (103113|2) - This one. ^
01:44:056 (104056|0) - This one. ^
01:45:427 (105427|0) - This one ^
01:45:856 (105856|1) - This one ^
01:46:627 (106627|2) - This one. ^
--Suggestion End's-- Most of these notes are echos of the previous sound.
When you accept my suggestion don't forget to rearrange some notes :)

Well, that's all. I hope my Mod helps you a little bit. This song is really cool. Take this star :) Woah thankies :)
Good luck! ^_^
Thanks Feerum, some mods applied :D
Topic Starter
-SoraGami-
cant update.....

my internet is not stable

will update it later


FINALLY, UPDATED, LOL
-[ AmiShici ]-
Hiii Sora o/

Mod already

Sorry for delay

4K = |1|2|3|4|


little mod from me
  • [NOVICE]
    Nice map for me =w=)b
    [ADVANCED]
  1. 00:10:970 (10970|2) - I think LNs started from 00:10:799 -
  2. 00:32:399 - Suggest : add note than 00:32:742 - add note than 00:33:085 - add note to, same with exhaust diff. if you follow drum sound.
    if you follow pitch sound (What the name of sound? I dont know xD) , you can make as novice diff without 00:33:342 (33342|1,33513|3) -
    for consistency ^^
  3. 00:43:970 - add on 3
  4. 01:41:570 - ^
    [EXHAUST]
  5. 00:11:656 - add note, EXHAUST diff must be harder prefer than ADVANCED diff, don't make easier it ^^
  6. 00:19:713 (19713|3,19885|3,20056|3,20227|3,20399|3,20570|3) - Unbalance. Suggest
    00:19:885 (19885|3) - move to 2 ; than 00:19:970 (19970|1) - move to 3 ; than 00:20:056 (20056|3) - move to 1
  7. 00:54:256 - add note? i heard sound
  8. 00:54:599 - ^

Nice map and nice song =w=)b

Take my star (/^w^)/
Topic Starter
-SoraGami-

-[ AmiShici ]- wrote:

Hiii Sora o/

Mod already

Sorry for delay

4K = |1|2|3|4|


little mod from me
  • [NOVICE]
    Nice map for me =w=)b
    [ADVANCED]
  1. 00:10:970 (10970|2) - I think LNs started from 00:10:799 - nice catch
  2. 00:32:399 - Suggest : add note than 00:32:742 - add note than 00:33:085 - add note to, same with exhaust diff. if you follow drum sound.
    if you follow pitch sound (What the name of sound? I dont know xD lol i also dont know what's the name of that sound) , you can make as novice diff without 00:33:342 (33342|1,33513|3) -
    for consistency ^^ no, i think its okay, i tried to make that part a little more lead for the instrumental xD like a solo, i didnt follow the drum except for the cymbals but ill keep the streams
  3. 00:43:970 - add on 3 will keep it for now, im trying to make ADV more different to NOV and EXH
  4. 01:41:570 - ^ ^
    [EXHAUST]
  5. 00:11:656 - add note, EXHAUST diff must be harder prefer than ADVANCED diff, don't make easier it ^^ ohh right but it will break the pattern for the LNs and the streams and its pitch if i add a note, adding it will make me to repattern it for balance, so will fix this if others point it also
  6. 00:19:713 (19713|3,19885|3,20056|3,20227|3,20399|3,20570|3) - Unbalance. Suggest
    00:19:885 (19885|3) - move to 2 ; than 00:19:970 (19970|1) - move to 3 ; than 00:20:056 (20056|3) - move to 1 yey thanks, it solved my problem
  7. 00:54:256 - add note? i heard sound ok
  8. 00:54:599 - ^ maybe not, this 00:54:770 (54770|2) - is more louder

Nice map and nice song =w=)b

Take my star (/^w^)/ woah. thanks
Thanks Shici!~ :)
try24get
Hi! This is my mod:
from 00:21:427 to 00:21:685 i think i will make it more challenging
00:21:427 note down to 00:21:342
00:21:427 make new note on column 3 (3rd column from left)
00:21:599 note down to 00:21:513 and move it to column 4
00:21:770 note down to 00:21:685
01:46:627 make new note on it, i heard a clap at 50% speed
same like above, from 01:51:942 to 01:52:199 i will make some challenge
01:51:942 note down to 01:51:856
01:52:113 note down to 01:51:942
01:52:027 make new note on column 1
01:52:285 note down to 01:52:199
01:46:627 make new note on it i heard a clap at 50% speed

I think just that. Sorry if it make things messy, still new about modding (and in using forums)
Topic Starter
-SoraGami-

try24get wrote:

Hi! This is my mod:
from 00:21:427 to 00:21:685 i think i will make it more challenging no, its too hard for NOV, and im just making it simple
00:21:427 note down to 00:21:342
00:21:427 make new note on column 3 (3rd column from left)
00:21:599 note down to 00:21:513 and move it to column 4
00:21:770 note down to 00:21:685
01:46:627 make new note on it, i heard a clap at 50% speed
same like above, from 01:51:942 to 01:52:199 i will make some challenge ^
01:51:942 note down to 01:51:856
01:52:113 note down to 01:51:942
01:52:027 make new note on column 1
01:52:285 note down to 01:52:199
01:46:627 make new note on it i heard a clap at 50% speed no, cuz i only followed the drum in that part to make it simple

I think just that. Sorry if it make things messy, still new about modding (and in using forums) its okay
Sorry :( no change, but Thanks :)
MEGAtive
Hi
Mod from A.C. Modding Team

[General]
Hitsound: Good
Graphic: 1366x768 Good
Metadata: Change the artist to Music by 源屋, Vocal by SOPHY. Refer to this screencap of someone playing SDVX. Well, maybe do some discussion with BN or QAT since I don't really sure for this.

[NOVICE]
Mods
00:20:227 (20227|3,20913|1) - Delete this. This section is sounded like 00:08:913 section is.
00:21:256 to 00:22:627 - Better delete these notes and use LN instead. More fits for an easy Diff.
00:27:085 (27085|0) - I think it's better to delete this. Fit well on an easy diff.
00:33:942 (33942|3,33942|0) - Delete this. It didn't reflect any sound to begin with (Well there's this faint snare, but one note is fine).
00:35:313 (35313|2,35313|0) - ^
00:36:685 (36685|1,36685|2) - ^
00:34:113 - 00:34:285 - Add note for kicks, like 00:33:599
00:35:485 - 00:35:656 - ^
00:36:856 - 00:37:027 - ^
01:51:770 to 01:53:142 - Better change these notes to LN. Fit better for an easy diff. (Optional, you can actually maintain 01:52:285 (112285|0,112370|2,112627|3) since you map this on patterns before).

[ADVANCED]
Mods
00:07:885 - 00:08:227 - Add notes in here. For kicks like 00:06:513
00:21:599 (21599|2) - Delete. Actually, this section doesn't have instruments. Listen carefully.
00:33:942 (33942|3,33942|0) - Delete this. It didn't reflect any sound to begin with (Well there's this faint snare, but one note is fine).
00:35:313 (35313|2,35313|0) - ^
00:36:685 (36685|1,36685|2) - ^

[EXHAUST]
Mods
00:16:713 (16713|0,16885|1) - Delete. Just like 00:14:056
00:18:256 (18256|1,18427|2) - ^
00:19:627 (19627|1,19799|2) - ^
00:21:599 (21599|2) - Delete. Actually, this section doesn't have instruments. Listen carefully.
00:28:113 to 00:31:542 - I just, don't know the purpose of these LNs. I didn't hear any sound fit for LNs. Consider on deleting these.
00:33:942 (33942|3,33942|0) - Delete this. It didn't reflect any sound to begin with (Well there's this faint snare, but one note is fine).
00:35:313 (35313|2,35313|0) - ^
00:36:685 (36685|1,36685|2) - ^
00:44:570 to 01:03:427 - Here too. I don't what are these LNs follow. I think you follow Vocals for these LNs.Remap these sections a bit.
01:06:599 (66599|1) - Delete. This' just an echo of previous instruments. Not recommended to mapped.
01:32:399 to 01:39:085 - These LNs too.... I think you follow vocals for these sections too. Consider on remapping these.
01:46:027 (106027|1) - Delete. Just like 01:43:285
01:47:399 (107399|1) - ^
01:48:770 (108770|1,108942|2) - ^
01:50:142 (110142|1) - ^
01:52:113 (112113|2) - Delete. Actually, this section doesn't have instruments. Listen carefully.

Good Luck~
Topic Starter
-SoraGami-

MEGAtive wrote:

Hi
Mod from A.C. Modding Team

[General]
Hitsound: Good
Graphic: 1366x768 Good
Metadata: Change the artist to Music by 源屋, Vocal by SOPHY. Refer to this screencap of someone playing SDVX. Well, maybe do some discussion with BN or QAT since I don't really sure for this. i made the vocals the artist and i just added 源屋 (the composer in the tags) but ill still ask about this

[NOVICE]
Mods
00:20:227 (20227|3,20913|1) - Delete this. This section is sounded like 00:08:913 section is. ni, i added it for the clap and in this section 00:08:913 there are no clap sound, i added it to be more challenging
00:21:256 to 00:22:627 - Better delete these notes and use LN instead. More fits for an easy Diff. no i ilike it, lol
00:27:085 (27085|0) - I think it's better to delete this. Fit well on an easy diff. nice
00:33:942 (33942|3,33942|0) - Delete this. It didn't reflect any sound to begin with (Well there's this faint snare, but one note is fine). no, in this diff i added additional sound for the clap and another one for cymbals
00:35:313 (35313|2,35313|0) - ^ ^
00:36:685 (36685|1,36685|2) - ^ ^
00:34:113 - 00:34:285 - Add note for kicks, like 00:33:599 no same reason above^, cuz 00:33:599 has cymbals and keeping the kick sound for 1 note only
00:35:485 - 00:35:656 - ^ ^
00:36:856 - 00:37:027 - ^ ^
01:51:770 to 01:53:142 - Better change these notes to LN. Fit better for an easy diff. (Optional, you can actually maintain 01:52:285 (112285|0,112370|2,112627|3) since you map this on patterns before). xD same with before

[ADVANCED]
Mods
00:07:885 - 00:08:227 - Add notes in here. For kicks like 00:06:513 no keeping it smple, like 1 note streams
00:21:599 (21599|2) - Delete. Actually, this section doesn't have instruments. Listen carefully. there a change of pitch there
00:33:942 (33942|3,33942|0) - Delete this. It didn't reflect any sound to begin with (Well there's this faint snare, but one note is fine). no clap sound
00:35:313 (35313|2,35313|0) - ^ ^
00:36:685 (36685|1,36685|2) - ^ ^

[EXHAUST]
Mods
00:16:713 (16713|0,16885|1) - Delete. Just like 00:14:056 no, there a sound there, cuz here 00:14:056, that part there no clear sound and mostly no sound so i make it empty
00:18:256 (18256|1,18427|2) - ^ ^
00:19:627 (19627|1,19799|2) - ^ ^
00:21:599 (21599|2) - Delete. Actually, this section doesn't have instruments. Listen carefully. no same with ADV, change of pitch
00:28:113 to 00:31:542 - I just, don't know the purpose of these LNs. I didn't hear any sound fit for LNs. Consider on deleting these. ill keep it, i added it to be more challenging to avoid repetition
00:33:942 (33942|3,33942|0) - Delete this. It didn't reflect any sound to begin with (Well there's this faint snare, but one note is fine). no same with the other diff, clap sound
00:35:313 (35313|2,35313|0) - ^ ^
00:36:685 (36685|1,36685|2) - ^ ^
00:44:570 to 01:03:427 - Here too. I don't what are these LNs follow. I think you follow Vocals for these LNs.Remap these sections a bit. keep, yah most are vocals, to make the flow fun a bit
01:06:599 (66599|1) - Delete. This' just an echo of previous instruments. Not recommended to mapped. ok
01:32:399 to 01:39:085 - These LNs too.... I think you follow vocals for these sections too. Consider on remapping these. same with before
01:46:027 (106027|1) - Delete. Just like 01:43:285 same with before
01:47:399 (107399|1) - ^ ^
01:48:770 (108770|1,108942|2) - ^ ^
01:50:142 (110142|1) - ^ ^
01:52:113 (112113|2) - Delete. Actually, this section doesn't have instruments. Listen carefully. ^

Good Luck~
Sorry for rejecting most of your mods, but Thanks! :)
x M e l
Hi Sora~ no much to say in this map

1|2|3|4


[NOVICE]
00:32:742 - put double
01:52:799 - convert this note in ln?

[EXHAUST]
00:20:913 - put double here, and triple here 00:21:085 -
01:04:799 - 01:04:970 - ^
01:40:456 - 01:40:627 - ^
01:51:427 - 01:51:599 - ^

Good luck!
Topic Starter
-SoraGami-

Meiko Senpai wrote:

Hi Sora~ no much to say in this map

1|2|3|4


[NOVICE]
00:32:742 - put double ok
01:52:799 - convert this note in ln? no, just making it simple

[EXHAUST]
00:20:913 - put double here, and triple here 00:21:085 - fixed the double and triple in the streams
01:04:799 - 01:04:970 - ^ no, in the kiai time i added additional note for the clap sound, thats why it has 4 notes in the cymbals
01:40:456 - 01:40:627 - ^ ^
01:51:427 - 01:51:599 - ^ fixed

Good luck!
thanks Meiko!~ :)
inbee
Sora~

1 | 2 | 3 | 4

Advanced
01:25:027 (85027|3,85370|3) - why not move to 3? :D
01:26:056 (86056|2,86056|3) - move to 1&2
01:26:399 (86399|2,86399|1,86742|0,86742|1) - move to 3&4
01:27:085 (87085|2,87085|3) - Move to 2&3
01:41:570 - Add Note Maybe? :?:

Exhaust
00:33:085 (33085|2) - Move to 3? :?
00:43:970 - Add Note Maybe. :?
01:29:142 (89142|0,89142|3,89313|1,89313|2,89485|3,89485|0,89656|1,89656|0,89656|3) - http://puu.sh/i87cA.jpg ? :D
01:51:599 (111599|1) - Move to 4

ke Sora~
Sorry For Bad Mods. T,T

Feedback Please. :D
Topic Starter
-SoraGami-

inbee wrote:

Sora~

1 | 2 | 3 | 4

Advanced
01:25:027 (85027|3,85370|3) - why not move to 3? :D lel, mo the pitch change there
01:26:056 (86056|2,86056|3) - move to 1&2 ok, let me try it
01:26:399 (86399|2,86399|1,86742|0,86742|1) - move to 3&4 ^
01:27:085 (87085|2,87085|3) - Move to 2&3 ^ ok ill use it for now
01:41:570 - Add Note Maybe? :?: no, i added t to exhaust to show the difference of the 3 diffs

Exhaust
00:33:085 (33085|2) - Move to 3? :? eh? its already in 3, lel
00:43:970 - Add Note Maybe. :? its already added
01:29:142 (89142|0,89142|3,89313|1,89313|2,89485|3,89485|0,89656|1,89656|0,89656|3) - http://puu.sh/i87cA.jpg ? :D ill stick to the current pattern, cuz there will be jacks in the middle of the flow and im just making it simple with jacks on the end
01:51:599 (111599|1) - Move to 4 no, i moved it cuz there are lots of notes in the 4th column, if i move it there, there will be 11 jacks in the col 4,

ke Sora~
Sorry For Bad Mods. T,T

Feedback Please. :D
Thanks inbee! :)
Kruzon


Hi, sorry for late mods
My 4K Column format is as following: 1 l 2 l 3 l 4

Novice

00:25:713 (25713|0) - move to 4, creating dual notes to preserve consistency with this note of yours 00:24:342 (24342|0,24342|1) -
00:25:885 (25885|3) - you may move this to 1

00:26:399 (26399|1,26399|2,26570|0,26570|3) - hmmm.. well i suggest:
00:26:399 (26399|1) - move to 1
00:26:570 (26570|0) - move to 2

00:32:742 (32742|0,32742|2) - should have the same pattern as 00:32:056 (32056|1,32056|2) - due to same sound and loudness, i suggest:
00:32:570 (32570|1) - move to 4 for flow,
00:32:742 (32742|0) - move to 2

00:32:913 (32913|3,33085|2,33256|1,33427|0) - doesn't exactly follow the rhythm imo, the sound does not goes down all the way, try to implement new pattern variation instead. Suggest:
00:32:913 (32913|3) - move to 1
00:33:085 (33085|2) - move to 2
00:33:256 (33256|1) - move to 3
00:33:427 (33427|0) - move to 2
00:33:599 (33599|1) - move to 1. Yes, actually zig zag is the most fitting pattern at this point

For the sake of pattern variation and comfort-ability in this difficulty, I suggest to implement stair notes instead of jacks, for the below statements
00:34:627 (34627|0,34627|1,34970|2,34970|3) - wrong order, pr-wise, press Ctrl + H, and obviously,
00:34:285 (34285|2) - move to 2
* If you follow above statements, then you may use these statements to tweak the consistency:
00:35:656 (35656|1) - move to 3, consistency with 00:33:942 (33942|3,34113|2,34285|1) -
00:35:999 (35999|2,35999|3) - Press Ctrl + H
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00:36:685 (36685|2,36685|1,36856|3) - these are not wrong but, just feel kinda off, well in any case i suggest:
00:36:342 (36342|0,36342|2) - gives wider base gap, therefore 00:36:342 (36342|2) - move to 4
00:36:685 (36685|1) - move to 4 to differentiate pattern type, in other word, making this dual note to make it feel different with 00:36:342 (36342|3,36342|0,37370|2,37370|0,37542|3,37542|1) -
00:36:856 (36856|3) - move to 2

00:40:113 (40113|0,40113|2) - hmm, they're better off as dual notes, preserve consistency with 00:39:427 (39427|3,39427|2) - , therefore i suggest:
00:40:113 (40113|2) - move to 2
00:40:285 (40285|1) - you may then move this to 3

00:57:942 (57942|0,57942|1) - this should not be dual note, it's affecting your pattern consistency, refer from here 00:55:542 (55542|3,55542|0) - up to current timing and see why i say so. Suggest to widened the gap to 1 l 4 or 2 l 4, your choice (i prefer 2 l 4 for very good flow)

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Good luck with your map c:
Topic Starter
-SoraGami-

Kruzon wrote:



Hi, sorry for late mods
My 4K Column format is as following: 1 l 2 l 3 l 4

Novice

00:25:713 (25713|0) - move to 4, creating dual notes to preserve consistency with this note of yours 00:24:342 (24342|0,24342|1) - oki
00:25:885 (25885|3) - you may move this to 1 ^

00:26:399 (26399|1,26399|2,26570|0,26570|3) - hmmm.. well i suggest:
00:26:399 (26399|1) - move to 1 hhmmm. ok, i like the flow there
00:26:570 (26570|0) - move to 2 ^

00:32:742 (32742|0,32742|2) - should have the same pattern as 00:32:056 (32056|1,32056|2) - due to same sound and loudness, i suggest:
00:32:570 (32570|1) - move to 4 for flow, no, i like more the the stair flow to play there
00:32:742 (32742|0) - move to 2 ^

00:32:913 (32913|3,33085|2,33256|1,33427|0) - doesn't exactly follow the rhythm imo, the sound does not goes down all the way, try to implement new pattern variation instead. Suggest: ok ill use it for now
00:32:913 (32913|3) - move to 1
00:33:085 (33085|2) - move to 2
00:33:256 (33256|1) - move to 3
00:33:427 (33427|0) - move to 2
00:33:599 (33599|1) - move to 1. Yes, actually zig zag is the most fitting pattern at this point

For the sake of pattern variation and comfort-ability in this difficulty, I suggest to implement stair notes instead of jacks, for the below statements
no, in this part, jacks suits better, i already tried stair case but it feels uncomfortable for me because of the sound it gives (jack-lke), and for the balance i pattern the jack in alternate parts of the hands
00:34:627 (34627|0,34627|1,34970|2,34970|3) - wrong order, pr-wise, press Ctrl + H, and obviously, ^
00:34:285 (34285|2) - move to 2^
* If you follow above statements, then you may use these statements to tweak the consistency:
00:35:656 (35656|1) - move to 3, consistency with 00:33:942 (33942|3,34113|2,34285|1) -
00:35:999 (35999|2,35999|3) - Press Ctrl + H
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00:36:685 (36685|2,36685|1,36856|3) - these are not wrong but, just feel kinda off, well in any case i suggest: keep, mainting the long space pattern for this part, 1,4,1 for the balance
00:36:342 (36342|0,36342|2) - gives wider base gap, therefore 00:36:342 (36342|2) - move to 4
00:36:685 (36685|1) - move to 4 to differentiate pattern type, in other word, making this dual note to make it feel different with 00:36:342 (36342|3,36342|0,37370|2,37370|0,37542|3,37542|1) -
00:36:856 (36856|3) - move to 2

00:40:113 (40113|0,40113|2) - hmm, they're better off as dual notes, preserve consistency with 00:39:427 (39427|3,39427|2) - , therefore i suggest:
00:40:113 (40113|2) - move to 2 fixed pattern
00:40:285 (40285|1) - you may then move this to 3 ^

00:57:942 (57942|0,57942|1) - this should not be dual note, it's affecting your pattern consistency, refer from here 00:55:542 (55542|3,55542|0) - up to current timing and see why i say so. Suggest to widened the gap to 1 l 4 or 2 l 4, your choice (i prefer 2 l 4 for very good flow) no breaking notes presence for every column and its dual note because of the clap

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Good luck with your map c:
Thanks Kruzon! :D
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Hi Sora :)
i'm so sorry for delay xD

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NOVICE

  1. 00:18:342 (18342|3,18856|2,19199|3) - you can try to move that to 3 4 3 . . for better balance
  2. 00:21:256 (21256|0,21427|1,21599|2) - actually . . it's weird, cuz the main sound is already stop here 00:21:513 - and it's hard to read noob player
  3. 00:25:370 (25370|3) - move to 3 . . . more better
  4. 00:26:227 (26227|3) - delete it, give some break for noob player here . . due to preparing press this note 00:26:399 (26399|2,26399|0,26570|3,26570|1) - and . . . you have not put the note here too 00:26:742 -
  5. 00:29:999 - try this ==> http://puu.sh/i8dyE/17eb9147a4.jpg
  6. 00:32:570 (32570|3,32742|1) - ctrl G . . according the pitch
  7. 00:37:370 (37370|2,37542|1) - ctrl G . . then 00:37:885 (37885|2) - move to 2 for better plays after press the LN
  8. 00:41:142 (41142|0) - move to 3 . .continue the pitch is better i think
  9. 00:43:713 (43713|2,43799|3,44056|0) - to 4 1 3 . . .try it . . noob player will more easier to read that
  10. 00:44:742 (44742|2) - delete it . . . i see every after LN you put 1/2 not on there . . . i think the player can't "feel" something special on that . . . so i suggest to delete the same note on here 00:50:227 - 00:55:713 - 01:01:199 - . . . .here i give the example http://puu.sh/i8e26/158a71237e.jpg try it . . . and you can feel the different (it good for noob player for give some break after pushing the LN before)
  11. 01:52:113 (112113|3,112285|0,112370|2,112542|1) - same as 00:21:256 - hmm, i think this note is not following the music properly . . . it's kinda weird to press . . seriously so . . . from this 01:51:427 - you can try this ==> http://puu.sh/i8d3V/91c0cb9b0c.jpg it's fine i think . . . since this is the last part of the song

ADVANCED

  1. 00:03:513 (3513|2) - no spesific sound that you followed before . . . delete it
  2. 00:05:399 - add note on 2, contains same sound as you follow
  3. 00:05:742 - add note, same reason as ^
  4. 00:07:285 - hey . . .you can add note here xD . . it's same sound as 00:07:027 (7027|1,7113|2) -
  5. 00:08:656 - 00:08:827 - add note . . . the sound is clearly to hear . . . not sure about it ? . . try to use 25% playback rate
  6. 00:11:656 (11656|1) - delete, no impact or cymbal here . . . even, the sound is still bigger on here 00:11:999 -
  7. 00:17:142 - delete 1 note here ? . . well the sound is not same loud as 00:16:627 -
  8. 00:22:285 - add note here . . i hear a big sound here
  9. 00:27:085 - why 1 note . . .it's same clap sound as 00:26:399 - 00:25:713 -
  10. 00:28:285 (28285|0) - delete this . . . the beat has been stopped and need some rest (give some break)
  11. 00:32:742 - add note here . . . same cymbal sound as 00:32:056 -
  12. 01:00:685 - add note here . .. the sound is louder than 01:00:856 (60856|1) -
  13. 01:02:913 - try this ==> http://puu.sh/i8f5Q/01a5894f85.jpggive some effect after push this note 01:02:742 -
  14. 01:11:999 (71999|3) - move to 1
  15. 01:31:027 (91027|2,91113|3) - ctrl G
  16. 01:38:227 (98227|0,98399|2) - ctrl G . . .feels better to pushing the next LN . . i recommended it . . try that

OK Sora . . .
mod end . . . nice map ;)
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