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Tsukasa - Mirage of the Rain [Osu|Taiko]

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banvi
o.o

General
You should make(or get guest's easy diff) less than ☆3 diff.
Normal+
This is ☆5... no longer,this is hard...
HP -1 or 2 & OD -1
00:34:803 (7,8) 1 grid left?(grid lv3)
00:43:203 (6,7,8) 1 grid right?
00:52:632 (1) 1 grid left?
01:31:803 (n) If you don't use this part , delete this timing point
01:31:975 (n) ^
Lunatic
uh... HP -1 (because OD is high)
00:26:232 (4) 1 grid left&1 grid up?
00:35:317 (14) 1 grid right?
01:08:746 (1) 1 grid right&1 grid up?
01:08:917 (2) 1 grid right?
01:19:717 (6) 1 grid down?
01:20:317 (9) 1 grid left?
01:31:889 (13) just my suggestion : change spinner?

nicemap overall~
star & gl :)
La Cataline
[Normal+]
01:03:089(7) nc?

[Lunatic]
Combo consistency is strange. I can't see any logic. Recheck it please.
Here's how I would set combos. You are free to ignore this, anyway.
SPOILER
I would place new combos at the following points:
00:10:974
00:13:546
00:16:632
00:19:203
00:23:489
00:24:689
00:27:432
00:30:175
00:32:746
00:35:660
00:38:403
00:41:146
00:43:717
00:46:975
00:49:203
00:51:089
00:52:117
00:55:032
00:57:603

01:00:346
01:03:089
01:05:660
01:08:746
01:09:946
01:12:689
01:15:432
01:18:175
01:20:917
01:23:660
01:26:403
01:28:975

or shorten this combos by 1/2
MMzz
Requested Taiko Mod :3!

[ TAIKO ]

00:00:000 - 00:10:974: This section right here, I know you tried to match it with the background beat, but I don't think it works to well. T_T Maybe try and match it with the piano instead?
00:21:946 - Make this slider a spinner? :3
00:35:489 - This slider is to close to the up-comming note, the end of a slider mush be a full measure away from the next note. x.x
00:46:975 - Make the kiai start here and end where it already ends.
01:05:832 - Make this slider a spinner, OR, make it a long stream on Dons. (red notes)

All I have to say, very nice relaxing map. Nothing that makes your fingers strain.
Star~
happy30
go go make easy diff ;)

combobursts :3

BG :3
fartownik
Sorry for the delay :?

[Lunatic]

Your rhythm is static... I'd say VERY static. Never mind if the song changes, you still continue THE SAME rhythm in every pattern. I wanted to check how much pattern like this: 01:31:032 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) you used, and I counted to 20. Diversity is a good thing.

Also I quite don't like how the kiou clap sounds here. This hitsound doesn't fit this song at all, this one is kinda soft-type hitsounds. You didn't put it in Normal, which sounds good.

There are not any severe mistakes, but you should work on hitsounds and diversity of patterns.

[Normal+]

Yeah, it's kinda hard for a normal.

00:49:203 (1,2,3) - Don't use streams in normal.


Other issues:


- The file called "bgglow.jpg" has too high resolution. The maximum size of a SB file is 800x600.

- Taiko kiai is different compared to rest of the difficulties, fix this.

Let's star this.
Topic Starter
niedz

fartownik wrote:

Also I quite don't like how the kiou clap sounds here. This hitsound doesn't fit this song at all
listen carefully to the song,in places where i put them you will notice claps in the background
fartownik

niedzwiedz1124 wrote:

fartownik wrote:

Also I quite don't like how the kiou clap sounds here. This hitsound doesn't fit this song at all
listen carefully to the song,in places where i put them you will notice claps in the background
yes, the placement is good, but the problem is especially THIS HITSOUND, it doesn't sound good in this song
Lunah_old
Hi, here my difficulty, i tried to make it easier possible ><

Download: Tsukasa - Mirage of the Rain (niedzwiedz1124) [LoweH's Easy].osu
roflninja
Hi,
everything seemed fine to me, so just a few suggestions

[normal]
00:49:203 (1,2,3) - i wouldnt use a triple in a normal, maybe delete the (2)?

[lunatic]
01:04:975 (9.10,13) - kinda in the hp bar
maybe add a spinner at the end?

nice map
Card N'FoRcE
- General: (Considerations and things you need to check/fix for the whole map)
  • Come on, "armpits" as a tag? xD
    BGglow.jpg is way too huge. I mean, 1600*1200? O.o
    Please consider resizing it.
    Also, why did you make playwarningarrow.png transparent? I don't see any particular reason for that.
- LoweH's Easy:
  • I think a spinner from 1:07:546 to 1:09:946 is perfect. Consider adding it.
- Normal+:
  • .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
    Fine, but this is definitely a Hard, not a Normal+. I mean, if you raise Overall to 6 it could be considered a standard Hard difficulty.
- Lunatic:
  • .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
    00:59:660 (9) - New combo please. This will help the player to understand the change from 1/2 to 3/4
- Taiko:
  • .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
    You should delete the last beat. It's not intuitive to play. If you look carefully, it's on a blue line and that alone should be a reason.
:>
Topic Starter
niedz

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

Come on, "armpits" as a tag? xD

happy30 wrote:

ARMPITS
DONT
REMOVE
pretty self explanatory lol

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

Also, why did you make playwarningarrow.png transparent? I don't see any particular reason for that
because the break is when the bg is black,so i wanted it to be transparent o.o
Kecco
•Overall•
You need a 3,25- star diff to get it ranked.

•Lunatic•
00:24:689 (1) - New combo? Just for make better the SB effect.
00:24:860 (2) - I suggest to replace this slider with 3 circles placed behind 00:24:689 (1)
00:30:175 (8) - New combo.
00:34:289 (8) - ^
00:41:146 (9) - ^
01:09:946 (6) - New combo? Just for make better the SB effect.
01:28:460 (10) - New combo?
01:31:889 (13) - New combo. Better effect and end.

•Hard•
00:21:946 (Break) - Remove this break, it covers the SB effect moment.
01:28:117 (7) - New combo?

•LoweH's Easy•
00:39:432 (6) - New combo.
00:44:575 (6) - ^
00:54:860 (5) - ^

+Star.
Pokie
Tsukasaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Mianki
Didin't found nothing wrong with it, nice map :P
Star~
rEdo
just awesome. <3
Takuma
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Andrea
[Overall]

Remove file .osb and full submit.

The files "comboburst-0, comboburst-1 and comboburst-2" are too big. They should be at a maximum of 500x767 pixels.

[Difficulties]

[Easy Happy]

Remove unused Audio Lead-In.

[Lunah's Normal]

Remove unused Audio Lead-In.

[Hard]

Remove unused Audio Lead-In.

[Taiko]

Remove unused Audio Lead-In.

Source is missing on this difficulty. It should be "Touhou".


[Lunatic]

Remove unused Audio Lead-In.

OD9 doesn't fit so much imho with this soft song. Reduce it at least by 1 tick.


00:38:403 (12) - New combo.
00:38:917 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:04:974 (9) - New combo.


Popped for now until you fix all.
Topic Starter
niedz
fixed :3
Andrea
Looks great now.

Re-Bubbled~
Alace
bgglow.jpg is too big.plz resize it to 800 x 600
Also you need to recheck the whole SB after resizing and do full upload again

Ok let`s go
Cyclone
Oh god fuck yes. I had no idea tsukasa did touhou. Though it seems like tsukasa just used IN's main menu/stage 4 theme in the background and that's all.

Also combo color choices could be a little better. Dark gray approach circles are especially hard to see.

Also I still hate flashing BG's like this. I've never liked that.
deepsea
I received your pm, sorry and luckily I am really late for this.

Grats.
Aisaka_old
nice map :lol: one of my favourites
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