Alright let's see what I can find.
General:
The preview time is inconsistent. *points at the easy diff*. set it from 59571 to 59530 like the other diffs.
maybe add a red combo color to match the blood and the shirt?
Easy:
hmm since this is a calm song, set the sample set to soft, even the finishes...well not all the finishes. IMO the normal sample set not counting the claps is too loud and they don't fit with some parts of the song.
00:15:486 (1) - maybe flip it like this so that the path would be easier for beginners?
00:50:375 (1) - add a green line here to start the soft sample set. it sounds better as the normal sample set is too loud.
01:44:238 (1) - ^
01:50:971 (4) - extend this slider till 01:53:420 and remove (1) if you do so. this flows to the vocals nicely IMO, and i find it weird that the repeat arrow ends at the blue line.
Yasora's Normal:
Add a yellow combo color to match the keep out sign and the yellow helmet.
Like i said about the sampleset on easy.
00:26:197 (4) - the clap from the beginning to the repeat arrow is intentional right? it kind of sounds like my blooper on my diff.
00:44:560 (4) - since you have the whistle at the end of (3), add a finish at the end of (4).
Hard:
Here too. IMO i don't like the normal sample set
00:34:460 (7) - IMO this looks boring because of the number of repeats. to make it fun IMO it looks fun make this repeat once and add a 1/4 slider starting from 00:34:919.
00:53:435 (3) - ^
01:43:014 (5) - same as above but instead of repeats, replace them for 3 1/4 sliders.
01:47:299 (4) - for this 1 make this repeat once and add a slider starting at 01:47:758 and end it at 01:48:217, and don't forget to remove the circle at 01:48:217. this follows the vocals accurately as the slider follows the long pause and (4) flows nicely to the vocals.
01:52:808 (5) - since the cymbals are picking up, replace the repeats for 1/4 sliders.
This is the best I can do. GL
General:
The preview time is inconsistent. *points at the easy diff*. set it from 59571 to 59530 like the other diffs.
maybe add a red combo color to match the blood and the shirt?
Easy:
hmm since this is a calm song, set the sample set to soft, even the finishes...well not all the finishes. IMO the normal sample set not counting the claps is too loud and they don't fit with some parts of the song.
00:15:486 (1) - maybe flip it like this so that the path would be easier for beginners?
00:50:375 (1) - add a green line here to start the soft sample set. it sounds better as the normal sample set is too loud.
01:44:238 (1) - ^
01:50:971 (4) - extend this slider till 01:53:420 and remove (1) if you do so. this flows to the vocals nicely IMO, and i find it weird that the repeat arrow ends at the blue line.
Yasora's Normal:
Add a yellow combo color to match the keep out sign and the yellow helmet.
Like i said about the sampleset on easy.
00:26:197 (4) - the clap from the beginning to the repeat arrow is intentional right? it kind of sounds like my blooper on my diff.
00:44:560 (4) - since you have the whistle at the end of (3), add a finish at the end of (4).
Hard:
Here too. IMO i don't like the normal sample set
00:34:460 (7) - IMO this looks boring because of the number of repeats. to make it fun IMO it looks fun make this repeat once and add a 1/4 slider starting from 00:34:919.
00:53:435 (3) - ^
01:43:014 (5) - same as above but instead of repeats, replace them for 3 1/4 sliders.
01:47:299 (4) - for this 1 make this repeat once and add a slider starting at 01:47:758 and end it at 01:48:217, and don't forget to remove the circle at 01:48:217. this follows the vocals accurately as the slider follows the long pause and (4) flows nicely to the vocals.
01:52:808 (5) - since the cymbals are picking up, replace the repeats for 1/4 sliders.
This is the best I can do. GL