EasyOD 2
AR 3
00:05:857 (3,1) This blank can be improved so it'll look better. Move the middle sliderpoint too 312/104 and the slidertail too 232/124
00:14:271 (2,3) Like this?
Looks a lot better imo
00:23:418 (3,4) Improve the blank by moving the middle sliderpoint of (3) too 264/200 you have to improve the blank 00:23:784 (4,1) too
00:26:345 (2) I would ctrl+g this for a better flow
00:27:442 Add a circle here since theres a beat
00:27:808 (1,2,3) Repeat slider instead? Or one 1/1 slider and a circle. Would fit better
00:39:515 (3,4) Improve blank
00:45:369 (1,2) They are really close to each other, nearly touching, you should fix that
00:54:515 (1) Give this slider a shape like
so it wont look so boring
01:02:930 (1,2) Why the different ds? Easy should always have 1 ds, overlap is ugly.
01:11:710 (4,1,2,3) You should put some sliders here so it'll be easier
01:32:198 (3) I'd move this one here 300/236 for a perfect triangle
01:38:418 (2,3,4,1,2,4,1,2) Some curvy sliders here wouldnt be bad, looks so formless otherwise
01:54:149 (2,3) Flow is really akward here. (3) should be like this
01:59:637 (3,2) Bad overlap imo
02:05:857 (4) Make it a bit less curvy, looks weird otherwise and it should fit more (blank a bit) with 02:03:845 (2)
02:13:540 This instead?
Normal00:04:027 (3) This slider is doing a weird sliderball sound, you should fix that
00:05:491 (3) ^
00:04:942 (2,4) Really bad overlap here, not good in a normal, fix that
00:18:479 (4) Like this
00:24:332 (5) Move slidetail too 465/28 for a better flow, and it looks better
00:24:881 (1,2) Never do something like this in a Normal. Its not a Hard
00:24:881 (1,3) Bad overlap here
00:26:345 (3,4) Delete it, it looks really really bad
00:31:284 (1,2) Fix blank, try to avoid bad overlaps like that, its a no go
00:32:381 (3,4) 1/2 slider instead to make it easier
00:33:662 (1,2,3) Really bad overlaps
00:42:991 (1) Should be straight like 00:43:540 (2)
00:46:101 (1,1,1) Sliders or something, but dont stack them like that, its bad
00:51:223 - 00:57:076 This part has many different DS's fix them all, decide on one and use it through the whole mapset (Its better)
01:00:003 (1,2,1,2) Unrankable if this is in a Normal, fix it
01:05:857 (1,2) Think about something else, this pattern looks just weird, since they are overlapping really bad
01:05:857 (1,3,4) Same here, bad overlaps are just bad
01:11:710 (1,2,3,4) You can do better than this, this looks wrong
01:26:162 (1) Sudden
high sv increase in Normal is unrankable, fix that
01:38:418 (1,2,3,4) Try to get the same distance between all of them, its inconsistent otherwise
01:41:345 (1,2,3,4) Same here
01:44:271 (1,2,3) This pattern is getting boring
01:45:735 (3,6) Bad overlap
01:51:223 (1,2) ^
02:00:003 (1,2,1,2) same as 01:00:003 (1,2,1,2)
Ill stop here, gain more experience in mapping since its not that bad, try to avoid bad overlaps etc. always use the same DS in Easy and Normals.
Good Luck