CDFA wrote:

Hard:
01:40:369 (1,2,3,4) - what. goes with the song perfect
03:18:235 (5) - no. yes

Normal:
Fine

Easy:
Hi incomplete diff it is complete, i aint gonna map a 4min easy since i dont really agree with them
00:36:437 (1) - ....and?

:3~. I'm not good with hitsound modding when it comes to slow quiet songs, so ;~;.

Slanox wrote:

Hello,

[Easy]

Delete timing section :
28 934
29 434
29 934
49 872
50 372
80 872
137 372
137 872
138 372
138 872
the timing sections are for the volumes within the spinners


- 00:48:186(1) : End at 00:51:686 ? nah
- 00:51:936 : Insert break ? nah
- 01:01:685(3) : Spacing. spacing is fine
- 01:02:185(4) : ^ again
- 01:02:685(5) : ^ again
- 01:09:184(3) : ^ again
- 01:10:184(4) : ^ again
- 01:46:907(4) : 1 grid up ? it goes with the curve of the slider

[Normal]

Delete timing section :
28 934
29 434
29 934
same as easy


[Hard]

Delete timing section :
28 934
29 434
29 934

same as easy
Good map.
Get my star.

[DBF] wrote:

[Overall]
About your sliders like 00:36:437 (1) (in easy) , better if you will make it like this.
Cause some BATs can pop your bubble.
if a bat wants to pop just for the amount of slider points so be it, its a pointless change and thats how i make my sliders, iti will also not affect gameplay at all


BPM 120.00, change it and do Resnap all notes ( Timing > Resnap all notes ). yea i kno my offset aint fully right, i think its a multiple offset song so i really need a expert timer mod :/. untill the i will refrian from changing this timing

I dont like your custom hitsounds, sorry, dont listen good with song.kinda agree, but i cant really find a better custon hitsound >_>
[Hard]
Overall difficulty -1, imo. ya sure

*steal BG*.

Star~

blissfulyoshi wrote:

The pink combo color is a little hard to see at times, so can you make it a darker pink pls.
I am getting a lot of variation on the offset, my notes are varying by 20ms, so I suggest trying a lower offset such as 430, but I am not very sure.

Easy:
fine

Normal:
Normal/Nazi mod:
01:26:183 (5) - even though this was a copy of 3, it did not seem to match up 4's curve very well. If you look at 3 and 4, it looks like those 2 sliders would fit side by side, but if you look at 4 and 5, they don't look like they fit well together. Here is what I tried to do, not perfect, but I think it is a little better. (Sorry, this was very nazi)

SPOILER

03:53:670 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - move this combo down a few grids to make sure 2,3,5 do not hit the hp bar

Hard:
Combo mod:
02:36:177 (3) - new combo to be consistent with 01:08:184 (1)
04:15:169 (3) - new combo to be consistent with 04:11:169 (1)?
04:27:168 (3) -^
04:31:167 (3) - ^

Wow. Very nice map and hitsounds. I couldn't find many errors in the map, so Star and good luck on getting this ranked!

Zekira wrote:

Alright... well, I'm amused at how easy but annoying it was to time this. Anyway, this is the best I can get it to:

[attachment=0:70ee9]Girls Dead Monster - Ichiban no Takaramono (Yui Ver) (jericho2442) [Zek's Red Lines].osu[/attachment:70ee9]

A Resnap of Notes using 1/2 as divisor should then work (for Hard at least). Recalculate and check all sliders while you're at it.

Also, do you map with distance snap off?

• • Add some tags
  • Add kiai
  • I don't like "soft-hitclap.wav": it doesn't fit with the song imo

• • Overall Difficulty: 3
  • 00:39:955 (x) - Add a circle
  • 00:43:955 (x) - ^
  • 00:53:000 (x) - Add a break
  • 02:07:965 (x) - Add a circle
  • 02:11:965 (x) - ^
  • 02:21:000 (x) - Add a break

• • 00:53:000 (x) - Add a break
  • 02:21:000 (x) - ^

• • 01:40:420 (1,2,3,4) - I don't like this kind of slider: delete them and add only a circle on start-slider (fix the other sliders like these too)

xxheroxx wrote:

[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

[General]

• • Add some tags added the only one i could think off
  • Add kiai no ty
  • I don't like "soft-hitclap.wav": it doesn't fit with the song imo[/color]i will look into finding a better hitsound

[Easy]

• ]• Overall Difficulty: 3 fixed
  • 00:39:955 (x) - Add a circle fixed
  • 00:43:955 (x) - ^ fixed
  • 00:53:000 (x) - Add a break fixed
  • 02:07:965 (x) - Add a circle fixed
  • 02:11:965 (x) - ^ fixed
  • 02:21:000 (x) - Add a breakfixed

[Normal]

• • 00:53:000 (x) - Add a break fixed
  • 02:21:000 (x) - ^fixed

[Hard]

• • 01:40:420 (1,2,3,4) - I don't like this kind of slider: delete them and add only a circle on start-slider (fix the other sliders like these too) no thanks, i like these sliders

Tapdancingmetroid wrote:

Easy:
I like this map. Has some variety, yet isn't overwhelming.

Normal:
This is also pretty good. I particularly like the bit where the notes follow the guitar strums

Hard:
Also good. The only issue I have is that the hp drain rate should probably be turned down a notch, since the current rate, due to the slow song/length of time between notes, gives very little room for error.

Overall, this is quite nice.
You get a star for now. :>

thanks, the reason the hard feels its has high drain is like you said, its slow, but its only 6 drain which is one above normal, if i lowered it i would get complaints about it being too "normal" the life drain >_>

Zekira wrote:

thanks, the reason the hard feels its has high drain is like you said, its slow, but its only 6 drain which is one above normal, if i lowered it i would get complaints about it being too "normal" the life drain >_>

IMO I don't think so? I have some maps (...err TaikOsu ones anyway) that are still ridiculous in HP Drain even though I already set it to 4 :<

Fuuko wrote:

Star.

Ps: Don't forget to lower the clap, which is REALLY loud.

Tapdancingmetroid wrote:

I still think the hp rate should be turned down a bit on that difficulty. If you're worried about the difficulty dropping to 3 stars, you could easily turn up the overall difficulty a tiny bit. If all maps were the same speed, there would likely be no need to adjust the drain rate, but that's not the case. What may be a "normal" drain rate for an upbeat song is more difficult when applied to a slower song.

osuplayer111 wrote:

Timing looks fine to me, I can get a good accuracy on all the difficulties.

Just change this little thing and I'll rank it.

[Hard]

03:17:640 (4,5) - No, no, no. Change it on a different way please.