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Halozy - Deconstruction Star [OsuMania]

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Feerum
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Montag, 21. September 2015 at 22:02:53

Artist: Halozy
Title: Deconstruction Star
Source: 東方Project
Tags: starry presto すみじゅん Plain Asia プレインエイジア sumijun アサヒ asahi ほたる hotaru 東方永夜抄 ~ imperishable night とうほうえいやしょう eiyashou 上白泽慧音 かみしらさわ けいね kamishirasawa keine touhou marathon collaboration Critical_Star
BPM: 155
Filesize: 9995kb
Play Time: 05:16
Difficulties Available:
  1. FeruStar's Deconstructed Eternal Full Moon - 4Key (4,16 stars, 3187 notes)
Download: Halozy - Deconstruction Star
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#2nd Approval and #3rd Ranked Map!
Collab with Critical_Star

CTB by CLSW
Taiko by OniJAM
Standard by Hollow Wings


BG Source

#1 by RuberusuScarlet
#2 by DE-CADE
by Shana Lesus

Collab Parts
00:00:000 - - 03:03:876 - Feerum
03:03:876 - - 05:17:037 - Critical_Star

Thanks to
Critical_Star who collab this with me <3
Reikokaz for IRC Mod
Satoshi Kazuki for Mod
Another Lie for Star
NlHIL for Mod & 4 Stars
Rivals_7 for Mod
AlisceaSparku for Mod
RuberusuScarlet for BN Check & Star
DE-CADE for BN Check
Shana Lesus for BN Check
Phil
Good luck with that! :)
Topic Starter
Feerum
Thank you.
I'll try to make this Map better than Kanshou ;)
Reiko
IRC Mod
23:19 Reikokaz: Adding note here 01:13:263 (73263|2) -
23:20 Reikokaz: may add notes here 03:01:263 (181263|3,181263|2) -
23:21 Feerum: 1st done :P
23:21 Feerum: das zweite nich, da is nur der drum, danach kommt direkt der 3er chord mit dem finish :3
23:22 Feerum: Du muss übrigen keine noten Markieren um zu kopiere, reicht wenn du bei dem Timing bis :3
23:22 Reikokaz: 03:36:779 - warum änderst du hier plötzlich das pattern rythmus wenns davor immer rechts war?
23:23 Feerum: Ab hier is nich mehr meine zuständigkeit
23:23 Feerum: 03:03:876 - hier hat mein partner angefangen bis zum ende :3
23:24 Reikokaz: Naja manchmal macht er es links und manchmal recht
23:24 Reikokaz: s
23:24 Feerum: vlt für abwechslung? :o
23:25 Reikokaz: und manchmal macht er 1 und dann 2 warum nicht immer die gleiche note doppelt?
23:25 Reikokaz: hier z.B.
23:26 Reikokaz: 03:35:425 -
23:26 Reikokaz: 03:32:281 -
23:28 Reikokaz: 04:39:244 - missing note
23:28 Reikokaz: 04:39:426 - also
23:29 Reikokaz: 04:39:639 - also ... xD
23:29 Feerum: Vlt hat er hier nur die Drums mappen wollen vor dem 1/4 part :P
23:29 Feerum: so wie ichs hier hab 02:50:715 - :D
23:30 Reikokaz: mh gut möglich xD hatte mir das nur langsam angehört
23:30 Reikokaz: im schnellen durchlauf hört man ja die drums besser
23:32 Reikokaz: aber ich merk schon dein Partner macht einfach random :p ohne sound rythmus sprich gleicher soundabschnitt gleiche notenpaattern
23:32 Feerum: Random find ich das jetz nich :c
23:33 Reikokaz: naja so ganz random auch nich xD
23:33 Feerum: Ja gut dem drum part ab hier03:28:650 - las ich ihn nochmal durchchecken
23:33 Feerum: vlt hat sies schlecht gehört ohne hitsounds
23:33 Feerum: Aber mit hitsounds hört mans deutlich raus
23:33 Reikokaz: yep
23:35 Reikokaz: ab hier meinte ichj das mit dem random :p 04:52:253 -
23:35 Reikokaz: naja liegt bestimmt an mir xD
23:35 Feerum: Warum? Jeder hauptbeat is mit nem Chord belegt :D
23:36 Reikokaz: naja sag ja liegt besitmmt an mir x
23:36 Feerum: Ich hät grad gegen ende zwar auch 3er chords mit reingepackt
23:36 Feerum: aber das is grade das lustige an ner collab find ich :D
23:36 Reikokaz: :')
23:36 Reikokaz: yo 3er chords fehlen enige
23:36 Reikokaz: wenn man die einbauen sollte :p
23:37 Feerum: Ich hät das ende sogar ganz im Chordmash gemappt
23:37 Feerum: So bisl Kanshou like
23:37 Reikokaz: yo immer 4 noten auf einmal oder ?
23:37 Feerum: Nich AiAe SHD like
23:37 Feerum: xD
23:37 Reikokaz: oder 3
23:37 Reikokaz: xD
23:37 Reikokaz: nene du everstehst mich falsch
23:38 Feerum: eher 2 2 3 2 2 3 maybe
23:38 Feerum: einfach coby & paste aus Kanshou :^) no jk xDD
23:38 Reikokaz: xD
23:38 Reikokaz: 04:52:574 - 04:52:574 - bei denen meint ich immer 3 oder 4 noten
23:39 Reikokaz: statt 2
23:39 Feerum: ja 3 für die claps
23:39 Feerum: 04:52:650 - , 04:53:425 - etc
23:39 Reikokaz: yo
23:39 Reikokaz: und die anderen 2 oder 4
23:39 Reikokaz: eher 2
23:39 Feerum: 4 wär zuviel xD
23:39 Reikokaz: :p
23:39 Reikokaz: true
23:40 Feerum: 4 bei dem Starrating passen nur bei sowas 02:22:070 -
23:40 Feerum: So ein richtig kräftiger kurzer beat
23:40 Reikokaz: yo
23:40 Reikokaz: Naja soll ich das noch modgerecht im Forum schreiben? xD
23:40 Reikokaz: ohne die ganzen fehle r:p
23:41 Reikokaz: nur find ich den part richtig weird obwohl er richtig ist 03:05:041 - xD
23:42 Feerum: ja wie willst sowas mappen :c
23:42 Feerum: ohm
23:42 Reikokaz: vllt aus der note n ln machen 03:05:328 (185328|2) -
23:42 Feerum: kannst einfach /savelog machen, das log puushen und dann einfach im Forum in ner box + code schreiben
23:42 Reikokaz: ya das ist aber deutsch xD
23:43 Reikokaz: also so meinte ich das :p https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3417612
23:44 Feerum: Egal :) viele IRC werden in der landessprache gemacht wenn Modder/Mapper gleiches land sind
23:44 Reikokaz: wer ist eig dein partner?
23:44 Feerum: Würd da doch garnich reinpassen :o ich hör nur ein ln sound
23:44 Feerum: ohm
23:44 Feerum: Critical_Star
23:44 Reikokaz: kenn ich net x:
23:45 Feerum: Hat auch nur eine Map ranked
23:45 Feerum: aber ich mag ihren Mapping style echt
23:46 Reikokaz: naja er ist anderst :p
23:46 Feerum: Jap :D
23:46 Feerum: Sie kann viel besser mit Streams umgehen als ich finde ich
23:46 Feerum: Die spielen sich viel sauberer
Topic Starter
Feerum

Reikokaz wrote:

IRC Mod
23:19 Reikokaz: Adding note here 01:13:263 (73263|2) -
23:20 Reikokaz: may add notes here 03:01:263 (181263|3,181263|2) -
23:21 Feerum: 1st done :P
23:21 Feerum: das zweite nich, da is nur der drum, danach kommt direkt der 3er chord mit dem finish :3
23:22 Feerum: Du muss übrigen keine noten Markieren um zu kopiere, reicht wenn du bei dem Timing bis :3
23:22 Reikokaz: 03:36:779 - warum änderst du hier plötzlich das pattern rythmus wenns davor immer rechts war?
23:23 Feerum: Ab hier is nich mehr meine zuständigkeit
23:23 Feerum: 03:03:876 - hier hat mein partner angefangen bis zum ende :3
23:24 Reikokaz: Naja manchmal macht er es links und manchmal recht
23:24 Reikokaz: s
23:24 Feerum: vlt für abwechslung? :o
23:25 Reikokaz: und manchmal macht er 1 und dann 2 warum nicht immer die gleiche note doppelt?
23:25 Reikokaz: hier z.B.
23:26 Reikokaz: 03:35:425 -
23:26 Reikokaz: 03:32:281 -
23:28 Reikokaz: 04:39:244 - missing note
23:28 Reikokaz: 04:39:426 - also
23:29 Reikokaz: 04:39:639 - also ... xD
23:29 Feerum: Vlt hat er hier nur die Drums mappen wollen vor dem 1/4 part :P
23:29 Feerum: so wie ichs hier hab 02:50:715 - :D
23:30 Reikokaz: mh gut möglich xD hatte mir das nur langsam angehört
23:30 Reikokaz: im schnellen durchlauf hört man ja die drums besser
23:32 Reikokaz: aber ich merk schon dein Partner macht einfach random :p ohne sound rythmus sprich gleicher soundabschnitt gleiche notenpaattern
23:32 Feerum: Random find ich das jetz nich :c
23:33 Reikokaz: naja so ganz random auch nich xD
23:33 Feerum: Ja gut dem drum part ab hier03:28:650 - las ich ihn nochmal durchchecken
23:33 Feerum: vlt hat sies schlecht gehört ohne hitsounds
23:33 Feerum: Aber mit hitsounds hört mans deutlich raus
23:33 Reikokaz: yep
23:35 Reikokaz: ab hier meinte ichj das mit dem random :p 04:52:253 -
23:35 Reikokaz: naja liegt bestimmt an mir xD
23:35 Feerum: Warum? Jeder hauptbeat is mit nem Chord belegt :D
23:36 Reikokaz: naja sag ja liegt besitmmt an mir x
23:36 Feerum: Ich hät grad gegen ende zwar auch 3er chords mit reingepackt
23:36 Feerum: aber das is grade das lustige an ner collab find ich :D
23:36 Reikokaz: :')
23:36 Reikokaz: yo 3er chords fehlen enige
23:36 Reikokaz: wenn man die einbauen sollte :p
23:37 Feerum: Ich hät das ende sogar ganz im Chordmash gemappt
23:37 Feerum: So bisl Kanshou like
23:37 Reikokaz: yo immer 4 noten auf einmal oder ?
23:37 Feerum: Nich AiAe SHD like
23:37 Feerum: xD
23:37 Reikokaz: oder 3
23:37 Reikokaz: xD
23:37 Reikokaz: nene du everstehst mich falsch
23:38 Feerum: eher 2 2 3 2 2 3 maybe
23:38 Feerum: einfach coby & paste aus Kanshou :^) no jk xDD
23:38 Reikokaz: xD
23:38 Reikokaz: 04:52:574 - 04:52:574 - bei denen meint ich immer 3 oder 4 noten
23:39 Reikokaz: statt 2
23:39 Feerum: ja 3 für die claps
23:39 Feerum: 04:52:650 - , 04:53:425 - etc
23:39 Reikokaz: yo
23:39 Reikokaz: und die anderen 2 oder 4
23:39 Reikokaz: eher 2
23:39 Feerum: 4 wär zuviel xD
23:39 Reikokaz: :p
23:39 Reikokaz: true
23:40 Feerum: 4 bei dem Starrating passen nur bei sowas 02:22:070 -
23:40 Feerum: So ein richtig kräftiger kurzer beat
23:40 Reikokaz: yo
23:40 Reikokaz: Naja soll ich das noch modgerecht im Forum schreiben? xD
23:40 Reikokaz: ohne die ganzen fehle r:p
23:41 Reikokaz: nur find ich den part richtig weird obwohl er richtig ist 03:05:041 - xD
23:42 Feerum: ja wie willst sowas mappen :c
23:42 Feerum: ohm
23:42 Reikokaz: vllt aus der note n ln machen 03:05:328 (185328|2) -
23:42 Feerum: kannst einfach /savelog machen, das log puushen und dann einfach im Forum in ner box + code schreiben
23:42 Reikokaz: ya das ist aber deutsch xD
23:43 Reikokaz: also so meinte ich das :p https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3417612
23:44 Feerum: Egal :) viele IRC werden in der landessprache gemacht wenn Modder/Mapper gleiches land sind
23:44 Reikokaz: wer ist eig dein partner?
23:44 Feerum: Würd da doch garnich reinpassen :o ich hör nur ein ln sound
23:44 Feerum: ohm
23:44 Feerum: Critical_Star
23:44 Reikokaz: kenn ich net x:
23:45 Feerum: Hat auch nur eine Map ranked
23:45 Feerum: aber ich mag ihren Mapping style echt
23:46 Reikokaz: naja er ist anderst :p
23:46 Feerum: Jap :D
23:46 Feerum: Sie kann viel besser mit Streams umgehen als ich finde ich
23:46 Feerum: Die spielen sich viel sauberer
Danke fürs drüber gucken Reiko, hat noch einige fehler behoben :3/
-SoraGami-
Waw. Good luck in this one Feru!
another halozy marathon map OwO
4649ceynou
I really like this map, good luck !
Topic Starter
Feerum

-SoraGami- wrote:

Waw. Good luck in this one Feru!
another halozy marathon map OwO

Tadayuuki wrote:

I really like this map, good luck !
Thanks :)

And yes! Osu!Mania needs more Halozy!
Satoshi Kazuki
Hi
Mod Requested From:

Column:1|2|3|4

Mod
00:13:542 - offset seems wrong to me cause i hear multiple sound like - 00:15:102 (15102|2) - try hear with 100%

00:19:554 - add note? dont leave it empty in order to rest player hand
00:19:650 - ^
00:27:683 (27683|2) - LN start - 00:27:876 - here and true end are - 00:28:602 - here by using 1/8 snap
00:50:521 (50521|3,50521|1,50618|0,50618|2) - kinda hard to combine with this note - 00:50:715 (50715|0,50715|1,50812|2,50812|3,50908|0,50908|1,51005|2,51005|3,51102|1,51102|0,51199|2,51199|3,51296|0,51296|1,51392|2,51392|3) -
^suggestion
00:50:425 (50425|0,50521|1) - ctrl + G
00:50:618 (50618|0) - move to 2

01:04:650 (64650|0,64650|2,64650|1,64650|3,65425|3,65425|2,65425|1,65425|0,65812|1,65812|0,65812|3,65812|2) - not loud enough...just change to triple
01:20:328 (80328|3,80328|1,80715|2,80715|0,81102|0,81102|1) - why suddenly double?? just change all of it to single note
01:40:070 (100070|0) - move to 3 for balance after that 01:40:360 (100360|2,100457|1) - ctrl + G then 01:40:554 (100554|0) - to 3 after that 01:40:650 (100650|2,100747|0) - ctrl + G
01:58:457 (118457|1,118457|0,118457|2,118457|3) - triple
02:22:070 (142070|1,142070|0,142070|3,142070|2,142457|1,142457|2,142457|0,142457|3,142844|1,142844|0,142844|2,142844|3,143231|0,143231|3,143231|2,143231|1) - ^
02:23:618 (143618|3,143618|0,143618|1) - this are the one should be fourth...i think triple are ok
02:28:457 (148457|1,148650|1,148844|1,149134|1,149328|1,149521|1) - rearrange?
03:03:489 (183489|3,183489|1,183489|2,183489|0) - triple
03:30:973 - triple
03:32:521 - ^
03:32:521 - ^
03:35:618 - ^
etc....
04:18:199 (258199|2,258392|2,258586|2,258779|2,258973|2,259166|2,259360|2,259554|2,259747|2,259941|2,260134|2,260328|2,260521|2,260715|2,260908|2,261102|2) - i know you try to making jack..but this kinda too much..you should rearrange

Good Luck :D
Topic Starter
Feerum

Satoshi Kazuki wrote:

Hi
Mod Requested From:

Column:1|2|3|4

Mod
00:13:542 - offset seems wrong to me cause i hear multiple sound like - 00:15:102 (15102|2) - try hear with 100% For me it seems good. But i let check it

00:19:554 - add note? dont leave it empty in order to rest player hand
00:19:650 - ^ Dont really like this :/ i keep my
00:27:683 (27683|2) - LN start - 00:27:876 - here and true end are - 00:28:602 - here by using 1/8 snap I'll check this few Times, the beginning is a bit earlyer but the ending you mention is correct so accepted
00:50:521 (50521|3,50521|1,50618|0,50618|2) - kinda hard to combine with this note - 00:50:715 Okay i make them singlenotes.(50715|0,50715|1,50812|2,50812|3,50908|0,50908|1,51005|2,51005|3,51102|1,51102|0,51199|2,51199|3,51296|0,51296|1,51392|2,51392|3) -
^suggestion
00:50:425 (50425|0,50521|1) - ctrl + G
00:50:618 (50618|0) - move to 2 Both accepted

01:04:650 (64650|0,64650|2,64650|1,64650|3,65425|3,65425|2,65425|1,65425|0,65812|1,65812|0,65812|3,65812|2) - not loud enough...just change to triple i keep cuz i think its loud enough, previous i map 3 Chords for Clap, here is Finish. Should be good :3
01:20:328 (80328|3,80328|1,80715|2,80715|0,81102|0,81102|1) - why suddenly double?? just change all of it to single note Okay have change and rearrange a bit
01:40:070 (100070|0) - move to 3 for balance after that 01:40:360 (100360|2,100457|1) - ctrl + G then 01:40:554 (100554|0) - to 3 after that 01:40:650 (100650|2,100747|0) - ctrl + G Was kinda hard to understand but accepted xD
01:58:457 (118457|1,118457|0,118457|2,118457|3) - triple Keep
02:22:070 (142070|1,142070|0,142070|3,142070|2,142457|1,142457|2,142457|0,142457|3,142844|1,142844|0,142844|2,142844|3,143231|0,143231|3,143231|2,143231|1) - ^ First one i keep because finish, the other i change to tripple
02:23:618 (143618|3,143618|0,143618|1) - this are the one should be fourth...i think triple are ok Keep my :3
02:28:457 (148457|1,148650|1,148844|1,149134|1,149328|1,149521|1) - rearrange? Yeah done, thanks!
03:03:489 (183489|3,183489|1,183489|2,183489|0) - triple No keep cuz finish

Good Luck :D
Thanks for mod! The remaining part is for C_Star.
Critical_Star
Mod Requested From:

Column:1|2|3|4

Mod
03:30:973 - triple double are fine here, i put 3 notes for crash sound xD
03:32:521 - ^ ^
03:32:521 - ^^
03:35:618 - ^^
etc....
04:18:199 (258199|2,258392|2,258586|2,258779|2,258973|2,259166|2,259360|2,259554|2,259747|2,259941|2,260134|2,260328|2,260521|2,260715|2,260908|2,261102|2) - i know you try to making jack..but this kinda too much..you should rearrange
i realize that but if follow the sound is right here ;w; will rearrange some if needed

thanks :) :D ;) refix some pattern

update : https://www.dropbox.com/s/ye9k12lmzhocl ... D.osu?dl=0
Another Lie
seems from this modding queue has been taken, 1 star for this map :D :D
Good luck with this map
NlHIL
Feerum
00:28:618 - add a LN?
01:00:005 - add?
01:06:199 - add
01:12:005 - add?
01:12:392 (72392|0) - remove?
01:15:102 - add?
01:34:844 - 01:35:618 - and ... - add?
02:22:070 (142070|0) - remove
02:37:070 - add
02:51:102 - add a note as 01:46:070 (106070|1,106070|0,106070|3)

C.Star
03:34:844 (214844|3,214844|0,214844|2) - why 3 notes?
04:50:715 - add?
Rivals_7
Hi~ from my queue~
1|2|3|4
Sorry if its short mod :(

[FeruStar's Deconstructed Eternal Full Moon]
Thats too long :v

00:54:005 (54005|2,54296|2,54489|1,54683|3) - Why are you mapping sounds that not even exist?
There's other like this too........

01:33:102 - suggest to add LN starting from here....... same goes for this - 02:38:134 -
02:22:070 (142070|1) - this is literally a same noise like the triples after this. suggest to delete
03:16:263 (196263|1) - One note is enough i think
03:33:876 (213876|1,213876|3,214070|0,214070|3) - suggest to change. you use the same pattern before - 03:30:779 (210779|1,210779|3,210973|3,210973|0) -
03:43:747 (223747|1,223941|0) - col 1|2 respectively
start from here - 03:53:425 - The pattern is kinda repetitive. suggest to variate them
04:30:392 (270392|0) - to 3?
04:34:166 (274166|0) - ^3? better play
04:37:263 (277263|0) - ^2
04:46:650 (286650|0) - ^4

Good Luck ~ :)
AlisceaSparku

Hi Feerum~ :3
From Han & Aliscea's Mania Modding Plaza!

Here's my Mod

|1|2|3|4|

woosh
01:04:650 - make 3 notes only, or add a note at 01:06:199
01:05:425 - ^
01:05:812 - ^
01:12:005 - add a note?
01:12:392 - remove a note?
01:15:296 (75296|0) - move to 4, more balanced
01:15:489 (75489|3) - if ^ applied, move to 1
01:18:199 - add note at 2, different sound
01:17:037 - remove a note?
01:26:521 (86521|2,86908|1) - move to the left by one column, to avoid those triple jack
01:33:683 - remove a note
01:58:457 - ^ ( i suggest putting SVs here xD )
01:58:844 - ^
02:22:070 - remove, same pitch with 02:22:457 -
02:38:715 - remove a note
02:39:199 - 02:39:489 - columns 1 and 2 are used too much, how about putting some notes somewhere else?
02:52:650 - missing note
02:56:521 - ^
02:56:908 - remove a note
02:57:296 - missing note
02:58:070 - 03:00:392 - wrong pattern? for the 1/1 3 notes remove a note and for the 1/1 2 notes add a note
03:03:489 - remove a note ( i suggest SVs )
03:03:876 - ^
03:16:263 - 4th slider shift it into either 2 or 3 fits more i think
03:32:521 (212521|2) - move to 1, change the look of the notes to differentiate the beat, for same pattern for that sound aswell
03:38:521 (218521|0,218715|2) - switch columns, ^
03:40:263 (220263|1) - move to the left by 1 column
03:40:457 (220457|0) - if ^ applied, move to 3
03:43:166 - missing note?
03:44:908 (224908|2) - move to 1
03:47:231 (227231|2,227618|1) - switch columns, for balance
03:47:812 - missing note? add at 2
03:48:005 (228005|1) - if ^ applied, move to 4
03:48:199 (228199|3,228392|2) - if ^ applied, switch columns
03:49:360 (229360|0,229554|1) - switch columns

Nice map! :D
Good luck with your map! Hope these helps...
Topic Starter
Feerum
Sorry for keep you waiting with reply. I will reply, every Mod tomorrow, just to tired now.

Thanks for your patience
Critical_Star

Rivals_7 wrote:

Hi~ from my queue~
1|2|3|4
03:16:263 (196263|1) - One note is enough i think hmm, double is fine here since this is the quite loud too for calm part :3
03:33:876 (213876|1,213876|3,214070|0,214070|3) - suggest to change. you use the same pattern before - 03:30:779 (210779|1,210779|3,210973|3,210973|0) - ok, rearranged~
03:43:747 (223747|1,223941|0) - col 1|2 respectively rearranged
start from here - 03:53:425 - The pattern is kinda repetitive. suggest to variate them might reconsider, since all these sound are the same, that why i make it same pattern

AlisceaSparku wrote:


Hi Feerum~ :3
From Han & Aliscea's Mania Modding Plaza!

Here's my Mod

|1|2|3|4|

woosh
03:16:263 - 4th slider shift it into either 2 or 3 fits more i think i think is fine here owo
03:32:521 (212521|2) - move to 1, change the look of the notes to differentiate the beat, for same pattern for that sound aswell here is fine
03:38:521 (218521|0,218715|2) - switch columns, ^ ok
03:40:263 (220263|1) - move to the left by 1 column hmm, nope i prefer the current pattern :3
03:40:457 (220457|0) - if ^ applied, move to 3 ^
03:43:166 - missing note? yea, added
03:44:908 (224908|2) - move to 1 the reason why i put some note like this are just to avoid using same pattern always xD
03:47:231 (227231|2,227618|1) - switch columns, for balance rearranged here
03:47:812 - missing note? add at 2 ok
03:48:005 (228005|1) - if ^ applied, move to 4 refix some pattern here
03:48:199 (228199|3,228392|2) - if ^ applied, switch columns ^
03:49:360 (229360|0,229554|1) - switch columns ok

Nice map! :D
Good luck with your map! Hope these helps...
04:30:392 (270392|0) - to 3?
04:34:166 (274166|0) - ^3? better play
04:37:263 (277263|0) - ^2
04:46:650 (286650|0) - ^4
rearranged all above

NlHIL wrote:

C.Star
03:34:844 (214844|3,214844|0,214844|2) - why 3 notes? opps my bad, removed a note
04:50:715 - add?nope, here already have 3-hit xD

thanks NI, rival and Aliscea~ :) :D ;)

update: https://www.dropbox.com/s/ye9k12lmzhocl ... D.osu?dl=0
Topic Starter
Feerum

NlHIL wrote:

Feerum
00:28:618 - add a LN? No don't really hear a good sound for a LN
01:00:005 - add? Rearranged and Added
01:06:199 - add No Thanks. No finish for a 4 Chord
01:12:005 - add? Nope, just want to emphasize the Guitar here
01:12:392 (72392|0) - remove? Nice, done
01:15:102 - add? don't really see need for another note here
01:34:844 - 01:35:618 - and ... - add? Nope. I emphasize the clap with the 3 Chord here
02:22:070 (142070|0) - remove Okay..
02:37:070 - add Nice catch.
02:51:102 - add a note as 01:46:070 (106070|1,106070|0,106070|3) oh didn't see that. Thanks

Rivals_7 wrote:

Hi~ from my queue~
1|2|3|4
Sorry if its short mod :(

[FeruStar's Deconstructed Eternal Full Moon]
Thats too long :v

00:54:005 (54005|2,54296|2,54489|1,54683|3) - Why are you mapping sounds that not even exist?
There's other like this too........ This all have sounds o.o

01:33:102 - suggest to add LN starting from here....... same goes for this - 02:38:134 - No i like this little break before the Kiai begins
02:22:070 (142070|1) - this is literally a same noise like the triples after this. suggest to delete Already done in Mod before.

Good Luck ~ :)

AlisceaSparku wrote:


Hi Feerum~ :3
From Han & Aliscea's Mania Modding Plaza!

Here's my Mod

|1|2|3|4|

woosh
01:04:650 - make 3 notes only, or add a note at 01:06:199 i remove some notes
01:05:425 - ^
01:05:812 - ^ ^ Done
01:12:005 - add a note? No just follow the Guitar here
01:12:392 - remove a note? Already done
01:15:296 (75296|0) - move to 4, more balanced
01:15:489 (75489|3) - if ^ applied, move to 1 Nice, done
01:18:199 - add note at 2, different sound Nice Catch
01:17:037 - remove a note? No, i emphasize the finish
01:26:521 (86521|2,86908|1) - move to the left by one column, to avoid those triple jack Then i would have a triple jack on Col 1. I like how it is, a Little jack before every LN
01:33:683 - remove a note Okay
01:58:457 - ^ ( i suggest putting SVs here xD )
01:58:844 - ^ No. I hate SV's will not add some
02:22:070 - remove, same pitch with 02:22:457 - Done in other mod already
02:38:715 - remove a note Done
02:39:199 - 02:39:489 - columns 1 and 2 are used too much, how about putting some notes somewhere else? Rearranged
02:52:650 - missing note
02:56:521 - ^ Both no. Here you have listen closely what i Map. With the 2 Chords i try to follow the Guitar
02:56:908 - remove a note Noe
02:57:296 - missing note No
02:58:070 - 03:00:392 - wrong pattern? for the 1/1 3 notes remove a note and for the 1/1 2 notes add a note Don't really understand that but it looks right for me

Nice map! :D
Good luck with your map! Hope these helps...
Thank you all for the Mod. Sorry for late reply.
Also updated C_Star's Part
NlHIL
osu!mania needs more 東方project
RuberusuScarlet
ruberusu's BN check


from my BN queue (requester : NlHIL)

good map :D

|1|2|3|4|

metadate : ok
bg : ok
mp3 : ok
hitsound : ok
beatmap file : not good


  • [General]
    [list:1337][beatmap file]
    SB folder?

    [hitsound]
    soft-hitfinish
    Break?

    [metadate]tag add : Plain Asia
    (=プレインエイジア)
[FeruStar's Deconstructed Eternal Full Moon]
  • [Feerum's part]00:27:779 (27779|2) - start to 00:27:876 - . like 02:04:263 (124263|1) -

    01:21:489 - 01:23:425 - 01:23:812 - 01:24:199 - 01:24:586 - why double note? In 01:20:328 - 01:20:715 - 01:21:102 - is one note
    01:26:521 - 01:26:908 - 01:27:296 - 01:27:683 - ^

    [Critial_Star's part]04:11:473 - …double note?

    05:13:650 (313650|2,313747|0,313747|1,313844|3,313844|2) - ctrl+H. avoid double jack
that's all

if ready for bubble, please call me
Critical_Star
[Critial_Star's part]04:11:473 - …double note? opps my mistake ;w; :o :o rearranged

05:13:650 (313650|2,313747|0,313747|1,313844|3,313844|2) - ctrl+H. avoid double jack ok[/list][/list]
that's all

thanks for checking ruberu~ :) :D xD
all fixed~

update : https://www.dropbox.com/s/ye9k12lmzhocl ... D.osu?dl=0
Topic Starter
Feerum

RuberusuScarlet wrote:

ruberusu's BN check


from my BN queue (requester : NlHIL)

good map :D

|1|2|3|4|

metadate : ok
bg : ok
mp3 : ok
hitsound : ok
beatmap file : not good


  • [General]
    [list:1337][beatmap file]
    SB folder?

    [hitsound]
    soft-hitfinish
    Break?

    [metadate]tag add : Plain Asia
    (=プレインエイジア)
[FeruStar's Deconstructed Eternal Full Moon]
  • [Feerum's part]00:27:779 (27779|2) - start to 00:27:876 - . like 02:04:263 (124263|1) -

    01:21:489 - 01:23:425 - 01:23:812 - 01:24:199 - 01:24:586 - why double note? In 01:20:328 - 01:20:715 - 01:21:102 - is one note
    01:26:521 - 01:26:908 - 01:27:296 - 01:27:683 - ^

    [Critial_Star's part]04:11:473 - …double note?

    05:13:650 (313650|2,313747|0,313747|1,313844|3,313844|2) - ctrl+H. avoid double jack
that's all

if ready for bubble, please call me
Sorry that i cant reply correctly. Changes:

All notes Fixed.
Tags Fixed
Hitsound soft-hitfinish Fixed
SB Folder deleted

** UPDATED **
RuberusuScarlet

oh… sorry, I have missed lol

please erase one
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