1. Insane (3.19 stars, 292 notes)

1. 00:01:546 (1) - delete nc
2. 00:02:484 (1) - ^
3. 00:06:234 (9) - form a triangle with 7 and 8. i mean better triangle like put its y axis = 7's
4. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3122614 check dat distance snap. the upper right under axises that have prev: and next: for better jump spacing insane make them near 1.6x is gud :3 YOU CAN MAKE IT MORE OFC
5. 00:07:406 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - fix spacing
6. 00:13:265 (8) - nc
7. 00:14:906 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - fixu dem spacing
8. 00:22:406 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
9. 00:27:328 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - how is this part become a stream? O.o FIX TO JAMPS
10. 00:30:609 (1,2,3) - move dem to 00:30:374
11. 01:14:671 (8) - nc and fix dem spacu
12. 01:15:726 (1,2,3) - 1 sluder
13. 01:35:765 (5,6,7) - BIGGA
14. check dem spacing i cant point dem all out in 10 mins. ya know even typing this is sketchy because to make it fast yea. and you're my friend so i can typu like this ;P
15. Too mcuh spinner. change some to sliders instead

DeppyDf wrote:

Deppy's 10min Mod Challenge

Sorri if this low qualiti .w.

1. 00:01:546 (1) - delete nc fixed
2. 00:02:484 (1) - ^ fixed
3. 00:06:234 (9) - form a triangle with 7 and 8. i mean better triangle like put its y axis = 7's Um ?? fixed
4. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3122614 check dat distance snap. the upper right under axises that have prev: and next: for better jump spacing insane make them near 1.6x is gud :3 YOU CAN MAKE IT MORE OFC
5. 00:07:406 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - fix spacing fixed
6. 00:13:265 (8) - nc fixed
7. 00:14:906 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - fixu dem spacing nop
8. 00:22:406 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
9. 00:27:328 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - how is this part become a stream? O.o FIX TO JAMPS[fixed
10. 00:30:609 (1,2,3) - move dem to 00:30:374 fixed
11. 01:14:671 (8) - nc and fix dem spacu fixed
12. 01:15:726 (1,2,3) - 1 sluder fixed
13. 01:35:765 (5,6,7) - BIGGA fixed
14. check dem spacing i cant point dem all out in 10 mins. ya know even typing this is sketchy because to make it fast yea. and you're my friend so i can typu like this ;P
15. Too mcuh spinner. change some to sliders instead

Time Used - 8-15mins

Bewww wrote:

General:

Timing:
offset - 00:01:078 - oh you fixed it

Insane:
Immprove you rhythm here 00:01:078 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is not follow music
00:01:546 (3) - slider should end on red tic.
00:02:015 - place hitcircle here
00:02:367 - ^ . do something liek triplets on slider
00:03:187 (8,9) - feel better without . think you should delet this.
00:05:062 (5) - move it on x:256 y:300.
00:05:765 (7) - ^ x:64 y:268
00:06:234 (9) - should end on Wight tic 00:06:703 -
00:11:156 (1) - do it same like this 00:11:859 (3) -
00:14:671 (5) - immprove spacing move it out slider x:428 y:300 or whatever you want.
00:14:906 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Please Please resnap this make it more smorth and symmetrical.
00:18:656 (1) - move it on 00:18:890 - . and 00:19:124 (2) - on 00:18:656 -
00:19:359 (3) - delet back slider and place hitcircle here 00:19:359 - and 00:19:828 - 00:20:765 -
00:20:531 (5) - do it same like this 00:20:062 (4) -
00:22:406 (1,2) - delet this and place 3 hitscirlce on each tic
00:23:343 (7,8,9,10) - move it on wight tic started from 00:23:109 -
00:24:984 - add hitcircle here for not miss rhythm
00:26:156 (1,2,3,4) - stack it at right angles
00:27:328 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - do something with this it seem so ugly , and dontс cut(rip) the stream.
00:32:953 (1,2,3) - should seems geometrically. think you try do it buе dont end immprove pls.
00:34:828 (1,2,3,4,5) - stack it right
00:38:578 (1,2,3) - place them a bit far
00:42:328 (4) - need 2 sliders on wight tics instead of this one.
00:43:265 (1,2,3) - and again pls do it more geometricall. not so random snap.
00:44:203 (1,2,3) - should seems like mirror of this 00:43:265 (1,2,3) -
00:53:578 (1,2,3,4,5) - stack it right. stop stuck it!
00:59:203 (1) - 2 hitcircles . no need sliders here .
00:59:671 - but here you need slider
01:00:140 - and here.
01:00:374 (4) - delet pls
01:00:609 - and hitcrcle here
01:02:015 (6) - should should seems geometrically like a mirror of this 01:02:953 (8) -
01:03:656 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - replace! dont stuck it.
01:06:234 (5) - should end on red tic.
01:06:703 - hitcircle here
01:13:734 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - immprove spacing.
01:15:726 (5) - should start on wight tic here 01:15:609 -
01:18:421 (9,10) - replace dont stuck 1st sldier with last hitcircle.
01:19:710 (2,3) - delet this! or just this 01:19:828 (3) -
01:20:062 (4) - replace slider on wight tic 01:19:828 -
01:20:296 - you need sldier here
01:20:531 (5) - delet this
01:23:109 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - immprve spacing again! dont stuck it!
01:25:921 (3,4,5,6) - replace this. dont stuck with next NC sldiers.
01:31:078 (1) - why you do it with this slider, just do it like a mirror of 01:31:546 (2) -
01:34:828 (3) - delet it!
01:35:062 (4) - slider should be on wight tic here 01:34:828 -
01:35:296 - you need sldier here.
01:36:703 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - place it more geometrically
01:42:328 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ like you do here 01:40:453 (1,2,3,4,5) -
01:44:437 - need hitcircel here .
01:44:438 (2) - move it on 01:44:671 -
01:44:906 (1) - you no need hitcircle here.
01:45:843 - 02:00:609 - too big breack time you should map this place
02:01:429 (2) - move it here 02:01:312 -
02:01:781 (3) - ^ 02:01:546 -
02:08:109 - too short spiner. dont know but do something with.

all mean it critical to do right rhythm

Bewww wrote:

any way i hope i give you right things to be better

Black Wolf159 wrote:

General:

Hope that this will serve you.

If your mapset has two difficulties, one of them cannot be an Insane or Expert. The lowest difficulty must be below 2.0 stars.

Insane is below to 3.75 stars, so this should be “Hard”. Also, some notes get too close.

00:03:421 (6) – “Clap” this note.
00:05:296 (6) – “Clap” the beginning of the slider.
00:06:234 (9) - ^
00:08:812 (5) – “Clap” the end of the slider.
00:11:859 (3) - “Clap” the beginning of the slider.
00:12:796 (6) – “Clap” this note.
00:15:609 (3) – “Finish” this note to follow the rhytm of that sound.
00:15:843 (4) – “Clap” the end of the slider.
00:15:609 (3) – “Finnish”
00:17:015 (7) – “Clap” this slider.
00:17:718 (8) – Distance more this note so they would not get confused.
00:19:593 (3) – “Clap” the reverse arrow.
00:20:765 (5) – “Clap” the end of the slider.
00:23:109 (4) – “Finnish”
00:23:343 (5) - “Clap” the end of the slider.
00:23:343 (5) - ^
00:28:968 (6,1) – Distance those notes from 00:28:265 (5) – They are too close.
00:26:859 (4) - to 00:27:328 (1) - ^
00:31:078 (1) – “Clap” the beginning of the slider.
00:31:546 (2) - ^
00:32:484 (5) – “Clap” this note to give a better hitsounding.
00:32:953 –; 00:33:422 (2) – “Clap” Beginning of the slider and 00:33:890 (3) – end of the slider to ^
00:34:828 (1) -; 00:35:297 (2) – Beginning of the slider.

00:38:578 (1,2,3) – 1,2 Beginning, 3 end of the slider .
00:41:390 (3) – “Clap” Reverse arrow and the end.
00:43:265 (1,2,3) – “Clap”
00:45:140 (5) – “Finnish” Reverse Arrow and “Clap” the end.
00:46:078 (1,2) – “Clap” the beginning
00:47:484 (5) – “Clap”
00:49:359 (4) - ^
00:51:234 (5) - ^
00:52:640 (3) – “Whistle”
00:54:984 (5) – “Clap”
00:56:859 (5) - ^
00:58:734 (5) - ^
00:59:906 (9) – “Whistle”
01:00:374 – Add a note.
01:00:609 (10) – Distance from the slider
01:02:015 (6) – “Whistle”
01:02:953 (8) - ^
01:10:921 (2) – Reduce slider to white line and “Whistle”
01:12:328 (5) – “Finnish”
01:13:265 (3) - ^
01:14:203 (6) - ^
01:15:374 (4,5,6) – 4 “Finnish” ; 5 “Clap” ; 6 “Whistle”
01:20:062 (3) – change to 01:19:828 – to follow her sing.
01:20:296 – Add an slider.
01:19:593 (1,2) – “Clap”
01:23:109 (1) – distance this from 01:23:343 (2,3,4) – It will be confusing.
01:23:578 (4) – “Whistle”
01:24:046 (5) - ^
01:24:984 (8) – “Clap”
01:26:859 (6) - ^ The beginning of the slider.
01:28:265 (3,4,5) - ^^
01:30:374 (6) – “Finnish”
01:31:078 (1) – “Clap” the beginning
01:31:546 (2) - ^
01:31:546 (2) – “Clap”
01:32:484 (5) - ^
01:32:953 (1) - ^ The beginning (Because she’s saying “PON”)
01:33:421 (2) - ^ The end.
01:35:765 (5,6,7) – “Clap”
01:37:171 (3) - ^ The beginning
01:38:578 (1) - ^
01:39:046 (2) - ^
01:40:453 (1,2) – ^
01:41:859 (5) – “Clap”
01:43:265 (3,4,5) - ^
01:44:672 (3) – Get 3 symmetric with notes.
01:46:077 (4) – “Clap”
02:01:078 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) – ^
02:04:359 (8) – Distance this note.
02:08:109 (1) – Unrankable, Auto needs to do at least 1000 points.