1. fear - 4Key (5,32 stars, 5341 notes)

Niji wrote:

Hello, mod as requested from my Queue . .

Coloumn : l 0 l 1 l 2 l 3 l

Black --> My Suggestion/opinion
Red --> Unrankable issue
Blue --> Comment
Green --> Positive Support

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[General]
Aimod says :



-Please add Preview point at part that make the hearder intersting .. forgot about that, added
- break time is not allowed, but If in that part have no sound no problem ~ from ranking criteria: " Only use breaks when they are necessary, for example an absolute silent period within the song. " so i had no choose, break is necessary here

[Fear]
Overall Diff -1, 8 is Enough OD is fine, its non LN map, such OD is necessary for that kind of technical map

00:17:470 (17470|0,17470|1) - ctrl + h ? jack will nice , and move 00:17:539 (17539|2) - to left hand actually nice idea, jack will fit here, fixed

00:35:096 - ^ fixd

00:37:723 - Break time is not allowed, so how about LN for fill this part ? explained above

02:06:133 - 02:06:202 - fill with stair ? its 1/4 i think, so nope

03:59:152 - miss this sound, add note for completing ur pattern . .

03:59:290 - ^

04:16:848 - ^

04:16:986 - ^ all denied, because those sounds are just a echo, will stay with current patterns

some pattern was repeated, but u already have awesome pattern here . .
Good luck for ur long maps! ><

juankristal wrote:

Hi Tidek !

Overall: Most of the bursts should be 1/8? I am not sure, maybee 1/12 but meh. I am not good a timing at all too.. I think u are right, 1/6 is too slow for those sounds, will fix it, but i will have to rearrange a lot of patterns, will take some time.

00:23:829 - Missinig sound here. Add a note.
00:30:903 (30903|2,30949|3,31087|2) - I was thinkiing about Ctrl+H this one and move to right. If so, probably you should move 00:31:087 (31087|3) - to left. Dunno, this might be dumb, but it can feel okey. I feel that sound more broken stair like. changed it already to 1/8 burst
00:37:101 - Missinig sound here. Add a note.
In the break section you can add one LN and add some single notes following the music. The break its fine tho. Something liike that maybe? http://puu.sh/ksYHY/aa4ccd581e.jpg
I dont know, I think you can think about somethiing better or leaving it that way. Break is totally fine here, no need to put really force notes, break just fit here (calm before the storm)
01:05:511 (65511|1) - I think this one should be in the same column of the first one to follow the pitch or the sound at least, same drum. If you do so, probablly 01:05:235 (65235|1,65281|0) - Ctrl+G this one and theen 01:05:235 (65235|0,65281|1,65327|3,65373|2) - Ctrl+H.
01:16:364 (76364|0,76433|2) - Maybe ctrl+g this one? Same sound for the minijack can be good. nah, i dont use minijacks for hi hats
01:16:640 - I know adding a note here may hurt the playability but, you can consider rearranging some stuff for it. i know what u mean, but with my mapping style i have to keep as it is now. I want to avoid stupid forced jacks
01:34:336 - ^ Well, there are quite a few of them same
01:53:622 (113622|3,113622|1,113691|3,113691|1) - Why this one doubles? Following ones are simples, mayybe you should delete 1 note of each I was using that kind of pattern for that rhythm 3 times before, so keep.
02:06:133 - You can use some crazy 1/6 snap here if you want, with the double trills probably too hard, but take that consideration
02:08:553 - Siince thee low density of thiis section, how about using doublee notes for this kind of sounds in here? it will be inconsistent with next double notes in that section
02:08:898 (128898|1,128967|0) - Maybe delete this ones? I dont hear sounds here but it might be only me.
02:21:963 (141963|1,142101|2) - This ones in the same column I think
02:29:843 (149843|3,149981|1,149981|0,150120|1,150120|0) - Maybe ctrl+h for this one? Or some rearrange for hand balance. To much in the left one with the trills followed by those doble jacks. 02:30:258 (150258|2) - Maybe move that one to 1st column then. nah, there is a lot of one handed patterns.
02:33:092 - Add a note here?, by doiing that you might be able to move the 02:33:161 (153161|2,153161|3,153299|3,153299|2) - notes to focus more on left hand nah, consistency
02:38:691 - This one should be a double I think its too quiet
02:44:152 - Add note?
02:44:567 - ^ both no, this part overall has really broken rhythm, I want to keep the rhythm logical with the most significant sounds
03:00:534 - Double?
03:27:493 (207493|1,207562|2) - I would turn those ones to 4 slot minijacks
04:33:927 - Add?
04:35:304 (275304|2,275373|0,275373|1,275442|0,275442|1,275511|2,275511|3) - Ctrl+H and then add in blue tick. added only on blue tick, without ctrl+h, fits better
04:54:175 - I was not paying attention to this type of sections, you can use burst here, meh. jack for me fits better here
04:55:212 - Add? for sure no, too quiet
04:59:083 - ^
05:01:917 (301917|2) - Wrong snap? Blue maybe? snap is fine, you just here another sound on blue tick I ignored.

I think thats all, kill me for being so lazy x.xx

Good luck with the rank Tidek !

Shoegazer wrote:

Sorry for taking so long. Most of these will be very minor nitpicks (almost always PR). This is going to be a very long mod regardless.

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[Fear]
OD10 seems appropriate, I like it.

01:02:470 - Should be a single.
01:05:235 - Have this burst start at 3, and rearrange the burst to something like 32143. This will cause some rigidity, but I think it fits with the rest of the chart.
01:06:341 - Change to 332 for fluency maybe? Looks a little more aesthetically pleasing as well.
01:12:977 - Move this note to 1, this creates a very rigid transition. If it's moved to 1, the player can hit something like [12]32[134], which is generally more fluent.
01:18:230 - This pattern might be a bit too rigid, especially it's pretty early into the track. Something like this would be ideal I think.
01:24:590 - Change to [124] since the snare at 01:24:175 - is a [14], and I think it'd be better to accentuate sounds like that; even if it's subtle. Also gets rid of the minijack at 3. no change here, because I used [234] snare for the same sound here 01:25:004 - and here 01:23:898 -
01:44:636 - + 01:45:050 - Actually would like to see a minijack here (or 3 or 4), this section feels a bit underemphasised, or at least a bit too fluent. Would have to do some rearranging though, which might be difficult to do since your layering scheme seems quite concrete (kicks on either [12] or [34]). Something like this maybe?
01:46:848 - Would like to see a minijack here as well, but again it's a bit hard to rearrange. You could just Ctrl+H up to 01:48:230 - .
01:48:368 - Have the burst start at 4, for the reason in 1:05 or so.
02:00:396 - Move to [134]. Same sound as 01:59:981 - . Maybe move 02:00:534 - to [34] as well for comfortability.
02:00:949 - Move to [123], same sound as the snare before it.
02:01:087 - Move to [124], minijack would be on 3.
02:01:640 - Move to [234].
02:28:322 - This is a different snare hit from 02:28:184 - , maybe move 02:28:184 - to [14].
02:47:677 - I think this chord should have some reminiscence to 02:47:262 - at least. Maybe something like [13]?
02:51:686 - Move to [234], it's the same sound as 02:51:548 - with a heavier kick. Might be a touch bit too rigid though. As u said, it will be too rigid, no change.
02:56:249 - Shift to 4 to differentiate this from the snare before it. You'd have to rearrange the 1/4s after, [123]4[12] would do.
02:56:525 - Should be a double, [12] is ideal.
03:00:258 - Move to [23] to connect the triples before and after it better. I always was using [14] to connect those triples, so no change here to keep consistancy
03:05:096 (185096|3,185166|2,185235|1,185235|0,185373|2,185373|3) - Ctrl+H this for the same reasons at 2:47 or so.
03:13:668 - Move this chord and the consequent chord to [134] to differentiate it from the sound before it. I did something similar to 02:55:972 - like u suggested before to keep consistency
03:14:221 - Should be a double, [34] is ideal.
03:37:170 - Move to [34].
03:37:861 - Move to [34], the sound at 03:38:138 - is different and is a [23]. Additionally since this is a heavier sound, [34] would be more ideal since it requires more force than [23].
03:38:553 - Move this and the consequent chord to [12], since they are the same note and I think it'd be better as a minijack instead of avoiding a minijack here.
03:42:285 - Move to [12].
03:59:567 - Don't see why you didn't put in notes on sounds like this, especially when sounds like 04:02:332 - are generally more feint. This issue goes for the entire section.
04:42:009 - Move to [14], since the sound at 04:41:456 - is [14], and they are the same. Creates a nice transition into the minijack too.
04:43:944 - Move this to [23] for better transitioning into the [134].
04:46:571 - This can be a triple. its different than previous triple, no strong snare like before
04:47:124 - ^ same
04:50:304 - This should be the same as 04:49:889 - since they are the same sound. Ctrl+H 04:50:442 (290442|1,290511|2,290511|3,290580|0,290580|1) - to rearrange the patterns.
05:07:585 - ^
05:24:728 - Move this and the consecutive chord to [34], the snare is pretty different from the sounds before it.
05:28:737 - Should be [14], as it is the same chord before it, which is a [14]. There's some other issues with this too, so look at the point below for a better way to arrange it.
05:29:083 - Missing 1/4. You can rearrange the entire pattern to something like this.
05:37:585 - Move to [24] maybe? Gives a better transition to the next chord.
05:37:723 - Move to [134], as it is a different sound from 05:37:447 - .
05:37:861 (337861|1,337931|2,338000|0,338000|1,338000|3) - Ctrl+H.

Any pitch relevancy errors that I didn't pick up are either because I don't think there's a solid way of actually making them pitch relevant without messing up the structure entirely or I forgot about that. Mainly the former hopefully.

Fantastic map, deliberately very rigid in structure and that's something that I enjoy seeing because it speaks quite a bit about the mapper's intentions and is something that I've been wanting to do for a long time.

_underjoy wrote:

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01:03:990 (63990|1,63990|2,64060|3,64060|0,64129|1,64129|2,64198|0,64198|3) - nie wiem czy to powinny być jumpy, wcześniej te dżwięki nie były tak zaakcentowane. W tym parcie może lepiej powstrzymać się od tego, w main parcie jest ok.
01:18:230 (78230|1,78230|0,78299|1,78299|0,78507|2,78576|2) - czemu pierwsze 2 są jumpami? zrób 22 -> 33?
01:26:802 - 01:27:493 - 01:29:014 - 3-chordy?
01:35:926 (95926|3,95995|3) - 01:53:622 (113622|3,113622|1,113691|1,113691|3) - jak wcześniej
01:44:497 - 01:45:189 - 01:46:709 - 02:02:884 - 02:04:405 - wincyj 3-chordów?
02:33:299 (153299|2,153299|3) - zrób notkę na 2 zamiast tego
02:42:838 - dodaj 1?
02:43:253 (163253|2,163253|0,163253|3,163391|0,163391|3,163391|2) - nie wiem czemu na ten dźwięk jest 3-chord unikalny dźwięk, zasługuje i pasuje
03:00:949 (180949|1,180949|3,180949|0,181087|0,181087|3,181087|1) - ^ ^
03:06:963 - zgubiłeś notkę, proponuję przerobić wcześniejszego handa i dodać (zakładam że zgubione notki nie są specjalnie xD)
03:10:212 (190212|2,190281|2) - delete? nie akcentujesz aż tak mocno zwykle, a jeśli już to pierwsza notka jest mocniej bo rytm, tu nic nie ma
03:12:631 - zgubiłeś notkę
03:13:599 - tu też tu specjalnie została ominięta, tak jak wcześniej zresztą
03:27:216 (207216|2,207216|0,207285|3,207285|1,207355|0,207355|2) - proponuję 3[12][34] niepotrzebna zmiana kierunku jumptrilla, kicki są stałe
03:37:170 (217170|2,217170|3,217585|1,217585|2) - nie lepiej pojedynczymi? porównaj 02:41:732 (161732|2,161871|0,162009|1,162009|3,162009|2,162147|2,162285|0,162424|2,162424|1,162424|3) - ten part ma unikalny rytm i jak widzisz dzięki temu patterny są bardziej skierowane na jedną rękę
03:38:553 (218553|2,218553|1,218691|1,218691|2) - tu zostawić tylko 22 patrzy wyżej
03:40:143 - zgubiłeś notkę? 03:40:419 - tu też specjalnie ominięte aby utrzymać patterny na prawą rękę (bo wtedy bym cały flow zmienił
03:41:594 (221594|0,221594|1,222009|1,222009|2) - tak samo, pojedyncze? ^
03:42:977 (222977|1,223115|1) - tu tylko 33 ^
03:44:912 (224912|2,224912|3,224981|1,224981|0,225050|2,225050|3) - 4[23][14]? ^
03:46:018 (226018|2,226018|3,226433|2,226433|1) - jw ^
03:47:401 (227401|2,227539|2) - jw ^
03:48:990 - 03:49:129 - 03:22:723 - 03:31:571 - 03:48:990 - 03:49:267 - missing notes? ^
03:50:442 (230442|3) - jw ^
03:51:825 (231825|3,231963|3) - jw ^
05:02:608 - dodaj 4?
05:04:889 - 05:05:027 - wyraźne dźwięki kicki w tym parcie tutaj są o wiele bardziej znaczące, nie będę psuł notkami między nimi które na 100% przyznajmy się - są niesłyszalne
05:17:401 - dodaj 1?
05:18:714 - 05:18:852 - wyraźne dźwięki
05:20:304 - dodaj 1?
05:32:401 - dodaj 2 hmm? nie wiem czemu taki pomysł
05:33:990 (333990|2,333990|1,334060|1,334060|2) - widzę takie jacki raczej na 1 rękę, zwłaszcza że po tym jest 05:34:474 (334474|2,334543|2,334889|0,334958|0,335235|2,335235|1,335304|1,335304|2) - także dość intensywnie. intensywnie, ale technicznie poprawne i nie aż takie niewygodne
05:35:442 (335442|2,335442|1,335580|2) - ghost notes
05:38:484 - brakuje notki, btw widzę tu onehanded trójkę.bardzo cichy dźwięk

Widziałem sporo dźwięków których nie zmapowałeś, chyba umyślnie, wychwyciłem tylko te bardziej wyraźne. Mapa czasami nieregularna pod względem budowy i consistency (chociaż naprawdę ciężko to zrobić w 4k breakcorze, i tak good job), mam nadzieję że mod się przyda