TrySail - Youthful Dreamer (TV Size) · forum

Loony

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

Loony 2015-05-27T21:22:42+00:00

Mau-nyan wrote:
Hey!~ NM from my queue Mau's NM and M4M Modding Queue! { NM Open }
Well, here goes nothing.

Normal:
00:15:843 (2,3) - The distance between these two notes are too far, please fix it Fixed!
00:27:622 (2) - Move this note at X: 208 Y: 84 to avoid the overlap with 00:26:149 (5) - Fixed!
00:37:192 - Mm, don't really like this pattern, why not try something like this instead You are another person that actually doesn't like this pattern, I need to change it then. Will consider it, I mean, seriously!
00:50:628 - This doesn't sound right, try something that fits more with the music. Maybe something like this instead. Fixed!
01:08:849 (2,3,4) - Don't really like this overlap here. Try stacking 01:08:849 (2) - on 01:09:585 (4) - head. Something like this maybe Fixed!
01:12:898 (1) - Don't really like where you placed this note. Why not place it here at X: 212 Y: 320 It's a bit too low, I think it is good as it is.
01:20:996 (3,5) - Why not stack these two notes? To avoid the overlap Fixed!
This diff looks good :3

Hard:
00:00:567 (1) - This spinner doesn't fit here at all 0.0 Place insert a break here or map this part. Fixed, made as it is in Normal
00:32:407 (3,5) - Please stack these two notes better Fixed!
00:38:665 (2,3) - Why not blanket these two sliders instead. It looks better imo Fixed!
00:55:229 (2,5) - The stack is a little bit off. Move 00:55:965 (5) - at X: 220 Y: 194 to improve the stack Fixed!
01:05:168 (2,4) - ^ Just move 01:05:904 (4) - at X: 134 Y: 274 Fixed!
01:14:186 (4) - Add a note here maybe? Fixed!
This diff is also nice 030

This mapset has a lot of potential~
Hope my mod was helpful!
Good Luck

Thanks a lot for your mod! You've been very heplful!

Starfall9908

663 posts

Joined November 2013

Starfall9908 2015-05-29T13:40:39+00:00

I'm done with the GD

I recommend you to use custom hitsounds. I used the default hitsounds for now in case you're not planning to add any custom hitsounds.

I also recommend you to change the Mp3 file since the volume in this song is pretty low and I had a hard time being able to hear where to put a note and were to not put a note.

Nacchan's Easy

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Youthful Dreamer1.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 62223
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 3327,12162,18051,23941,29830,35720,62223,87990
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.400006

[Metadata]
Title:Youthful Dreamer (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Youthful Dreamer (TV Size)
Artist:TrySail
ArtistUnicode:TrySail
Creator:Loony
Version:Nacchan's Easy
Source:Denpa Kyoushi
Tags:denpa kyoushi op opening song Kagami
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.9
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Denpa Kyoushi.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Loony

226 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

Loony 2015-05-29T16:18:26+00:00

Sorry, I don't really know what are these custom hitsounds, and how to add them.
And finally, I found better Mp3, and now it's really good! Better check it out, cause I had to make completely new offset, and maybe it can be improved.
And thanks of course for your Guest Difficulty! I've added it right now

KantanDez

255 posts

Joined February 2015

KantanDez 2015-05-29T17:57:07+00:00

from my queue:

Nacchan's Easy
these objects are not snapped fix them by making them again at the same position
00:04:683 (2) -
00:11:677 (3) -
00:19:407 (2) -
00:37:996 (2) -
00:42:230 (1) -
00:45:174 (1) -
00:49:591 (2) -
00:56:953 (1) -
01:04:315 (4) -
01:19:039 (4) -
01:27:137 (2) -

Advice: Press Ctrl,Shift A (Opens AiMod) to find problems

Normal
put this 00:30:819 (1) - here 00:30:635
then just add a hit circle here: 00:31:188 and 00:31:372

Advice: since osu! is a rhythm game, sensible rhythm is very important in beatmapping. try playing the beatmap with the playback rate of 25% or 50%

Hard
add some objects here:
01:01:372 to 01:02:568

Advice: same as Normal but no problem with timing

Good luck!

Starfall9908

663 posts

Joined November 2013

Starfall9908 2015-05-29T18:03:20+00:00

I'll fix the map tomorrow :3

Btw add my username to the tags. Everyone who made a GD or a collab needs to have their names in the tags

Loony

226 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

Loony 2015-05-29T21:14:28+00:00

Term Akatski wrote:
from my queue:

Nacchan's Easy
these objects are not snapped fix them by making them again at the same position
00:04:683 (2) - FIXED
00:11:677 (3) - FIXED
00:19:407 (2) - FIXED
00:37:996 (2) - FIXED
00:42:230 (1) - FIXED
00:45:174 (1) - FIXED
00:49:591 (2) - FIXED
00:56:953 (1) - FIXED
01:04:315 (4) - FIXED
01:19:039 (4) - FIXED
01:27:137 (2) - FIXED

Advice: Press Ctrl,Shift A (Opens AiMod) to find problems

Normal
put this 00:30:819 (1) - here 00:30:635
then just add a hit circle here: 00:31:188 and 00:31:372

/\
|
I can't do it, since it has to be at least one white-tick between the spinner end and the next notes. I need to check it though, cause I know, there are missing notes.

Advice: since osu! is a rhythm game, sensible rhythm is very important in beatmapping. try playing the beatmap with the playback rate of 25% or 50%

Hard
add some objects here:
01:01:372 to 01:02:568 Hmm you are the second person who says that to me, so I will consider it.

Advice: same as Normal but no problem with timing

Good luck!

Thanks for your quick mod! I have modded your beatmap already as well

EDIT: Sorry nadapan, I made the fixes by myself, cuz that was my bad. I wrongly snapped them to the new timing, but I have fixed it all, hope so you aren't angry. And I'll add your nickname to the tags, don't worry

Kyle Y

1,204 posts

Joined November 2013

Kyle Y 2015-05-30T07:52:29+00:00

#modding queue

[General]

SPOILER

I think offset should be +36ms (1040), please hear it by 25% by yourself, as 36ms is not a small number

[NM]

SPOILER

00:03:984 (1,2) - blanket
00:06:745 (3) - ^
00:12:818 (1) - curve
00:14:291 (4) - blanket
00:15:395 (6,1) - ds
00:17:788 (5,1) - ds
00:20:180 (4) - nc
00:29:015 (1) - not a good place for spinner
00:37:665 - missing notes
00:38:769 (2) - one reverse only, and 00:39:506 (1) - start at 00:39:322 - ended 00:40:058 -
00:44:659 (1) - del nc
01:05:825 (1) - blanket
01:07:849 (4,5) - blanket
01:24:230 (2,3) - ^
01:28:647 (2) - spinner? (ended 01:32:328 - ) or end with 1/2 slider (01:28:463 - )

[HD]

SPOILER

00:04:316 (2) - blanket
00:10:942 (3) - ds
00:13:151 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 00:16:832 (3,4,5,6,7) - map according to vocal? or follow what you did in 00:24:562 (1,2,3,4) -
00:41:679 (1) - ds
00:42:784 (3) - blanket
00:42:231 (2) - nc should be here
00:43:704 (5) - ^
00:51:066 (2) - blanket
00:52:538 (6) - nc
00:56:771 (6) - ds
01:06:526 (4) - seperate from 01:05:790 (2) -
01:14:256 (3) - move to 01:14:256 (3) - nc , and then 3/4 beat slider at 01:14:255 - and del 01:14:992 (1) -
01:21:618 (3) - blanket
01:28:612 (1) - 1/2 beat slider

Starfall9908

663 posts

Joined November 2013

Starfall9908 2015-05-30T11:00:42+00:00

The volume was too low so I raised it

Nacchan's Easy

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Youthful Dreamer.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 62844
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 3948,12783,18672,24562,30451,36341,62844,88611
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.400006

[Metadata]
Title:Youthful Dreamer (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Youthful Dreamer (TV Size)
Artist:TrySail
ArtistUnicode:TrySail
Creator:Loony
Version:Nacchan's Easy
Source:電波教師
Tags:denpa kyoushi op opening song 鑑 純一郎 かがみ じゅんいちろう Kagami Junichiro tv size
BeatmapID:708269
BeatmapSetID:309391

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.9
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Denpa Kyoushi.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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3948,-100,4,2,0,55,0,0
12783,-100,4,2,0,70,0,0
18672,-100,4,2,0,75,0,0
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Loony

226 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

Loony 2015-05-30T14:46:22+00:00

Kyle Y wrote:
#modding queue

[General]
SPOILER
I think offset should be +36ms (1040), please hear it by 25% by yourself, as 36ms is not a small number - Well, I did as you said, and I listened to the new offset over and over again, with 25% slower, and I really heard something earlier. I will make a request for checking the offset, but now it stays as it is.

[NM]
SPOILER
00:03:984 (1,2) - blanket Fixed!
00:06:745 (3) - ^ Fixed!
00:12:818 (1) - curve Fixed!
00:14:291 (4) - blanket Fixed!
00:15:395 (6,1) - ds Fixed!
00:17:788 (5,1) - ds Fixed!
00:20:180 (4) - nc Fixed!
00:29:015 (1) - not a good place for spinner Fixed!
00:37:665 - missing notes I changed the whole construction of this part, now it should be okay!
00:38:769 (2) - one reverse only, and 00:39:506 (1) - start at 00:39:322 - ended 00:40:058 - Fixed!
00:44:659 (1) - del nc You mean from the spinner? If not, I removed this New Combo from this ending slider with reverse arrow.
01:05:825 (1) - blanket Fixed!
01:07:849 (4,5) - blanket Fixed!
01:24:230 (2,3) - ^ Fixed!
01:28:647 (2) - spinner? (ended 01:32:328 - ) or end with 1/2 slider (01:28:463 - ) Hmm, will consider it, so much things to consider

[HD]
SPOILER
00:04:316 (2) - blanket Fixed!
00:10:942 (3) - ds Fixed!
00:13:151 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 00:16:832 (3,4,5,6,7) - map according to vocal? or follow what you did in 00:24:562 (1,2,3,4) - I think it's good as it is right now.
00:41:679 (1) - ds Fixed!
00:42:784 (3) - blanket Fixed!
00:42:231 (2) - nc should be here I think there's a New Combo on the first note.
00:43:704 (5) - ^ Fixed!
00:51:066 (2) - blanket Fixed!
00:52:538 (6) - nc Well, I don't hear here anything wich would suggest to make here a New Combo.
00:56:771 (6) - ds Fixed!
01:06:526 (4) - seperate from 01:05:790 (2) - Fixed!
01:14:256 (3) - move to 01:14:256 (3) - nc , and then 3/4 beat slider at 01:14:255 - and del 01:14:992 (1) - Fixed!
01:21:618 (3) - blanket Fixed!
01:28:612 (1) - 1/2 beat slider Fixed!

Thank you for your mod! Hopefully fixed everything!

koyomiya

40 posts

Joined February 2014

koyomiya 2015-06-04T07:06:08+00:00

[Hard]

inherited points

00:03:948 - seem is a one part of chorus, may be you can increase the velocity to 1.35 or 1.40, give a small contrast for begining 00:12:783, i think it will give player a preparation to head the chorus 01:02:844
00:36:341 - recommend change to 1.6. so that chorus will not sudden 1.75. overall spacing in this period may expand a little. if you decide to expand, chorus overall also need a little bit expand.

koyomiya mod

00:06:341 (3) - turn to slider will better, end the slider at 00:06:709 , seem 00:07:077 it has difference sound,
00:07:077 . 00:07:169 - this two place you can put a note to make a triplet or only place a note at 00:07:077 . 00:07:261 (1) - make this note give an impact to player.
00:09:654 (4) - strongly recommend to delete. is nothing there.
00:09:286 (2,3) - make a small triangle or a small distance, try take out the feel of clap(the sound may is clap?). example: 00:09:286 (2) - 244,184 00:09:470 (3) - 184,322
00:19:777 (1) - recommend place two single note here. to fit the vocal here.
00:21:617 (8) - recommend delete the note to fit the vocal.
00:37:446 (4,5) - for the distance you place, 00:37:814 (5) - feel like time in 00:37:721. more distance,
00:43:704 (1) - no need to NC, is a same part.
00:53:457 (1) - recommend place two single note here, make a small distance to accent the clap, example: 00:53:457 (1) - 244,122 00:53:642 (2) - 244,272
00:53:826 (2) - is nothing you follow there, strongly recommend to delete.
01:14:255 (3,4) - - seem 01:13:520 (1,2) - is using slider, may be change to slider to make it consistent. or 01:13:520 (1,2,3,4) - do all single note pattern here.
01:19:778 (4) - i hard to know wat you are going to follow, recommend to follow the vocal accent the 01:19:592 . 01:19:961, if follow drum change to single note for example 01:19:777 (4) - 136,164 01:19:961 (5) - 240, 220 01:20:145 (6) - 140,168

while i modding, i think your map is already update, may be some place i point is already change or fixed. good luck!

UchiganeNiigata

44 posts

Joined February 2014

UchiganeNiigata 2015-06-22T07:17:56+00:00

I finally got the GD done

UN's Insane

osu file format v14

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Title:Youthful Dreamer (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Youthful Dreamer (TV Size)
Artist:TrySail
ArtistUnicode:TrySail
Creator:Loony
Version:UN's Insane
Source:電波教師
Tags:denpa kyoushi op opening song 鑑純一郎かがみじゅんいちろう Kagami Junichiro tv size nadapan
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Probably needs a lot of fixing, but at least it's hitsounded

Loony

226 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

Loony 2015-06-25T13:22:18+00:00

koyomiya wrote:
[Hard]
inherited points
00:03:948 - seem is a one part of chorus, may be you can increase the velocity to 1.35 or 1.40, give a small contrast for begining
00:12:783, i think it will give player a preparation to head the chorus 01:02:844 I think it's fine as it is
00:36:341 - recommend change to 1.6. so that chorus will not sudden 1.75. overall spacing in this period may expand a little. if you decide to expand, chorus overall also need a little bit expand. Fixed!
koyomiya mod
00:06:341 (3) - turn to slider will better, end the slider at 00:06:709 , seem 00:07:077 it has difference sound, Fixed!
00:07:077 . 00:07:169 - this two place you can put a note to make a triplet or only place a note at 00:07:077 . 00:07:261 (1) - make this note give an impact to player.
00:09:654 (4) - strongly recommend to delete. is nothing there. In fact, there's somethin' there, but I changed it a bit anyway.
00:09:286 (2,3) - make a small triangle or a small distance, try take out the feel of clap(the sound may is clap?). example: 00:09:286 (2) - 244,184 00:09:470 (3) - 184,322 Not needed
00:19:777 (1) - recommend place two single note here. to fit the vocal here. Hmm, I won't change it because of the previous, also single notes.
00:21:617 (8) - recommend delete the note to fit the vocal. Sorry, it's okay as it is.
00:37:446 (4,5) - for the distance you place, 00:37:814 (5) - feel like time in 00:37:721. more distance, Fixed!
00:43:704 (1) - no need to NC, is a same part. Fixed!
00:53:457 (1) - recommend place two single note here, make a small distance to accent the clap, example: 00:53:457 (1) - 244,122 00:53:642 (2) - 244,272 Sorry, it's okay as it is.
00:53:826 (2) - is nothing you follow there, strongly recommend to delete. There is a word - vocal fragment, I leave it as it is in the other examples like this: 00:50:514 (1)
01:14:255 (3,4) - - seem 01:13:520 (1,2) - is using slider, may be change to slider to make it consistent. or 01:13:520 (1,2,3,4) - do all single note pattern here. Fixed!
01:19:778 (4) - i hard to know wat you are going to follow, recommend to follow the vocal accent the 01:19:592 . 01:19:961, if follow drum change to single note for example 01:19:777 (4) - 136,164 01:19:961 (5) - 240, 220 01:20:145 (6) - 140,168 I changed it in my way.
while i modding, i think your map is already update, may be some place i point is already change or fixed. good luck!

Oh, first, sorry for such a late reply, but these two weeks were very important - in school stuff (finals, projects, etc.) But thanks for your mod, and sorry for the red colour! You've been helpful anyway

UchiganeNiigata wrote:
I finally got the GD done
UN's Insane
osu file format v14

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Probably needs a lot of fixing, but at least it's hitsounded

Thanks a lot for your good work! Your GD has been added

Deppyforce

1,961 posts

Joined November 2014

Deppyforce 2015-08-01T04:18:24+00:00

ok dad here's my mod from my queue

Why Only Hard Diff Have Combo Colors O.o
Don't Feel Like Modding Insane. So I mod Easy Instead. Hope It's Ok
Nacchan's Easy
00:01:003 (1,2) - This'll Look Better If It Has Same Shape Or 2 Was The Copy Of 1 Then You Ctrl+h+j+>+< To Adjust
00:15:358 (6,1,2) - Looks Weird imo
00:30:083 (4) - NC
00:37:813 - Start Slider Here.
00:40:758 - ^
01:28:611 - Missing Note
Normal
00:15:727 (1,2,3,4) - Make This Pattern More Curve?
00:30:083 (5) - NC
00:57:690 (2,3) - Looks Weird imo
01:10:206 (4) - Not Recommend To Place There Because 2 Is There. Beginners May Think It's A Stack
01:28:427 (1) - Clap At End?
Pretty Good Diff :3
Hard
00:01:003 (1,1,1) - This Triangle looks ''meh'' to me
00:12:783 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This Looks Random
00:24:562 (1) - Put Its Head Where 4 Or 1 Was
00:56:219 (3,4,5,6) - Make It Symmetrical pls
01:07:814 (5,6) - 3 Sliders?

Hope That Helps :3

Starfall9908

663 posts

Joined November 2013

Starfall9908 2015-08-01T18:14:26+00:00

Deppyforce wrote:
[*]Nacchan's Easy
[*] 00:01:003 (1,2) - This'll Look Better If It Has Same Shape Or 2 Was The Copy Of 1 Then You Ctrl+h+j+>+< To Adjust Fixed
[*]00:15:358 (6,1,2) - Looks Weird imo Fixed the triangle a bit otherwise I see nothing weird...
[*]00:30:083 (4) - NC Fixed
[*]00:37:813 - Start Slider Here. Fixed
[*]00:40:758 - ^ ^
[*]01:28:611 - Missing Note I don't want to have 1/2 spacings in the easy diff. I put the circle in the strongest note of the part

Easy~

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Youthful Dreamer.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 62844
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 3948,12783,18672,24562,30451,36341,62844,88611
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.400006

[Metadata]
Title:Youthful Dreamer (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Youthful Dreamer (TV Size)
Artist:TrySail
ArtistUnicode:TrySail
Creator:Loony
Version:Nacchan's Easy
Source:電波教師
Tags:denpa kyoushi op opening song 鑑 純一郎 かがみ じゅんいちろう Kagami Junichiro tv size nadapan UchiganeNiigata
BeatmapID:708269
BeatmapSetID:309391

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.9
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Denpa Kyoushi.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Loony

226 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

Loony 2015-08-01T21:39:48+00:00

Thanks for your mod, ~~I'll reply to my diffs, and update Nacchan's Easy as soon as I come back home. Expect it max in three days.~~
I've updated the Nacchan's Easy, and here's the reply:

Deppyforce wrote:
ok dad here's my mod from my queue
Why Only Hard Diff Have Combo Colors O.o Will fix that
Normal
00:15:727 (1,2,3,4) - Make This Pattern More Curve? Fixed!
00:30:083 (5) - NC Fixed!
00:57:690 (2,3) - Looks Weird imo Fixed!
01:10:206 (4) - Not Recommend To Place There Because 2 Is There. Beginners May Think It's A Stack Fixed!
01:28:427 (1) - Clap At End? Fixed!
Pretty Good Diff :3 Thanks ;3
Hard
00:01:003 (1,1,1) - This Triangle looks ''meh'' to me Fixed!
00:12:783 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This Looks Random It should look random, but if another modder cricitize it, I will change that.
00:24:562 (1) - Put Its Head Where 4 Or 1 Was Hmm, it's in the center not without the reason. I think it looks better.
00:56:219 (3,4,5,6) - Make It Symmetrical pls Fixed!
01:07:814 (5,6) - 3 Sliders? Fixed!
Hope That Helps :3

Thanks again for your mod, hope so everything what's changed is okay now!

Starfall9908

663 posts

Joined November 2013

Starfall9908 2015-08-03T13:05:43+00:00

As you told me through PM so did I add custom combo colors

I also made a few other changes.

Nacchan's Easy

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Youthful Dreamer.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 62844
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 3948,12783,18672,24562,30451,36341,62844,88611
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.400006

[Metadata]
Title:Youthful Dreamer (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Youthful Dreamer (TV Size)
Artist:TrySail
ArtistUnicode:TrySail
Creator:Loony
Version:Nacchan's Easy
Source:電波教師
Tags:denpa kyoushi op opening song 鑑 純一郎 かがみ じゅんいちろう Kagami Junichiro tv size nadapan UchiganeNiigata
BeatmapID:708269
BeatmapSetID:309391

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.9
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Denpa Kyoushi.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
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3948,-100,4,2,0,55,0,0
12783,-100,4,2,0,70,0,0
18672,-100,4,2,0,75,0,0
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36341,-100,4,2,0,70,0,0
62844,-100,4,1,0,75,0,1
88611,-100,4,2,0,50,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 254,225,129
Combo2 : 255,128,128
Combo3 : 255,0,128
Combo4 : 77,38,81

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Rilene

2,105 posts

Joined April 2014

Rilene 2015-08-06T04:36:25+00:00

From Sirade's Modding Queue

Concerned : (?)
Suggestion : (*)
Recommended : (**)
Highly Recommended : (***)
Problem : (!)
Probably a Problem : (!?)
Unrankable Problem : (!!)

UN's Insane

Well, the map itself is good but there are some problems.

00:12:783 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - (**) Try make some patterns like this smaller, scaling them by 0.8 should be better, including similar patterns too, like this one 00:24:562 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -

00:18:672 (1,2,3,4) - (?) Feels kinda strange in my opinion because of overlaps, try to prevent overlaps even if the object is far from each other (timeline wise)

00:34:316 (3) - (?) Strange overlapping with (1) and (2)

01:03:580 (3,1) - (?) Try to prevent overlapping like this, I suggest you to move 01:03:764 (1) - to X: 264 / Y: 272

01:07:445 (3,4) - (?) Kinda a strange overlapping in my opinion, it is technically rankable but it just feels weird to play with.

01:19:961 (5) - (*) Not a perfect blanket, it didn't blanketed the 01:20:513 (6) - properly.

01:21:065 (2,3) - (?) Another strange overlap?

01:25:114 (1,2) - (?) Same as above.

Also there is a problem with NC too, I might recheck later.

Good luck on getting ranked.

Synpoo

616 posts

Joined August 2013

Synpoo 2015-08-06T11:35:17+00:00

hey, m4m

[Nacchan's Easy]
00:09:837 (1,2) - kinda poor flow here
00:39:285 (1) - aesthetic of this slider can be improved by having the white node more centered like this
00:39:285 (1,2) - DS here is incorrect
00:54:377 (2) - maybe have this curve towards 3 for a bit better better flow, it would also look better to contrast 00:52:536 (3) -
01:04:316 (4,2) - overlapping
01:10:205 (4) - ctrl+J to flow into 5 properly
01:14:623 (1) - why doesn't the 2/1 slider start here? it plays so poorly how it currently is
01:16:095 (3) - ^
01:28:058 (3,4) - this rhythm plays better, or notes instead of the slider

[Normal]
00:06:709 (3) - ctrl+G for flow
00:07:445 - map this please
00:12:783 (1,2) - blanket could be improved
00:20:144 (1,2,3) - kind of nazi but why do you increase DS on these? rather keep it consistent throughout the whole difficulty since it's just a normal. You can decide whether to keep DS 1 across the diff then adjust everything accordingly because some increases don't make sense to me
01:06:893 (2,3,4) - cluttered, space this better
01:07:813 (4,1) - overlapping
01:12:782 (3,1) - DS

[Hard]
00:09:838 (4) - doesn't look so nice, this is a bit nicer with similar style
00:24:194 (4,1) - this overlap doesn't look good
01:13:520 (1,2,3) - this can be improved aesthetically by forming a triangle similar to this
01:15:176 (2,3) - this rhythm plays better as this, a strong vocal on the white tick needs to be clicked, not landed on by a slider end

[UN's Insane]
Disable widescreen support

00:01:003 (1) - this slider can look a lot better. shit example
00:02:476 (1) - ^ but this one looks...a little more bearable. Also make the end clickable since it lands on a strong beat
00:04:316 (1) - doesn't look so good being overlapped by ^^
00:07:169 - missing a note
00:33:580 (1,2,3,4) - give this an actual pattern, it looks really messy right now
00:39:286 (1) - you might be trying to blanket 00:38:734 (1) - but it looks ugly, this slider would look better with 4 nodes just like 00:36:341 (1) -
00:42:230 (1,2,1) - this can all be blanketed better
00:45:175 (1) - bring the tail up something like this, it looks nicer and flows to 2 better
00:51:065 (1) - ^
00:56:770 (3) - plays better as two notes, strong vocal on the white
00:57:691 (2,1) - this jump is a little awkward compared to everything else here
01:06:525 (6,1) - slider should start where 6 is
01:08:181 (5,6,7,8) - can be spaced better: poor example
01:12:967 (7,8,9) - these feel spammy, consider a 1/1 slider here or a triple where 7/8 are
01:13:335 (9,1) - overlap
01:14:255 (3,4) - this honestly looks better as a simple ribbon like you did 00:42:967 (2,1) - ie make 4 straight
01:14:623 (4,1) - very minor overlap
01:16:096 (2,4) - ^
01:19:961 (5,6) - fix this blanket
01:25:114 (1,2) - could have better aesthetics
01:27:691 (1) - i think you're trying to blanket but it just doesn't look good
Overall just clean up the map, make it look nicer because i think it's actually pretty fun to play.

Gl

Starfall9908

663 posts

Joined November 2013

Starfall9908 2015-08-06T21:31:00+00:00

Synpoo wrote:
hey, m4m

[Nacchan's Easy]
00:09:837 (1,2) - kinda poor flow here Fixed
00:39:285 (1) - aesthetic of this slider can be improved by having the white node more centered like this Fixed
00:39:285 (1,2) - DS here is incorrect Fixed
00:54:377 (2) - maybe have this curve towards 3 for a bit better better flow, it would also look better to contrast 00:52:536 (3) - Fixed
01:04:316 (4,2) - overlapping Fixed
01:10:205 (4) - ctrl+J to flow into 5 properly Fixed
01:14:623 (1) - why doesn't the 2/1 slider start here? it plays so poorly how it currently is Fixed
01:16:095 (3) - ^ Fixed
01:28:058 (3,4) - this rhythm plays better, or notes instead of the slider Fixed

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UchiganeNiigata

44 posts

Joined February 2014

UchiganeNiigata 2015-08-07T02:49:47+00:00

Sirade wrote:
From Sirade's Modding Queue

Concerned : (?)
Suggestion : (*)
Recommended : (**)
Highly Recommended : (***)
Problem : (!)
Probably a Problem : (!?)
Unrankable Problem : (!!)

UN's Insane

Well, the map itself is good but there are some problems.

00:12:783 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - (**) Try make some patterns like this smaller, scaling them by 0.8 should be better, including similar patterns too, like this one 00:24:562 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Done, spacing scales from .8 to 1.4

00:18:672 (1,2,3,4) - (?) Feels kinda strange in my opinion because of overlaps, try to prevent overlaps even if the object is far from each other (timeline wise) The overlap is not actually really concerning because it is easily visible (when playing) and easy to read

00:34:316 (3) - (?) Strange overlapping with (1) and (2) Same as above

01:03:580 (3,1) - (?) Try to prevent overlapping like this, I suggest you to move 01:03:764 (1) - to X: 264 / Y: 272Same as above

01:07:445 (3,4) - (?) Kinda a strange overlapping in my opinion, it is technically rankable but it just feels weird to play with.Changed

01:19:961 (5) - (*) Not a perfect blanket, it didn't blanketed the 01:20:513 (6) - properly.Done

01:21:065 (2,3) - (?) Another strange overlap?Changed

01:25:114 (1,2) - (?) Same as above.Changed

Also there is a problem with NC too, I might recheck later. If you mean the 2 note jumps towards the end, that is just to make it so that it's easier to read

Will have the updated version ready after applying the next mod

UchiganeNiigata

44 posts

Joined February 2014

UchiganeNiigata 2015-08-09T05:57:21+00:00

Synpoo wrote:
hey, m4m

[UN's Insane]
Disable widescreen support Done

00:01:003 (1) - this slider can look a lot better. shit example Changed
00:02:476 (1) - ^ but this one looks...a little more bearable. Also make the end clickable since it lands on a strong beatIncreased Volume to 50%
00:04:316 (1) - doesn't look so good being overlapped by ^^Fixed
00:07:169 - missing a noteAdded
00:33:580 (1,2,3,4) - give this an actual pattern, it looks really messy right nowFixed, I think...
00:39:286 (1) - you might be trying to blanket 00:38:734 (1) - but it looks ugly, this slider would look better with 4 nodes just like 00:36:341 (1) - Less ugly
00:42:230 (1,2,1) - this can all be blanketed betterFixed, I think...
00:45:175 (1) - bring the tail up something like this, it looks nicer and flows to 2 better Done
00:51:065 (1) - ^Done
00:56:770 (3) - plays better as two notes, strong vocal on the whiteDone
00:57:691 (2,1) - this jump is a little awkward compared to everything else hereRemapped the section, should be consistent in spacing now
01:06:525 (6,1) - slider should start where 6 isDone
01:08:181 (5,6,7,8) - can be spaced better: poor exampleShould be a bit better now
01:12:967 (7,8,9) - these feel spammy, consider a 1/1 slider here or a triple where 7/8 areI feel like it should be ok, might fix it later
01:13:335 (9,1) - overlap I think it was fixed from the last mod
01:14:255 (3,4) - this honestly looks better as a simple ribbon like you did 00:42:967 (2,1) - ie make 4 straightLess ugly slider
01:14:623 (4,1) - very minor overlapFixed
01:16:096 (2,4) - ^Fixed
01:19:961 (5,6) - fix this blanketDone
01:25:114 (1,2) - could have better aestheticsLooks a bit more interesting now
01:27:691 (1) - i think you're trying to blanket but it just doesn't look goodLess ugly slider
Overall just clean up the map, make it look nicer because i think it's actually pretty fun to play.

Gl

UN's Insane

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Lumael

1,520 posts

Joined December 2014

Lumael 2015-08-09T16:37:50+00:00

Hello!

My GD~ 49% done

Lumael's Insane

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Lumael

1,520 posts

Joined December 2014

Lumael 2015-08-10T01:43:31+00:00

Hello!~

Normal
00:01:004 (1,1) - I wouldn't stack these because the rhythm is strong just at the first note, the second has lower pitch, so I'd remove combo colour from it and and move it a bit far
00:07:261 - Well I'd map this part because it's when the song get stronger and it's not like a break indicator as some songs. Also you didn't do that at Hard
00:12:783 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved
00:17:200 (4,5) - This change to vocal is a bit weird since you were following drums since the song started
00:20:144 (1,2,3) - ^ but here it fits both so there's no problem
00:28:979 - to 00:30:083 - spinner?
00:48:856 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved
01:05:789 (1,2) - ^
01:06:893 (2,4) - I'd fix this overlap, it's not so good
01:07:813 (4,1) - ^
01:11:678 (1) - I'd curve it a bit less, this shape is a bit awkward

Hard
00:02:476 (1) - Remove combo colour
00:11:494 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - This is TOO hard LOL
00:23:642 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ omg
00:23:089 (5) - you're losing beats with this 1/1 slider
00:28:244 (2,3) - continue using 1/1's because the increase of speed here doesn't match the song, nor the jump
01:20:330 (5,2) - I'd fix this overlap
01:28:060 (2,3,4) - Fix this square shape
01:28:611 (1) - I'd stack on 01:28:060 (2) - because this anti-jump is not fitting

Overall they're good diffs that can get some polishing through some mods. UN's Insane will need a bit more mods though
That's it for my m4m part!

Loony

226 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

Loony 2015-08-20T18:39:38+00:00

Thx for mods everybody! ~~I will reply to my diffs and update GDs as soon as I come back home from a journay.~~
Sorry for such a long break ;-; I'm back, but not gonna reply to all of these mods for now cause I'm a bit busy

Anyway I fixed most of the problems and uploaded a Lumael's GD.

Kyle Y

1,204 posts

Joined November 2013

Kyle Y 2016-02-25T15:00:26+00:00

Sorry for late, Just see how you improve in this 9 months time.

N's Easy
00:07:260 (1,3) - suggested to use same slider, seems better looking, optional to fix.
00:09:837 (1,2) - blanket? about looking again, optional
00:11:494 - sound start at here, I think better use a slider starting at here, just like:

00:46:647 (2,3) - this two slider too close to each other, about looking again. seperate a little bit more?
00:59:898 (1) - will this spinner a little bit short in Easy? imo, it is, becasue only 4 beats. anyway, not unrankable.
01:02:844 - 01:04:316 - similar rhythm, I think it is better to use a 1/1 reverse slider at 01:02:844 - better, seems suit the song more.
01:05:788 (1,2) - use same slider? I think it will better looking, optional to fix.
01:13:886 (4) - this part I think better use circle, this 2 beat are more stronger.
01:16:095 (3,2) - not a good overlapping
01:18:303 (2,3,4) - I don't like linear flowing in Easy diff, it is relatively hard for me. but anyway, it is Easy and 1/1 spaced, maybe still okay.

Normal
00:02:476 (1) - in Normal, I will suggest 8 beats one nc, which mean no need a nc here, also 00:05:421 (1) - etc.
00:30:083 (1) - del nc
00:36:709 - vocal sound end at here, suggested to shorten the slider to here.
00:40:942 - sound end at here, suggested to use 3/2 slider here, better feeling for the song
00:43:703 - slider end is not suitable for big tick if there is strong sound, some map are dq-ed becasue of this.

00:45:175 - suggested to use note-before-spinner pattern here, add a circle here and start spinning at 00:45:267 - . It can emphasis the sound 00:45:175 -
00:48:488 - you missed this sound becasue of recovery time of the spinner, then why you use a spinner instead of a slider? continue playing at 00:48:856 - seems weird for me as it is not strong beat.
00:49:777 - here is a stong sound, suggested to use clickable item here.
01:04:132 - 01:05:605 - 01:15:911 (4,4) - I know there is a sound here, if you want to simplify the rhythm here, deleting these 2 seems reasonable in term of feeling. since you have a hard rhythm afterward, suggest to give them some sweet before bitter.
01:08:734 - 01:28:059 - skipped strong sound

Hard
00:14:255 (5) - nc, Hard diff better keep 4 beats one nc.
00:22:721 (4,2) - This overlapping not good in looking
00:26:586 - sound seems start at here, try this?

00:38:366 (8,1) - a little bit misleading spacing. you know what I mean
00:45:175 - circle and start spinner at 00:45:267 - ? it is a common pattern in fact, and it can emphasise 00:45:175 - strong sound
00:50:146 (7,1) - poor overlapping, maybe you can blanket this two slider
00:53:457 (1) - 00:50:514 (1) - meaningless nc, remove it, it is not SV change, nothing to emphasise.
00:56:955 (1,2,3,1,2) - I like this pattern, fit the song.
01:01:648 - usually when I map 3/4 beat, I will use a 3/4 reverse slider instead, it is easier to play.
01:12:968 (7) - not quite nature, 01:12:968 (7,3) - this 2 quite close not quite good in looking, maybe you can curve more slider (7)
01:26:403 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern is not good flowing in fact, you can make it a little curve and it seems better, another problem is that slider is too closed each other, not quite good in looking
01:27:876 (1,2,3,4,1) - this part you can space out the distance spacing, it is the ending part, and quite srong sound, then make a little jump is still okay.

I think I better stop here..... and leave other diff to another modding(x)

If you have any problem on this modding, please feel free to find me in game/ throuhg forum.
Thanks. hope this modding can help you

UchiganeNiigata

44 posts

Joined February 2014

UchiganeNiigata 2016-03-01T01:06:13+00:00

Might actually redo my entire diff cuz I realized how bad my mapping was back then lol

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Mau-nyan wrote:

Term Akatski wrote:

Kyle Y wrote:

koyomiya wrote:

UchiganeNiigata wrote:

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