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ByBy's Easy
00:00:029 (1) - pretty picky, but I found it kinda of irritating not to have this bump follow the sound on the white tick ;w;
00:12:685 (2,3) - sloppy blanket
00:16:904 (3) - perhaps try making this curve a little less jagged?
00:18:779 (1,2,3) - why not form a triangle between these? I think it overall plays nicer than having 1 and 3 on the same x-axis + I feel it overall looks a little neater since it's more 'spread out' in a way
00:24:404 (2,3,1) - hmm I just kinda feel this is a little weird as both sliders are rather curved, but the transition between them requires the player to move in a straight line. I think this is a tiny bit odd..might just be me though uwu
00:45:029 (1) - pointed out something similar, but you could move the red anchor to match the 'meow' in the song, and then perhaps make the curve a little less subtle, I think an actually curve would look neater than this current one
00:56:279 (1,2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3190440 try placing them like this? looks a little neater
01:00:029 (1,2,3) - blablablankets
Lanturns's Normal
00:07:060 (4,1) - hmm flow here feels a liitle bit..odd? like the motient required to move from 4->1 and then properly follow the slider feels a little uncomfortable...not a big issue I guess
00:22:529 (1) - this is one fancy ass moew
00:43:154 (1) - would something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3190472 work for you? I feel like this slightly improves the flow, + it's a copy from 00:42:216 (3) - so I feel like this overall suits the style of the map more, with all the symmetry/copying and whatnot
00:47:841 (3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3190482 ^similar idea
01:01:435 (2) - feels like moving this down a little would do a better job of catching the previous sliders movement, though I guess you'd want this one to be in the middle of the map :c
Pjecoo's Hard
00:03:544 (4,1) - isn't 2.27 a little overdone? other similar patterns have a spacing of 1.4-16
00:11:982 (3,4) - hmm these feel a tiny bit weird because the 'moew' lands on the tail of these, eventhough it feels like that's what should be emphasized
00:16:435 (6) - perhaps try to avoid having the head and the tail overlap like this?
00:16:435 (6,3) - overlap :c rather messy
00:23:466 (3,4) - blankets looks rather messy
00:51:591 (4,5,6) - feels like placing 6 below 5 don't continue the up and down thing would've felt a little nicer.. oh wells
01:03:544 (6,3) - why not try to re-arrange the previous slider a little to stack these? would require very little re-arranging while looking a lot neater
apple's Hard+
00:25:341 (3) - veeerry veeery minor but this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3190530 looks a little neater (it's a copy of 4)
00:40:341 (1) - NC here really neccessary?
00:48:075 (4,1) - could perhaps curve the slider a tiny bit more for a better blanket and to slightly improve the flow (a more distinct curve makes the transition into the next slider a little easier I think)
I N S A N E
00:16:669 (8,4,6,7) - 4 isn't exactly in the middle of these two, which I assume is what you were going for? idk this is pretty nazi
00:26:747 (2,3) - aren't these a little close? perhaps do 1.22 like you did with similar patterns
00:45:497 (2,1) - why not have these symmetric too?
MeooOOooOOHooOohoHohoww
00:16:669 (2,1) - aren't these a little close?
00:18:310 (1,2) - hmm I guess this is really subjective, but perhaps tone this down a notch, like 2.6 perhaps?
00:20:654 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - curve of the streeam looks really uneven :c not sure if that is due to the spacing gradually increasing, it just kind of looks odd to me
00:30:029 (1,2,3) - personally not really a fan of these, especially when to sliders are kinda slow, this feels a bit awkward
00:33:779 (1,2) - a bit wierd to skip the blue tick here and then mapping it on the next occasion 00:34:716 (4,5,6) - here
00:42:568 (1) - o god the custom sample haha ~
00:50:185 (1) - I feel like moving this to the left and down a little would've improved the flow of this jump a little, mhmm it feels a tiny bit forced right now...like upwards motion feels a tiny bit forced
moew~
00:00:029 (1) - pretty picky, but I found it kinda of irritating not to have this bump follow the sound on the white tick ;w;
00:12:685 (2,3) - sloppy blanket
00:16:904 (3) - perhaps try making this curve a little less jagged?
00:18:779 (1,2,3) - why not form a triangle between these? I think it overall plays nicer than having 1 and 3 on the same x-axis + I feel it overall looks a little neater since it's more 'spread out' in a way
00:24:404 (2,3,1) - hmm I just kinda feel this is a little weird as both sliders are rather curved, but the transition between them requires the player to move in a straight line. I think this is a tiny bit odd..might just be me though uwu
00:45:029 (1) - pointed out something similar, but you could move the red anchor to match the 'meow' in the song, and then perhaps make the curve a little less subtle, I think an actually curve would look neater than this current one
00:56:279 (1,2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3190440 try placing them like this? looks a little neater
01:00:029 (1,2,3) - blablablankets
Lanturns's Normal
00:07:060 (4,1) - hmm flow here feels a liitle bit..odd? like the motient required to move from 4->1 and then properly follow the slider feels a little uncomfortable...not a big issue I guess
00:22:529 (1) - this is one fancy ass moew
00:43:154 (1) - would something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3190472 work for you? I feel like this slightly improves the flow, + it's a copy from 00:42:216 (3) - so I feel like this overall suits the style of the map more, with all the symmetry/copying and whatnot
00:47:841 (3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3190482 ^similar idea
01:01:435 (2) - feels like moving this down a little would do a better job of catching the previous sliders movement, though I guess you'd want this one to be in the middle of the map :c
Pjecoo's Hard
00:03:544 (4,1) - isn't 2.27 a little overdone? other similar patterns have a spacing of 1.4-16
00:11:982 (3,4) - hmm these feel a tiny bit weird because the 'moew' lands on the tail of these, eventhough it feels like that's what should be emphasized
00:16:435 (6) - perhaps try to avoid having the head and the tail overlap like this?
00:16:435 (6,3) - overlap :c rather messy
00:23:466 (3,4) - blankets looks rather messy
00:51:591 (4,5,6) - feels like placing 6 below 5 don't continue the up and down thing would've felt a little nicer.. oh wells
01:03:544 (6,3) - why not try to re-arrange the previous slider a little to stack these? would require very little re-arranging while looking a lot neater
apple's Hard+
00:25:341 (3) - veeerry veeery minor but this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3190530 looks a little neater (it's a copy of 4)
00:40:341 (1) - NC here really neccessary?
00:48:075 (4,1) - could perhaps curve the slider a tiny bit more for a better blanket and to slightly improve the flow (a more distinct curve makes the transition into the next slider a little easier I think)
I N S A N E
00:16:669 (8,4,6,7) - 4 isn't exactly in the middle of these two, which I assume is what you were going for? idk this is pretty nazi
00:26:747 (2,3) - aren't these a little close? perhaps do 1.22 like you did with similar patterns
00:45:497 (2,1) - why not have these symmetric too?
MeooOOooOOHooOohoHohoww
00:16:669 (2,1) - aren't these a little close?
00:18:310 (1,2) - hmm I guess this is really subjective, but perhaps tone this down a notch, like 2.6 perhaps?
00:20:654 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - curve of the streeam looks really uneven :c not sure if that is due to the spacing gradually increasing, it just kind of looks odd to me
00:30:029 (1,2,3) - personally not really a fan of these, especially when to sliders are kinda slow, this feels a bit awkward
00:33:779 (1,2) - a bit wierd to skip the blue tick here and then mapping it on the next occasion 00:34:716 (4,5,6) - here
00:42:568 (1) - o god the custom sample haha ~
00:50:185 (1) - I feel like moving this to the left and down a little would've improved the flow of this jump a little, mhmm it feels a tiny bit forced right now...like upwards motion feels a tiny bit forced
moew~
go go sis o/