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M4M ^^

00:28:195 (4) - Move to x:192 y:228 for a better flow.
00:37:909 (1) - Stack on 00:38:480 (2) 's head instead?
00:48:766 (5) - Stack on 00:48:909 (6) 's head for better knowledge of beat change, or whatever it's called.
00:59:909 (1) - Curve it more less like:
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01:13:338 (1,2) - Do like this?:
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01:25:909 (3,4) - Please blanket it better.
01:51:052 (3,4,5,6) - Make the stacking start here 01:51:338 (4) - like:
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02:09:338 (2) - Move to x:124 y:16 and move 02:09:623 (3) - to x:200 y:144, it's better imo.
03:21:623 (1,2,3,4) - The DS is too little here, move 03:22:480 (2,3,4) - to x:188 y:12 or something.
03:38:480 (3,4,5,6,7) - Same as 01:51:052 (3,4,5,6) -
04:19:338 (1,2) - Same as 01:13:338 (1,2) -
04:46:195 (1,2) - Blanket better like:
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04:58:195 (6) - stack on the slider head instead?
05:10:766 (3,4,5,6,7) - Do like this for better reading?:
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05:12:052 (1) - This slider should end here 05:14:766 -
05:27:052 (2) - Move to x:312 y:252, for better flow imo.
05:27:909 (4) - Stack on 05:28:195 (5) 's head.
05:29:623 (4) - It should be 1/8 like:
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40mp - Kimi no te, Boku no te