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Halozy - Koi no Serenade [OsuMania]

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17VA
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015년 5월 15일 금요일 at 오전 12:13:11

Artist: Halozy
Title: Koi no Serenade
Source: 東方Project
Tags: Nitori Kawashiro Touhou Tonic Triangle ZUN Mountain of Faith The Gensokyo the Gods Loved Sumijun c81 Hotaru
BPM: 128
Filesize: 5793kb
Play Time: 02:16
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard - 7Key (2.76 stars, 1178 notes)
  2. Insane - 7Key (3.77 stars, 1518 notes)
  3. Normal - 7Key (1.92 stars, 743 notes)
Download: Halozy - Koi no Serenade
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Song info :

Halozy - 恋のセレナーデ

Album : Tonic Triangle

Arranged by Sumijun, Vocal by ほたる ('s Last Album in Halozy)



kinou mita yume no hanashi saigo made kikasete yo

yorokobi mo kanashimi sae mo negai ni komete

tsukiakari ukanda moshi kimi to mou ichido deaeru nara

hoshi ni negai wo sotto sasayakeba

ame mo namida mo yuki e to kawari maiagaru

tsunaida te wo hanasazu ni kuchizuke wo kawashimashou

kotoba yori atsuku tsutawaru koi no serenade

kinou mita yume no hanashi saigo made kikasete yo

yorokobi mo kanashimi sae mo negai ni komete

“sekai de kimi ga ichiban daisuki”

shiroi iki wa sora e kieteyuku


-- source




mp3 edit by me

HS 100%

NM - 100%
HD - 100%
IN - 100%

Timing re-checked by charles445
SeonRae
안녕하세요 17VA님 처음으로 모딩해보는데 잘 한건지 모르겠네요

Normal
01:00:293 (60293|3,60644|5,60996|2,61230|6,61582|1,61933|4) -
01:07:793 (67793|6,68144|1,68496|4,68730|0,69082|5,69433|2) -
이 부분은 노트를 조금 더 추가해도 괜찮을 것 같아요
드럼의 Kick이나 Snare...?

01:16:699 - 노트를 한 개 정도는 추가해도 괜찮을 것 같아요
01:16:933 - ^

Hard
00:00:761 (761|5,761|6,761|4) - ~ 00:26:074 (26074|6,26074|5,26074|4) -
01:48:574 (108574|6,108574|4,108574|5) - ~ 02:16:699 (136699|4,136699|6,136699|5) -
굳이 노트가 3개씩 있을 필요는 없을 거 같아요

00:29:355 (29355|1,29589|4,29707|2,29824|0,30058|0) -
Insane난이도와 패턴이 같네요 조금 더 쉽게 바꿔보는게 어떨까요?

00:30:644 (30644|5,30996|4) - 6라인에 있는 롱노트의 끝부분을 5라인 롱노트의 첫부분에 맞춰주세요
00:31:230 (31230|4,31699|6) - 이것도 위와 비슷하게
00:33:339 (33339|4,33574|5,33808|6) - ^
00:37:793 (37793|6,38144|5,38496|4) - ^
00:38:730 (38730|0,39082|1,39433|2) - ^

01:00:293 (60293|6,60293|0,60644|5,60644|1,60996|2,60996|4,61230|0,61230|6,61582|4,61582|2,61933|1,61933|5) -
01:07:793 (67793|6,67793|0,68144|5,68144|1,68496|4,68496|2,68730|6,68730|0,69082|4,69082|2,69433|1,69433|5) -
이 부분은 노트를 조금 더 추가해도 괜찮을 것 같아요
드럼의 Kick이나 Snare...?

01:11:894 (71894|1) - 1라인으로 이동하고 처음과 끝 부분을 딱 맞춰주세요
01:12:832 (72832|5) - 7라인으로 이동하고 처음과 끝 부분을 딱 맞춰주세요

01:20:449 (80449|0,80683|0) -
01:20:449 (80449|6,80683|6) -
01:24:199 (84199|2,84433|2) -
01:24:199 (84199|4,84433|4) -
이 패턴은 Hard난이도 치고는 조금 어렵지 않을까요?

01:29:824 (89824|4) - 숏노트로 하는게 좋을 것 같아요

01:35:449 (95449|0,95449|6,95683|2,95683|3,95683|4) -
이 패턴도 Hard난이도 치고는 조금 어려율 것 같네요

01:39:433 (99433|1,99433|3) -
롱노트와는 다른 라인으로 옮기는게 좋을 것 같아요

01:41:074 (101074|4) - 반으로 줄이세요

01:44:707 (104707|4) - 6라인으로 옮기고 두 배 늘리는게 어떨까요?

01:47:636 - 여기엔 왜 노트가 없죠?

01:47:168 (107168|6,107519|5,107871|4,108105|0,108457|1,108808|2) -
01:50:214 (110214|0,110449|1,110683|2) -
01:54:668 (114668|6,115019|5,115371|4,115605|0,115957|1,116308|2) -
Hard난이도 치고는 조금 어렵지 않을까요?

Insane
00:00:761 (761|4,761|6,761|5) - ~ 00:13:886 (13886|6,13886|5,13886|4) -
01:47:636 (107636|0,107636|2,107636|1) - ~ 02:16:699 (136699|6,136699|5,136699|4) -
굳이 노트가 3개씩 있을 필요는 없을 거 같아요

01:26:543 (86543|6,86543|4,86543|0,86543|2,86777|6,86777|4,86894|4,86894|6,87011|3,87011|4,87011|6,87246|0,87246|2,87363|2,87363|0,87480|3,87480|0,87480|2) -
3연타 + 롱놋은 조금 어렵지 않나 생각합니다

수고하세여
-[ AmiShici ]-
Hii there o/

M4M from your queue here

4K = |1|2|3|4|


Normal
01:07:207 - Add note here for consistency, look 01:07:207 - and 01:06:152 (66152|6,66269|4,66386|2) -
01:28:769 - same as before
Hard
00:46:347 (46347|5) - ghost? what the following with this note?
00:48:222 (48222|3) - ^
00:51:972 (51972|5) - ^
00:53:847 (53847|5) - ^
01:26:543 (86543|1,87011|3,87480|5) - ctrl + H (for Pitch Relevancy from high to low)
01:49:277 - add note?
01:49:980 - ^
01:54:902 - ^
Insane
00:42:480 - add note for consistency
01:22:324 - add note
01:28:886 (88886|5,88886|0,88886|4,88886|6) - why are you use four note? i think triple is enough
01:29:355 - add note?
01:30:761 - ^
01:38:261 - ^
02:02:168 - ^ for cymbal

Good Luck 17VA ^^)b
Remillion Cross
nice

good luck
Topic Starter
17VA
Thanks for your help XD
Candiize
[NM]
00:23:730 add more
00:25:605 add?
00:37:793 (37793|0,38027|2,38261|6,38496|4,38730|1,38964|5) - how about follow the flute
00:57:246 (57246|4) - move to 3
01:38:847 (98847|5) - remove, almost no sound http://i.imgur.com/N3I3TrU.jpg?1
01:38:964 (98964|6,99082|4,118418|0,118769|3,119121|6,119355|1,119707|3,120058|5) - LN or follow the drum
02:03:105 remove one
02:06:855 ^
[HD]
00:09:433 (9433|5) - how about move to 7 bcs it looks empty
00:23:496 (23496|2) - move to right hand?
00:25:371 (25371|2) - ^
00:34:277 (34277|2) - move to 2
00:44:355 prefer this http://i.imgur.com/VTa2sum.jpg?1
01:00:293 add a note in 4
01:05:683 (65683|3) - move to 6
01:15:761 (75761|2,75761|4) - how about 2 and 6
01:16:230 how about this one http://i.imgur.com/I3XXhV6.jpg?1 or http://i.imgur.com/yXnDAge.jpg?1
01:23:730 try this http://i.imgur.com/E02Ndp1.jpg?1
01:31:464 (91464|5) - move to 01:31:582 ?
01:34:746 (94746|6,94746|3) - move to 3 and 6
01:34:980 how about this http://i.imgur.com/noxDBIG.jpg?1
01:35:918 4 notes? too heavy (remap 01:35:918~01:36:855) or move 01:35:918 (95918|3) - to 3
01:42:246 (102246|4) - move to 4 and add 01:42:363 in 5?
01:42:949 and 01:43:183 add in 4 or 01:43:300 add in 6
01:44:355 (104355|3,104707|4) - end in 01:44:941 so change
01:47:168 add more
01:49:980 add
01:58:418~02:00:293 same as NM make some LN
02:00:644 (120644|1) - dont follow the bell(? move to 02:00:527
02:10:371 (130371|2,130839|2,131308|2) - move one to 4 bcs looks empty
[MX]
00:05:918 http://i.imgur.com/mFfeiLY.jpg?1
00:15:058 add LN in 4 end in 00:15:293 - ?
00:18:808 add more?
01:00:175 add more in 3 and 5 ?
01:13:886 add in 7
01:15:761 (75761|2,75761|4) - same as HD
01:23:496 (83496|0) - move to 2
01:31:582 add note in 4
01:37:324 add in 6
01:44:355 (104355|3,104707|4) - same as HD
01:47:168 add

nice map good luck :D
Topic Starter
17VA
Applied almost things. helped a lot!
Arzenvald
here goes nothing
[General]
> timing preview is not snapped, you can either move it to 01:16:230 - or 01:16:464 -
> Untick Widescreen Support in all diffs
Normal : HP 7 // OD 7
Hard : HP 8 // OD 8
Insane : HP 9 // OD 8
File Folder // Sample
> Hihat.wav has length under 100ms, unrankable, some other samples has mini delay too.. here's your sample fix http://puu.sh/hCnXN.rar
> some hitsound might be missing, please double check

[Normal]
00:16:699 (16699|0) - missing clap
00:44:824 (44824|2,45058|2) - nope, turn this into note, and move to 3 & 7
00:48:105 (48105|0) - missing kick
00:55:605 (55605|6) - ^
01:16:699 (76699|3) - move to 5 and add something in 01:16:582 - at 3rd column

01:19:043 (79043|2) - make this LN, and these 01:19:277 (79277|0,79394|3,79511|6,80214|5,80332|3,80449|1) - 1/4, into different hand.. considering this is the easiest diff in this mapset, tricky LN is not really recommended
01:20:918 (80918|3,81152|6,81269|4,81386|2) - like this too
01:34:043 (94043|2,94277|0,94394|3,94511|6,95214|5,95332|3,95449|1,95918|3,96152|6,96269|4,96386|2) - ^
01:36:855 (96855|0,97558|6) - ctrl + h, repeat from previous ln
01:42:714 (102714|0,102832|2,102949|4) - ey 3 5 7

00:45:293 (45293|3) - add cymbol 30%
01:00:293 (60293|6) - add note, then add cymbol 30%
01:17:168 (77168|0) - add cymbol


[Hard]
00:20:449 (20449|2,20683|0) - move to 4 2, then 00:20:918 (20918|3) - move to 1 ?
00:30:293 (30293|6,30644|5,30996|4,31230|4,31582|6,31933|5,32168|3) - you could make this little different ( and easier ) than the Insane diff, just a suggestion, your pick
00:37:793 (37793|6,38144|5,38496|4,38730|0,39082|1,39433|2) - ^ http://puu.sh/hCoxM.png
00:45:293 (45293|3) - add cymbol, 30% would be ok
01:00:293 (60293|3) - ^
01:13:418 (73418|3) - to 5
01:17:168 (77168|6) - add cymbol

01:47:168 (107168|6,107519|5,107871|4,108105|0,108457|1,108808|2) - i guess you could un-noodle this, to make it different with insane
01:54:668 (114668|6,115019|5,115371|4,115605|0,115957|1,116308|2) - ^

[Insane]
00:45:293 (45293|2) - add cymbol
01:00:293 (60293|3) - ^
01:17:168 (77168|6) - add cymbol

need above 12 SP to consider this map for ranking..

good luck
tangjinxi
yooo,17VA ╰( ̄▽ ̄)╮
column set
1 2 3 4 5 6 7
Insane
00:13:652 (13652|3,13652|5) - move to 2 and 4 column
00:13:886 (13886|1) - move to 3 column
00:14:121 (14121|2) - move to 4 column (i think better xD
nice pattern, actually i dare not change too much your pattern xD so i have only 3 mod ,sorry :?
Harbyter
yo random mod




[General]

http://puu.sh/hCqIR/32e9a8e623.zip

there were some unrankable hitsound and some delayed too

here the hitsound fixed ,just replace you're current hitsounds with those


------------------

uncheck widescreen support

AYYY didn't see usagi post xd


re-EDIT > http://puu.sh/hCqIR/32e9a8e623.zip

orz here all the fixed hitsounds

[normal]

01:58:418 (118418|0,118769|3,119121|6,119355|1,119707|3,120058|5) - suggest to turn in LN since you used those notes for the flaute

[hard]

01:37:089 (97089|3,97089|4,97207|5,97324|2) - this pattern bothered me here ,how about




that's all xd
Topic Starter
17VA
All Fixed. Thanks xD
Arzenvald
last check, no kud kud

[Insane]
01:00:644 (60644|4,60996|6) - add hi-hat?
01:00:761 (60761|3) - add soft whistle?
01:01:582 (61582|6,61933|4) - hi-hat
01:01:699 (61699|3) - whistle
and so on until 01:09:082 (69082|2,69199|3,69433|0) -
01:16:582 (76582|2,76699|3) - add tom hit 2?

[Normal]
00:44:824 (44824|2,45058|4) - oopsie, no 1/4 ln in normal pls.. .-.
00:37:558 (37558|1,37558|5) - no need to repeat, different pr
00:48:105 - press tab, then remove orange bass.wav@70% (in sample)
01:00:644 (60644|3,60996|1,61582|2,61933|4) - add hi-hat
01:08:144 (68144|1,68496|3,69082|4,69433|2) - ^
01:16:582 (76582|2,76699|4) - add tom hit 2?

[Hard]
01:16:582 (76582|4,76699|3) - add tom hit 2?
01:00:644 (60644|5,60996|4) - add hi-hat
01:01:582 (61582|4,61933|5) - ^
and so on until 01:08:144 (68144|1,68496|2) - 01:09:082 (69082|2,69433|1) -

http://puu.sh/hDomH.rar
i still aware with some hitsound file, so i re-check it, and it's fine now..

go go go
Topic Starter
17VA
applied
Arzenvald
yusss... ready to go...
i love this song somehow.. the mapset too, the hitsound, and the chart itself.. glad to see another good mapset in osu!mania <3

here goes nothing..

Ayachi-
o.o
Harbyter
IRC
16:04 *Harbyter is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/690817 Halozy - Koi no Serenade [Insane]]
16:04 Harbyter: 01:26:543 -
16:04 Harbyter: this pattern here bothered me
16:05 17VA: hmm.. it's okay for me when I play
16:05 Harbyter: mmm
16:05 Harbyter: oky
16:06 17VA: avoid monotonous on playing insane diff lol
16:06 Harbyter: xd
16:08 Harbyter: 02:00:644 (120644|1) -
16:08 Harbyter: suggest to remove this note
16:09 Harbyter: at the end you only folloed the flaute and the other synth in 1/2
16:09 Harbyter: followed°
16:11 17VA: hmm
16:12 17VA: ok
16:12 17VA: I'll delete this
16:13 17VA: go update?
16:14 17VA: also delete hard diff's one
16:17 Harbyter: ok
16:17 Harbyter: wait
16:17 Harbyter: let me recheck the normal
16:17 17VA: ok
16:25 Harbyter: ok
16:25 Harbyter: you can update
16:25 17VA: ok


metadata ok
hitsound rechecked and is oky
pattern ok
timing ok

waiting for the reset of the qualify songs :)


let me left a star before u.u
SpectorDG
all diff's 7K ? made 4K ?
Harbyter
ok , last recheck on metadata and seems correct


Qualified~



Ayachi-
wow
[ A v a l o n ]
Oh OK
Gratz . . .

WTF! 4 Days ago xD
PANDAAAAAAAA
Gratz
Frim4503
omg
i still didn't believe it
just 4 days O.0
Kamikaze

SpectorDG wrote:

all diff's 7K ? made 4K ?
get out, this isn't stepmania
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