[HD]
00:07:126 - Your rhythm is good, because of the drum stream, but isn't these one 00:07:299 (7299|1,7385|2,7471|3,7557|2) - suppose to form a stair?
oops.. re-constructed the stair00:10:575 (10575|1,10575|0) - Shouldn't be in the same column as 00:10:230 (10230|0,10230|1) - . And alsom suggest one note there instead of 2.
I didn't understand it at first but meh..00:13:333 - 1 note is enough for the drum.
applied00:15:920 (15920|1) - Please end your LN with the sound your mapping like on normal, end it here 00:18:678 - .
ok00:18:161 (18161|3,18333|0) - Should be clap instead of whistle, whistle feel way too soft for this drum xD.
changed00:19:971 (19971|2) - Add whistle for the bass.
ok00:21:437 - Try adding a claps here, there is not only a cymbal here x3.
only added one clap at 200:24:195 (24195|0,24195|2) - These 2 finish SOOOO LOUD! my ears x.x. look at what you did here 00:21:437 -, 1 finisher is really enough x.x
how did that became 2 finish 00:25:488 (25488|1) - Add whistle for the bass.
ok00:25:920 (25920|1,25920|0) - Keep it consistent, delete this 00:25:920 (25920|1) - , you always put one note for this sound.
my bad.. applied00:26:954 (26954|3,26954|1) - Same reason as 00:24:195 (24195|0,24195|2) -
placed at 400:29:023 (29023|1,29109|2) - You could totally hitsound these so is differnt from note before, since this one is actually map for drum, really sugggest to keep it consistent, to put those 2 whistle, and here 00:29:195 - and here 00:29:368 - should be claps
ok00:29:713 - One of your hitsound should be a finish no?
2 claps...00:32:299 (32299|1,32299|3) - One claps is really enough, is starting to be really loud.
ok00:33:506 (33506|2,33506|1) - Keep it consistent, should be one note like your other bass, there isn't piano here.
ok00:35:230 (35230|0,35230|2) - same reason as 00:24:195 (24195|0,24195|2) -
with clap right?00:36:264 (36264|2,36264|0) - same reason as 00:33:506 (33506|2,33506|1) -
also added a clap here00:36:954 (36954|3) - remove whistle hitsound, since is mostly use when there there is bass, and there is none right here.
ok00:37:988 (37988|3,37988|2) - same reason as 00:24:195 (24195|0,24195|2) -
changed 4 into clap00:39:368 - A bit inconsistent on the difficulty spread, you have to tapable note in NM but only 1 in HD.
so add a note?00:39:368 (39368|0) - Shouldn't your LN end to 00:39:885 - like in NM, for the piano sound?
ok00:40:259 (40259|3,40374|2) - Not sure how you find these snap, but it should be consistent and 1/6 like this :
http://puu.sh/kVsF5.jpg I did try it in 1/6 but reverted it but ok, i'll change it... btw it's just 1/3...00:49:368 (49368|0) - What is this map for? @.@
...deleted00:50:402 (50402|1) - Should be whistle
changed00:50:747 (50747|3) - Should be clap
changed00:50:920 (50920|2) - Should have no hitsound xD
deleted00:51:092 (51092|1) - Add whistle here for the bass.
added00:52:644 (52644|2,52816|2) - Hey you jack this for the drum like you did before, but where is the whistle hitsound?
ditzy mind.. anyways, added01:04:713 - Where claps hitsound go x3?
ok01:10:057 (70057|1) - Add whistle for the bass.
ok01:14:368 - to 01:16:092 - What happen here, there is suddendly no hitsound at all.
added01:22:040 (82040|3,82126|0,82213|1) - Really like your consistent stair drum, but the thing is, if you try to follow the song, these notes 01:22:040 (82040|3,82126|0,82213|1) - should be doing a stair.
made a stair into the diff. direction of the others01:26:839 (86839|1) - Why different timing then normal? Should still be 1/4, is probably because your offset is a bit wrong thats why you listen it differently when you map these 2 diff.
moved to 1/1 white tick01:26:264 (86264|3) - End your LN here 01:29:195 - for the stanza or here 01:29:540 - for the sound to fully end.
did the "fully end" suggestion...