m1223961117 wrote:

久等了，我欠船大的 謝啦

[General]

1. Insane有一個Slider沒對齊，Ai看到的 Fixed

[Insane]

1. 哇哇，好早期的老歌喔，我記得沒錯的話，早期的歌用Finish會用很兇
   00:07:651 - 00:08:341 - 00:10:410 - 00:11:100 - 00:13:168 - 00:13:858 - 00:15:927 (3,3) - 在激昂的的地方都加上Finish吧，用太多的話挑幾個比較不違和的地方去用 OK，聽起來都還好沒違和，都加了
   00:10:755 - 去掉whistle，節奏聽起來這多餘了 Removed
   00:17:306 - Finish比照附歌感覺超棒 Added
   00:29:375 - Finish Added
   00:54:203 (4) - 我覺得NC在這裡耶，不是00:54:893 (1) - ，還是只是因為對稱的關係 不明白這一條的意思，於是我取消了這裡的NC
   01:03:168 - 01:08:341 - 01:09:031 - Finish All added
   01:11:444 (1) - 去掉NC 這邊沒NC 呢? 會不會是看錯
   01:17:996 - 01:20:237 - 01:27:336 - finish All added
   01:29:413 - ^, 看船大要不要加 也加了
2. Finish應該可以比照全難度辦理，看船大 如果一個難度額外加了finish，我會有一起加的習慣，所以不會漏掉

[Extra]

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  00:54:203 (4,1) - 同Insane Added
  01:02:824 (4,5) - Ctrl+G Changed

1. 音效參照Insane吧，我不太會摸Extra.... 沒關係

[Hard]

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  00:01:100 (1) - 感覺這違背船大的對稱，把這個弄成和00:02:134 (4) - 一樣斜 好
  00:29:375 (1,2) - 作折返Slider吧00:29:720 (2) - 別讓這個跳感覺比較好一些 看起來沒什麼問題耶，2.00x的跳在hard還好可
  00:32:134 (1) - 跳得好無理...比照DS比較好 Fixed
  00:33:168 (4) - Ctrl+G Fixed
  00:50:237 (6) - 擺這樣??感覺好很多: http://puu.sh/hExEP/bda031e57d.jpg Fixed
  00:53:168 (1,2,3,4) - 為什麼我覺得這樣擺感覺比較好?? http://puu.sh/hExIk/640597a111.jpg 而且很合歌曲本身 雖然這可行，但不太喜歡有一點overlap
  00:57:651 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 這段完全沒加Clap 哦忘了加了，我想想要怎處理這兒

1. 音效比照Insane辦理

[Normal]

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  00:31:444 (1) - 有必要NC嗎?? 這個不用，這裡是跟後面那第一個vocal然後做NC
  00:57:651 (1) - 作折返Slider?? 這也不用，感覺會玩的更難
  01:27:336 (1) - Finish All added

[Easy]

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  01:27:336 (1) - Finidh All added

1. 好漂亮的Easy :D

Thanks m1223961117 mod~!

外加星星奉上 Thx

Crystal wrote:

[General]
除了easy都没有enable custom combo color Fixed

[Extra]
00:01:100 (1,2,3,4) - 考虑到这里节奏很舒缓 考虑一下这样的排列? 有點道理，但有把23縮短了一下間距，比較沒那麼大跳

SPOILER

00:18:341 (1) - 考虑到这图是对称流 这个滑条建议弄左右对称 OK也可行
00:52:651 (1) - 216|172? 有些层次感 恩先試試

[Insane]
00:16:100 - 00:16:789 - 这里感觉没什么理由空拍 可以考虑把前面的circle改成1/2 slider到这 Fix some
00:26:444 (1) - 也是建议对称 恩能行
01:06:617 (4) - NC? Added
01:21:789 (1,3) - 这样子看不清啊 建议把3放在192|124 會嗎? 那就移動一點了

[Hard]
00:07:306 (1,2,3,4) - 不建议hard比IX的节奏复杂(IX都是1/2,这里是3/4) 感觉这里用3/4感觉节奏有点空? 應該不會，從N開始看，是用了1/1，然後hard用了3/4，有漸變節奏，節奏再放的細一點就會成了快1/2，所以沒事我猜


00:23:858 (3,4,5,6) - 会不会看不懂节奏啊 考虑一下这样? 恩可行

SPOILER

01:06:617 (4) - NC 好

[Normal]
00:18:858 (4,1) - 改成一个slider? 这里节奏感觉有些密 沒關係 可以不用
01:16:962 (3) - 这样是不是好看一点 好

SPOILER

Easy没什么问题 :D

Thanks Crystal mod~!

liangv587 wrote:

[General]
重拍错位了，00:01:789 - 这里加个红线，或者红线提前2拍。注意下1ms bug
第一个bpm174到后面明显快了，所以是173.94，你忘改还是对小数点有点害怕？不是害怕是忘記加這條了，看來要大改一下..orz

[Extra]
00:06:617 (1) - 放到331,80加个跳？ 這個考慮一下
00:22:134 (5,8,2) - 这3个clap听起来好奇怪，声音突然变大了。其他难度这里也是 有小聲了，加了一個綠線45%
00:37:996 (2) - 这对称关联得也太远了 的確蠻遠的，還以為沒人發現，fixed
00:48:686 (1,4) - 这样对称呢，感觉会好看点http://puu.sh/hH78F.jpg，或者把12做成一样，34做成一样 這pattern看得還可以，但有把4變成curve形
00:52:134 (4) - ctrl+g flow会不会顺一些，00:52:479 (5,1) - http://puu.sh/hH7gi.jpg 感覺現在的比較好
01:02:824 (4,5) - crtl+gflow会顺些 考慮下

[Hard]
00:01:962 (3,4) - 改成滑条加圈好些吧，00:02:306 - 重音在这里 好，fixed
00:24:375 (4,5,6) - 这个间距太难了吧，45叠一下 有照上面mod改了一點這兒

低难度简直找不出问题了 很好

Thanks liangv587 mod~!

Kagamine Ren wrote:

General

1. 我觉得可以在TAG里加上 四驱兄弟 这是这个动画名字在大陆的翻译。OK加了

Easy

1. 00:26:962 - 后面break感觉挺奇怪的.=.= 是跟著人聲結束的，所以應該是沒什麼問題
2. 00:43:513 (2) - 这个往下吧，00:42:479 (3,1) - 这两个后面的趋势是往下的，平滑一点 OK

Normal

1. 没啥 好

Hard

1. Hard用OD7感觉有点高，况且Normal是OD4，用6好点 好吧用6
2. 01:27:699 (2) - 建议拆成1个圈+一个1/2滑条，01:27:870 - 这个音用滑条跟比较好，因为后面的3个滑条都是跟这个音的 這個建議用在Insane了
3. 00:23:858 (3,4,5,6) - 这个似乎有点难读的感觉，不如把00:24:375 (4,5) - 换成滑条 依照一些樓上的mod改了一下，應該不會難讀了
4. 00:31:444 (4,5) - 建议换滑条，跟00:28:686 (4) - 一致 這邊想跟鼓點

Insane

1. 00:34:031 (3) - 建议ctrl+g，00:33:686 (2,3) - 这两个隔的有点远，还是往下来的，感觉太别手 改了
2. 01:06:962 (6) - 这里不是对称吗，这个位置看起来太违和了，建议跟01:06:789 (5) - 对称 說得有理，fixed
3. 01:21:789 (1,3) - 建议错开一点，完全重叠没有错开好玩而且也会被挑刺的吧，遮挡太大 OK移動了一點
4. 01:23:686 (3,5) - nazi一下啦，叠一下拉 哦哦~好吧就完全Stack了

Extra

1. 00:34:042 (3) - ctrl+g？个人很不喜欢00:33:697 (2,3) - 这样的梗 有改了一點
2. 别的没了~ 好~

Autumn wrote:

10min fast mod

[Extra]
00:06:964 (3) - Finish聽起來更合適一點~之後再放clap！insane也一樣 OK都改了
00:52:152 (4,1) - 擺成水平更好看一點~ 恩雖然說得有理，但這樣就好
01:07:502 (5,6) - 這裡聽vocal有兩個呐喊聲，加個finish試試？ 加了後面那個Vocal
01:15:953 (4) - 可以加Finish~ 4個個finish會有點太吵，這個就考慮一下

[Insane]
00:21:106 - 這個綠線好像差了6毫秒？等等！所有綠線好像都差了幾毫秒... 都改了
00:33:524 (1) - X=256 Y=384放下面試試？擺個跳 ok可行
01:10:779 - 01:12:503 - 這段finish可以加上 只加了一個在01:11:124 (2) - 這裡
01:15:953 (4) - 可以加Finish~ 同Extra
01:28:041 (3) - 這個whistle聽起來有點唐突..不如去掉 說的也堆，去了

[Hard]
00:51:117 (1) - blank 好吧，用圓弧
00:51:117 (1) - 00:51:117 (1) - 這段finish可以加上，同Insane 這段蠻平穩的所以不加finish
01:28:041 - 這個whistle聽起來有點唐突..同Insane 好

[Normal]
01:15:953 (6) - 可以加Finish~ 同Extra

easy is ok for me! Okay
GL!

Thanks Autumn mod~!

M o k o r i wrote:

as your request (∩・▽・∩) (∩・▽・∩)

General

1. about metadata, Source: 爆走兄弟レッツ＆ゴー!! is wrong. please change it to "爆走兄弟レッツ＆ゴー!!WGP". Changed
2. maybe offset is wrong. for example in easy diff, 00:07:309 (1) - 00:32:145 (1) - are not landing on the big white line despite they're start of the vocal. so put the first red line at 00:00:410 - helps you i guess. The timing discuss with lfj and adjust a bit, thank your check :3
3. and you also have to remove 2nd and 3rd red lines after apply above suggestion. i think it doesn't have BPM change. Maybe keep, he says have the BPM change he think

suggestions i put bellow are before adjust offset ones

Easy

1. 00:17:657 (1) - following the rhythm, remove NC and add it to 00:18:347 (2) - Added and removed
2. 00:19:037 (1) - after apply above one, remove NC Added and removed
3. 00:21:106 (1) - add finish on head? Feel have a bit noisy , not add this XD
4. 00:21:796 (2) - add finish on reverse? Same above
5. 00:23:176 (1) - remove NC and add it to 00:23:866 (2) - Added
6. 00:39:044 (4,1) - make them parallel properly makes good to see them Okay,move a bit
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:56:981 (3) - add finish on head All added

Normal

1. 00:25:418 (5) - ctrl+j and put after stuffs like this makes better flow from 00:24:901 (4) - i think. Fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:23:369 (6) - how about move reverse like this? Okay, move a bit
   
   SPOILER

   

Hard

1. 00:08:688 (1) - remove NC? to make consistency with 00:10:068 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - , 00:12:828 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Fixed
2. 00:22:831 (7) - a bit far from 00:22:659 (6) - , please make them more closer. Okay, keep consistent distance here
3. 01:05:260 (3) - how about add NC for start of kiai? Added
   
   it was really fun to play!! Thanks

Insane

1. 00:19:382 (2) - a little close with 00:19:554 (3) - , so how about move down to around 256/184? Agree, fixed
   some parts have non consistent NC pattern, but flow is good for me. Okay, will care of it these NC (Maybe will adjust a bit here)

Extra

1. 00:48:702 (1) - how about copy 00:49:392 (3) - and make repeat at 00:48:702 (1,2,3,4) - ? Okay, copy and fix here
   great symmetry art.

if you need to check NC pattern, please call me after fix offset. Okay if I have free time time will ask you NC pattern adjust, and timing has been solve by jonathanlfj.
good luck!!

Thanks M o k o r i mod~!

Julie: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/690413 Kageyama Hironobu - GET THE WORLD [Normal]]
smallboat: you can say first
Julie: 00:04:376 (8) - delete? Give more impact on this 00:04:548 (1) - 
Julie: like you did here 00:28:694 (8,1) - 
smallboat: ok okay del
smallboat: then keep space
Julie: yep, still same spacing~
Julie: 01:25:963 -  unuse green stick I guess~ can delete~
smallboat: ok
Julie: d0 you put finish hitsound when it has a cymbal on the song?
smallboat: ok del
smallboat: ?
smallboat: some not fit to me so i didn't put
Julie: cymbal sound = your finish sound xD
smallboat: didn't these
Julie: ohh thats why~
smallboat: too a lot finish will make noise to me
Julie: yes, ring ears a lots ><
smallboat: ok keep
Julie: keep?  XD
smallboat: seems didn't more finish
smallboat: lol
Julie: ohh nah was just asking question xD
smallboat: okok
Julie: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/690410 Kageyama Hironobu - GET THE WORLD [GET THE FLY]]
Julie: ~~
smallboat: anything else?
Julie: 01:20:609 (8,9) -  don't really flow well ><
Julie: could make something more fit the song if you ask me
Julie: cuz right now, is like playing it straight line
Julie: while clicking this 01:20:609 (8) -  have to continue straight line then trun 180 degree
Julie: turn*
smallboat: yes that turn so big
smallboat: well
smallboat: ok let me replace here
smallboat: just one only?
Julie: 01:19:401 (2,3) - suddendly spacing 1.00x 
Julie: feel a bit random 
Julie: 01:19:574 (3,4) -  these 2 have an instrument same sound
Julie: 01:19:401 (2,3) -  same spacing as 01:19:574 (3,4) - ?
smallboat: o.o ok keep same DS
01:25:616 (2) -  lower y -1 *^*, more perfect symetrie for 01:25:443 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -  wwww
Julie: oki~
smallboat: ok fix
Julie: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/690411 Kageyama Hironobu - GET THE WORLD [Hard]]
Julie: 00:07:308 (1,3) -  keep this rhythm same as insane and get the fly, dont 1/4 end here?
smallboat: o,o
Julie: insane and get the fly you end them at red stick~
Julie: just consistency
smallboat: well okay fix it
Julie: map so funny and cute LOL
smallboat: o.o
smallboat: I laugh
Julie: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/690412 Kageyama Hironobu - GET THE WORLD [Insane]]
Julie: <01:03:706 (8) -  NC, like you did on GET THE FLY
smallboat: ok
Julie: 00:19:553 (3) -  NC here like in GET THE FLY
Julie: 00:19:036 (1) -  dont NC
smallboat: ok fix