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Olivia - a little pain

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Estelle18
219 posts
Joined March 2009
Estelle18
แปะดาว

เริ่มแรก ก็ดีละ แต่ตรงท่อนฮุคอยากให้มันมีไรหน่อย เร่งให้เร็วขึ้นหน่อยนึงก็ได้ ก็เพิ่มโน็ตเลย ยัดๆไป slider มันแบบเดียวทั้งเพลงเลยอ่ะ จะยืดให้ยาว หรือให้มันงอๆไรหน่อยก็ได้ จะได้ดูมี มิติ

ตรงโซโล่ ก็ลองใส่โน็ตเพิ่มให้มัน เยอะๆ คล้ายๆรัวหน่อยๆก็ได้

รูปแบบโน็ตมันเหมือนกันทั้งเพลง เล่นไปนานๆอาจเบื่อได้ อยากให้ลองไปดู แมพอื่นๆ แล้วเอารูปแบบส่วนนึงมาแปะก็ได้ๆ อยากให้ดูแมพอื่นเยอะๆ ก่อน
Mizu_banned
Mizu_banned
Nice map :3
Star~
XepherX3
625 posts
Joined September 2008
XepherX3
i love this song

really awesome..u have some really great mapping skills

found 0 problems

Star ~
RaP13iT
1 post
Joined September 2009
RaP13iT
nice map
star ~ 8-)
banvi
1,793 posts
Joined June 2009
banvi
Hello :D
Easy
I suggest Circle Size -1
01:03:967 (1) start 01:04:346? (such as Normal)
04:31:688 (4) new combo?
04:43:840 (4) ^
Normal
I suggest HP Drain -1 or no change , Circle Size -1 , Overal Diff -1
03:19:536 (2,3) spacing is close
04:01:309 (5) new combo?
Hard
01:33:967 (3,4) spacing is close

WIP , but nicemap at this time.
~star
Mikkuri
823 posts
Joined April 2010
Mikkuri
04:13:460 ตัด spin ทิ้ง ใส่โน้ตแทน

04:22:574 - 04:33:967 ทำเป็นเบรคไปได้เลย

ขอเมลตูนหน่อยนะ จะได้คุยสะดวกหน่อย
Backstep
1,007 posts
Joined September 2009
Backstep
Sound Mod :P

[General]
เสียง Soft ช่วงที่มีคนร้องช่วงต้น นี่เหลือสัก 5 ขีดพอครับ(ช่วงหลังkiaiนิดหน่อยด้วยครับ) แต่พอช่วง 00:49:916 เพิ่มมาเป็น 7 ขีดครับ ช่วง kiai เพิ่มเป็น 10 ขีด หลังคำร้องว่า "shizuite" (ช่วงที่มีกีตาร์ใช้ 7 ขีดพอครับ)

[Easy]
ช่วงเวลาเหล่านี้ใส่ whistle ครับ
00:25:612,00:28:650,00:31:688,00:34:726,00:37:764,00:40:802,00:43:840,00:46:878,01:29:410,01:32:448,04:16:498,04:19:536

[Normal]
เหมือน Easy ครับ (ช่วงไหนที่ใส่เสียงไม่ได้ข้ามไปเลย)

[Hard]
ใส่ whistle เช่นเดียวกันกับ Easy แต่เพิ่มเติมนิดหน่อย (ช่วงไหนที่ใส่เสียงไม่ได้ข้ามไปเลย)
00:06:625,00:09:663,00:12:701,00:15:739,00:18:777,00:21:815
Zetsubou Sensei
295 posts
Joined December 2009
Zetsubou Sensei
Hey.

Remove the Countdown, and use a lead-in...The Countdown doesn't really suit the opening for this song.

[Easy]
00:24:853 (1) - i think you should start this slider at 00:24:473 and end it at 00:25:612
02:24:853 (1) - extend this spinner to end at 02:28:650
04:20:296 (1) - extend this spinner to end at 04:22:574

[Normal]
HP Drain Rate: -1
Circle Size: -1
Overall Difficulty: -1
Seems fine...Maybe include another break.

[Hard]
Finish it off, then I'll mod it.

Overall...Its a decent map. Keep trying!

Contact me again once finishing hard!

GOOD LUCK!
indyinyou
887 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
indyinyou
thx for mod : D
Curisu
2,241 posts
Joined January 2010
Curisu
My god this song is so long :?

[EZ]
OA-1
00:59:790 (1) - move to 00:59:220 and extend 3/4 beat
02:24:853 (1) - ^
01:52:954 (4) - New combo
02:56:752 - soft whistle
02:59:790 - ^
03:49:346 - break time

[NM]
circle size+1
03:41:182 (4) - extend to 03:41:941
Great map~ :)
wmfchris
osu! Alumni
5,072 posts
Joined March 2008
wmfchris
[hard]
0:36:625 (1) spacing too large?

~generally hitsound too loud.

That's all I can find~ good luck in finishing the song :D
star
Caroline7
7 posts
Joined June 2009
Caroline7
Beautiful song and beautiful map :) :D
Vass_Bass
943 posts
Joined October 2009
Vass_Bass
Hi~

Easy
00:52:954 (1) - make it simmetrical
01:14:220 (4) - ^
01:31:688 (4) - new combo
02:43:840 (3) - simmetrical
02:56:752 (4) - new combo

Normal
good

Hard
00:06:245 (4,5) - 1 grid up
01:38:524 (1) - eeh.. spacing?
02:12:131 - break time?
02:20:486 (6) - move it to the end of the slider
...
...
where is the end of hard? о_О :shock:

strange..but have a star..
roflninja
348 posts
Joined October 2009
roflninja
Hi,
have someone check your timing? it seems a bit off to me. might just be me though @_@

[easy]
fine~
turn hp drain down by 1?

[normal]
also fine!

[hard]
seems a bit easy for a hard imo
maybe OD +1?

nice map. looking forward to seeing this ranked
lovhin456
1,965 posts
Joined December 2008
lovhin456
Hi!
General;
- Nice song, very long I must say
- Delete osb and full-sub
- Change the combo burst or don't use one at all
- The color of the notes ... well it doesn't quite fit the ones in the BG so change them

Easy;
- 04:55:992 >> silence this spinner
- Open AIMod and check the spacing with it but is not really a must

Normal;
- Your normal is shown as easy, may want to fix that ~
- 01:15:739 >> one more repeat
- 02:10:802 >> end at 02:11:562
- 02:46:878 >> one more repeat
- 04:03:207 >> 2 repeats
- Silence the last spinner just like easy

Hard;
- Not finished eh ?? Good luck finishing it :3 !!

* Star ~
indyinyou
887 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
indyinyou
thx for all mod this map

thx :D
Shiro
Global Moderator
4,984 posts
Joined May 2009
Shiro
Major issues in the map: it is highly recommended to fix them.
Minor issue in the map: you don't have to follow them exactly, but I recommend you to.
Suggestions: those are personal opinions, feel free to follow them or not.
Comments.
If there's one red line in the whole mod post, I won't star the map.

General:
Empty .osb file. Delete it, then full submit.

Easy:
01:14:220 (1) - Add a clap on this slider's tick.
Above 4 minutes training time goes for approval afaik.

Normal:
03:24:853 (1) - You can make this slider more symmetrical.
Above 4 minutes draining time goes for approval afaik.

Hard:
01:20:296 (7) - New combo.
I guess you'll add hitsounds when you've finished mapping it ?

Well, no star as it's a WIP.
loser101_old
128 posts
Joined April 2010
loser101_old
ok why does hard have less circles then normal not good

Easy
Great

Normal
GREAT

Hard
GRRRRREAT

They all follow a beat
Tatsuo
575 posts
Joined January 2009
Tatsuo
This is going for approval?
If not, the mp3 is really long at 5 minutes.
Not much to note or say, except to finish up your [Hard].
*star*
vincerio
687 posts
Joined April 2009
vincerio

I_Tatsuo_I wrote:

This is going for approval?
If not, the mp3 is really long at 5 minutes.
Not much to note or say, except to finish up your [Hard].
*star*
less than 5 minutes is fine... ><
IceBeam
osu! Alumni
1,957 posts
Joined December 2009
IceBeam
[Easy]
Fine.

[Normal]
03:33:967 (1,2) - Why have you missed claps in these 2 slider endings?

[Hard]
Combos are too long.You can more New Comboes.
01:08:144 (5) - New combo.
01:13:840 (6) - ^
01:20:296 (7) - ^
01:53:714 (3) - Strange.You need to place it further,and keep same Distance during one combo.
Distance between 01:53:714 (3) and 01:54:093 (4) is 3-4x then between 01:52:954 (2) and 01:53:714 (3).
As I see,it's counting lately,so I have no idea about it.
02:11:941 (12) - New combo.
02:24:093 (8) - ^

Oh Gosh,it's a WIP?

Well,that's bad,you know.Ask for modding only for fully-complete maps next time.
Mikkuri
823 posts
Joined April 2010
Mikkuri
double BPM to 158 is good for Hard diff :D

don't forget, change Slider Velocity to all diff

good map 8-)
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