Nozhomi wrote:

Hi~ just saw this on #modreqs so just a quick look because I'm hungry.

- Estellia-'s Normal :

1. 00:10:192 (1,2) - Use same shape for both, will look better. Aren't they in a same shape ><
2. 00:31:369 (3,4) - I would avoid this kind of overlaps in a Normal, because first looks not nice at all, and make it harder to read for a newbie.
3. 01:08:251 (5,6) - Inconsistant spacing (0.89x instead of 1.00x).
4. 01:09:486 - you should think again at your rhythm here, because it make you miss a strong beat here, who make this inconsistent with the rest of your diff (From here until 01:15:133 - ).
5. 01:13:545 (3,4) - Overlap makes this hard to read and make bad flow with 01:15:133 (1) - .
6. 02:00:751 (1) - 5% at the end and soft hitsound. I cut down spinner, so should be fine.

Was quick. You need to work harder on your pattern, because often they look pretty random imo, and can lead to a bad flow.
But I'm sure you can do it.
Mukyu~

cmn_891127 wrote:

Hi XiMerx.
M4M from your queue.

[General]
Colors: How about pink, light purple, yellow Thanks~

[Colours]
Combo1 : 248,248,177
Combo2 : 201,201,228
Combo3 : 241,184,213

[Estellia-'s Normal]
00:50:251 (2,1) - imo, the spinner is started at 00:51:839
01:28:898 (5,1) - bad flow Looks okay tbh

SPOILER

02:00:751 (1) - end at 02:03:133?
From RC - Guidelines https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_criteria

Your difficulties should all end at the same spot. Having a fully-mapped Normal/Hard and a half-mapped Easy just looks sloppy/lazy. A full Easy may look boring to you, but not to a player that can't handle the harder difficulties.

[Hard]
00:53:251 (6,5) - mutiple reverse slider is not recommanded, you can separate them into two parts
00:57:310 (2,3) - hitsound: calp should at (3), not (2)
02:00:663 (5) - NC
01:22:192 (5,6,7) - the sound of (7) is different. so combine (7,1) to a reverse slider Intend to follow vocal afterwards

SPOILER

[Insane]
AR9 is a little high for me, since the main rhythm of your mapset are under 1/2, imo AR8 is better Remapped the jumps, AR9 is better now
00:20:060 (3,4,5,6) - Square?
[img][img]https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3142407[/img][/img]
00:49:355 (7,8) - bad flow Remapped this part

SPOILER

01:34:884 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - they are not friendly to read, add more NC? Remapped this part as well...for the NC,it doesn't really matter that much to me

Cute song~

Neil Watts wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue owo/ Hello Neil Watts

[General]
- Not sure if 1280x720 is allowed as background resolution. Please talk with a BN, but I think the two allowed resolutions are 1366x768 and 1080x768. I'll talk to a BN
- The soundmapping is almost inexistent in all the diffs. There is absolutely no hitsounds in the Normal diff and some random, too loud and inconsistent hitsounds in the Hard diff. Some efforts has been made in the Insane diff, but it's still very inconsistent and sounds ugly.
Hitsounding is very important in a beatmap, don't ever overlook it. If you don't make some efforts on hitsounding, you won't be able to rank your map.
Follow hitsounding tutorials (how to make a consistent hitsounding, how to adjust the volume, how to add custom hitsounds) and make a nice hitsounding on your Insane diff. After having checked everything, you may use an hitsound copier (software) to copy the hitsounding on your low diffs, in case you're lazy. But at any rate, you have to hitsound your beatmap, or it won't get ranked. I can hitsound but I don't know what samples to use. Would be gr8 if you provide me with some gr8 samples

[Normal]
- 00:37:002 (4,5) - Improve your flow here, try to curve (4)
- 01:06:649 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern may be difficult for beginners, you should avoid to stack and especially use 1/2 with this bpm. Your star rating is already high, try to make it lesser by making this pattern more simple.
- 01:19:355 (3,4) - It looks not great, try to avoid stacking sliders
- 02:00:649 (1,1) - This is a Normal diff. Add some distance between these two elements.
- 01:12:119 (1,2) - big distance mistake here, please keep the same distances during the whole song.
- 01:15:649 (2,3) - same here. There may be more occurrences.

Nice mapping. It just lacks of hitsounds.

All fixed. Thanks

[Hard]
- 00:53:237 (6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2) - no, no, this is too much for a Hard diff. So what should I change? And what about this https://osu.ppy.sh/b/693954
- 01:05:590 (5,1,2) - there are distances inconsistencies here. It may be a jump, but if it's the case, it's misplaced.

[Insane]
- 00:17:590 (1,2,1,2) - You should add more distance between these two combos.
- 00:32:943 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ugly pattern, I advice you to change it Give me some suggestions...
- 00:53:413 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is unplayable and makes an inconsistent difficulty peak on the diff. Make it easier. No this isn't unplayable
- 01:10:884 (4,5,6,1) - distances inconsistencies here. You can try to make jumps.
- 01:36:296 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - too much circles in this part, change this to sliders or make a better pattern, because this looks bad imo Isn't other parts the same
- 01:39:649 (1,2) - Did you tried to blanket it ? oO" - this looks bad, change it No
- 01:40:531 (1,2) - distances inconsistencies here too

You have still some job to do, good luck!

Del05 wrote:

Hi
From \o\ Recaro! Mania & Std Modding Team /o/
Will do it part by part. Status DONE.

Mod

[Estellia-'s Normal]

1. I think it is better if the diff name is "Estellia's Normal" (without "-") Talked with Est, he prefer with the -.
2. Please fix this Fixed c: It was due to my laziness of not changing the offset of all difficulties.
   

[Hard]

1. 00:07:369 (1) - Make better blanket ?
   
2. 00:15:839 (5) - How about like this ?
   
3. 00:33:663 (3) - Blanket ?
4. 00:38:427 (1) - You can improve this blanket, make it more neat
5. 00:46:545 (6) - Fix blanket01:07:369
6. 01:07:369 (3) - Blanket ? Using the same shape with 01:07:707 (4) - as the word they sing is kinda the same
7. 01:52:192 (1) - Move to x:383;y:153 I'm keeping DS
8. 01:28:192 (4) - How about this ? -- Cppy 01:28:545 (5) and ctrl+h 01:28:884 (6) - Kinda weird to make this odd one out.
   
9. 01:28:898 (6) - How about this ? -- Cppy 01:28:545 (5) and ctrl+h Hmm... continuation. But I like (5) being a curve that leads both sliders
   

[Insane]

1. 00:25:355 (8) - Move to x:335;y:239 Wait... how did you even get odd number coordinates? But anyways, it's quite close (I went to 336 240) and its about the same as previous isn't it?
2. 00:27:119 (1) - You can improve this blanket, make it more neat
3. 00:37:002 (1) -Stack with 00:36:472 (8) ?? It's being blanketed with 00:37:531 (4) -
4. 00:50:237 (3) - How about this ?
   
5. 01:22:178 (1) - What about stack with 01:21:472 (5) end ? It's fine
6. 01:23:590 (7) - I think better to move x:276;y:172
7. 01:58:531 (6) - How about like this ? -- just ctrl +j and stack it again
   
8. 01:59:938 (6) - ^^
   

That's all from me. Sorry if it cant be help so much

XiMerx wrote:

Neil Watts wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue owo/ Hello Neil Watts

[General]

*...*

- The soundmapping is almost inexistent in all the diffs. There is absolutely no hitsounds in the Normal diff and some random, too loud and inconsistent hitsounds in the Hard diff. Some efforts has been made in the Insane diff, but it's still very inconsistent and sounds ugly.
Hitsounding is very important in a beatmap, don't ever overlook it. If you don't make some efforts on hitsounding, you won't be able to rank your map.
Follow hitsounding tutorials (how to make a consistent hitsounding, how to adjust the volume, how to add custom hitsounds) and make a nice hitsounding on your Insane diff. After having checked everything, you may use an hitsound copier (software) to copy the hitsounding on your low diffs, in case you're lazy. But at any rate, you have to hitsound your beatmap, or it won't get ranked. I can hitsound but I don't know what samples to use. Would be gr8 if you provide me with some gr8 samples

There are great custom hitsounds on LKs' userpage. The default hitsounds may also sound nice on your map.
*...*

- 00:32:943 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ugly pattern, I advice you to change it Give me some suggestions...

Since it's an Insane diff, you have a lot of choices, you can use for example a variant of some already used patterns (00:24:649 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - , 00:21:649 (1,2,3,4) - , 00:28:707 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ,...), anything you can to make it more original.

*...*

distances inconsistencies - fact
little effort on hitsounds - fact

ugly pattern - opinion
and tell me why is it a ugly pattern and suggest a way to improve. that is what i call MODDING

of course, this is only my personal opinion. Since it's a mod and everything I write on it is my own opinion, I just don't felt like adding "in my opinion" on every item I point out, because it should be obvious. Same for hitsounding and distances inconsistencies, this is only my viewpoint, you may have another viewpoint as mine and don't see it as a "fact". Sorry if you felt offended!

Neil Watts wrote:

of course, this is only my personal opinion. Since it's a mod and everything I write on it is my own opinion, I just don't felt like adding "in my opinion" on every item I point out, because it should be obvious. Same for hitsounding and distances inconsistencies, this is only my viewpoint, you may have another viewpoint as mine and don't see it as a "fact". Sorry if you felt offended!

LGV894 wrote:

M4M! Mod this map. Don't mod Gray Veyron's map for now, I haven't updated it yet.


Normal

Normal

- I didn't notice any major 'major' problems in this diff.

Hard

Open

- 00:32:590 (7,1,2) - I really don't like how this pattern flows, it feels awkward.
- 01:11:590 (4,1) - This is too near from each other!
- 01:59:943 (4,1) - ^
- I enjoyed this map, there are just some patterns I didn't really like, but I think you should keep them anyways.

Insane

Open

- 00:09:825 (8,1) - Either half overlap this or don't overlap at all. 1/8 or less overlaps are not pleasing to everyone's eyes.
- 00:20:060 (3,4,5,6) - Square, please.
- 00:21:649 (1,2,3,4) - ^ This is perfectly squared, but rotated.
- 00:22:178 (4,1) - These are too close to each other.
- 00:29:943 (1,2) - Won't hurt if you place them further from each other, would it?
- 00:43:707 (9,10) - Eh, this flow doesn't really work well... Try to Ctrl+J slider (9).
- 01:09:296 (6,1) - They're too close to each other.
- 01:38:060 (3,4,5,6) - Pull flow isn't really great for this part, it doesn't fit quite well with the previous and next patterns. Maybe 01:38:237 (4,5) - Rotate 45 degrees. 01:38:237 (4,5,6) - Triangle. Then place (7) wherever you want.
- 01:39:649 (1,2) - What the hell is this? Proper blanket, please, or at least don't do this small blanket.

AsakuraNe wrote:

Heeeeey~ Is this considered a hitsound mod or something? lewl
I finished hitsounding the insane diff. Kindly check it first to see if you like it or not before I can hitsound the other diffs.~

( ^______________^ )

Just PM me in forum or Chat me ingame~
*If you don't like it, just tell me and I will think of new hitsound patterns :3
*If you like it, tell it to me too so I can finish the other diff ASAP

AsakuraNe wrote:

:P FINISHED THE HITSOUNDING IN 1 HOUR \o/ OMG. My hands are tired

Estellia's Normal

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164,156,62943,2,0,L|136:292,1,130
137,283,63472,1,8,0:0:0:0:
220,280,63649,5,0,0:0:0:0:
176,352,63825,2,0,P|256:356|300:300,1,130,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,368,64355,2,0,L|376:208,1,130
240,140,65060,2,0,B|168:144|168:144|148:128|100:144,1,130
112,140,65590,1,8,0:0:0:0:
56,204,65766,5,8,0:0:0:0:
132,244,65943,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,252,66119,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,220,66296,2,0,L|372:216,2,65,8|8|12,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,304,66825,6,0,P|296:360|308:384,1,65,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,328,67178,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,356,67355,2,0,L|452:284,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,216,67707,2,0,L|399:152,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,132,68060,1,8,0:0:0:0:
424,68,68237,6,0,P|368:68|316:124,1,130
268,188,68766,2,0,L|240:256,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,312,69119,2,0,L|152:232,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,260,69472,1,8,0:0:0:0:
24,100,69825,6,0,P|92:108|116:108,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,180,70178,2,0,P|200:188|272:144,1,130,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,312,70884,2,0,L|356:164,1,130,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,240,71590,2,0,P|156:248|112:280,1,65,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,332,72119,6,0,L|80:172,1,130
96,120,72649,2,0,P|52:124|12:152,2,65,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,188,73178,5,0,0:0:0:0:
196,116,73355,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,108,73531,2,0,L|340:136,1,65,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,216,73884,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,300,74060,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,372,74237,2,0,L|448:364,2,65,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,364,74766,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,304,74943,5,8,0:0:0:0:
224,304,75031,1,8,0:0:0:0:
223,304,75119,2,0,P|191:306|159:307,1,65,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,372,75472,1,8,0:0:0:0:
104,372,75649,2,0,P|76:304|108:240,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,200,76178,1,8,0:0:0:0:
156,84,76531,6,0,L|228:56,2,65,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,164,77060,2,0,L|320:108,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,32,77590,1,8,0:0:0:0:
400,48,77766,5,8,0:0:0:0:
400,48,77855,1,8,0:0:0:0:
400,48,77943,2,0,L|412:124,1,65,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,176,78296,1,8,0:0:0:0:
436,252,78472,2,0,P|376:240|300:272,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,262,79002,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,316,79355,6,0,L|152:240,2,65,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,280,79884,2,0,P|240:208|296:172,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
282,175,80413,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,92,80590,5,8,0:0:0:0:
292,92,80678,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,92,80766,2,0,L|428:92,1,130,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,260,81472,2,0,P|312:272|260:316,1,130,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,164,82178,1,8,0:0:0:0:
168,164,82355,1,8,0:0:0:0:
168,164,82531,1,8,0:0:0:0:
92,316,82884,6,0,P|144:288|220:292,1,130,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,260,83413,2,0,L|296:172,1,65,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,83678,12,0,86060,0:0:0:0:
344,136,86413,6,0,P|292:148|220:104,1,130,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,144,86943,2,0,B|144:212|144:212|160:296,1,130
304,352,87649,2,0,P|408:340|448:328,1,130
428,248,88178,2,0,L|424:176,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,176,88531,2,0,P|336:128|344:104,1,65,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,100,88884,2,0,L|416:12,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,28,89237,6,0,P|280:52|256:128,1,130,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,184,89766,2,0,L|340:188,1,130
424,324,90472,2,0,B|352:332|352:332|280:316,1,130
212,312,91002,2,0,L|140:308|140:308,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,240,91355,2,0,L|168:228,1,65,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,168,91707,2,0,L|152:156,1,65,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,156,91972,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,152,92060,6,0,P|84:144|64:128,1,65,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,68,92413,2,0,L|204:72,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,108,92766,2,0,L|344:116,1,65,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,180,93119,2,0,L|448:192,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,272,93472,2,2,P|444:332|432:360,1,65
364,300,93825,2,0,P|320:296|284:312,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,236,94178,2,0,P|188:240|140:176,1,130,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,52,94884,5,12,0:0:0:0:
328,112,95060,2,8,L|408:112,2,65
268,52,95590,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,132,95766,2,8,P|240:180|228:220,2,65
104,232,96472,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,312,96649,1,8,0:0:0:0:
148,364,96825,2,8,P|192:360|236:368,1,65
280,312,97178,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,312,97355,2,8,L|356:308,2,65
436,244,98060,5,8,0:0:0:0:
484,172,98237,1,8,0:0:0:0:
404,144,98413,2,8,P|360:140|308:76,1,130
144,120,99119,2,8,B|140:192|140:192|164:264,1,130
100,308,99649,2,8,P|152:292|224:332,1,130
300,348,100178,2,8,L|304:228,1,97.5
344,236,100531,6,0,P|408:228|456:176,1,130,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,124,101237,1,2,0:0:0:0:
212,140,101413,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,124,101590,1,8,0:0:0:0:
48,96,101766,2,0,L|40:244,1,130
16,308,102296,2,0,P|64:308|100:288,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,264,102649,2,0,L|248:272,1,65,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,336,103002,2,0,L|332:329,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,356,103355,6,0,P|416:324|360:252,1,130,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,124,104060,2,0,L|456:216,2,65,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,76,104590,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,76,104678,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,76,104766,2,0,P|332:80|304:72,1,65,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,92,105119,2,0,P|200:88|152:104,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,244,105649,5,0,0:0:0:0:
156,184,105825,1,8,0:0:0:0:
232,220,106002,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,164,106178,2,0,P|324:172|420:136,1,130,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,228,106707,2,8,L|452:368,1,130,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
449,355,107237,1,8,0:0:0:0:
284,312,107590,6,0,P|232:272|144:292,1,130,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,356,108119,2,8,P|168:364|84:304,1,130
32,264,108649,2,0,L|32:184,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,120,109002,2,0,P|164:116|200:112,1,130,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,72,109531,2,8,B|252:140|252:140|284:204,1,130
279,195,110060,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,264,110237,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,264,110325,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,264,110413,6,0,P|360:228|364:192,2,65,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,360,110943,2,8,L|252:376,1,130
208,304,111472,2,0,P|192:248|256:224,1,130,8|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,156,112178,6,0,P|380:148|340:152,2,65,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,220,112707,2,0,L|248:120,1,130
92,168,113413,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,248,113590,1,8,0:0:0:0:
72,332,113766,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,288,113943,2,0,L|288:272,1,130,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,116,114649,6,0,P|296:120|344:80,1,130,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,128,115178,1,0,0:0:0:0:
472,72,115355,1,2,0:0:0:0:
492,152,115531,2,0,L|480:236,1,65,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,216,115884,2,0,P|336:184|264:216,1,130
336,268,116413,2,0,P|332:304|320:344,1,65,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,296,116766,2,0,L|172:288,1,65,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,220,117119,2,0,L|212:208,1,65,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,112,117649,5,8,0:0:0:0:
60,112,117825,2,8,P|116:120|192:88,1,130,8|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,164,118355,1,8,0:0:0:0:
232,164,118531,2,8,L|372:160,1,130
348,244,119060,5,8,0:0:0:0:
348,244,119237,2,8,P|424:208|436:144,1,130
372,60,119766,1,8,0:0:0:0:
372,60,119943,2,8,B|344:120|344:120|300:168,1,130
256,192,120649,5,12,0:0:0:0:
256,192,120737,12,0,123119,0:0:0:0:

Good Luck getting it Ranked

small_hins wrote:

Hi.
from my modding queue.

start mod.

[Estellia-'s Normal]

no problem~~

well, I know GD is less wrong.

[Hard]

01:20:413 (3) - why you make it behind the slider? i think that is bad. 01:18:472 (5,6) - Keeping consistency with this. It has 4 parts that are similar so 2 of them don't stack while other 2 stack.

01:31:707 (6,7,1) - do like this

photo

except these, it maybe can rank.

[Insane]

AR=~8.5 The jumps behind really need AR9 IMO

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I think it is rankable, I guest.
love this song~~

thanks for using my modding queue. o.o No problem :3

oh, good bye

Sailexk wrote:

From my modding queue

I feel like soft hitclap 2 doesnt fit in some parts.
Normal

00:37:002 (4) - missing finish
01:00:825 (1) - you can add a whistle here
01:12:119 (1) - here aswell All added

Hard

01:31:707 (6,7,1) - awkward hitsounds. I think only 6 needs clap But I did it on Insane as well :^)
01:52:178 (1,2) - fix blanket Fixed

Insane

This diff plays really well but your hitsounds are really inconsistent.
I couldnt even find an order in them. Mostly you dont put whistle on red tick and some parts sound weird because of it.

00:56:590 (6) - i would replace it with 00:58:002 (6) - then ctrl+h [and dont miss the hitsounds cuz the second has clap not a whistle] I just deleted the second slider point lol
01:00:825 (1) - tail needs whistle i guess
01:05:060 (6) - same
01:05:590 (1) - tail need whistle not clap
01:11:590 (5) - sounds nice with a clap
00:58:531 (1) - this breaks the a little bit (1x distance) but its good where it is now.
In the next one 01:09:825 (1) - you used 1,6x spacing. Intentional

imaikiseta wrote:

Insane

00:10:178 (1) - Make the slider go like this instead Would disrupt flow, but I will consider next time

01:08:590 (2,3,4,5,6) - I don't recommend doing this over on the same spot so highlight it and Ctrl+H it It's similar so I'll do it in the same spot but I changed it's direction
01:37:707 (1,2,3,4) - Make a box pattern with these
01:38:413 (1,2,3,4) - ^^ The jumps are suppose to be unique and not just squares

Hard

00:43:178 - 00:45:472 - Map this whole section because it feels empty even though 00:43:707 (6,1) are there. I'm somehow following vocal
01:10:884 (3) - Ctrl+G

Estellia's Normal

00:06:296 (3) - Ctrl+G I need to keep DS
^^00:06:649 (3) - Remove reverse
^^00:07:002 - Add circle The sound actually linked together so I would actually keep reverse

01:40:531 (1) - Face slider other way Nope, I don't think Est likes it this way

01:41:237 (2) - ^^

Sorry for the short mod! I still hope it helped

hanyuu_nanodesu wrote:

Hi~ M4M for my modding Q
Thanks for the mod before and thanks for waiting =~=
Let's start modding~

[General]

1. I don't know, if this is opening size, is it supposed to have video? Maybe this one https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lCvITePIvvQ you have to cut the last part tho. Encoding now, thanks for suggesting
2. Maybe use this as source プリティケーション2 and move PRETTY×CATION2 to the tags I swapped it around, thanks for the Japanese name!
3. The song is pretty short btw... Maybe you can add Easy with around 1.3 stars or something Not sure bout that

[Estellia-'s Normal]

1. 00:06:296 (3) - Umm, this don't look that nice... Maybe this http://puu.sh/iAA33/fe9cde1836.jpg but it don't really do well with the next note... I still think it looks better tho
2. 00:23:413 (3) - This don't look nice with (1)... Try to blanket (1)'s body with (3). And I think you better move (2)'s end at (1)'s wave and blanket it. This is how it should look like... http://puu.sh/iAAdD/4132b318cb.jpg
3. 00:24:472 (1) - And this, if you apply the mod above maybe try this http://puu.sh/iAAvB/1771e841c4.jpg (damn, I spent so much time doing that xD)
4. 00:28:355 There's a big sound here you know... Maybe you should change the rhythm a bit... http://puu.sh/iAAA7/14886d9794.jpg Following vocal the right way, and if I were to put a circle and there, beginners will have a hard time hitting the downbeat
5. 00:31:884 (4) - Bad flow from (3), maybe curving it to the other side would help a little. http://puu.sh/iAAD9/767a2ff463.jpg I'm afraid Est do not like it
6. 01:00:825 (1) - Why don't end this slider here 01:01:531 the rhythm is no different, it looks neater, and it would be easier for new player to hit.
7. 01:02:943 (4) - Maybe end this slider here 01:03:296 to follow vocal and add a circle here 01:03:472 to follow the clap.
8. 01:03:825 (1,2) - This overlap don't look that appealing imo, it's confusing as well .-. I prefer this http://puu.sh/iAATf/ccb18e6022.jpg or this http://puu.sh/iAAUD/3380f7786d.jpg
9. 01:05:943 (4,5) - I prefer like this too http://puu.sh/iAB01/9e10729662.jpg Est won't like it
10. 01:06:649 (1) - And if you do that ^ for DS, maybe like this http://puu.sh/iAB2L/5151960662.jpg (change (2)'s shape a bit for a nice circular flow) ^
11. 01:13:884 (3) - I think you have to end this one here 01:14:237 since the big vocal sound fall there. If you do, move it down a bit so the flow from (2) would be better and it would not overlap with 01:15:119 (1) - Kept the overlap
12. 01:19:355 (3,4) - Maybe make it identical with 01:17:943 (1,2) - because it's like an echo like you did at the first time.
13. 01:27:649 (3,4,5) - I think would flow better like this... http://puu.sh/iABhX/73225a61ec.jpg ((5) is under (2)'s tail) Est won't like it
14. 01:29:237 (1) - If you apply above, DS this like this and you better move 01:29:766 (2) - last anchor a bit to the left for better flow. http://puu.sh/iABo0/fa15091a64.jpg
15. 01:39:119 (5,6) - This don't look (and flow) that nice tho... But your next slider make it's hard to reposition -,- How?
16. 01:56:413 (3) - You seem to copy paste this from the first part (too lazy, huh? I'm also lazy >.<) so change it the way I said before ^
17. Okay done, overall nice Normal.

[Hard]

1. 00:02:237 (2) - Two notes would fit better actually...
2. 00:03:119 (4,5) - I think you have to move these downward so the flow from (3) would be smoother.
3. 00:11:413 (4) - Maybe like this http://puu.sh/iABQD/c12fb42195.jpg to avoid mini overlap with (3)
4. 00:20:590 (6,7) - Actually it would be better if you delete (7) and add reverse to (6) because it fit the song (the tone is like high, low, and high again or something like that...) If you do, add a note here 00:21:649 (with NC of course) http://puu.sh/iAC8l/40da35f59c.jpg
5. 00:25:178 (3,4) - Umm, maybe would be better if you blanket these two.
6. 00:28:884 (2) - It would flow better if you put this below (1) and (3) http://puu.sh/iACdi/1ecb196f4c.jpg
7. 00:31:531 (4,6) - I don't like this overlap. Maybe just stack (4) with (6)'s tail.
8. 00:36:649 (4) - Maybe move it to 448,188 for better flow from (3) and to (5)?
9. 00:43:355 Feels empty here... Maybe at least put note every white tick to follow the beat yet keeping the rhythm simple. http://puu.sh/iACo4/097c162e91.jpg
10. 00:47:237 (1,2,3) - I prefer like this http://puu.sh/iACrj/0b1cc4da5f.jpg look even better if you blanket (2) with (1) http://puu.sh/iACty/b479dc3389.jpg
11. 00:53:943 (1) - Maybe end this spinner here 00:54:825 and add a note here 00:55:002 to support the two big sounds.
12. 00:58:178 (5,3) - stack (3)'s end with (5) for neater-look purpose.
13. 01:02:237 (5) - I prefer to curve it the other way http://puu.sh/iACAi/6bf2ee3ccb.jpg so the flow would be better. Don't really like it :3 It's okay I have weird definition of flow here
14. 01:05:060 (4) - This shape don't look that nice... Move the 3rd anchor (the one after red) to the left a bit so there won't be pointy part (pointy part : http://puu.sh/iACN4/f92ee6e524.jpg&#41; Remade the slider instead
15. 01:29:237 (1,2) - Uhh, flow badly and mini overlap... Try this http://puu.sh/iACRl/b0d78b6fa7.jpg
16. 01:49:002 (4,5) - ^ http://puu.sh/iACUf/0c26fa352f.jpg
17. 01:55:178 (2) - If you put this at the top, it would flow better http://puu.sh/iACWP/4e540ac583.jpg
18. 01:55:884 (5,6) - Umm, fix blanket (it's off, a lot)
19. There's pretty much of your blanket that's off and some overlap...

[Insane]

1. You told me about big star diff jump when you have a big one as well xD I mean... 3>4 star is fine. I've seen a Hard with 3.9* and a 1.9* normal getting 2nd place on Beatmapping Contest, but that's another story xD
2. I usually use OD 7 for Insane... A lot people seem to complain about OD being too low and this BPM seems really good for DT heh
3. 00:04:707 (2,4) - Overlapped..
4. 00:07:002 (3,1) - Eh, maybe blanket the tail for neater looks
5. 00:11:502 you can add a note here and make a triplet. There's a sound that support it. The sound sound meh, it doesn't really need a triplet to emphasise it
6. 00:13:531 (2) - This shape don't look that good o-o maybe this http://puu.sh/iADgq/9a3c621e71.jpg (3rd anchor (red one) at 256,216, 4th anchor at 280,248, the rest are the same)
7. 00:17:590 (1) - I don't really think you need NC here... Or maybe change 00:17:237 (6) - into a circle, I think it would be more appropriate. http://puu.sh/iADn5/8814dd205e.jpg It's fine
8. 00:23:413 (2) - Is this supposed to be a slider wave? o-o Heck, who knows lol
9. 00:28:707 (2,5) - Maybe stack (5) with (2)'s end so it'll look neater and to avoid overlap. 5 is like out of bounds of 2 when you actually play it, won't make an actual difference.
10. 00:32:943 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - dem increasing jump; be braver to put them further from each other. I know that I don't have a girlfriend
11. http://puu.sh/iADtl/af67214802.jpg (6) stacking with 00:32:237 (7) - head is a nice thing too. Don't really like it ><
12. 00:44:413 (2,3) - I think the triplets should start here instead 00:44:237 http://puu.sh/iADyZ/992f8bb808.jpg I'm following vocal o.o
13. 00:48:296 (1) - Change this to 3 circles to support vocal? Does not sound good to me
14. 00:52:884 (1) - Don't look nice... Maybe try moving it to 236,168?
15. 01:30:825 (4,5) - Fix blanket
16. 01:33:472 (7,8) - Ehm, are they supposed to be overlapped?
17. 01:40:178 (2) - Maybe you can reduce the SV here, to make a dynamic map
18. 01:42:560 Again, you can add a note here.
19. 01:43:266 ^ I feel that following main instrument is better while disengaging from the others in this case
20. Good, but still too many pointy flow x-x

That's all ^^
Good map, just need some improvement :3
Good luck~

• 
  - 00:08:060 (2,3,4,5) - A bit weird looking. Maybe make the (4) a bit lower so the (2,3,4) can look more like a proper triangle
  - 00:20:237 (4,5) - Move lower to make a box rather than a rectangle
  - 00:18:119 (1) - NC (just don't think starting a new combo is necessary here)
  - 00:25:178 (7,8) - Weird jumping pattern in my opinion. A lot of overlapping and looks a bit messy. Try changing these notes around? And other notes accordingly?
  - 00:29:413 (5) - Overlaps (1) a bit, move a bit lower
  - 00:37:002 (1) - Move completely under (8) so (8) overlaps it... just looks a bit nicer and still plays well
  - 00:40:355 (4) - Move under (1)
  - 01:04:178 (3) - Move above previous slider to avoid overlap... but this one was a bit iffy not really much
  - 01:33:825 (8) - Overlaps (7) ... fix
  - 01:39:119 (1,2,3) - These are awkward to play. I like when these beats are like sliders, but it's up to you

• 
  - 00:13:002 (4,5) - Overlap... unsure what you could really do for this but maybe play around? if you want?
  - 00:55:002 (1) - Remove, feels weird especially on Hard
  - 01:39:119 (4,5) - Another overlap... maybe fix?
  - 01:52:178 (1) - Move to the right, weird overlap

[ Scarlet Red ] wrote:

Hey Insane FC first try :D:D:D

[Insane]

• 
  - 00:08:060 (2,3,4,5) - A bit weird looking. Maybe make the (4) a bit lower so the (2,3,4) can look more like a proper triangle
  - 00:20:237 (4,5) - Move lower to make a box rather than a rectangle
  - 00:18:119 (1) - NC (just don't think starting a new combo is necessary here) It should have a NC here, since followpoints don't really come in handy
  - 00:25:178 (7,8) - Weird jumping pattern in my opinion. A lot of overlapping and looks a bit messy. Try changing these notes around? And other notes accordingly? The sound they are making wants me to clamp everything together :3
  - 00:29:413 (5) - Overlaps (1) a bit, move a bit lower Don't know which (1) you're talking, but I'll just move a lil bit below
  - 00:37:002 (1) - Move completely under (8) so (8) overlaps it... just looks a bit nicer and still plays well Not quite
  - 00:40:355 (4) - Move under (1) I don't really like to emphasise 5
  - 01:04:178 (3) - Move above previous slider to avoid overlap... but this one was a bit iffy not really much
  - 01:33:825 (8) - Overlaps (7) ... fix
  - 01:39:119 (1,2,3) - These are awkward to play. I like when these beats are like sliders, but it's up to you Can't do much since the drumming is the same

All I could find for this difficulty.

[Hard]

• 
  - 00:13:002 (4,5) - Overlap... unsure what you could really do for this but maybe play around? if you want? Basically intentional to my style
  - 00:55:002 (1) - Remove, feels weird especially on Hard
  - 01:39:119 (4,5) - Another overlap... maybe fix? ^
  - 01:52:178 (1) - Move to the right, weird overlap ^

I did two difficulties because I'm nice but I suck at modding hards and non-insanes but I tried ^^. Give me kudosu if I helped you and yeah I did give you kudosu even tho I think you said to not to? Idk, I did anyway xD.

Most of the time if I mod just one difficulty or so, I'll ask for no kudosu. But hey I can't stop you Thanks for the mod! No reply = fixed/changed

Originality wrote:

Glad I could help with this awesome mapset!

Chatlog

22:34 XiMerx: Hey c:
22:34 Originality: hey!
23:08 Originality: 00:06:296 (3) - I feel like this fits better as a slider single
23:08 Originality: but it's fine as is as well
23:09 Originality: emphasizes the last hit more as a single
23:09 Originality: instead of a return
23:09 Originality: benefit of return is that you get the second note more though, it's a personal pref. thing
23:10 XiMerx: Correct
23:10 Originality: I like emphasis on the end notes, but whatever you like more
23:10 Originality: <3
23:11 XiMerx: Yeah I changed it already
23:11 XiMerx: There's a repeat of this at the end
23:11 XiMerx: I changed it as well
23:11 Originality: okeydokie, awesome
23:12 Originality: 1 sec I wanna play a part
23:12 Originality: checking polarity @ 00:24:649 (1) -
23:12 Originality: I think its fine
23:12 Originality: but better safe
23:13 XiMerx: polarity?
23:13 Originality: it's where you're going from one tick to another, in this case ends on red
23:13 Originality: starts on white
23:14 Originality: it's really only an issue in lower difficulties
23:14 Originality: you wanna start and end on equal ticks
23:14 Originality: to make it easier to read
23:14 Originality: red and white are really similar
23:14 Originality: so it usually isn't an issue
23:14 Originality: and it isn't here
23:15 Originality: I feel like 00:31:355 (3,4) - overlap
23:16 Originality: is better than 00:34:178 (2) -
23:16 XiMerx: Changed
23:16 Originality: I would curve slider other direction prob, then move 3 down
23:16 Originality: kk
23:18 Originality: 00:55:355 (1) -
23:18 Originality: i wish there was some way to mix this up
23:18 Originality: I put a single in, then slider white to white tick
23:18 Originality: it sounds alright, but idunno compared to origin what do you think?
23:19 XiMerx: What do you mean by single in
23:19 Originality: ill png you one sec
23:19 Originality: http://puu.sh/lxQtU/f25e433538.png
23:20 Originality: I would also add a single here 01:02:413 (3) - b/c that's really tricky as is
23:20 XiMerx: Ooh
23:22 XiMerx: It kinda fits well with the previous slider
23:22 Originality: timestamp me?
23:24 Originality: 01:19:355 (3) - http://puu.sh/lxQIU/699b5ea1bf.png this would be an interesting combo here too
23:24 Originality: to mix things up
23:25 Originality: sorry , lots of things at once xd
23:26 XiMerx: It sounds really weird o.o
23:26 Originality: the 1:19?
23:27 XiMerx: Yeah
23:27 Originality: yeah, the 4 and 5 are mapping vocals
23:27 Originality: from drums
23:27 Originality: it's definitely a stretch
23:27 Originality: you're right, it's probs better left as is
23:27 Originality: xd
23:28 XiMerx: LOL
23:28 XiMerx: It kinda works though
23:28 Originality: I like how it sounds
23:28 Originality: but it's a tricky transistion
23:28 Originality: maybe not okay for a normal, idk xd
23:29 Originality: your call
23:30 XiMerx: It's fine
23:30 Originality: 01:39:119 (5) -
23:30 Originality: similar scenario to earlier slider
23:31 XiMerx: Is the direction off?
23:31 Originality: although you said you got it I believe
23:32 XiMerx: Wait what
23:32 XiMerx: It isn't off here
23:32 XiMerx: maybe I changed it in the midst of waiting to reconnect
23:32 Originality: I was thinking of the return slider, different thing, my bad
23:32 Originality: yeah the direction is fine
23:32 Originality: spacing is fine too
23:33 Originality: most sliders are connected via ends though, and this overlaps in middle
23:34 Originality: that's really it for this diff, it looks good, and plays pretty well,
23:35 XiMerx: nice
23:35 Originality: moving to hard
23:38 XiMerx: You do really sound like Endaris HAHA
23:38 Originality: hopefully that's a good thing <3
23:38 Originality: wel
23:38 Originality: well *
23:38 Originality: besides me sitting on my bed so awkward map playing
23:38 Originality: that seemed really good
23:38 Originality: xd
23:39 Originality: loved flow, especially
23:39 Originality: moving into editor
23:39 XiMerx: Really
23:39 Originality: yeah, I mean, I haven't modded a ton yet
23:39 Originality: but a lot of hards
23:39 Originality: it's like an awkward diff between insane and normal
23:39 Originality: so it ends up choppy
23:39 Originality: but this was nie
23:39 Originality: nice *
23:40 XiMerx: :O thanks
23:40 Originality: mhm
23:40 Originality: 00:03:825 (6) - this slider
23:41 Originality: same as in normal
23:41 Originality: I would change to slider single, but it's a preference
23:41 Originality: def fine as is
23:42 Originality: just like √00:10:178 (1,2,3) - stuff like that , it just looks really good
23:42 Originality: shows that you put work into the spacing
23:42 Originality: which is nice
23:42 Originality:
23:43 XiMerx: Yeah I kind of blanket'd a lot in this diff
23:43 Originality: I feel like this 00:15:825 (5) -
23:43 Originality: works really well for the return slider
23:43 Originality: b/c no emphasis on end
23:43 Originality:
23:44 XiMerx: Oh I got what you meant now
23:44 Originality: 00:17:590 - I would have liked a spinner here, but it might be too short
23:44 Originality: I think you have one later on....
23:44 Originality: 00:53:943 (1) -
23:44 Originality: like this sort of thing
23:46 XiMerx: I placed a spinner there because I don't want to map streams in hard
23:46 XiMerx: Guess I will place a break there
23:46 Originality: it's a different section instrument wise
23:46 Originality: so it's not an inconsistancy
23:46 Originality: spinner is fine there
23:48 XiMerx: Okay then I placed a spinner
23:49 Originality: 00:23:060 (6) -
23:50 Originality: I don't like that the vocal hit is on the end of this slider instead of the beginning
23:50 Originality: but you're accurately mapping drums there
23:50 Originality: so I don't know if there's much to do for it
23:50 Originality: I've been playing around with it and can't get much
23:50 Originality: maybe
23:50 Originality: http://puu.sh/lxRZ1/1e24011b4a.png
23:51 XiMerx: How about a 3/4 slider?
23:52 Originality: hmm, if we're imagining the same thing that could work well too
23:55 Originality: I feel bad b/c im 01:29:766 (2) - and still haven't found anything
23:55 Originality: xd
23:56 Originality: 01:37:355 (9) -
23:57 Originality: this gap feels awkwardly long
23:58 XiMerx: what should I do
23:58 Originality: i'm messing around with it, gimme a sec <3
23:59 Originality: okay, so it's mapped right for mapping instrumentals
23:59 Originality: you've just been mapping vocals/instru combined whole song
23:59 Originality: so this little section
23:59 Originality: starting @ 01:34:884 (1) - feels a little wacky
23:59 Originality: lemme try and see if I can get something, but it's not a huge deal
23:59 Originality:
23:59 Originality: just a min
23:59 XiMerx: Ok..
00:01 Originality: how does this sound to you http://puu.sh/lxStX/17f0d66f70.png
00:01 Originality: youre getting drums in the triple
00:02 Originality: but still the vocals with 5 (single) and 6 (slider)
00:02 XiMerx: wait
00:02 XiMerx: Where did the triple come from
00:03 Originality: the 2,3,4?
00:03 XiMerx: Yeah
00:03 Originality: there's an instrumental hit that starts on 2
00:03 Originality: and ends on 4
00:04 Originality: I just made it into a triple b/c I like that better than 2 singles there
00:05 Originality: the rest is good to go
00:05 Originality:
00:05 Originality: you can always leave that section as is
00:06 Originality: make a note of it
00:06 Originality: and then if i'm the only one that comments on it, I'm the crazy one. (;
00:07 XiMerx: Ill change it and see if anyone complain
00:07 Originality: okeyydokiie
00:07 Originality:
00:07 Originality: lets go through insane
00:07 Originality: and then imma go to bed
00:07 Originality: xd
00:08 XiMerx: Okay
00:10 Originality: have you played yumeiro parade
00:10 Originality: ?
00:11 Originality: that's what playing your insane felt like -- I love playing maps like that
00:11 Originality: super flowly jumpy
00:11 Originality: xd
00:11 Originality: that's the kind endaris hates
00:11 Originality: jumpy maps
00:11 *Originality hides
00:11 XiMerx: Whoosh
00:11 XiMerx: I don't map like that though
00:11 XiMerx: but the song made me do so
00:12 Originality: it sounds/plays really nice -- btw
00:12 Originality: xd
00:12 Originality: that kickslider section
00:12 Originality: I was NOT ready
00:13 XiMerx: Hehe
00:13 Originality: </3 loool
00:15 Originality: 00:41:590 (2) - I like slider single better here
00:15 Originality: but personal preference for sure
00:16 Originality: 00:53:413 (4) - & you mapped the whole thing well so that I can't compain, totally not fair xd
00:17 XiMerx: ..Sorry? xD
00:19 Originality: 01:22:884 (4) - I like this personally, but I could see other people saying that you're overdoing it
00:19 Originality: so keep an eye on that
00:19 Originality: specifically 01:23:060 (5) -
00:20 Originality: I think 01:34:178 (7) - needs a little more curve
00:20 XiMerx: Yeah I kind of reduced the spacing
00:22 Originality: √01:57:120 (4) - same thing here
00:22 Originality: unless you're trying to make last slider less curved?
00:22 Originality: but that's it, this a great mapset
00:22 XiMerx: Isn't it the same as the previous 2 slider
00:22 Originality: checking..
00:23 Originality: I think it was a little off
00:23 Originality: just a hair
00:23 Originality: like 01:33:472 (5) -
00:23 Originality: compared to
00:23 Originality: 01:34:178 (7) -
00:24 XiMerx: yeah I changed it xD
00:24 Originality: same thing @ 01:57:120(4)
00:24 Originality: <3
00:25 Originality: but other than that, you're golden in my book
00:25 Originality: xd
00:25 Originality: I'll def be playing the insane when you get it ranked, that's basically my pp range rn
00:25 Originality: xd
00:25 XiMerx: Dang dude
00:25 XiMerx: thanks a lot <3
00:26 Originality: glad I could help! I'll be giving you a star too
00:27 XiMerx: Post it on forums now?
00:27 XiMerx: haha thanks