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Topic Starter
Culedesu
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Surono
<(``) can u mod my map too? if not.. i just check this~

[General]
- maybe u must add diffname like "OniCosmos" or " Cosmos OniMos" lel forget xD
- many Kiai.. but this fit and good~ `w`

[Cosmos]
hueh.. u follow vocal pitch? hue many hitsound, dont know must to do with dats hitsound.. gud.. maybe u must have consistent pattern.. ew.. xD

well, just check.. want mod gud? [strike]mod my map but i lazy to mod with vocal pitch.. go and call BN lel, hope helpful[/strike]
oh wait, i will check again
04:18:815 (254,255,256,257) - remove finish and make stream
04:37:356 (360) - from here, u make stream 1/6
03:36:252 (50,52) - plis delete this, huh not fits xD
03:48:065 (51) - change d
04:15:627 - in this length, i hear vocal pitch like stream~ *make stream
notes: this many vocal pitch, please try to follow accompaniment this song too~
hope helpful~

hueh, btw this nice~ hope ranked XD
dani
Hi! :D

First of all open the AiMod (Cntrl+shift+A) and try to correct the kiaii

01:12:440 (248) - change that bignote, after a 1/8 stream you cant do a bignote

01:11:940 (240) - you also can do a slider and remove that 1/8 stream

02:09:815 (63) - delete that note

02:16:440 (108) - it doesn't look better without that bignote?

03:40:440 (1) - here you could change the sv to a little bit lower

03:48:440 (55) - move the kiaii here and became the sv faster again

remove : 03:48:440 (55) - and 03:51:690 (74) -

add : Don 03:51:065 (70) - and Katsu 03:51:190 (71) -

also you can change the sv again to lower in the "ha ha ha ha" part xD ( 03:50:440 (67) - )

PLS FIX THE KIAII xD

the map looks pretty good and hard, it could be a good approval map :D
Topic Starter
Culedesu

Surono wrote:

<(``) can u mod my map too? if not.. i just check this~

[General]
- maybe u must add diffname like "OniCosmos" or " Cosmos OniMos" lel forget xD
- many Kiai.. but this fit and good~ `w`

[Cosmos]
hueh.. u follow vocal pitch? hue many hitsound, dont know must to do with dats hitsound.. gud.. maybe u must have consistent pattern.. ew.. xD

well, just check.. want mod gud? [strike]mod my map but i lazy to mod with vocal pitch.. go and call BN lel, hope helpful[/strike]
oh wait, i will check again
04:18:815 (254,255,256,257) - remove finish and make stream
04:37:356 (360) - from here, u make stream 1/6
03:36:252 (50,52) - plis delete this, huh not fits xD
03:48:065 (51) - change d
04:15:627 - in this length, i hear vocal pitch like stream~ *make stream
notes: this many vocal pitch, please try to follow accompaniment this song too~
hope helpful~

hueh, btw this nice~ hope ranked XD
all this recommendations fitted very well, thanks!
Topic Starter
Culedesu

dani wrote:

Hi! :D

First of all open the AiMod (Cntrl+shift+A) and try to correct the kiaii dunno, sorry-

01:12:440 (248) - change that bignote, after a 1/8 stream you cant do a bignote ok!

01:11:940 (240) - you also can do a slider and remove that 1/8 stream no, sorry. fits well-.

02:09:815 (63) - delete that note sounds great!

02:16:440 (108) - it doesn't look better without that bignote? fixed

03:40:440 (1) - here you could change the sv to a little bit lower yeah! cool!

03:48:440 (55) - move the kiaii here and became the sv faster again moved the kiai. it's gonna be very fast if I fasten it

remove : 03:48:440 (55) - and 03:51:690 (74) - can't do that. this notes compliment very well with the map

add : Don 03:51:065 (70) - and Katsu 03:51:190 (71) - sounds cool

also you can change the sv again to lower in the "ha ha ha ha" part xD ( 03:50:440 (67) - ) no. seems a bit weird.

PLS FIX THE KIAII xD
Cule: kiai seems very well for me. I'll try to get someone to tell me if this map can get ranked with the actual kiai or not.

the map looks pretty good and hard, it could be a good approval map :D
thanks a lot for the mod :)
Jona
Here is my mod as requested through ingame chat! (Really sorry about the delay ;_;)

If not obvious:
?=Just a suggestion
^=same as above
d=red note
k=blue note

[General stuff for Cosmos]
  1. Check AiMod (Ctrl+Shift+A), there is some important information there about the kiai-sections that you need to fix.
  2. I'm not totally sure if this is necessary, but add widescreen support. (Song setup - Design - Misc. Toggles)
  3. 01:58:565 - This triple fits really nice, try adding a few more triples like this one across your map.
[Cosmos]
  1. 00:12:440 - k
  2. 00:20:065 - Move here 00:20:106 (1/3)
  3. 00:26:440 - ^
  4. 00:28:440 - ^
  5. 00:31:440 - End spinner 00:32:190 here?
  6. 00:55:440 - k
  7. 01:02:190 to 01:03:190 - Add spinner or drumroll?
  8. 01:20:440 to 01:23:002 - This part feels kind of akward to play, but I can't seem to point out what makes it this way. Try remapping this part if you agree with me.
  9. 02:09:440 - Make this longer.
  10. 02:44:690 - k
  11. 02:46:440 to 02:48:440 - Add spinner or drumroll?
  12. 03:18:315 - Remove
  13. 03:18:565 - Move one tick to the right
  14. 04:02:190 - k
  15. Tip: Start Kiai here 04:20:440 instead of here 03:48:440
  16. 05:26:377 - Change SV to 1.0 instead of 1.25 here?
GL! 8-)
Topic Starter
Culedesu

Jona wrote:

Here is my mod as requested through ingame chat! (Really sorry about the delay ;_;)

If not obvious:
?=Just a suggestion
^=same as above
d=red note
k=blue note

[General stuff for Cosmos]
  1. Check AiMod (Ctrl+Shift+A), there is some important information there about the kiai-sections that you need to fix. fixed all kiai!
  2. I'm not totally sure if this is necessary, but add widescreen support. (Song setup - Design - Misc. Toggles) I forgot! Thanks for the advice.
  3. 01:58:565 - This triple fits really nice, try adding a few more triples like this one across your map. I'll probably do it.
[Cosmos]
  1. 00:12:440 - k no. sounds weird
  2. 00:20:065 - Move here 00:20:106 (1/3) ^
  3. 00:26:440 - ^ ^
  4. 00:28:440 - ^ ^
  5. 00:31:440 - End spinner 00:32:190 here? good!
  6. 00:55:440 - k nah
  7. 01:02:190 to 01:03:190 - Add spinner or drumroll? did it, but I didn't had it to finish at 01:03:190. and for complementation, I added some more notes
  8. 01:20:440 to 01:23:002 - This part feels kind of akward to play, but I can't seem to point out what makes it this way. Try remapping this part if you agree with me. yay! good advice!
  9. 02:09:440 - Make this longer. ok
  10. 02:44:690 - k sounds good
  11. 02:46:440 to 02:48:440 - Add spinner or drumroll? bit weird. I'll have to say no, sadly
  12. 03:18:315 - Remove did! and removed some other hits inspired on this too
  13. 03:18:565 - Move one tick to the right after removing some other hits inspired on ^, I can't do it
  14. 04:02:190 - k ok!
  15. Tip: Start Kiai here 04:20:440 instead of here 03:48:440 good tip sir
  16. 05:26:377 - Change SV to 1.0 instead of 1.25 here?
ok

GL! 8-)
Thanks a lot for the mod! :3
Midnaait
Hi, from Modding Queue
d=don K=kat D=Big don K=Big kat

[General]

Disable widescreen support, you don't need that if you don't have storyboard
I suggest keeping all the volumes a bit high higher
Some kiai times are kind of unnecessary, for example:
01:20:440 - 02:32:440 - 03:12:377 - 05:10:440 -
Keep the ones of the chorus of the song
Most of the SV Multipliers are x1.25 or x1.50, if you want high SV, change the main SV to 1.6 and modify the Inherited points to lower values

[Cosmos]

00:17:440 (54) - k
00:22:440 (83,85) - I think those will fit better with k
00:25:440 (101) - k
00:34:065 (11,12,13,14) - dddk
00:34:690 (15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24) - How about this?

00:36:440 (27) - d
00:44:065 (74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81) - kkdkddkk
00:48:315 (101) - Delete
00:55:440 (144) - k
00:59:440 (170) - ^, but not sure
01:03:065 (187,188,189,190,191,192) - kkdkkd
01:04:440 - To prevent note overlapping, change the SV Multiplier to x1.5. Then create an Inherited point in 01:04:440 with x1.25 SV Multiplier. Try to do the same in other parts of the map that has the same problem.
01:04:815 (199) - k, it's consistant with 01:06:815 (211)
01:07:065 (212) - d
01:11:940 - Not sure about this 1/8 kat stream. You could place a slider there
01:12:690 (250,251) - dk
01:17:940 (284) - d
01:18:190 (285,286,287) - kdk
01:25:190 (327,328,329,330,331,332,333,334,335,336,337) - kkddkkddkkd
01:27:940 (345) - k
01:28:940 (352) - Remove finish
01:28:940 (352,353,354,355,356,357,358,359,360,361,362,363,364) - How about this?

01:30:940 (365) - Remove finish
01:31:190 (367) - Delete
01:34:940 (394) - Remove finish
01:35:940 (401) - k
01:41:440 (427,428,429,430) - k dkd
01:43:440 (437) - Remove finish
01:43:940 - ^
01:44:690 (443) - ^
01:52:190 (488) - k
01:58:627 (527) - You don't need that 1/8 triplet there, delete this note
02:00:690 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - kddkddkddkk
02:09:440 (59,60,61,62,63,64) - How about replacing it with a 1/2 slider? Or 1/8 ddddd?
02:10:190 (65) - Delete
02:17:940 (115) - Move 1/4 to the left
02:18:440 (117) - ^ and change to kat
02:19:190 (122,123,124,125,126,127,128,129,130,131,132) - dkdddkdkdkd
02:33:315 (215) - Move 1/4 to the left and change 02:33:940 (219,220,221) - to kdk
02:40:690 (264) - Remove finish
02:47:440 - Place a spinner ending on 02:48:190
02:52:065 (24,25) - kd
02:56:690 (53) - Remove finish
02:58:190 (63,64) - dk
02:59:190 (69,70,71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79) - kdkkdkkdkkd
03:04:440 (101) - Remove finish or change it to Big kat
03:20:565 (207) - d
03:26:690 - Add a don
03:28:065 (259,260,261,262) - dddk
03:36:502 (1) - Move that spinner to 03:37:190 And make it end at 03:40:190
03:43:815 (20,21,22,23,24) - Why this? Change it to something else. For example 1/4 dk kkd.
03:46:565 (39) - You should delete that note, to make some breaks
03:47:940 (49) - ^
03:48:127 (51) - d
03:50:440 (65) - k
03:58:815 (117,118) - kd
04:00:440 (126,127,128,129,130,131,132,133,134,135,136,137,138) - dddkkkdddkkkd
04:06:440 (166,167,168,169,170,171,172,173,174,175,176) - kdkkddkddkd
04:08:065 - Add a kat
04:08:815 (182) - Change to kat and move 04:08:940 (183) - 1/4 to the right
04:10:440 (192) - k
04:10:815 (194,195,196,197,198,199,200) - kkdkkkk
04:14:440 - 1/8 ddd triplet?
04:14:815 - 1/8 kkk triplet?
04:15:190 (224,225,226,227,228,229,230,231,232,233) - How about this?

04:32:690 (334,335) - k d
04:34:190 (342) - Remove finish
04:36:565 (355) - Delete
04:37:065 (356) - ^
04:37:440 (356,357,358,359,360,361,362,363,364,365,366,367,368) - I think this is better

04:43:190 (389) - Move 1/4 to the left
04:43:315 - Add a don and change the next note to kat
04:44:940 (399) - Move 1/4 to the left
04:45:440 (401) - Remove finish
04:45:940 (404) - ^
04:46:690 (407) - ^
04:47:190 (409,410,411,412,413,414,415) - kdkkddk
05:02:690 (505) - Remove finish
05:03:190 (507,508,509,510,511,512,513,514,515,516,517) - kdkkddkdkkd
05:10:440 (6) - Remove finish
05:33:440 (126) - k

Ugh, long mod lol
Good luck! :)
Topic Starter
Culedesu

Midnaait wrote:

Hi, from Modding Queue
d=don K=kat D=Big don K=Big kat

[General]

Disable widescreen support, you don't need that if you don't have storyboard
I suggest keeping all the volumes a bit high higher
Some kiai times are kind of unnecessary, for example:
01:20:440 - 02:32:440 - 03:12:377 - 05:10:440 -
Keep the ones of the chorus of the song
Most of the SV Multipliers are x1.25 or x1.50, if you want high SV, change the main SV to 1.6 and modify the Inherited points to lower values

[Cosmos]

00:17:440 (54) - k
00:22:440 (83,85) - I think those will fit better with k
00:25:440 (101) - k
00:34:065 (11,12,13,14) - dddk
00:34:690 (15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24) - How about this?

00:36:440 (27) - d
00:44:065 (74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81) - kkdkddkk
00:48:315 (101) - Delete
00:55:440 (144) - k
00:59:440 (170) - ^, but not sure
01:03:065 (187,188,189,190,191,192) - kkdkkd
01:04:440 - To prevent note overlapping, change the SV Multiplier to x1.5. Then create an Inherited point in 01:04:440 with x1.25 SV Multiplier. Try to do the same in other parts of the map that has the same problem.
01:04:815 (199) - k, it's consistant with 01:06:815 (211)
01:07:065 (212) - d
01:11:940 - Not sure about this 1/8 kat stream. You could place a slider there
01:12:690 (250,251) - dk
01:17:940 (284) - d
01:18:190 (285,286,287) - kdk
01:25:190 (327,328,329,330,331,332,333,334,335,336,337) - kkddkkddkkd
01:27:940 (345) - k
01:28:940 (352) - Remove finish
01:28:940 (352,353,354,355,356,357,358,359,360,361,362,363,364) - How about this?

01:30:940 (365) - Remove finish
01:31:190 (367) - Delete
01:34:940 (394) - Remove finish
01:35:940 (401) - k
01:41:440 (427,428,429,430) - k dkd
01:43:440 (437) - Remove finish
01:43:940 - ^
01:44:690 (443) - ^
01:52:190 (488) - k
01:58:627 (527) - You don't need that 1/8 triplet there, delete this note
02:00:690 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - kddkddkddkk
02:09:440 (59,60,61,62,63,64) - How about replacing it with a 1/2 slider? Or 1/8 ddddd?
02:10:190 (65) - Delete
02:17:940 (115) - Move 1/4 to the left
02:18:440 (117) - ^ and change to kat
02:19:190 (122,123,124,125,126,127,128,129,130,131,132) - dkdddkdkdkd
02:33:315 (215) - Move 1/4 to the left and change 02:33:940 (219,220,221) - to kdk
02:40:690 (264) - Remove finish
02:47:440 - Place a spinner ending on 02:48:190
02:52:065 (24,25) - kd
02:56:690 (53) - Remove finish
02:58:190 (63,64) - dk
02:59:190 (69,70,71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79) - kdkkdkkdkkd
03:04:440 (101) - Remove finish or change it to Big kat
03:20:565 (207) - d
03:26:690 - Add a don
03:28:065 (259,260,261,262) - dddk
03:36:502 (1) - Move that spinner to 03:37:190 And make it end at 03:40:190
03:43:815 (20,21,22,23,24) - Why this? Change it to something else. For example 1/4 dk kkd.
03:46:565 (39) - You should delete that note, to make some breaks
03:47:940 (49) - ^
03:48:127 (51) - d
03:50:440 (65) - k
03:58:815 (117,118) - kd
04:00:440 (126,127,128,129,130,131,132,133,134,135,136,137,138) - dddkkkdddkkkd
04:06:440 (166,167,168,169,170,171,172,173,174,175,176) - kdkkddkddkd
04:08:065 - Add a kat
04:08:815 (182) - Change to kat and move 04:08:940 (183) - 1/4 to the right
04:10:440 (192) - k
04:10:815 (194,195,196,197,198,199,200) - kkdkkkk
04:14:440 - 1/8 ddd triplet?
04:14:815 - 1/8 kkk triplet?
04:15:190 (224,225,226,227,228,229,230,231,232,233) - How about this?

04:32:690 (334,335) - k d
04:34:190 (342) - Remove finish
04:36:565 (355) - Delete
04:37:065 (356) - ^
04:37:440 (356,357,358,359,360,361,362,363,364,365,366,367,368) - I think this is better

04:43:190 (389) - Move 1/4 to the left
04:43:315 - Add a don and change the next note to kat
04:44:940 (399) - Move 1/4 to the left
04:45:440 (401) - Remove finish
04:45:940 (404) - ^
04:46:690 (407) - ^
04:47:190 (409,410,411,412,413,414,415) - kdkkddk
05:02:690 (505) - Remove finish
05:03:190 (507,508,509,510,511,512,513,514,515,516,517) - kdkkddkdkkd
05:10:440 (6) - Remove finish
05:33:440 (126) - k

Ugh, long mod lol
Good luck! :)
Did just A LOT of changes inspired on this. Thanks a lot!
streeteelf
M4M

Sry for delay, didn't have time to mod this

[Cosmos]
  1. 00:12:440 (26) - I suggest k here
  2. 00:28:440 (121) - ^
  3. 00:35:315 - k
  4. 00:35:690 (22) - d
  5. 00:41:065 and 00:41:315 - d
  6. 00:43:315 - d
  7. 01:09:315 (225,226) or 01:09:190 (224,225) - d
  8. 01:11:940 (241) - end in this 01:12:440 point
  9. 01:34:190 (381) - d
  10. 02:29:815 (191) - d
  11. 02:46:940 - D
  12. 04:09:190 (183) - d
  13. 04:38:273 and 04:38:356 - k and 04:38:440 (367) - d, but make this last d a lot louder, not to use finish. I think this is better with music and you can't use here finish, so...
  14. 04:39:315 - k
  15. 04:39:815 (373) - d
  16. 04:40:315 - k
  17. 04:56:190 (464) - d
  18. 04:59:190 (483) - d
  19. 05:18:815 (43) - d
This is all for me, I was checking what could be more intuitive to play. You should also make chorus more constant with rhythm and patterns.

Generally map is nice made, good luck~ :3
-FireThunder-
kay.
"-" You Must do it
"*" My Opnimition (up to you)
"k" Kat
"d" Don
"K" Big Kat
"D" Big Don
"." Blank Note

[General]
Nothing~

[Timing]
* Sound 75% up to 85%
* Sound 50* up to 65%

for me the song so loudly and i cant hear that hitsounds :(


[Cosmos]
- 00:13:440 - d?
* 00:36:565 - delete, weird for me
- 00:40:440 - k, dont K. U made oni yeah?
- 00:43:440 - ddkd more suits for me :3
- 00:46:690 - d?
* 01:05:065 - add d?
- 01:09:440 - d?
- 01:13:065 - dk
- 01:17:440 - d?
- 01:22:565 - d , ofcourse in there is low pitch @_@
- 01:35:190 - kkddkkd
- 01:43:440 - dk.dk, dont dK.dK
- 01:50:690 - d
- 02:18:315 - add d?
- 02:34:440 - ddkdddkkddkkddkd
- 03:02:190 - d
- 03:12:815 - ddkkddkkd
- 03:13:940 - Delete
- 03:14:065 - kddk
- 04:11:190 - Delete

Sorry latemod
Thanks to trust me to mod ur map :)
Surono
i see this map get nice =w= wuw~
just check XD

02:09:440 - from here, use 1/6 and make ddddddk ok?
01:46:690 (450) - add Finish~ :3

if i get some to check again, maybe i pm ur lel. GL~ lel XD 4n 2 listen song like dhis~ *my genrez like~
Topic Starter
Culedesu

streeteelf wrote:

M4M

Sry for delay, didn't have time to mod this

[Cosmos]
  1. 00:12:440 (26) - I suggest k here
  2. 00:28:440 (121) - ^
  3. 00:35:315 - k
  4. 00:35:690 (22) - d
  5. 00:41:065 and 00:41:315 - d
  6. 00:43:315 - d
  7. 01:09:315 (225,226) or 01:09:190 (224,225) - d
  8. 01:11:940 (241) - end in this 01:12:440 point
  9. 01:34:190 (381) - d
  10. 02:29:815 (191) - d
  11. 02:46:940 - D
  12. 04:09:190 (183) - d
  13. 04:38:273 and 04:38:356 - k and 04:38:440 (367) - d, but make this last d a lot louder, not to use finish. I think this is better with music and you can't use here finish, so...
  14. 04:39:315 - k
  15. 04:39:815 (373) - d
  16. 04:40:315 - k
  17. 04:56:190 (464) - d
  18. 04:59:190 (483) - d
  19. 05:18:815 (43) - d
This is all for me, I was checking what could be more intuitive to play. You should also make chorus more constant with rhythm and patterns.

Generally map is nice made, good luck~ :3
Ignored just a few things. Thanks for your cooperation! :3
Topic Starter
Culedesu

-FireThunder- wrote:

kay.
"-" You Must do it
"*" My Opnimition (up to you)
"k" Kat
"d" Don
"K" Big Kat
"D" Big Don
"." Blank Note

[General]
Nothing~

[Timing]
* Sound 75% up to 85%
* Sound 50* up to 65%

for me the song so loudly and i cant hear that hitsounds :(


[Cosmos]
- 00:13:440 - d?
* 00:36:565 - delete, weird for me
- 00:40:440 - k, dont K. U made oni yeah?
- 00:43:440 - ddkd more suits for me :3
- 00:46:690 - d?
* 01:05:065 - add d?
- 01:09:440 - d?
- 01:13:065 - dk
- 01:17:440 - d?
- 01:22:565 - d , ofcourse in there is low pitch @_@
- 01:35:190 - kkddkkd
- 01:43:440 - dk.dk, dont dK.dK
- 01:50:690 - d
- 02:18:315 - add d?
- 02:34:440 - ddkdddkkddkkddkd
- 03:02:190 - d
- 03:12:815 - ddkkddkkd
- 03:13:940 - Delete
- 03:14:065 - kddk
- 04:11:190 - Delete

Sorry latemod
Thanks to trust me to mod ur map :) nah. thank you! :3
Like the other mod, I ignored just a few things. Thanks a lot!
Topic Starter
Culedesu

Surono wrote:

i see this map get nice =w= wuw~
just check XD

02:09:440 - from here, use 1/6 and make ddddddk ok? did!
01:46:690 (450) - add Finish~ :3 nah. I removed it like a few mods ago. not gonna do this.

if i get some to check again, maybe i pm ur lel. GL~ lel XD 4n 2 listen song like dhis~ *my genrez like~
Thanks again for your cooperation! o.o
Eihan
Random Mod-

[Cosmos]
00:17:440 (54) - d, for consistency like this 00:25:440 (101) -
00:21:440 (77) - ^
00:42:440 (65) - k, for same like this 00:44:440 (79) -
00:47:315 (97) - d
00:51:315 (120) - k
00:55:440 (146) - ^

just short mod for less 1min lol, hope helpful :)
Topic Starter
Culedesu

xRizx wrote:

Random Mod-

[Cosmos]
00:17:440 (54) - d, for consistency like this 00:25:440 (101) -
00:21:440 (77) - ^
00:42:440 (65) - k, for same like this 00:44:440 (79) -
00:47:315 (97) - d
00:51:315 (120) - k
00:55:440 (146) - ^ this is the only one I didn't apply.

just short mod for less 1min lol, hope helpful :)

Thanks a lot! Didn't expect this :)
newyams99
This song is nice to listen too. Love the vocals.

Cosmos

Suggestions:

00:10:315 - Add a k here. I can here a clapping (or something like that) sound here.

00:18:315 - Same thing, but not as necessary as the one before.

00:32:439 - I wonder why the Slider Velocity slows down here? I don't think it's necessary; keep it the same. Either that, or reduce the SV of 00:08:440 to be the same as everything else. This is one of the places where it isn't a kiai time, yet the SV is faster.

01:02:190 (186) - Rather than a slider, this could be a 1/8 ddddd.

01:04:440 - You have two of the same inherited points at this time. Remove one of them.

01:28:940 (347) - I hear the instrument that made you put a finisher on this hit, but making it a K might be a bit too loud. What about a D instead? Or maybe just remove the finisher.

01:38:315 - Add a k here.

02:02:565 - Same thing here. It'll connect the two triplets to match the vocals completely and create a short stream.

02:09:439 (58,59,60,61,62,63,64) - Change hits 58, 60, and 62 to k. See if you like it. I think it sounds better.

02:17:815 - Add a d.

02:42:315 (275) - Remove this hit. It sounds unnecessary.

02:44:940 (291,292,293,294,295,296,297) - This part could use more notes.

03:03:815 - Add a hit, your choice of colour. Same thing at 03:27:190.

04:16:440 (232,233,234,235,236,237,238,239,240,241,242,243,244,245,246) - You have hits 232-234 and hits 239-241 to match the vocals precisely, so do the same by adding a hit between hits 236 and 237, and between hits 243 and 244.

04:18:440 (248,249) - Same thing here, you should make this the same as the next four hits except make it dddd instead.

04:20:440 - You made the kiai time at this point only 1.25x SV, when the rest of the other kiai times are at 1.50x. Change it to match the rest.

05:09:815 - Add a d here. I think it sounds better.

Optional:

00:19:065 - You could add a d here.

00:31:440 (1) - It's possible to change this spinner into a 1/6 stream, but it's your choice. Same thing with the spinner at 02:47:440 (1). If you are to follow this suggestion, then change it to be similar or matching to the stream at 04:37:440.

01:20:440 - Remove this kiai time. I don't really feel like it should be one.

Sorry for the late mod, and sorry that there's not too many suggestions (for a five minute song). I found the song enjoyable to play and it was well mapped. Good luck on ranked! :) :D
Topic Starter
Culedesu

newyams99 wrote:

This song is nice to listen too. Love the vocals.

Cosmos

Suggestions:

00:10:315 - Add a k here. I can here a clapping (or something like that) sound here.

00:18:315 - Same thing, but not as necessary as the one before.

00:32:439 - I wonder why the Slider Velocity slows down here? I don't think it's necessary; keep it the same. Either that, or reduce the SV of 00:08:440 to be the same as everything else. This is one of the places where it isn't a kiai time, yet the SV is faster.

01:02:190 (186) - Rather than a slider, this could be a 1/8 ddddd.

01:04:440 - You have two of the same inherited points at this time. Remove one of them.

01:28:940 (347) - I hear the instrument that made you put a finisher on this hit, but making it a K might be a bit too loud. What about a D instead? Or maybe just remove the finisher.

01:38:315 - Add a k here.

02:02:565 - Same thing here. It'll connect the two triplets to match the vocals completely and create a short stream.

02:09:439 (58,59,60,61,62,63,64) - Change hits 58, 60, and 62 to k. See if you like it. I think it sounds better.

02:17:815 - Add a d.

02:42:315 (275) - Remove this hit. It sounds unnecessary.

02:44:940 (291,292,293,294,295,296,297) - This part could use more notes.

03:03:815 - Add a hit, your choice of colour. Same thing at 03:27:190.

04:16:440 (232,233,234,235,236,237,238,239,240,241,242,243,244,245,246) - You have hits 232-234 and hits 239-241 to match the vocals precisely, so do the same by adding a hit between hits 236 and 237, and between hits 243 and 244.

04:18:440 (248,249) - Same thing here, you should make this the same as the next four hits except make it dddd instead.

04:20:440 - You made the kiai time at this point only 1.25x SV, when the rest of the other kiai times are at 1.50x. Change it to match the rest.

05:09:815 - Add a d here. I think it sounds better.

Optional:

00:19:065 - You could add a d here.

00:31:440 (1) - It's possible to change this spinner into a 1/6 stream, but it's your choice. Same thing with the spinner at 02:47:440 (1). If you are to follow this suggestion, then change it to be similar or matching to the stream at 04:37:440.

01:20:440 - Remove this kiai time. I don't really feel like it should be one.

Sorry for the late mod, and sorry that there's not too many suggestions (for a five minute song). I found the song enjoyable to play and it was well mapped. Good luck on ranked! :) :D
Thanks a lot for the mod! :D (Your ver of the map seemed to be outdated, but anyway, don't worry!)
Ploenar
Hi, Culedesu.

[Cosmos]
  1. 00:11:315 (16) - How about adding k to follow something (like as clap sound?).
  2. 00:22:440 (84,86) - I think it should change to k for consistency with 00:23:106 (88) because these is similar sound as 00:23:106.
  3. 01:03:065 (189,190,191,192,193,194) - Personally, it would be fit more the music changing to kkdkkd.
  4. 01:11:940 (244) - Increase slider's length to 01:12:440. end of sound stream is there.
  5. 01:29:690 (352,356) - It would be fit more the music to swap these in my opinion.
  6. 01:33:190 (376) - Remove this for making little break.
  7. 01:37:565 - It sounds empty. How about adding note?
  8. 02:59:440 (71) - k to follow vocal?
  9. 03:02:815 (94) - How about changing to dk (1 / 4 stream)?
  10. 03:47:315 (43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51) - The rhythm is incorrect.
  11. 04:16:440 (232,233,234,235,236,237,238,239,240,241,242,243,244,245,246,247) - It is harder than overall. How about reducing some notes?
  12. 04:48:690 (424) - k for consistency.
  13. 05:08:815 - Same as 03:02:815. i think it would be not bad feeling.
Sorry for late.
Topic Starter
Culedesu

Ploenar wrote:

Hi, Culedesu.

[Cosmos]
  1. 00:11:315 (16) - How about adding k to follow something (like as clap sound?). great
  2. 00:22:440 (84,86) - I think it should change to k for consistency with 00:23:106 (88) because these is similar sound as 00:23:106. not gonna do that. sounds pretty good as it is.
  3. 01:03:065 (189,190,191,192,193,194) - Personally, it would be fit more the music changing to kkdkkd. I reversed this suggestion. (ddkddk)
  4. 01:11:940 (244) - Increase slider's length to 01:12:440. end of sound stream is there. great
  5. 01:29:690 (352,356) - It would be fit more the music to swap these in my opinion. oh right, sound pretty great!
  6. 01:33:190 (376) - Remove this for making little break. ok
  7. 01:37:565 - It sounds empty. How about adding note? nope. fits with 01:38:440 (406,407,408,409)
  8. 02:59:440 (71) - k to follow vocal? there has to be some "drum follow" on this map. so nay
  9. 03:02:815 (94) - How about changing to dk (1 / 4 stream)? did a change. thanks for the suggestion
  10. 03:47:315 (43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51) - The rhythm is incorrect. how?
  11. 04:16:440 (232,233,234,235,236,237,238,239,240,241,242,243,244,245,246,247) - It is harder than overall. How about reducing some notes? ok
  12. 04:48:690 (424) - k for consistency. nope. sounds good as it is.
  13. 05:08:815 - Same as 03:02:815. i think it would be not bad feeling. ok!


Sorry for late. np
Thanks a lot for the mod! :D
Raiden
Hey there o/ and sorry for the awesomely late mod, been busy with exams. (M4M)

[General]
  1. For a song of this length I'd consider HP4 or 3 rather than 5
[Cosmos]
  1. If you follow the vocals to do these 1/8s (00:12:315 (26) - ; 00:28:315 (121) - , you should remove the last (5th) note of them, since there is no vocal at that tick.
  2. 04:16:440 (233,234,235,236,237,238,239,240,241,242,243,244,245,246,247) - I wonder what's the purpose of these notes? You followed some rhythm before at 04:14:440 (218,219,220,221,222,223,224,225,226,227,228,229) - and now you suddenly change to a completely different even though it sounds the same?
  3. 04:37:440 (358,359,360,361,362,363,364,365,366,367,368,369,370) - The pitch goes progressively higher at this stream if you listen to it at 25% speed, I'd recommend doing the first 4 notes "d" and the rest of them "k"
  4. SV change overlaps two notes at 01:34:440 - , which makes it impossible to read with HD. Try adding more inherit points and progressively decrease SV to avoid the overlapping.
  5. 05:10:440 - Same, this SV decrease overlaps 2 notes together
  6. 05:26:377 - Why is this inherit not snapped to the tempo? There is no 1/8 here. Also, it makes the notes overlap once again, try to do a progressive decrease rather than an abrupt one.
  7. 05:34:190 - add a k here for final sound?
  8. Also, consider a spinner from 05:34:440 - to 05:36:440 - to end the song.
That's pretty much it, I found the patterns to be quite consistent and fitting. Also, the song is GODDAMN ADDICTIVE.

GL on the approval and sorry for my lateness and my poor mod.
Topic Starter
Culedesu

Raiden wrote:

Hey there o/ and sorry for the awesomely late mod, been busy with exams. (M4M)

[General]
  1. For a song of this length I'd consider HP4 or 3 rather than 5 HP4 sounds good
[Cosmos]
  1. If you follow the vocals to do these 1/8s (00:12:315 (26) - ; 00:28:315 (121) - , you should remove the last (5th) note of them, since there is no vocal at that tick. nah. sounds good for me.
  2. 04:16:440 (233,234,235,236,237,238,239,240,241,242,243,244,245,246,247) - I wonder what's the purpose of these notes? You followed some rhythm before at 04:14:440 (218,219,220,221,222,223,224,225,226,227,228,229) - and now you suddenly change to a completely different even though it sounds the same? great, made a pattern.
  3. 04:37:440 (358,359,360,361,362,363,364,365,366,367,368,369,370) - The pitch goes progressively higher at this stream if you listen to it at 25% speed, I'd recommend doing the first 4 notes "d" and the rest of them "k" first 5 notes d, rest of them k.
  4. SV change overlaps two notes at 01:34:440 - , which makes it impossible to read with HD. Try adding more inherit points and progressively decrease SV to avoid the overlapping. removed point
  5. 05:10:440 - Same, this SV decrease overlaps 2 notes together removed point
  6. 05:26:377 - Why is this inherit not snapped to the tempo? There is no 1/8 here. Also, it makes the notes overlap once again, try to do a progressive decrease rather than an abrupt one. changed sv and snapped.
  7. 05:34:190 - add a k here for final sound? sounds weird. nah.
  8. Also, consider a spinner from 05:34:440 - to 05:36:440 - to end the song. no. not gonna do that. end sounds great how it is.
That's pretty much it, I found the patterns to be quite consistent and fitting. Also, the song is GODDAMN ADDICTIVE.

GL on the approval and sorry for my lateness and my poor mod.
Thanks for your mod :D
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