Harbyter wrote:

la LV42 non va assolutamente bene , tutto il rating è dovuto alla fine, il resto della canzone è fattibile ad occhi chiusi pure xd

ShikiNoHollow wrote:

from my queue

column : 1 2 3 4 5 6 7

open it

M4M

ok ill give you my best shot Thanks!

[Kama's Lv.5]

00:37:299 (37299|2) - make this LN like others
00:54:240 (54240|2,54505|1,54769|0,55034|1,55299|2,55299|3,55652|5,55916|4,56181|5,56446|4) - ctrl+h
00:59:887 (59887|3,60240|6) - remove
01:02:005 (62005|3,62357|1) - ctrl+j
01:02:710 (62710|6,62710|5,63063|3,63063|4) - 1 note is enough
01:05:534 (65534|5,65534|6,65887|2,65887|3) - ^
01:14:005 - add a note to 7 heavy sound - 00:47:181 - etc*
01:17:181 (77181|5,77887|3) - are the LN for the heavy sound since - 01:04:122 (64122|1,64122|2,64475|4,64475|3) - etc* is 2 note idk
01:19:299 (79299|2,79299|3,80005|3,80005|2) - 1 note only
01:21:063 (81063|5) - remove
01:22:475 (82475|3) - ^
01:24:946 (84946|0) - ^
01:37:652 (97652|1,97652|2) - ctrl+h
01:45:063 - add note to 1
01:52:122 - ^ to 2
02:02:710 - add LN here for vocal i guess - 02:03:063 (123063|5) - remove this
02:14:357 (134357|5,134534|1) - add 1 note on these clm

[Lv.14]

00:21:063 (21063|4) - move to 6
00:30:240 (30240|1) - ^ to 1
00:44:358 - add a note here
01:12:593 - ^
01:46:475 (106475|4,106828|3) - ctrl+j
01:50:710 (110710|2,112122|3) - swap clm - 01:50:710 (110710|2) - move to 4 - 01:52:122 (112122|3) - to 3

[Lv.18]

00:21:769 (21769|0) - move to 2
00:48:240 (48240|3) - add another LN here to match the others
00:49:652 (49652|2,49828|4) - make this 2 notes ^ same reason
00:53:887 (53887|3) - ^
00:55:299 (55299|5,55475|1) - ^
00:56:710 (56710|3) - ^
01:00:593 - 01:03:063 - you ignore violin here? , i suggest you add it
01:12:593 - add a note
01:29:181 (89181|5) - add another LN
01:30:593 (90593|1) - make 2 notes
01:34:828 (94828|4) - same reason
01:36:240 (96240|5,96416|2) - ^
01:37:652 (97652|3) - ^
02:13:299 - add note to 7

[Lv.22]

00:23:887 (23887|2,25299|3) - drag 1clm to the right
01:11:181 - i suggest you add the kick as Lv.18 -> http://puu.sh/kr4yF/4cbf711d39.png
01:12:593 - add 2 notes for cymbal crash sound
02:13:299 - add a note

[Crack Lv.34]

00:52:828 (52828|5) - remove
02:13:299 - add a note

[Lv.42]

00:28:122 - 00:30:240 - not recommended skip this piano part , add it
00:39:416 - 00:41:534 - ^
01:12:593 - add 2 notes for crash
02:13:299 - add a note
02:17:534 - ^^

[Lv.69]

02:08:887 - add note to 5
02:10:299 - ^ to 3
02:11:710 - ^
02:13:122 - ^
02:17:534 - add note to 6
02:28:828 - add?

thank you for requesting me :v

-Kamikaze- wrote:

so uhh, lv.42 46 mod coming up

columns: |1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

This is going to be a harsh mod so buckle your seatbelts
hitsounds are kinda loud, change to 20% maybe?

00:28:122 - why. There's a piano roll here and you suddenly stop layering ANYTHING but the synth, that's plain wrong and I advise you to fix that on every occasion that this happens. You can remoe LN if you really want to leave something behind here
00:38:446 (38446|2) - unsnapped note
00:39:416 - the fact that you have a two layer LNs and 1/3 notes before and now you totally ignore piano roll and 1/3 altogether makes this just retarded.
00:44:358 - obnoxious finishers, also 0,2x SV seems a bit confusing at the start of next part, put 0,5x maybe?
00:48:240 - this SV honestly is such an ass to play
00:49:652 - ^+ making it a stale slowdown for both chords is really awkward, either make jumps on both chords separately or don't do them at all
00:52:034 - 00:52:210 - missing notes for consistency, you accented every other one there
00:53:887 - another bad SV
00:55:299 - ^
00:56:710 - ^
00:57:240 (57240|4,57240|2,57593|6,57593|0) - those notes feel weird when they're -trying- to accent longer sound, imho they should be 1/2 LNs
00:58:475 - tbh this section feels really bland and boring for a Lv.46 (and second hardest here) chart, please layers more instruments or layer them heavier
01:09:063 - add note on 4 for crash
01:10:122 (70122|6,70122|0,70299|0,70299|6) - move to 35, pitch changes
01:10:475 - http://puu.sh/kruat/d3134df891.png
01:12:593 - this teleport is unplayable as it is a teleport.
not gonna comment on patterning in denser parts because I didn't have time to give it a proper testplay, so will look mostly on density consistency
01:14:005 - missing note (you're sometimes going for 3 notes on bass so let's keep it at that)
01:14:357 - ^
01:14:799 - missing note (not the same reason but yeah)
01:15:769 - ^ (the first reason)
01:18:593 - ^
01:20:005 - ^
01:21:416 - ^
01:22:122 - ^
01:22:828 - ^
01:23:534 - ^
01:24:240 - ^
01:24:593 - ^
01:24:946 - ^
01:29:181 - SV.
01:30:593 - ^
01:33:063 - this single note stream placement isn't bad, but to emphasize it being apart from the LN synth stream musically I recommend you to make it into a one hand stair pattern (something like 1232123)
01:34:828 - SV.
01:36:240 - SV.
01:37:652 - SV.
01:50:710 - even tho there is a 1/4 rhythm worth accenting you choose to do the same thing again, ehh, it makes a horrible transition into 01:52:122 - tbh
in the next section same suggestions note wise as before
02:06:240 - do you really expect pepole to hit those notes with those teleports?
02:08:181 - and now suddenly you accent all those jacks with 2 notes when you accented them with 3 before (whole section)
02:17:534 - dude you should at least double amount of layers here to make it any interesting
02:27:416 - especially here
02:28:828 - and maybe layer vocals from here on

Honestly, someone has to say this: as it is right now, this map is bad. It's super spiky, not consistent, has unplayable SVs etc etc, you have to ask players to testplay it and ballance out difficulty of the chart so it isn't all easy singlestreams with easy 2-chords and suddenly a bracketstream with LNs. I love the song so I hope you can get this ranked, but you have a lot of work to do before that. Good luck!

ShikiNoHollow wrote:

from my queue

column : 1 2 3 4 5 6 7

open it

ok ill give you my best shot

[Kama's Lv.5]

00:37:299 (37299|2) - make this LN like others As you wish sir.
00:54:240 (54240|2,54505|1,54769|0,55034|1,55299|2,55299|3,55652|5,55916|4,56181|5,56446|4) - ctrl+h KK.
00:59:887 (59887|3,60240|6) - remove Ok.
01:02:005 (62005|3,62357|1) - ctrl+j Ok.
01:02:710 (62710|6,62710|5,63063|3,63063|4) - 1 note is enough :( Ok.
01:05:534 (65534|5,65534|6,65887|2,65887|3) - ^ ^
01:14:005 - add a note to 7 heavy sound - 00:47:181 - etc* What.
01:17:181 (77181|5,77887|3) - are the LN for the heavy sound since - 01:04:122 (64122|1,64122|2,64475|4,64475|3) - etc* is 2 note idk ^
01:19:299 (79299|2,79299|3,80005|3,80005|2) - 1 note only K.
01:21:063 (81063|5) - remove Mh.
01:22:475 (82475|3) - ^ ^
01:24:946 (84946|0) - ^ ^
01:37:652 (97652|1,97652|2) - ctrl+h K.
01:45:063 - add note to 1 It's quite horrible, but I added it anyway.
01:52:122 - ^ to 2 Ok, this is nicer than ^. Added.
02:02:710 - add LN here for vocal i guess DUUUDE ok.
02:03:063 (123063|5) - remove this Rip my beautiful LN.
02:14:357 (134357|5,134534|1) - add 1 note on these clm Done.

thank you for requesting me :v

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329,192,112475,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,112828,1,8,0:0:0:0:
182,192,113181,1,0,0:0:0:0:
109,192,113534,128,0,113887:0:0:0:0:
182,192,113887,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,114240,1,8,0:0:0:0:
402,192,114593,1,0,0:0:0:0:
329,192,114946,1,0,0:0:0:0:
402,192,115122,1,2,0:0:0:0:
475,192,115299,1,2,0:0:0:0:
329,192,115652,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,116005,1,0,0:0:0:0:
109,192,116357,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,192,116710,1,12,0:0:0:0:
182,192,116710,1,0,0:0:0:0:
402,192,117063,1,0,0:0:0:0:
475,192,117416,1,12,0:0:0:0:
329,192,117416,1,0,0:0:0:0:
109,192,117769,128,0,118122:0:0:0:0:
182,192,118122,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,118475,1,0,0:0:0:0:
329,192,118652,1,0,0:0:0:0:
402,192,118828,1,2,0:0:0:0:
475,192,119181,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,192,119534,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,119887,128,0,120240:0:0:0:0:
329,192,120240,1,8,0:0:0:0:
182,192,120593,1,0,0:0:0:0:
402,192,120946,1,8,0:0:0:0:
475,192,121299,128,0,122005:0:0:0:0:
329,192,121652,1,2,0:0:0:0:
182,192,122005,1,0,0:0:0:0:
109,192,122005,128,0,122710:0:0:0:0:
182,192,122710,128,0,123416:0:0:0:0:
256,192,123416,128,0,126240:0:0:0:0:
182,192,126240,128,0,126946:0:0:0:0:
36,192,126946,1,0,0:0:0:0:
402,192,127652,128,0,129063:0:0:0:0:
329,192,127652,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,128005,1,8,0:0:0:0:
182,192,128357,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,129063,128,0,130475:0:0:0:0:
36,192,129063,1,0,0:0:0:0:
109,192,129416,1,2,0:0:0:0:
182,192,129769,1,2,0:0:0:0:
109,192,130475,128,0,131887:0:0:0:0:
329,192,130475,1,0,0:0:0:0:
402,192,130828,1,8,0:0:0:0:
475,192,131181,1,8,0:0:0:0:
182,192,131887,128,0,132593:0:0:0:0:
256,192,131887,1,0,0:0:0:0:
329,192,132240,1,2,0:0:0:0:
402,192,132593,128,0,133299:0:0:0:0:
256,192,132593,1,2,0:0:0:0:
182,192,133299,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,133299,128,0,134005:0:0:0:0:
402,192,134357,1,4,0:0:0:0:
109,192,134534,1,4,0:0:0:0:
182,192,136122,128,0,137534:0:0:0:0:
109,192,136122,1,0,0:0:0:0:
402,192,137181,128,0,137534:0:0:0:0:
256,192,137534,128,0,138946:0:0:0:0:
182,192,138946,128,0,140357:0:0:0:0:
109,192,140357,128,0,141769:0:0:0:0:
402,192,141769,128,0,142475:0:0:0:0:
182,192,142475,128,0,143181:0:0:0:0:
329,192,143181,128,0,144593:0:0:0:0:
475,192,144593,128,0,146005:0:0:0:0:
36,192,146005,128,0,148828:0:0:0:0:
109,192,147416,128,0,148828:0:0:0:0:
329,192,150240,1,0,0:0:0:0:
182,192,150240,1,0,0:0:0:0:
182,192,151652,1,0,0:0:0:0:
329,192,151652,1,0,0:0:0:0:
109,192,153063,1,0,0:0:0:0:
402,192,153063,1,0,0:0:0:0:
182,192,153769,1,0,0:0:0:0:
329,192,153769,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,154475,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,155887,1,0,0:0:0:0:
182,192,157299,128,0,158710:0:0:0:0:
329,192,158710,1,0,0:0:0:0:
109,192,159416,1,0,0:0:0:0:
402,192,159416,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,192,160122,1,0,0:0:0:0:
475,192,160122,1,0,0:0:0:0:
109,192,160122,128,0,161534:0:0:0:0:
402,192,161534,128,0,164357:0:0:0:0:
256,192,162946,128,0,164357:0:0:0:0:
36,192,164357,1,0,0:0:0:0:
182,192,164357,1,0,0:0:0:0:

Kiviman wrote:

Hi! From cute queue again, you asked to mod new diffs :3

|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

Lv.18

00:59:622 (59622|1,59710|0) - Swap columns, looks better. Mhm, no, It's ok.
01:03:857 (63857|1,63946|0) - ^
01:06:946 (66946|6,67122|0) - End 1/4 earlier.
01:08:005 (68005|6) - End at 01:08:093 - No, I don't need to end it in that way
01:09:769 (69769|6,69946|3,70122|0,70299|3,70475|6,70652|3,70828|0,71005|3) - Change to notes, no reason for LNs. Wat? There's reason for LNs
01:51:240 (111240|3) - 6 for some balance. Ok!
02:08:710 (128710|4,128887|2) - Make both 1/4 length, same for LNs further.
02:14:357 (134357|0,134357|6) - ^ 1/4 lengh make no sense here
02:27:416 (147416|6) - You can add one more LN for reversed cymbal.
02:42:946 - ^ I mapped only organ here, I don't want to add more notes

Lv.46

00:23:887 (23887|3,24122|2,24358|1) - Move 1 column left for some comfort. Ok
00:37:652 (37652|1) - Maybe 4? Yess
00:52:475 (52475|6) - 4 for some pattern consistency. Ok
00:57:063 - 00:57:416 - Maybe add note to 4 for kick? added
00:58:828 (58828|2) - (and further till 01:08:181 (68181|0) -, except 01:03:946 (63946|0) - ) - All LNs are 1/4 length. No, they are 1/2
00:58:652 - 00:59:005 - (and further in this section) - Add 1/4 LNs for lower sound. Wat?
01:46:740 (106740|6,106828|5,106916|4,107005|6,107093|5) - Try 6-5-4-3-2, more comfortable.
01:47:446 (107446|0,107534|1,107622|2,107710|0,107799|1) - ^, 2-3-4-5-6. 01:47:887 (107887|3) - 2 then. No, just my pred to make this pattern in this way
02:06:946 (126946|3,127299|3) - 1 note? Add to 2 and 6. No, It's one note because of phatos before and hard part, I use 2 notes also in Lv. 69
02:08:710 (128710|4,128887|2) - Same with Lv.18.
02:27:416 - ^
02:42:946 (162946|5) - End at 02:44:357 - , move note to 7 (reversed cymbal sound starts there, i think). Not the same, but re-arranged pattern

Good luck!

Tristan97 wrote:

Oh, this looks like fun, I'd love to see this mapset get ranked. Now for a couple simple mods, since the O2 style is generally well-done

SPOILER

Level 18:
Switch the columns of these:


and fix up this section to look like:


probably also move 00:58:828 (58828|4) - to 00:58:828 (58828|3) -

Level 46:
Change this:

To this:


And this:

To this:

That's all for now, good luck for rank!

Evening wrote:

do i smell o2jam

jfc i can’t pass this… uh yea that happens

Ok I kinda got 2 really good players to test this, one in which happens to kinda notice that the HP is ridiculously bugged… in which kinda makes this map HP 10 instead of 9 and it is an ass to pass this, really consider to have it on HP 7.5~8 to make it not that brutal but yea, huge thanks to moni & Fiea for testing this

Fiea implied that he would like to see this ranked and I have to agree that mania needs more LN based maps

Just going to leave some suggestions here and there for the more major mistake and areas that i can see that can be improved

00:28:122 - uhhh I actually think that you can emphasize/map PR/or whatever you do to make this more… relevant to the music, 1234567654321234567654321 is probably one of the least relevant pattern i can think off tbh, suggesting like 1234 2345 34567 5432 etc.

00:39:416 (39416|0) - same thing, 1234 2345 … etc

00:52:122 - hmm not sure about this pattern going unidirectionally actually, might want to reflect it if you can pattern it well, just for the sake of PR

00:48:240 - actually, I would very much prefer the SV to be around 0.80 ~ 0.85, not sure if 0.75 is “fast enough” for some people, i kinda had some accuracy problems with that number

00:49:652 - might want to do a double jump instead of just a mere slowjam here, like, 1.25|0.75|1.25|0.75|1.0 on ¼

the above 2 comments goes to all similar sounding sections

01:17:181 - not sure why but… uhh try to emphasize this sound with a larger chord or jack a certain note ( just make sure the jack isn’t horribly placed )
01:17:887 (77887|3) - similarly, try to emphasize this particular chord somehow

01:29:181 - uhh same thing

01:33:063 - … well same thing

01:50:710 - wow why mang, use some other pattern other than a constant bracket here

01:52:122 - I don’t really get the jacks on the 2nd chorus here, they look random after a while since they don’t really follow a specific sequence, I’m talking about jacks like 01:52:740 (112740|6,112828|6,113534|4,113622|4) -, try to keep them consistent

02:03:769 (123769|6,124122|6) - … what do these represent, also highlight the cymbals with bigger chords

02:21:769 (141769|2,142475|1,143181|0) - think it would be more PR relevant if you put it on 5 3 6

iJinjin wrote:

Random mod for this mappuuuuu cuz I would really like to see this ranked~ #rankhardermaps hehehe

[Lv.41]

1. 01:14:005 ~ 01:28:122 - this bracket section: It's pretty fine actually, but there might be some things i could point out here:
   01:27:063 - and 01:27:769 - shouldn't you add notes at these two places for the cymbal crash sound like you did at 01:17:181 - ?
   for example, maybe something like this would work:
   
   
   
   Ok!Done.
   
2. 02:04:387 (124387|0,124475|0,125093|0,125181|0,125799|0,125887|0) - so many of the minijacks are cluttered at column 1, i think it might be better to rearrange this whole section so that the minijacks are distributed evenly in different columns. Also, feel free to break out of trying to make everything into brackets and make the two notes adjacent. This sometimes actually makes some patterns more comfortable than pure brackets.
   (also, 02:04:828 (124828|4,124916|4) - this minijack is inconsistent with other parts)
   here's my approach to this to the section starting at 02:04:828 - (feel free to use my suggestion or you can try rearranging your own patterns)
   
   
   
   Fixed the pattern, I used your suggestion.
   
3. 02:08:710 (128710|4,128887|2,130122|2,130299|4,131534|4,131710|2) - honestly I think it would be very fitting to put svs in these notes.
   I was thinking of something like this, try it for yourself and see if you like it
   
   

Great SVs! Added!

[Lv.50]

1. 01:50:710 - idk but this is a pretty uncomfortable pattern :/ this would be A LOT better imo ;w;
   
   
   
   Great suggestion!
   
2. 02:08:181 (128181|1,128181|4,128181|2,128181|5,128269|4,128269|0,128269|6,128269|2) - really see no reason against jacking all of these notes since the pitch is the same. In my opinion this would make this section more comfortable to play, but it's up to you
   
   The original pattern was a jack, then I canged this for idk reason. Now it's time to return to jacks. Applyed
   
3. 02:08:710 - same sv recommendation that i pointed out in the Lv.41 diff
   02:10:122 - ^
   02:11:534 - ^
   
   
4. 02:17:534 to 02:28:828 - Honestly I would put 2 long notes here instead of one for every organ chord (since there is more than one note in the song), but this is also up to you haha I know there are more notes in the song but I want this part easy. It's something like a gift for players who pass the previous part of the map ^^

Good luck~