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Harbyter

Niks wrote:

offset 1648 -> 1643

good luck
i love this map :D


fixed thank you niks :) :) :)
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Topic Starter
Harbyter
wut
[-CeMAqpOP-]kee
no easier diff for bad players
DDDx
Feerum
Harby when? q_q

I love this Song.
This Map is pretty good.

ahhhhh i want thiiiiis xD
MEGAtive
Hi Harby
Sorry for late mod
Mod req via PM in-game

gmtn. (witch's slave) - furioso melodia



Column
|1|2|3|4|

[General]
Hitsounds: Already good
Audio: 192kbps. Though there's some damaged bitrate because it's converted from 320kbps but it is fine.
Graphics: 1366x768
Metadata: Disable widescreen support on "4K furioso maratona"

[4K furioso maratona]
Mods
  1. 00:26:481 - You can add a note here to emphasize the piano grace here.
  2. I compared 00:35:707 - 00:38:804 - 00:41:901 - 00:44:997 - parts since they sounds similiar, but it seems that I can't understand the reasoning on the 1/4s. As an example, 00:35:997 - 00:39:094 - and 00:42:191 - they shares same ryhthm, but some parts are left empty. My thought right now is you're following the hats since that is the only instrument here that got 1/4s, but it's done inconsistently. Maybe you can refer the patterns on each part so it can be more consistent.
  3. 00:48:030 - IDK maybe it's just me but I find that this shield aren't that comfortable since it only give a 64ms respond time between releasing the LNs and pressing the next notes. Maybe you can end the LNs at 00:47:997 so it gives more respond time.
  4. 01:03:578 - 01:09:772 - I suggests you to switch the anchoring column here to |4|, letting 01:00:481 - 01:06:675 - to handle |1| anchor. Current pattern are so left-handed. Doing this spreads the pattern more so it's not really one-handed based.
  5. 01:21:772 - Try http://puu.sh/prbd8/49ed191f67.png ? It felt more comfortable to execute.
  6. 01:25:449 (85449|2,85546|1) - You can Ctrl+H this so column |3| wouldn't cluttered with more anchor. Applies with 01:31:642 (91642|1,91739|2) and same reasoning.
  7. 01:49:642 - Maybe you can try http://puu.sh/prKoh/759986d5bd.png since this pattern makes you to play 1/6 trill in left hand and 1/8 trill in right hand. But yeah you still can reject this if you don't want a 1/8 trill here.
  8. 02:13:901 - Maybe it's better to make this double. It sounds similiar with 02:13:642 instead with 02:14:030 -
  9. 02:51:965 - You can try http://puu.sh/prKVX/4c7d9f8f50.png so the vocal sample there are covered too.
  10. 05:11:320 - Maybe you can map this song until 05:48:288 . Nice as a cooldown part.

This is already good. Can't say much about this. Please approve. Good Luck~
Topic Starter
Harbyter

MEGAtive wrote:

Hi Harby
Sorry for late mod
Mod req via PM in-game

gmtn. (witch's slave) - furioso melodia



Column
|1|2|3|4|

[General]
Hitsounds: Already good
Audio: 192kbps. Though there's some damaged bitrate because it's converted from 320kbps but it is fine.
Graphics: 1366x768
Metadata: Disable widescreen support on "4K furioso maratona"

[4K furioso maratona]
Mods
  1. 00:26:481 - You can add a note here to emphasize the piano grace here. better no xD
  2. I compared 00:35:707 - 00:38:804 - 00:41:901 - 00:44:997 - parts since they sounds similiar, but it seems that I can't understand the reasoning on the 1/4s. As an example, 00:35:997 - 00:39:094 - and 00:42:191 - they shares same ryhthm, but some parts are left empty. My thought right now is you're following the hats since that is the only instrument here that got 1/4s, but it's done inconsistently. Maybe you can refer the patterns on each part so it can be more consistent.I know it is incosistent but i've mapped here my own rhytm , cause a repetitive 1/4 pattern would be boring here
  3. 00:48:030 - IDK maybe it's just me but I find that this shield aren't that comfortable since it only give a 64ms respond time between releasing the LNs and pressing the next notes. Maybe you can end the LNs at 00:47:997 so it gives more respond time.reducing the lenght of the LN is more unconfortable since you have to press and release it way faster
  4. 01:03:578 - 01:09:772 - I suggests you to switch the anchoring column here to |4|, letting 01:00:481 - 01:06:675 - to handle |1| anchor. Current pattern are so left-handed. Doing this spreads the pattern more so it's not really one-handed based.actally i've made the column 1 heavy on purpose , watching the hitsounds you should understand
  5. 01:21:772 - Try http://puu.sh/prbd8/49ed191f67.png ? It felt more comfortable to execute.ok
  6. 01:25:449 (85449|2,85546|1) - You can Ctrl+H this so column |3| wouldn't cluttered with more anchor. Applies with 01:31:642 (91642|1,91739|2) and same reasoning.ok
  7. 01:49:642 - Maybe you can try http://puu.sh/prKoh/759986d5bd.png since this pattern makes you to play 1/6 trill in left hand and 1/8 trill in right hand. But yeah you still can reject this if you don't want a 1/8 trill here.better no xD
  8. 02:13:901 - Maybe it's better to make this double. It sounds similiar with 02:13:642 instead with 02:14:030 - no change, actually at this point starts the heavy kicks
  9. 02:51:965 - You can try http://puu.sh/prKVX/4c7d9f8f50.png so the vocal sample there are covered too. adding that 1/4 will destroy the playability due to the SVs
  10. 05:11:320 - Maybe you can map this song until 05:48:288 . Nice as a cooldown part.prefer to end the song at this point, cause the remaining part is really boring

This is already good. Can't say much about this. Please approve. Good Luck~


ty for the mod :)
Aruel
Okay here I am.

7K furioso maratona

00:21:384 (21384|6,21481|5,21578|6,21772|6) - It's good for now but just for more playable a little a little bit. 00:21:772 (21772|6) - How about move it to 6? But it's fine to let be. So depend on you

00:23:707 (23707|4,23707|1,23901|6,23901|3) - This part will be great if you give some different without current pattern. Seems there has some different sounds. Let me example.

00:26:417 (26417|2,26417|0) - Similar reason with above. Seems this part can be change for more different feeling. Give some difference. 00:25:642 - ~ 00:26:223 - These are kinda unnatural in my opinion.

00:50:933 (50933|3) - Move it to 1, for more good balance. also if you feel column 4 is kinda empty, suggest to move some notes which are on col 1.2.3

00:53:513 - I have some playable issue on here, the hammer is not be a problem but my pointing it this. 00:53:610 (53610|3) - If you're a left spacebar hander, it's 100% uncomfortable that interlock with 00:53:417 - this pattern, actually I'm so now so. So I think this pattern is more good to go

00:57:255 (57255|1) - Actually it's personal opinion but it would be more good at hand balance if you move it to 1

01:39:191 (99191|1) - Move it to 3, seems 01:38:804 (98804|1,98997|1,99191|1,99384|1) - they don't need to be hammer.

01:43:449 - If you add some LN in here, it would be great for feel this map but depend on you

02:26:288 - To be honest I really want to add SV on here. Here's some suggestion about SV. (They're 1/12)
02:26:288 - 1.5x
02:26:384 - 0.5x
02:26:546 - 1.5x
02:26:642 - 0.5x
02:26:804 - 1.5x
02:26:901 - 0.5x
02:27:062 - 1x
Hope you try it

02:51:191 - I think here's need some improving. Hmm how about this?

03:20:481 (200481|3) - It's better to remove. Seems you focused on amount of notes but playable it more important in my opinion.

Let me check 4K later. please reply for it.
Topic Starter
Harbyter

Fresh Chicken wrote:

Okay here I am.

7K furioso maratona

00:21:384 (21384|6,21481|5,21578|6,21772|6) - It's good for now but just for more playable a little a little bit. 00:21:772 (21772|6) - How about move it to 6? But it's fine to let be. So depend on you

00:23:707 (23707|4,23707|1,23901|6,23901|3) - This part will be great if you give some different without current pattern. Seems there has some different sounds. Let me example.

00:26:417 (26417|2,26417|0) - Similar reason with above. Seems this part can be change for more different feeling. Give some difference. 00:25:642 - ~ 00:26:223 - These are kinda unnatural in my opinion.

00:50:933 (50933|3) - Move it to 1, for more good balance. also if you feel column 4 is kinda empty, suggest to move some notes which are on col 1.2.3

00:53:513 - I have some playable issue on here, the hammer is not be a problem but my pointing it this. 00:53:610 (53610|3) - If you're a left spacebar hander, it's 100% uncomfortable that interlock with 00:53:417 - this pattern, actually I'm so now so. So I think this pattern is more good to go

00:57:255 (57255|1) - Actually it's personal opinion but it would be more good at hand balance if you move it to 1

01:39:191 (99191|1) - Move it to 3, seems 01:38:804 (98804|1,98997|1,99191|1,99384|1) - they don't need to be hammer.

01:43:449 - If you add some LN in here, it would be great for feel this map but depend on you

02:26:288 - To be honest I really want to add SV on here. Here's some suggestion about SV. (They're 1/12)
02:26:288 - 1.5x
02:26:384 - 0.5x
02:26:546 - 1.5x
02:26:642 - 0.5x
02:26:804 - 1.5x
02:26:901 - 0.5x
02:27:062 - 1x
Hope you try it

02:51:191 - I think here's need some improving. Hmm how about this?

03:20:481 (200481|3) - It's better to remove. Seems you focused on amount of notes but playable it more important in my opinion.

Let me check 4K later. please reply for it.


ty for the check chicken, applied almost i think xd

just a little change of the formula for the sv
Aruel
Okay we have some IRC in Discord.

Nuked!

Bubbled!

Congratulation
Topic Starter
Harbyter

Fresh Chicken wrote:

Okay we have some IRC in Discord.

Nuked!

Bubbled!

Congratulation

thank you chicken woooo xD
Feerum
Nomination Check #2



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Big means Important stuff
Normal are Suggestions
// means comments
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Hello Harbyter.
Sorry for the delay. Here is my check for your Map for the 2nd Bubble

General


Artist: Right
Title: Right
Source: Right
Tags: Right
AiMod: Right
Background: Right
BPM/Offset: Right
mp3/Hitsounds: Right
Other: -

4K furioso maratona

01:25:739 (85739|1) - Pretty sure this one is a ghost note. You also haven't mapped this in the 7K.
01:28:836 (88836|1) - Same this one like above.
01:31:933 (91933|1) - Same here.
04:49:255 (289255|3,289449|2) - Shouldn't this be only 1 LN?
I mean according to 04:49:642 (289642|0,290030|1,290417|0,290804|1) - :o
04:55:449 (295449|0,295642|1) - here too. Also in the 7K the same.

^This was more a snapping check through the whole diff, now to a balance and PR Part:

00:20:223 (20223|2,20223|0,20610|3,20610|1) - it would be cool to have them at the same column or at least one note at the same column since the melody has here the same PR.
00:22:933 (22933|0) - Maybe move this to 2 to have PR with 00:22:546 (22546|3,22739|2,23126|0) - (4-3-2-1) to the melody.
Since you also have here the PR up 00:23:513 (23513|0,23707|1,23901|2,24094|3) - with 1-2-3-4 :D

I can't find really more in the 4K. Well Mapped and absolute ready for Rank.


7K furioso maratona

00:53:417 - Pretty sure missing note, according to 00:52:836 -
02:08:707 (128707|1) - I am pretty sure this note should be better here: 02:08:513 - . The hihat is here pretty audible and i recommend to move it here because where the note is currently there is no real audible sound.
02:11:707 - Recommend to add here a note on 3. You have here a pretty high pitched cymbal like 02:13:255 - and 02:13:642 - and it could help to emphasize it. Also it seems me more consistent with the other 3-noted chords you have here c:

02:59:707 (179707|5,179707|1,179997|2,179997|4) - Notes and LN Endings are Wrong Snapped. They should be at a 1/3 beat here: 02:59:965 - . See as reference in the 4K Diff:

03:16:481 - Are you absolute sure you want to keep this heavy drum empty? In the 4K you have mapped it.

That's also all for the 7K, very nice (:

Call me baaacku c:
Topic Starter
Harbyter

Feerum wrote:

Nomination Check #2



Column: | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 |
======================================================
Red means Unrankable stuff
Big means Important stuff
Normal are Suggestions
// means comments
======================================================

Hello Harbyter.
Sorry for the delay. Here is my check for your Map for the 2nd Bubble

4K furioso maratona

01:25:739 (85739|1) - Pretty sure this one is a ghost note. You also haven't mapped this in the 7K. oky
01:28:836 (88836|1) - Same this one like above. oky
01:31:933 (91933|1) - Same here. oky
04:49:255 (289255|3,289449|2) - Shouldn't this be only 1 LN? if you listen carefuly there are two piano pitch in 1/2
I mean according to 04:49:642 (289642|0,290030|1,290417|0,290804|1) - :o
04:55:449 (295449|0,295642|1) - here too. Also in the 7K the same. same here

^This was more a snapping check through the whole diff, now to a balance and PR Part:

00:20:223 (20223|2,20223|0,20610|3,20610|1) - it would be cool to have them at the same column or at least one note at the same column since the melody has here the same PR. oky
00:22:933 (22933|0) - Maybe move this to 2 to have PR with 00:22:546 (22546|3,22739|2,23126|0) - (4-3-2-1) to the melody.
Since you also have here the PR up 00:23:513 (23513|0,23707|1,23901|2,24094|3) - with 1-2-3-4 :D oky

I can't find really more in the 4K. Well Mapped and absolute ready for Rank.


7K furioso maratona

00:53:417 - Pretty sure missing note, according to 00:52:836 - ok
02:08:707 (128707|1) - I am pretty sure this note should be better here: 02:08:513 - . The hihat is here pretty audible and i recommend to move it here because where the note is currently there is no real audible sound.ok
02:11:707 - Recommend to add here a note on 3. You have here a pretty high pitched cymbal like 02:13:255 - and 02:13:642 - and it could help to emphasize it. Also it seems me more consistent with the other 3-noted chords you have here c:ok

02:59:707 (179707|5,179707|1,179997|2,179997|4) - Notes and LN Endings are Wrong Snapped. They should be at a 1/3 beat here: 02:59:965 - . See as reference in the 4K Diff: not bad

03:16:481 - Are you absolute sure you want to keep this heavy drum empty? In the 4K you have mapped it. changed

That's also all for the 7K, very nice (:

Call me baaacku c:


ty for the check lolirum :) :)
Feerum
Alright!
Re-Checked everything. Looks very cool

Bubbled #2

gogogo one of my fav songs almost there.
Topic Starter
Harbyter

Feerum wrote:

Alright!
Re-Checked everything. Looks very cool

Bubbled #2

gogogo one of my fav songs almost there.
naisuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu xDDD


thank you for the work man !
Kawawa
Hello, long friend! It's my turn now.
SV, Metadata, All General Confirmed.

[General]
※Audio Volume
50% → 25 ~ 30%.
players can feel just noise from "w" spam. I think It needs to be reduced as possible.

※Remove Bookmark on 7K diff.
It's not mean unranked issue.
It's used to separate the music part or something else.
but It has been unsnapped on section. It kinda bother to me a bit.
and It does not need. because unsnapped. http://puu.sh/qbOeD/9ad1190640.jpg

[4K furioso maratona]
I recommend you that avoid to jack at here 01:11:997 (71997|0,72094|0) -
There's a intention for impact. but you can consider once again.
I feel It difference of structure on this section 01:12:094 - with under 01:11:707 (71707|3,71804|1,71901|2,71997|0) -
Can consider with these 04:20:901 (260901|0,260997|2,260997|3) -

01:43:352 (103352|1) - What do you think? remove this one.
01:43:255 - 01:43:642 (103642|1) - Just follow these open hihat than close hihat 01:43:352 (103352|1) -
Sample :: https://puu.sh/qbnQA/3d205d327e.jpg

02:08:997 (128997|0) - move to 2. Just a suggestion. There is 4 hammer. 02:08:610 (128610|0,128804|0,128997|0,129191|0) -

02:11:707 - ~ 02:14:804 - https://puu.sh/qbpoe/51f0199bc7.jpg
What do you think about this. It's better for drum expression. personally.

02:37:255 (157255|2,157384|2) - move to 4.
If you can make same col to them 02:37:255 (157255|2,157255|0,157255|1,157384|1,157384|0,157384|2,157513|3,157513|0,157513|1) -
then It will be better to play for feeling.
as a example, you can could feel that same instrument from this ▽
02:36:481 (156481|2,156481|0,156481|1,156610|1,156610|0,156610|2,156739|0,156739|1,156739|2) -
like 03:27:578 - 03:28:352 -

04:40:255 - remove a note. 1chord used only from another same section.
compare with this like 01:31:352 - 04:27:868 -

[7K furioso maratona]
00:38:223 (38223|3,38417|3,38610|3) - Personally, It needs to be spread for place

00:43:546 (43546|2) - remove this. I could see that you kept the hihat notes with 4K mapset.
but this one was not only. http://puu.sh/qbKym/afd81a8fc3.jpg

00:50:804 - ~ 00:51:191 - what do you think about? Sample :: http://puu.sh/qbKBD/dae3afdf42.jpg

01:18:288 - ~ 01:19:062 - It can be comflex when player reads the pattern. Sample :: http://puu.sh/qbKWe/15de571971.jpg

01:31:062 - ~ 01:31:449 - Same with above, because you mixed the expression that synth instrument with drum.
Sample :: http://puu.sh/qbL8R/f627dda8b0.jpg

01:35:126 (95126|4) - move to 3(column 1/2/3/4/5/6/7)

01:45:191 - I know you wanted the notes consitency with 4K. but you can add a note at 6. It will be better pattern shape.

02:08:707 - Add a note. I could see that you used hihat sounds as patterns in this section 02:08:610 - ~ 02:11:707 -

02:30:159 (150159|4,150159|5,150159|6,150288|6,150288|5,150288|4) - can be spread more easily. Sample :: http://puu.sh/qbLzN/8d9840345d.jpg
There's a LN on right hand. It will be tricky a bit.

02:43:707 - ~ 02:44:223 - I think It can be improved something. Sample :: http://puu.sh/qbLKR/f6a7f706eb.jpg

02:51:062 (171062|2) - move to 1. keep the pattern structure with 02:50:675 (170675|6) -

03:15:062 (195062|6,195062|4,195126|5,195191|6,195191|4) - I really don't think these bursket patterns as expression for these music structure.
Sample :: http://puu.sh/qbLX3/013c30b524.jpg

03:23:191 - remove a note. when I compared with around crash section 03:23:320 - It feels weak than them.
yeah, I feel same chord with 03:23:062 (203062|2,203062|3,203062|4) - And you also kept them on your 4K diffs.

03:28:094 (208094|4) - Just a suggetion. move to 6. You can make 3hammers for better shape.

03:52:352 - Add a note or two. for cymbal sound. and It is 7K. don't need to ignore that.
03:53:126 - Same with above.
03:53:901 - Same with above. up to you.

04:11:804 (251804|1,251804|5,251901|6,251901|2,251997|0,251997|3) -
04:12:191 (252191|2,252191|6,252288|0,252288|3,252384|1,252384|4) -
This two section is different feeling to me. It can make as some difference. Sample :: http://puu.sh/qbMp9/45bfdcd49b.jpg

04:12:481 (252481|6) - use the LN. like 04:12:481 (252481|2) -
because I could see the two LNs for that instrument from under part. like 04:10:933 (250933|3,250933|4,251320|4,251320|0) -

04:15:481 (255481|0) - remove. It does not need for pattern structure. and you did not it on these section. 04:17:030 -

04:44:481 (284481|5,284546|4) - reverse the column. for readable easily. but you can keep If you want.

04:45:481 (285481|3) - move to 5. same reason with above.

04:56:804 (296804|2,296804|4) - I could not understand this two LN. I'm not sure about this If there is no intention. this one should be removed.

04:58:159 (298159|5,298159|6) - Same with above. I recommend you this Sample :: http://puu.sh/qbN04/dd808d7bd3.jpg

05:01:933 (301933|3) - move to 5.

05:02:030 - ~ 05:03:578 - About the this part.
I feel It's better. Sample :: http://puu.sh/qbN8C/81ec3aa4b6.jpg
because It is repeating structure 2times on each section. 05:02:030 - 05:02:417 - // 05:02:804 - 05:03:191 -
so you don't need to use the two stair pattern at here 05:02:707 - 05:03:481 -
because you used a 1 chords on them 05:02:320 (302320|3,303094|3) -

05:07:836 - ~ 05:08:223 - What do you think about? Sample :: http://puu.sh/qbNif/658119924e.jpg

when you applied these, call me anytime.
havi hovi!
Topic Starter
Harbyter

Kawawa wrote:

Hello, long friend! It's my turn now.
SV, Metadata, All General Confirmed.

[General]
※Audio Volume
50% → 25 ~ 30%.
players can feel just noise from "w" spam. I think It needs to be reduced as possible.

※Remove Bookmark on 7K diff.
It's not mean unranked issue.
It's used to separate the music part or something else.
but It has been unsnapped on section. It kinda bother to me a bit.
and It does not need. because unsnapped. http://puu.sh/qbOeD/9ad1190640.jpg

[4K furioso maratona]
I recommend you that avoid to jack at here 01:11:997 (71997|0,72094|0) -
There's a intention for impact. but you can consider once again.
I feel It difference of structure on this section 01:12:094 - with under 01:11:707 (71707|3,71804|1,71901|2,71997|0) -
Can consider with these 04:20:901 (260901|0,260997|2,260997|3) -

01:43:352 (103352|1) - What do you think? remove this one.
01:43:255 - 01:43:642 (103642|1) - Just follow these open hihat than close hihat 01:43:352 (103352|1) -
Sample :: https://puu.sh/qbnQA/3d205d327e.jpg

02:08:997 (128997|0) - move to 2. Just a suggestion. There is 4 hammer. 02:08:610 (128610|0,128804|0,128997|0,129191|0) -

02:11:707 - ~ 02:14:804 - https://puu.sh/qbpoe/51f0199bc7.jpg
What do you think about this. It's better for drum expression. personally.

02:37:255 (157255|2,157384|2) - move to 4.
If you can make same col to them 02:37:255 (157255|2,157255|0,157255|1,157384|1,157384|0,157384|2,157513|3,157513|0,157513|1) -
then It will be better to play for feeling.
as a example, you can could feel that same instrument from this ▽
02:36:481 (156481|2,156481|0,156481|1,156610|1,156610|0,156610|2,156739|0,156739|1,156739|2) -
like 03:27:578 - 03:28:352 -

04:40:255 - remove a note. 1chord used only from another same section.
compare with this like 01:31:352 - 04:27:868 -

[7K furioso maratona]
00:38:223 (38223|3,38417|3,38610|3) - Personally, It needs to be spread for place

00:43:546 (43546|2) - remove this. I could see that you kept the hihat notes with 4K mapset.
but this one was not only. http://puu.sh/qbKym/afd81a8fc3.jpg

00:50:804 - ~ 00:51:191 - what do you think about? Sample :: http://puu.sh/qbKBD/dae3afdf42.jpg

01:18:288 - ~ 01:19:062 - It can be comflex when player reads the pattern. Sample :: http://puu.sh/qbKWe/15de571971.jpg

01:31:062 - ~ 01:31:449 - Same with above, because you mixed the expression that synth instrument with drum.
Sample :: http://puu.sh/qbL8R/f627dda8b0.jpg

01:35:126 (95126|4) - move to 3(column 1/2/3/4/5/6/7)

01:45:191 - I know you wanted the notes consitency with 4K. but you can add a note at 6. It will be better pattern shape.

02:08:707 - Add a note. I could see that you used hihat sounds as patterns in this section 02:08:610 - ~ 02:11:707 -

02:30:159 (150159|4,150159|5,150159|6,150288|6,150288|5,150288|4) - can be spread more easily. Sample :: http://puu.sh/qbLzN/8d9840345d.jpg
There's a LN on right hand. It will be tricky a bit. made something differente

02:43:707 - ~ 02:44:223 - I think It can be improved something. Sample :: http://puu.sh/qbLKR/f6a7f706eb.jpg

02:51:062 (171062|2) - move to 1. keep the pattern structure with 02:50:675 (170675|6) -

03:15:062 (195062|6,195062|4,195126|5,195191|6,195191|4) - I really don't think these bursket patterns as expression for these music structure.
Sample :: http://puu.sh/qbLX3/013c30b524.jpg

03:23:191 - remove a note. when I compared with around crash section 03:23:320 - It feels weak than them.
yeah, I feel same chord with 03:23:062 (203062|2,203062|3,203062|4) - And you also kept them on your 4K diffs.

03:28:094 (208094|4) - Just a suggetion. move to 6. You can make 3hammers for better shape.

03:52:352 - Add a note or two. for cymbal sound. and It is 7K. don't need to ignore that.
03:53:126 - Same with above.
03:53:901 - Same with above. up to you.

04:11:804 (251804|1,251804|5,251901|6,251901|2,251997|0,251997|3) -
04:12:191 (252191|2,252191|6,252288|0,252288|3,252384|1,252384|4) -
This two section is different feeling to me. It can make as some difference. Sample :: http://puu.sh/qbMp9/45bfdcd49b.jpg

04:12:481 (252481|6) - use the LN. like 04:12:481 (252481|2) -
because I could see the two LNs for that instrument from under part. like 04:10:933 (250933|3,250933|4,251320|4,251320|0) -

04:15:481 (255481|0) - remove. It does not need for pattern structure. and you did not it on these section. 04:17:030 - keep,if you listen there is a synth in 1/4 here,it's different from the second part where there aren't any synth

04:44:481 (284481|5,284546|4) - reverse the column. for readable easily. but you can keep If you want.

04:45:481 (285481|3) - move to 5. same reason with above.

04:56:804 (296804|2,296804|4) - I could not understand this two LN. I'm not sure about this If there is no intention. this one should be removed. keep, want to keep the consistence of those double LN in the red lines here

04:58:159 (298159|5,298159|6) - Same with above. I recommend you this Sample :: http://puu.sh/qbN04/dd808d7bd3.jpg keep, one is for the synt ,LN with 'hit' sample and one is for the bell sound in the BG , the LN with ''w'' sample

05:01:933 (301933|3) - move to 5.

05:02:030 - ~ 05:03:578 - About the this part.
I feel It's better. Sample :: http://puu.sh/qbN8C/81ec3aa4b6.jpg
because It is repeating structure 2times on each section. 05:02:030 - 05:02:417 - // 05:02:804 - 05:03:191 -
so you don't need to use the two stair pattern at here 05:02:707 - 05:03:481 -
because you used a 1 chords on them 05:02:320 (302320|3,303094|3) -

05:07:836 - ~ 05:08:223 - What do you think about? Sample :: http://puu.sh/qbNif/658119924e.jpg

when you applied these, call me anytime.
havi hovi!


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sahuang wrote:

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