[4K furioso maratona]
I recommend you that avoid to jack at here 01:11:997 (71997|0,72094|0) -
There's a intention for impact. but you can consider once again.
I feel It difference of structure on this section 01:12:094 - with under 01:11:707 (71707|3,71804|1,71901|2,71997|0) -
Can consider with these 04:20:901 (260901|0,260997|2,260997|3) -
01:43:352 (103352|1) - What do you think? remove this one.
01:43:255 - 01:43:642 (103642|1) - Just follow these open hihat than close hihat 01:43:352 (103352|1) -
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https://puu.sh/qbnQA/3d205d327e.jpg02:08:997 (128997|0) - move to 2. Just a suggestion. There is 4 hammer. 02:08:610 (128610|0,128804|0,128997|0,129191|0) -
02:11:707 - ~ 02:14:804 -
https://puu.sh/qbpoe/51f0199bc7.jpgWhat do you think about this. It's better for drum expression. personally.
02:37:255 (157255|2,157384|2) - move to 4.
If you can make same col to them 02:37:255 (157255|2,157255|0,157255|1,157384|1,157384|0,157384|2,157513|3,157513|0,157513|1) -
then It will be better to play for feeling.
as a example, you can could feel that same instrument from this ▽
02:36:481 (156481|2,156481|0,156481|1,156610|1,156610|0,156610|2,156739|0,156739|1,156739|2) -
like 03:27:578 - 03:28:352 -
04:40:255 - remove a note. 1chord used only from another same section.
compare with this like 01:31:352 - 04:27:868 -
[7K furioso maratona]
00:38:223 (38223|3,38417|3,38610|3) - Personally, It needs to be spread for place
00:43:546 (43546|2) - remove this. I could see that you kept the hihat notes with 4K mapset.
but this one was not only.
http://puu.sh/qbKym/afd81a8fc3.jpg00:50:804 - ~ 00:51:191 - what do you think about? Sample ::
http://puu.sh/qbKBD/dae3afdf42.jpg01:18:288 - ~ 01:19:062 - It can be comflex when player reads the pattern. Sample ::
http://puu.sh/qbKWe/15de571971.jpg01:31:062 - ~ 01:31:449 - Same with above, because you mixed the expression that synth instrument with drum.
Sample ::
http://puu.sh/qbL8R/f627dda8b0.jpg01:35:126 (95126|4) - move to 3(column 1/2/3/4/5/6/7)
01:45:191 - I know you wanted the notes consitency with 4K. but you can add a note at 6. It will be better pattern shape.
02:08:707 - Add a note. I could see that you used hihat sounds as patterns in this section 02:08:610 - ~ 02:11:707 -
02:30:159 (150159|4,150159|5,150159|6,150288|6,150288|5,150288|4) - can be spread more easily. Sample ::
http://puu.sh/qbLzN/8d9840345d.jpgThere's a LN on right hand. It will be tricky a bit.
made something differente02:43:707 - ~ 02:44:223 - I think It can be improved something. Sample ::
http://puu.sh/qbLKR/f6a7f706eb.jpg02:51:062 (171062|2) - move to 1. keep the pattern structure with 02:50:675 (170675|6) -
03:15:062 (195062|6,195062|4,195126|5,195191|6,195191|4) - I really don't think these bursket patterns as expression for these music structure.
Sample ::
http://puu.sh/qbLX3/013c30b524.jpg03:23:191 - remove a note. when I compared with around crash section 03:23:320 - It feels weak than them.
yeah, I feel same chord with 03:23:062 (203062|2,203062|3,203062|4) - And you also kept them on your 4K diffs.
03:28:094 (208094|4) - Just a suggetion. move to 6. You can make 3hammers for better shape.
03:52:352 - Add a note or two. for cymbal sound. and It is 7K. don't need to ignore that.
03:53:126 - Same with above.
03:53:901 - Same with above. up to you.
04:11:804 (251804|1,251804|5,251901|6,251901|2,251997|0,251997|3) -
04:12:191 (252191|2,252191|6,252288|0,252288|3,252384|1,252384|4) -
This two section is different feeling to me. It can make as some difference. Sample ::
http://puu.sh/qbMp9/45bfdcd49b.jpg04:12:481 (252481|6) - use the LN. like 04:12:481 (252481|2) -
because I could see the two LNs for that instrument from under part. like 04:10:933 (250933|3,250933|4,251320|4,251320|0) -
04:15:481 (255481|0) - remove. It does not need for pattern structure. and you did not it on these section. 04:17:030 -
keep,if you listen there is a synth in 1/4 here,it's different from the second part where there aren't any synth04:44:481 (284481|5,284546|4) - reverse the column. for readable easily. but you can keep If you want.
04:45:481 (285481|3) - move to 5. same reason with above.
04:56:804 (296804|2,296804|4) - I could not understand this two LN. I'm not sure about this If there is no intention. this one should be removed.
keep, want to keep the consistence of those double LN in the red lines here04:58:159 (298159|5,298159|6) - Same with above. I recommend you this Sample ::
http://puu.sh/qbN04/dd808d7bd3.jpg keep, one is for the synt ,LN with 'hit' sample and one is for the bell sound in the BG , the LN with ''w'' sample05:01:933 (301933|3) - move to 5.
05:02:030 - ~ 05:03:578 - About the this part.
I feel It's better. Sample ::
http://puu.sh/qbN8C/81ec3aa4b6.jpgbecause It is repeating structure 2times on each section. 05:02:030 - 05:02:417 - // 05:02:804 - 05:03:191 -
so you don't need to use the two stair pattern at here 05:02:707 - 05:03:481 -
because you used a 1 chords on them 05:02:320 (302320|3,303094|3) -
05:07:836 - ~ 05:08:223 - What do you think about? Sample ::
http://puu.sh/qbNif/658119924e.jpg