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Harbyter

KawaEE wrote:

sorry, too late wwwww


fusioso maratong
00:25:647 - ~ 00:26:422 - about, just feedback xD



00:47:325 (47325|0,47422|3,47518|6,47615|3) -
^idk this is a little weird.
00:47:325 - ~ 00:47:518 - if u r represented here as long note, it seems more better. ▽
for example


00:59:325 (59325|3,59422|4,59518|3,59615|4) - about
if you skip this, 00:59:422 (59422|4,59615|4) -
what do you think about it is to emphasize? this 00:59:325 - 00:59:518 - ▽



01:09:454 (69454|1,69518|2,69583|4,69583|1,69647|3,69712|4) - for smooth play? ▽



01:15:777 (75777|6,75841|5,75906|4) - move to one left(654)


01:35:518 (95518|4,95615|3,95712|4) - col change.
^ 01:35:518 (95518|4,95712|4) - move to col 4 01:35:615 (95615|3) - move to col 5

01:36:680 (96680|2) - move to 2

01:37:067 - ~ 01:37:647 - feedback? ▽



01:46:938 - hmmm add at 5?


01:46:647 (106647|1) - move to 4 and 01:46:744 (106744|0,106793|1,106841|2,106889|3) - move to one right?

02:35:325 (155325|1) - move to 1 for relevance? with 02:35:712 (155712|6) -

02:43:841 - ~ 02:44:228 - better string expression? ▽



03:02:293 (182293|1,182293|3,182422|1,182422|3) - about this.
^ if you do not use a this hammer, i think the quality would be better. of course personally xD
for example ▽
03:02:164 (182164|2,182293|3,182293|1) - = 02:55:970 (175970|3,176099|4,176099|2) - idk same beat.

03:08:486 (188486|1,188486|5,188615|5,188615|1) - ^same mod(03:02:293 (182293|1,182293|3,182422|1,182422|3) - about this)
for example ▽
03:08:486 (188486|2,188486|1,188486|5,188615|6,188615|1,188615|0,188615|5) - =
03:11:583 (191583|3,191583|4,191583|2,191712|0,191712|5,191712|1,191712|6) - idk same beat


03:30:551 (210551|6) - move to 6 and 03:30:680 (210680|5) - move to 3


04:14:809 (254809|1) - move to 1


04:15:002 (255002|0,255002|3,255002|5,255067|2,255067|4,255131|1,255131|3) - about,
^if you reduce chord amount, it may be a better pattern.
when i viewed a around note, there is only 2 chord. in string
for example


04:27:777 (267777|1,267777|2,267841|3) - col change?
^04:27:777 (267777|2,267777|1) - move to 3,4 and 04:27:841 (267841|3) - move to 2


04:34:357 (274357|1) - move to 1?
^ like relevance? ▽



just suggestion, u can add for emphasize.
04:43:454 - add at 2 / 04:44:228 - add at 6 / 04:45:002 - add at 1


05:10:986 (310986|1,311002|2,311035|3,311067|4,311083|5) - it seems 6+8 snap 8drum 6string.
^ i think it is better to unify only 8 or 6
but personally idk it's not a problem. just I'm, When only considering the playing and for better obvious expression

good Luk xD

I hope ranked! <3

thnk you kawa applied all :)


and rearranged some pattern xd
Kuki
excited to watch replays on this since I can barely play 4k 8-)
pporse
hello habi

IRC MOD
17:49 pporse: hi
17:49 Harbyter: yoyo
17:49 *pporse is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/687730 gmtn. (witch's slave) - furioso melodia]
17:49 pporse: nice map :D
17:49 Harbyter: oh
17:50 Harbyter: isn't it weird
17:50 Harbyter: ?
17:50 pporse: not weird :3 it's good
17:50 Harbyter: i think there are some pattern
17:50 Harbyter: that can be polished
17:51 *pporse is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/687730 gmtn. (witch's slave) - furioso melodia [furioso maratona]] <osu!mania> |7K|
17:57 pporse: :D
17:57 pporse: nice map
17:57 Harbyter: mmm
17:58 Harbyter: do you think some pattern need to be more confortable
17:58 pporse: i like this map's various pattern
17:58 Harbyter: ?
17:58 pporse: umm
17:58 pporse: wait
17:58 Harbyter: i saw some section
17:58 Harbyter: where you missed
17:59 pporse: 02:19:712 (139712|4,139712|0,139841|1,139841|0,139841|5,139841|4,140099|2,140099|6,140228|2,140228|1,140228|6,140228|5) - personal weakness lol
17:59 Harbyter: yes here
17:59 Harbyter: lol
17:59 Harbyter: 01:34:164 (94164|1,94164|4,94164|0,94228|2,94293|3,94357|1,94357|5,94422|3,94486|4,94551|0,94551|6,94551|2,94551|5) -
17:59 Harbyter: here too i think
18:00 pporse: ah that is okay
18:00 Harbyter: 02:19:712 (139712|4,139841|4) - move in 7?
18:00 Harbyter: 02:20:099 (140099|6,140228|6) - this in 5
18:00 Harbyter: 02:20:615 (140615|5) - this in 5 too
18:01 pporse: no no keep it. it's just my personal weakness
18:01 Harbyter: but is weird to play
18:01 Harbyter: i keep missing there too
18:01 Harbyter: lol
18:02 pporse: lol then change it xD
18:02 Harbyter: 01:40:357 -
18:02 Harbyter: here?
18:04 pporse: that pattern is fine
18:05 Harbyter: k
18:06 Harbyter: 03:16:744 -
18:06 Harbyter: here?
18:06 Harbyter: i think here is awkward
18:07 pporse: 03:17:002 (197002|1,197002|0,197131|1,197131|0,197131|2,197260|2,197389|1,197389|2,197518|0,197518|1) - hmm
18:08 pporse: keep it? that pattern is okay for me
18:09 Harbyter: ok
18:09 pporse: 03:17:518 (197518|3,197518|5,197647|4,197647|6) - 03:17:906 (197906|2,197906|4,198035|1,198035|3) - but this notes
18:09 pporse: how about changing to jack pattern?
18:10 Harbyter: jack?
18:10 Harbyter: better?
18:10 Harbyter: oh for pitch
18:11 pporse: yea
18:13 Harbyter: mmmm
18:13 Harbyter: i have to reduce some chord
18:15 pporse: 03:30:680 - end - actually this part is really good.
18:15 Harbyter: http://puu.sh/iANbF/a8cb2bd7ab.jpg
18:16 Harbyter: what do you think
18:17 pporse: oh nice
18:17 Harbyter: removed mostly the note with 'legnata'
18:17 Harbyter: lol
18:18 pporse: 03:30:680 - end - using LN is nice
18:19 Harbyter: yes
18:19 Harbyter: change of stile
18:20 Harbyter: 04:09:002 (249002|3,249099|1,249196|5,249293|3) -
18:20 pporse: nice attempt
18:20 Harbyter: better change in ln to?
18:21 pporse: umm
18:21 pporse: keep it?
18:21 Harbyter: ok
18:21 pporse: current pattern is good for me
18:22 pporse: 04:16:357 (256357|6,256454|6,256454|5,256454|4) - orz my personal weaknees 2
18:22 Harbyter: oh
18:22 Harbyter: that jack
18:23 Harbyter: 04:17:131 -
18:23 Harbyter: here
18:23 Harbyter: i saw you missed lot here
18:23 Harbyter: this pattern is hard
18:23 Harbyter: any suggestion?
18:23 pporse: no keep it :3 it's good
18:24 pporse: actually when i played this part, my hands are tired lol
18:24 Harbyter: ok
18:24 pporse: 04:52:164 (292164|6,292164|4,292164|0) -
18:25 pporse: umm i think it's 1 or 2 chord enough
18:25 Harbyter: k
18:25 Harbyter: removed note 1
18:25 Harbyter: 04:52:164 (292164|6) - move in 3
18:26 pporse: ok
18:26 Harbyter: 04:52:357 (292357|2) - this in 4
18:26 Harbyter: 04:51:970 (291970|3) - this better in 11?
18:27 pporse: 11 lol
18:27 Harbyter: 1°
18:27 Harbyter: xD
18:27 pporse: both nice it's up to you
18:28 pporse: 05:11:325 - nice idea
18:29 pporse: 1/4 snap -> 1/2 snap -> 1/1 snap -> end lol
18:29 Harbyter: ah
18:29 Harbyter: eh
18:29 Harbyter: the music is like this
18:29 Harbyter: xD
18:30 pporse: really suited with the music
18:30 pporse: nice map :)
18:30 Harbyter: oky
18:30 Harbyter: any other things? o,o
18:31 pporse: no that's it :)
18:31 pporse: gogo ranked
18:31 Harbyter: ok
18:31 Harbyter: post the irc?
18:31 Harbyter: xD
18:31 Harbyter: ty for modderino u,u

nice song nice pattern
nice map

:)
Topic Starter
Harbyter

pporse wrote:

hello habi

IRC MOD
17:49 pporse: hi
17:49 Harbyter: yoyo
17:49 *pporse is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/687730 gmtn. (witch's slave) - furioso melodia]
17:49 pporse: nice map :D
17:49 Harbyter: oh
17:50 Harbyter: isn't it weird
17:50 Harbyter: ?
17:50 pporse: not weird :3 it's good
17:50 Harbyter: i think there are some pattern
17:50 Harbyter: that can be polished
17:51 *pporse is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/687730 gmtn. (witch's slave) - furioso melodia [furioso maratona]] <osu!mania> |7K|
17:57 pporse: :D
17:57 pporse: nice map
17:57 Harbyter: mmm
17:58 Harbyter: do you think some pattern need to be more confortable
17:58 pporse: i like this map's various pattern
17:58 Harbyter: ?
17:58 pporse: umm
17:58 pporse: wait
17:58 Harbyter: i saw some section
17:58 Harbyter: where you missed
17:59 pporse: 02:19:712 (139712|4,139712|0,139841|1,139841|0,139841|5,139841|4,140099|2,140099|6,140228|2,140228|1,140228|6,140228|5) - personal weakness lol
17:59 Harbyter: yes here
17:59 Harbyter: lol
17:59 Harbyter: 01:34:164 (94164|1,94164|4,94164|0,94228|2,94293|3,94357|1,94357|5,94422|3,94486|4,94551|0,94551|6,94551|2,94551|5) -
17:59 Harbyter: here too i think
18:00 pporse: ah that is okay
18:00 Harbyter: 02:19:712 (139712|4,139841|4) - move in 7?
18:00 Harbyter: 02:20:099 (140099|6,140228|6) - this in 5
18:00 Harbyter: 02:20:615 (140615|5) - this in 5 too
18:01 pporse: no no keep it. it's just my personal weakness
18:01 Harbyter: but is weird to play
18:01 Harbyter: i keep missing there too
18:01 Harbyter: lol
18:02 pporse: lol then change it xD
18:02 Harbyter: 01:40:357 -
18:02 Harbyter: here?
18:04 pporse: that pattern is fine
18:05 Harbyter: k
18:06 Harbyter: 03:16:744 -
18:06 Harbyter: here?
18:06 Harbyter: i think here is awkward
18:07 pporse: 03:17:002 (197002|1,197002|0,197131|1,197131|0,197131|2,197260|2,197389|1,197389|2,197518|0,197518|1) - hmm
18:08 pporse: keep it? that pattern is okay for me
18:09 Harbyter: ok
18:09 pporse: 03:17:518 (197518|3,197518|5,197647|4,197647|6) - 03:17:906 (197906|2,197906|4,198035|1,198035|3) - but this notes
18:09 pporse: how about changing to jack pattern?
18:10 Harbyter: jack?
18:10 Harbyter: better?
18:10 Harbyter: oh for pitch
18:11 pporse: yea
18:13 Harbyter: mmmm
18:13 Harbyter: i have to reduce some chord
18:15 pporse: 03:30:680 - end - actually this part is really good.
18:15 Harbyter: http://puu.sh/iANbF/a8cb2bd7ab.jpg
18:16 Harbyter: what do you think
18:17 pporse: oh nice
18:17 Harbyter: removed mostly the note with 'legnata'
18:17 Harbyter: lol
18:18 pporse: 03:30:680 - end - using LN is nice
18:19 Harbyter: yes
18:19 Harbyter: change of stile
18:20 Harbyter: 04:09:002 (249002|3,249099|1,249196|5,249293|3) -
18:20 pporse: nice attempt
18:20 Harbyter: better change in ln to?
18:21 pporse: umm
18:21 pporse: keep it?
18:21 Harbyter: ok
18:21 pporse: current pattern is good for me
18:22 pporse: 04:16:357 (256357|6,256454|6,256454|5,256454|4) - orz my personal weaknees 2
18:22 Harbyter: oh
18:22 Harbyter: that jack
18:23 Harbyter: 04:17:131 -
18:23 Harbyter: here
18:23 Harbyter: i saw you missed lot here
18:23 Harbyter: this pattern is hard
18:23 Harbyter: any suggestion?
18:23 pporse: no keep it :3 it's good
18:24 pporse: actually when i played this part, my hands are tired lol
18:24 Harbyter: ok
18:24 pporse: 04:52:164 (292164|6,292164|4,292164|0) -
18:25 pporse: umm i think it's 1 or 2 chord enough
18:25 Harbyter: k
18:25 Harbyter: removed note 1
18:25 Harbyter: 04:52:164 (292164|6) - move in 3
18:26 pporse: ok
18:26 Harbyter: 04:52:357 (292357|2) - this in 4
18:26 Harbyter: 04:51:970 (291970|3) - this better in 11?
18:27 pporse: 11 lol
18:27 Harbyter: 1°
18:27 Harbyter: xD
18:27 pporse: both nice it's up to you
18:28 pporse: 05:11:325 - nice idea
18:29 pporse: 1/4 snap -> 1/2 snap -> 1/1 snap -> end lol
18:29 Harbyter: ah
18:29 Harbyter: eh
18:29 Harbyter: the music is like this
18:29 Harbyter: xD
18:30 pporse: really suited with the music
18:30 pporse: nice map :)
18:30 Harbyter: oky
18:30 Harbyter: any other things? o,o
18:31 pporse: no that's it :)
18:31 pporse: gogo ranked
18:31 Harbyter: ok
18:31 Harbyter: post the irc?
18:31 Harbyter: xD
18:31 Harbyter: ty for modderino u,u

nice song nice pattern
nice map

:)

ty for modderino porches :)
Niks
Nice map!
stryver12
furioso maratonia OwO

[4k]
00:31:067 - LN?
02:27:325 - I'm rather confused at this one... some are one notes, some are two... if you're following the melody, why not make it all doubles? It's Insane diff... anyway
04:18:680 - 04:20:099 triple note every 1/3s? for cymbal and kick
04:20:615 - repattern to jackhammers? (climax effect)
05:36:099 - 05:46:551 it's more silent compared to 05:23:712 - 05:35:906, it would be recommended to make 2 note per kick for 05:23:712 - 05:35:906 too
(I see only one mapped per kick....)

[7k]
00:31:067 - same as 4k
04:19:647 - you mapped the kick on 4k but not on 7k...
04:20:615 - same as 4k

ugh.... I suck at modding....
Topic Starter
Harbyter

stryver12 wrote:

furioso maratonia OwO

[4k]
00:31:067 - LN?
02:27:325 - I'm rather confused at this one... some are one notes, some are two... if you're following the melody, why not make it all doubles? It's Insane diff... anyway
04:18:680 - 04:20:099 triple note every 1/3s? for cymbal and kick
04:20:615 - repattern to jackhammers? (climax effect)
05:36:099 - 05:46:551 it's more silent compared to 05:23:712 - 05:35:906, it would be recommended to make 2 note per kick for 05:23:712 - 05:35:906 too
(I see only one mapped per kick....)

[7k]
00:31:067 - same as 4k
04:19:647 - you mapped the kick on 4k but not on 7k...
04:20:615 - same as 4k

ugh.... I suck at modding....


thank for you're effort to mod, i got you're point but it's hard to explain xD


°rearranging something°
Jinjin
Hey Harby~ sorry for taking so long ;-;

[4K furioso maratona]
00:03:583 (3583|1,3777|2,3970|0,4164|1) - If I were you, I'd strictly follow the pitch of the bell in the intro because it's the only thing getting mapped. Maybe like this http://puu.sh/j4QDN/62a0b67385.jpg

00:07:067 (7067|0,7260|1) - ctrl + G for the reason above

00:09:777 (9777|1,9970|2,10164|0,10357|1) - Same as 00:03:583

and etc. for pitch up to 00:14:035 - after this you don't have to follow pitch cuz multiple instrumentation

01:31:938 (91938|1) - pretty sure this is a ghost note :p

tbh everything else seems fine, really fun to play :D i love the lns close to the end too

[7k furioso maratona]
00:03:196 - i guess you can follow the pitch strictly like i told you to on 4k but now that i think about it you don't have to change it if you don't want to xD

01:25:260 - I have a feeling that the QATs will think these 1/4 notes are ghost notes.. but I guess you can explain haha

02:03:583 (123583|3,123777|3) - I think you can avoid the minijack here

03:27:325 (207325|0,207325|4,207325|1) - You should emphasize with more notes here like 03:26:809 (206809|4,206809|6,206809|2,206809|0,207067|4,207067|6,207067|0,207067|2) -

03:29:389 (209389|0,209454|1,209518|2) - It might be slightly easier to hit if this was reversed (ctrl+G)

03:30:228 (210228|1,210357|1,210486|1) - That seems a bit hard.. idk xp i guess you can keep it haha

overall, i think the patterns are fine ~

good luck on rank :3/ take some stars
Topic Starter
Harbyter

iJinjin wrote:

Hey Harby~ sorry for taking so long ;-;

[4K furioso maratona]
00:03:583 (3583|1,3777|2,3970|0,4164|1) - If I were you, I'd strictly follow the pitch of the bell in the intro because it's the only thing getting mapped. Maybe like this http://puu.sh/j4QDN/62a0b67385.jpg

00:07:067 (7067|0,7260|1) - ctrl + G for the reason above

00:09:777 (9777|1,9970|2,10164|0,10357|1) - Same as 00:03:583

and etc. for pitch up to 00:14:035 - after this you don't have to follow pitch cuz multiple instrumentation

01:31:938 (91938|1) - pretty sure this is a ghost note :p

tbh everything else seems fine, really fun to play :D i love the lns close to the end too

[7k furioso maratona]
00:03:196 - i guess you can follow the pitch strictly like i told you to on 4k but now that i think about it you don't have to change it if you don't want to xD

01:25:260 - I have a feeling that the QATs will think these 1/4 notes are ghost notes.. but I guess you can explain haha

02:03:583 (123583|3,123777|3) - I think you can avoid the minijack here

03:27:325 (207325|0,207325|4,207325|1) - You should emphasize with more notes here like 03:26:809 (206809|4,206809|6,206809|2,206809|0,207067|4,207067|6,207067|0,207067|2) -

03:29:389 (209389|0,209454|1,209518|2) - It might be slightly easier to hit if this was reversed (ctrl+G)

03:30:228 (210228|1,210357|1,210486|1) - That seems a bit hard.. idk xp i guess you can keep it haha

overall, i think the patterns are fine ~

good luck on rank :3/ take some stars

ty for modderino jin, applied some pr ,was lazy to do it xd and where you pointed out that there are ghost note they aren't cause there's a hat xD
Tidek
IRC mod on 4k diff.

SPOILER
00:03 Harbyter: wanna mod this
00:03 *Harbyter is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/725897 gmtn. (witch's slave) - furioso melodia]
00:03 Harbyter: vtw
00:03 Harbyter: blocko have to icon it
00:03 Harbyter: the 4k diff
00:04 Tidek: was playing it always for warm up
00:04 Tidek: :D
00:04 Tidek: let me do a fast check
00:04 Tidek: but testplay first
00:04 Harbyter: oh
00:04 Tidek: wasnt playing it after update
00:04 Harbyter: lol
00:04 Harbyter: oky
00:05 Tidek: but i will suck
00:05 Tidek: cant play for serious
00:05 Tidek: xD
00:05 Harbyter: np
00:11 Tidek: that fell
00:11 Harbyter: oh
00:11 Tidek: feel*
00:11 Harbyter: need to remap the end
00:11 Harbyter: forgot
00:11 Tidek: when i have to be quiet
00:11 Harbyter: wut feel
00:12 Harbyter: you can't smash hard?
00:12 Harbyter: xD
00:12 Tidek: im not alone in home xD
00:12 Tidek: and its night ;x
00:12 Harbyter: ay
00:12 Tidek: i saw one inconsistency part
00:12 Tidek: but will check in editor from beginning
00:15 Tidek: 00:34:938 -
00:15 Tidek: isnt here 1/6 or 1/8 or something?
00:15 Tidek: its strange, on 100% i can hear it, but on 25% i cant
00:15 Harbyter: no o,o
00:17 Tidek: 00:59:325 -
00:17 Tidek: what u thing about something minijacky here?
00:18 Tidek: that sound here is pretty unique
00:18 Tidek: think*
00:18 Harbyter: mmm
00:18 Harbyter: but is different
00:18 Harbyter: from the next note
00:18 Tidek: http://puu.sh/jfg6D/102269089a.jpg
00:19 Tidek: it wont break flow
00:19 Tidek: but yeah
00:19 Tidek: next sound is different
00:19 Tidek: as u want
00:19 Harbyter: mmm
00:19 Harbyter: 00:59:422 -
00:20 Harbyter: moved in 2
00:20 Harbyter: then next is the jack
00:20 Harbyter: in 3
00:20 Harbyter: xd
00:20 Tidek: ok, fine ;d
00:21 Tidek: 01:00:486 - rip column 1 xD
00:21 Harbyter: hehe
00:21 Harbyter: xD
00:21 Harbyter: but the feeling is great
00:21 Harbyter: xD
00:22 Tidek: move to 4? 01:13:260 (73260|2) -
00:23 Tidek: because of 01:16:357 -
00:23 Harbyter: oky
00:23 Harbyter: 01:22:744 (82744|3,82938|2) - ctrlj
00:23 Tidek: yeah
00:24 Tidek: wanted to point it out too
00:24 Tidek: 01:40:260 (100260|2,100260|1) -
00:24 Tidek: hmm
00:25 Tidek: that is weird
00:25 Tidek: for what is that chord?
00:25 Harbyter: random hat
00:25 Harbyter: xD
00:25 Harbyter: yea betetr remove
00:25 Harbyter: ahhaha
00:25 Tidek: 01:43:260 - add?
00:26 Harbyter: 1
00:27 Harbyter: 01:49:647 (109647|3,109696|2,109712|0,109744|1,109777|3,109793|2,109841|0,109841|1) -
00:27 Harbyter: what do you think
00:27 Harbyter: nice multiple synth
00:27 Harbyter: it's like a 1/12
00:28 Tidek: impossible to do it "legit"
00:28 Tidek: most ppl will just 12 34 trill it
00:28 Harbyter: ahhaha
00:28 Harbyter: mmm
00:29 Harbyter: i can 100% it
00:29 Harbyter: without the trill
00:29 Tidek: 02:11:712 - 02:14:809 -
00:29 Harbyter: the spacing is enought good to avoid the trill
00:29 Harbyter: and the bpm is low too
00:29 Tidek: very very strange consistency
00:29 Harbyter: so it's pretty easy to hit
00:29 Harbyter: oh
00:29 Harbyter: for the single
00:29 Harbyter: ?
00:30 Tidek: chord consistancy is pretty random here
00:30 Tidek: let me show u how i put jacks and chords here
00:30 Tidek: 1min
00:30 Harbyter: oky
00:37 Tidek: http://puu.sh/jfhq4/be464085dc.jpg
00:37 Tidek: something like this
00:38 Harbyter: http://puu.sh/jfhsn/0c7614506f.jpg
00:38 Harbyter: ive rearranged like this
00:38 Harbyter: lol
00:38 Harbyter: the clap that you can hear is only for the hitsound
00:39 Tidek: 02:12:486 - 02:13:260 - 02:13:647 -
00:39 Tidek: dont ignore those crashes here
00:39 Tidek: they deserve for 3chord
00:40 Harbyter: the clap?
00:40 Tidek: nah
00:40 Tidek: crash
00:40 Harbyter: ahhh
00:40 Harbyter: you missed here then
00:40 Harbyter: 02:11:712 -
00:41 Harbyter: dunno
00:41 Harbyter: i've ignored those cymbal too in the 7k
00:41 Tidek: it can be 2chord
00:41 Harbyter: cause those aren't so strong
00:41 Tidek: because there is no clap
00:41 Tidek: next ones are with clap
00:41 Harbyter: snare
00:41 Harbyter: piano
00:41 Harbyter: crash
00:42 Tidek: good that u rearranged this anyway
00:42 Tidek: old patterns was inconsistent
00:42 Tidek: pattern*
00:42 Harbyter: yup this one is more consistente
00:42 Tidek: 02:20:357 - missing note?
00:43 Harbyter: no
00:43 Harbyter: that sound isn't a snare?
00:43 Tidek: 02:27:196 - delete one? no crash here
00:43 Tidek: hmm
00:43 Harbyter: dunno what is that name
00:44 Tidek: here u added note 02:23:454 -
00:44 Harbyter: yup
00:44 Harbyter: if you listen is different
00:44 Harbyter: from that one
00:44 Tidek: a little
00:44 Tidek: very little
00:45 Tidek: as u want
00:45 Harbyter: 02:27:196 (147196|3) - remove
00:45 Harbyter: d
00:45 Tidek: 02:33:389 - quad?
00:45 Tidek: 02:34:938 - same
00:46 Tidek: not sure here 02:36:486 -
00:46 Harbyter: 02:34:809 - here too?
00:46 Tidek: its already dense
00:46 Harbyter: no
00:46 Harbyter: better avoid here
00:46 Harbyter: the quadruple
00:47 Tidek: 02:34:809 - nah, no quad here
00:47 Tidek: that crash isnt that strong
00:47 Harbyter: i'll add here
00:47 Harbyter: 02:33:389 -
00:47 Harbyter: 02:34:938 -
00:47 Harbyter: mmm
00:47 Harbyter: if i change here i have to rearrange the whole pattern
00:47 Harbyter: lol
00:48 Tidek: well u must
00:48 Tidek: if u want to keep consistancy
00:48 Tidek: 02:40:164 - ghost note? not sure
00:48 Harbyter: ok changed
00:48 Harbyter: xd
00:49 Harbyter: there's a sound
00:49 Harbyter: but at this point
00:49 Harbyter: i wanted to change the sv
00:49 Harbyter: and then removing the note
00:50 Tidek: 02:50:809 - that part
00:50 Tidek: meh
00:50 Tidek: is really dense
00:50 Tidek: and music isnt that intensive
00:50 Harbyter: isn't dense wut
00:50 Harbyter: o.o
00:51 Harbyter: the music
00:52 Harbyter: in the 7k i've spared the quadra jacks
00:52 Harbyter: due to the rating
00:52 Harbyter: xD
00:52 Harbyter: synth drum snare at those point
00:52 Harbyter: and calcolating that in this 1/3 section i've increased the consistency of the drums with 2 notes
00:52 Harbyter: is quite oky
00:53 Tidek: yeah i know for what u put it for
00:53 Tidek: but its really hard
00:53 Tidek: i was always breaking my fc here
00:53 Harbyter: yeah i know
00:53 Tidek: xD
00:53 Harbyter: i often miss there too
00:53 Harbyter: that was the best placement
00:53 Harbyter: that i could find
00:53 Harbyter: after testing testing and testing
00:54 Harbyter: lol
00:54 Tidek: i know
00:54 Tidek: pattern is the easiest possible
00:54 Tidek: except jacks
00:54 Tidek: but jacks wont fit here
00:54 Harbyter: can't be helped here for the jacks
00:54 Tidek: anyway 03:06:293 - quad
00:54 Harbyter: with the 3 chord
00:54 Harbyter: is impossible to avoid
00:55 Harbyter: k
00:56 Tidek: 03:26:035 - quad? not sure here
00:57 Harbyter: yes quadr
00:57 Harbyter: previous pattern is like this
00:57 Harbyter: but mmm
00:57 Harbyter: this pattern was really good
00:57 Harbyter: added 4
00:57 Harbyter: xd
00:58 Tidek: 03:54:873 - similar to my 1st suggestion
00:58 Tidek: something minijacky here?
00:58 Harbyter: mmm no
00:58 Harbyter: there are sv here
01:00 Tidek: ohh SVs
01:00 Tidek: i didnt even felt them
01:00 Harbyter: i know
01:00 Harbyter: my sv motto is readable ad fuck
01:00 Harbyter: even hidden player play those sv perfectly
01:00 Harbyter: xD
01:01 Harbyter: in other songs too
01:01 Harbyter: hahaha
01:01 Tidek: 04:01:454 - i feel like u should do a small chord trill for that beat
01:01 Tidek: but u have to remove that LN 04:01:454 (241454|0) -
01:02 Harbyter: mm no need
01:02 Harbyter: if you notice in the LN part
01:02 Harbyter: ignored the hat
01:02 Harbyter: so only 1 sound and is the drum
01:03 Harbyter: still have to put the hitsound at those point
01:03 Harbyter: way easier to understand
01:03 Tidek: k
01:03 Tidek: 04:34:164 - remove one?
01:04 Tidek: no crash
01:05 Harbyter: sure?
01:05 Tidek: yeah, i can hear only beat here
01:05 Tidek: its different than other parts
01:06 Harbyter: k
01:07 Tidek: 04:52:164 - remove 1? idk
01:07 Tidek: because 04:52:938 -
01:07 Harbyter: mmm
01:07 Harbyter: dunno
01:07 Harbyter: i think i'll keep it
01:08 Harbyter: for the feeling
01:08 Tidek: 05:04:551 - ?
01:08 Tidek: here is a single ln
01:08 Tidek: consistency rip
01:08 Harbyter: yes
01:08 Harbyter: just noticed now
01:08 Harbyter: i was cheking the last part
01:08 Harbyter: well then removing
01:08 Harbyter: xD
01:09 Tidek: that 12 34 12 trill is weird 05:14:615 -
01:09 Tidek: nvm
01:09 Harbyter: oh
01:09 Harbyter: don't check here
01:09 Harbyter: no need
01:09 Harbyter: have to remap here
01:10 Tidek: ok
01:10 Tidek: thats all then
01:10 Harbyter: i'll put a full 1/4 stream with chord
01:10 Harbyter: i think it suits good
01:10 Harbyter: for the end
01:10 Harbyter: otherside is a different pattern too
01:10 Harbyter: there aren't any long full stream in the song
01:10 Tidek: yeah
01:11 Tidek: its a technical map
01:11 Tidek: different patterns rhythm etc
01:11 Tidek: pretty hard to accuracy
01:11 Harbyter: yea
01:11 Harbyter: ok
01:11 Harbyter: you can post the IRC
01:11 Harbyter: xD
01:11 Tidek: probably will be on mwc in tie breaker
01:11 Tidek: ideal map

Take a star~ GL
Topic Starter
Harbyter
ty for the modderino tidek xD
Niks
offset 1648 -> 1643

good luck
i love this map :D
Topic Starter
Harbyter

Niks wrote:

offset 1648 -> 1643

good luck
i love this map :D


fixed thank you niks :) :) :)
puxtu
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Topic Starter
Harbyter
wut
[-CeMAqpOP-]kee
no easier diff for bad players
DDDx
Feerum
Harby when? q_q

I love this Song.
This Map is pretty good.

ahhhhh i want thiiiiis xD
MEGAtive
Hi Harby
Sorry for late mod
Mod req via PM in-game

gmtn. (witch's slave) - furioso melodia



Column
|1|2|3|4|

[General]
Hitsounds: Already good
Audio: 192kbps. Though there's some damaged bitrate because it's converted from 320kbps but it is fine.
Graphics: 1366x768
Metadata: Disable widescreen support on "4K furioso maratona"

[4K furioso maratona]
Mods
  1. 00:26:481 - You can add a note here to emphasize the piano grace here.
  2. I compared 00:35:707 - 00:38:804 - 00:41:901 - 00:44:997 - parts since they sounds similiar, but it seems that I can't understand the reasoning on the 1/4s. As an example, 00:35:997 - 00:39:094 - and 00:42:191 - they shares same ryhthm, but some parts are left empty. My thought right now is you're following the hats since that is the only instrument here that got 1/4s, but it's done inconsistently. Maybe you can refer the patterns on each part so it can be more consistent.
  3. 00:48:030 - IDK maybe it's just me but I find that this shield aren't that comfortable since it only give a 64ms respond time between releasing the LNs and pressing the next notes. Maybe you can end the LNs at 00:47:997 so it gives more respond time.
  4. 01:03:578 - 01:09:772 - I suggests you to switch the anchoring column here to |4|, letting 01:00:481 - 01:06:675 - to handle |1| anchor. Current pattern are so left-handed. Doing this spreads the pattern more so it's not really one-handed based.
  5. 01:21:772 - Try http://puu.sh/prbd8/49ed191f67.png ? It felt more comfortable to execute.
  6. 01:25:449 (85449|2,85546|1) - You can Ctrl+H this so column |3| wouldn't cluttered with more anchor. Applies with 01:31:642 (91642|1,91739|2) and same reasoning.
  7. 01:49:642 - Maybe you can try http://puu.sh/prKoh/759986d5bd.png since this pattern makes you to play 1/6 trill in left hand and 1/8 trill in right hand. But yeah you still can reject this if you don't want a 1/8 trill here.
  8. 02:13:901 - Maybe it's better to make this double. It sounds similiar with 02:13:642 instead with 02:14:030 -
  9. 02:51:965 - You can try http://puu.sh/prKVX/4c7d9f8f50.png so the vocal sample there are covered too.
  10. 05:11:320 - Maybe you can map this song until 05:48:288 . Nice as a cooldown part.

This is already good. Can't say much about this. Please approve. Good Luck~
Topic Starter
Harbyter

MEGAtive wrote:

Hi Harby
Sorry for late mod
Mod req via PM in-game

gmtn. (witch's slave) - furioso melodia



Column
|1|2|3|4|

[General]
Hitsounds: Already good
Audio: 192kbps. Though there's some damaged bitrate because it's converted from 320kbps but it is fine.
Graphics: 1366x768
Metadata: Disable widescreen support on "4K furioso maratona"

[4K furioso maratona]
Mods
  1. 00:26:481 - You can add a note here to emphasize the piano grace here. better no xD
  2. I compared 00:35:707 - 00:38:804 - 00:41:901 - 00:44:997 - parts since they sounds similiar, but it seems that I can't understand the reasoning on the 1/4s. As an example, 00:35:997 - 00:39:094 - and 00:42:191 - they shares same ryhthm, but some parts are left empty. My thought right now is you're following the hats since that is the only instrument here that got 1/4s, but it's done inconsistently. Maybe you can refer the patterns on each part so it can be more consistent.I know it is incosistent but i've mapped here my own rhytm , cause a repetitive 1/4 pattern would be boring here
  3. 00:48:030 - IDK maybe it's just me but I find that this shield aren't that comfortable since it only give a 64ms respond time between releasing the LNs and pressing the next notes. Maybe you can end the LNs at 00:47:997 so it gives more respond time.reducing the lenght of the LN is more unconfortable since you have to press and release it way faster
  4. 01:03:578 - 01:09:772 - I suggests you to switch the anchoring column here to |4|, letting 01:00:481 - 01:06:675 - to handle |1| anchor. Current pattern are so left-handed. Doing this spreads the pattern more so it's not really one-handed based.actally i've made the column 1 heavy on purpose , watching the hitsounds you should understand
  5. 01:21:772 - Try http://puu.sh/prbd8/49ed191f67.png ? It felt more comfortable to execute.ok
  6. 01:25:449 (85449|2,85546|1) - You can Ctrl+H this so column |3| wouldn't cluttered with more anchor. Applies with 01:31:642 (91642|1,91739|2) and same reasoning.ok
  7. 01:49:642 - Maybe you can try http://puu.sh/prKoh/759986d5bd.png since this pattern makes you to play 1/6 trill in left hand and 1/8 trill in right hand. But yeah you still can reject this if you don't want a 1/8 trill here.better no xD
  8. 02:13:901 - Maybe it's better to make this double. It sounds similiar with 02:13:642 instead with 02:14:030 - no change, actually at this point starts the heavy kicks
  9. 02:51:965 - You can try http://puu.sh/prKVX/4c7d9f8f50.png so the vocal sample there are covered too. adding that 1/4 will destroy the playability due to the SVs
  10. 05:11:320 - Maybe you can map this song until 05:48:288 . Nice as a cooldown part.prefer to end the song at this point, cause the remaining part is really boring

This is already good. Can't say much about this. Please approve. Good Luck~


ty for the mod :)
Aruel
Okay here I am.

7K furioso maratona

00:21:384 (21384|6,21481|5,21578|6,21772|6) - It's good for now but just for more playable a little a little bit. 00:21:772 (21772|6) - How about move it to 6? But it's fine to let be. So depend on you

00:23:707 (23707|4,23707|1,23901|6,23901|3) - This part will be great if you give some different without current pattern. Seems there has some different sounds. Let me example.

00:26:417 (26417|2,26417|0) - Similar reason with above. Seems this part can be change for more different feeling. Give some difference. 00:25:642 - ~ 00:26:223 - These are kinda unnatural in my opinion.

00:50:933 (50933|3) - Move it to 1, for more good balance. also if you feel column 4 is kinda empty, suggest to move some notes which are on col 1.2.3

00:53:513 - I have some playable issue on here, the hammer is not be a problem but my pointing it this. 00:53:610 (53610|3) - If you're a left spacebar hander, it's 100% uncomfortable that interlock with 00:53:417 - this pattern, actually I'm so now so. So I think this pattern is more good to go

00:57:255 (57255|1) - Actually it's personal opinion but it would be more good at hand balance if you move it to 1

01:39:191 (99191|1) - Move it to 3, seems 01:38:804 (98804|1,98997|1,99191|1,99384|1) - they don't need to be hammer.

01:43:449 - If you add some LN in here, it would be great for feel this map but depend on you

02:26:288 - To be honest I really want to add SV on here. Here's some suggestion about SV. (They're 1/12)
02:26:288 - 1.5x
02:26:384 - 0.5x
02:26:546 - 1.5x
02:26:642 - 0.5x
02:26:804 - 1.5x
02:26:901 - 0.5x
02:27:062 - 1x
Hope you try it

02:51:191 - I think here's need some improving. Hmm how about this?

03:20:481 (200481|3) - It's better to remove. Seems you focused on amount of notes but playable it more important in my opinion.

Let me check 4K later. please reply for it.
Topic Starter
Harbyter

Fresh Chicken wrote:

Okay here I am.

7K furioso maratona

00:21:384 (21384|6,21481|5,21578|6,21772|6) - It's good for now but just for more playable a little a little bit. 00:21:772 (21772|6) - How about move it to 6? But it's fine to let be. So depend on you

00:23:707 (23707|4,23707|1,23901|6,23901|3) - This part will be great if you give some different without current pattern. Seems there has some different sounds. Let me example.

00:26:417 (26417|2,26417|0) - Similar reason with above. Seems this part can be change for more different feeling. Give some difference. 00:25:642 - ~ 00:26:223 - These are kinda unnatural in my opinion.

00:50:933 (50933|3) - Move it to 1, for more good balance. also if you feel column 4 is kinda empty, suggest to move some notes which are on col 1.2.3

00:53:513 - I have some playable issue on here, the hammer is not be a problem but my pointing it this. 00:53:610 (53610|3) - If you're a left spacebar hander, it's 100% uncomfortable that interlock with 00:53:417 - this pattern, actually I'm so now so. So I think this pattern is more good to go

00:57:255 (57255|1) - Actually it's personal opinion but it would be more good at hand balance if you move it to 1

01:39:191 (99191|1) - Move it to 3, seems 01:38:804 (98804|1,98997|1,99191|1,99384|1) - they don't need to be hammer.

01:43:449 - If you add some LN in here, it would be great for feel this map but depend on you

02:26:288 - To be honest I really want to add SV on here. Here's some suggestion about SV. (They're 1/12)
02:26:288 - 1.5x
02:26:384 - 0.5x
02:26:546 - 1.5x
02:26:642 - 0.5x
02:26:804 - 1.5x
02:26:901 - 0.5x
02:27:062 - 1x
Hope you try it

02:51:191 - I think here's need some improving. Hmm how about this?

03:20:481 (200481|3) - It's better to remove. Seems you focused on amount of notes but playable it more important in my opinion.

Let me check 4K later. please reply for it.


ty for the check chicken, applied almost i think xd

just a little change of the formula for the sv
Aruel
Okay we have some IRC in Discord.

Nuked!

Bubbled!

Congratulation
Topic Starter
Harbyter

Fresh Chicken wrote:

Okay we have some IRC in Discord.

Nuked!

Bubbled!

Congratulation

thank you chicken woooo xD
Feerum
Nomination Check #2



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Hello Harbyter.
Sorry for the delay. Here is my check for your Map for the 2nd Bubble

General


Artist: Right
Title: Right
Source: Right
Tags: Right
AiMod: Right
Background: Right
BPM/Offset: Right
mp3/Hitsounds: Right
Other: -

4K furioso maratona

01:25:739 (85739|1) - Pretty sure this one is a ghost note. You also haven't mapped this in the 7K.
01:28:836 (88836|1) - Same this one like above.
01:31:933 (91933|1) - Same here.
04:49:255 (289255|3,289449|2) - Shouldn't this be only 1 LN?
I mean according to 04:49:642 (289642|0,290030|1,290417|0,290804|1) - :o
04:55:449 (295449|0,295642|1) - here too. Also in the 7K the same.

^This was more a snapping check through the whole diff, now to a balance and PR Part:

00:20:223 (20223|2,20223|0,20610|3,20610|1) - it would be cool to have them at the same column or at least one note at the same column since the melody has here the same PR.
00:22:933 (22933|0) - Maybe move this to 2 to have PR with 00:22:546 (22546|3,22739|2,23126|0) - (4-3-2-1) to the melody.
Since you also have here the PR up 00:23:513 (23513|0,23707|1,23901|2,24094|3) - with 1-2-3-4 :D

I can't find really more in the 4K. Well Mapped and absolute ready for Rank.


7K furioso maratona

00:53:417 - Pretty sure missing note, according to 00:52:836 -
02:08:707 (128707|1) - I am pretty sure this note should be better here: 02:08:513 - . The hihat is here pretty audible and i recommend to move it here because where the note is currently there is no real audible sound.
02:11:707 - Recommend to add here a note on 3. You have here a pretty high pitched cymbal like 02:13:255 - and 02:13:642 - and it could help to emphasize it. Also it seems me more consistent with the other 3-noted chords you have here c:

02:59:707 (179707|5,179707|1,179997|2,179997|4) - Notes and LN Endings are Wrong Snapped. They should be at a 1/3 beat here: 02:59:965 - . See as reference in the 4K Diff:

03:16:481 - Are you absolute sure you want to keep this heavy drum empty? In the 4K you have mapped it.

That's also all for the 7K, very nice (:

Call me baaacku c:
Topic Starter
Harbyter

Feerum wrote:

Nomination Check #2



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// means comments
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Hello Harbyter.
Sorry for the delay. Here is my check for your Map for the 2nd Bubble

4K furioso maratona

01:25:739 (85739|1) - Pretty sure this one is a ghost note. You also haven't mapped this in the 7K. oky
01:28:836 (88836|1) - Same this one like above. oky
01:31:933 (91933|1) - Same here. oky
04:49:255 (289255|3,289449|2) - Shouldn't this be only 1 LN? if you listen carefuly there are two piano pitch in 1/2
I mean according to 04:49:642 (289642|0,290030|1,290417|0,290804|1) - :o
04:55:449 (295449|0,295642|1) - here too. Also in the 7K the same. same here

^This was more a snapping check through the whole diff, now to a balance and PR Part:

00:20:223 (20223|2,20223|0,20610|3,20610|1) - it would be cool to have them at the same column or at least one note at the same column since the melody has here the same PR. oky
00:22:933 (22933|0) - Maybe move this to 2 to have PR with 00:22:546 (22546|3,22739|2,23126|0) - (4-3-2-1) to the melody.
Since you also have here the PR up 00:23:513 (23513|0,23707|1,23901|2,24094|3) - with 1-2-3-4 :D oky

I can't find really more in the 4K. Well Mapped and absolute ready for Rank.


7K furioso maratona

00:53:417 - Pretty sure missing note, according to 00:52:836 - ok
02:08:707 (128707|1) - I am pretty sure this note should be better here: 02:08:513 - . The hihat is here pretty audible and i recommend to move it here because where the note is currently there is no real audible sound.ok
02:11:707 - Recommend to add here a note on 3. You have here a pretty high pitched cymbal like 02:13:255 - and 02:13:642 - and it could help to emphasize it. Also it seems me more consistent with the other 3-noted chords you have here c:ok

02:59:707 (179707|5,179707|1,179997|2,179997|4) - Notes and LN Endings are Wrong Snapped. They should be at a 1/3 beat here: 02:59:965 - . See as reference in the 4K Diff: not bad

03:16:481 - Are you absolute sure you want to keep this heavy drum empty? In the 4K you have mapped it. changed

That's also all for the 7K, very nice (:

Call me baaacku c:


ty for the check lolirum :) :)
Feerum
Alright!
Re-Checked everything. Looks very cool

Bubbled #2

gogogo one of my fav songs almost there.
Topic Starter
Harbyter

Feerum wrote:

Alright!
Re-Checked everything. Looks very cool

Bubbled #2

gogogo one of my fav songs almost there.
naisuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu xDDD


thank you for the work man !
Kawawa
Hello, long friend! It's my turn now.
SV, Metadata, All General Confirmed.

[General]
※Audio Volume
50% → 25 ~ 30%.
players can feel just noise from "w" spam. I think It needs to be reduced as possible.

※Remove Bookmark on 7K diff.
It's not mean unranked issue.
It's used to separate the music part or something else.
but It has been unsnapped on section. It kinda bother to me a bit.
and It does not need. because unsnapped. http://puu.sh/qbOeD/9ad1190640.jpg

[4K furioso maratona]
I recommend you that avoid to jack at here 01:11:997 (71997|0,72094|0) -
There's a intention for impact. but you can consider once again.
I feel It difference of structure on this section 01:12:094 - with under 01:11:707 (71707|3,71804|1,71901|2,71997|0) -
Can consider with these 04:20:901 (260901|0,260997|2,260997|3) -

01:43:352 (103352|1) - What do you think? remove this one.
01:43:255 - 01:43:642 (103642|1) - Just follow these open hihat than close hihat 01:43:352 (103352|1) -
Sample :: https://puu.sh/qbnQA/3d205d327e.jpg

02:08:997 (128997|0) - move to 2. Just a suggestion. There is 4 hammer. 02:08:610 (128610|0,128804|0,128997|0,129191|0) -

02:11:707 - ~ 02:14:804 - https://puu.sh/qbpoe/51f0199bc7.jpg
What do you think about this. It's better for drum expression. personally.

02:37:255 (157255|2,157384|2) - move to 4.
If you can make same col to them 02:37:255 (157255|2,157255|0,157255|1,157384|1,157384|0,157384|2,157513|3,157513|0,157513|1) -
then It will be better to play for feeling.
as a example, you can could feel that same instrument from this ▽
02:36:481 (156481|2,156481|0,156481|1,156610|1,156610|0,156610|2,156739|0,156739|1,156739|2) -
like 03:27:578 - 03:28:352 -

04:40:255 - remove a note. 1chord used only from another same section.
compare with this like 01:31:352 - 04:27:868 -

[7K furioso maratona]
00:38:223 (38223|3,38417|3,38610|3) - Personally, It needs to be spread for place

00:43:546 (43546|2) - remove this. I could see that you kept the hihat notes with 4K mapset.
but this one was not only. http://puu.sh/qbKym/afd81a8fc3.jpg

00:50:804 - ~ 00:51:191 - what do you think about? Sample :: http://puu.sh/qbKBD/dae3afdf42.jpg

01:18:288 - ~ 01:19:062 - It can be comflex when player reads the pattern. Sample :: http://puu.sh/qbKWe/15de571971.jpg

01:31:062 - ~ 01:31:449 - Same with above, because you mixed the expression that synth instrument with drum.
Sample :: http://puu.sh/qbL8R/f627dda8b0.jpg

01:35:126 (95126|4) - move to 3(column 1/2/3/4/5/6/7)

01:45:191 - I know you wanted the notes consitency with 4K. but you can add a note at 6. It will be better pattern shape.

02:08:707 - Add a note. I could see that you used hihat sounds as patterns in this section 02:08:610 - ~ 02:11:707 -

02:30:159 (150159|4,150159|5,150159|6,150288|6,150288|5,150288|4) - can be spread more easily. Sample :: http://puu.sh/qbLzN/8d9840345d.jpg
There's a LN on right hand. It will be tricky a bit.

02:43:707 - ~ 02:44:223 - I think It can be improved something. Sample :: http://puu.sh/qbLKR/f6a7f706eb.jpg

02:51:062 (171062|2) - move to 1. keep the pattern structure with 02:50:675 (170675|6) -

03:15:062 (195062|6,195062|4,195126|5,195191|6,195191|4) - I really don't think these bursket patterns as expression for these music structure.
Sample :: http://puu.sh/qbLX3/013c30b524.jpg

03:23:191 - remove a note. when I compared with around crash section 03:23:320 - It feels weak than them.
yeah, I feel same chord with 03:23:062 (203062|2,203062|3,203062|4) - And you also kept them on your 4K diffs.

03:28:094 (208094|4) - Just a suggetion. move to 6. You can make 3hammers for better shape.

03:52:352 - Add a note or two. for cymbal sound. and It is 7K. don't need to ignore that.
03:53:126 - Same with above.
03:53:901 - Same with above. up to you.

04:11:804 (251804|1,251804|5,251901|6,251901|2,251997|0,251997|3) -
04:12:191 (252191|2,252191|6,252288|0,252288|3,252384|1,252384|4) -
This two section is different feeling to me. It can make as some difference. Sample :: http://puu.sh/qbMp9/45bfdcd49b.jpg

04:12:481 (252481|6) - use the LN. like 04:12:481 (252481|2) -
because I could see the two LNs for that instrument from under part. like 04:10:933 (250933|3,250933|4,251320|4,251320|0) -

04:15:481 (255481|0) - remove. It does not need for pattern structure. and you did not it on these section. 04:17:030 -

04:44:481 (284481|5,284546|4) - reverse the column. for readable easily. but you can keep If you want.

04:45:481 (285481|3) - move to 5. same reason with above.

04:56:804 (296804|2,296804|4) - I could not understand this two LN. I'm not sure about this If there is no intention. this one should be removed.

04:58:159 (298159|5,298159|6) - Same with above. I recommend you this Sample :: http://puu.sh/qbN04/dd808d7bd3.jpg

05:01:933 (301933|3) - move to 5.

05:02:030 - ~ 05:03:578 - About the this part.
I feel It's better. Sample :: http://puu.sh/qbN8C/81ec3aa4b6.jpg
because It is repeating structure 2times on each section. 05:02:030 - 05:02:417 - // 05:02:804 - 05:03:191 -
so you don't need to use the two stair pattern at here 05:02:707 - 05:03:481 -
because you used a 1 chords on them 05:02:320 (302320|3,303094|3) -

05:07:836 - ~ 05:08:223 - What do you think about? Sample :: http://puu.sh/qbNif/658119924e.jpg

when you applied these, call me anytime.
havi hovi!
Topic Starter
Harbyter

Kawawa wrote:

Hello, long friend! It's my turn now.
SV, Metadata, All General Confirmed.

[General]
※Audio Volume
50% → 25 ~ 30%.
players can feel just noise from "w" spam. I think It needs to be reduced as possible.

※Remove Bookmark on 7K diff.
It's not mean unranked issue.
It's used to separate the music part or something else.
but It has been unsnapped on section. It kinda bother to me a bit.
and It does not need. because unsnapped. http://puu.sh/qbOeD/9ad1190640.jpg

[4K furioso maratona]
I recommend you that avoid to jack at here 01:11:997 (71997|0,72094|0) -
There's a intention for impact. but you can consider once again.
I feel It difference of structure on this section 01:12:094 - with under 01:11:707 (71707|3,71804|1,71901|2,71997|0) -
Can consider with these 04:20:901 (260901|0,260997|2,260997|3) -

01:43:352 (103352|1) - What do you think? remove this one.
01:43:255 - 01:43:642 (103642|1) - Just follow these open hihat than close hihat 01:43:352 (103352|1) -
Sample :: https://puu.sh/qbnQA/3d205d327e.jpg

02:08:997 (128997|0) - move to 2. Just a suggestion. There is 4 hammer. 02:08:610 (128610|0,128804|0,128997|0,129191|0) -

02:11:707 - ~ 02:14:804 - https://puu.sh/qbpoe/51f0199bc7.jpg
What do you think about this. It's better for drum expression. personally.

02:37:255 (157255|2,157384|2) - move to 4.
If you can make same col to them 02:37:255 (157255|2,157255|0,157255|1,157384|1,157384|0,157384|2,157513|3,157513|0,157513|1) -
then It will be better to play for feeling.
as a example, you can could feel that same instrument from this ▽
02:36:481 (156481|2,156481|0,156481|1,156610|1,156610|0,156610|2,156739|0,156739|1,156739|2) -
like 03:27:578 - 03:28:352 -

04:40:255 - remove a note. 1chord used only from another same section.
compare with this like 01:31:352 - 04:27:868 -

[7K furioso maratona]
00:38:223 (38223|3,38417|3,38610|3) - Personally, It needs to be spread for place

00:43:546 (43546|2) - remove this. I could see that you kept the hihat notes with 4K mapset.
but this one was not only. http://puu.sh/qbKym/afd81a8fc3.jpg

00:50:804 - ~ 00:51:191 - what do you think about? Sample :: http://puu.sh/qbKBD/dae3afdf42.jpg

01:18:288 - ~ 01:19:062 - It can be comflex when player reads the pattern. Sample :: http://puu.sh/qbKWe/15de571971.jpg

01:31:062 - ~ 01:31:449 - Same with above, because you mixed the expression that synth instrument with drum.
Sample :: http://puu.sh/qbL8R/f627dda8b0.jpg

01:35:126 (95126|4) - move to 3(column 1/2/3/4/5/6/7)

01:45:191 - I know you wanted the notes consitency with 4K. but you can add a note at 6. It will be better pattern shape.

02:08:707 - Add a note. I could see that you used hihat sounds as patterns in this section 02:08:610 - ~ 02:11:707 -

02:30:159 (150159|4,150159|5,150159|6,150288|6,150288|5,150288|4) - can be spread more easily. Sample :: http://puu.sh/qbLzN/8d9840345d.jpg
There's a LN on right hand. It will be tricky a bit. made something differente

02:43:707 - ~ 02:44:223 - I think It can be improved something. Sample :: http://puu.sh/qbLKR/f6a7f706eb.jpg

02:51:062 (171062|2) - move to 1. keep the pattern structure with 02:50:675 (170675|6) -

03:15:062 (195062|6,195062|4,195126|5,195191|6,195191|4) - I really don't think these bursket patterns as expression for these music structure.
Sample :: http://puu.sh/qbLX3/013c30b524.jpg

03:23:191 - remove a note. when I compared with around crash section 03:23:320 - It feels weak than them.
yeah, I feel same chord with 03:23:062 (203062|2,203062|3,203062|4) - And you also kept them on your 4K diffs.

03:28:094 (208094|4) - Just a suggetion. move to 6. You can make 3hammers for better shape.

03:52:352 - Add a note or two. for cymbal sound. and It is 7K. don't need to ignore that.
03:53:126 - Same with above.
03:53:901 - Same with above. up to you.

04:11:804 (251804|1,251804|5,251901|6,251901|2,251997|0,251997|3) -
04:12:191 (252191|2,252191|6,252288|0,252288|3,252384|1,252384|4) -
This two section is different feeling to me. It can make as some difference. Sample :: http://puu.sh/qbMp9/45bfdcd49b.jpg

04:12:481 (252481|6) - use the LN. like 04:12:481 (252481|2) -
because I could see the two LNs for that instrument from under part. like 04:10:933 (250933|3,250933|4,251320|4,251320|0) -

04:15:481 (255481|0) - remove. It does not need for pattern structure. and you did not it on these section. 04:17:030 - keep,if you listen there is a synth in 1/4 here,it's different from the second part where there aren't any synth

04:44:481 (284481|5,284546|4) - reverse the column. for readable easily. but you can keep If you want.

04:45:481 (285481|3) - move to 5. same reason with above.

04:56:804 (296804|2,296804|4) - I could not understand this two LN. I'm not sure about this If there is no intention. this one should be removed. keep, want to keep the consistence of those double LN in the red lines here

04:58:159 (298159|5,298159|6) - Same with above. I recommend you this Sample :: http://puu.sh/qbN04/dd808d7bd3.jpg keep, one is for the synt ,LN with 'hit' sample and one is for the bell sound in the BG , the LN with ''w'' sample

05:01:933 (301933|3) - move to 5.

05:02:030 - ~ 05:03:578 - About the this part.
I feel It's better. Sample :: http://puu.sh/qbN8C/81ec3aa4b6.jpg
because It is repeating structure 2times on each section. 05:02:030 - 05:02:417 - // 05:02:804 - 05:03:191 -
so you don't need to use the two stair pattern at here 05:02:707 - 05:03:481 -
because you used a 1 chords on them 05:02:320 (302320|3,303094|3) -

05:07:836 - ~ 05:08:223 - What do you think about? Sample :: http://puu.sh/qbNif/658119924e.jpg

when you applied these, call me anytime.
havi hovi!


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Arzenvald
furryoso melodia ayy

throwback 1 year ago, w00t p00t
Topic Starter
Harbyter

ajeemaniz wrote:

furryoso melodia ayy

throwback 1 year ago, w00t p00t

le w00t p00t
Kawawa
Alright. Approved!

Congratz! dude.
Topic Starter
Harbyter
it's happening AYYYYYYY
Arzenvald

Harbyter wrote:

it's happening AYYYYYYY
sahuang
Now we have mania furioso
Gratz!
SpectorDG
huwa huwa harbaya congratz <3
erlinadewi-
wow... nice song!

Gratz Harby owo)b
puxtu
Kyousuke-

Harbyter wrote:

it's happening AYYYYYYY
big grats to you!!
awesome map =w=)b
Topic Starter
Harbyter

sahuang wrote:

Now we have mania furioso
Gratz!

SpectorDG wrote:

huwa huwa harbaya congratz <3

erlinadewi- wrote:

wow... nice song!

Gratz Harby owo)b

Kyousuke- wrote:

Harbyter wrote:

it's happening AYYYYYYY
big grats to you!!
awesome map =w=)b
thank you guys :) :)

puxtu wrote:

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