KawaEE wrote:
sorry, too late wwwwwfusioso maratong00:25:647 - ~ 00:26:422 - about, just feedback xD
00:47:325 (47325|0,47422|3,47518|6,47615|3) -
^idk this is a little weird.
00:47:325 - ~ 00:47:518 - if u r represented here as long note, it seems more better. ▽
for example
00:59:325 (59325|3,59422|4,59518|3,59615|4) - about
if you skip this, 00:59:422 (59422|4,59615|4) -
what do you think about it is to emphasize? this 00:59:325 - 00:59:518 - ▽
01:09:454 (69454|1,69518|2,69583|4,69583|1,69647|3,69712|4) - for smooth play? ▽
01:15:777 (75777|6,75841|5,75906|4) - move to one left(654)
01:35:518 (95518|4,95615|3,95712|4) - col change.
^ 01:35:518 (95518|4,95712|4) - move to col 4 01:35:615 (95615|3) - move to col 5
01:36:680 (96680|2) - move to 2
01:37:067 - ~ 01:37:647 - feedback? ▽
01:46:938 - hmmm add at 5?
01:46:647 (106647|1) - move to 4 and 01:46:744 (106744|0,106793|1,106841|2,106889|3) - move to one right?
02:35:325 (155325|1) - move to 1 for relevance? with 02:35:712 (155712|6) -
02:43:841 - ~ 02:44:228 - better string expression? ▽
03:02:293 (182293|1,182293|3,182422|1,182422|3) - about this.
^ if you do not use a this hammer, i think the quality would be better. of course personally xD
for example ▽
03:02:164 (182164|2,182293|3,182293|1) - = 02:55:970 (175970|3,176099|4,176099|2) - idk same beat.
03:08:486 (188486|1,188486|5,188615|5,188615|1) - ^same mod(03:02:293 (182293|1,182293|3,182422|1,182422|3) - about this)
for example ▽
03:08:486 (188486|2,188486|1,188486|5,188615|6,188615|1,188615|0,188615|5) - =
03:11:583 (191583|3,191583|4,191583|2,191712|0,191712|5,191712|1,191712|6) - idk same beat
03:30:551 (210551|6) - move to 6 and 03:30:680 (210680|5) - move to 3
04:14:809 (254809|1) - move to 1
04:15:002 (255002|0,255002|3,255002|5,255067|2,255067|4,255131|1,255131|3) - about,
^if you reduce chord amount, it may be a better pattern.
when i viewed a around note, there is only 2 chord. in string
for example
04:27:777 (267777|1,267777|2,267841|3) - col change?
^04:27:777 (267777|2,267777|1) - move to 3,4 and 04:27:841 (267841|3) - move to 2
04:34:357 (274357|1) - move to 1?
^ like relevance? ▽
just suggestion, u can add for emphasize.
04:43:454 - add at 2 / 04:44:228 - add at 6 / 04:45:002 - add at 1
05:10:986 (310986|1,311002|2,311035|3,311067|4,311083|5) - it seems 6+8 snap 8drum 6string.
^ i think it is better to unify only 8 or 6
but personally idk it's not a problem. just I'm, When only considering the playing and for better obvious expression
good Luk xD
I hope ranked! <3
thnk you kawa applied all
and rearranged some pattern xd