Tenseki wrote:

Hi, m4m request from pm
[General]
All notes look so lazy :C. I think you have to remap some parts for position
idk why all notes lazy to you... just...my mapping style bad XD
QAT이나 BN 한테 metadata 체크 모딩 해달라고 해보세요.
메타데이터는 이미 2015년도에 랭크된 여기서 가져왔기때문에 맞을거라고 생각합니다.
만일을 대비해서 뱃리퀘할때 한번더 확인해보겠습니다.

[Normal]
00:19:740 (2) - 오버맾, 드럼소리 없습니다. 보컬로 맞추셨다고 하셔도 이미 노말 자체를 드럼으로 노트를 찍으신 것 때문에 드럼에 계속 맞춰 주셔야합니다.
음 개인적으로 보컬따라가고 남는부분 드럼따라가는식으로했는데...
아마00:17:162 (4,5) - 이부분때문일거라 생각하니 걍 저길 수정하겠습니다.
00:34:740 (2,3) - 노말 유저들은 아직 스택 리딩력이 부족하기 때문에 추천드리지 않습니다.
스택 전부해제완료~

[Hard]
00:16:693 (3) - 블랭킷

00:19:037 (1,3) - 하드에서 슬라 꼬는거 저로선 그다지 추천드리고 싶지 않네요. 노말에서 하드로 넘어오는 하드유저들은 리딩이 힘듭니다
수정완료~
00:38:724 (3,4,5) - 들어보세요. 이렇게 찍는게 맞다고 생각하실거에요.
여기 배치할때 고민 많이했었는데 그부분을 정확히 들어보면 1/8리듬으로 00:39:134 - 여기배치하게됩니다.
그런 세세세한부분까지 잡으면 오히려 이상해지기도하고 이미 랭된맵 참고해가면서 저리듬 썻기에 그리고 스내어도 충분히
뒷받침되고있기에 이대로두겠습니다.
00:54:193 (1) - nc 뺴주세요
여기 1.1슬라변속 썻습니다. 이건 뱃한테 한번 의견구해보고 수정하겠습니다.
01:07:552 (1) - crush with hp-bar.png
사진보면 충분히 간격있고 스킨에따라 달라질지도모르겠는데 문제되면 수정하겠습니다.

01:17:630 (2,3) - 박자 오류 ctrl +g
01:18:802 (6) - ^ 그리고 스택을 아무 이유 없이 하면 안됩니다. 스택도 노래에 맞춰서 어울릴때 하셔야 합니다.
01:19:505 (2,3) - ^
보컬음의 높아지고 낮아지는걸 스택으로 01:16:693 - 01:17:630 (2) - 01:18:568 (5) - 01:19:505 - 캐치 하고 대칭만들어뒀고
이게더 맞다고 생각하니 이대로 두겠습니다.
01:39:193 (4,5) - 플레이 하기 좀 힘든 부분이 있네요. 그러니 디스턴스라도 맞춰 주세요.
리핏 늘리라해서 늘렸는데 지금보니 좀 아니네요 수정완료

[Insane]
00:11:537 (1,2) - 블랭킷 제대로 안되있네요
수정완료!
00:41:068 (6) - 내려가는 템포이므로 위치도 흐름에 맞게 아래쪽에 하는게 맞는듯합니다만
수정완료!
00:46:927 (5) - 3/4에 서클하나 배치가 거의 똑같으니 디스턴스에 맞게 스택
플레이 하는편에선 간격있는게 리딩하기 편하고 몇번 수정했었는데 이게맞다고 생각하여 이대로두겠습니다.
00:53:255 (5,6,7) - bpm이 낮지만 어찌됫든 연타가 있으니 DS를 1.8로 맞춰주시는게 플레이할때도 좋을것같네요
수정완료!
01:01:693 (4) - 모양 퀄리티가 약간 떨어져 보이네요. 흐름에 맞게 서클두개로 바꾸시는것도 괜찮다고 생각함
01:01:693 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 이렇게 대칭패턴입니다.
01:05:677 (1) - 모양 바꿔주시는게 퀄리티 면에서도 좋을듯 합니다
괜찮다고 생각하니 패스...
01:13:412 (1,2) - 직각을 굳이 쓸 필요가 있을까 저는 생각하네요
수정완료!
01:16:693 (6) -

이런식으로 해주시는것도 괜찮은듯

01:16:224 (5,6) - 대칭 1과의 흐름상으로 이게 더 좋다고 생각하기에 이대로 두겠습니다.
흐름에 맞게 01:17:162 (1,2,3) - 이부분도 모양과 배치를 바꿔주시면 퀄리티가 더욱더 높아질 듯 하네요
여기도 01:16:693 (6,1,2,3) - 이렇게 마름모꼴 그후01:17:630 (3,4,5) - 이렇게 각잡아둔거라...
01:23:138 (3) - 리딩이 힘들 것 같네요. 박자가 세지는 부분이니까 스택하지않고 바로 서클 주위에 배치하는것도 괜찮을 것 같네요
흐름에 맞게 01:23:372 (4) - 이부분도 알맞게 배치해 주세요
01:24:076 (3,4) - ^
음 이게 여기 의견 구할때마다 매번 여기저기 갈리는곳이였어서 스택하는것도 안하는것도 여러번 시도해봤고
최종적으로 이미 랭된맵에서 리듬 따오고 해서 결국 저렇게 하기로....
01:25:130 (2) - 앞의 슬라이더 테일에 스택해 주시는게 맞는 것 같네요

뒷부분의 같은 패턴의 박자는 스택되 있는데 한부분만 안되있는건 퀄리티가 떨어져보입니다.

01:27:005 (2) - 이부분은 박자에 맞게 1/2 슬라로 바꾸셔야합니다
01:27:474 (3,4) - ^ 위의 수정으로 일정한 디스턴스로 조정해주세요. 일정한 박자때문에 디스턴스를 서로 같게 해주시는게 좋습니다.
보컬음에따라 배치한거라 이대로 두겠습니다.
01:28:880 (3,4,5) - 1/2 슬라로 바꾸시는걸 추천합니다. 3/4 쪽에 박자가 있더라도 하울링인가 어찌됫든 그부분은 노트를 찍는것이 아니라고 들었습니다.
(보컬로 매핑하신거라면 상관은 없습니다만)
제매핑이 주로 보컬위주 매핑인...이대로 두겠습니다.
01:31:224 (3) - 디스턴스
01:27:474 (3,4,5,6) - 여기랑 비슷한 DS 사용했습니다.
01:39:193 (1) - del nc
이것도 긴가민가 했던 그냥 안전하게 빼겠습니다.수정완료!
That's all. GL

Keada wrote:

Hi There o3o/

This was impossible to mod D: for me its so good D:

only small things I found ;w;

Easy and Normal looked so good <3

• 
  

  Hard

1. 00:16:693 (3) - could curve this a liiiiiittle better to make the blanket right
   so i liiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiittle fixed XDD
2. 00:33:802 (5) - could move it to the side so its a triangle instead of overlap? bad example: http://puu.sh/hWhrj/c1f84de2f1.jpg
   fixed
3. 01:22:787 (5,3) - overlap ;w; dont know what to do here tho D:
   fixed
4. 01:31:458 (5,1) - Stack a little bit off[
   fixed

• 
  

  Insane

  ¨

1. 00:11:537 (1,2) - smaaaaall detail, could curve the one point in slider (the white one after the red) to make overlap perfect
   smaaaaall detail fixed
2. 00:26:537 (1,2,3,4) - small detail again but the stacking is a little bit off
   it's fine ?
3. 01:01:693 (4) - move a bit further away from 01:00:755 (2) - because overlap
   here only used 1.5 DS

Gad, so impossible to mod for me .-. oh well. Since my mod was so short+I love Log Horizon, Ill give you a star too :>


Good luck~

Keada wrote:

This was impossible to mod D: for me its so good D:

Adol Christin wrote:

placeholder.

Insane

1. 00:17:865 (3) - ctrl+g?
   ok fixed
2. 00:41:537 (1,2,3) - Recommemd you changing the rhythm into this, due to the bass sound. Your current triplet (slider tail) starts with (covers) a significant beat (i.e. 00:42:005 - ), which is weird for me.
   SPOILER

   
   
   iit's fine to me
3. 00:54:662 (1,2) - I'll suggest you change the rhythm of your objects into this, base on the bass sound.
   SPOILER

   
   thanks suggest but i dont want that
4. 01:09:662 (1,2) - same
   %
5. 01:04:037 (1,3) - Making these 2 sliders symmetry would look better.
   i already tried but that's make boring
6. 00:30:990 (2) - 00:35:912 (1) - Suggest you add the drum sound on the slidertick. (pm me if you dunno how to do this)

Really enjoyable and relaxing Insane diff with an awesome song. gj~

i dont want that XD

Hard

1. 00:01:693 (4) - Imo a polygon slider is more suitable here than a blanket, since the previous and next sliders are both polygon type.
   i think if's fine
2. 00:15:287 (1) - I thing this direction would be better.
   SPOILER

   
   no i think that flow over
3. 00:18:099 (6) - Try this:
   SPOILER

   
   ok fixed
4. 01:07:552 (1,2,3,4) - (just a complain) I didn't FC in my first play cuz of this....... damn
   XD it's fine
5. Consider changing the slider tick rate into 2 and add custom hitsound for slidertick between 00:26:537 - and 00:37:787-
   i did it but some body dont want it so i all removed
6. 00:33:802 (5) - clap

Solid Hard diff with distance snap.

Normal

1. 00:30:287 (1,2,3) - Duplicate the rhythm of 00:32:162 (4,5,6) - . Do you think the hitsound here is weird if you force the stuffs perfectly following vocal
   fixed

Dunno how to mod Normal sorry, but your Normal is really nice.

Keada wrote:

This was impossible to mod D: for me its so good D:

That's all my mod. Go go rank it. gl~

Tarrasky wrote:

Hi

General

In Hard and Insane, you can finish the break in 00:07:787 -, for me sounds better
I reeeeeeeeeeeeally recommend you finish the first kiai in 01:05:912 -, for me it sounds much better
thanks advice but that's make unrankable all mapset(ignore GD) nesseary use same Kiai time
and i will followed braketime so i want emphasis vocal

Easy

01:15:287 (3,4) - i think you can improfe this distance drom 0,9x, moving 01:16:224 (4) - from x:131 y:25 or something
ok fixed
01:16:224 (4) - maybe you can remap slider 2/1 like 01:26:537 (3) - and 01:30:287 (3) -
but i dont want that
amazing map ^^

Normal

00:35:912 (4) - map until 00:36:380 - and add a circle in 00:36:615 - maybe, for me the sound gets better
ok fixed
Hard

01:31:458 (5,1) - nazi stack
it's fine

Map very well done and with star, nothing missing in Insane, I dont think this needed more non-bn mods
Good luck and congrats ^^

thanks your mod D

SLMmix wrote:

Hi~ from pm request.



Easy

SPOILER

이렇게 생긴 블랭킷을 좀 많이 썼다는 느낌이 적잖아 있는데 조금 줄여보시는건?
그 외엔 전부 괜찮은듯
00:22:787 (1,2,3) - 이렇게 이미 대칭써서... 그대칭부분도 00:20:912 (2,1) - 이렇게 담요...이므로 패스!


Normal

00:23:490 (2,3,4) - 얘네들이 빨간틱에 놓여있고, 전부 단타라서 (+거기다 낮은 AR) 노말플레이어에겐 헷갈릴 것 같은데 슬라이더를 써보는건 어떨까요? 예를들면

음 보컬음 강조하고싶어서 저렇게 넣었는데 이거 뱃리퀘때 한번 물어보고 결정하겠습니다.
00:50:912 (1) - 약간 튀어 나왔다는 느낌이 있는데

SPOILER

maybe move to x 32 y 256?
수정완료!
01:22:318 (2) - 시계 방향으로 1도 돌려서(ctrl+shift+R)

SPOILER

move to x 488 y 112
수정완료!
01:28:412 (1) - 이 슬라이더가 끝날때 보컬이 '나-' 거리고 그다음 반복 슬라이더가 오는데 개인적으로 약간 이상한 것 같아요. (지극히 개인적)
앞의 01:24:662 (1,2,3,4) 나 뒤의 01:32:162 (1,2,3) 랑 비슷하게 바꿔보는건 어떨까요?
이건 같게하면 지루해질까봐 일부러 각자다 다른리듬썻습니다. 고로 패스



Hard

01:40:130 (1) - 하드난이돈데 굳이 DS를 지킬 필요가..? 인세인처럼 화면 정중앙에 놔두면 더 좋을것 같아요.
그래도 괜찮은데 문제는 하드난이도 전체적으로 DS를 지켜주서 저기만 다르게놓기는 어색...


Insane

01:27:474 (3,4) - DS consistency? 간격 일정하게 하시거나 아니면 음이 '레 파 (낮은)라 도'로 흘러가니

SPOILER

이런식으로 간격을 점점 줄이는거 추천
01:28:177 (6,3) - 여기 스택 패턴 그리고 01:31:224 (3,4,5,6) - 여기 같은 DS 음이커지는걸 점프로 잡아뒀



음.. 맵이 매우 괜찮아서 딱히 모딩할만한게 별로 없네요ㅠㅠ
저퀄모딩이라 죄송합니다. 초보한테 이런맵 맡기시면 곤란합니다
Good Luck!

1. 01:07:552 (1,2,3,4) - Difficult to read
2. This difficulty really needs a tone down in 1/4, in fact the first kiai has more triplets than the insane... I'd recommend only having a few only in kiais, it's a fairly easy fix however, just delete some stacks to make them 1/2

1. I think this could have a few less 1/2 rhythms, 01:09:662 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - density is a bit harsh here
2. 01:09:662 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^

1. 01:07:552 (1,2,3,4) - Flow could be better:
   

   232,48,67552,6,0,B|217:23|217:23|360:39,1,173.999994689942,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   356,144,68255,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   408,236,68490,2,0,P|508:259|458:168,1,260.999992034912,2|8,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
   356,144,69427,1,4,0:3:0:0:

2. 01:31:458 (5,1) - slider end not perfectly stacked with 5.

1. 00:41:537 (1,2,3) - This is the only pattern you use from this part of the music. Try moving 00:42:122 (2,3) a blue tick later and stack these notes with 00:42:474 (4). You may have to redo 00:41:537 (1) if you decide to follow this suggestion. o3o
2. 00:57:005 (2,3) - Eh? Weird pattern. Please redo pattern o3o
3. 01:09:193 (1) - I'm not a huge fan of 3/4 ghost slider ends, since it doesn't go with anything in the music.

BeatofIke wrote:

[Hard]

1. 01:07:552 (1,2,3,4) - Flow could be better:
   

   232,48,67552,6,0,B|217:23|217:23|360:39,1,173.999994689942,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   356,144,68255,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   408,236,68490,2,0,P|508:259|458:168,1,260.999992034912,2|8,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
   356,144,69427,1,4,0:3:0:0:

   already fixed XD thanks!
2. 01:31:458 (5,1) - slider end not perfectly stacked with 5.
   oops :X

[Insane]

1. 00:41:537 (1,2,3) - This is the only pattern you use from this part of the music. Try moving 00:42:122 (2,3) a blue tick later and stack these notes with 00:42:474 (4). You may have to redo 00:41:537 (1) if you decide to follow this suggestion. o3o
   i think it's fine to me
2. 00:57:005 (2,3) - Eh? Weird pattern. Please redo pattern o3o
   ok fixed o3o
3. 01:09:193 (1) - I'm not a huge fan of 3/4 ghost slider ends, since it doesn't go with anything in the music.
   i already tried that

sheela901 wrote:

Hello Taeyang, sorry for the late mod. Reason: school.
wow thanks sheela! to your mod

General

1. I think the offset would need to be shifted to 297 (+ 10ms). The current feels early. Please change it after the mod to not conflict some objects I do not want to point.
   this map source here https://osu.ppy.sh/s/286851 and that already ranked map it's really more fine?

Normal

1. 00:18:099 (5) - What about extending this slider to the upbeat (00:18:568 - )? It would follow the piano and I don't think the circle is necessary there.
   fixed
2. 00:30:287 to 00:31:693 - I would maybe try this rhythm below so it could hit the drum to fill up the hitsounds instead of skipping it. Plus the current rhythm played weirdly to me.
   fixed
   
   SPOILER

   

Hard

1. 00:42:357 (3) - The circle on the blue tick doesn't sound fitting with the rhythm. Although it follows the vocals, I suggest you move it to 00:42:240 .
   fixed
2. 01:27:357 (4) - Similar case to the previous point. I think putting it on 01:27:240 is fine.
   fixed

Insane

1. 00:11:537 to 00:25:599 - What if this section has a slider velocity slowed down, like 0.80x? It would fit perfectly with the music because in the the music, it feels more calm, so more slow.
   good idea but i dont want SV here
2. 00:11:537 (1,2,3,4) - The distance between them needs in my opinion reduced like 00:17:162 (1,2,3) . It feels correct and it would fit with the music, like in the previous suggestion.
   um but i dont want that i followed vocal and make jumps
3. 00:17:865 (3,4) - I'd change the rhythm into something that 00:18:099 will have a clickable object since the piano gets strong there. The tail doesn't fit to me, so try this rhythm instead:
   fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   The pattern is just giving you ideas because I suck at making patterns...

Alright, poke me back for a recheck and do not forget to change the offset.

1. 01:23:138 (3,4)
2. 01:24:076 (3,4)

sukiNathan wrote:

yoyo

On Insane:
I would change up the rhythms on these so that the clickable objects aren't on blue ticks (repeat and 1/4 slider)
Even if it is correct emphasis it's quite difficult to comprehend and play correctly

1. 01:23:138 (3,4)
2. 01:24:076 (3,4)

coooool

sukiNathan wrote:

you don't have to get a rebubble when you self-pop from the next nominator's mod :C

anyways here you go