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- Ly0572 -
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Julie
Here you gooo~ :3
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[General]

Shouldn't your timing point start here 00:00:562 - instead? Because your piano and snare aren't at a stanza @.@. Example : should have a big white tick here 00:40:247 - , 00:55:365 - , 01:10:483 - (probably also the reason why you have a hard time ending your kiai xD)
After don't forget to snap all your object, should be easy because there no 1/6 on your map ^^.

Your kiai isn't consistent, EZ don't have the same end kiai as NM and HD. You end kiai really is random if you ask me xD. EZ is on the middle of the stream 01:10:011 - . I suggest kiai end here 01:10:483 - for all your difficulty, because that's where the song become more relax after the cymbal sound.

[EZ]

00:07:530 (7530|2) - I think you wanted to put here instead 00:07:530 (7530|2) - lolol, probably moved by accident, and suggest keeping your LN as long as the NM and HD difficulty :3

00:22:058 (22058|1,22530|1,23003|1) - This really don't feel good to play for beginner, match to much different instrument at the same time ><. I really suggest still keeping it on drum and put them on white stick instead and don't jack them as well.

00:40:247 - to 00:53:475 - This part feel as hard as the part before, while in other difficulty you make it easier, because they song is actually really relax here. Try less note, instead of nearly the same number of note as NM and HD.
My suggestion, just map the piano that mean here 00:40:247 - , 00:42:137 - , 00:44:027 - , 00:47:806 - , 00:49:696 - and 00:51:586 -

01:00:562 (60562|1,61034|1,61507|1,61979|1,62452|1) - All on 2nd column? they all have different drum sound ;w;

01:09:420 (69420|1,69538|2) - Only part with 01:24:538 (84538|0,84775|3) - that is 1/4 mini stream here on EZ. Might be hard for beginner. Delete this 01:09:420 (69420|1) - ?

01:17:570 - no more 2 note here from the way you're mapping? To be honnest, I'd rather suggest more note here 01:18:042 - , it should have more impact due to the cymbal sound

01:21:349 - ^

01:24:538 (84538|0,84775|3) - reason at 1:09:420 (69420|1,69538|2) -.

[NM]

00:03:633 - add a note? keep it consistent with this 00:01:743 (1743|1,2688|2) - ? :D

00:07:176 - add a note or LN, continue the instrument sound, since you map it all before :3.

00:20:877 (20877|2) - Not sure if you still want to keep this LN, since the instrument sound start here 00:20:995 - on a blue stick ;w;

00:23:003 (23003|1) - Change to LN and 00:24:420 - add LN here, keep it consistent

00:38:121 - no more triple stream like here 00:32:452 (32452|3,32570|2,32688|1,34342|0,34460|1,34578|3,36231|0,36349|1,36467|2) - .

00:39:066 - and 00:39:184 - add a note for a triple stream? The song isn't the same while you mostly just put note on white stick. xD

01:08:593 (68593|3,68830|0) - and 01:01:034 (61034|0,61034|1,61271|0,61271|1) - look at these 2 guitar part, one have more note then the other.

01:09:066 (69066|2,69302|2) - Don't jack this, different instrument sound xD

01:18:515 (78515|0,78515|3,78987|0,78987|3) - different drum, don't put them the same column

01:21:822 (81822|0,81822|1,82294|0,82294|1) - ^

01:23:712 (83712|2,83712|3,83948|3,83948|2,84184|2,84184|3) - ^, also you didn't jack them in HD xD. If you really want a jack here, just jack these 01:23:948 (83948|2,83948|3,84184|2,84184|3) - , this one 01:23:712 (83712|2,83712|3) - have different drum.

01:24:775 (84775|3) - move to 01:24:656 - for the drum. Also the stream drum start here 01:24:893 - instead of here 01:24:775 - .

01:25:601 - lower the sound to 30%? Instrument in the song suddendly soooooo loww because is the end~ xD


[HD]

00:01:034 - to 00:04:105 - is the same in the song, I'm not asking doing the same pattern, but at least do the same rhythmn? xD It feel a bit confusing.
Ok let's get into detail, I hope you like reading huehuehue~
1. Take a look at this 00:01:625 (1625|1,1743|0) - and this 00:02:570 (2570|1,2688|2) - , it has the same sound here 00:03:515 - but you didn't map it xD
2. 00:01:743 (1743|0,1743|3) - Why 2 notes here? Usually when you have bass, you put 2 notes, but there isn't here. And look at here 00:00:798 - , here 00:02:688 - and here 00:03:633 - , there is only 1 single note, and is all on the same sound of the music :3.
3. 00:02:334 - You didn't map here, but you did add a note here 00:01:389 - , here 00:03:279 - and here 00:04:223 - . They all have the same sound :3.

00:07:176 - and 00:07:412 - no more LN? your LN was for this instrument, try keep it consistent :3

00:21:113 (21113|0,21113|3) - Hmm? Why 2 notes and same column like here 00:20:877 (20877|0,20877|3) - ? Instrument here pretty low, just hear one low drum sound here xD.

00:21:349 - LN like you did in NM?

00:23:003 - Should be an LN like 00:22:767 (22767|0) - to continue the instrument you're matching~.

00:25:129 - Wahh don't stop here~ instrument still continue~~ Add one note here 00:25:247 - and here 00:25:365 - . This part 00:25:483 - is the part that have no new instrument sound at all~.

00:25:838 (25838|1,25838|3) - Not sure why 2 notes again, same instrument sound as here 00:26:310 (26310|2) - . If is for vocal, this part 00:26:310 - is more important but only have 1 notes. Is your choice, I suggest keep it consistent ^^.

00:27:491 - No more 2 notes here for the bass? xD

00:28:436 - Map this, important drum sound + vocal~

00:30:090 - Another important sound like here 00:30:562 (30562|0,30562|2) - , and also don't know why there suddendly a 1/1 break here. Feel like losing some rhythmn~

00:31:153 (31153|3) - delete no new instrument sound?

00:37:767 (37767|0) - ^

00:40:247 - uwahh suddendly SV 1x -> 0.5x, really feel a huge difference in speed. Is good to lower for the relax part, but try not lowering to much out of nowhere, player won't have that "relax feeling" xD.

00:45:916 - to 00:47:334 - 2 notes each side might feel a bit too much, The song here is really calm~ Can feel there is a lots of notes here xD.

00:55:365 - add more note? Don't be scare addint more then 2 notes~ Mostly when this is your hardest level XD. There was no cymbal sound till now~ add more note for more impact! Also because it feel the same as these 00:55:838 (55838|3,55838|0,56310|0,56310|3,56782|0,56782|3,57255|0,57255|3) - 2 notes and same column ;w;.

01:02:924 - Should have more then 2 notes here because of the drum sound~

01:10:365 - move one of the note here 01:10:483 - , this part should have more impact due to the cymbal. While here 01:10:365 - is the same drum stream 01:09:656 - to 01:10:365 -, so keep all the stream consistent with one note :3.

01:15:444 - move one note to 01:15:680 - , because your usually doing 2 note for this 01:15:680 - drum sound.

01:16:389 (76389|3,76625|3,76861|3) - Hmm suddendly 3 jack? I'm pretty sure this happen because of the lack of space, probably want to fix this, all different sound shouldn't be on same column.

01:25:601 - lower the sound to 30%? Instrument in the song suddendly soooooo loww because is the end~ xD

GL with the mapset :3!!
Topic Starter
- Ly0572 -

Julie wrote:

Here you gooo~ :3
1|2|3|4

[General]

Shouldn't your timing point start here 00:00:562 - instead? Because your piano and snare aren't at a stanza @.@. Example : should have a big white tick here 00:40:247 - , 00:55:365 - , 01:10:483 - (probably also the reason why you have a hard time ending your kiai xD)
After don't forget to snap all your object, should be easy because there no 1/6 on your map ^^.

Your kiai isn't consistent, EZ don't have the same end kiai as NM and HD. You end kiai really is random if you ask me xD. EZ is on the middle of the stream 01:10:011 - . I suggest kiai end here 01:10:483 - for all your difficulty, because that's where the song become more relax after the cymbal sound.

[EZ]

00:07:530 (7530|2) - I think you wanted to put here instead 00:07:530 (7530|2) - lolol, probably moved by accident, and suggest keeping your LN as long as the NM and HD difficulty :3

00:22:058 (22058|1,22530|1,23003|1) - This really don't feel good to play for beginner, match to much different instrument at the same time ><. I really suggest still keeping it on drum and put them on white stick instead and don't jack them as well.

00:40:247 - to 00:53:475 - This part feel as hard as the part before, while in other difficulty you make it easier, because they song is actually really relax here. Try less note, instead of nearly the same number of note as NM and HD.
My suggestion, just map the piano that mean here 00:40:247 - , 00:42:137 - , 00:44:027 - , 00:47:806 - , 00:49:696 - and 00:51:586 -

01:00:562 (60562|1,61034|1,61507|1,61979|1,62452|1) - All on 2nd column? they all have different drum sound ;w;

01:09:420 (69420|1,69538|2) - Only part with 01:24:538 (84538|0,84775|3) - that is 1/4 mini stream here on EZ. Might be hard for beginner. Delete this 01:09:420 (69420|1) - ?

01:17:570 - no more 2 note here from the way you're mapping? To be honnest, I'd rather suggest more note here 01:18:042 - , it should have more impact due to the cymbal sound

01:21:349 - ^

01:24:538 (84538|0,84775|3) - reason at 1:09:420 (69420|1,69538|2) -.

[NM]

00:03:633 - add a note? keep it consistent with this 00:01:743 (1743|1,2688|2) - ? :D

00:07:176 - add a note or LN, continue the instrument sound, since you map it all before :3.

00:20:877 (20877|2) - Not sure if you still want to keep this LN, since the instrument sound start here 00:20:995 - on a blue stick ;w;

00:23:003 (23003|1) - Change to LN and 00:24:420 - add LN here, keep it consistent

00:38:121 - no more triple stream like here 00:32:452 (32452|3,32570|2,32688|1,34342|0,34460|1,34578|3,36231|0,36349|1,36467|2) - .

00:39:066 - and 00:39:184 - add a note for a triple stream? The song isn't the same while you mostly just put note on white stick. xD

01:08:593 (68593|3,68830|0) - and 01:01:034 (61034|0,61034|1,61271|0,61271|1) - look at these 2 guitar part, one have more note then the other.

01:09:066 (69066|2,69302|2) - Don't jack this, different instrument sound xD

01:18:515 (78515|0,78515|3,78987|0,78987|3) - different drum, don't put them the same column

01:21:822 (81822|0,81822|1,82294|0,82294|1) - ^

01:23:712 (83712|2,83712|3,83948|3,83948|2,84184|2,84184|3) - ^, also you didn't jack them in HD xD. If you really want a jack here, just jack these 01:23:948 (83948|2,83948|3,84184|2,84184|3) - , this one 01:23:712 (83712|2,83712|3) - have different drum.

01:24:775 (84775|3) - move to 01:24:656 - for the drum. Also the stream drum start here 01:24:893 - instead of here 01:24:775 - .

01:25:601 - lower the sound to 30%? Instrument in the song suddendly soooooo loww because is the end~ xD


[HD]

00:01:034 - to 00:04:105 - is the same in the song, I'm not asking doing the same pattern, but at least do the same rhythmn? xD It feel a bit confusing.
Ok let's get into detail, I hope you like reading huehuehue~
1. Take a look at this 00:01:625 (1625|1,1743|0) - and this 00:02:570 (2570|1,2688|2) - , it has the same sound here 00:03:515 - but you didn't map it xD
2. 00:01:743 (1743|0,1743|3) - Why 2 notes here? Usually when you have bass, you put 2 notes, but there isn't here. And look at here 00:00:798 - , here 00:02:688 - and here 00:03:633 - , there is only 1 single note, and is all on the same sound of the music :3.
3. 00:02:334 - You didn't map here, but you did add a note here 00:01:389 - , here 00:03:279 - and here 00:04:223 - . They all have the same sound :3.

00:07:176 - and 00:07:412 - no more LN? your LN was for this instrument, try keep it consistent :3

00:21:113 (21113|0,21113|3) - Hmm? Why 2 notes and same column like here 00:20:877 (20877|0,20877|3) - ? Instrument here pretty low, just hear one low drum sound here xD.

00:21:349 - LN like you did in NM?

00:23:003 - Should be an LN like 00:22:767 (22767|0) - to continue the instrument you're matching~.

00:25:129 - Wahh don't stop here~ instrument still continue~~ Add one note here 00:25:247 - and here 00:25:365 - . This part 00:25:483 - is the part that have no new instrument sound at all~.

00:25:838 (25838|1,25838|3) - Not sure why 2 notes again, same instrument sound as here 00:26:310 (26310|2) - . If is for vocal, this part 00:26:310 - is more important but only have 1 notes. Is your choice, I suggest keep it consistent ^^.

00:27:491 - No more 2 notes here for the bass? xD

00:28:436 - Map this, important drum sound + vocal~

00:30:090 - Another important sound like here 00:30:562 (30562|0,30562|2) - , and also don't know why there suddendly a 1/1 break here. Feel like losing some rhythmn~

00:31:153 (31153|3) - delete no new instrument sound?

00:37:767 (37767|0) - ^

00:40:247 - uwahh suddendly SV 1x -> 0.5x, really feel a huge difference in speed. Is good to lower for the relax part, but try not lowering to much out of nowhere, player won't have that "relax feeling" xD.

00:45:916 - to 00:47:334 - 2 notes each side might feel a bit too much, The song here is really calm~ Can feel there is a lots of notes here xD.

00:55:365 - add more note? Don't be scare addint more then 2 notes~ Mostly when this is your hardest level XD. There was no cymbal sound till now~ add more note for more impact! Also because it feel the same as these 00:55:838 (55838|3,55838|0,56310|0,56310|3,56782|0,56782|3,57255|0,57255|3) - 2 notes and same column ;w;.

01:02:924 - Should have more then 2 notes here because of the drum sound~

01:10:365 - move one of the note here 01:10:483 - , this part should have more impact due to the cymbal. While here 01:10:365 - is the same drum stream 01:09:656 - to 01:10:365 -, so keep all the stream consistent with one note :3.

01:15:444 - move one note to 01:15:680 - , because your usually doing 2 note for this 01:15:680 - drum sound.

01:16:389 (76389|3,76625|3,76861|3) - Hmm suddendly 3 jack? I'm pretty sure this happen because of the lack of space, probably want to fix this, all different sound shouldn't be on same column.

01:25:601 - lower the sound to 30%? Instrument in the song suddendly soooooo loww because is the end~ xD

GL with the mapset :3!!
thanks :D
Hestia-
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[EZ]
Basically I think melody should be mapped more.
00:00:680 - Add 3
00:01:034 (1034|0) - Remove
00:01:153 - Add 1
00:01:389 - Add 4
00:01:507 (1507|2) - Remove
00:01:625 - Add 2
00:01:743 - Add 1
00:01:979 (1979|3) - Remove
00:02:097 - Add 3
00:02:334 - Add 2
00:02:452 (2452|0) - Remove
00:02:570 - Add 3
00:02:688 - Add 1
00:02:924 (2924|3) - Remove
00:03:042 - Add 4
00:03:279 - Add 3
00:03:397 (3397|2) - Remove
00:03:515 - Add 2
00:03:633 - Add 1
00:03:869 (3869|0) - Remove
00:03:987 - Add 1
00:04:223 - Add 2
00:04:342 (4342|2) - Remove; Add LN to 4
00:04:814 (4814|3,4814|0) - Remove
00:05:286 (5286|1) - Remove
00:05:523 - Add 2
00:05:759 (5759|2) - Remove; Add LN to 4
00:05:995 - Add LN to 1
00:06:231 (6231|3,6231|0) - Remove
00:06:704 (6704|2) - Remove
00:06:940 - Add LN to 2
00:07:176 (7176|3,7176|0) - Remove; Add LN to 3
00:07:412 - 00:07:649 - Add LN to 1
00:07:530 (7530|2) - Remove
00:07:767 - 00:08:003 - Add LN to 4
00:13:790 (13790|0) - Move to 3
00:13:908 - Add 2
00:14:027 - Add 1
00:14:381 - Add 3
00:14:617 - Add 4
00:14:735 (14735|2) - Remove
00:14:853 - Add 3
00:14:971 - Add 2
00:15:326 - Add 2
00:15:562 - Add 1
00:15:680 (15680|1) - Remove
00:15:798 - Add 4
00:15:916 - Add 3
00:16:271 - Add 2
00:16:507 - Add 3
00:16:625 (16625|1) - Remove
00:16:743 - Add 4
00:16:861 - Add 3
00:17:097 - Add 2
00:17:216 - Add 1
00:17:334 (17334|3) - Move to 3
00:17:570 (17570|1) - Move to 4
00:18:279 - Add 3
00:18:515 (18515|2) - Remove
00:19:223 - Add 1
00:20:168 - Add 2
00:20:405 (20405|1) - Move to 3
00:20:641 (20641|3) - Move to 2
00:20:877 (20877|0) - Remove
00:20:995 - Add 4
00:21:822 (21822|3) - Remove
00:22:058 - Add 1
00:22:294 (22294|2) - Remove
00:22:530 - Add 4
00:22:767 (22767|3) - Move to 2
00:23:003 - Add 4
00:23:948 - Add 1
00:24:420 - Add 3
00:24:656 (24656|0) - Remove
00:24:775 - Add 2
After this is ok.
[NM]
00:01:034 (1034|0) - Remove
00:01:153 - Add 1
00:01:389 - Add 2
00:01:507 (1507|0) - Remove
00:01:625 - Add 1
00:01:979 (1979|0) - Remove
00:02:097 - Add 1
00:02:334 - Add 2
00:02:452 (2452|1) - Remove
00:02:570 - Add 3
00:02:688 (2688|2) - Move to 2
00:02:924 (2924|1) - Remove
00:03:042 - Add 2
00:03:279 - Add 2
00:03:515 - Add 3
00:03:987 - Add 2
00:04:223 - Add 1
00:05:050 (5050|3) - Remove
00:05:286 - Add 4
00:05:523 (5523|1) - Make this LN half as long
00:07:412 (7412|0) - Change to LN
00:07:649 - Add 2
00:13:908 - Add 3
00:14:027 (14027|2) - Move to 2
00:14:263 (14263|1) - Remove
00:14:381 - Add 2
00:14:617 - Add 1
00:14:853 - Add 2
00:14:971 - Add 4
00:15:326 - Add 2
00:15:562 - Add 1
00:15:798 - Add 3
00:15:916 - Add 2
00:16:271 - Add 3
00:16:507 - Add 1
00:16:743 - Add 4
00:16:861 - Add 3
00:17:216 - Add 2
00:18:279 - Add LN to 4
00:18:987 (18987|1) - Move to 4
00:19:223 (19223|3) - Move to 2
00:20:168 - Add LN to 1
00:20:995 - Add LN to 3
00:21:349 (21349|2) - Move to 4
00:21:704 - Add note to 1
00:21:822 (21822|1) - Remove
00:21:940 - Add 1
00:22:058 (22058|0) - Move to 2
00:22:294 (22294|1) - Remove
00:24:656 (24656|0) - Remove
00:24:775 - Add LN to 1
00:39:420 - Add 4
00:39:538 - Add 3
00:40:247 - Change SV from .5 to .75
00:45:444 (45444|1) - Remove
[HD]
00:00:326 (326|0) - Change to normal note
00:00:562 - Add 1
00:01:034 (1034|0) - Move to 2
00:01:153 - Add 1
00:01:389 - Add 4
00:01:861 - Add 3
00:02:097 - Add 3
00:02:334 - Add 1
00:02:806 - Add 2
00:03:042 - Add 3
00:03:279 - Add 2
00:03:633 (3633|3) - Remove
00:03:751 - Add 2
00:03:869 (3869|1) - Move to 4
00:03:987 - Add 2
00:06:940 - Add LN to 3
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