hi from Q, sorry for long wait .-.
glglgl hope this help :T
Little Girl
00:04:913 (3,4,5) - this looks a bitt messy (for me) so make them a line straight or rotate it from the line straight or smth https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6414464
00:06:439 (2,3,1) - suggestion (so it looks more organized *imo*) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6414485
00:24:246 (10,3) - stack these properly
00:31:029 (5,6,7,8) - suggestion > http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6414503 and then stack the end of 00:32:047 (9) - with the 6 (also move these 00:32:725 (1,3) - to stack xd)
00:37:474 (10,1) - slidershape of 00:38:152 (1) - is supposed to completly blanket on 00:37:474 (10) - ?? http://prntscr.com/cz86a7 isnt perfect, but if this is on porpuse then ignore this :p
00:41:205 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - why spacing is short while here 00:39:509 (7,8,9,10) - its huge? should be equal or at least add more spacing @ 00:41:205 (2,3,4,5,6,7) -
00:52:567 (5,6) - reduce its shapcing
00:55:789 (1,7) - stack these and then move the 00:57:146 (1) - a bit down to avoid overlap?
00:56:976 (8) - for this.. I suggest something > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6414559
01:21:058 (13) - move this to 297/73?
01:20:210 (9) - nc?
01:28:180 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think spacing here its too short, compared to the previouse kiai, this part was more spaced
01:55:145 (4) - make this 2 stacked circles?
01:56:501 (4,4) - ^ (don't really need to change if you like the sliders but I think adding the stacked circles on these would add a bit more variety to the sliders and its more fun imo
02:26:349 (7,8,9,10,1) - move this whole thing like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6414586 to avoid overlap
02:46:699 (7) - this circle shouldnt be stacked since it has the clap sound, so I recommend to move it to the sliderend? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6414595
glglgl hope this help :T