Hihi, sorry for the massive delay lol.
Generalsoft-hitfinish.wav and soft-hitfinish2.wav have more than a 5ms delay on their hitsound, so you need to remove those first 5 seconds. If you don't know how, let me know.
Little Girl00:02:200 (4,5,1) - Visually, they could be spaced evenly.
00:20:602 - Is this break intentional?
00:35:443 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Not relaly sure what you are following here. Every circle lands on a sound yes, but they all folllow different layers, like the drum, the synth, etc... can you pick one instrument and follow that? For example, you could follow the sound on 00:36:121 (5,6) - and make 00:36:630 - clickable instead, (would involve ctrl+G'ing the rhythm of 00:36:291 (6,7) - )
00:42:905 (4) - I would make this a 1/2 slider and put a circle on 00:43:245 - , maybe even a jump? Emphasize the kick here cuz its going into the chorus
00:48:672 (7,8,9,10) - Sounds rather overmapped for me xP. I don't hear 1/4's
01:15:470 (4) - How about making this two circles for the extra kick on 01:15:639 - ?
01:18:862 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same as earlier about am ambiguous rhythm that doesn't follow any particular instrument/layer.
01:24:629 (3,5) - space them further? 3 and 5 are unnecesarily close together and it makes it look kinda squashed together.
01:26:325 (5) - Same about making this a 1/2 slider and adding a circle at the end for the kick.
01:32:091 (7,8,9,10) - Same about the streams.
01:47:695 (2,5) - I would swap them so you can get that blanket pattern with 1 and 2.
02:06:182 (1) - Don't map the downbeat to a repeat xP. Make this circle then 1/2 slider beginning on downbeat. This rh ythm si not good
02:33:150 (3,2) - Does this really need to overlap? xP, Makes the map look less clean,
02:41:630 (1,2,3,4) - Don't reuse the exact same sliders like this xP its really hard to read. At least do a half overlap or something.
Insane00:46:637 (2,3,4,5,6) - The pattern felt a bit disjointed. Try something more structured by integrating the slider-end of slider 1 into the pattern? Like this:
00:52:573 (5) - Put this more evenly between 2 and 3 for a cleaner pattern,.
00:56:050 (2) - Triplet sounds really overmapped here.
00:56:728 (5) - ^Same here you can just delete it and it'd play perfectly fine.
01:31:074 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Oh, this is a really cool jump pattern.
01:39:384 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same about overmapped triplets.
01:42:098 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Cool
01:50:578 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - I don't think streams are appropriate imo. The sound being produced here fits better with repeat sliders. You could try a 1/8 buzz slider if you like, but streams just, ehh no.
02:33:658 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Etc... overmapped triplets.
02:41:291 (13) - You could NC this for emphasis if you want.
Really good diff. Lots of interesting jump patterns.
Hard00:33:407 (3,4,1,2) - Visually, spacing them a bit more would prevent these really tiny overlaps. Theyre like a bit too close atm. Like, if you look at the negative space between the sliders' borders, you can see its a lot smaller than stuff like 00:35:443 (1,2,3) - .
00:38:835 (3,4,1) - This triangle slider pattern just seems a bit off. The negative space between them is different. I would just redo the pattern.
00:42:227 (1,1) - Are these supposed to be stacked?
00:54:439 (1,3) - Stacks are kinda off,.
00:58:848 (2,3,4) - Visual pattern can be more consistent.
02:14:493 (4) - I would NC here cuz the sounds here are quite different from the ones in the previous 3 circles
Normal00:47:654 (3,4) - Stuff like this, i think just a circle is enough. If you make them all 1/2 sliders, it makes the notes on 00:48:333 (5) - feel less exceptional.
00:59:188 (5) - Here, 1/2 slider is better for the kick at 00:59:357 -
01:31:074 (4,5,6) - Same as earlier.
01:37:179 (4) - And same as earlier.
02:19:411 - Did you want to put a spinner here? I noticed you added a spinner here on other diffs. You can add it on Normal too if you want, and end it on 02:20:599 - . There's enough recovery room.
02:25:348 (4,5,6) - Same as earlier
02:31:454 (5) - Good!
02:46:379 (2) - 1/2 slider is better for the same reasons as earlier.
02:46:888 - Slider here? clicking on 02:47:057 (4) - is quite awkward cuz its the beat after the vocal.
Easy01:24:629 (1) - I don't think a spinner is good here. You end up sacrificing being able to begin the next chorus on the downbeat (where its supposed to begin). I would really recommend just mapping this part out.
01:29:717 (1) - I'm really not understanding why there needs to be a gap here... Its quite inconsistent with your other choruses.
02:47:057 (3) - Same complaint as Normal. There is no beat on the white tick actually, its on the red tick. Since its the final object, you can consider making 02:46:718 (2) - a 1/2 slider instead.
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Impressive set. You can call me back for your bubble once you've replied to the mod. Oh also, do you have metadata source?