moddu
GL00:01:415 (6,1) - i dont think you should be ignoring those strong beats, id put a note on the red tick
00:03:215 (2,3,4) - this spacing is kinda cramped, why not space it out more?
00:04:115 (1,2,3,4) - ^
i dont get why you leave 00:13:115 (9,10,11,12) - spaced with ds when you space them out every other time ( 00:15:515 (9,10,11,12) - 00:16:715 (9,10,11,12) - 00:17:915 (9,10,11,12) - etc.)
00:30:515 (1) - i dont really understand the triple to repeating slider switchoff, really inconsistent and pretty random
00:36:215 (6) - should be a triple/repeating slider
00:37:415 (6) - ^
00:37:715 (1,2) - should be slider
00:38:615 (5) - should be triple
00:40:115 (1) - this section is very lazily mapped. i dont understand why you didnt map this like the last section, which is pretty much the same music as this one. you're ignoring rhythms and beats that should be complimented
00:49:715 (1) - REALLY ignoring the drums, and causes a very anticlimactic pause, especially since the music is so energetic at this point
01:24:515 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - this jumpstream pattern doesnt make much sense, i cant hear what youre trying to compliment
01:49:715 (1) - why is this whole section all streams? its skipping over a ton of rhythms and is pretty overmapped. what really bugs me though is that you mapped all the other rhythms out in the second half of the kiai 01:59:315 (1) - , even though its the same exact music as the last half
02:13:415 (4,5,6,7) - should be a triple
02:29:915 (3,4,1) - really weird spacing, and a huge lack of emphasis, id space out the last slider more
02:34:190 (1) - this spinner is really short and doesnt make a lot of sense, why not map out the actual drum fill instead of ignoring it?
02:35:315 (1) - same as what i said in point 10
03:04:115 (1) - same as what i said about the last kiai
03:51:715 (2,1) - really weird spacing, why not space it out like you spaced out 03:51:140 (2,1) - ?
03:54:115 (2,1) - ^
04:08:015 (3,4,1) - makes no sense at all, youre completely ignoring the guitar, especially in the solo
04:23:015 (13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I love how you stacked this <3
04:25:415 (10,1) - weird spacing, space it out like you did between 04:25:115 (9,10) -
04:26:615 (10,1) - ^
04:37:565 (15,16,1,2,3) - aaa i love these
06:05:390 (1,1) - i seriously dont understand the logic behind these spinners at all, same as the points before with the spinners
06:43:115 (2) - would be cool if you made some slider to go with the last guitar chord till the end
Nice song, but I dont think this can get ranked without a remap. There is many parts where you guys completely ignore rhythms and the map has little to no emphasis whatsoever. Almost all the spacing is completely equal and it makes for quite a stale map. But, for newer mappers, your stream shapes are pretty impressive, keep it up!
00:03:215 (2,3,4) - this spacing is kinda cramped, why not space it out more?
00:04:115 (1,2,3,4) - ^
i dont get why you leave 00:13:115 (9,10,11,12) - spaced with ds when you space them out every other time ( 00:15:515 (9,10,11,12) - 00:16:715 (9,10,11,12) - 00:17:915 (9,10,11,12) - etc.)
00:30:515 (1) - i dont really understand the triple to repeating slider switchoff, really inconsistent and pretty random
00:36:215 (6) - should be a triple/repeating slider
00:37:415 (6) - ^
00:37:715 (1,2) - should be slider
00:38:615 (5) - should be triple
00:40:115 (1) - this section is very lazily mapped. i dont understand why you didnt map this like the last section, which is pretty much the same music as this one. you're ignoring rhythms and beats that should be complimented
00:49:715 (1) - REALLY ignoring the drums, and causes a very anticlimactic pause, especially since the music is so energetic at this point
01:24:515 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - this jumpstream pattern doesnt make much sense, i cant hear what youre trying to compliment
01:49:715 (1) - why is this whole section all streams? its skipping over a ton of rhythms and is pretty overmapped. what really bugs me though is that you mapped all the other rhythms out in the second half of the kiai 01:59:315 (1) - , even though its the same exact music as the last half
02:13:415 (4,5,6,7) - should be a triple
02:29:915 (3,4,1) - really weird spacing, and a huge lack of emphasis, id space out the last slider more
02:34:190 (1) - this spinner is really short and doesnt make a lot of sense, why not map out the actual drum fill instead of ignoring it?
02:35:315 (1) - same as what i said in point 10
03:04:115 (1) - same as what i said about the last kiai
03:51:715 (2,1) - really weird spacing, why not space it out like you spaced out 03:51:140 (2,1) - ?
03:54:115 (2,1) - ^
04:08:015 (3,4,1) - makes no sense at all, youre completely ignoring the guitar, especially in the solo
04:23:015 (13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I love how you stacked this <3
04:25:415 (10,1) - weird spacing, space it out like you did between 04:25:115 (9,10) -
04:26:615 (10,1) - ^
04:37:565 (15,16,1,2,3) - aaa i love these
06:05:390 (1,1) - i seriously dont understand the logic behind these spinners at all, same as the points before with the spinners
06:43:115 (2) - would be cool if you made some slider to go with the last guitar chord till the end
Nice song, but I dont think this can get ranked without a remap. There is many parts where you guys completely ignore rhythms and the map has little to no emphasis whatsoever. Almost all the spacing is completely equal and it makes for quite a stale map. But, for newer mappers, your stream shapes are pretty impressive, keep it up!