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Dailycare
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Dailycare
#modreqs

[Insane]
*00:19:490 (3,4) and some 3/4s.. - i can't find any reasons to make spacing.. could you explain your intentions?
*01:41:990 (5) - 01:45:323 (6) - 03:00:323 (6) - 03:03:656 (6) - Setting NC would be better imo
*03:16:365 (5) - Did you forget putting Normal sampleset on head?
*03:47:823 (3,4) - it seems a bit close compared with previous parts. So consider increasing the distance

[TicClick's Hard]
There're many DSs for 3/4s.. 1.1, 1.0, even 0.9. So, I hope you standardize the DS except some parts you intend

this is kinda flexible diff. pretty cool

[Collab Hard]
*00:36:990 (4) - NC?

[Normal]
*00:40:323 (3) - DS

nothing much to say.. I sincerely hope this mapset will be ranked
Seikatu
333 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
Seikatu
Dailycare

Dailycare wrote:

#modreqs

[Insane]
*00:19:490 (3,4) and some 3/4s.. - i can't find any reasons to make spacing.. can you explain your intentions? I can't explain this, because i was mapped more than year ago and i don't know what was i thinking back then. But also, i don't want to change them, cuz those spacings are somewhat consistent through the map.
*01:41:990 (5) - 01:45:323 (6) - 03:00:323 (6) - 03:03:656 (6) - Setting NC would be better imo Yeah, sure
*03:16:365 (5) - Did you forget putting Normal sampleset on head? Nope
*03:47:823 (3,4) - it seems a bit close compared with previous parts. So consider increasing the distance Done

[Collab Hard]
*00:36:990 (4) - NC? Yep

[Normal]
*00:40:323 (3) - DS Yeeep

nothing much to say.. I sincerely hope this mapset will be ranked

Thanks!
TicClick
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TicClick
Убери ticcl!ck из тэгов.

[Insane]
Стримы плохо слышно, советую сделать так, как у меня, это либо нормалхиты с нарастанием, либо просто не очень громкие (по сравнению с окружением) нормалхиты.
  1. 00:08:656 (1,2) - ноту между слайдерами (и второй урезать), потому что у тебя такие ритмы позже начинаются
  2. 00:35:323 (1,2) - https://tc.s-ul.eu/lMUbsgyV.png?
  3. 01:26:156 (2) - стрим начни с белого тика
  4. 01:28:240 (4,1) - не хватает места, заодно от чуть запутывающего спейсинга можешь избавиться
  5. 02:28:656 (1) - я бы отсюда и до 02:31:990 вернул бы киаи, и на коллабе тоже
  6. 02:52:406 (3) - мне кажется, что одна нота будет более уместной
[TicCl!ck's Hard]
Я сначала хотел попросить поставить финиш кое-куда, но потом нашёл ещё пару ляпов. https://tc.s-ul.eu/ia6vSn1q.osu https://tc.s-ul.eu/n9ooXxnD.osu

[Collab Hard]
Я рекомендую вам пересмотреть все части, возможно, стоит расставить нормалхиты на синие тики около тех мест, где они должны появляться на белых. Просто они то пропадают, то возвращаются, и не очень комфортно ждать, как бы предсказывать сэмпл при прослушивании, но при этом ошибаться. Кроме того, слайдеры типа 03:06:990 (1) звучат пусто, никак.

Имена: https://tc.s-ul.eu/G6foT9vE.zip
Код куда-нибудь под Events
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 F,0,229923,230323,1,0

Kyubey
  1. 00:31:156 (3,4,5,6) - из-за автостека тут оверлап
  2. 00:59:490 (3,1) - такая петля имеет право на жизнь, но если (сначала написал как елси, подзадумался) она выровняется, будет лучше
  3. 01:10:323 (1) - сделай прямым для парности
  4. 01:44:490 (3) - финиш на конце слишком шумит
  5. 02:36:156 (2) - должен быть продлён до синего тика
  6. 03:14:490 (3,4,5,6) - опять автостек
  7. 03:36:990 (1) - есть что-то неправильное и в том, как он наклонён, и в том, что он закрывает начало киаи
Seikatu
  1. 00:43:031 (5) - замени на ноту + слайдер (оставь его там же, просто удали повтор, мне кажется, хорошо выйдет)
  2. 01:25:323 - возможно, отодвинуть перерыв сюда будет хорошей идеей, раз ты там ничего не поставил (а может, поставишь?)
  3. 02:08:656 (1) - лучше выгни в другую сторону
  4. 02:53:448 (4,5) - свистки потеряны?
  5. 04:06:365 (2), 04:09:698 (2) и 04:13:031 (2) можно удалить, а можно и не удалять
[Normal]
  1. 00:12:823 (2,3,4) - сомнительная идея со стеком
  2. 00:14:490 (4) - хочется нк
Kyubey
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Kyubey
TicClick
[Collab Hard]
Я рекомендую вам пересмотреть все части, возможно, стоит расставить нормалхиты на синие тики около тех мест, где они должны появляться на белых. Просто они то пропадают, то возвращаются, и не очень комфортно ждать, как бы предсказывать сэмпл при прослушивании, но при этом ошибаться. Кроме того, слайдеры типа 03:06:990 (1) звучат пусто, никак. хитсаунды оставлю сейкату. слайдеры... поправлю несколько, все изменять не хочется, ибо скучно будет

Kyubey
  1. 00:31:156 (3,4,5,6) - из-за автостека тут оверлап поправил
  2. 00:59:490 (3,1) - такая петля имеет право на жизнь, но если (сначала написал как елси, подзадумался) она выровняется, будет лучше сделал
  3. 01:10:323 (1) - сделай прямым для парности ладно
  4. 01:44:490 (3) - финиш на конце слишком шумит надо сейкату сказать
  5. 02:36:156 (2) - должен быть продлён до синего тика продлил
  6. 03:14:490 (3,4,5,6) - опять автостек подвинул
  7. 03:36:990 (1) - есть что-то неправильное и в том, как он наклонён, и в том, что он закрывает начало киаи разве? а мне нравится, как он концом стартует киай тут. да и с наклоном ничего лучше придумать не могу, и этот устраивает
Спасибо!
https://qb.s-ul.eu/zeqnFeUK.txt

Сейкату, тут сообщают, что 01:44:490 (3) - финиш на конце слишком шумит, хитсаунды твои, разбирайся сам. А ещё я там несколько слайдеров поменял, возможно, стоит скопировать заново всё, хоть я на их белые биты, где надо, нормалхиты и поставил.
Seikatu
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Topic Starter
Seikatu
Тик

TicClick wrote:

Убери ticcl!ck из тэгов.

[Insane]
Стримы плохо слышно, советую сделать так, как у меня, это либо нормалхиты с нарастанием, либо просто не очень громкие (по сравнению с окружением) нормалхиты. Я даже не знаю, идея с нормал хитами не не особо нравится, а просто прибавлять громкость это уже слишком. Потом посмотрю что можно сделать.
  1. 00:08:656 (1,2) - ноту между слайдерами (и второй урезать), потому что у тебя такие ритмы позже начинаются Ай
  2. 00:35:323 (1,2) - https://tc.s-ul.eu/lMUbsgyV.png? Ага
  3. 01:26:156 (2) - стрим начни с белого тика Ага
  4. 01:28:240 (4,1) - не хватает места, заодно от чуть запутывающего спейсинга можешь избавиться Отодвинул и спейсинг чуть поменял
  5. 02:28:656 (1) - я бы отсюда и до 02:31:990 вернул бы киаи, и на коллабе тоже Сделал
  6. 02:52:406 (3) - мне кажется, что одна нота будет более уместной Ай
[Collab Hard]
Я рекомендую вам пересмотреть все части, возможно, стоит расставить нормалхиты на синие тики около тех мест, где они должны появляться на белых. Просто они то пропадают, то возвращаются, и не очень комфортно ждать, как бы предсказывать сэмпл при прослушивании, но при этом ошибаться. Кроме того, слайдеры типа 03:06:990 (1) звучат пусто, никак. Пусть останется как есть, по моему оно и так вполне себе работает, а ставить хс на синие тики из-за того что нельзя поставить не белый это такое.

Seikatu
  1. 00:43:031 (5) - замени на ноту + слайдер (оставь его там же, просто удали повтор, мне кажется, хорошо выйдет) Нарушится спейсинг, а стакать с началом я не хочу :(
  2. 01:25:323 - возможно, отодвинуть перерыв сюда будет хорошей идеей, раз ты там ничего не поставил (а может, поставишь?) Отодвину
  3. 02:08:656 (1) - лучше выгни в другую сторону Выгнул
  4. 02:53:448 (4,5) - свистки потеряны?
  5. 04:06:365 (2), 04:09:698 (2) и 04:13:031 (2) можно удалить, а можно и не удалять Не удалять
  6. 01:44:490 (3) - финиш на конце слишком шумит Я совершенно не понимаю почему он так выделяется на фоне всего остального, пофиксил (надеюсь)
[Normal]
  1. 00:12:823 (2,3,4) - сомнительная идея со стеком А мне нравится
  2. 00:14:490 (4) - хочется нк Ага

Спасибо!
Namki
1,281 posts
Joined November 2014
Namki
пишу. лень оформлять, поэтому будет некрасиво
так же не будет большого мода с нази говном

какие-то тихие хсы тбх, я их плохо слышу при 100% музик, эффект и мастер волум.
нормал
00:38:240 (5) - сотка пропущен нормал самплесет.
03:49:490 (5) - сделай такие же хсы как тут 01:04:490 (5) - и тут 02:12:823 (5) - , а то как-т инконсистент, вседела.
03:43:448 (6) - тут тоже пропустил.
04:02:823 (5) - и туточки.
В первый раз смотрел и хотел выделить это, мол, пропустил 00:04:906 (5) - , но у тебя так и в конце, мб всё-таки выделить вистлом.
К паттернам притензий нет.

если чего примешь, мб посмотри и другие диффы (кроме тика) на причину отсутствия этих ударзвуков.

хард коллаб
я точно уверен, что это не хард, а адвансед
00:16:573 (7) - такие холды скучны имо, мб поделить?
00:21:156 (5,1) - по сравнению с другими оверлапами, этот выглядит не очень аккуратно и красиво тбх
01:03:135 (3) - а не будет ли на хпбар заезжать (сори лень проверять)
А ничего не сделают за то, что у вас в киях достаточно сильно отличается ритм — у Кью есть 1/2 перерывы, а у Сейкату нет, мб как-нибудь сделать попоследовательней ритм.

инсаен
01:44:906 (4,5,1) - знаешь, просто прямая линия была бы лучше имо. вижу, что ты делал как бы "круговое" флоу, не знаю как по-другому назвать, но по мне линия выглядит лучше. мб посмотришь, подумаешь и решишь, нравится тебе или нет эта идея. (да, я вижу, что у тебя вся диффа в таких паттернах о3о)

удачи, да
Kyubey
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Kyubey
На хп бар не заезжает с дефолтным скином. А про оверлап -- у меня там лучших идей нет, да и этот нравится, поэтому пусть будет.
Seikatu
333 posts
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Topic Starter
Seikatu
По нормалу принял всё кроме вистла. Спасибо!
Kalibe
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Kalibe


Nice Shiki avatar lol // Hitsound mod inc, also ye hitsound things can be related to others.

General*

*Wowowo - uncheck countdown and letterboxing in all diffs =w=

[Normal]

- Because this diff is the easiest in set, i would probably decrease everything except cs by 1 ( AR 4 OD/HP 3 ) to keep standarts from RC
- 01:17:406 (4) - 02:25:740 (4) - Add Normal Sampleset? If you listen it with 50% playback i hear clap sound.
- 01:32:823 (4) - Mising Sampleset normal zz.
- 02:53:656 (3) - Hmm.. you add whistle 02:52:823 (2,4) - on strong piano sounds, so why not on (3) too?
- 03:36:990 (1,1) - I always be against situation like this where you want to highlight part, by using nc in lower diffs : / I would just remove 03:36:990 (1) - really.
- 04:06:573 (5) - Why not using 1/2 slider to fit with full vocal pitch?

[Collab Hard]

Od 5,5 is pretty with spread, try it maybe?

Seikatu:

- 00:06:156 (2,3) - These sliders look much better if you did with the same curve 00:06:156 (2) - or 00:06:573 (3) - doesn't matter, cuz they follow same vocal thing.
- 00:16:573 (7) - I would remove one repeater and circle instead for emphasis downbeat, i mean that loud finish sound zzz.
- 02:53:656 (5) - same as in Normal, add whistle, because..
- 04:11:573 (3) - Feels kinda rushy in song, dunno why, but i really prefer to change rhythm like this : http://puu.sh/qVhj7/9c40cb4352.jpg

Kyubey V:

- 00:22:823 (2,3) - Can you avoid overlap between (2) end and (3) end? Bugging me a bit :S
- 00:25:323 (1,2,3) - What's up with spacing? (2) distance
- 00:27:823 (5,6,1) - ^ similar thing, but idk if it's really nessesary to fix that. Yea im nazi sorry ;w;
- 02:59:906 (3) - How about creating a blanket to 03:00:323 (1) - slider end? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5984626

[Insane]

- 00:54:073 (2,3) - Compare this spacing to 00:54:490 (3,4) - where first one is 3/4 and second 1/2 AND still have similar spacing. I'm really against it :S
- 01:31:990 (5) - Add NC since u following here every downbeat.
- 04:09:073 (4) - ^

Hard is fine. Good luck with this! Sorry for short shit mod, but have my star :3
Kyubey
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Kyubey
Cleaned something.
https://qb.s-ul.eu/tAH4bkiY.txt
Seikatu
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Topic Starter
Seikatu
Kalibe

Kalibe wrote:



Nice Shiki avatar lol // Hitsound mod inc, also ye hitsound things can be related to others.

General*

*Wowowo - uncheck countdown and letterboxing in all diffs =w= ohyea

[Normal]

- Because this diff is the easiest in set, i would probably decrease everything except cs by 1 ( AR 4 OD/HP 3 ) to keep standarts from RC Okie
- 01:17:406 (4) - 02:25:740 (4) - Add Normal Sampleset? If you listen it with 50% playback i hear clap sound. Yep
- 01:32:823 (4) - Mising Sampleset normal zz. They're not missing
- 02:53:656 (3) - Hmm.. you add whistle 02:52:823 (2,4) - on strong piano sounds, so why not on (3) too? Done
- 03:36:990 (1,1) - I always be against situation like this where you want to highlight part, by using nc in lower diffs : / I would just remove 03:36:990 (1) - really. Done
- 04:06:573 (5) - Why not using 1/2 slider to fit with full vocal pitch? I left 1\2's for kiais

[Collab Hard]

Od 5,5 is pretty with spread, try it maybe?

Seikatu:

- 00:06:156 (2,3) - These sliders look much better if you did with the same curve 00:06:156 (2) - or 00:06:573 (3) - doesn't matter, cuz they follow same vocal thing. Yep
- 00:16:573 (7) - I would remove one repeater and circle instead for emphasis downbeat, i mean that loud finish sound zzz. Eeh
- 02:53:656 (5) - same as in Normal, add whistle, because.. Done
- 04:11:573 (3) - Feels kinda rushy in song, dunno why, but i really prefer to change rhythm like this : http://puu.sh/qVhj7/9c40cb4352.jpg nope, it's ok i think

[Insane]

- 00:54:073 (2,3) - Compare this spacing to 00:54:490 (3,4) - where first one is 3/4 and second 1/2 AND still have similar spacing. I'm really against it :S Moved 4
- 01:31:990 (5) - Add NC since u following here every downbeat. done
- 04:09:073 (4) - ^ done

Hard is fine. Good luck with this! Sorry for short shit mod, but have my star :3

Thanks a lot!
den0saur
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den0saur
Думаю стоит добавить в теги senya.
Seikatu
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Topic Starter
Seikatu
Пожалуй да
Natteke desu
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Natteke desu
и правда
Asahina Momoko
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Asahina Momoko
metadata confirmation Cx

Title: 幾星霜の物語 ～The Story of Eternity～
Romanized Title: Ikuseisou no Monogatari ~The Story of Eternity~

Artist name is fine

cf: http://xceon.jp/m3_2014autumn/
Seikatu
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Seikatu
Thanks!
Natteke desu
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Natteke desu
сейкату кудах
Kobold84
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Kobold84
инсейн сейкату:
00:25:115 (4,5,1) - а может, сделать тут 1/4 слайдер из двух нот? Хотя мне твой вариант нравится больше, но вдруг.
00:48:240 (3,4,5,6,1) - сделал бы тут спейсинг побольше, музыка-то нарастает!
00:57:823 (3,4,5,6,7) - а здесь наоборот такой спейсинг не то чтобы нужен.
01:09:698 (4,5,6) - тут (и в других подобных паттернах, у тебя их в киаях много) точно нужен спейсинг побольше! Киай и всё такое.
01:18:656 (1) - ну я же слышу на конце спиннера нотуууууууу.
03:27:406 (4,5) - слышу очень чёткое 1/4!

хард тика:
00:44:490 (3,4,5) - а мне понравилось, как играется стакнутая тройка.
03:35:323 (1) - не лучше ли выделить как-нибудь конкретно этот момент? Перевернуть слайдер в другую сторону, к примеру. Не уверен, что это ничего не сломает, правда.

хард не тика:
Ох уж эти ар66 и од55. Надо было и хп 44 делать.
И поменяй шрифт, а то коллаб с Kgubeg каким-то.
00:04:698 (2) - мне кажется, карта обойдётся и без этой ноты, с паузой выглядит красивее.
04:05:323 (1,2,3) - ну не надо такой маленький спейсинг же делать. http://kobold.s-ul.eu/TFJwHcq4.png — вот так было бы идеально. И вообще под конец что-то простое всё! Это же не нормал.
Я заметил, что отсутствуют 1/2 стакнутые двойки. Лучший "паттерн" в хардах, между прочим.
TicClick
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TicClick
я подумаю про шрифт
Seikatu
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Seikatu

Kobold84 wrote:

инсейн сейкату:
00:25:115 (4,5,1) - а может, сделать тут 1/4 слайдер из двух нот? Хотя мне твой вариант нравится больше, но вдруг. Не
00:48:240 (3,4,5,6,1) - сделал бы тут спейсинг побольше, музыка-то нарастает! Да
00:57:823 (3,4,5,6,7) - а здесь наоборот такой спейсинг не то чтобы нужен. Нужен!
01:09:698 (4,5,6) - тут (и в других подобных паттернах, у тебя их в киаях много) точно нужен спейсинг побольше! Киай и всё такое. На этих отдельных троечках точно нет
01:18:656 (1) - ну я же слышу на конце спиннера нотуууууууу. На то он и конец спиннера
03:27:406 (4,5) - слышу очень чёткое 1/4! Не хочу рушить мой любимый 3\4+1\2 ритм :(

хард не тика:
Ох уж эти ар66 и од55. Надо было и хп 44 делать. Не пойдет
00:04:698 (2) - мне кажется, карта обойдётся и без этой ноты, с паузой выглядит красивее. Да
04:05:323 (1,2,3) - ну не надо такой маленький спейсинг же делать. http://kobold.s-ul.eu/TFJwHcq4.png — вот так было бы идеально. И вообще под конец что-то простое всё! Это же не нормал. Простое потому что для дифф-спреда так надо, а вообще сделал как в предыдущем лайне
Я заметил, что отсутствуют 1/2 стакнутые двойки. Лучший "паттерн" в хардах, между прочим. Ой ну их, на одном месте топтаться целых 2 1\2
Спасибо!
AncientMario
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AncientMario
Йоу

Normal

01:17:823 (5) - По моему лучше заменить просто слайдером, а не реверсом.
02:23:448 (6) - долго присматривался к подобным нотам, пропустил много, но на этой встал вопрос:"А почему бы не сделать их началом комбо?" Вокал же с затакта начинается.

Collab hard

00:48:656 (1) - Ну такое, по моему не смотрится.

Хард Тикклика

По моему это не хард, но это лишь по моему

Insane

00:15:323 (1,2) - вот за это тебя возненавидят все фармеры.

Это даже на одну кудосу не тянет, что уж там про две. Оставь их лучше для кого-то лучшего чем я. Потому что я по сути ничего не смог найти, для меня карта идеальна. За исключением антифармилки
TicClick
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TicClick

AncientMario wrote:

Хард Тикклика

По моему это не хард, но это лишь по моему
а что это?
AncientMario
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AncientMario
Кажется это адванседом называется, я не уверен. Я забыл диффнейм между Хардом и инсем :D
Seikatu
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Seikatu
Light Insane
UPD: @AncientMario, по моду ничего не взял, увы
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TicClick
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TicClick
он менее плотный, и триплов с маленькими стримами там точно нет
а. я думал про другой эдвенсд
впрочем, какая разница!
Delis
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Joined May 2012
Delis
yo u want a mod
Seikatu
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Topic Starter
Seikatu
hey yea i do
Delis
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Joined May 2012
Delis
I remember Rei24 gave me this back in 2015, was pretty impressive.
[General]
you might consider making combo 2 and 3 a bit darker, in the kiai times, they sometimes look really mixed with the cherry blossom in the background. blue color is okay as the sky is much darker.
http://exittunes.com/detail/qwce-00431.html http://xceon.jp/ (around middle of the page) I've also confirmed the metadata so im just noting that
apply the volume changes that ticclick did on his diff to other diffs? that's rly cool
[Insane]
00:08:240 (6) - I feel more comfy with either x1.0 or x0.75 sv when your rhythm is for the vocals not the background.
00:50:323 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - the volume here could be absolutely better, if you listen to the song carefully the volume of drums for 00:50:323 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - is much lower than the one after here, I still understand that the volume at 00:51:156 - being lower due to a 1/8 but 00:51:573 (2,3,4,5) - should've been having stronger volume. by the way 00:51:781 (4,5) - is 1/8 but eh I prefer 1/4 regarding to playing ability, 1/4 doesn't skip any beat in 1/8 so that's pretty sure up to you.
01:58:656 (1) - missing finish i suppose, also consider using the same volume if you didn't mind changing above.
02:26:990 (1) - finish on the tail could fit here
[Hard]
00:31:156 (6) - I'd add a clap on the second reverse (at red tick) for the strong beat, also this will be mixed a lot better imo.
01:59:490 (3,4,6) - apparently you hitsounded in a different way from the previous part, although I still think hitsounding in the same way should be the best decision here. the bass drums are strong enough that no hitsound doesn't really fit to.
02:56:990 (1) - I wish this was something like 3/4 and a circle or 1/2 and 2 circles so the piano at 02:57:302 - wouldn't get ignored. you might've done it on purpose to make less intense here, but this is more like an easier insane therefore I don't really think one more additional triplet or some tricky rhythm (3/4+circle) etc wouldn't make it really harder I think.
03:50:740 - is the volume indended to be this huge? it sounds really loud as 45% on first and second chorus fitting there really nice, I don't really think this needs to be consistent to differentiate the last kiai, but still consider to decrease the volume.
[Collab]
hooja
00:08:240 (4) - SV change from here would accelerate the flow nicely matching with the spacing change while fitting to the sound as well.
00:30:115 (4) - I would really like you to avoid this barely not overlapping but almost, make it definitely not overlapping!
01:53:656 (1) - I think flipping over this slider so the flow could be a bit unique yet comfy? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8503306 I also think this does look more your mapping as well, idk lol.
02:22:406 (2,3) - this could be, really hard pattern for some newbies here. as the star rate is quite lower than most of hard difficulties nowadays (so this looks more like an advanced difficulty but the rhythm usage.) therefore weaker players that didn't reach to the point where they can play hard difficulties might play it, and they might read the pattern something like this way: https://puu.sh/wAOWh/e13e8d5443.jpg so this could cause a pain for noobs with their immaturity reading-skills. you don't have to follow my example to adjust the slider (3) but lowering it slightly can improve anyway.
02:26:990 (1) - I think the spacing change for SV changes will be done after the SV changes, but this is still used the same spacing as 02:26:156 (2,3) - despite there's a huge SV change. 00:51:156 (4,5,1) - is probably nice to compare how it's different.
02:41:990 (1) - doesn't just stacking look more clearn lol
02:45:323 (1) - overlap with the triplet doesn't look nice here I guess.
[Normal]
00:11:990 (1,2,3) - the rhythm is a bit confusing with the stacks being put together. considering it as the lowest difficulty here, merely catching only the vocals here would be a stable patterning.
02:26:156 (5) - normal sample on the reverse maybe?
03:36:156 (5,1) - I feel the movenemnt here is kinda meh when it's towards the possibly strongest sound in the song. making some different angles on each slider can help a bit. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8504012
you may use some whistles to follow piano since downbeats are tend to get ignored but upbeats are not. there sometimes will be small amount of hitsounds because you got nowhere to hitsound clap, which feels less accent while playing. but as long as the hitsounding is consistent among your difficilties, this could be fine as is.

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solid mapset! I also think TicClick's Hard could be called an Insane or Light Insane regarding to how the map plays, and there's a 0.8 SR gap between these Hard diffs and yet calling both difficulties hard is kinda strange.
Seikatu
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Topic Starter
Seikatu
Delis
[quote="Delis"][General]
you might consider making combo 2 and 3 a bit darker, in the kiai times, they sometimes look really mixed with the cherry blossom in the background. blue color is okay as the sky is much darker. made every color quite brighter cuz other 2 colors were quite pale and putting only 2 colors darker would be unconsistent
http://exittunes.com/detail/qwce-00431.html http://xceon.jp/ (around middle of the page) I've also confirmed the metadata so im just noting that
apply the volume changes that ticclick did on his diff to other diffs? that's rly cool
[Insane]
00:08:240 (6) - I feel more comfy with either x1.0 or x0.75 sv when your rhythm is for the vocals not the background. iirc i wanted to follow vocals, but also wanted to emphasize "whoosh" sound at the background, so i set higher sv. Actually i like this little speed-up here more than ordinary sv even today.
00:50:323 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - the volume here could be absolutely better, if you listen to the song carefully the volume of drums for 00:50:323 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - is much lower than the one after here, I still understand that the volume at 00:51:156 - being lower due to a 1/8 but 00:51:573 (2,3,4,5) - should've been having stronger volume. by the way 00:51:781 (4,5) - is 1/8 but eh I prefer 1/4 regarding to playing ability, 1/4 doesn't skip any beat in 1/8 so that's pretty sure up to you. Tried to somehow improve the volume of those
01:58:656 (1) - missing finish i suppose, also consider using the same volume if you didn't mind changing above. Yep, also fixed spacing mistake here
02:26:990 (1) - finish on the tail could fit here yep

[Collab]
hooja
00:08:240 (4) - SV change from here would accelerate the flow nicely matching with the spacing change while fitting to the sound as well. yeah, done
02:22:406 (2,3) - this could be, really hard pattern for some newbies here. as the star rate is quite lower than most of hard difficulties nowadays (so this looks more like an advanced difficulty but the rhythm usage.) therefore weaker players that didn't reach to the point where they can play hard difficulties might play it, and they might read the pattern something like this way: https://puu.sh/wAOWh/e13e8d5443.jpg so this could cause a pain for noobs with their immaturity reading-skills. you don't have to follow my example to adjust the slider (3) but lowering it slightly can improve anyway. k, done
02:26:990 (1) - I think the spacing change for SV changes will be done after the SV changes, but this is still used the same spacing as 02:26:156 (2,3) - despite there's a huge SV change. 00:51:156 (4,5,1) - is probably nice to compare how it's different. I think using different spacing for this sv change it'll be even more confusing as it is now, cuz it's gonna almost overlap previous object. And it looks bad af.
02:45:323 (1) - overlap with the triplet doesn't look nice here I guess. fixing this was hard but i tried
[Normal]
00:11:990 (1,2,3) - the rhythm is a bit confusing with the stacks being put together. considering it as the lowest difficulty here, merely catching only the vocals here would be a stable patterning. fixed
02:26:156 (5) - normal sample on the reverse maybe? done
03:36:156 (5,1) - I feel the movenemnt here is kinda meh when it's towards the possibly strongest sound in the song. making some different angles on each slider can help a bit. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8504012 fixed
you may use some whistles to follow piano since downbeats are tend to get ignored but upbeats are not. there sometimes will be small amount of hitsounds because you got nowhere to hitsound clap, which feels less accent while playing. but as long as the hitsounding is consistent among your difficilties, this could be fine as is. added some whistles at kiai
Thanks!
Waiting for TicClick and Kyubey
Delis
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Delis
forgot to mention that applying the volume changes on ticclick diff to other diffs meant the last spinner lol
Seikatu
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Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
Seikatu
oh
done
Kyubey
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Kyubey
Delis
[Collab]
hooja :roll:
00:30:115 (4) - I would really like you to avoid this barely not overlapping but almost, make it definitely not overlapping! できた
01:53:656 (1) - I think flipping over this slider so the flow could be a bit unique yet comfy? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8503306 I also think this does look more your mapping as well, idk lol. できなかった、今の（2）と（3）への移行が好き hmm, i prefer the current transition to (2) and (3) here, looks more pleasant
02:41:990 (1) - doesn't just stacking look more clearn lol できた
ありがとう！
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Seikatu
333 posts
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Seikatu
Got TicClick's permission to fix stuff, so here we go

Delis wrote:

[Hard]
00:31:156 (6) - I'd add a clap on the second reverse (at red tick) for the strong beat, also this will be mixed a lot better imo. Yeah, added that.
01:59:490 (3,4,6) - apparently you hitsounded in a different way from the previous part, although I still think hitsounding in the same way should be the best decision here. the bass drums are strong enough that no hitsound doesn't really fit to. Added normal sets here
02:56:990 (1) - I wish this was something like 3/4 and a circle or 1/2 and 2 circles so the piano at 02:57:302 - wouldn't get ignored. you might've done it on purpose to make less intense here, but this is more like an easier insane therefore I don't really think one more additional triplet or some tricky rhythm (3/4+circle) etc wouldn't make it really harder I think. I think drums are more valuable than piano, also 3\4+circle and triple are still quite tricky rhythm for this difficulty. Also 1/2 and circles just doesn't fit here imo.
03:50:740 - is the volume indended to be this huge? it sounds really loud as 45% on first and second chorus fitting there really nice, I don't really think this needs to be consistent to differentiate the last kiai, but still consider to decrease the volume.Yeah, quite loud. Fixed.
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Delis
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Delis
Bubbleできた
Seikatu
333 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
Seikatu
Thanks Mr.Delis!
Bonsai
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Joined July 2011
Bonsai
Yo I would move the offset by at least -8ms (->1.982), the bass-beats that are on every white tick have a very late attack point but all other sounds come much earlier, and at least I permanently hit notes way too early with the current timing which is especially frustrating with all those extended 3/4-sliders that shouldn't be released too early lol

(randomly looked at this bc I absolute love your latest ranked map (and the one before that too obviously 8-)), sadly I dislike all those extended sliders here :( Good luck though! <3)
Seikatu
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Seikatu
Done, thanks!
Delis
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Delis
rebubble for the timing change, thanks for the check bonsai!
Seikatu
333 posts
Joined January 2011
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Seikatu
Thanks Mr.Delis!
pishifat
osu! Paragon
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pishifat
ill qualify if u write a suggestion on https://osu.ppy.sh/beatmapsets/639319/discussion

(really just one comment ok)
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