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eufonius - Narcissus

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Iceskulls
[general]
  1. hmm , I'm not sure but it seems like lots of vocal you try to follow here sound a bit off or something like 00:28:853 (6,7) - ,00:46:253 (3,4,5,6) - , 02:00:053 (3,4,5,6) - , etc (in normal) when I mean it off I mean it off a lots not like only 1-5 ms
[hard]
  1. 00:05:153 (3) - I think you can ctrl+j this so it make the slider looks like this which make the flow here 00:04:853 (2,3,4) - a bit better imo
  2. 00:22:253 (4) - I think you can place this slider like this so it would make flow here 00:21:653 (3,4,5) - better imo
  3. 00:23:453 - it feel a bit weird to ignore this beat here , I would make rhythm like this instead
  4. 00:28:253 - same as 00:23:453 -
  5. 00:47:453 - why ignore this beat , you even map it here 00:49:853 (1) - , try this rhythm
  6. 01:06:653 - , 01:11:453 - it would not be bad to map these beat tho since it a emphasized beat one so mapping them would make the rhythm play better
  7. 01:12:653 (1,2) - improve blanket here a bit would be nice
  8. 01:18:953 (1,2) - spacing here kinda looks similiar to 01:19:853 (3,4) - and it make it so confusing you should increase spacing here 01:18:953 (1,2) - a bit so there is a bit different between 1/1 spacing and 1/2 spacing
  9. 01:23:753 (1,2) - similiar to what I said above
[normal]
  1. 00:03:653 (3,4) - try this rhythm? might be sound better imo
  2. 00:05:153 (5,1) - try this rhythm? might be sound better imo
  3. 00:22:853 (5,1) - hmm you can make the rhythm here a bit diffrent from hard diff it make the gap here looks better
  4. 00:27:653 (5,1) - ,01:06:053 (5,1) - , 01:10:853 (5,1) - similiar to what I said above
  5. 01:25:853 - why ignore this beat when you map it here 01:21:053 - , try to make the rhythm consistent , try this rhythm ?
  6. 02:00:053 (3,4,5,6) - you can convert these circles to sliders so it a bit easier for new player to play imo
good luck , have fun mapping :)
Karen
主难度叫Nacissu啊
Rizia
long time no mod

[Hard]
  1. 00:45:053 (1,2) - 1的尾 也就是 00:45:503 - 這個音, 使用得不太好 表現出來感到有點奇怪和不適合
  2. 00:50:453 (2,3) - nazi blanket better
  3. 00:53:453 (1,2) - 在00:53:453 - 表現的音比00:53:903 - 較強烈 所以我認為00:53:453 (1) - 的滑條速度比00:53:903 (2) - 高會比較好
  4. 01:03:053 (1,2) - ^
[Normal]
  1. 01:28:553 (2) - 滑條身的whistle應該是放錯了 因為前後差不多的地方也沒有
Good luck!
Topic Starter
Lavender

Kagamine Ren wrote:

主难度叫Nacissu啊
这里还有一个gder叫Narcissu怎么办...

前面那个论文摸看上去就好难啊,晚点再一起改 又是越来越懒了,感觉要afk
Topic Starter
Lavender

CelsiusLK wrote:

[general]
  1. hmm , I'm not sure but it seems like lots of vocal you try to follow here sound a bit off or something like 00:28:853 (6,7) - ,00:46:253 (3,4,5,6) - , 02:00:053 (3,4,5,6) - , etc (in normal) when I mean it off I mean it off a lots not like only 1-5 ms I knew that's off, however I think it's OK...
[hard]
  1. 00:05:153 (3) - I think you can ctrl+j this so it make the slider looks like this which make the flow here 00:04:853 (2,3,4) - a bit better imo Changed a bit, not that curved.
  2. 00:22:253 (4) - I think you can place this slider like this so it would make flow here 00:21:653 (3,4,5) - better imo Nope
  3. 00:23:453 - it feel a bit weird to ignore this beat here , I would make rhythm like this instead
  4. 00:28:253 - same as 00:23:453 - eh it's no problem here i think
  5. 00:47:453 - why ignore this beat , you even map it here 00:49:853 (1) - , try this rhythm
    SPOILER
    No, they are different
  6. 01:06:653 - , 01:11:453 - it would not be bad to map these beat tho since it a emphasized beat one so mapping them would make the rhythm play better No here.
  7. 01:12:653 (1,2) - improve blanket here a bit would be nice k
  8. 01:18:953 (1,2) - spacing here kinda looks similiar to 01:19:853 (3,4) - and it make it so confusing you should increase spacing here 01:18:953 (1,2) - a bit so there is a bit different between 1/1 spacing and 1/2 spacing 01:18:968 (4,1) - swapped NC
  9. 01:23:753 (1,2) - similiar to what I said above I think it isn't a problem here
good luck , have fun mapping :) Thanks!!

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

long time no mod

[Hard]
  1. 00:45:053 (1,2) - 1的尾 也就是 00:45:503 - 這個音, 使用得不太好 表現出來感到有點奇怪和不適合 呃,我倒是感觉这里挺好的。。
  2. 00:50:453 (2,3) - nazi blanket better Fixed
  3. 00:53:453 (1,2) - 在00:53:453 - 表現的音比00:53:903 - 較強烈 所以我認為00:53:453 (1) - 的滑條速度比00:53:903 (2) - 高會比較好
  4. 01:03:053 (1,2) - ^ 都换了个梗
Good luck!
+15offset by OniJaM, thanks for modding!
Rincewind
然而2nd是夏日的故事
Narcissu
@CelsiusLK

i wish use slider hold voice …… with piano is confusion …… note not hard than slider in normal diff imo = =

@Kawaiwkyik

fix

[Hard]

預覽點因為offest改過不在綫上……要改的話順便幫我也改掉 Orz

01:40:868 - 為什麼用10%的音量帶clap……靜音圈還是unrank……吧?

02:00:068 - ^ …… 另外似乎是按人聲下的whistle,這裡應該帶上一個

01:52:268 - add whistle

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Version:Normal
Source:ナルキッソス -SIDE 2nd-
Tags:stage-nana riya 菊地創 Kikuchi Hajime Σ Narcissu
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480,164,141068,6,0,L|496:316,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
332,232,142268,2,0,L|348:384,1,120,0|2,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
188,288,143468,1,4,0:3:0:0:
256,192,143768,12,8,145868,0:3:0:0:
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Narcissu wrote:

[Hard]

預覽點因為offest改過不在綫上……要改的話順便幫我也改掉 Orz

01:40:868 - 為什麼用10%的音量帶clap……靜音圈還是unrank……吧? 改成20%了,这两个地方去掉听都有明显的clap但是不改音量的话音效就太大了

02:00:068 - ^ …… 另外似乎是按人聲下的whistle,這裡應該帶上一個 好吧,虽然感觉应该听不到

01:52:268 - add whistle
水仙好棒啊prpr
kanpakyin
剛把Narcissus1和2通了 果然是良作阿
tutuhaha
...于是我跳票了.....
然后前面辣么多bn没人泡哇D:...
...然后我现在在下,要44分钟(崩溃
[Normal]
要是某一天万一被人没事找事的喷ar4的话,记得喷回去
宽屏支持搞掉
[Hard]
01:03:518 (2,1) - 间距加大,至少和前面一样保持1.66左右
01:06:068 (5,1) - 有点太大了,间距
01:13:118 (2) - 1.2x,统一,不然真的很奇怪,很奇怪,很奇怪,很奇怪,很奇怪,很奇怪,很奇怪
01:18:968 (4) - 加NC强调一下间距变化,要不然干脆overlap...
01:23:018 (4,5) - 这种排列方法在这个diff里过于强烈了导致很突兀
其实我还想说01:19:568 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这个间距是不是可以适当的减少一点...

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tutuhaha wrote:

...于是我跳票了.....
然后前面辣么多bn没人泡哇D:... 因为质量太差啊23333
...然后我现在在下,要44分钟(崩溃
[Normal]
要是某一天万一被人没事找事的喷ar4的话,记得喷回去
宽屏支持搞掉
[Hard]
01:03:518 (2,1) - 间距加大,至少和前面一样保持1.66左右
01:06:068 (5,1) - 有点太大了,间距
01:13:118 (2) - 1.2x,统一,不然真的很奇怪,很奇怪,很奇怪,很奇怪,很奇怪,很奇怪,很奇怪
01:18:968 (4) - 加NC强调一下间距变化,要不然干脆overlap...
01:23:018 (4,5) - 这种排列方法在这个diff里过于强烈了导致很突兀 这里有个强烈的钢琴音我才换的,感觉挺不错的
其实我还想说01:19:568 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这个间距是不是可以适当的减少一点...

call me back then
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Thanks for modding!
tutuhaha
有啥问题的话随时call rebubble啊_(:зゝ∠)_
Rizia
good
Fushimi Rio
看起来会被打
KaedekaShizuru
谁敢打你我就去打谁
闷声作死 赞赞赞赞
Koiyuki
你也不找我来泡啊,怪我咯?
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Minakami Yuki wrote:

你也不找我来泡啊,怪我咯?
前面也没有怪吧,自嘲而已。。。找icon这种事我是一个一个问的,只有我问的这个bn说不给才会去找下一个,怕会像death那样因为自己要给icon的图被别人抢了而生气 )似乎你最近也很忙
Koiyuki

[Teichan] wrote:

Minakami Yuki wrote:

你也不找我来泡啊,怪我咯?
前面也没有怪吧,自嘲而已。。。找icon这种事我是一个一个问的,只有我问的这个bn说不给才会去找下一个,怕会像death那样因为自己要给icon的图被别人抢了而生气 )似乎你最近也很忙
没啥我只是对2ha那句“然后前面辣么多bn没人泡哇D:...”的吐槽罢了,不必放在心上23333
Karen
我被忒产打了,怎么办,在线等
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这人格诬陷我
Neil Watts
>eufonius
>narcissu

omg I love you
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