This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, September 12, 2010 at 4:37:51 PM

Artist: MOSAIC.WAV
Title: Saikyou OX Keikaku (TV Size)
Source: Sumomomo Momomo
Tags: opening op ecchi sumomo mo momo
BPM: 176
Filesize: 19076kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (1.6 stars, 82 notes)
2. Hard (4.8 stars, 224 notes)
3. Normal (3.23 stars, 130 notes)
4. Sex-Crazed Loli (5 stars, 325 notes)

Download: MOSAIC.WAV - Saikyou OX Keikaku (TV Size)
Download: MOSAIC.WAV - Saikyou OX Keikaku (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Let's engage in child production!


(Video may be NSFW, but not 18+ material, just some ecchi)

If downloaded before August 30, redownload for a new comboburst and BG thanks to lovhin456

FACT: The MP3 and video came from the stepmania simfile for this song.

Timing mod on request~

Offset did feel a bit late, but 5,095 seemed to be perfect after testing multiple times. [Hard] is really fun, especially with the 1/2 streams that circle around the screen. (:

I'd be happy to do a full mod once this is in pending (are you waiting for another diff or?).

Oh, also, the video should be fine (as I've seen much worse in regular backgrounds for maps...), but the offset is very late for it. Try using something like 4900 for the video's offset by manually editing each diff's .osu file.

Derekku Chan wrote:

Timing mod on request~

Offset did feel a bit late, but 5,095 seemed to be perfect after testing multiple times. [Hard] is really fun, especially with the 1/2 streams that circle around the screen. (:

I'd be happy to do a full mod once this is in pending (are you waiting for another diff or?).

Oh, also, the video should be fine (as I've seen much worse in regular backgrounds for maps...), but the offset is very late for it. Try using something like 4900 for the video's offset by manually editing each diff's .osu file.

Thankies, thankies Yeah, I did plan to map an insane, but I can't seem to accomplish one without butchering the map by overmapping. Gonna work on getting a working insane. If I can't within a couple days, I'll submit as is.

babble wrote:

I did plan to map an insane, but I can't seem to accomplish one without butchering the map by overmapping. Gonna work on getting a working insane. If I can't within a couple days, I'll submit as is.

That's a very good decision. If a decent insane can't be made, then I'd much rather see a fun "Hard" as the hardest difficulty than a butchered/overmapped Insane. (:

su mo mo mo momo mo

Hi ~

General;
- Your BG is of bad quality (also not the allowed size) try these ??
- Consider using this comboburst ~ ??
If you use it, change the name to comboburst
- Use this colors ?? (I just changed the red, because it was too bright)

Combo1 : 255,155,155
Combo2 : 255,64,64
Combo3 : 255,255,255
Combo4 : 254,241,150

Easy;
- 00:11:913 >> end at 00:12:592
- 00:18:731 >> add whistle to the start, the 1st and 2nd reverse arrow, not the end.
- 00:23:845 >> new combo
- 00:25:379 >> remove new combo also is ugly how this overlaps the next slider, and if possible make this and the next slider curved ones ??
- 00:59:810 >> move to 00:59:640 but make it end at the same spot as before moving it
- 01:18:731 >> kind of ugly how this overlaps the next slider
- 01:26:572 (4,5) >> add whistle to (4) and on (5) too but not on the body, just at the start and end
- 01:27:935 >> add a note here with finish and new combo ??

Normal;
- 00:09:015 >> curve this better
- 00:18:731 >> add whistle to start, 1st and second reverse arrow, not end
- 00:59:810 >> make this a curved slider ??
- 01:02:367 >> new combo ??
- 01:24:015 >> remove new combo
- 00:18:731 >> 2nd, 4th and 6th reverse arrow remove clap and add whistle

Hard;
- Is okk ~

Insane;
- Perfect imo ~

* Star ~ :3

lovhin456 wrote:

Hi ~

General;
- Your BG is of bad quality (also not the allowed size) try these ??

SPOILER

[attachment=2:25a10]sumomo_1.png[/attachment:25a10]
[attachment=1:25a10]SumomomoMomomo021.png[/attachment:25a10]

- Consider using this comboburst ~ ??

SPOILER

[attachment=0:25a10]comboburstm.png[/attachment:25a10]

If you use it, change the name to comboburst
- Use this colors ?? (I just changed the red, because it was too bright)

Combo1 : 255,155,155
Combo2 : 255,64,64
Combo3 : 255,255,255
Combo4 : 254,241,150

Easy;
- 00:11:913 >> end at 00:12:592It's already ended there, did you mean one tick before? If so, I ended it there, ousnds better.
- 00:18:731 >> add whistle to the start, the 1st and 2nd reverse arrow, not the end.Did that, but also added a finish on the end.
- 00:23:845 >> new combokk
- 00:25:379 >> remove new combo also is ugly how this overlaps the next slider, and if possible make this and the next slider curved ones ??Combo removed, but I don't know about changing the sliders, they're spaced far enough so overlapping should be fine, I'll wait for a second opinion.
- 00:59:810 >> move to 00:59:640 but make it end at the same spot as before moving itMeh, I don't like that
- 01:18:731 >> kind of ugly how this overlaps the next sliderK, changing this one.
- 01:26:572 (4,5) >> add whistle to (4) and on (5) too but not on the body, just at the start and endEh :X
- 01:27:935 >> add a note here with finish and new combo ??Mmk

Normal;
- 00:09:015 >> curve this betterGot it
- 00:18:731 >> add whistle to start, 1st and second reverse arrow, not endMmk
- 00:59:810 >> make this a curved slider ??seems fine imo
- 01:02:367 >> new combo ??kk
- 01:24:015 >> remove new combok
- 00:18:731 >> 2nd, 4th and 6th reverse arrow remove clap and add whistleThere arent that many repeats here O-o

Hard;
- Is okk ~

Insane;
- Perfect imo ~

* Star ~ :3

Awesome, thanks for the comboburst and the BGs. Also changed the combo color to what you recommended, looks nice.

thanks for the mod

A little late, but I'm here.

Easy

mo is in tags twice

00:11:913 (2) - Okay why is this 1/2 beat shorter than all the other sliders? It's the same note as 00:09:185 (2) -

00:43:447 (2) - This is placed sort of abstractly compared to the previous slider. I think the slider end of the previous slider should line up with the start of this. The fix is a s simple as adjusting the first move point of this slider up roughly 2 units. Note: You might have the tweak the second move point around. Just play with the move points until it looks better.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/23765

01:05:265 (1) - I suggest that you move it here 01:05:435 - instead because its a stronger vocal and it wont be affected as much with the volume drop of the previous slider. You see when you drop the volume like that, it can disorient people. If the beat was there, it would be all too easy to pick up that soft vocal note right there, but without it, it feels like a shot in the dark if I'm going to hit the beat right in one flowing motion. Placing it on the more bold vocal allows enough time to prepare and IMO sounds better.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/23768

^ That is one non intrusive way to place the notes, but I bet there are even better ways to implement the spacing change.

Normal

00:10:890 (2,3) - Spacing is slightly too close. Just reapply the distance snap with grid snap off and it will fix this.
00:13:276 (1,2) - ^
00:16:004 (1,2) - ^
00:31:344 (2,3) - ^


Hard

00:20:265 (2,3) - Line up these sliders a little better. The move points go inward where they meet and it kind of looks strange that way.

00:44:299 (1) - This isn't entirely centered between the note gap. Make it centered?

00:58:276 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Eh this curve doesn't exactly match up with the previous part of the stream. I really suggest you continue the curve. I managed to fix it in the editor.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/23771

Notice that note 3 and 5 are on axis lines. Use those as a guide to reproducing this curve I made. Note 3 and 5 are 7 units from the center.

01:22:651 (5) - Note doesn't go with the beat. I suggest you remove it.

Sex-crazed Lolis

Streams are too fast for me to identify any problems with them, but the map seems completely fine.

00:58:106 (8,1,2,3) - Why break the curve? : (

Technically the sex crazed lolis will be playing Easy difficulty so they can focus less on the notes.


<3 love the song, video, beatmap. Kudosu star

TheVileOne wrote:

A little late, but I'm here.

Easy

mo is in tags twice
Removed
00:11:913 (2) - Okay why is this 1/2 beat shorter than all the other sliders? It's the same note as 00:09:185 (2) -
Fits the music better imo, plus it was lovin's mod

00:43:447 (2) - This is placed sort of abstractly compared to the previous slider. I think the slider end of the previous slider should line up with the start of this. The fix is a s simple as adjusting the first move point of this slider up roughly 2 units. Note: You might have the tweak the second move point around. Just play with the move points until it looks better.
Think I fixed it right

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/23765

01:05:265 (1) - I suggest that you move it here 01:05:435 - instead because its a stronger vocal and it wont be affected as much with the volume drop of the previous slider. You see when you drop the volume like that, it can disorient people. If the beat was there, it would be all too easy to pick up that soft vocal note right there, but without it, it feels like a shot in the dark if I'm going to hit the beat right in one flowing motion. Placing it on the more bold vocal allows enough time to prepare and IMO sounds better.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/23768

^ That is one non intrusive way to place the notes, but I bet there are even better ways to implement the spacing change.
Done, except I stacked them

Normal

00:10:890 (2,3) - Spacing is slightly too close. Just reapply the distance snap with grid snap off and it will fix this.
00:13:276 (1,2) - ^
00:16:004 (1,2) - ^
00:31:344 (2,3) - ^
Fixed

Hard

00:20:265 (2,3) - Line up these sliders a little better. The move points go inward where they meet and it kind of looks strange that way.
Think I got it this time

00:44:299 (1) - This isn't entirely centered between the note gap. Make it centered?
Done
00:58:276 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Eh this curve doesn't exactly match up with the previous part of the stream. I really suggest you continue the curve. I managed to fix it in the editor.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/23771
Think I fixed it

Notice that note 3 and 5 are on axis lines. Use those as a guide to reproducing this curve I made. Note 3 and 5 are 7 units from the center.

01:22:651 (5) - Note doesn't go with the beat. I suggest you remove it.
Fits fine imo

Sex-crazed Lolis

Streams are too fast for me to identify any problems with them, but the map seems completely fine.

00:58:106 (8,1,2,3) - Why break the curve? : (
Still looks good

Technically the sex crazed lolis will be playing Easy difficulty so they can focus less on the notes.


<3 love the song, video, beatmap. Kudosu star

Thanks for the mod and kudosu star, was lot alot of help <3

hi, #ModReqs drop-by, all these are just suggestions~

could probably get rid of "opening op" from the tags

[easy]
00:41:913 (1) - touch this slider up? maybe like

303,192,41913,6,0,B|176:232|240:408|384:344,1,280

(insert it manually into the notepad)

01:27:083 (5,1) - make these one combo?

[normal]
00:06:629 (5,1) - make these one combo?
00:26:572 (1) - no new combo?
00:33:390 (1) - ^
00:42:594 (3) - remove the slider whistle and just have it on the start and end?
01:01:344 (2) - kinda hidden under the previous slider
01:06:117 (1,2) - maybe like this?

256,320,66117,6,0,B|120:328|112:128|288:144,1,300

256,320,67822,2,0,B|352:344|360:208|248:232,1,200

01:27:935 (1) - no new combo?

[hard]
00:07:481 (1) - no new combo?
00:44:299 (1) - ^
00:45:322 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,1,2,3) - maybe mix a few sliders in here?
00:45:833 (4) - new combo?
00:55:208 (1) - no new combo?
01:27:935 (1) - ^

[sex-crazed loli]
maybe approach -1?
that name makes me laugh xD
00:18:049 (4,5) - dont like these sliders =/
00:44:299 (1) - no new combo?
00:51:458 (1,2) - =/
00:55:208 (1) - no new combo?
01:06:458 (3,4) - =/
01:24:697 (5) - ^
01:27:935 (1) - no new combo?

besides from those sliders, i like this map and song, good luck babble!

roflninja wrote:

hi, #ModReqs drop-by, all these are just suggestions~

could probably get rid of "opening op" from the tags

[easy]
00:41:913 (1) - touch this slider up? maybe like

303,192,41913,6,0,B|176:232|240:408|384:344,1,280

(insert it manually into the notepad)

01:27:083 (5,1) - make these one combo?
All fixed
[normal]
00:06:629 (5,1) - make these one combo?
00:26:572 (1) - no new combo?
00:33:390 (1) - ^
00:42:594 (3) - remove the slider whistle and just have it on the start and end?
01:01:344 (2) - kinda hidden under the previous slider
01:06:117 (1,2) - maybe like this?

256,320,66117,6,0,B|120:328|112:128|288:144,1,300

256,320,67822,2,0,B|352:344|360:208|248:232,1,200

01:27:935 (1) - no new combo?
All fixed

[hard]
00:07:481 (1) - no new combo?
00:44:299 (1) - ^
Fixed those
00:45:322 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,1,2,3) - maybe mix a few sliders in here?
Eh, I dunno
00:45:833 (4) - new combo?
00:55:208 (1) - no new combo?
01:27:935 (1) - ^
Fixed those 3

[sex-crazed loli]
maybe approach -1?
that name makes me laugh xD
00:18:049 (4,5) - dont like these sliders =/
I do :3 I'll wait to see if someone objects, then I'll change
00:44:299 (1) - no new combo?
Kk
00:51:458 (1,2) - =/
I'll wait to see if someone else objects
00:55:208 (1) - no new combo?
Kk
01:06:458 (3,4) - =/
^. Sorry, I just really love x2 sliders XD
01:24:697 (5) - ^
^
01:27:935 (1) - no new combo?
Kk
besides from those sliders, i like this map and song, good luck babble!

Thanks for the mod

Download: MOSAIC.WAV - Saikyou OX Keikaku (TV Size) (babble) [Normal].osu

Download: MOSAIC.WAV - Saikyou OX Keikaku (TV Size) (babble) [Hard].osu

Vicho-kun wrote:

:D

Thanks, nice hitsounds

I'm baaaaaack

[General]
*I don't know why I didn't mention this before, but I really think you need to encode your video to a lower bitrate. Right now it's a 15MB video for a TV size map. 3-4 minute songs sometimes have 5MB videos. So, you can see why I'm a bit worried...
*Hmm... perhaps start a new kiai section at 00:55:549 that ends at the end of the chorus (01:05:095)?
*I suggest changing the last note of each difficulty to a new combo and/or adding a single kiai fountain for an added effect. :p

[Easy]
00:11:913 (2) - This is the only slider shortened by half a beat in the intro... how about shortening 00:14:640 (2) as well?
00:36:458 (1) - waaaay too close in time after the end of the spinner (since it's almost 180bpm...) End this a white tick earlier and it should be fine.
00:48:901 (2) - Red tick beat by itself might be unexpected, so how about making 2/3 a slider?
01:09:185 (1) - Again, shorten this by a white tick. Though, even after shortening, the next note (1) is too far away from the center. Please adjust the pattern to be closer to the center of the spinner.

[Normal]
00:36:458 (1) - Too far from the center of the spinner (or you can shorten the spinner by a white tick)
00:47:367 (1,2) - Overlapping like this makes it a bit confusing to predict how many repeats will be on (1)
01:11:913 (1) - A bit far away like 00:36, but not as far (I still suggest fixing it, though)

[Hard]
00:38:504 (2) - sounds awkward... Extending to the white tick (and silencing that part) should sound much better.
00:52:822 (1) - Waaaay too short (even for a Hard)

[Sex-Crazed Loli]
*Is this your own insane or a guest difficulty? If it's yours, then the kiai should be the same as the other diffs. If it's a guest diff, then the mapper's name should be in the tags of all four difficulties.
*The 2x sliders are a bit unpredicable/ridiculous. I only expect them after having played the map multiple songs. Even with a storyboarded warning, these are a bit crazy... Now that custom slider speeds are out, how about remaking these with 1.5x speed or something like that? =/
00:16:004 (1,2,3) - I couldn't tell that this was a stream due to the hitbursts (100/300s) from the previous notes.
00:27:424 (1,2,3) - ^
00:28:447 (1,2,3) - ^
00:52:822 (1) - A bit short (even for insane); plus the bonus doesn't even hit 2000 :/
01:22:822 (1,2,3) - another hidden stream
01:25:549 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - expected these (the ending) to be larger jumps :s

Very nice mapping (minus a few details; watch your hard/insane overlaps :p)! Great job!

Derekku wrote:

I'm baaaaaack

[General]
*I don't know why I didn't mention this before, but I really think you need to encode your video to a lower bitrate. Right now it's a 15MB video for a TV size map. 3-4 minute songs sometimes have 5MB videos. So, you can see why I'm a bit worried...
*Hmm... perhaps start a new kiai section at 00:55:549 that ends at the end of the chorus (01:05:095)?
*I suggest changing the last note of each difficulty to a new combo and/or adding a single kiai fountain for an added effect. :p

[Easy]
00:11:913 (2) - This is the only slider shortened by half a beat in the intro... how about shortening 00:14:640 (2) as well?I like that one being shorter than the rest, makes more sense musically.
00:36:458 (1) - waaaay too close in time after the end of the spinner (since it's almost 180bpm...) End this a white tick earlier and it should be fine.Kk
00:48:901 (2) - Red tick beat by itself might be unexpected, so how about making 2/3 a slider?Not sure what you mean by 2/3 slider, but I did use a slider XD
01:09:185 (1) - Again, shorten this by a white tick. Though, even after shortening, the next note (1) is too far away from the center. Please adjust the pattern to be closer to the center of the spinner.Kk

I'll mod the rest later.

Star~

nice map!

nice Beatmap!