Namikawa Daisuke - Marukaite Chikyuu

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Haneii
~General~
Remove audio from the video to save space.
Make sure the tags are the same in all the difficulties.

~Italy~
Didn’t find anything ^_^

~Japan~
00:00:806 (1) – just suggestion: extend this slider a bit (so it also extends 2 ticks more on the timeline) and move (2) down 1 tick on the time line and remove the repeat.
00:04:556 (5) - spacing
00:09:946 (3) - spacing
00:11:821 (5) - spacing
00:18:384 (4) - spacing
00:21:665 (6) - move 1 tick down on the time line and adjust spacing accordingly
00:22:368 – make slider start here?

~England~
00:03:384 (1) – move down 1 tick down time line and adjust spacing accordingly
00:08:306 (1) – slider must snap well with 1/4 divisor timing bar (fix this by extending it or decreasing it, just a tiny bit- almost non-existant)
wrong

right

00:10:192 (5) - ^
00:19:556 (2) – maybe you can extend the slider one more tick
00:21:196 (5) - ^

~HERO!~
00:05:727 (2) – move down 1 tick on the time line and remove 1 repeat
00:09:477 (3) – take off distance snap for bit to stack the end of (3) right under the beginning of (2)
00:16:509 (1) - slider must snap well with 1/4 divisor timing bar
00:19:321 (1-7) move back 1 tick each on the time line ( or just make it start at 00:19:087)
00:22:368 (1) - slider must snap well with 1/4 divisor timing bar
00:23:540 (5) – maybe add another repeat (although I don’t like how the whole slider has finish on it :S )
00:23:540 (1) - slider must snap well with 1/4 divisor timing bar
00:25:649 (1) - ^

great job so far, good luck ^_^

~Twinkle twinkle little star~

Blazevoir
Aww darn... I guess I'll just mod this after you're done with Haneii's fixes...
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lovhin456

Haneii wrote:

~General~
Remove audio from the video to save space. How do I remove audio from the video ?? :?
Make sure the tags are the same in all the difficulties. Done

~Italy~
Didn’t find anything ^_^ Yayy !! :D

~Japan~
00:00:806 (1) – just suggestion: extend this slider a bit (so it also extends 2 ticks more on the timeline) and move (2) down 1 tick on the time line and remove the repeat. Done
00:04:556 (5) - spacing Done
00:09:946 (3) - spacing Done
00:11:821 (5) - spacing Done
00:18:384 (4) - spacing Done, I'm not very good at spacing I guess :? xD
00:21:665 (6) - move 1 tick down on the time line and adjust spacing accordingly Done
00:22:368 – make slider start here? Done

~England~
00:03:384 (1) – move down 1 tick down time line and adjust spacing accordingly Done
00:08:306 (1) – slider must snap well with 1/4 divisor timing bar Done (fix this by extending it or decreasing it, just a tiny bit- almost non-existant)
wrong
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right
[attachment=0:0533d]fix.PNG[/attachment:0533d]

00:10:192 (5) - ^ Done
00:19:556 (2) – maybe you can extend the slider one more tick Done
00:21:196 (5) - ^ Done

~HERO!~
00:05:727 (2) – move down 1 tick on the time line and remove 1 repeat Done
00:09:477 (3) – take off distance snap for bit to stack the end of (3) right under the beginning of (2) Done
00:16:509 (1) - slider must snap well with 1/4 divisor timing bar Done
00:19:321 (1-7) move back 1 tick each on the time line ( or just make it start at 00:19:087) Done
00:22:368 (1) - slider must snap well with 1/4 divisor timing bar Done
00:23:540 (5) – maybe add another repeat (although I don’t like how the whole slider has finish on it :S ) Done
00:23:540 (1) - slider must snap well with 1/4 divisor timing bar Done
00:25:649 (1) - ^ Done

great job so far, good luck ^_^

~Twinkle twinkle little star~ Thanks !! :)
Topic Starter
lovhin456

Blazevoir wrote:

Aww darn... I guess I'll just mod this after you're done with Haneii's fixes...xD Done
Blazevoir
Okay now...

Blue = suggestions/minor issues
Green = might want to fix this (still suggestions though)
Red = you MUST fix this
Purple = both a suggestion/minor issue AND something you'll have to fix (you'll see what I mean when I use this)

[General]
Can you change the offset for all difficulties to 806? I just find it weird that your current offset is way into the song.

[Italy]
Fine~

[Japan]
00:12:759 (6) - Well... considering how the previous four sliders were positioned, maybe make this slider start at 00:12:993 instead? (If you do, make sure it still ends at 00:13:227. You might have to fix 00:13:696 (1) after this, too.)
00:15:102 (2) - Move this back to 00:14:868? Where you currently have it kinda doesn't follow any particular rhythm. (You'll have to fix this on the grid if you do decide to move this on the timeline.)
00:26:587 (1) - This spinner doesn't end the same place as Italy's spinner.

[England]
00:05:962 (4) - First of all, why is this slider apart from the last three notes? They're in the same combo. Second, maybe make this slider end at 00:06:431 and make the spinner after that start at 00:06:665? (If you do decide to do that, make sure the spinner still ends at 00:07:837.)
00:15:806 (1) - Make this spinner end at 00:16:743 instead?
00:22:602 (1) - Move this on the timeline so that it starts at 00:22:837. You'll also need to move this closer to (2) on the grid.
00:25:415 (2) - Make this end at 00:26:118 instead?
00:27:290 (4) - Make this start at 00:27:524 instead? (If you do, make sure it still ends at 00:27:993.)
00:28:462 (5) - This slider is still in 1/6 timing. Fix this; make sure it still ends at 00:29:868 though.

[HERO!]
00:03:149 (1) - This slider is still in 1/6 timing.
00:24:946 (2,3,4) - What's up with the spacing here, particularly (3)?
00:28:462 (4) - This slider is still in 1/6 timing. Fix this; make sure it still ends at 00:29:868 though.

And... that's about it :) I'll give you a star after I check on the fixes. (Remember that you don't have to do all my changes.)
Topic Starter
lovhin456

Blazevoir wrote:

Okay now...

Blue = suggestions/minor issues
Green = might want to fix this (still suggestions though)
Red = you MUST fix this
Purple = both a suggestion/minor issue AND something you'll have to fix (you'll see what I mean when I use this) xD This made me giggle

[General]
Can you change the offset for all difficulties to 806? I just find it weird that your current offset is way into the song. Done

[Italy]
Fine~ Yayy !! :)

[Japan]
00:12:759 (6) - Well... considering how the previous four sliders were positioned, maybe make this slider start at 00:12:993 instead? (If you do, make sure it still ends at 00:13:227. You might have to fix 00:13:696 (1) after this, too.) Done
00:15:102 (2) - Move this back to 00:14:868? Where you currently have it kinda doesn't follow any particular rhythm. (You'll have to fix this on the grid if you do decide to move this on the timeline.) Done
00:26:587 (1) - This spinner doesn't end the same place as Italy's spinner. Done

[England]
00:05:962 (4) - First of all, why is this slider apart from the last three notes? They're in the same combo. Second, maybe make this slider end at 00:06:431 and make the spinner after that start at 00:06:665? (If you do decide to do that, make sure the spinner still ends at 00:07:837.) Done
00:15:806 (1) - Make this spinner end at 00:16:743 instead? Done
00:22:602 (1) - Move this on the timeline so that it starts at 00:22:837. You'll also need to move this closer to (2) on the grid. Done
00:25:415 (2) - Make this end at 00:26:118 instead? Done
00:27:290 (4) - Make this start at 00:27:524 instead? (If you do, make sure it still ends at 00:27:993.) Done
00:28:462 (5) - This slider is still in 1/6 timing. Fix this; make sure it still ends at 00:29:868 though. Done

[HERO!]
00:03:149 (1) - This slider is still in 1/6 timing. Done
00:24:946 (2,3,4) - What's up with the spacing here, particularly (3)? Done
00:28:462 (4) - This slider is still in 1/6 timing. Fix this; make sure it still ends at 00:29:868 though. Done

And... that's about it :) I'll give you a star after I check on the fixes Okk, thanks for the advice again :)
Blazevoir

lovhin456 wrote:

Blazevoir wrote:

Purple = both a suggestion/minor issue AND something you'll have to fix (you'll see what I mean when I use this) xD This made me giggle
Uhh... not sure how that made you giggle, but okay ^^; Anyway,

[Japan]
00:13:462 (1,2) - Maybe move (1) underneath the last combo's slider? (Fix (2) afterwards if you did.)

[England]
00:26:587 (3,4,5) - Fix the spacing between these three.

*gives you both a normal ★ AND a kudosu ★* Good job :D
Topic Starter
lovhin456

Blazevoir wrote:

Anyway,

[Japan]
00:13:462 (1,2) - Maybe move (1) underneath the last combo's slider? (Fix (2) afterwards if you did.) Done but I'm not sure if I did it right...xD

[England]
00:26:587 (3,4,5) - Fix the spacing between these three. Done

*gives you both a normal ★ AND a kudosu ★* Good job :D Thanks !!! :)
Lemon Water
Oh my gosh I'm too lazy to mod again. (I'm just a silly 13 year old slacker.) So sorry. >.<
I guess I'll KUDOSU STAR! since you worked real hard and looks better from last time. :)
Blazevoir

lovhin456 wrote:

Blazevoir wrote:

Anyway,

[Japan]
00:13:462 (1,2) - Maybe move (1) underneath the last combo's slider? (Fix (2) afterwards if you did.) Done but I'm not sure if I did it right...xD You did :)

[England]
00:26:587 (3,4,5) - Fix the spacing between these three. Done

*gives you both a normal ★ AND a kudosu ★* Good job :D Thanks !!! :) You're wlecome :)
Umm, by the way... what did you update in the HERO! difficulty?
EvianBubble
Hallo there! :)

General
(Taken from Italy)
Change offset to 784
Source is different on different difficulties O_O (actually now that I check it's just England that's different)
Actually you can remove all the timing points apart from the first one (unless it's for Kiai), I don't think they're needed

Italy
00:06:431 (1) - Depending on how difficult you want this, you could reduce this spinner or put more space between it and the next beat
00:08:306 - What is this uninherited timing point for? I don't think you need this
00:15:806 - Same thing
00:17:212 (2 - 6) - Spacing, it's different from before and (6 - 8). Move closer together
00:22:837 (1, 2) - Same
00:26:587, 00:30:337 - I don't think you need these timing sections as well, especially since it's just for a spinner

Japan
This is REALLY like Italy. Also, its maximum score is LESS than Italy. WTF?
00:03:618 (end of 2, 3) - Spacing, I suggest moving the rest of the combo below this slider
00:05:024 (end of 5, 6) - Spacing, move one grid left
00:13:462 (1) - Don't like this overlap, you're used to half beat overlaps not quarter beat overlaps. I suggest moving it so it looks like the spacing at 00:04:321 (4, 5) (same time difference). Also, spacing between this and (2), move one grid closer together
00:16:743 (end of 2 - 1 of next combo) - Your spacing changes a lot. Do you want one or two grids between objects that are half beat away? I've been thinking it's one grid and my spacing comments have reflected that, but two grids happens so much I don't know which one you want. Whichever it is, pick one and stick with it. Spacing here should be closer together if it's 1 as indicated earlier in the song ...
... another good example of this is 00:21:431 - 00:22:368. Timing is the same here but spacing is not. Fix this as well

England
See spacing comments above. Spacing for quarter beats is different: 00:02:446 (4, 5) and 00:04:321 (end of 1, 2) VS. 00:04:556 (2 - 4 of next combo) VS. 00:16:977 (1, 2) and 00:18:852 (4 - 2 of next combo)
Other than that not much else

Hero
Derp. Spacing again. 00:02:212 (end of 2, 3). May I suggest making the slider repeat again instead, deleting (3), then moving the rest of the combo closer?
00:05:962 (2) - I suggest unstacking this from (1)
00:09:243 (end of 2, 3) - Spacing
00:10:181 (end of 3, 4) - Spacing
00:19:087 (1 - 7) - Erm ... you switched spacing amounts? O_O Even if you keep this move (1) one grid to the right
00:22:368 (1) - 00:27:290 (5) - Even further spacing now? Uh ... okay ... It's even the same as 00:27:993 (3, 4) which is a half beat ...

Most of these are pretty specific, apart from the really obvious spacing ones. Good job for your first map though. Lucks! :D
Topic Starter
lovhin456

Lemons In Your Eyes wrote:

Oh my gosh I'm too lazy to mod again. (I'm just a silly 13 year old slacker.) So sorry. >.<
I guess I'll KUDOSU STAR! since you worked real hard and looks better from last time. :)
Thanks !!! :) Hahaha, I'm a silly 15 year old slacker xD
Topic Starter
lovhin456

Blazevoir wrote:

Umm, by the way... what did you update in the HERO! difficulty? I don't really remember... but it looks the same right ?? I wish I could remember everything I do :o
Topic Starter
lovhin456

EvianBubble wrote:

Hallo there! :)

General
(Taken from Italy)
Change offset to 784 Not sure about this one, Blazevoir told me 806 for the offset :o I guess I’ll post on the BPM/Offset help forum…but thanks :)
Source is different on different difficulties O_O (actually now that I check it's just England that's different) Done
Actually you can remove all the timing points apart from the first one (unless it's for Kiai), I don't think they're needed Done

Italy
00:06:431 (1) - Depending on how difficult you want this, you could reduce this spinner or put more space between it and the next beat I think the length is okk, it goes with the song.
00:08:306 - What is this uninherited timing point for? I don't think you need this Done
00:15:806 - Same thing Done
00:17:212 (2 - 6) - Spacing, it's different from before and (6 - 8). Move closer together Done
00:22:837 (1, 2) – Same Done
00:26:587, 00:30:337 - I don't think you need these timing sections as well, especially since it's just for a spinner I don’t know the kiai looks good there for me

Japan
This is REALLY like Italy. Also, its maximum score is LESS than Italy. WTF? Done, added more notes
00:03:618 (end of 2, 3) - Spacing, I suggest moving the rest of the combo below this slider Done
00:05:024 (end of 5, 6) - Spacing, move one grid left Done
00:13:462 (1) - Don't like this overlap, you're used to half beat overlaps not quarter beat overlaps. I suggest moving it so it looks like the spacing at 00:04:321 (4, 5) (same time difference). Also, spacing between this and (2), move one grid closer together Done, but I don’t know if it looks good, oh well…
00:16:743 (end of 2 - 1 of next combo) - Your spacing changes a lot. Do you want one or two grids between objects that are half beat away? I've been thinking it's one grid and my spacing comments have reflected that, but two grids happens so much I don't know which one you want. Whichever it is, pick one and stick with it. Spacing here should be closer together if it's 1 as indicated earlier in the song ... Done, sticking with one grid
... another good example of this is 00:21:431 - 00:22:368. Timing is the same here but spacing is not. Fix this as well Done

England
See spacing comments above. Spacing for quarter beats is different: 00:02:446 (4, 5) and 00:04:321 (end of 1, 2) VS. 00:04:556 (2 - 4 of next combo) VS. 00:16:977 (1, 2) and 00:18:852 (4 - 2 of next combo) Done I guess :? … tell me if is okk :D
Other than that not much else

Hero
Derp. Spacing again. 00:02:212 (end of 2, 3). May I suggest making the slider repeat again instead, deleting (3), then moving the rest of the combo closer? Done, I don’t if I did it okk…
00:05:962 (2) - I suggest unstacking this from (1) Done
00:09:243 (end of 2, 3) – Spacing Done
00:10:181 (end of 3, 4) – Spacing Done
00:19:087 (1 - 7) - Erm ... you switched spacing amounts? O_O Even if you keep this move (1) one grid to the right I’ll keep it
00:22:368 (1) - 00:27:290 (5) - Even further spacing now? Uh ... okay ... It's even the same as 00:27:993 (3, 4) which is a half beat ... Done, but I don’t know if is okk.

Most of these are pretty specific, apart from the really obvious spacing ones. Good job for your first map though. Lucks! :DThanks !! :)
EvianBubble
Hi again, recheck time! :PBoy I'm modding a lot today ...

Italy looks good. I'm not a timing pro so yes, I agree, you should probably get a pro to double check your timing

Japan
00:13:462 (1) - Yes good, but you can move it further out so it's the same as 00:04:321 (4, 5) (so move up 4 squares I believe)
00:21:899 (1) - Un new combo? Not sure about this one, your choice
00:22:368 (1) - Un new combo this, and instead make (2) new combo (since it's when the singing starts again)
Spacing is much more consistent now, nice :)

England
00:02:681 (5) - Even though the spacing is off here it's OK because of the stacking, but I suggest moving one grid up nonetheless
00:04:556 (2 - 4 of next combo) - I'm assuming you want this spacing between quarter beats since it appears most often, so move this whole thing down 3 grids
00:16:977 (1, 2) - Move up 3 grids

Hero
00:09:477 (3) - Okay I suggest redesigning this part, because all the stacking is really hard to read. Move this 6 grids right (if any of my grid numbers are wrong, just do it like normal spacing)
00:10:415 (4 - 3 of next combo) - I guess it's better to keep this stacked, but move to the top of end of (3) (5 or 6 grids up, whichever fits spacing)
00:13:227 (2) - Move one grid down
00:26:587 (2) - Move farther away from (1)
00:28:462 (4) - Move 4 grids right (I think this should be OK)

If everything's great after my next recheck I'll give you a star :D
Topic Starter
lovhin456

EvianBubble wrote:

Hi again, recheck time! :PBoy I'm modding a lot today ... xD you do a good job I must say :P

Italy looks good. I'm not a timing pro so yes, I agree, you should probably get a pro to double check your timing

Japan
00:13:462 (1) - Yes good, but you can move it further out so it's the same as 00:04:321 (4, 5) (so move up 4 squares I believe) Done
00:21:899 (1) - Un new combo? Not sure about this one, your choice Done
00:22:368 (1) - Un new combo this, and instead make (2) new combo (since it's when the singing starts again) Done
Spacing is much more consistent now, nice :)Thanks :D

England
00:02:681 (5) - Even though the spacing is off here it's OK because of the stacking, but I suggest moving one grid up nonetheless Done
00:04:556 (2 - 4 of next combo) - I'm assuming you want this spacing between quarter beats since it appears most often, so move this whole thing down 3 grids Done
00:16:977 (1, 2) - Move up 3 grids Done

Hero
00:09:477 (3) - Okay I suggest redesigning this part, because all the stacking is really hard to read. Move this 6 grids right (if any of my grid numbers are wrong, just do it like normal spacing) Done
00:10:415 (4 - 3 of next combo) - I guess it's better to keep this stacked, but move to the top of end of (3) (5 or 6 grids up, whichever fits spacing) Done
00:13:227 (2) - Move one grid down Done
00:26:587 (2) - Move farther away from (1) Done
00:28:462 (4) - Move 4 grids right (I think this should be OK) Done

If everything's great after my next recheck I'll give you a star :DYayy !!
Muya
[Italy]
00:24:243 - (3.4) 4grid right
00:29:868 - end Kiai here

[Japan]
00:29:868 - end Kiai here

[England]
Slider Tick Rate 1
00:21:196 - add circle , (5) Make this slider start at 00:21:431 , finish at 00:22:368
00:25:181 - (1) remove new combo
00:25:415 - add circle , (2) Make this slider start at 00:25:649 , finish at 00:26:118
00:26:587 - (3) add newcombo
00:29:868 - end Kiai here

[HERO!]
Slider Tick Rate 1
00:09:477 - (3) Make this slider finish at 00:09:712
00:10:181 - add circle & new combo
00:10:649 - (1) remove new combo
00:29:868 - end Kiai here
Topic Starter
lovhin456

Muya wrote:

[Italy]
00:24:243 - (3.4) 4grid right Done
00:29:868 - end Kiai here Done

[Japan]
00:29:868 - end Kiai here Done

[England]
Slider Tick Rate 1 Done
00:21:196 - add circle , (5) Make this slider start at 00:21:431 , finish at 00:22:368 Done
00:25:181 - (1) remove new combo Done
00:25:415 - add circle , (2) Make this slider start at 00:25:649 , finish at 00:26:118 Done
00:26:587 - (3) add newcombo Done
00:29:868 - end Kiai here Done
[color=#FF0080]Thanks for the advice !! :)
[/color]

[HERO!]
Slider Tick Rate 1 Done
00:09:477 - (3) Make this slider finish at 00:09:712 Done
00:10:181 - add circle & new combo Done
00:10:649 - (1) remove new combo Done
00:29:868 - end Kiai here Done
Astom
Wenas~
En rojo tal vez importante, En azul sugerencias

[General]
-Los backgrounds deben ser 1024x768 o 800x600, ajusta las imagenes que tienes o busca alguna que se cumpla con las medidas
-Habilita "Inherit previous timing settings" en los timing points despues del primero (esta opcion aparece en "timing setup panel", para activar la opcion debes seleccionar el timing point y luego marcar la casilla).

[Italy]
-00:19:087 (1) new combo

[England]
-00:10:181 (5) new combo
-00:11:118 (2) remove new combo
-00:12:056 (1) new combo
-00:13:227 (1) remove new combo
-00:13:931 (5) new combo
-00:19:087 (5) new combo
-00:19:321 (1) remove new combo


[HERO!]
-00:17:212 add a circle
-00:25:649 (1) remove new combo
-00:26:587 (2) new combo
-00:27:524 (1) remove new combo


Em esop :3
Star~
Topic Starter
lovhin456

Astom wrote:

Wenas~
En rojo tal vez importante, En azul sugerencias

[General]
-Los backgrounds deben ser 1024x768 o 800x600, ajusta las imagenes que tienes o busca alguna que se cumpla con las medidas
-Habilita "Inherit previous timing settings" en los timing points despues del primero (esta opcion aparece en "timing setup panel", para activar la opcion debes seleccionar el timing point y luego marcar la casilla).

[Italy]
-00:19:087 (1) new combo

[England]
-00:10:181 (5) new combo
-00:11:118 (2) remove new combo
-00:12:056 (1) new combo
-00:13:227 (1) remove new combo
-00:13:931 (5) new combo
-00:19:087 (5) new combo
-00:19:321 (1) remove new combo


[HERO!]
-00:17:212 add a circle
-00:25:649 (1) remove new combo
-00:26:587 (2) new combo
-00:27:524 (1) remove new combo


Em esop :3
Star~
Todo listo, y gracias !! :D
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