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Saten ruiko

Pokie wrote:

8-) c-chu
POLKE-W- 8-)
Alace
-7ms to your offset and resnap all notes to all of your diffs

<Hitsounds>
Easy:有一些部份有中斷掉的感覺,clap與whistle都算合曲子,但因為note量比較少所以可以考慮只使用clap (whostle太少時反而不好聽)
Normal:nice 00:03:940 (4) - 兩個音效混在一起沒有單一拍手好聽,建議把一開始的部份修改一下
Hard+insane:clap的位子有些沒下對位,以長白線為第一拍的話,在2 4的拍子上下clap會比較好聽 (跟音樂的clap同步) 可以參考normal的音效與下圖
banvi
done

[attachment=0:6e6a1]Hatsune Miku - Moon (Clement) [banvi's Hoshi].osu[/attachment:6e6a1]
eveless
忘了星.
最近忙昏头- -

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Cyril Scarlet
Just Suggestion ~ Plz ignore this if you feel weird


Overall

 ● add banvi and eveless in tag


banvi' Hoshi

00:03:933 (2) - use grid snap and put it again


eveless's Tsuki

00:32:740 (4) - move up 1 grid (Lv3)
00:41:933 (5) - I think mapiing after this until 00:43:533 is good <3
00:57:940 (3) - Down 1 grid (Lv3)


Hard

00:20:533 (1) - Remove new combo ?
00:20:933 (3) - add new combo
00:27:333 (1,2,3) - use same spacing
00:32:333 (1) - remove new combo
00:33:533 (1,2,3) - change rhythm from 1 to 2 ? ? ↓↓

1.

2.

00:41:733 (1) - remove new combo
00:50:533 (1,2,3,4,5) - this note is not put in same line , I think open use Grid Snap and put again is good


Insane

00:19:533 (5) - move 1 grid up ? (Lv3)
00:21:733 (8,9,10) - move little right for same with 4-5 ?
00:22:533 (1) - stop spin at 00:23:933 and add note at 00:24:333 ? (suggestion)
00:25:733 (6) - new combo ?
00:26:533 (1) - remove new combo ?
00:34:933 (7) - new combo ?
00:46:533 (5,1) - move left 1 grid (Lv3)
00:46:733 (1) - I think not need to new combo here :3
00:50:533 (1,2,3,4,5) - move it like this ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/14229
00:57:533 (7) - it's not pattern I think use spacing same with 2-6 is better
01:00:533 (1,2,3) - mvoe right 1 grid (Lv3)
01:04:333 (3) - down 1 grid (Lv3)
01:04:533 (4) - left 1 grid (Lv3)
01:11:133 (3) - new combo
01:33:933 (1) - remove new combo
01:36:333 (1) - ^
01:40:133 (1,2) - up 1 grid (Lv3)
01:40:733 (4) - ^
banvi
Thx , S i R i R u

update please >w<
[attachment=0:46207]Hatsune Miku - Moon (Clement) [banvi's Hoshi].osu[/attachment:46207]
xierbaliti
some suggestions in irc.

*star*
ignorethis
- add composer to tag

- "thanks for playing" should appear after the song ends, and the colour of the text makes it hard to read

- are the pics in background SB moving a bit too fast? >_>

<Banvi's Hoshi>
00:19:933 (4) - remove whistle
00:50:733 (3) - up + left one grid in lv3
01:22:333 (2) - down one grid in lv3
01:27:333 (1,2,3,4,5) - remove 1,3,5 or use sliders
01:37:933 (1) - up one grid in lv3
01:38:333 (2) - left + down one grid lv3
(don't forget to mirror them)
01:40:133 (1,2,3,4,5) - same as above
01:58:733 (2,3,4,5,6) - down one grid lv3

<eveless' Tsuki>
oa+1
00:17:940 (1,2,3) - copy, paste and rotate 120° will look better
01:15:540 (3) - new combo
01:20:333 - add spinner?

<Hard>
00:36:733 (1,2) - this jump doesn't fit the rhythem at all, remove
00:49:133 (2,3,4,5,6) - arrange like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/14713
01:21:133 (7) - this 0.5x slider is weird o.o
01:26:733 (4) - add this to 0.5x
01:39:133 (8) - add clap
01:47:933 (2,3,4,5) - remove

<Insane>
00:28:333 - add a note here
00:45:733 (1,2,3,4) - two grids up in lv3
01:04:333 (3) - right one grid in lv3
01:04:733 (5) - up two grids
01:29:333 (8) - left one grid
01:47:533 - add a spinner until here

star'd
Mokou_Fujiwara

ignorethis wrote:

- add composer to tag

- "thanks for playing" should appear after the song ends, and the colour of the text makes it hard to read
That's right. I will fixed it
- are the pics in background SB moving a bit too fast? >_>
^

star'd
thanks
Topic Starter
Saten ruiko

ignorethis wrote:

- add composer to tag

- "thanks for playing" should appear after the song ends, and the colour of the text makes it hard to read

- are the pics in background SB moving a bit too fast? >_>

<Banvi's Hoshi>
00:19:933 (4) - remove whistle
00:50:733 (3) - up + left one grid in lv3
01:22:333 (2) - down one grid in lv3
01:27:333 (1,2,3,4,5) - remove 1,3,5 or use sliders
01:37:933 (1) - up one grid in lv3
01:38:333 (2) - left + down one grid lv3
(don't forget to mirror them)
01:40:133 (1,2,3,4,5) - same as above
01:58:733 (2,3,4,5,6) - down one grid lv3

<eveless' Tsuki>
oa+1
00:17:940 (1,2,3) - copy, paste and rotate 120° will look better
01:15:540 (3) - new combo
01:20:333 - add spinner?

<Hard>
00:36:733 (1,2) - this jump doesn't fit the rhythem at all, remove
00:49:133 (2,3,4,5,6) - arrange like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/14713
01:21:133 (7) - this 0.5x slider is weird o.o
01:26:733 (4) - add this to 0.5x
01:39:133 (8) - add clap
01:47:933 (2,3,4,5) - remove

<Insane>
00:28:333 - add a note here
00:45:733 (1,2,3,4) - two grids up in lv3
01:04:333 (3) - right one grid in lv3
01:04:733 (5) - up two grids
01:29:333 (8) - left one grid
01:47:533 - add a spinner until here

star'd
done
vivicat
._.
xBubu
Moded in-irc
hvick225
:) STAR
tsuka
Easy:
00:57:133 (2) - new combo
just like the 01:09:133 (1)

01:59:533 (4,5,6) - soft whistle
02:00:333 (1) - soft finish
volume 80%

eveless' Tsuki:
fine
nice one

hard:
01:22:011 & 01:22:013 - why there are two same timing sections?????? remove the one of them


Insane:
00:29:633 (4,5) - awful distance =w=
01:20:333 (1,2,3,4) - could you make the jumps more closed ? its really harder than others ....just a suggestion

good job
Topic Starter
Saten ruiko

tsukamaete wrote:

Easy:
00:57:133 (2) - new combo
just like the 01:09:133 (1)

01:59:533 (4,5,6) - soft whistle
02:00:333 (1) - soft finish
volume 80%

eveless' Tsuki:
fine
nice one

hard:
01:22:011 & 01:22:013 - why there are two same timing sections?????? remove the one of them


Insane:
00:29:633 (4,5) - awful distance =w=
01:20:333 (1,2,3,4) - could you make the jumps more closed ? its really harder than others ....just a suggestion

good job
thx~ :)
Mriya_Suwako
fight on~!~
valuable_old
^^
Breeze
很久没mod过了orz

[SB]
  1. 代码有些小问题
    例如其中有用到fade效果的一项
    Sprite,Background,Centre,"BGBG-effect.jpg",320,240
    F,0,81140,81940,0,1
    S,0,81140,81940,0.62112,0.65184
    F,0,81940,,1
    S,0,81940,82340,0.65184,0.7337601
    F,0,81940,87140,1,0.06625003
    红色部分的0.06625003弄成0更完美,虽然这个肉眼不可见
    不过这种并未完全消失的SB图片实际上是可能造成失帧的,机器不太好的会卡
    不是什么大问题,帮你改好了,osb在这:)
    Download: Hatsune Miku - Moon (Clement).osb
[General]
  1. 删掉SB文件夹里的Thumbs.db再full submit
  2. Insane有countdown而其他难度没有,这个统一下吧
  3. [eveless' Tsuki]难度的Stack Leniency是0.5而其他难度是0.7,不知道现在规定能不能不一样,记得以前是要一样的
  4. [eveless' Tsuki]的offset是340而其他难度是333,这个必须得统一来着
[banvi's Hoshi]
  1. HP Drain Rate比[eveless' Tsuki]高的多了些,适当降低这个HDR,升些[eveless' Tsuki]的比较平衡吧?
  2. 01:01:933 (3) - 单纯的个人认为whistle这里听着不怎么合
[eveless' Tsuki]
  1. 01:34:740 (4) - Add finish
[Hard]
  1. 01:16:733 (3) - No finish
    nice diff. 节奏感很强,拍子听着很舒服 : )
[Insane]
  1. 00:14:733 (13) - 多反弹一次在这结束slider,结束加上finish
  2. 00:28:333 (4) - Spacing稍微远了点
  3. 01:47:533 (S) - Add finish
nice map
Topic Starter
Saten ruiko

Breeze wrote:

很久没mod过了orz

[SB]
  1. 代码有些小问题
    例如其中有用到fade效果的一项
    Sprite,Background,Centre,"BGBG-effect.jpg",320,240
    F,0,81140,81940,0,1
    S,0,81140,81940,0.62112,0.65184
    F,0,81940,,1
    S,0,81940,82340,0.65184,0.7337601
    F,0,81940,87140,1,0.06625003
    红色部分的0.06625003弄成0更完美,虽然这个肉眼不可见
    不过这种并未完全消失的SB图片实际上是可能造成失帧的,机器不太好的会卡
    不是什么大问题,帮你改好了,osb在这:)
    [attachment=0:3374c]Hatsune Miku - Moon (Clement).osb[/attachment:3374c]
[General]
  1. 删掉SB文件夹里的Thumbs.db再full submit
  2. Insane有countdown而其他难度没有,这个统一下吧
  3. [eveless' Tsuki]难度的Stack Leniency是0.5而其他难度是0.7,不知道现在规定能不能不一样,记得以前是要一样的
  4. [eveless' Tsuki]的offset是340而其他难度是333,这个必须得统一来着
[banvi's Hoshi]
  1. HP Drain Rate比[eveless' Tsuki]高的多了些,适当降低这个HDR,升些[eveless' Tsuki]的比较平衡吧?
  2. 01:01:933 (3) - 单纯的个人认为whistle这里听着不怎么合
[eveless' Tsuki]
  1. 01:34:740 (4) - Add finish
[Hard]
  1. 01:16:733 (3) - No finish
    nice diff. 节奏感很强,拍子听着很舒服 : )
[Insane]
  1. 00:14:733 (13) - 多反弹一次在这结束slider,结束加上finish
  2. 00:28:333 (4) - Spacing稍微远了点
  3. 01:47:533 (S) - Add finish
nice map
謝謝微風 :)
al2e10
Mod by Al2e~

[Insane]
- Spacing
00:41:133 (4,5) - Spacing
01:23:133 (3,4) - ^
- Combo problem
01:11:133 (1) - Remove new combo
01:11:733 (1,1,1,) - ^

[Hard]
- Combo problem
00:47:333 (1,1) - Remove new combo
- Sound
00:52:733 (3,4) - Remove wistle

[All]
Don't use a lot of distance from X1.5- X2.0.
It a bit boring for Insane and Hard.

STAR
hez
:) star~
Beren
:)
Snowy Dream
star~
话说我那个瞎做的完整的MOON没人理
Topic Starter
Saten ruiko

ddddd519 wrote:

star~
话说我那个瞎做的完整的MOON没人理
你要去找人阿
orioncomet
in irc it's just a little thing tho, so here's my star ❤
xinhe
我来STAR的~~~>.>
yanhan1064
star > <
Heatherfield
:)
cloness
star
only_love
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konggejian
路过无罪
mtmcl
I received this mod request a couple months ago, apparently, and felt bad for overlooking it. It appears as though this map hasn't seen any activity in a while, but it's still in pending so I'll give it my attention.

I was surprised to find that this is actually a very well made map. I don't see any flaws in rankability, in fact. Due to a few tricks here and there, I wouldn't consider any of the difficulties "easy", but the difficulties are still well balanced, so I won't hold that fact against the map set.

Very nice. Have a bubble.
Krisom
I had not noticed this before :<

Consider adding "Project Diva" to the tags please. I'm sure that you can do this when the next BAT comes and see (I mean, if the only thing that will be fixed for a rank is the tags...). Also, why is "miku" in the tags? It's alredy in the artist, remove it :P!

I still don't like this trend of adding "vocaloid2" as the source, but whatever, irohaP is in the tags...
banvi

Krisom wrote:

I had not noticed this before :<

Consider adding "Project Diva" to the tags please. I'm sure that you can do this when the next BAT comes and see (I mean, if the only thing that will be fixed for a rank is the tags...). Also, why is "miku" in the tags? It's alredy in the artist, remove it :P!

I still don't like this trend of adding "vocaloid2" as the source, but whatever, irohaP is in the tags...
& add Vocaloid in tags ???
Good Luck :D
Topic Starter
Saten ruiko
:D
James
325 offset?
and dont forget to move the green lines too.
Topic Starter
Saten ruiko
DONE
Krisom
be sure to do what I and banvi told you to do before asking for a re-bubble please!!!!
James
BUBBLE
Derekku
We'd really appreciate it if you would fix the tags and source as indicated by the other posts. (orz)

Source: irohaP
Tags: eveless banvi vocaloid vocaloid2 project diva
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