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-work on your combos, they're placed inconsistently and with an irregular interval.
00:10:665 (1,2,1,2) - I believe that the transition could've been executed a bit better, move 00:10:776 (2) - to x=0 y=305
00:11:443 (2) - stack with 00:10:109 (1) -
00:12:443 (6,7,8) - why aren't these a triangle? there are clearly 3 distinguishable sounds.
00:14:443 (3) - 00:14:998 (4) - overlaps pretty disgustingly
00:15:998 (1,2,3,4,1) - https://puu.sh/z0X8W/073eb62f9a.jpg
00:18:220 (4,5,6,7,8) - this just doesn't look appealing at all, put 00:18:332 (6,7,8) - to x=57 y=28 (or something similar)
00:20:109 (1,2,3,4,5) - this pattern clearly emphasizes something being on 00:20:332 - , both with patterns and with DS. The first slider needs a huge change to avoid confusion.
00:24:887 (1,3,5) - just put these in a straight line, lol
00:27:887 (1,2,3) - different spacings, same sounds.
00:28:893 (5) - unsnapped, also 00:28:887 (5,6,7,8) - are two distinct sounds, thus should be organized in a way emphasizing that (I suggest https://puu.sh/z0Xoy/b5cf344a01.jpg)
00:36:793 (2,1) - ugly overlap
00:39:551 (2) - put under 00:40:106 (7,8,9,10,1) - for aesthetics
00:44:773 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - these sounds are special, I believe you should organize all of them in a clear square shape.
00:46:550 (1,2,3,4,5) - looks too random, neither a straight stream, nor a wave, nor three groups of circles. something in between, that doesn't work
01:21:439 (2,3,4) - stack these up with 01:21:106 (3) - AND with themselves.
01:31:439 (1) - kickslider there (the repeating one)
01:42:050 (6,2,5) - ugly as hell and unorganized
Rest is fine. I don't really enjoy the flow, but that's purely subjective. What matters are the visuals and aesthetics, which in this case are inconsistent and unorganized.
gl
-work on your combos, they're placed inconsistently and with an irregular interval.
00:10:665 (1,2,1,2) - I believe that the transition could've been executed a bit better, move 00:10:776 (2) - to x=0 y=305
00:11:443 (2) - stack with 00:10:109 (1) -
00:12:443 (6,7,8) - why aren't these a triangle? there are clearly 3 distinguishable sounds.
00:14:443 (3) - 00:14:998 (4) - overlaps pretty disgustingly
00:15:998 (1,2,3,4,1) - https://puu.sh/z0X8W/073eb62f9a.jpg
00:18:220 (4,5,6,7,8) - this just doesn't look appealing at all, put 00:18:332 (6,7,8) - to x=57 y=28 (or something similar)
00:20:109 (1,2,3,4,5) - this pattern clearly emphasizes something being on 00:20:332 - , both with patterns and with DS. The first slider needs a huge change to avoid confusion.
00:24:887 (1,3,5) - just put these in a straight line, lol
00:27:887 (1,2,3) - different spacings, same sounds.
00:28:893 (5) - unsnapped, also 00:28:887 (5,6,7,8) - are two distinct sounds, thus should be organized in a way emphasizing that (I suggest https://puu.sh/z0Xoy/b5cf344a01.jpg)
00:36:793 (2,1) - ugly overlap
00:39:551 (2) - put under 00:40:106 (7,8,9,10,1) - for aesthetics
00:44:773 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - these sounds are special, I believe you should organize all of them in a clear square shape.
00:46:550 (1,2,3,4,5) - looks too random, neither a straight stream, nor a wave, nor three groups of circles. something in between, that doesn't work
01:21:439 (2,3,4) - stack these up with 01:21:106 (3) - AND with themselves.
01:31:439 (1) - kickslider there (the repeating one)
01:42:050 (6,2,5) - ugly as hell and unorganized
Rest is fine. I don't really enjoy the flow, but that's purely subjective. What matters are the visuals and aesthetics, which in this case are inconsistent and unorganized.
gl