Calvin Harris (feat. Ellie Goulding) - Outside · forum

Yukiyo

425 posts

Joined June 2014

Yukiyo 2016-04-23T15:32:34+00:00

Yo m4m here o/
I'm pretty new to the modding stuff
but i'll try ma best

Normal

01:09:586 (1,2) - overlap (looks kinda ugly to me)
01:11:696 (2,3) - ^
01:13:336 (1,2,3,4) - hearing many notes but only clicking so few | like the red tick before the 01:13:804 (2,3) is just skipped
01:17:086 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:19:898 (3,4) - that gap somehow throws me off
01:22:711 (1,1) - very awkward pause
01:27:398 (2) - make this curve into the end of the sliderend before

Why does the kiai stop 01:24:286 even tho the song continiouses to be in the refrain

Hard

00:09:117 (4,5) - Think you should have a long slider here and not focus on having this sound. 00:09:586 (1)
Rather focus on starting on the vocals and have them be a sliderend.
Also having that long slider brings in a bit of repeating from before (you don't have to change rhythm all the time )

00:17:086 (3) - again vocals starting on a slider end
00:21:773 (3) - ^ (not gonna mention it over the whole mod again)
00:45:211 (1,2,3,4,1) - I'd have same distance between those (not DS) like that 00:45:211 (1,2) - are equally distanced as ->
00:46:148 (3,4) - the begginings of those two

01:00:093 (6,7) - make this go with the curve of the slider help with the flow
01:01:383 (5,6,1,2) - idk if those may be a bit too hard for a "Hard" difficulty use normal retun sliders instead perhaps
01:03:726 (1) - give this a bit off up curve
01:04:898 (4) - ctrl+j and put it at same spot| together with the ^ look pretty nice

same stuff with kiai as in normal (my Preference)

Hope I helped a bit with it

Nickelony

402 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

Nickelony 2016-04-23T17:18:03+00:00

Ataraxia wrote:
Hii M4M c:

Gerony's Normal

01:09:117 (2) - i Just think this NC is wrong, and combo 2 is more better them fixed!

01:12:633 (4,5) - I think this patten is a bit hard on a normal, they force to tap 2 and a 3 for the slider, and i think is a badly force this thing :s nope.

Nickero's Hard

00:16:617 (5) - Remove this NC fixed!

00:17:086 (1) - NC her, them , remove her 00:17:789 (2) - (Will be like This) fixed!

00:28:101 (7) - remove NC, and Nc her 00:28:336 (1) - fixed!

00:31:383 (5) - Nc fixed!

00:35:601 (4) - Nc her (Better NC like This) fixed!

00:43:101 (6) - NC fixed!

00:44:976 (5) - i think this circle is not correct for the flow, the slider over in a direction, and the circle is in other, I think Better if Like This fixed!

Yes ! Very cool the Collabs , i like the map, hope to get rank !

good luck

Thank you for the mod!

Nickelony

402 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

Nickelony 2016-04-23T17:22:08+00:00

Yukiyo wrote:
Yo m4m here o/
I'm pretty new to the modding stuff
but i'll try ma best

Normal

01:09:586 (1,2) - overlap (looks kinda ugly to me) nope.
01:11:696 (2,3) - ^ nope.
01:13:336 (1,2,3,4) - hearing many notes but only clicking so few | like the red tick before the 01:13:804 (2,3) is just skipped nope.
01:17:086 (1,2,3,4) - ^ nope.
01:19:898 (3,4) - that gap somehow throws me off ?
01:22:711 (1,1) - very awkward pause nope.
01:27:398 (2) - make this curve into the end of the sliderend before nope.
Why does the kiai stop 01:24:286 even tho the song continiouses to be in the refrain nope.

Hard

00:09:117 (4,5) - Think you should have a long slider here and not focus on having this sound. 00:09:586 (1)
Rather focus on starting on the vocals and have them be a sliderend.
Also having that long slider brings in a bit of repeating from before (you don't have to change rhythm all the time ) nope.

00:17:086 (3) - again vocals starting on a slider end nope.
00:21:773 (3) - ^ (not gonna mention it over the whole mod again) nope. nope.
00:45:211 (1,2,3,4,1) - I'd have same distance between those (not DS) like that 00:45:211 (1,2) - are equally distanced as ->
00:46:148 (3,4) - the begginings of those two fixed!

01:00:093 (6,7) - make this go with the curve of the slider help with the flow nope.
01:01:383 (5,6,1,2) - idk if those may be a bit too hard for a "Hard" difficulty use normal retun sliders instead perhaps fixed!
01:03:726 (1) - give this a bit off up curve nope.
01:04:898 (4) - ctrl+j and put it at same spot| together with the ^ look pretty nice nope.

same stuff with kiai as in normal (my Preference) nope.

Hope I helped a bit with it

Thx!

Vivyanne

1,215 posts

Joined December 2013

Vivyanne 2016-04-30T17:05:05+00:00

promised as for the m4m

this is kinda my opinion so ye
I also am not experienced with mapping easy stuff so take this with a grain of salt

Hard
Nickelony

00:04:429 (2,4) - I dont really like the looks of the overlap, I'd make it a bit like this or just completely avoid the overlap
00:11:461 (1) - I'd place this closer to the slider tail of 00:10:523 (3) - to improve the flow a bit, change the rest accordingly
00:12:633 (5,6) - Can't this be a blanket too, and I mean a far away one?
00:14:742 (4,1,2,3) - Maybe improve the blanket
00:18:023 (3,4) - These flow in a very weird way, reconsider this pattern please ;w;
00:21:773 (3) - Wouldn't a little curve be nice?
00:30:680 (2) - Can't you place this in a way so that's in line as if it were have to be a blanket with 00:30:211 (1) - ? try out for (2) x:172 y:40 to get an idea
00:40:523 (4,1) - maybe not a full overlap here, instead maybe something like this
00:50:367 (4) - I'd curve this the same way as (2,3) before this one

Gero
01:16:148 (6) - isn't this a little too offscreen?
01:27:398 (4,5) - I get the pattern of (3,4) but why not blanket the head of (4) with the curve of (5)?
01:31:148 (6) - again a little too offscreen?[/box]

Normal

uh just as an overall note i think the notes may be a little bit further away from eachother, nothing else because idk how normals work xd

hope it helped in a way ;w; sorry im just bad at modding these kind of things

Gero

4,438 posts

Joined March 2012

Gero 2016-05-28T18:49:32+00:00

Pentori

hey, m4m

[Normal]
00:18:258 (2) - this isn't mapped to anything. remove Why? I can hear the music at this part.
00:19:898 (5) - you can put a reverse slider here 00:19:664 (5) - if you want the map to be busier I think it's okay as is.
00:25:054 (2,3) - better suited to be a 1/1 slider I don't think so, no changes.
00:48:023 (3) - since this 00:47:086 (1) - matches beat this slider should as well I'm following the vocals here, so it's not a big deal at all.
01:13:336 (1,2,3) - 01:15:211 (1,2) - here you used all 4 1/2 notes, so there shouldn't be a gap here 01:13:570
01:25:054 - i think you can have a beat here

[Hard]
01:07:711 (1) - i dont think this spinner accounts for the final beat so you should replace with a beat and move the spinner to 01:07:828 - or 01:07:945 (1) - depending on how difficult you want it to be I see nothing wrong with it.
01:10:523 (3) - 01:23:648 (3) - 01:38:648 (3) - these sliders would be more appealing if you made the distance between red points a bit further Same as above.

cool mapset, gl on rank [:

HighTec

promised as for the m4m

this is kinda my opinion so ye
I also am not experienced with mapping easy stuff so take this with a grain of salt

Hard
Gero

01:16:148 (6) - isn't this a little too offscreen? Not at all.
01:27:398 (4,5) - I get the pattern of (3,4) but why not blanket the head of (4) with the curve of (5)? It's intentional, that's why it looks like this.
01:31:148 (6) - again a little too offscreen? Same as above.

hope it helped in a way ;w; sorry im just bad at modding these kind of things

I've changed some hitsounds and patterns by my own.

Gerony's Normal

osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:Outside ft. Ellie Goulding
Artist:Calvin Harris
ArtistUnicode:Calvin Harris
Creator:Nickelony
Version:Gerony's Normal
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Nickero's Hard

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AudioFilename: Calvin Harris - Outside ft. Ellie Goulding.mp3
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[Editor]
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[Metadata]
Title:Outside ft. Ellie Goulding
TitleUnicode:Outside ft. Ellie Goulding
Artist:Calvin Harris
ArtistUnicode:Calvin Harris
Creator:Nickelony
Version:Nickero's Hard
Source:
Tags:Gero nickel inickel poland love song romance pain rock pop
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Nickelony

402 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

Nickelony 2016-05-29T09:55:44+00:00

updated.

testtwice

4 posts

Joined December 2013

testtwice 2016-07-24T23:03:42+00:00

Hi!

SPOILER

Gerony's normal
00:26:461 (5)- slider feels unnecessary.
00:42:867 (4) - adding one more circle will make it better.
00:48:023 (3) - this reverseslider is too long, maybe you should just remap 00:48:023 - 00:50:537 section?
01:26:461 (3) - you put it on the strong sound, but it feels like it's a little bit late.
01:34:898 (3) - replace it with double/ add a circle before it
Nickero's Hard
00:54:937 (3) - obviously too late
01:03:726 (1) - having one slider mapped to voice and the other two to music feels weird
01:13:570 (1) - 4 circles are unnecessary, make 2 instead
01:31:148 (6) - slider's end is out of the screen for me: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5684407 . There are also a few sliders outside of the grid, but i don't think they are the problem
01:17:086 (1,2) - try to make slider shorter and place circle earlier, dunno
Also, consider doing something with all these triples, they look somewhat wrong. Or is it just me not hearing some sound?

Drummer

151 posts

Joined March 2014

Drummer 2016-09-16T20:43:32+00:00

helo from modq

[General]

none of custom hitsounds have been used
epilepsy warning maybe

[Gerony's Normal]
01:07:711 (1) - no nc on this
01:09:586 (2) - nc on this
01:13:804 (2) - curve that slightly too, towards first slider
01:22:711 (1,1) - here is not enough recovery time, make it larger. removing the circle will be fine
01:27:398 (2) - same curve as before
01:34:429 (2) - put slider here instead

[Nickero's Hard]
the beginning is calm, but mapping is too intense imo
00:11:930 (2,3) - too big distance
00:14:742 (4,5) - ^ holy
00:37:711 (2,3,4,5,6) - this spacing is too large also
01:00:445 (1,2,3,4) - this was weird to play, the sudden spacing change
01:01:382 (1) - no nc, nc on next
01:03:726 (1) - ^
01:39:586 (1) - wut dis

good luck

Nickelony

402 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

Nickelony 2016-09-17T14:27:55+00:00

- Drummer- wrote:
helo from modq
[General]
none of custom hitsounds have been used fixed
epilepsy warning maybe nope
[Gerony's Normal]
01:07:711 (1) - no nc on this ok
01:09:586 (2) - nc on this ok
01:13:804 (2) - curve that slightly too, towards first slider ok
01:22:711 (1,1) - here is not enough recovery time, make it larger. removing the circle will be fine ok
01:27:398 (2) - same curve as before no
01:34:429 (2) - put slider here instead ok

[Nickero's Hard]
the beginning is calm, but mapping is too intense imo
00:11:930 (2,3) - too big distance fixed
00:14:742 (4,5) - ^ holy fixed
00:37:711 (2,3,4,5,6) - this spacing is too large also fixed
01:00:445 (1,2,3,4) - this was weird to play, the sudden spacing change changed it
01:01:382 (1) - no nc, nc on next ok
01:03:726 (1) - ^ ok
01:39:586 (1) - wut dis
good luck

Thx for the mod

Gero

4,438 posts

Joined March 2012

Gero 2016-09-17T16:53:24+00:00

testtwice

Hi!

SPOILER

Gerony's normal
00:26:461 (5)- slider feels unnecessary. Why?
00:42:867 (4) - adding one more circle will make it better. Sure.
00:48:023 (3) - this reverseslider is too long, maybe you should just remap 00:48:023 - 00:50:537 section? I don't think so, a repeat is perfectly fine here.
00:54:937 (3) - obviously too late Uh?
01:03:726 (1) - having one slider mapped to voice and the other two to music feels weird I see nothing wrong with it.

- Drummer-

helo from modq

[Gerony's Normal]
01:07:711 (1) - no nc on this Why not? It's clearly a changing on the stanza.

[Nickero's Hard]
01:39:586 (1) - wut dis Fixed.

good luck

Gerony's Normal

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 69462
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.6
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

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TitleUnicode:Outside ft. Ellie Goulding
Artist:Calvin Harris
ArtistUnicode:Calvin Harris
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Version:Gerony's Normal
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Nickero's Hard

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AudioFilename: Calvin Harris - Outside ft. Ellie Goulding.mp3
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[Editor]
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[Metadata]
Title:Outside ft. Ellie Goulding
TitleUnicode:Outside ft. Ellie Goulding
Artist:Calvin Harris
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Creator:Nickelony
Version:Nickero's Hard
Source:
Tags:Gero nickel inickel poland love song romance pain rock pop edm
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12,124,75439,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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256,280,78955,5,2,0:2:0:0:
160,352,79189,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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0,184,79892,2,0,B|49:184|49:184|93:160,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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99,63,83173,2,0,P|147:75|196:64,1,100,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,4,83642,2,0,B|44:84|44:84|56:96|56:96|88:188,1,200,2|10,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,376,84345,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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44,384,90205,5,2,0:2:0:0:
12,260,90439,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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Maelstrrom

192 posts

Joined July 2011

Maelstrrom 2016-09-17T18:25:32+00:00

m4m

Normal

00:30:908 - there's happening nothing sharp for an angle like this. Make it as 00:26:455 (5) - or another shape
01:09:580 (1) - little distance fix
01:09:580 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 01:13:330 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - those parts have actually the same rhytm but mapped differently. Compare 01:09:580 (1,2) - and 01:13:330 (1,2) -
01:21:064 - almost the same place as 01:20:126 (4) - sounds awkward. Add note.
01:37:705 (1) - feels like this spinner is ill-timed. Part which it represents have no difference from the previous one (except the very end). I suggest to put here a calm slider such as 01:37:705 (1) -

Hard

00:04:892 (4,5,6) - this is a moment which needs sharp flow emphasize, not 00:04:658 (3,4,5) -
Move 00:04:892 (4) - left diagonally to 00:04:423 (2) -
00:43:095 (6) - should be the part of the next musical and mapping pattern. Move it closer to 00:43:330 (1) -
00:47:314 - 00:47:548 - 00:48:017 - 3 strong beats but 2 of them in slidertails. I suggest mapping 00:47:314 - and 00:47:548 - into slider and the rest as circles as you did before
01:17:431 (2) - overmapped (sound that makes a feeling of triple is placed closer to the white tick than to a mapped one)
01:11:806 (2,2,3,2,5) - same for all of them
01:18:369 - have an empty tail by the reason above
01:21:767 (4) - ^

Gero

4,438 posts

Joined March 2012

Gero 2016-09-17T19:10:35+00:00

Maelstrrom

Normal

00:30:908 - there's happening nothing sharp for an angle like this. Make it as 00:26:455 (5) - or another shape I don't think so.

Hard

01:17:431 (2) - overmapped (sound that makes a feeling of triple is placed closer to the white tick than to a mapped one) As I've said to other modders, this is emphasizing the bass sound at the background.
01:11:806 (2,2,3,2,5) - same for all of them ^
01:18:369 - have an empty tail by the reason above There's a holding sound, that's why.
01:21:767 (4) - ^ Same as above.

Nickelony

402 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

Nickelony 2016-09-17T19:32:09+00:00

Maelstrrom wrote:
m4m

Normal
00:30:908 - there's happening nothing sharp for an angle like this. Make it as 00:26:455 (5) - or another shape
01:09:580 (1) - little distance fix
01:09:580 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 01:13:330 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - those parts have actually the same rhytm but mapped differently. Compare 01:09:580 (1,2) - and 01:13:330 (1,2) -
01:21:064 - almost the same place as 01:20:126 (4) - sounds awkward. Add note.
01:37:705 (1) - feels like this spinner is ill-timed. Part which it represents have no difference from the previous one (except the very end). I suggest to put here a calm slider such as 01:37:705 (1) -
Hard
00:04:892 (4,5,6) - this is a moment which needs sharp flow emphasize, not 00:04:658 (3,4,5) -
Move 00:04:892 (4) - left diagonally to 00:04:423 (2) -
00:43:095 (6) - should be the part of the next musical and mapping pattern. Move it closer to 00:43:330 (1) -
00:47:314 - 00:47:548 - 00:48:017 - 3 strong beats but 2 of them in slidertails. I suggest mapping 00:47:314 - and 00:47:548 - into slider and the rest as circles as you did before
01:17:431 (2) - overmapped (sound that makes a feeling of triple is placed closer to the white tick than to a mapped one)
01:11:806 (2,2,3,2,5) - same for all of them
01:18:369 - have an empty tail by the reason above
01:21:767 (4) - ^

I didn't fix anything, sorry :/

BitCritterSpyro

174 posts

Joined September 2016

BitCritterSpyro 2016-09-17T20:45:32+00:00

lol I got rekt in hard XD. Good map tho!

6th

616 posts

Joined December 2014

6th 2016-09-17T22:20:24+00:00

Hello. M4M.
Please, no answer like "nope", that's a bit arrogant and frustrating for the modder because explainations are always better.

[Normal]
00:12:626 - This is too loud to be ignored. Just make the pattern like 00:03:955 (1,2,3,4) -
00:48:017 (3) - Even if it's pretty, its bend doesn't follow the song which is kinda confusing.
00:42:626 (4,5) - These are mapped so this 00:50:126 - should be mapped aswell
00:51:767 (3,4) - Having both slider as long kills the emphasis of (4). Plus, (3) doesn't follow the song really well.
01:09:111 (1) - Its placement looks a bit random.
01:26:455 (2) - Turn this into a slider so it's consistent with the rest.
01:30:908 (2) - Consider moving this upward since back and forth flow makes the pattern play awkwardly at such low speed.
01:34:423 (6,7) - Why is it that sharp ?

[Hard]
00:06:767 (3,4,5) - The spacing is too high compared to the rest.
Considering that you're following vocals please make 00:10:048 - clickable.
00:10:986 (9) - This misses emphasis. Place it further or make it longer.
00:12:158 (3,4) - What about a slider here ? It would fit with your idea while making the pattern a bit easier.
00:16:376 (4) - This should be closer from (3) because 00:16:376 (4,5) - represent vocals.
00:25:517 (3) - It's still readable but the number "3" is hidden with the map's skin.
00:28:798 (2) - Having this different from 00:28:330 (1) - would have been better because of vocals.
00:30:205 (1) - Increase spacing ?
00:30:908 (3,4) - Slider instead ?
00:38:408 (1) - I'm certain that 1 circle + 1 1/4 slider would play better.
00:41:689 (3,5) - Why are they stacked ? They are not connected in any way, plus 00:42:626 (5) - deserves more emphasis. You should turn 00:42:626 (5) - into 2 circles or 1 circle + 1 slider
00:47:783 (3,4) - I think that stacking them would work better to give the effect you intended.
00:50:126 - Make it clickable since it's stronger than the slider's head
00:51:298 (2) - Turn this into 2 circles ?
01:03:720 (3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6119074 ?

Gero's part is cool. Good luck

PotatoJA

81 posts

Joined November 2014

PotatoJA 2016-09-18T03:38:30+00:00

Yo

[Gernoy's Normal]
01:34:189 (1) - nc

[Nickero's Hard]
00:49:892 (3) - change this to this

aannd the map is perfect
GL

Nickelony

402 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

Nickelony 2016-09-18T08:58:05+00:00

6th wrote:
Hello. M4M.
Please, no answer like "nope", that's a bit arrogant and frustrating for the modder because explainations are always better.

[Normal]
01:09:111 (1) - Its placement looks a bit random. It should.
01:26:455 (2) - Turn this into a slider so it's consistent with the rest. ok
01:30:908 (2) - Consider moving this upward since back and forth flow makes the pattern play awkwardly at such low speed. ok
01:34:423 (6,7) - Why is it that sharp ? because I like it.

[Hard]
00:06:767 (3,4,5) - The spacing is too high compared to the rest. I don't think so.
Considering that you're following vocals please make 00:10:048 - clickable. This note is for the last instrumental, so no.
00:10:986 (9) - This misses emphasis. Place it further or make it longer. I like it how it is, but I'll think about it.
00:12:158 (3,4) - What about a slider here ? It would fit with your idea while making the pattern a bit easier. It's not that hard at all.
00:16:376 (4) - This should be closer from (3) because 00:16:376 (4,5) - represent vocals. I think it makes the flow a little bit more interesting
00:25:517 (3) - It's still readable but the number "3" is hidden with the map's skin. As I said before, I'm not gonna change it.
00:28:798 (2) - Having this different from 00:28:330 (1) - would have been better because of vocals. ok
00:30:205 (1) - Increase spacing ? ok
00:30:908 (3,4) - Slider instead ? no
00:38:408 (1) - I'm certain that 1 circle + 1 1/4 slider would play better. I had it once but I didn't like it.
00:41:689 (3,5) - Why are they stacked ? They are not connected in any way, plus 00:42:626 (5) - deserves more emphasis. You should turn 00:42:626 (5) - into 2 circles or 1 circle + 1 slider I don't like this idea.
00:47:783 (3,4) - I think that stacking them would work better to give the effect you intended. ^
00:50:126 - Make it clickable since it's stronger than the slider's head I don't think so.
00:51:298 (2) - Turn this into 2 circles ? ^
01:03:720 (3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6119074 ? I don't like it.

Gero's part is cool. Good luck

PotatoJA wrote:
Yo

[Gernoy's Normal]
01:34:189 (1) - nc oops, my bad.

[Nickero's Hard]
00:49:892 (3) - change this to this yup.

aannd the map is perfect
GL

Thx for the mods!

Ryuusei Aika

Elite Mapper

1,085 posts

Joined January 2016

Ryuusei Aika 2016-09-18T11:06:13+00:00

hi from m4m~

Normal

00:58:330 (1,2) - ds problem
01:07:705 (1) - remove nc cuz this part is also relate to the past 2 sliders imo
for me id like to keep ds=~1.1x to avoid those tiiiiiny overlap but nvm it seems ok lol

Hard

there's many place u didnt stack like 00:14:970 (5,2) - or 00:16:845 (6,3) - etc...... is it ur style? well thats a little weird to me lol
00:09:580 (6) - nc?
00:12:861 (6) - blanket is a little bit out imo, just rorate its tail a little bit in would be better
00:19:892 (3,4,5,6) - make 4 more far from 6 than using ctrl+g with 5 and 6 would make a better flow
00:27:392 (4,5,6,7) - arrange jumps like up-down-up-down like this would be better imo:

00:30:673 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^, pic: (the position of 6 and 7 can move a little bit left)

00:37:705 (2,3,4,5,6) - is this part too hard to a hard player? i think put 2 1/4 slider+1 note is much better then that
01:00:087 (6,7) - how about rotate+move down to follow the shape of 00:59:736 (5) - ?

thats all!
gl for rank~

Nickelony

402 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

Nickelony 2016-09-18T11:28:28+00:00

Neanmoins wrote:
hi from m4m~

Normal
01:07:705 (1) - remove nc cuz this part is also relate to the past 2 sliders imo nope.
for me id like to keep ds=~1.1x to avoid those tiiiiiny overlap but nvm it seems ok lol
Hard
there's many place u didnt stack like 00:14:970 (5,2) - or 00:16:845 (6,3) - etc...... is it ur style? well thats a little weird to me lol actually I didn't want to break the ds but it's not that bad.
00:09:580 (6) - nc? oops, my bad.
00:12:861 (6) - blanket is a little bit out imo, just rorate its tail a little bit in would be better I think it's fine.
00:19:892 (3,4,5,6) - make 4 more far from 6 than using ctrl+g with 5 and 6 would make a better flow I like it how it is.
00:27:392 (4,5,6,7) - arrange jumps like up-down-up-down like this would be better imo: I already used that pattern once and I don't want to repeat.

00:30:673 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^, pic: (the position of 6 and 7 can move a little bit left) I'll think about it.

00:37:705 (2,3,4,5,6) - is this part too hard to a hard player? i think put 2 1/4 slider+1 note is much better then that I'll think about it.
01:00:087 (6,7) - how about rotate+move down to follow the shape of 00:59:736 (5) - ? ok
thats all!
gl for rank~

Thanks for the mod!

polka

1,125 posts

Joined March 2014

polka 2016-09-19T23:25:30+00:00

[General]

"Feat. Ellie Goulding" should really be in the Artist. Do you have proof that says otherwise?

Your reverse arrow has a weird line on it. I thought my screen was cracked. Was that intentional?

[Normal]

00:11:923 (2,3) - The tail being the same distance away from (2) as the head may confuse players. Shift (3) a little bit to the right, kind of like what you did at 00:18:486 (3,4).

00:39:111 (4,5,1) - You should align these to the angle of (1) for neatness. It looks like that's what you were going for, but (5) is too high.

00:41:455 (3,4,5) - ^

00:53:642 (5) - x:187 y:298

01:10:283 (3,4,1) - (4) Looks like its on the outside~ (Haha... No?) Maybe move it up a ways to make it more visible.

01:18:017 (4) - Why not have this bent in the middle to match the beat?

01:20:361 (5,1) - The flow here is poor. I would give you suggestions, but I don't want to suggest anything that would stray from your style.

01:28:798 (1) - ctrl + g for better flow.

01:35:361 (4) - I don't like this skipping an important beat. Shorten this.

[Hard]

This is QUITE a jump from the normal mode. Some of the circle patterns could be nerfed a bit.

00:16:611 (5,6,1) - Could confuse players. Move (1) down and create a triangle pattern with (5) and (6) to fix this.

00:17:783 (2,3) - This jump is a bit much.

00:18:486 (4,1) - ^

00:24:580 (1,3) - Maybe stack thiiiis ? Looks a little messy.

00:34:423 (2,3) - I would like it if you replaced (3) with a flipped version of (2).

00:36:298 (3,1) - Gap here is odd. Maybe a slider for (3)?

00:36:767 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - Wow, that's a very complicated bit for hard mod players. I would suggest not going to the vocals here.

00:40:283 (3,4) - Jump should be bigger.

00:49:892 (3) - Maybe this is just your style but ctrl + g would be nice.

00:58:095 (1,2) - Too complicated. 1/4 sliders are an advanced pattern. Just stick to kick sliders and triplets. I won't point this out again, but it happens more than once.

00:59:267 (4) - Move this up to neaten this area up a bit.

01:03:955 (4,5) - Not sure about this. Mayhaps some space in between them?

01:26:220 (4,5) - Maybe move (5) out? Kinda confusing.

01:26:923 (3,4) - I would like this if (4) were the same distance away from the wave slider as (3).

01:30:439 (2,3,4,5,6) - Feels kinda cramped to play. Move the slider to the right and up a bit to fix that.

01:39:580 (1) - Literally there's nothing here. Just end it at the triplet.

Catchy. Good luck good luck.

Nickelony

402 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

Nickelony 2016-09-20T14:21:16+00:00

PolkaMocha wrote:

[General]

"Feat. Ellie Goulding" should really be in the Artist. Do you have proof that says otherwise? It's the original YouTube title.

Your reverse arrow has a weird line on it. I thought my screen was cracked. Was that intentional? I don't think that's a problem at all xD
[Normal]

01:10:283 (3,4,1) - (4) Looks like its on the outside~ (Haha... No?) Maybe move it up a ways to make it more visible. I don't think so.

01:18:017 (4) - Why not have this bent in the middle to match the beat? ok, I'm gonna make a wave instead.

01:20:361 (5,1) - The flow here is poor. I would give you suggestions, but I don't want to suggest anything that would stray from your style. I see... gonna change it then.

01:28:798 (1) - ctrl + g for better flow. I like it.

01:35:361 (4) - I don't like this skipping an important beat. Shorten this. I like it how it is.
[Hard]

This is QUITE a jump from the normal mode. Some of the circle patterns could be nerfed a bit.

00:16:611 (5,6,1) - Could confuse players. Move (1) down and create a triangle pattern with (5) and (6) to fix this. fixed

00:17:783 (2,3) - This jump is a bit much. ok

00:18:486 (4,1) - ^ no

00:24:580 (1,3) - Maybe stack thiiiis ? Looks a little messy. I really didn't want to do this, but ok.

00:34:423 (2,3) - I would like it if you replaced (3) with a flipped version of (2). I want it to be different.

00:36:298 (3,1) - Gap here is odd. Maybe a slider for (3)? no.

00:36:767 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - Wow, that's a very complicated bit for hard mod players. I would suggest not going to the vocals here. changed it.

00:40:283 (3,4) - Jump should be bigger. changed it.

00:49:892 (3) - Maybe this is just your style but ctrl + g would be nice. I don't think so.

00:58:095 (1,2) - Too complicated. 1/4 sliders are an advanced pattern. Just stick to kick sliders and triplets. I won't point this out again, but it happens more than once. I'll keep it.

00:59:267 (4) - Move this up to neaten this area up a bit. um.. no?

01:03:955 (4,5) - Not sure about this. Mayhaps some space in between them? I don't think that's a problem.
Catchy. Good luck good luck.

Thanks for the mod

Domi200

183 posts

Joined November 2013

Domi200 2016-09-20T15:34:56+00:00

Hey <3 M4M here

[Gerony's Normal]

OD2 might be a abit too easy compared to the other settings you sert but thats up to you
00:15:908 (5,6) - Maybe line the sliderend of (5) more weith the strart of (6)
No need for SV change at the end of the spinner ^^

[Nickero's Hard]

OD4 for a hard difficulty seems a tad to low but it might fit. Up to you
00:16:142 (3,4,5,6) - this feels a bit weird flowwise. Maybe try to place (6) on the left side instead on the right side of (5)
00:20:361 (5,6) - I would make a sllider here instead
00:24:580 (1) - I think you are ignoring too much here using this slider
00:26:455 (1,3) - Improve the blanket here
00:26:455 (1,3) - ^
01:11:689 (1,2,3) - Move this up a biz

Really good maps you have there sorry I couldnt find that much I leave you a star <3

Nickelony

402 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

Nickelony 2016-09-20T17:42:19+00:00

Domi200 wrote:
Hey <3 M4M here

[Gerony's Normal]
OD2 might be a abit too easy compared to the other settings you sert but thats up to you gonna make it 4
No need for SV change at the end of the spinner ^^ I think it's fine.
[Nickero's Hard]
OD4 for a hard difficulty seems a tad to low but it might fit. Up to you the diff is a lot harder than normal so I think it's fine.
00:16:142 (3,4,5,6) - this feels a bit weird flowwise. Maybe try to place (6) on the left side instead on the right side of (5) ok
00:20:361 (5,6) - I would make a sllider here instead meeh...
00:24:580 (1) - I think you are ignoring too much here using this slider I don't think so.
00:26:455 (1,3) - Improve the blanket here idk what's wrong with it.
00:26:455 (1,3) - ^ umm?
Really good maps you have there sorry I couldnt find that much I leave you a star <3

Thx for the mod

Snaggletooth

491 posts

Joined November 2012

Snaggletooth 2016-09-25T08:17:58+00:00

From my NoMoeQ.

Offset is too late. It's 2063

[Gerony's Normal]

Rhythmical Issues:
1. 00:45:205 (4) - This slider is very uncomfortable to play, because you miss
  a lot of prominent tune-changes in this slider. Consider plitting it into
  a 1/1 slider + a circle. This hits everything much nicer while still being easy enough
  for this difficulty.
  
  timeline
2. 00:51:767 (3) - ^
3. 00:59:267 (3,4) - ^ // Slider(3) really throws me off. I don't think the pattern here
  should be more important than rhythmical accuracy. The slider should end on 00:59:736
  + using the suggestion above for 01:00:205 (4,5) - again.
4. 00:48:017 (3) - ^ // Very similar problem here. You're better off focusing
  the slider end on 00:48:486 in order to hit the clap. You could then move on
  from 00:48:720 to match the vocals. Although I would suggest not going
  ith the vocals here. My example here looks like a long stream, should be fine in
  terms of difficulty though, considering the very long sliders.
  
  Timeline

[Nickero's Hard]

Rhythmical Issues:
1. 00:42:626 (3,4) - The reason I'm pointing this out is because there is no hit on (4).
  There is an ongoing synth, which was mapped later on correctly. I suggest to use
  a similar rhythm like you used on 00:49:423 (2,3,4) - . Basically, anything
  that let's you start a 1/2 slider on 00:42:861 is fine for this.
Placement Issues:
1. 00:38:642 (6,7) - The strain from tapping is quite high here as it is, for a hard diff,
  so I would suggest you place them closer together, to take some of that strain off,
  since the music dosn't differ enough to warrent a big jump anyways. Consider x:440 y:256

Nice Set <3

Nickelony

402 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

Nickelony 2016-09-25T11:08:07+00:00

Snaggletooth wrote:
From my NoMoeQ.

Offset is too late. It's 2063 fixed.

[Nickero's Hard]
Rhythmical Issues:
00:42:626 (3,4) - The reason I'm pointing this out is because there is no hit on (4).
There is an ongoing synth, which was mapped later on correctly. I suggest to use
a similar rhythm like you used on 00:49:423 (2,3,4) - . Basically, anything
that let's you start a 1/2 slider on 00:42:861 is fine for this. I like it how it is.
Placement Issues:
00:38:642 (6,7) - The strain from tapping is quite high here as it is, for a hard diff,
so I would suggest you place them closer together, to take some of that strain off,
since the music dosn't differ enough to warrent a big jump anyways. Consider x:440 y:256 ok

Nice Set <3

Thx for the mod

BounceBabe

1,626 posts

Joined October 2010

BounceBabe 2016-09-26T22:04:07+00:00

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> Stacking
> Unsnapped objects
> Spinner (4 beats - Easy, 2 beats - Normal)

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Gero:

Rhythm & Pattern:

00:20:109 - 00:35:578 - you should add another circle here because the synth/vocal is really strong and to make a good transition between 00:19:875 (5,6) -
00:34:406 (5) - You mapped to the vocals so technically, according to your mapping, this slider should start at 00:33:938 - to match and here 00:35:344 - should be a circle instead
00:48:000 (3) - Rhythm is completely wrong on this reversed slider. It should be shortened by 1/2 beat so it's a 1/1 reversed slider and then add another circle at 00:49:406 - so it becomes rhythmically correct. You could also do smth like this 00:51:750 (3,4) - Sounds really wrong how it is now.

Appearance, Flow & Transition:
00:23:391 (6,1) - 00:29:250 (4,6) - Why this gap between the end and the beginning of each slider? You always tried to enclose these so they are not too far apart like here 00:05:344 (4,1,2) - 00:10:031 (2,3) - 00:11:906 (2,3) - 00:15:188 (3,4,5) - etc

Spacing:
00:58:313 (1,2) - You broke the spacing here. It not only looks bad but it also is not correct and the spacing difference is also 0,09 so fix this. Shouldn't happen in a Normal difficulty.

Other Issues:
00:45:188 (4) - This slider is really far up and almost overlapping with the HP bar. Slightly lower it.

Nickelony:

Appearance, Flow & Transition:
01:10:266 (3,4) - The flow isn't so good here due to the curve of the slider directing to the right and not down. How about reversing the shape of these two 01:09:797 (2,3) - so it would improve the flow. You could of course also simply move the ending point of the slider 01:10:266 (3) - down so it creates better flow. http://puu.sh/roQFZ/ed1f56ccbd.jpg or http://puu.sh/roQEr/385478e8bd.jpg

Rhythm & Pattern:
01:21:047 - Here really is a circle missing since the synth is strong at this point and it would also make a better transition between 01:20:344 (5,1) - . For reference: 01:36:047 - you ended your slider here instead so it has a better transition and suits the song more so it's less empty.
01:37:688 (1) - Musically, the synth ends here 01:39:328 -. 01:39:328 - to 01:39:563 - is just the echo of that synth so the spinner should too.

Hard
[]

Nickelony:

Rhythm & Pattern:

00:09:328 (5) - The circle seems really out of place. 00:02:063 - to 00:09:094 - is one part of the melody and here 00:09:563 - it repeats itself. Technically you can have the note since there's a mapable synth in the song but it doesnt quite fit since you mapped to the melody and that melody ends here 00:09:094 - . It would also create a nice effect if you'd add a small pause here because the vocals also start with the next repetition of the melody. In short, it would serve as indicator for the repetition and add a pause that create a nice effect before the next repetition.
00:31:125 (4) - Kinda the same as above. The vocal is strong here and the melody is really soft and less intense like in the KIAI, thus you should remove this circle to emphasise the vocals and also add a pause that creates a nice effect.

Appearance, Flow & Transition:
00:09:563 (1,2) - This flow is really really bad because the slider ends all the way up at the top, whereas the circle is all the way at the bottom. This makes the player having to harshly redirect his cursor in order to play this. I recommend moving the circle to the right of the slider's end so it creates a triangle with 00:09:563 (1,3) -
00:14:719 (4,5) - Same thing here. Due to the shape of the slider this plays roughly. How about reversing the two circle for better flow and transition between 00:14:250 (3,4,5,1) -
00:30:188 (1,2) - ^ Plays really harsh again. Move the 2 circle a bit more left to easily fix this and make a better transition too.
00:52:688 (1,2,3,4) - Although the spacing is fine, the way you arranged them is a bit odd. You could make them position a bit better to make them look more attractive to the eyes.

Spacing:
00:16:125 (3,4,5) - After all the jumps here, these 00:16:594 (5,6) - are really irritating due to the spacing change. I recommend placing 6 somewhere else to match the jumps that you have for 3,4,5 or maybe stack 6 with 5 to create a forth and back jump 00:16:359 (4,5,6,1) -
00:20:344 (5,6,1) - 00:41:203 (5,6,1) - The spacing between those should be consistent since the spacing so far that you have was. It will also improve visual appearance and keep consistent spacing.
00:21:281 (2,3) - They should have the same spacing as these two have 00:20:813 (1,2) - otherwise this is really irritating to look at.
01:00:656 (2,3) - This jump here doesn't make sense. It doesn't emphasise anything in particular. They 01:00:422 (1,2,3,4) - should have consistent spacing as they are played the same and also the music doesn't change.

Combo:
00:36:281 (3,1) - There is no need for a NC here since you have no SV change or spacing change so remove this NC to avoid combo spam and also to not break your combo pattern.
00:37:453 (1,2) - Reverse these two since 00:37:688 - is the downbeat and it also is the begin of a new sentence.

Gero:

Spacing:
01:12:375 (4) - Spacing should be consistent between them. It varies a bit which is clearly visible and it is disturbing to the eye and also incorrect. Even for the sake of the pattern and the overlap, this should be. Same for 01:16:594 (7) - 01:23:156 (2) - 01:31:594 (7) - 01:31:594 (7) - 01:38:625 (3) -

Rhythm & Pattern:
01:31:594 (7) - 01:16:594 (7) - According to the melody of the song and how you mapped to it, this would work better as a 3/4 slider than a circle at 01:32:063 - for a very strong beat and the next synth http://puu.sh/roSvl/65465c60e4.jpg Kinda like here 01:14:250 (5,6) -

Combo:
01:33:000 (1) - Broke the combo pattern here. Remove it for consistency.

Overall
[]

The arrangment and flow of certain patterns could be better sometimes and rhythmically there are some wrong patterns that should be fixed. A few times the spacing also is a bit off. That needs to be addressed as well. Nice set overall.

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Nickelony

402 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

Nickelony 2016-09-27T14:24:53+00:00

BounceBabe wrote:
Request from my M4M Queue / via PM

What I checked in your mapset
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✓ Mapset difficulty spread (Easy, Normal, Hard, Insane)
> SR and gameplay gap between difficulties
> Difficulty settings if noticeably wrong chosen
> Difficulty level naming

✓ Map design
> Background (Does the image relate to the song?)
> Combo colours (Do they match the BG?)
> Skin (missing elements and resolution checks)
> SB (if available - osb. files, SB load, coding, epilepsy warning if flashy) or video (NSFW?)

✓ Metadata & Beatmap folder
> Resolution of images (1024x768 / 800x600 pixels for 4:3, 1366x768 / 852x480 pixels for 16:9)
> Preview point
> mp3 (length must be min 30 sec drain time, bit rate, quality)
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> Multiple files (osb., hitsounds, images,...)
> Source of the song (unless it's a song I can't find anything about)
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🕗 Timing 🕗
✓ KIAI time and breaks
✕ Timing changes
✕ BPM & Offset

🎧 Sound 🎧
✓ Hitsounds (Do they match the song?)
✓ Hitsound patterns
✓ Hitsound volume (Timing points)
✓ Rhythm of hit objects (Do they match the song?)

🖰 Object Gameplay 🖰
✫ Reasonable spacing and patterns, spacing inconsistencies, Jumps, Anti-Jumps, special patterns
✫ Flow and transition
✓ Overmapping, SV changes
✫ Other Issues
> Interface overlaps
> Hidden objects that are hard to read due to coverage (overlaps)
> Stacking
> Unsnapped objects
> Spinner (4 beats - Easy, 2 beats - Normal)

👀 Visual Gameplay 👀
✫ Combo patterns, new combos for special cases (SV change, jumps that are hard to read)
✓ Readability of objects
✕ Blankets, symmetry
✓ Variety of patterns

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Nickelony:

Appearance, Flow & Transition:
01:10:266 (3,4) - The flow isn't so good here due to the curve of the slider directing to the right and not down. How about reversing the shape of these two 01:09:797 (2,3) - so it would improve the flow. You could of course also simply move the ending point of the slider 01:10:266 (3) - down so it creates better flow. http://puu.sh/roQFZ/ed1f56ccbd.jpg or http://puu.sh/roQEr/385478e8bd.jpg I did something different.

Rhythm & Pattern:
01:21:047 - Here really is a circle missing since the synth is strong at this point and it would also make a better transition between 01:20:344 (5,1) - . For reference: 01:36:047 - you ended your slider here instead so it has a better transition and suits the song more so it's less empty. I don't think so.
01:37:688 (1) - Musically, the synth ends here 01:39:328 -. 01:39:328 - to 01:39:563 - is just the echo of that synth so the spinner should too. I like it how it is.
Hard
[]

Nickelony:

Rhythm & Pattern:
00:09:328 (5) - The circle seems really out of place. 00:02:063 - to 00:09:094 - is one part of the melody and here 00:09:563 - it repeats itself. Technically you can have the note since there's a mapable synth in the song but it doesnt quite fit since you mapped to the melody and that melody ends here 00:09:094 - . It would also create a nice effect if you'd add a small pause here because the vocals also start with the next repetition of the melody. In short, it would serve as indicator for the repetition and add a pause that create a nice effect before the next repetition. I don't like the pause here, it breaks the flow.
00:31:125 (4) - Kinda the same as above. The vocal is strong here and the melody is really soft and less intense like in the KIAI, thus you should remove this circle to emphasise the vocals and also add a pause that creates a nice effect. I like it.

Appearance, Flow & Transition:
00:09:563 (1,2) - This flow is really really bad because the slider ends all the way up at the top, whereas the circle is all the way at the bottom. This makes the player having to harshly redirect his cursor in order to play this. I recommend moving the circle to the right of the slider's end so it creates a triangle with 00:09:563 (1,3) - this makes a slightly challenging jump and it doesn't break the flow.
00:14:719 (4,5) - Same thing here. Due to the shape of the slider this plays roughly. How about reversing the two circle for better flow and transition between 00:14:250 (3,4,5,1) - I'll keep this jump
00:30:188 (1,2) - ^ Plays really harsh again. Move the 2 circle a bit more left to easily fix this and make a better transition too. ok
00:52:688 (1,2,3,4) - Although the spacing is fine, the way you arranged them is a bit odd. You could make them position a bit better to make them look more attractive to the eyes. It's fine.

Spacing:
00:16:125 (3,4,5) - After all the jumps here, these 00:16:594 (5,6) - are really irritating due to the spacing change. I recommend placing 6 somewhere else to match the jumps that you have for 3,4,5 or maybe stack 6 with 5 to create a forth and back jump 00:16:359 (4,5,6,1) - I'll keep it.
00:20:344 (5,6,1) - 00:41:203 (5,6,1) - The spacing between those should be consistent since the spacing so far that you have was. It will also improve visual appearance and keep consistent spacing. This jump was supposed to be a little harder.
00:21:281 (2,3) - They should have the same spacing as these two have 00:20:813 (1,2) - otherwise this is really irritating to look at. It's supposed to be calm.
01:00:656 (2,3) - This jump here doesn't make sense. It doesn't emphasise anything in particular. They 01:00:422 (1,2,3,4) - should have consistent spacing as they are played the same and also the music doesn't change. I'll think about it.

Combo:
00:36:281 (3,1) - There is no need for a NC here since you have no SV change or spacing change so remove this NC to avoid combo spam and also to not break your combo pattern. oops, my bad.
00:37:453 (1,2) - Reverse these two since 00:37:688 - is the downbeat and it also is the begin of a new sentence. I don't lke it.
Overall
[]

The arrangment and flow of certain patterns could be better sometimes and rhythmically there are some wrong patterns that should be fixed. A few times the spacing also is a bit off. That needs to be addressed as well. Nice set overall. I'll re-check it, thx
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Nickelony

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Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

Nickelony 2016-09-28T15:43:22+00:00

Fixed some spacing issues and applied a few suggestions.

BitCritterSpyro

174 posts

Joined September 2016

BitCritterSpyro 2017-01-23T22:14:02+00:00

nuuuuuu!!!!!! This is graveyarded! D: (pls undo the graveyard)

Nickelony

402 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

Nickelony 2017-07-29T11:37:24+00:00

BitCritterSpyro wrote:
nuuuuuu!!!!!! This is graveyarded! D: (pls undo the graveyard)

I will.

Gero

4,438 posts

Joined March 2012

Gero 2017-08-13T00:46:20+00:00

Is this alive?

Nickelony

402 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

Nickelony 2017-08-13T07:42:57+00:00

Gero wrote:
Is this alive?

Now it is

I thought you forgot about this map.

New mods incoming!

wa_

237 posts

Joined May 2012

wa_ 2017-08-16T12:54:05+00:00

m4m!

[General]

I don't like that you didn't make ending at the same moment in both diffs. TBH the last slider in Difficult would be replaced with circle :p (check suggestion on Difficult

[Simple]

I hope this diff is fine as the lowest difficulty in mapset, there are some large overlaps and stacks. I don't have any problems with them, but new players?
00:58:313 (1,2) - Try to fix spacing between these objects, you can also remove overlapping.

[Difficult]

Spróbuj ustawić OD 6, aktualne 5 to trochę za mało jak na typowy Hard diff.
00:21:750 (3) - Postaraj się zachować równy spacing, poprzednie obiekty miały DS w okolicach 1.6, ten ma 1.2. Poza tym jego położenie nie wygląda zbyt dobrze, początek slidera prawie nachodzi na 00:23:156 (2). Spróbuj przesunąć ten slider do trochę w dół, na wysokość końca 00:21:281 (2) oraz trochę w prawo, mniej więcej x316, y276.
00:35:578 (4,1,2,3) - Fajnie by było, gdyby te kółka razem z końcem poprzedniego slidera tworzyły sześciokąt foremny (oczywiście niepełny) z równym spacingiem.
00:55:500 (4) - Osobiście przesunąłbym ten slider trochę wyżej w celu zapewnienia równego spacingu. W tej chwili jest on mniejszy niż normalnie, a do tego movement może sugerować niektórym graczom, że slidery są oddalone o 1/4.
01:03:938 (4) - W tym miejscu brakuje NC.
01:33:000 (1) - This NC is unnecessary, I guess.
01:39:563 (1) - imho you should replace this slider with circle for sake of consistency with Simple diff. There's nothing to follow at 01:40:969 and whistle sounds really "loud" even if it's only 5%. If you want to keep this slider, at least try to use silent slidertick.

Nie ma tu zbyt wiele do zmiany, po prostu mapa jest dobrze zrobiona. Z początku myślałem, że 2 diffy to za mało ale wszystko wydaje się być dobrze wyważone. Spacing i rytm moim zdaniem dobrze pasują do utworu.

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