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BeatofIke
I checked once more for any wrongly snapped notes on the map.
Should be good now. Have your bubble #1 back~
Vopla
small mod
  • 00:12:172 - There's a strong audible drum here, is there a certain reason why there aren't any circles on this spot?
    00:17:658 - ^
    05:00:172 - ^
    05:16:629 - ^

I really liked the hitsounding! It just feels really weird for such big drums being left out. Maybe there's a reason that I haven't figured out but here we go with my first mod.
Topic Starter
Poggo

Vopla wrote:

small mod
  • 00:12:172 - There's a strong audible drum here, is there a certain reason why there aren't any circles on this spot?
    00:17:658 - ^
    05:00:172 - ^
    05:16:629 - ^

I really liked the hitsounding! It just feels really weird for such big drums being left out. Maybe there's a reason that I haven't figured out but here we go with my first mod.
I think it's no need bcz It light parts with easy rhtyhm ^^ Thank U for check
Myxo
Bubble #2

:3

2016-01-06 13:08 Desperate-kun: ACTION is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/683971 Au5 & Fractal - Blue [Euphoria]]
2016-01-06 13:13 Desperate-kun: cool map <3 so much fun
2016-01-06 13:14 Poggo: thank u ^^
2016-01-06 13:14 Poggo: ACTION shy
2016-01-06 13:14 Poggo: oh maybe U wanna test my new map?
2016-01-06 13:14 Poggo: I was upload it today
2016-01-06 13:14 Desperate-kun: ehh i will check Blue for now xD
2016-01-06 13:14 Desperate-kun: there might be some things to say
2016-01-06 13:14 Poggo: oki
2016-01-06 13:15 Poggo: maybe then IRC mod?
2016-01-06 13:15 Desperate-kun: yes
2016-01-06 13:15 Poggo: go
2016-01-06 13:16 Desperate-kun: hmm not an issue but maybe you could make 00:26:058 (1,2) - parallel? would fit more to your clean style imo
2016-01-06 13:16 Desperate-kun: http://puu.sh/mlzKj/b9a8c6334a.jpg
2016-01-06 13:17 Poggo: done
2016-01-06 13:17 Desperate-kun: 00:42:858 (9,1,2) - hmmm this pattern is weird
2016-01-06 13:18 Desperate-kun: the streamjump is pretty hard to play so it puts a lot of emphasis on 00:42:944 -
2016-01-06 13:18 Desperate-kun: but that is no strong beat
2016-01-06 13:18 Desperate-kun: it would be better to start the sliders on white and red ticks
2016-01-06 13:19 Poggo: U mean this
2016-01-06 13:19 Poggo: ?
2016-01-06 13:19 Poggo: http://puu.sh/mlzS4.jpg
2016-01-06 13:19 Desperate-kun: yes that's much better
2016-01-06 13:19 Desperate-kun: or this http://puu.sh/mlzSp/b417836ad5.jpg
2016-01-06 13:19 Desperate-kun: i added one more note to the sream
2016-01-06 13:20 Desperate-kun: but yours also works
2016-01-06 13:21 Poggo: ok done
2016-01-06 13:21 Desperate-kun: cool
2016-01-06 13:21 Desperate-kun: 01:41:486 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - <3
2016-01-06 13:21 Desperate-kun: this is so cool
2016-01-06 13:22 Poggo: ty :3
2016-01-06 13:26 Desperate-kun: the rest seems perfect to me
2016-01-06 13:26 Desperate-kun: i will check the technical things and you can have bubble 2
2016-01-06 13:27 Poggo: Can I update it now?
2016-01-06 13:27 Desperate-kun: yes ^^
2016-01-06 13:28 Poggo: done ^^
2016-01-06 13:31 Poggo: ?
2016-01-06 13:31 Desperate-kun: sorry i got distracted xD
2016-01-06 13:31 Desperate-kun: mapset seems all good
2016-01-06 13:31 Poggo: then post ur bub <3
2016-01-06 13:32 Desperate-kun: you should reply to p/4783544
2016-01-06 13:32 Poggo: it's U should
2016-01-06 13:32 Poggo: and I'll give U kd >.<
2016-01-06 13:32 Desperate-kun: hmm? o:
2016-01-06 13:33 Desperate-kun: no i mean, you have an unapplied mod
2016-01-06 13:33 Desperate-kun: before i bubble again you should reply to it
2016-01-06 13:33 Desperate-kun: and say what you fixed etc
2016-01-06 13:33 Poggo: ahahahaha
2016-01-06 13:33 Poggo: sr
2016-01-06 13:33 Poggo: wait ^^'
2016-01-06 13:34 Poggo: done
Koiyuki
  1. Just some complaints.
  2. My personal suggestions.
  3. Highly recommended.
  4. Unrankable, you have to fix it.

Euphoria
  1. 00:25:029 (2,4) - nazi, stack
  2. 00:36:001 (2,3) - better to stack, may cause confusion
  3. 00:43:029 (2,3,4) - an awkward flow(in fact antijump) imo, try this? http://puu.sh/mDTsC/7cac111e86.jpg
  4. 00:46:457 (4,1) - make this distance a bit larger? the drum sound quite emphasizes
  5. 01:28:972 (1) - 01:29:486 (2) - extend to blue tick at least thanks, it sounds like broken now
  6. 01:29:829 (3,4) - the rhythm just goes wrong here, should be like http://puu.sh/mDTAN/d9fa0e878b.jpg
  7. 01:39:772 (5,1) - swap nc and nc at 01:40:458 (5) - ? just my view
  8. 02:33:772 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - try a decreasing ds on this stream, works better
  9. 04:03:344 - why no note? why not extend 04:02:744 (1) - ????????????
  10. 04:16:801 (2) - same as01:28:972 (1) -
  11. 04:17:144 (3,4) - again, same as 01:29:829 (3,4) -
  12. 04:27:086 (5,1,5) - same as 01:39:772 (5,1) -
Topic Starter
Poggo

Minakami Yuki wrote:

  1. Just some complaints.
  2. My personal suggestions.
  3. Highly recommended.
  4. Unrankable, you have to fix it.

Euphoria
  1. 00:25:029 (2,4) - nazi, stack
  2. 00:36:001 (2,3) - better to stack, may cause confusion
  3. 00:43:029 (2,3,4) - an awkward flow(in fact antijump) imo, try this? http://puu.sh/mDTsC/7cac111e86.jpg
  4. 00:46:457 (4,1) - make this distance a bit larger? the drum sound quite emphasizes
  5. 01:28:972 (1) - 01:29:486 (2) - extend to blue tick at least thanks, it sounds like broken now
  6. 01:29:829 (3,4) - the rhythm just goes wrong here, should be like http://puu.sh/mDTAN/d9fa0e878b.jpg
  7. 01:39:772 (5,1) - swap nc and nc at 01:40:458 (5) - ? just my view
  8. 02:33:772 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - try a decreasing ds on this stream, works better <--- I don't like ._.
  9. 04:03:344 - why no note? why not extend 04:02:744 (1) - ????????????
  10. 04:16:801 (2) - same as01:28:972 (1) -
  11. 04:17:144 (3,4) - again, same as 01:29:829 (3,4) -
  12. 04:27:086 (5,1,5) - same as 01:39:772 (5,1) -

Another done :3 wait recheck~! Thank U for mod
Koiyuki
seems you havent change the rhythm at 01:29:829 (3,4) - also 04:17:144 (3,4) - , imo it's very obvious that the beat is at 01:30:001 - and 04:17:315 - , i cant see any reason why you dont choose to follow the music. Can you give me some explanation of keeping it?

also, extend 04:16:286 (1) - to 04:16:715 - ?
Topic Starter
Poggo

Minakami Yuki wrote:

seems you havent change the rhythm at 01:29:829 (3,4) - also 04:17:144 (3,4) - , imo it's very obvious that the beat is at 01:30:001 - and 04:17:315 - , i cant see any reason why you dont choose to follow the music. Can you give me some explanation of keeping it?

also, extend 04:16:286 (1) - to 04:16:715 - ?

ah forgot ;w; All done
Koiyuki
Approved!
Topic Starter
Poggo

Minakami Yuki wrote:

Approved!
Yaaaay 😊 thank u very much
riffy
Greetings.

I am sorry, but we've got a few things to consider before pushing this forward. Points in bold are the reasons why it was disqualified.

[General]
  1. You have to add SliderBorder yo your skinset. You can do it by editing your .osu difficulty and adding something like SliderBorder: 255,255,255 (where 255,255,255 can be replaced with any RGB colour you want.(
    Code
    [Colours]
    Combo1 : 77,253,218
    Combo2 : 28,238,255
    Combo3 : 155,255,255
    Combo4 : 32,32,255
    Combo5 : 128,128,255
    SliderBorder: 255,255,255
  2. I believe that the animation of the sliderball does not work the way you intend it to. There are 10 frames and they are identical. Either add a working animation or remove the unnecessary frames.
[Euphoria]

  • Poggo
  1. 00:12:172 - even though it's already been offered once, I'd like to make sure that you don't want a circle here. The beat is really strong and in spite of the fact that it's a slow part I'd strongly suggest to have it clickable.
  2. 00:25:886 - there is a certain number of extended sliders which ignore beats like the one I linked. If you want more examples, 00:31:544 (1) - this one has a clear stop at 00:31:715.
    Note: 00:32:915 (1) - there are more than that, so I'd like to hear from you why it is done that way. Probably it's better to focus on stronger beats instead of using extended sliders that sound unnatural?
Shadren
  1. 01:56:572 (7) - probbly could use a new combo to emphasize the 1/3 beat here.

Pretty interesting mix of styles. Good luck on re-qualification.


Feel free to contact me if you want something translated/explained better. The post is written in English, so that everyone is free to join the discussion.
Topic Starter
Poggo

Bakari wrote:

Greetings.

I am sorry, but we've got a few things to consider before pushing this forward. Points in bold are the reasons why it was disqualified.

[General]
  1. You have to add SliderBorder yo your skinset. You can do it by editing your .osu difficulty and adding something like SliderBorder: 255,255,255 (where 255,255,255 can be replaced with any RGB colour you want.(
    Code
    [Colours]
    Combo1 : 77,253,218
    Combo2 : 28,238,255
    Combo3 : 155,255,255
    Combo4 : 32,32,255
    Combo5 : 128,128,255
    SliderBorder: 255,255,255
    <--- done
  2. I believe that the animation of the sliderball does not work the way you intend it to. There are 10 frames and they are identical. Either add a working animation or remove the unnecessary frames.
<--- done

[Euphoria]

  • Poggo
  1. 00:12:172 - even though it's already been offered once, I'd like to make sure that you don't want a circle here. The beat is really strong and in spite of the fact that it's a slow part I'd strongly suggest to have it clickable.
  2. 00:25:886 - there is a certain number of extended sliders which ignore beats like the one I linked. If you want more examples, 00:31:544 (1) - this one has a clear stop at 00:31:715.
    Note: 00:32:915 (1) - there are more than that, so I'd like to hear from you why it is done that way. Probably it's better to focus on stronger beats instead of using extended sliders that sound unnatural?
Shadren
  1. 01:56:572 (7) - probbly could use a new combo to emphasize the 1/3 beat here.

Pretty interesting mix of styles. Good luck on re-qualification.


Feel free to contact me if you want something translated/explained better. The post is written in English, so that everyone is free to join the discussion.
And fixed some moments with notes~
ztrot
Alrighty requested to check and see if all changes were applied everything looks good now and I'm going to help you get this back to qualified status good luck and fight on!
Topic Starter
Poggo

ztrot wrote:

Alrighty requested to check and see if all changes were applied everything looks good now and I'm going to help you get this back to qualified status good luck and fight on!
:3 Thank U
SolrosRepica
hiya~~

I've played this map.
Very nice bg,adjust,flow,About the bpm change timing.

I like it :)
Topic Starter
Poggo

SolrosRepica wrote:

hiya~~

I've played this map.
Very nice bg,adjust,flow,About the bpm change timing.

I like it :)

Thank u :3
J1NX1337
Oh yes, great improvements from when this just came out!

Love the slider symmetry as always, good job on both ends.

Almost there, nearly ranked! :)
Myxo
Bubble #2
riffy
What's holding you back? PM me if no one qualifies within 12 hours.
riffy
Doublepost for the sake of posting a lovely heart.

Qualified!
Topic Starter
Poggo

Bakari wrote:

Doublepost for the sake of posting a lovely heart.

Qualified!


Thank u very much :3
Nozhomi
Rip my Blue set.

Gratz Katty~
J1NX1337
Grats!
Mao
Congrats /o/
Topic Starter
Poggo

Mao wrote:

Congrats /o/

Baka ;w;
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