1. Cup (1.42 stars, 88 notes)
2. Platter (2.25 stars, 147 notes)
3. Salad (1.9 stars, 114 notes)

- Magic Bomb - wrote:

CtB mod lol

General

I think another standard difficulty is needed (if you're sorting this out, sorry for pointing it out, but you need 2 standard maps for a set, at least one being a normal.
Kiai times aren't snapped.
You need to cut down the mp3 (maybe make the mp3 fade out at an earlier time?) as you need to have less than 20% of the song left after the ending.

I am talking with people about another diff for standard, and kiai came unsnapped. I forgot to resnap them. Will also fade mp3 about 5 seconds after the last note i guess.

Cup

00:27:600 (3) - Maybe just finish this at the 1/1 with the light drum beat? I like this. Changed.
00:40:725 (2) - I know this is really minor and won't seem like much, but move this to x:96, makes this jump not feel as awkward.Good suggestion. Changed.

Salad

Maybe reduce CS of this difficulty to CS3.5 for a consistent spread? (And the fact CS4 is a bit small for a salad).

00:01:975 (1,3) - Swap NC.Changed.
00:03:850 (1) - Remove NC.Changed.
00:22:600 (3,1) - Swap NC.Changed.
00:25:100 (2) - NC.Changed.
00:47:600 (7) - End this on the 1/1, fits a lot better imo.Changed to better fit the beat.
01:02:600 (5,1) - Swap NC.Changed.
01:07:600 (6) - NC.Changed.
01:09:475 (10) - Move this to x:308.Nice suggestion. Changed.

Platter

Might be being really unobservational, but why have Slider Tick Rate 4 in this difficulty when you don't have it in the others? It doesn't fit the song in my opinion, I'd change it to 2. Honestly I don't really remember why tick rate was 4. I think because I saw it on other maps. haha Changed to lower tick rate.

00:27:600 (4) - This would work better as a 1/1 slider because the quiet drum beat is on the 1/1. Great suggestion. Changed.
00:28:850 (1,1,2) - I'd just remove these notes, to me they don't feel like they fit the music. I highly agree. Changed.
00:34:787 (7) - Move this to the right a tiny bit, feels awkward to catch how it is now. Moved to x:88 for 1.8 distance.
00:38:537 (3) - Move this to x:448 to reduce the awkwardness in catching this.Changed
00:47:600 (7) - NC.Changed.
00:56:975 (5,6) - Maybe make this a 1/2 slider? I would rather keep it two hit circles to keep that pattern going. I like the flow with it like that.
01:02:600 (5,1) - Swap NC.Changed.
01:07:600 (6) - NC.Changed.

Alright, done

1. Song Folder: BG image is 1024x600 which is unrankable - BG images should either be 1024x768 or 1366x768, so you should try and find a new one
2. Song Setup: You can disable Widescreen support here for all diffs, since you're not using a video or SB.
3. Metadata: No issues
4. Timing: No issues
5. Hitsounds: No issues
6. AImod: You'll need to do something with the end of the mp3, since you're not using over 20s of it. You could either map the remaining sections, or trim the mp3 down with a fade out to reduce file size - if you need help with this, let me know. Also, your kiai sections aren't snapped, and as MB said, you need at least a Normal Std diff for this to be rankable

Salad

AImod says you have unsnapped kiai 40s after the song ends. Weird...


Try increasing the spacing of a few prominent notes in the first two sections a little, since none of them currently require dash to catch. I would make small jumps to any note that you're emphasising with a whistle, as well as the note on the downbeat

00:20:100 - This section is really calm, and I think the whistles kinda ruin that. I'd either remove them, or find a less obnoxious whistle sound to use here

00:21:350 (2) - A slider that's not horizontal!:O (jkjk, but you should use angled and curved sliders a little more imo for variety)

00:47:600 (7) - NC here to keep the combo length down
00:53:850 (5) - ^
01:03:850 (3) - ^
01:07:600 (6) - ^ I feel like I'm turning into MB here ;_;

JBHyperion wrote:

I'm bored, so here's a random mod (:

General Comments:

1. Song Folder: BG image is 1024x600 which is unrankable - BG images should either be 1024x768 or 1366x768, so you should try and find a new one I honestly don't know where to find one, do you know of a forum where I can get someone to resize it maybe?
2. Song Setup: You can disable Widescreen support here for all diffs, since you're not using a video or SB. OKkay
3. Metadata: No issues
4. Timing: No issues
5. Hitsounds: No issues
6. AImod: You'll need to do something with the end of the mp3, since you're not using over 20s of it. You could either map the remaining sections, or trim the mp3 down with a fade out to reduce file size - if you need help with this, let me know. Also, your kiai sections aren't snapped, and as MB said, you need at least a Normal Std diff for this to be rankable I plan on fading the track. I already did it but I left too much on. And I am still not sure if standard diffs are gonna be part of this set just yet but thanks for the heads up.

Difficulty Specific Comments:

Cup

You'll need to make this diff easier, since the star rating of the easiest diff in any set must be below 1.5 stars (if there's an Easy diff) or under 2 stars (if Normal is the easiest diff). For a Cup, the note density is okay, but you should try and avoid 1/4 notes such as 00:30:100 (1,2) - Also, try angling some of your sliders to reduce the amount of movement slightly. They're currently all horizontal, so angling them differently would reduce the difficulty, as well as adding some variety I reduced the overall DS for the cup and I changed the patterns a lot for easier flow which reduced the difficulty. Also angled almost all 1/2 sliders

Don't forget that sliders count as multiple objects on the plate, so a series of sliders can stack up very quickly. Watch your NCs in places like 00:07:600 (1,2,3,4,5) and 00:52:600 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) Fixed NCs

00:30:100 (1,2) etc. - As I mentioned above, 1/4 notes in a Cup diff aren't usually a good idea, so I'd just make these into a single 1/1 slider I didnt want to use 1/4 notes at the end of the sliders but it was the only way I could make it sound natural. I would prefer to keep the 1/4 notes but I made the distance from the slider to the hitcircles minimal to keep it relatively easy

00:30:100 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - This gets quite monotonous, and making these 1/1 sliders will make that even more noticeable. Try adding some notes on every other 1/2 note between sliders for some variety, e.g. first one at 00:32:287
00:40:100 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^ Maybe this time, try starting on the first 1/2 note instead of the second, or give the 1/2 a direction change to add further variety Added extra note every other slider and also changed the direction of the sliders for more flow and variety

00:40:725 (2,3) - Reduce the spacing a little here - whilst it's still catchable without dash, it's quite intimidating for a new player to see a jump of this size Reduced the spacing

00:54:162 (5,6,7) - I wouldn't use a 1/4 triplet here, (6) isn't really that strong anyway. Better to just keep (5,7), or make them into a 1/1 slider Changed to a slider

Salad

AImod says you have unsnapped kiai 40s after the song ends. Weird...
I think this is because there is still timing sections for another kiai section that isnt there because I trimmed the mp3 file. I will delete the extra timing sections and this should solve that problem

Try increasing the spacing of a few prominent notes in the first two sections a little, since none of them currently require dash to catch. I would make small jumps to any note that you're emphasising with a whistle, as well as the note on the downbeat Increased the distance for those notes a bit

00:20:100 - This section is really calm, and I think the whistles kinda ruin that. I'd either remove them, or find a less obnoxious whistle sound to use here I just used default sounds to hitsound and I was gonna replace the sounds later once I found a good one. Probably gonna check Lord Raika for a good hitsound replacement

00:21:350 (2) - A slider that's not horizontal!:O (jkjk, but you should use angled and curved sliders a little more imo for variety) HEY.. that's mean ;-; I just now started using angled sliders. Used angled sliders a bit more to make the flow interesting

00:47:600 (7) - NC here to keep the combo length down fixed
00:53:850 (5) - ^ fixed
01:03:850 (3) - ^fixed
01:07:600 (6) - ^ I feel like I'm turning into MB here ;_; Im sorry, i forget about the slider thing >.<

Platter

Weird, your last post says you reduced the tickrate to 2, but I still see it as 4, even though the beatmap listing says this is the Latest pending version. Might just be my client, but check this anyway please. Could have sworn I reduced it to 2 but it was 4, my apologies. Fixed now

00:06:037 (3) - Both of these notes are equally prominent, so i would split this into two circles and add a little jump between them. 00:06:662 (4,5) make a better 1/2 slider here IMO if you want to keep some variety Split into two hitcircles, and I would rather keep them hitcircles instead of one slider because, i know it's obvious, but I like repetition

00:10:100 (7) - This has a finish hitsound, so make a jump here. You'll need to play with some spacing if you want to do this though - I put (5) at x:420, (6) at x:320 and (7) at x:16, but this is just a suggestion Good suggestion, changed

00:23:537 - Add a note here for the "for" vocal note, it keeps a good 1/2 pattern added
00:26:662 - ^ For the "the" vocal note added
00:26:975 - ^ Add two notes on the 1/4 here - when combined with 00:27:287 (3) it maps the "end of the" vocal notes quite well. Alternatively, make these into a 1/4 slider repeating Changed into 1/4 repeat
00:28:850 - Add another note here to keep a good rhythm - there's a weak sound at this point in the music as the pitch of the synth changes added although it seems a bit strange

00:49:162 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - These stacks are a little annoying to play for me. I think they'd be better as sloping stacks of 4, but still with the small space between them Changed to snake stream because now that i know how to make them im gonna use them whenever I can

That's all from me - let me know if you need anything else via PM or forum message and I'll be glad to help.
Good luck! (:

spartancog95 wrote:

Once again, great mod! Between you and MB, I feel like im becoming a better mapper.

afk98 wrote:

Cup
00:53:225 (3) - Unsure if you want to halve the length of this slider (I know JBH just said not to use 1/4s, and JBH is a more seasoned modder, so JBH carries more weight) This isnt a 1/4 slider
00:53:850 (4) - Move this back to the blue tick, fits the voice better? im mapping the drums more so i dont think I need to map the vocal emphasis

Salad
AR7? I rather keep the ar spread of 5, 6.5, 8
00:09:475 (5) - Continue same hitsound as before until 00:10:100 (7)? I only used the whistle for the light whistle in the song
00:30:725 (1) - No NC here? NC is there
00:31:350 (3) - New NC? I feel NC isnt necessary here, wont be over 10 fruit on plate
00:40:100 (1) - I don't know if after this, you want to change up the rhythm a bit sometimes (it might get a little bit repetitive). I think it isnt too repitive to become tedious and since im mapping drums which is constant this cant really be helped ;-;
00:50:100 (1) - Maybe change this to a 1/2 slider instead? It is a 1/2 slider
00:53:537 (4) - Move this to 00:53:381 to fit the song better? I feel like it's fine as is since it's on time with the drums
00:53:850 (1) - Extend the length of this so that the start of this slider is at 00:53:693 (fits the voice better)?That work fine but i would rather not since I didnt map according to vocals for most of the track

DragonSlayer96 wrote:

Hey, do you want me to cut the .mp3 down for you? if so, just send me a pm and i can do it (forum, game, etc) and i dont mind helping that way. my biggest thing is the slider followed by one note that repeats like 10 times it is the same thing on all three difficulties. you can follow the vocals here instead of the beat so you can switch things up and offer a better play for your map than just repeating the same thing over and over, just with a tad bit more movement with each difficulty.

Kama wrote:

Why don't you do an unique mapset CtB|Osu? Have only a Hard is useless lol

Negri_sk wrote:

[Cup]
00:52:912 (2) - x149 changed
00:04:162 (2) - x28 changed
00:02:912 (2) - x344 changed
[Salad]
00:25:100 (1,2) - x280 good suggestion, changed.
00:39:318 (2,3,4) - x146 changed
[Platter]
00:52:912 (2,4) - 1-3 snaps to the right didn't make a big difference but changed
00:56:662 (4,6) - ^ changed
Sorry for such a short mod but it's like already done and ready for rank lol.

Thanks for the mod it is appreciated

[-MrSergio-] wrote:

Yo~ Here I am from my modding queue :3

SPOILER

~ Legend ~

1. Black = Just a suggestion, feel free to refuse
2. Blue = Highly recommended suggestion. You need a strong reason to refuse this
3. Red = Unrankable. You MUST fix this

Please reply with:

1. Green = Fixed
2. Red = Didn't fix
3. Orange = Fixed part of the suggestion

[General]

1. Alright, since I saw above you were looking for a new BG, here it is: http://puu.sh/hQyNI/a3f3310458.jpeg (If you want the .png version just tell me, but it's reccomended to use jpeg ones to reduce file size) Thank you so much for the BG I couldnt figure out how to resize it. Changed the BG
2. Unsnapped kiais: 00:50:040 - 01:08:790 - I see what you mean, I deleted unnecessary timing points
3. Open up the Timing setup (F6) and delete all your timing points beyond 01:15:493 - (you cut the audio, but you didn't remove the timing used for that part of your song) Just to make you understand:
   SPOILER

   
4. Since you changed your audio file you have to re-set your offset: 137 Offset changed on all diffs

[Platter]

1. 00:08:850 (3,4) - What about drum whistles on this? Keep the sampleset on Soft tho Great suggestion
2. 00:10:137 (7) - Sampleset Soft, Additional Normal Finish maybe? Nice suggestion, changed it
3. 00:29:084 (1,2,3,6,7,8,9) - I think adding a Default Soft Whistle on all of these notes would fit very well (you'll have to add a timing section to use the default hitsounds, just to be sure I'm not misleading in any way xD) I understand, and I changed it
4. 00:47:600 (1) - Soft Sampleset, Drum Whistle. On Tail changed
5. 00:48:850 (3) - Same hitsound ^ changed
6. 00:48:537 (2) - Default Soft Whistle changed
7. 00:49:475 (5) - Custom Soft Clap 1 changed
8. 00:49:865 (10,11) - Default Soft Whistles seems a bit weird, but changed

Sorry if I can't point out anything on this diff, but it looks like someone more expert than me passed by here xD

[Salad]

1. Basically, use the same hitsounds as for the Platter. They looks the same anyways, so... xD
2. I noticed you used Default Soft Whistles for this diff, instead of your custom ones. Is this intended or you just forgot about them? xD Alright, after hearing to that part I think they fit a lot well then the ones you have on the Platter diff and without even noticing this, that part is the one I skipped in the previous diff so use 00:30:100 - 00:48:225 - for your Platter too
3. 00:49:787 (3) - Custom Soft Whistle on head seems weird to me

[Cup]

1. As before, the hitsounds I suggested for the Platter diff + your hitsounds of that section on the Salad diff :3

Alright, I hope this can help you. Unfortunately this is all I can do :/
Good luck with your mapset :3

This mod was helpful thank you very much

BoberOfDarkness wrote:

o/

Cup

00:22:637 (3) - NC because of strong note
00:27:637 (3) - same^

Salad

00:22:637 (3) - same as in Cup
00:26:387 (2,3) - maybe put slider instead those two
00:27:637 (4) - NC
00:30:762 (1) - remove NC because you didnt add them in next similar notes like 00:32:012 (4) - or 00:34:512 (2) -

Platter

00:22:637 (3) - same as in previous diffs
00:27:012 (4) - make it horizontal slider instead
00:27:637 (5) - same as in previous diffs

Good luck!

OSUjanaiKATSURAda wrote:

Hi Spartan Modding as




General issue : Resnap Kiai start & End on all diffs and Inheriting sections then remove osome not used inheriting sections ( Before the kiai there a lot ) xD
About The mapset need atleast an easy/normal diff, its just optional i think this is on every map that hasn't an easier diff even in std mapstets. Which sections are you talking about? Most of the sections are used for volume changes. Fixed kiai snap issue on all diffs, and the standard diff was removed but I might not have done it right so it isn't showing up.

Cup

I suggest to make this sliders a reverse slider to fits with snake sound I think as a cup diff reverse sliders should only be used when absolutely necessary and I dont think it's needed here, it's fine as sliders.
00:00:762 (2) -
00:03:262 (3) - ^
00:05:762 (2) - ^
00:08:262 (2) - ^

00:10:137 (6) - abit more spaced to correlate with that strong beat changed to 2x spacing for strong beat
00:36:387 (3) - replace with 1/2 circles so it fits the lyrics better Not really mapping to the lyrics but the groove of the drums here so i think it's better as it is
00:45:762 (2) - to x272 then add a circle 00:46:074 - on x184 Great suggestion, changed.
01:07:637 (1) - just make it a normal long slider that fits to lyricsI would rather keep as is because I didnt map too much to the vocals but more of the drums and a long slider would make me miss the drums at that part which I feel are important to consistency

Salad

00:08:262 (2) - Reverse it and remove next circle The following circle is needed because it is a strong note but I think the way the slider is now is fine, isn't too much of a jump to be too hard for salad imo
00:36:387 (1) - replace with a 1/4 stream I see why you suggest this but I feel it would be overmapping for a salad
00:49:199 (1,2) - the end of both of this slider is on 1/6 and it feels better than when it was off the beats Im confused to what you mean by this, but I think these sliders are fine being 1/4 sliders
01:08:887 (3) - on x308 Nice, changed

Goodluck!!

1. 00:09:512 (5) -> x240
2. 00:09:824 (6) -> x156
3. 00:58:887 (3) -> x252 This slider will look better, if it will ends with 4th note in this combo.
4. 01:03:887 (3) -> x280 ^

1. 00:09:824 (6) -> x304
2. 00:10:137 (7) -> x80
3. 00:47:637 (1) - End of this slider is becoming too early. Move end to the next white tick (00:48:262)

1. 00:09:824 (6) -> x344
2. 00:29:121 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - How about make a reverse slider here?
3. 00:49:199 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - ^
4. 00:47:637 (1) - Same slider, how in salad. Move it's end to the next white tick, sounds really weird ;-;

1. 00:10:137 (7) - Are you sure, that you need to put here Finish? These notes in every diff sounds better without Finish.

_Myle_ wrote:

Hey. It's my first mod, don't be so rude on me. Oh don't worry, I would never be rude.

[Cup]

1. 00:09:512 (5) -> x240 Good suggestion, changed
2. 00:09:824 (6) -> x156 Changed this, and I also slightly moved the following hitcircle for a reasonable catch
3. 00:58:887 (3) -> x252 This slider will look better, if it will ends with 4th note in this combo.Good suggestion, changed
4. 01:03:887 (3) -> x280 ^ Changed as well

[Salad]

1. 00:09:824 (6) -> x304 changed
2. 00:10:137 (7) -> x80 changed
3. 00:47:637 (1) - End of this slider is becoming too early. Move end to the next white tick (00:48:262)Changed, must have did that by accident when changing stuff.

[Platter]

1. 00:09:824 (6) -> x344 Tried your suggestion but I still think it's better the way it is now
2. 00:29:121 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - How about make a reverse slider here? changed
3. 00:49:199 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - ^ I like the pattern used for this and using another stationary reverse slider for something this long would be tedious
4. 00:47:637 (1) - Same slider, how in salad. Move it's end to the next white tick, sounds really weird ;-; changed

[Hitsounding]

1. 00:10:137 (7) - Are you sure, that you need to put here Finish? These notes in every diff sounds better without Finish.

I think it sounds good with the finish, but I will consider changing this if someone else points it out.

- Magic Bomb - wrote:

It's Been So Long since I looked at this map

Cup

00:03:887 (1) - A nice NC pattern for the intro is an NC every 1 bar (or 4 beats), so I'd remove NC here.Changed the NC to be shorter
00:10:137 (7) - I know it's for emphasis that it's this far away, but I feel it plays a bit weirdly considering the almost consistent DS for the rest of the intro, so I'd move a bit closer, to x:48, this still emphasises this note with high DS, but not as much. changed
00:33:262 (2) - Keep this consistent with earlier sections in terms of distance from the last note by moving this to x:284. Changed
00:37:012 (4) - ^ x:264. changed
01:01:074 (2) - I think a bit more distance from this to 3 feels nice, x:344? changed

Salad

00:25:137 (1) - A bit more distance from 3 wouldn't hurt. Move this to x:264.changed
00:30:137 (1,2,3) - A dash to 3 would fit nicely here. Drag 00:30:137 (1,2) - to x:16, then move 00:31:074 (3) - to x:476 (Might already be there, not sure.) changed
00:33:574 (3) - x:176 just to make sure the player knows that this is a dash just by looking at it, a new player could think they could walk here (Which they could, but it'd require perfect timing).changed
00:37:324 (3) - I think this should be a dash, so move this to x:160. changed
00:39:824 (4) - I feel you should make the jump to this a bit bigger because of the very strong clap here, move this to x:300, and then ctrl+h 00:40:137 (1) - so that this section still flows fine.changed
00:42:324 (3) - Move this to x:120 for a more defined dash.changed
00:43:574 (3) - x:252, for a more defined dash. I didn't take your suggestion but i changed the patterns
00:44:824 (3) - Moving this to x:128 creates a nice dash whilst not making the jump afterwards too difficult.changed
00:48:574 (2) - Double dash isn't recommended in salad, I would move this to x:128, as the dash to 3 makes more sense to the song than the dash to 2, and then move 00:48:887 (3) - to x:352 to make sure this dash is still defined.changed
00:51:387 (3) - I would increase distance here, by moving this to x:208, to define dashes more. changed
00:55:762 (2) - x:468 for a nice dash to fit the kick drum at this point. changed
00:57:012 (5,6) - For emphasis on the kick, I would move 5 to x:56 and 6 to x:242. changed
00:58:262 (2) - x:24, a dash on this would feel great. changed
01:00:762 (2) - Ctrl+G this and move to x:392 for a nice dash, and then move 01:01:387 (3) - to x:144 for increased distance after this, and a nice dash to 4.changed
01:03:887 (1) - x:144, to make this dash more defined. changed
01:05:762 (2) - x:148, for a nice dash to this for the kick, and from for the drum on 3.changed
01:06:699 (4) - x:84 to make this jump slightly easier without dashing, and then move 01:07:012 (5) - to x:316 for a nice dash.Took the suggestion but slightly altered it.

Platter

00:00:762 (3) - Moving this to x:64 makes a nice dash, after moving 00:00:449 (2) - to x:300.changed
00:02:637 (1) - I think this part fits a dash, so move this to x:48, and then to keep the flow nice here, ctrl+h 00:03:262 (2) - and move it to x:320.changed
00:04:512 (5,6) - I would drag these two to x:440 to make a nice dash for the higher pitch of the background beat here.changed
00:05:137 (1) - Move this to x:48, the *ching* sound effect here could do with a dash for emphasis. (If you didn't take the above change, you may want to move it slightly more).changed
00:07:637 (1) - x:56, again for the ching sound effect requiring some more emphasis, so a dash feels nice.changed

I would just like to say, whilst I've said to emphasise a few sections in the above part, I like (And have kept to with my suggestions) that there are no HDashes in the intro, to help the player get into it. I think it's better with no HDashes.

00:27:012 (4,1) - Here, I think it flows better if you ctrl+H 4 and move it to x:216, and then move 1 to x:16 for a bit more distance.
00:29:199 (3,4,5,6) - This section is quite standstill, it feels kinda boring, I know that you were trying to make it easy because of the use of the 1/8 repeat slider but I think it's fine to move 3 to x:444, and 5 to x:456. This makes some more movement, still quite easy though in case the use of 1/8 confuses a newer player.Changed this to a 1/8 stream with a small curve to keep it interesting yet easy.
00:41:074 (3) - Increased distance here, say, to x:160, plays nicer, in my opinion, as this jump feels a bit lacking right now. changed
00:49:199 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - I don't know why but I love this stream. Nothing to change, just thought I'd point it out <3.<3
00:52:012 (4) - Whilst it ruins symmetry, this feels a lot better suited to a dash, so maybe move this to x:332? changed
00:54:355 (6) - x:344 flows slightly better in my opinion, this distance just feels strange to me right now.Changed the distancing to be slightly different than your suggestion
01:02:324 (4) - x:472, increased distance feels better here, after the clap on the end of the previous slider.changed

Alright, done.

1. Song Folder: No issues
2. Song Setup: You can disable Widescreen Support for all diffs, since you're not using a storyboard
3. Metadata: Whilst it's not the same song, you can probably steal a few of the tags from this mapset if you like, specifically those relating to genre - https://osu.ppy.sh/s/291043
4. Timing: Remove the unnecessary inherited points in each diff, e.g in the Cup, there are a bunch of useless green lines during and after the spinner at 00:47:637 (1) - and resnap the important ones where necessary. Also, you can remove the unnecessary bookmarks after the song cut in the .osu file under "Editor" - delete everything after 70040
5. Hitsounds: No Isuues
6. AImod: No issues

1. 00:30:137 (1) - The softer drum beat at the end of this and similar sliders in this section is actually on the 1/6 tick (00:30:657 for the given example). You taking an awful risk using 1/6 in a Cup, even at a low BPM like this. It might be best to just combine 00:30:137 (1,2) into a 1/1 slider with the tail mapping the stronger drum beat
2. 00:31:074 - Why no kick drum note here like you have for the other similar patterns in this section? (Also at 00:36:074 - 00:37:324 - 00:41:074 - 00:43:574 for the vocals if you want to)
3. 00:33:887 (3) - To add some variety in this section, you could shorten this slider and some others to a 1/2 slider to map the vocals, and maybe use some 1/2 repeating sliders too for the strong drum beats such as 00:39:512 (5,6,1)
4. 00:58:887 (3,4) and 01:03:887 (3,4) - Don't forget to resnap this properly as well (however you decide to fix the previous sliders)

1. 00:10:137 (7) - NC for the downbeat, finish, and jump
2. 00:30:137 (1,2) - Same as in the Cup, these should be snapped to 1/6, not 1/4. You can probably use 1/6 snap safely here so long as you put minimal distance (if any) between the slider tail and the circle - otherwise try some similar ideas to what I suggested in the Cup, but with more spacing and increased pattern variation (you may want to do this anyway, since your current pattern is basically the Cup with greater spacing

1. Pretty much the same as what I said in the Salad lol, add the NC for consistency and check for 1/6 snap

JBHyperion wrote:

Wow that update was quick! Here's your recheck (:

General Comments:

1. Song Folder: No issues
2. Song Setup: You can disable Widescreen Support for all diffs, since you're not using a storyboard Done
3. Metadata: Whilst it's not the same song, you can probably steal a few of the tags from this mapset if you like, specifically those relating to genre - https://osu.ppy.sh/s/291043 I added 2 more tags
4. Timing: Remove the unnecessary inherited points in each diff, e.g in the Cup, there are a bunch of useless green lines during and after the spinner at 00:47:637 (1) - and resnap the important ones where necessary. Also, you can remove the unnecessary bookmarks after the song cut in the .osu file under "Editor" - delete everything after 70040 Fixed it all
5. Hitsounds: No Isuues
6. AImod: No issues

Difficulty-Specific Comments:

Cup:

1. 00:30:137 (1) - The softer drum beat at the end of this and similar sliders in this section is actually on the 1/6 tick (00:30:657 for the given example). You taking an awful risk using 1/6 in a Cup, even at a low BPM like this. It might be best to just combine 00:30:137 (1,2) into a 1/1 slider with the tail mapping the stronger drum beat Changed to 1/1 sliders
2. 00:31:074 - Why no kick drum note here like you have for the other similar patterns in this section? (Also at 00:36:074 - 00:37:324 - 00:41:074 - 00:43:574 for the vocals if you want to)I added notes in all those spots plus others between sliders
3. 00:33:887 (3) - To add some variety in this section, you could shorten this slider and some others to a 1/2 slider to map the vocals, and maybe use some 1/2 repeating sliders too for the strong drum beats such as 00:39:512 (5,6,1) Great suggestion, changed up some patterns near the end of this section to spice it up
4. 00:58:887 (3,4) and 01:03:887 (3,4) - Don't forget to resnap this properly as well (however you decide to fix the previous sliders)Fixed by changing to 1/1 slider

Salad:

1. 00:10:137 (7) - NC for the downbeat, finish, and jump Fixed
2. 00:30:137 (1,2) - Same as in the Cup, these should be snapped to 1/6, not 1/4. You can probably use 1/6 snap safely here so long as you put minimal distance (if any) between the slider tail and the circle - otherwise try some similar ideas to what I suggested in the Cup, but with more spacing and increased pattern variation (you may want to do this anyway, since your current pattern is basically the Cup with greater spacing Fixed NC and changed up a majority of the patterns when i resnapped to 1/6

Platter:

1. Pretty much the same as what I said in the Salad lol, add the NC for consistency and check for 1/6 snap Done, Done, and Done

Ensure everything is snapped properly, get a few more mods to check the patterns are still fine and then call me back (:

General

1. Difficulty Spread : Inconsistency in Kiai Times which is unrankable. Make sure make them all same
2. Unsnapped objects : There're some unsnapped timing points in respective diffs, please check them all
3. Audio bitrate over 192 kbps : ☑
4. Metadata Issues : ☑
5. Timeline Issues : maybe the proper offset for this song is 135
6. Combo Colors : ☑
7. Unused hitsounds : ☑
8. Hitsounds Issues : Recommended to add some more samples, especially the kiai parts. It needs more drum sounds imo
9. Inaudible hitsounds : ☑

Cup

1. 00:08:887 (3,4) - The whistles here sound too loud. I'd reduce the volume here for a bit
2. 00:20:040 - Unsnapped inherited point
3. 00:30:040 - Unsnapped timing point here. Please remove it
4. 00:40:762 (2) - I'm unsure if this fits music or not, also it's recommended to not use 1/4 in cup
5. 00:42:012 (4) - Seems kinda overmapped imo, i'd rather use 1/2 here
6. 00:43:262 (2) - ^
7. 00:44:512 (2,3,4) - ^
8. 00:45:762 (2) - ^
9. 00:47:012 (2,3,4) - ^
10. 00:49:824 - I found some unnecessary timing points here, please get rid of them all
11. 00:50:040 - Unsnapped inherited point
12. 01:10:040 - It's unnecessary point at all, please delete it
13. 01:10:137 - Here's the same, unnecessary inherited point

Salad

1. 00:08:887 (3,4) - The whistles here sound too loud. I'd reduce the volume here for a bit
2. 00:20:040 - Unsnapped inherited point
3. 00:39:407 (2,3) - Ctrl+g on these notes would be nice. It improved the flow imo
4. 00:50:032 - Unsnapped kiai section
5. 01:05:137 (1,2) - The 1/2 jump here feels a bit painful for the salad actually. Just reduce the distance slightly
6. 01:10:040 - Unnecessary and unsnapped inherited point here, delete it

Platter

1. 00:08:887 (3,4) - The whistles here sound too loud. I'd reduce the volume here for a bit
2. 00:20:040 - Unsnapped inherited point
3. 00:29:199 - Having 1/8 in platter diff might cause dq or something, I'd rather remove them
4. 00:30:137 (1,2) - The 1/6 jump here is pretty tough. Reduce the distance for a bit
5. 00:32:012 (5) - ^
6. 00:33:262 (2) - ^
7. 00:34:355 (5) - This note should be snapped on 00:34:407 like the other parts. Also I recommend you to get rid of wild hdash jump here as well as it might be too intense for platter if it has been fixed to 1/6
8. 00:38:574 (3,4) - The jump here is kinda unexpected. I'd rather ctrl+g 4 and move 5 to about x:76 (after ctrl+g it, please move 4&5 to a bit right to prevent blind jump)
9. 00:49:199 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Again, using 1/8 in platter isn't recommended at all
10. 00:50:032 - Unsnapped kiai section
11. 01:10:040 - Unnecessary inherited point here. Please remove it

Spectator wrote:

Platter

1. 00:29:199 - Having 1/8 in platter diff might cause dq or something, I'd rather remove them - I just want to comment on this, whilst 1/8 is usually not recommended, I think it's fine because of the low bpm of the song. However, this is the mapper's choice of course, as to whether he wants to apply this or not. If he decides not to, I'd say the only change would be to remove 00:29:590 (6) - , as I can't hear a sound here.