RuberusuScarlet wrote:

hardをプレイした時に違和感があったので…
01:21:459 - to 01:21:745 - ここのsnap1/2じゃなくて1/3かなと…（dramsound）

あとmetadateのtagについてですけどGITADORAとPop'n musicも入れていいと思います。

good map!!
頑張って><)/~

puxtu wrote:

alright m4m
[Hard]
00:09:459 (9459|1) - add double for snare?
add a note.
00:10:030 (10030|0) - there's a loud kick before this note too
you're right. but here is one note.sry
00:24:745 - missing notes for snare
match vocals... okay added.
00:25:459 - here too
i don't want to put notes here T-T

01:21:459 (81459|3,81649|2) - add more 1/3?
02:01:316 (121316|1) - add 1/2 note
02:02:316 (122316|3) - add 1 more note for impact
added.

[Special]
00:09:602 (9602|2) - remove, no sound
yes, and change long note.
00:09:602 (9602|2,20030|3) - add W
sure
00:20:887 (20887|2) - missing note for clap
00:21:173 (21173|1) - and here for kick
? already put
00:30:030 - again, this time is quite loud. not sure if it was intended or not
same reason, sry
01:41:316 - add note
okay
02:01:458 - why are you keep ignoring the drum sound lol
oh,forgot yeah
nice map pira, gl!

Nanatsu wrote:

乙女繚乱 舞い咲き誇れ > Otome Ryo'u'ran Mai Sakihokore? たぶん?
修正しました
山口愛 > yamaguchi ai? yamaguchi megumi? 知らんな。。これはよくわかんない；
"megumi"が正しいです。image
ゲームの名前がtagにある場合、発売されたシリーズを入れることもできます。が めんどくさいならしなくてもおk


こんな感じで (だいたいtagはあっていれば少なくても沢山いてもおk）
ありがとうございます。しかし、省略しました。

あ、ちなみに ひなビタとhinabita入れるのは?
加えました。
hitsound チェックするツールがないです; 名前忘れった;;;

BASIC

* 00:18:316 (18316|0,18745|0,19459|0,19887|0,20316|0) - lol. probably a bit too many to use same column on easiest difficulty. can be moved a bit to 2.

* 00:33:887 - 00:34:745 - There's no problem on this section,

But I'd want to re-arrange like this way for novice players who aren't get used to use finger to play mania yet.



Just Whatver. Lol.

* 00:45:173 - 00:45:959 - ま〜ん〜こ〜
WTF (i)
* 00:49:745 (49745|1,49959|2) - I think they have same intervals. So i want to try something like 00:49:745 (49745|1,49959|2,50173|0,50316|0) - Ctrl + G ( I mean only column. )

* 01:42:316 - 01:44:673 - This part has odd rhythm to follow for novice mania players. I'd rather make a bit more easier here if possible. ( I'm not saying the beatsnap was wrong. so it's not necessarily to change and i'm not bn no longer ) [/img]
All Fixed.

へたくそになったからもうできなさそう; なにしてるのか全然わかんないし;

また来ます;
無理はしないでください

Fresh Chicken wrote:

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MY 2 KUDO SLOT

wwww Mark for bubble check.

Fresh Chicken wrote:

Okay, I'm here for bubble check.

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[General]

Tagに、を付けてはいけません。和泉一舞,Izumi Ibuki,津田美波,Tsuda Minami,春日咲子,Kasuga Sakiko,山口愛,Yamaguchi Megumi,ひなビタ,hinabita　こちらにある、を削除してください

AImodを確認してください。一つのerrorがあります
。
前にも言いましたけど、Hinatabi Bitter Sweets　に確信がありません、IamKwaNさんに聞いてみる方がいいと思います　

Widescreen Support をuncheckしてください。song setup -> Design にあるます。

Use special style(N+1 style) for mania をuncheckしてください。song setup -> Advanced にあるます。（なんでこれcheckしましたかｗｗｗ）

First offsetは　１６０２　です。for slider tick. offset を変わる前に適用しでください！

Hard のODとHPが不適切です。８：７．５をおすすめします。

diff同士 snap を一貫してください。
--------------------------------

rejected mod は必ず言ってください

[ALEFY's MEDIUM]

01:06:602 - 01:31:744 - 01:56:601 - unnecessary timing points.
done

00:14:602 - こっちにnoteがあればもっといいだと思います
done

00:38:887 (38887|2) - Vocalがだと思いますが。。。じゃあこれは00:39:173 - こっちで終わるLNがなるべきです
声の音が短いので却下させていただきます。

00:44:411 (44411|2) - これは00:44:435 - こっちです、他のdiffも00:44:435 - こっちにnoteがあります。
done

00:57:602 - missing?
done

01:07:602 (67602|2,67887|1,68030|2) - http://puu.sh/reUkI/34eb548f4a.png これがもっとbalanceがあると思います
見た目のbalanceがよくても、押しにくいので却下させていただきます。

01:10:697 (70697|1) - 01:10:745 - Wrong snap
指摘していただいた場所の方が違和感があるので却下させていただきます。

01:11:078 (71078|2) - 01:11:102 - Wrong snap
〃

01:11:840 (71840|2,72221|1) - 01:11:852 - 01:12:245 - Wrong snap
〃

01:57:173 (117173|0,117173|1) - これじゃなくて01:57:458 - こっちが 2 notesになるべきだと思います
ボーカルに合わせるのならばそちらの方がよいかもしれませんが、drumに合わせてあるので却下させていただきます。

一度適当に小さいおすすめとunrankable issue をmainでmodしました。

修正が終わったら呼んでください o/

Fresh Chicken wrote:

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[General]

Tagに、を付けてはいけません。和泉一舞,Izumi Ibuki,津田美波,Tsuda Minami,春日咲子,Kasuga Sakiko,山口愛,Yamaguchi Megumi,ひなビタ,hinabita　こちらにある、を削除してください

AImodを確認してください。一つのerrorがあります。

前にも言いましたけど、Hinatabi Bitter Sweets　に確信がありません、IamKwaNさんに聞いてみる方がいいと思います　
I know that there is no "HinaBita" ranked map. For a reason, you can't believe this source.
But I check konami original images (1 2 3 4). I think that I don't miss it...

Widescreen Support をuncheckしてください。song setup -> Design にあるます。

Use special style(N+1 style) for mania をuncheckしてください。song setup -> Advanced にあるます。（なんでこれcheckしましたかｗｗｗ）

First offsetは　１６０２　です。for slider tick. offset を変わる前に適用しでください！
I'm really sorry. I can't understand a little. I fixed, but it maybe wrong. please re:check chicken.

Hard のODとHPが不適切です。８：７．５をおすすめします。

diff同士 snap を一貫してください。
--------------------------------

rejected mod は必ず言ってください

[BASIC]

00:10:602 - 00:11:173 - 00:34:316 - 01:09:316 - 01:10:030 - 01:21:554 - 01:21:745 - 01:58:173 - unnecessary timing points.
他のdiffはそれぞれnoteがあるからこれがあると思えますが、BASICはnoteがありません。削除してください。

00:47:459 (47459|1) - ４はどうですか？for balance.

01:12:602 - add one, ほかの１noteのpartとは違いがあるし　01:17:173 - こちと同じと思います。


[Hard]

diffの名前をHARDに変わりたい、ならtext で修正する方法があります。

00:49:959 (49959|1,50173|1,50173|2,50316|1,50316|2) - これをもっと構造的にできると思います。http://puu.sh/reVtC/0e9aa56a2d.jpg

00:58:745 - add one more note? sound が少し強いです

[SPECIAL]

00:19:887 - add one? 少し強いです

00:23:316 - ^

00:27:887 - こっちは三つですね

00:58:745 - add one?

01:41:601 - ^

01:21:554 (81554|1) - F hitsound

01:48:458 - 00:58:745 と同じです

一度適当に小さいおすすめとunrankable issue をmainでmodしました。

修正が終わったら呼んでください o/

Fresh Chicken wrote:

We've fixed some unsnap, unrankable issues, etc ...

Now it's good for me to go, good job PiraTom and ALEFY.

Bubbled!

Good luck!

• 
  [General Issues]

1. seems all fine for me . . . but you have some unused hitsound here ? http://puu.sh/rBmyP/e62147fb8d.png
2. Also metadata confirmed http://p.eagate.573.jp/game/bemani/hina ... otome.html https://p.eagate.573.jp/game/bemani/hin ... info1.html https://remywiki.com/Otome_ryouran_mai_sakihokore
   |1|2|3|4|
   
   [BASIC]
3. 00:21:316 (21316|0) - i didn't hear any important sound that audible enough to be give with a note here . . . and also there's not contains any kick sound, so remove it please
4. 00:29:602 - suggest to add one more note here to represent the drum sound, since you've following the same sound at here 00:29:316 (29316|1,29459|3,29744|0,29887|1) -
5. 00:33:316 - very loud drums here . . . that would be good if you adding a note on that to keep the instrumen flows with 00:33:030 (33030|3,33602|2) -
6. 01:03:316 (63316|2,63602|2,63887|2) - they're actually have different vocal type and also different sound/pitch this time, would be more good if you re-arrange them into different column too
7. 01:11:852 (71852|1) - i feel this sound is exactly start on white lines 01:11:887 - since 1/8 is too early and the sound itself is not start yet imo (this goes applied to all diffs if you agree with this)
   
   [ALEFY's MEDIUM]
8. 00:22:316 (22316|1) - not going to change this single note into LN ? cuz i saw you often put a LN for type of vocal like that on another parts . . . just like 00:17:744 (17744|3) - or 00:26:887 (26887|2) -
9. 00:31:744 - would be more fair if you add one more note on here . . . it still have same cymbal sound like on your previous part
10. 01:11:852 (71852|2) - same sugegstion as BASIC diff
11. 01:11:852 (71852|2) - add one more note for expressing the big impact sound on here ?
12. 01:30:030 (90030|1,90316|1) - i feel they're have different type of vocal sound for this time . . . would be good if you re-arrange them into different column too
13. 01:54:030 (114030|1,114316|1,114601|1,114887|1) - i think this is not really good if you overused the 2nd column while the sound itself was actually different . . . please try this one http://puu.sh/rBjPt/cf990e11aa.jpg start at 01:53:887 -
    
    [HARD]
14. 00:24:459 - it just feels really weird if you decide to leave this important guitar sound here . . . please consider to expressing that with at least a note on that part
15. 01:11:852 (71852|2) - same suggestion like BASIC diff
16. 01:13:173 (73173|1) - i feel this LN is more good to plays if you end that on this timing 01:13:602 - just like you did on your SPECIAL diff
17. 01:17:744 (77744|3) - and 01:18:887 (78887|2) - same reason as above ^
18. 01:57:173 (117173|1,117316|1) - this part is not really suit to be give a 1/2 mini jack on that, because it's not really same with this part 01:56:887 (116887|3,117030|3) - that actually have vocal effects
    
    [SPECIAL]
19. Not really have a big problem here . . . but pls check again my snapping suggestion like on BASIC diff

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

• 
  [General Issues]

1. seems all fine for me . . . but you have some unused hitsound here ? http://puu.sh/rBmyP/e62147fb8d.png
   Only using ALEFY's diff. Should I delete them?
2. Also metadata confirmed http://p.eagate.573.jp/game/bemani/hina ... otome.html https://p.eagate.573.jp/game/bemani/hin ... info1.html https://remywiki.com/Otome_ryouran_mai_sakihokore
   Checked and Keep
   |1|2|3|4|
   
   [BASIC]
3. 00:21:316 (21316|0) - i didn't hear any important sound that audible enough to be give with a note here . . . and also there's not contains any kick sound, so remove it please
4. 00:29:602 - suggest to add one more note here to represent the drum sound, since you've following the same sound at here 00:29:316 (29316|1,29459|3,29744|0,29887|1) -
5. 00:33:316 - very loud drums here . . . that would be good if you adding a note on that to keep the instrumen flows with 00:33:030 (33030|3,33602|2) -
6. 01:03:316 (63316|2,63602|2,63887|2) - they're actually have different vocal type and also different sound/pitch this time, would be more good if you re-arrange them into different column too
7. 01:11:852 (71852|1) - i feel this sound is exactly start on white lines 01:11:887 - since 1/8 is too early and the sound itself is not start yet imo (this goes applied to all diffs if you agree with this)
   ALL FIXED
   
   [HARD]
8. 00:24:459 - it just feels really weird if you decide to leave this important guitar sound here . . . please consider to expressing that with at least a note on that part
   fixed and rearrange
9. 01:11:852 (71852|2) - same suggestion like BASIC diff
10. 01:13:173 (73173|1) - i feel this LN is more good to plays if you end that on this timing 01:13:602 - just like you did on your SPECIAL diff
11. 01:17:744 (77744|3) - and 01:18:887 (78887|2) - same reason as above ^
    ur right.
12. 01:57:173 (117173|1,117316|1) - this part is not really suit to be give a 1/2 mini jack on that, because it's not really same with this part 01:56:887 (116887|3,117030|3) - that actually have vocal effects
    ALL FIXED
    
    [SPECIAL]
13. Not really have a big problem here . . . but pls check again my snapping suggestion like on BASIC diff
    Cool!

LeiN- wrote:

sorosoro rank sareruna

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

• 
  
  [ALEFY's MEDIUM]

1. 00:22:316 (22316|1) - not going to change this single note into LN ? cuz i saw you often put a LN for type of vocal like that on another parts . . . just like 00:17:744 (17744|3) - or 00:26:887 (26887|2) -
2. 00:31:744 - would be more fair if you add one more note on here . . . it still have same cymbal sound like on your previous part
3. 01:11:852 (71852|2) - same sugegstion as BASIC diff
4. 01:11:852 (71852|2) - add one more note for expressing the big impact sound on here ? Nope
5. 01:30:030 (90030|1,90316|1) - i feel they're have different type of vocal sound for this time . . . would be good if you re-arrange them into different column too move to 1 line
6. 01:54:030 (114030|1,114316|1,114601|1,114887|1) - i think this is not really good if you overused the 2nd column while the sound itself was actually different . . . please try this one http://puu.sh/rBjPt/cf990e11aa.jpg start at 01:53:887 -
   No Reply = FIXED

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

Qualified congratulations !

Feerum wrote:

[BASIC]
01:37:744 (97744|3) - This note is still snapped to the old timing, move it a bit up (just few ms) to snap it to the new one.

[ALEFY's MEDIUM]
00:44:423 (44423|2) - Is wrong snapped. It's snapped to 1/8 while all other diffs are to a 1/12 beat. Please move it to 00:44:435 -
See here:

Screen

01:37:744 (97744|0,97744|1) - Like above in basic. These notes are still snapped to the old timing, please move them a bit up to snap them to the new timing point.

[HARD]
01:37:744 (97744|0,97744|2,97745|1) - I have a big problem with these notes. They have a different snap. While 01:37:745 (97745|1) - is correct, 01:37:744 (97744|0,97744|2) - are not.


Please make them correct.

[SPECIAL]
01:37:744 (97744|1,97744|3,97745|2,97745|0) - Same like above, notes have a different snap. While 01:37:745 (97745|0,97745|2) - are correct, 01:37:744 (97744|3,97744|1) - are not.


ALL DONE

Feerum wrote:

Weee

Everything fixed.
Here's your heart back!

Re-Qualified