1. Gone (5.36 stars, 1342 notes)

CPUGeek wrote:

Pls tell me you're trying to rank this.

1. Any tags? At least add dnb/drum and bass
2. 01:04:832 (3,4) - K so you can increase the spacing between 3 and 4 here, cuz it's kind of (awkward?) 3 is touching the stream k, but 4 is almost touching it too and it's like meh to read even tho the ar but anyway if you are gonna increase the spacing make sure you increase the spacing between 1/2 and 5/6 as well to keep the pattern consistent.
3. 01:11:346 (1,2,3,4) - Try this, I think that's better because it sounds pretty much consistent.
4. 01:15:803 (2,3,4,5) - Same applies here, try this, it gets consistent with 03:05:517 (2,3,4).
5. 01:31:746 (7,1) - Swap those elements' positions with each other. It seems like you've tried to follow the vocal with slider 1, but it actually stars from the red tick before, where is 7 atm.
6. 01:35:003 (2,3) - Swap those 2's positions? Feels less awkward imo.
7. 01:42:717 (8,1) - The same swapping thing for the vocals?
8. 03:10:660 (1) - How about this?
9. 03:38:774 (1,2) - I think ctrl+g to both plays a bit better, it's a bit awkard as it is now.
10. 04:44:432 (1,2,3) - Diz pattern here, looks pretty stiff, why don't you make it like here 04:55:403 (1,2,3) ?
    Now the hitsounds
11. 00:54:889 - the claps from here to 01:00:374 don't really go well with the song imo, you can either remove them, or do this: download this hitsound and place it in this part on every white tick so it matches with the actual song. In order to be consistent with the rest before the first kiai, you can simply replace the claps from 01:00:374 to 01:05:517 with the HS I just put here. But from 01:00:374 don't only replace the claps, but fill in the red ticks as well so it completely matches the song.
12. 02:44:603 - 02:55:232 - do the same as above
13. 04:20:260 - Replace claps with the HS in the stream.
14. 04:39:803 (1) - I think you've tried to follow the vocal with the finish on the slider tail. It's kind of inconsistent compared to the rest of the breakcore part. I'd personally remove it.

Exote wrote:

hi lemme give you some suggestions here you go:

1. Any tags? At least add dnb/drum and bass done
2. 01:04:832 (3,4) - K so you can increase the spacing between 3 and 4 here, cuz it's kind of (awkward?) 3 is touching the stream k, but 4 is almost touching it too and it's like meh to read even tho the ar but anyway if you are gonna increase the spacing make sure you increase the spacing between 1/2 and 5/6 as well to keep the pattern consistent. You don't even see the 300 from the stream anymore by the time you get to that slider so i don't see the point in messing with the pattern
3. 01:11:346 (1,2,3,4) - Try this, I think that's better because it sounds pretty much consistent. Sure
4. 01:15:803 (2,3,4,5) - Same applies here, try this, it gets consistent with 03:05:517 (2,3,4). but variation tho :c
5. 01:31:746 (7,1) - Swap those elements' positions with each other. It seems like you've tried to follow the vocal with slider 1, but it actually stars from the red tick before, where is 7 atm. The vocal extends to where it currently ends, and if i start 7 earlier that means i skip the big white tick, which i definitely won't as it's a really strong beat
6. 01:35:003 (2,3) - Swap those 2's positions? Feels less awkward imo. this flows way better than when i change it
7. 01:42:717 (8,1) - The same swapping thing for the vocals? same as earlier
8. 03:10:660 (1) - How about this? variationnnnn
9. 03:38:774 (1,2) - I think ctrl+g to both plays a bit better, it's a bit awkard as it is now. it's supposed to be like this, because the music has intense changes here
10. 04:44:432 (1,2,3) - Diz pattern here, looks pretty stiff, why don't you make it like here 04:55:403 (1,2,3) ? dunno i like it
    Now the hitsounds
11. 00:54:889 - the claps from here to 01:00:374 don't really go well with the song imo, you can either remove them, or do this: download this hitsound and place it in this part on every white tick so it matches with the actual song. In order to be consistent with the rest before the first kiai, you can simply replace the claps from 01:00:374 to 01:05:517 with the HS I just put here. But from 01:00:374 don't only replace the claps, but fill in the red ticks as well so it completely matches the song. honestly i like how the current claps add to the song, i might change it later, i'll keep it in mind
12. 02:44:603 - 02:55:232 - do the same as above
13. 04:20:260 - Replace claps with the HS in the stream.
14. 04:39:803 (1) - I think you've tried to follow the vocal with the finish on the slider tail. It's kind of inconsistent compared to the rest of the breakcore part. I'd personally remove it. followed a strict pattern that i sticked to for the whole part, removing it would ruin that kind of

A'ight that's it whew I hope It was at least a bit helpful. About the hitsound thing, I think it sounds cool when you try to match the hitsounds to the song. Anyway you decide on whether you want to change the hitsounds or nah. If there is sth that you didn't understand pm me.
take them stars

Shiguri wrote:

u smell i cant mod, cant i just be your timing whore :^(

01:05:517 - seems a bit overmapped, maybe have a 1/2 beat like this or something http://puu.sh/sfKQn/79c3bdfeff.jpg There's definitely a stream sound though, even thought less audible, which is why I gave it such little spacing
02:55:232 - same thing here same :^ (
05:29:174 (6) - add nc done
05:29:260 (1) - add finish mb doneeeeeeeeeee

Lazer wrote:

[dificulty mod]
00:43:917 (1,2,3,4) - you probably hate me for suggesting this fixed actually lol

SPOILER

01:06:374 (3,4,5,6,7) - try curving it a bit more so it will blanket around the 01:06:203 (2) - ITS AN ANGLE NOT A CURVE
02:11:003 (1,2) - i think a couple jumps here could def emphasize this part here = o = sure
05:25:832 (4,5) - unsure if too high lowered a bit

sory im not good enough modder to mod pro mappie ; w ;

Sonnyc wrote:

00:53:089 - 00:53:432 - I feel strong beats here. Fine if you want to stick to the vocals, but not expressing this characteristic beat was a little empty. I don't know, they sound a little off, more like a woosh sound effect that was added to make it sound more filled in, I feel like following the vocals like in all the slower parts works best
01:46:232 (3) - This is the only huge 1/4 note jump in this map, and considering your overall pattern usage and the song, this jump really didn't fit. Just removing this would work better. oops I removed the other ones I had like this earlier lol, fixed
02:57:803 (7) - 03:00:546 (6) - 03:03:289 (7) - 03:06:032 (4) - 03:08:774 (7) - 03:11:517 (6) - 03:14:260 (7) - etc - This finish doesn't fits nicely imo along the heavy beat. I really like the way it adds on to the song tho :c did this for all the kiai parts
03:58:660 (3) - I definitely believe adding a new combo follows your combo cycle. Yes, fixed
04:53:517 (1,2) - 04:54:032 (3,4) - Using a same 1/4 spacing would be better in visual consistency. Fixed

Irreversible wrote:

Nice map. We've changed some hitsound patterns to emphasize the song even better. Additionally, 2 patterns were adjusted to improve the gameplay.

#2

Stjpa wrote:

changed two patterns

2016-11-17 22:58 Stjpa: do u have metadata proof available
2016-11-17 22:58 Stjpa: i know that fox stevenson is his new name, but still need proof u can use that song with that name
2016-11-17 22:58 Stjpa: because fuck rules
2016-11-17 22:59 Kyshiro: it's directly downloaded from his soundcloud
2016-11-17 22:59 Kyshiro: lemme find
2016-11-17 22:59 Kyshiro: https://soundcloud.com/foxstevenson/stan-sb-let-this-go
2016-11-17 22:59 Stjpa: alright
2016-11-17 23:06 Stjpa: 02:06:546 (3,4,5,6,7) - this pattern really bothers me
2016-11-17 23:06 Stjpa: like, u had pretty good flow and normal curved 5plets all the time
2016-11-17 23:06 Stjpa: and even the 1/2 slider + doublet patterns were really normal
2016-11-17 23:07 Stjpa: but this one doesnt really fit into ur concept
2016-11-17 23:07 Kyshiro: hmm
2016-11-17 23:07 Kyshiro: i think this is the only time i did 1/2slider>5note stream
2016-11-17 23:07 Kyshiro: is it not
2016-11-17 23:07 Kyshiro: i'll change slider into circle then
2016-11-17 23:09 Kyshiro: okay fixed
2016-11-17 23:09 Stjpa: 02:13:403 (2,3,4,5) - idk if its just my reading but i can imagine people misreading it being ctrl g'd because the triplet is showing straight to the circle
2016-11-17 23:09 Stjpa: so do u mind moving it to the right slightly or smth?
2016-11-17 23:09 Kyshiro: well it's pointed straight towards the circle on purpose
2016-11-17 23:09 Kyshiro: but i dont think this will be a reading issue
2016-11-17 23:10 Stjpa: hm ok
2016-11-17 23:10 Kyshiro: at least havent seen anyone having trouble with that particular tripple so far
2016-11-17 23:10 Kyshiro: and had a lot of testplayers
2016-11-17 23:12 Stjpa: 02:16:146 (3,4,5) - is there a specific reason this is the only different pattern to this rhythm? dont have the time to check every other similar rhythm perfectly but they sound quite similar still
2016-11-17 23:13 Kyshiro: well it follows the music, it's a bit different here
2016-11-17 23:13 Kyshiro: i believe i did this a few times throughout the map tho
2016-11-17 23:13 Kyshiro: if not this, it would be doubles, and i know everyone hates that shit lol
2016-11-17 23:13 Stjpa: well im not through the whole map yet
2016-11-17 23:13 Kyshiro: im preeeettttyy sure it happens at least once more in the song
2016-11-17 23:14 Kyshiro: 03:05:517 (2) - there we go
2016-11-17 23:16 Stjpa: 02:42:889 (3,4) - would probably be better to use a 3/4 slider on the downbeat, rn u ignore the stronger vocal on the repeat which feels odd because u tried to emphasize the vocals as good as possible before
2016-11-17 23:17 Kyshiro: uhh
2016-11-17 23:17 Kyshiro: i dont hear 3/4 at all in here
2016-11-17 23:17 Kyshiro: where?
2016-11-17 23:17 Stjpa: oh my bad lol
2016-11-17 23:18 Kyshiro: well i do ignore the stronger vocal though
2016-11-17 23:18 Stjpa: http://hanatan.s-ul.eu/d7djEylp this sounds better to me
2016-11-17 23:18 Kyshiro: yeah
2016-11-17 23:18 Kyshiro: instead of that longer slider im doing 2x 1/1 though
2016-11-17 23:19 Kyshiro: basically the same, but following the rhythm i did before it
2016-11-17 23:19 Kyshiro: actually no, the longer slider works lol
2016-11-17 23:20 Stjpa: kek
2016-11-17 23:24 Stjpa: map seems fine else
2016-11-17 23:24 Kyshiro: cool, updating

Surono wrote:

stan sb song <3

_orange wrote:

omg when did you rank this....

I thought you were inactive since megalovania was ranked D:

Kyshiro wrote:

_orange wrote:

omg when did you rank this....

I thought you were inactive since megalovania was ranked D:

I am now though lol