1. Easy Page (1,35 stars, 240 notes)
2. Hard Page (2,49 stars, 450 notes)
3. Love Page (2,86 stars, 559 notes)

[K]-Nightman wrote:

Hello. My first modding, so the tips can be wrong. I hope I will be able to help


01:38:269 (1,2,3) - Music is very difficult goes to the beat, it is very difficult to get to 300, may be hanged to Sliders.
03:36:892 (1) - delete, this easy difficulty.
03:49:596 (1,2,3) - Move to was symmetrically and smoothly
04:34:596 (1) - long break for this - delete
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00:46:841 (1) - new combo
01:43:779 (1,2,3) - common combo
03:36:739 (1,2) - delete, Not included in the rhythm and very unexpected
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02:27:249 (1) - new combo
02:36:739 (1) - new combo
02:57:861 (1) - new combo
03:02:759 (1) - new combo
e.t.c (too long combos, because of which the life of the strip can not be recovered in this period)
P.S you can not change, but the rhythm will look better if you change

04:34:596 (1) - delete or move to the beginning
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P.S If you want, you can help my map
P.P.S. Sorry for my English, google translate helped me

SPOILER

https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/325831/

Thanks a bunch for your mod!

General

Diff. specific mod

[Sc4v4ng3r] wrote:

Hello~ modding from our queue~

General

1. Combo colours can't be all the same. Better set it up, and make sure the colours aren't matching with the background.
2. Uncheck Widescreen support option in the song setup menu. Usually only used when storyboards are present.
3. Where is your tags :/

Diff. specific mod

Easy Page

Erm... It shows me 1.5x distance spacing when most of the notes are 1.3x distance spacing? Try to keep it constant for easy. Since the song is slow, use 1.3x distance spacing. Better fix up your pattern now~ (Just don't change the distance spacing for easy. Use the same distance spacing for the whole map.) I assume you will use 1.3x distance spacing, and I'm leaving out some of the notes which aren't placed in the right distance.
00:21:739 (3,4) - Distance isn't equal, which is essential for easy difficulties.
00:22:351 (4,1) - ^^
00:24:800 (2,3) - Flow seems bit awkward, (3) is having a sharp curve. Curve them so that the sliders are 'rotating' like a circle. Also, distance again isn't equal.
00:34:596 (5) - New combo here. It is inconsistent if you don't add it here.
00:37:045 (1) - Remove new combo. Again for consistency.
00:39:494 (3) - New combo.
01:05:820 (4) - Curve this slider.
01:11:024 (4) - There should be a new combo here.
01:20:208 (3) - Remove this note. I don't prefer you to have 01:19:902 (2,3,4) - patterns in easy.
01:20:820 (5) - New combo here maybe. The combo is getting too long.
01:30:616 (3) - Again, remove this note.
01:31:534 (5) - Add new combo, as the third kiai time has a new combo in a similar part.
01:20:820 (5) - ^^
01:52:963 - There is a strong piano sound here... and I think there should be a 'clickable' note here, not a slider end. so 01:52:351 (5) can be a circle, and start the slider at 01:52:963. Also, if you are going to do this, add a new combo here.
01:57:861 - ^^ instead use 2 circles. Toggle new combo at 01:57:861.
02:00:310 (1) - Remove new combo if you added suggestion right above.
02:02:759 (5) - Add new combo if added suggestion above.
02:26:636 (6) - Combo is getting too long. Add new combo.
02:31:228 (1) - New combo here if added suggestion above.
02:39:188 (4) - Again, don't prefer this here. Remove.
02:39:494 (5) - Add new combo, because third kiai time has a new combo in a similar part (mentioned above)
02:49:290 (4) - ^^
03:34:596 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern is way too long for easy. Beginners can't get pass this without missing at least 1. Remove some notes that are at the red tick on the timeline.
03:37:045 (1) - Remove new combo here if added suggestion above.
03:44:698 (5) - Remove note.
03:47:759 (3) - ^^
03:49:596 (1) - Remove new combo if made changes at above point.
04:07:657 (4) - New combo.
You will need to figure out the distance spacing problems yourself, as pointing ALL OF THEM out will take very long ;-;
Map doesn't lose out much even though if you set the approach rate to 3.

Hard Page

If added the approach rate suggestion in Easy, then set this to 6. Makes constitency. Also, there is some 'sudden' jumps, which are not really recommended for Hard difficulty. Like I said above, use the same distance spacing, and I prefer you to NOT MAKE JUMPS BETWEEN 1/2 SPACES. (e.g.00:40:106 (4,5) - Even though the jump is minor, it is still very effective on gameplay.)
00:15:004 (2,3) - Blanket should be improved.
00:22:351 (1,2) - Could be a blanket : http://puu.sh/hO2gq/6f9866023e.jpg
00:28:473 (1,1,1,1) - Looks fancy... I know... but don't mash up so many new combos like this :/
00:33:371 (2,3) - Why is the distance suddenly getting shorter?
01:19:290 (1,1) - Toggling new combos like this isn't recommended.
01:26:330 - 01:26:330 - There should be a break time. It gives unnecessary life drain.
01:36:432 - 01:38:269 - ^^
01:48:677 (7) - Curve this slider so that 01:49:290 (8) won't be curved too much.
02:10:106 (3,4,5) - Distance again getting too short.
02:37:657 (1,1) - New combos like this again. Toggle the first one off.
02:44:392 - 02:47:453 - Add in break time.
02:54:188 - 02:56:636 - ^^
03:12:249 (4,5) - Distance is getting short yet again.
03:26:024 (2,3,4) - ^^
03:36:892 (1) - Remove this note.
03:43:167 (1,2,3) - This stack is a trap. Consider unstacking these.
03:55:412 (1,1,1) - Again, new combos like this aren't recommended.
04:03:371 - 04:05:208 - Break time.
04:08:575 (7,8) - Blanket these notes.
Just keep in mind: Don't overuse new combos. For Hard difficulty, give break time where applicable. Don't make unnecessary jumps. It makes the beatmap look very ugly.

Don't really have time for Insane. Just keep in mind that, only make jumps when it can be played with no flaws. Just like hard, don't overuse new combos, and make sure to add some break time if applicable.

You will need lots of work for this map. I'm sure you can make this into a great map. GL

[-Deemo-] wrote:

You got priority cuz I decide whatever happens in my queue lol

[General]
It's like a huge no-no to be starting at different times for different difficulties, you need to make either the other difficulties shorter or make easy longer.
Also the same for the end, there's no reason for the different difficulties to end at different places.
"The difficulties in the mapset must be in a consecutive order. Easy or Normal can be skipped if the gap in the star rating spread allows it" The difficulties aren't very consecutive since it just goes from Easy (~1.3 or 1.4 if you round up) to Hard (about a 1 star gap) into the "Insane" (Like ~.3 gap between). I'm pretty sure you can re-name insane since insane implies 3.75 - 5.25.
Hitsounds (The hard difficulty had it) Didn't read the little post lol mb

[Easy]
I suggest moving the slider that is at 00:54:188 (1) - to end at 00:56:636 because of the fact that you need to "Leave plenty of recovery time, especially after spinner" for easy
It doesn't have much hitsounds :l

[Hard]
01:24:494 (1) - Suggestion to move the slider end to 01:26:636 because ending it not on a white mark doesn't make too much sense and I think this is a more appropriate end
01:24:494 (1) - Suggestion to move slider to end at 02:54:800
It can probably be quieter at the end

[Insane]
You can barely hear the hitsounds once the vocals start, try making it just a little bit louder
Need to end in same place
Needs hitsounds
Needs a spinner "Try to have at least one spinner in each difficulty to create variety in the map and fluctuation among scores." Even thought the guidelines later states that it does not need to have one, a spinner can probably fit in where you were putting spinners around before

Hope this mod helps, I'm kinda trying to do this before I take a break from modding today so yeah. Some kinda wonky stuff in the map but overall, it shouldn't have much problems probably.

George wrote:

---Easy---
00:02:759 (2) - I'd make this a flipped copy of 00:00:310 (1) Fixed
00:29:698 (1,2,3) - I'd make it so the sliders make a circle around the circle in the middle Pic (Rough draft) Fixed
01:00:310 (1,2,3) - use DS to make the first circle be blanketed by the slider @ 00:58:779 (3) Fixed
01:04:596 (3) - make this slider blanket the tail of 01:02:759 (1) Fixed
01:16:841 (3) - make this a copy of 01:14:392 (1) that makes one of those circle blankets around the center circle Fixed
01:29:698 (2) - Make this blanket the end of 01:28:473 (1) Fixed
02:05:208 (3) - I would move this right to help the flow, as well it would "blanket" 02:02:759 (1) Fixed
02:07:045 (1) - I would move this down and move 02:07:657 (2) up, but when you move it up also make it less curved so it blankets correctly Fixed
02:35:820 (5) - blanket 02:34:290 (4) Fixed

I'm only gonna mod 1 diff since I need to start working on the GD, sorry

1. 00:08:269 (5) - ctrl + G
2. 00:52:963 (4) - i would place a note before this (1/4 spacing)
3. 00:54:188 (1) - Consider mapping these to the vocals
4. 02:00:922 (9) - no repeat, but followed by 2 1/4 notes ?
5. 02:26:024 (1) - I like that, maybe use it in similar situations prior ?
6. 03:12:861 (2) - This jump is way too far for a 3 star map
7. 04:02:759 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Thats some hard spacing here
   
8. If you intend to use blankets in this map, you would have to rework almost every slider
9. I would consider the necessity of kiai time

Asonate wrote:

Here is my mod

[Love Page]

1. 00:08:269 (5) - ctrl + G Fixed!
2. 00:52:963 (4) - i would place a note before this (1/4 spacing) Fixed!
3. 00:54:188 (1) - Consider mapping these to the vocals Will consider it
4. 02:00:922 (9) - no repeat, but followed by 2 1/4 notes ? Will consider it
5. 02:26:024 (1) - I like that, maybe use it in similar situations prior ? Fixed!
6. 03:12:861 (2) - This jump is way too far for a 3 star map Fixed!
7. 04:02:759 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Thats some hard spacing here Fixed!
   
8. If you intend to use blankets in this map, you would have to rework almost every slider Oh, well, I see Will fix it soon!
9. I would consider the necessity of kiai time I know, there is too much kiai time, but I have no idea where to remove it

Thats it, hope it helps
Sorry for not modding more, but this song is way to calm for my taste, so I decided to only look into one Diff
Even though, if you have questions about my mod, feel free to PM me ingame
Good luck !

Loony wrote:

Asonate wrote:

Here is my mod

[Love Page]

1. 00:08:269 (5) - ctrl + G Fixed!
2. 00:52:963 (4) - i would place a note before this (1/4 spacing) Fixed!
3. 00:54:188 (1) - Consider mapping these to the vocals Will consider it
4. 02:00:922 (9) - no repeat, but followed by 2 1/4 notes ? Will consider it
5. 02:26:024 (1) - I like that, maybe use it in similar situations prior ? Fixed!
6. 03:12:861 (2) - This jump is way too far for a 3 star map Fixed!
7. 04:02:759 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Thats some hard spacing here Fixed!
   
8. If you intend to use blankets in this map, you would have to rework almost every slider Oh, well, I see Will fix it soon!
9. I would consider the necessity of kiai time I know, there is too much kiai time, but I have no idea where to remove it

Thats it, hope it helps
Sorry for not modding more, but this song is way to calm for my taste, so I decided to only look into one Diff
Even though, if you have questions about my mod, feel free to PM me ingame
Good luck !

Thanks you heaven knows why for modding this diff! It was very helpful

UchiganeNiigata wrote:

Hello again!

*I modded this without the 5/26/15 update*

Overall:
- Could use more Finishes during the kiai times Will fix it
- The song is quite long and could use slightly longer breaks, but since it's slow enough you don't really have to put more breaks in, it's up to you I could make some breaks, especially in Love Page diff, but need to consider their placement.

Easy Page
(I'm not used to easy diffs, So I can't do too much here)

General Things:
- You could use Finish more often during the kiai sections

01:26:636 - End kiai here and start again at 01:28:473 Fixed!
01:36:432 - End kiai here Fixed!
02:45:616 - End kiai here and start again at 02:46:840 Fixed!
03:22:963 - Fix the blanket here Fixed!
03:37:044 - Fix the blanket here too Fixed!
04:03:983 - End kiai here and start again at 04:05:207 Fixed!
04:13:167 - End kiai here Fixed!

Hard Page

General Things:
- Blankets need some slight fixing, some of them are a bit out of position

00:01:534 - Blanket issue (move slider 3 down a bit more) Fixed!
00:05:361 - More blanket stuff (slider 2) Fixed!
00:18:371 - Blanket (slider 7 down a bit) Fixed!
01:26:636 - How come there is a break here, but no break on the easy? Oh, I really forgot to add breaks in easy at the same moments, I will add them there
02:44:392 - Again the break
03:07:351 - This part may be a little hard to read, but it is probably slow enough to be readable I think it's good as it is, but thanks!
04:03:371 - There is no break here, but there is for the previous 2 sections Fixed!

Love Page

General Things:
- If you were intending to make blankets then there are a lot of areas to fix Hah, I know, I need to find some time for this

01:47:758 - Spacing might a bit too much here Fixed!
02:25:258 - Again spacing Fixed!
03:08:575 - Inconsistent spacing Fixed!
03:12:861 - Inconsistent spacing Which notes? Idk what to fix
03:25:105 - Inconsistent spacing Fixed!
04:02:758 -- 04:04:901 - Spacing might be a bit too much, but since it's consistent it could probably work
04:37:044 - End it with a Finish Fixed!


A nice slow map with pretty nice overall quality, but the kiai time could become a slight issue. And, as stated above I did mod this before the 5/26/15 update, so if you already made changes in the above areas then feel free to ignore those parts.
Good luck with it!

DahplA wrote:

Hi, DahplA here posting from Jloughman14's and DahplA's Modding team. This is a response in regards to this request. Please be sure to vote here on how helpful our mod was.

General

1. Ctrl+Shift+A, just some general kiai snappings
2. Make sure to add combo colours
3. The difficulty spread is questionable. The gap from 1st to 2nd difficulty is quite high, whilst 2nd to 3rd is low. If you add this planned Normal difficulty, this shouldn't be a problem

Love Page

1. 00:01:534 (3) - The positioning here is kind of awkward. It overlaps 1 and should also blanket 2 Fixed
2. 00:02:453 (1) - Remove this slider and instead add two circles. Generally, you don't want a sliderend to sit on a downbeat Fixed
3. 00:03:371 (3,4,5) - Hear how it doesn't really match up with the instrumentals here? Move the sliders back onto white ticks (general rule) Nope, I think it's okay as it is.
4. 00:10:106 (1,3) - I think these two are too close to each other Fixed
5. 00:13:167 (4,5) - Blanket Fixed
6. 00:14:392 (1,3) - ^ Fixed
7. 00:19:902 (1,2) - I feel these two slider are much too similar. Change it up Fixed
8. 00:21:738 (4) - This overlap is clunky. Fix Fixed
9. 00:51:126 (1) - Fix this so it's even spacing What do you mean?
10. I feel that Kiai should instead start 00:59:085 here. Not entirely sure about this, because the previous bit sounds like a build up. Or another Kiai suggestion is you start here instead 01:18:677 Need to consider it, cause there's too much kiai time in this mapset.
11. 01:26:330 (4) - Fix overlap Fixed
12. 02:02:452 Add a note? Fixed
13. 02:18:524 (7) - Remove, no sound There's a sound, I think.
14. 02:21:126 (5) - Stack Fixed
15. 03:07:963 (2,4) - Maybe not so close? Fixed
16. 03:09:494 (7) - Fix S curve Fixed
17. 03:57:249 (4,1,2) - I think you need some added variation here Fixed

Hard Page

1. 00:02:759 (2) - Not a fan of this overlap here Fixed
2. The hitsounds are not consistent in this difficulty compared to Love Page Will fix that
3. 00:17:453 (5) - NC Fixed
4. 00:34:596 (1) - Blanket Fixed
5. 01:26:636 Why is there Kiai in break? Fix all of these Fixed
6. 01:41:330 (2,3) - I think you should instead Ctrl+G the middle one Fixed
7. 02:46:841 Add a note Fixed
8. 02:56:636 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Sliders?I think these notes can stay, for mor variety.

Easy Page

1. Only general things to say about this difficulty. Firstly you need to fix your distance spacing. Fixed It needs to be consistent throughout the whole entire difficulty. Secondly, fix up your NCs. Example, 00:00:310 (1,1) - Fixed Third, why are the Kiais different in this difficulty from the Love Page difficulty. What exactly do you mean?Also you should remove these confusing slider shapes like 00:34:596 (1) - 00:34:596 (1) - because they may be hard to read for newer players. Fixed

Still work needs to be done. Hopefully it gets done soon. Good luck

W końcu dotarłem ze swojego queue, wybacz że tyle czasu mi to zajęło, po prostu lekki zapiernicz w życiu codziennym

1. 00:13:167 (7,1) - Mały overlap, wypadałoby poprawić
2. 00:16:841 (4,3) - To samo, ale chyba można to przeboleć, w każdym razie ja bym poprawił.
3. 00:20:208 (2,4) - ^
4. 00:52:657 - Wstawiłbym tu kółeczko gdzieś pomiędzy te dwa slidery
5. 00:54:188 (1) - Za krótka przerwa miedzy końcem spinnera, a pierwszą notką jak na Harda, przenieś koniec slidera do 00:54:188 (1) -
6. 00:58:167 (3,6) - Overlap
7. 01:00:617 (2,5) - ^
8. 01:01:534 (5,1) - ^ ło matko
9. 01:14:698 (6) - Zrobiłym tutaj Ctrl + G dla polepszenia patternu
10. 01:41:943 (3) - ^
11. 01:43:167 (6,2) - Znów troszkę overlap
12. 01:45:922 (2,3) - Można polepszyć ten pattern na przykłąd w ten sposób: http://puu.sh/jdKoP/c78ad2441e.jpg
13. 01:59:698 (6) - NC
14. 02:04:596 (6) - NC, Ctrl + Shift + R, zaznacz Selection Centre i obróć o -5 stopni dla polepszenia blankety, taka pierdoła
15. 02:12:555 (1) - Znów spinner, po prostu skróc do bialego ticku
16. 02:17:147 (5,3) - Brzydki overlap
17. 02:18:371 (1,5) - ^
18. 02:23:269 (6,9,10) - ^
19. 02:57:555 (4,1) - Dziwny jump, przez cały diff nie było takiego DS, nie pasuje :v
20. 03:03:983 (5) - Ctrl + G
21. 03:11:330 (1,5) - Overlap
22. 03:11:636 (2,6) - ^
23. 03:14:392 (8,5) - ^
24. 03:27:249 (4) - Ctrl + G
25. 03:52:657 (6) - NC
26. 03:55:412 (3) - Usuń NC

1. 00:07:045 (1,5) - Znów niepotrzebny overlap
2. 01:00:310 (3,7) - ^
3. 01:31:841 (2,5) - ^
4. 01:42:249 (5,8) - ^
5. 01:42:555 (6) - NC
6. 01:44:392 (9,1) - Overlap
7. 01:47:759 (5,7) - ^
8. 01:51:126 (2,5) - ^
9. 01:55:412 (7) - NC
10. 01:58:473 (3,6) - Overlap
11. 02:00:310 (7) - NC
12. 02:02:146 (5) - NC
13. 02:02:759 (1) - Usuń NC
14. 02:05:820 (3,5) - Overlap
15. 02:07:045 (6) - NC
16. 02:09:494 (1) - NC
17. 02:09:799 - Tu bym wstawił circle
18. 02:10:106 (1) - Usuń NC
19. 02:11:943 (4,2) - Overlap
20. 02:12:249 (5,3) - ^
21. 02:16:228 (1,5) - ^
22. 02:18:371 (6) - NC, poza tym troche dziwny ten triple, w sensie przez cały mapset nic takiego nie było, rozpraszające.
23. 02:19:901 (1) - Usuń NC
24. 02:21:126 (10) - NC
25. 02:26:024 (1,2,3) - Znów, przez cały diff nic takiego nie było, takie nagłe przyśpieszanie jest nieprzyjemne, jak już chcesz coś takiego stosować, rób to od samego początku, wtedy gracz jest gotowy na to że cośtakiego może się stać.
26. 02:26:024 (1,1) - Overlap
27. 02:26:943 (4,2) - ^
28. 02:29:085 (3,1) - ^
29. 02:29:392 (4,5,2) - ^ ło matko x2
30. 02:39:800 (1,3) - ^
31. 03:03:677 (4,6,7) - ^
32. 03:11:943 (3,1) - ^
33. 03:16:841 (3,4,1,2) - ^
34. 03:19:290 (5) - Przesuń na x:64 y:200 i zobacz jak polepszył się cały blanket
35. 03:24:800 (3,1) - Overlap
36. 03:37:045 (8) - NC
37. 03:38:269 (1) - Usuń NC
38. 03:39:493 (7) - NC
39. 04:11:943 (5,6) - Overlap
40. 04:15:922 (1,3) - ^ ło matko x3 i mam nadzieje że po raz ostatni D: