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2. Longing for the sky (6,78 stars, 1201 notes)

Bewww wrote:

INSANE
General problem: why you us different rhythm for repeating parts? it confused and dont fits the map you can do rhythm harder just if it good for song andyou have a reason.

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00:00:683 - 00:00:853 - why you miss hitcircles?
00:02:217 - same ^
00:02:387 - do stream till the sldier 00:02:899 (1) -
Think you shoudl do same rhythm till the reapeating parts end, ofc you shoudl just space it different
00:02:899 - remap cause different rhythm dont fit the music , till 00:19:262 -
00:19:262 - place something like longsldier https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3132772
00:29:149 - why yous top mapping piano? hitcircle ?
00:29:490 - same ^
00:30:172 (3) - should place slider if you wanna fit Organ part
00:31:535 - again miss piano hitcircle why?
00:32:558 - same ^
00:32:899 - till 00:54:717 - why you map piano instead of lyric part?
00:54:717 - seems different cause you start to map lyric or something .
00:57:274 (1,2) - this sldiers fits?( try dont place sliders on red tic, jsut if it fits with song.
01:00:001 (6) - same should be hitcircle on red tick and slider start from 01:00:172 - (if you map the lyric part, if not it still feel different)
01:01:535 (2) - again move it on 01:01:876 -
01:01:706 (3) - same moveit on 01:01:535 -
01:02:728 (8) - you need hitcircle on red instead of slider.
01:03:069 (1) - move it on wight tic here 01:02:899 -
01:03:240 - hitcircle
01:04:092 (6) - need hicircle on red tick and move sldier on wight tic here 01:04:092 (6) -
01:04:433 (7) - no need cause it shoudl be end of sldier ^
01:05:456 (5) - and his is good slider cause fit thr lyric.( mb should end here 01:05:967 - )
01:05:967 (6,7) - dont fits with music remap this.
01:08:012 (7,1,2) - ^. cantundestand which part you try mapped here, no complies with piano or lyric .
01:07:927 - till 01:16:365 - remap pls this jumps goods but not feel with song rhythm.
01:18:922 (12) - end of sldier should be here 01:19:092 -
01:19:262 - you hould start place slider or hitcircles here cause words start here.
01:20:797 (3) - should start on wight tic.
01:21:819 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - cant said what but something feel wrong here. sry for no point here.
01:24:547 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - what you map here?too much differnet lwith lyric
till the 01:38:183 - i cant give any tips or solution.
01:46:365 (5,6) - Exchanging 6 with 5
01:47:387 (4) - should start with wight tic cause lyric here 01:47:558 -
01:47:728 (5) - same ^ 01:47:899 -
01:48:581 (5) - you should delet this and place this slder head 01:48:751 (1) -
01:48:922 - hitcirlce here or end of this sldier 01:48:581 (1) - cause he was moved ^
01:54:887 - hitcircle here to do tripet till next slider.
01:54:973 - same ^
01:57:615 - ^
01:57:700 - ^
02:02:558 (8) - you should start stream here cause lyric. till 02:02:899 - here you shoudl have hitcircle or better sldierl, acuse this is same part like at start of song. this shoudl seems
02:04:092 - dont miss hitcircles!
02:05:456 - ^
02:06:819 - ^
02:08:524 - ^
02:09:547 - ^
02:10:919 - ^
02:12:274 - ^
02:13:637 - ^
02:13:808 - dont wanna place it nymore you should improve rhtyhm of al of this part place stream where they ned no where you want. and dont miss hitcircles. till 02:23:353 - slider here seems and feels right same as next hitcircles
02:25:910 (1) - sldier head shoudl start from wight tic 02:26:081 -
02:26:251 (2) - move it on 02:25:910 -
02:27:103 (8) - slider is much better
02:28:467 (7) - i feel should be same ^
02:28:808 - til 02:39:717 - should be remaped cause rhythm too different and dont fits. Its not bad if you do a bit repeating part with different spacing.
02:41:933 (5) - move it on 02:42:103 - and place hitcircle on red tic 02:41:933 -
02:43:297 (6) - delet and place 2 hitcircles or move it on 02:43:467 - and place hitcircle on red tic 02:43:297 -
02:43:808 (1) - and againyou shoudl star here you slider 02:43:978 (2) -. and place this hitcircle on 02:44:149 -
02:45:001 - stop miss hitcircles, music is not silence "she" still "run" you should miss single hitcircles or dont place them here cause it your wish.
02:45:853 - move it closer to slider and place hitcircle here 02:45:939 - . triplet fits with this music part
02:48:751 (7) - slider head should start from WIGHT tic. here 02:48:922 - . and place hitcircle here 02:48:751 - cause you move sldier.
02:51:819 - you miss hitcircle.
02:51:990 (1,2) - again move slider on wight tic and hitcircle here 02:52:331 -
02:52:842 (6,1) - sldier on 02:53:012 - .hitcircle on 02:52:842 -
02:54:887 - miss hitcircle
02:55:910 - ^
02:56:933 (8) - shoudl be here 02:57:103 -
02:56:933 - shoudl place hitcircle cause ^
03:01:365 (6,7) - move both on wight tic! >> and place replace hitcircles where it need after move! dont miss red tics.
03:02:728 - hitcircle! lyric start from red tic!
03:03:751 (6,7,1,2,1,2,3) - wrong rhythm do something.
03:10:910 - miss hitcircle
03:12:956 (6,7) - move sldier heads on wight tic >> and place replace hitcircles where it need after move! dont miss red tics.
03:14:149 (1,2) - slider on wight here 03:14:149 - . hitcircle here 03:14:490 -
03:16:706 - miss hitcircle
03:18:751 - ^
03:19:433 (3,4) - why you stuck it with sldie end?
03:19:774 (5) - should be here 03:19:944 -
03:20:115 (6) - ^ 03:19:774 -
03:20:456 (1,2,3,4) - move on wight tic >>
03:22:160 - miss hitcircle
03:24:547 (3,4) - slider on 03:24:717 - .hitcircle on 03:24:547 -
03:25:058 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - wrong rhythm remap pls
03:29:660 - should start do stream till 03:30:086 - .
03:29:831 (10) - should start from 03:30:172 -

Next part is repeating i hope you undestandt what you should to do.

03:51:990 - good rhythm here it feel and seem good with missed hitcircles you can practice with and without here, but still check your sliders 75-100% there heads should start from wight tic . and sometime you should dont miss hitcircles when music "run unstopable"

04:06:990 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4) - good part
but miss hitcircles at end is not good(just my point.
how i feel end part

I hope i help you immprove your rhythm.

1. Remove everything from tags except: dnb and drum n bass. Having tags such as ar 9, streams, jumps, etc are usually not put in tags. Also, one could find any ar 9 beatmap by simply typing in "ar=9" on the beatmap search bar. I suggest you put this as a tag: el poco maro, remix
2. El Poco Maro Remix in the title should be in parenthesis.
3. Uncheck 'Enable Countdown' from the design tab of the song section tab.
4. Find a better background image. Although, your bg is 1365x768 (which is already near the standard bg of a map, 1366x768), your background is widescreen. It should fit the whole entire screen.
5. CTRL+A - and look at how much unused space you have. It's really clumped up and I suggest you spread them out even more. You can have notes that go beyond the grid zone such as: 1 2 3
6. Generally in Drum and bass songs, very rarely is there going to be something to map on the beats that you seem to be less ignoring, even if it means you're putting in a filler note, it makes the song more enjoyable to play without all the pauses, so please fill them ^^
7. Slider designs are key in making the map aesthetically pleasing to the eyes. Please redesign any slider that looks off to you because some are immediately noticeable.
8. Your spacing appears to be honestly random to me, you might have an idea of what you're mapping for, but it didn't come out the same to me. Consider changing some of the patterns in your map so spacing and flow is more consistent, especially towards to the slower parts of the song.
9. Slider tick rate should be 1. Having the slider tick rate at 2 is annoying (especially for this song) because it's loud and is really noticeable during the quiet parts of the song.
10. Vocal sliders need work mainly because they're cut off at super weird times of the map (rather, you could map the drums in the background if that'll work for you).
11. Toggle on kiai time from 01:16:876 (2) - up until to 01:38:353 -, kiai time from 01:41:081 (8) - up until to 02:00:172 (1) -, kiai from 03:08:353 (9) - to 03:27:444 (3) -, add last kiai section from 03:51:990 (4) - to 04:11:081 (3) - (For the most part, these are what caught me in wanting them to be in kiai time. If you disagree then feel free to adjust it.

1. 00:00:683 (2) - make this note more closer to 00:00:171 (1) - and then drag back 00:00:853 (3,4) - so the whole entire thing will look like this
2. 00:01:535 (1,2,3) - Fix the spacing between these notes so it's more shorter because it's the beginning part of the song (relatively relaxing) and you would've want awkward spacing to start off with. Consider this
3. 00:02:388 (5) - delete this and extend 00:02:047 (4) - to the next red tick. Then stack a note on 00:02:899 (1) - (my suggestion, you could add a note that is not a stack.)
4. 00:04:603 (5) - Delete this and replace this with 00:04:774 (6) - for better flow.
5. 00:05:115 (7,8,1,2,3) - Reduce spacing between and add a note between 8 and 1 because the drums are still continuing
6. 00:07:842 (6,1,2,3,4,5) - add a note between 6 and 1 because the drums^ Also, consider lowering the quint stream for better flow towards 00:08:865 (6) - .
7. 00:10:058 (2,3,4,5) - Reduce spacing because it is inconsistent with 00:11:081 (1,2) - as it is already much closer to 00:10:569 (5) -
8. 00:11:251 (2,3) - Reduce spacing. The following jumps are fine, I like them a lot ^^
9. 00:13:808 (9,1) - Add a note between because drums are still continuing. If you do that then reduce the space between them (suggestion - you can stack the added note on (1))
10. 00:22:331 (1,2,3,1,2) - You can have these notes much closer to each other because the song is extremely calmed down at this point.
11. 00:31:535 (5,6,7,8,1) - Reduce spacing because again, song is extremely calm at this point.
12. 00:35:285 (5,1) - The break in-between these two notes is unnecessary, as the slow instrument beats are still going. Remove the break and add more notes in between that are relatively closer to each other.
13. 00:38:012 (1,2,3) - Reduce spacing and then add more notes in-between 00:38:524 (4,1) -
14. 00:40:228 (2,3) - Add a note between these two and consider lowering 00:41:081 (3) - so the whole entire thing looks like this.
15. 00:41:081 (4,5) - Add a note in-between these two and bring them together closer.
16. 00:41:762 (5,1) - Add notes in-between as the slow instrument beats are still playing.
17. 00:44:319 (3,1) - ^
18. 00:46:024 (2) - This note placement is weird and doesn't look good being on the slider. I suggest you move it to the right of the slider start.
19. 00:46:194 (3,1) - Add notes in-between that are relatively closer to each other.
20. 00:48:751 (2,3) - Add a note in-between these two.
21. 00:54:717 (1) - up until to 01:16:876 (2) - Don't map every single cymbal here as it makes the map explode with objects and can cause confusion. Instead, make it gradual as it is indeed the section where it would lead up to the kiai time. I love the star and back and forth jumps, but please consider making them less distanced.
22. 01:25:058 (3,4,5,6,7) - and 01:37:160 (1,2,3,4,5) - Consider changing these stacked notes into something else as enough of them can cause trouble into differentiating between them and triplets.
23. 01:40:399 (7) - You can do better and have this slider design look more better and more intuitive.
24. 01:41:251 (9,10) - Fix the spacing here and make them more closer for better flow.
25. 01:48:240 (1,2,3,4,5) - This extremely stands out as it is completely different from the other quints you have had. Consider making them more linear.
26. 01:51:308 (8,1) - Blanket
27. 01:52:672 (5,1) - Add another stacked note between these two for a triple single-tap.
28. 01:56:081 (1,2) - ^
29. 01:58:637 (1,2) - ^
30. 02:19:944 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - The pause between each three notes are inconsistent with the flow following the previous notes. Please fix it by adding a note in-between or add sliders.
31. 02:36:649 (5,1) - Add a note in-between these so it looks like this for a better flow.
32. 02:49:262 (1,2,3) - This can cause confusion, I suggest moving this to a different location.
33. 02:50:967 (4) - Fix this slider.
34. 03:36:990 (1,2,3,4,5) - Consider changing this quint stack?
35. 03:55:569 (6,1) - Add a note in-between as the beat is still playing.
36. 04:02:899 (10,1) - This momentarily pause looks awkward. Add a note in-between.
37. 04:13:297 (4,5) - I suggest you delete these two and drag the following slider to the red tick where (4) was at and then add a note after it. After you do that, add a spinner that lasts from 04:13:808 (1) - to 04:16:194 -