forum

Mizuki Nana - VIRGIN CODE [Taiko]

posted
Total Posts
73
show more
JUDYDANNY
Overall improved a lot.
Makes much consistency than before , more Impacts and expression the quiet.

@to next BN
  1. If you're afraid of 1/3s, please suggest them. Currently 1/3 sounds not bad to me.
  2. If you feel the something about the serious issues, feel free to pop. But, if popped, please mod this too. Runa has already made a lot of changes. Please don't make to give up >_<
  3. This makes a lot of powerful and variations, I respect such a style. If you notice that still can enhance them, please suggest too!
#1 ReBubbled.

Good Luck ヾ(๑>◡<)ノ"
tasuke912
(=゚ω゚)ノ Hello.

[ General]
  1. 00:03:908 - Red line SE vol. should be 30% the same as Green.
  2. 00:07:021 (1) - too small SE vol. I highly recommend changing to 50% or higher. If you felt too big, you may solved it by changing to normal note.
  3. 00:25:417 - this green line should be moved to 00:25:629 -, since actually the sound volume is increased from next stream.
  4. 01:56:549 - 02:54:851 - this green line should be moved to 1/4 tick left. since if push note before green line, it sounds 80%.
  5. 02:23:011 - this green line should be moved to 1/4 tick right.
  6. 02:54:851 - this green line should be moved to 1/4 tick left.
  7. 04:27:681 - ^ move to 1/4 tick left.
  8. 04:42:681 - ^ 1/4 tick left.
  9. 04:52:587 - ^ 1/4 tick left.

  10. 05:24:426 (1) - SV should be 1.0x for avoiding overlap.
  11. from 05:31:926, check red lines "Omit first bar line". (without 05:33:895, since this first beat. also 05:32:226 is first beat, so add red line that is not checked "Omit first bar line" here)

[ Taiko New World]
  1. 00:52:587 (177,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this 2/3 pattern might be bit weird for patterns flow imo. maybe add d on 00:52:870, and k on 00:53:436 - to follow the drums for better consistency and flow? You look to follow the drums in this part.
  2. 01:34:332 (4) - I think k would be better pattern for connection with next finish.
  3. 01:45:228 (8,10,12) - add Finish these, for better consistency with 01:43:530 (11,1,2,5) -. this finisher pattern is not too hard.
  4. 01:48:483 (1) - Finsih for emphasis? just suggestion.
  5. 01:53:577 (35) - This sound is so strong, so Finish is better.

  6. 02:07:162 (115) - finish for better consistency with 02:06:030 (106) -. this sound is as strong as.
  7. 02:42:115 (1,5) - change to K-D, since (1) is higher pitch sound than (5).
  8. 02:44:804 (22) - D. similar reason as prev.
  9. 02:47:917 (10) - Finish for emphasis. This sound is not so strong, but it would work well.

  10. 03:23:719 (4,6,8) -, 03:24:709 (12,16) -, Finish.
  11. 01:53:577 (35) -, 03:32:068 (22) -, 03:34:332 (40) - Finsih.
  12. 03:41:124 (9) - Finish. for better consistency with 02:06:030 (106) -.
  13. 05:04:898 (39) -, 05:06:030 (48) -. ^
  14. 04:20:747 (21) - add Finsih to follow the cymbals.
  15. 02:15:653 (2) -, 03:50:747 (54) -, 05:14:521 (129) -, ^
  16. 04:55:276 (2,6) - add finish for better consistency with prev Finsih.
  17. 04:58:106 (26) - Finish?
You may call me back when you are done. :D
Topic Starter
Runa

tasuke912 wrote:

(=゚ω゚)ノ Hello. Hi (=゚ω゚)ノ

[ General]
  1. 00:03:908 - Red line SE vol. should be 30% the same as Green.
  2. 00:07:021 (1) - too small SE vol. I highly recommend changing to 50% or higher. If you felt too big, you may solved it by changing to normal note. oops, that's right. changed to 70%
  3. 00:25:417 - this green line should be moved to 00:25:629 -, since actually the sound volume is increased from next stream.
  4. 01:56:549 - 02:54:851 - this green line should be moved to 1/4 tick left. since if push note before green line, it sounds 80%.
    oh i didn't know that, thanks x.x
  5. 02:23:011 - this green line should be moved to 1/4 tick right.
  6. 02:54:851 - this green line should be moved to 1/4 tick left.
  7. 04:27:681 - ^ move to 1/4 tick left.
  8. 04:42:681 - ^ 1/4 tick left.
  9. 04:52:587 - ^ 1/4 tick left.
    All fixed!

  10. 05:24:426 (1) - SV should be 1.0x for avoiding overlap. already 1.0x?
  11. from 05:31:926, check red lines "Omit first bar line". (without 05:33:895, since this first beat. also 05:32:226 is first beat, so add red line that is not checked "Omit first bar line" here) For now, checked all, but umm.. you said all the red lines from 05:31:926 to check omit? or not check since 05:33:895.. Sorry to not understanding but i don't know function about this x.x

[ Taiko New World]
  1. 00:52:587 (177,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this 2/3 pattern might be bit weird for patterns flow imo. maybe add d on 00:52:870, and k on 00:53:436 - to follow the drums for better consistency and flow? You look to follow the drums in this part. fixed, so good~
  2. 01:34:332 (4) - I think k would be better pattern for connection with next finish. Fixed
  3. 01:45:228 (8,10,12) - add Finish these, for better consistency with 01:43:530 (11,1,2,5) -. this finisher pattern is not too hard. No change, 8 and 10 is less impact sound than before, and 12 ~ is : i'd not like to finishers on that flow, and 1/4 notes can cover these impact cuz they are not sooo strong sound.
  4. 01:48:483 (1) - Finsih for emphasis? just suggestion. no change for emphasis 01:49:474 (3) -
  5. 01:53:577 (35) - This sound is so strong, so Finish is better. no change, 01:52:587 (27) - is no finish, nearly more strong sound. and not seems so strong to me x.x

  6. 02:07:162 (115) finish for better consistency with 02:06:030 (106) -. this sound is as strong as. then, changed to normal that note(106). um.. i'd not like to finish these notes.
  7. 02:42:115 (1,5) - change to K-D, since (1) is higher pitch sound than (5). Changed
  8. 02:44:804 (22) - D. similar reason as prev. Changed
  9. 02:47:917 (10) - Finish for emphasis. This sound is not so strong, but it would work well. no change, i think it can express that drum sound without finisher.

  10. 03:23:719 (4,6,8) -, 03:24:709 (12,16) -, Finish. No change, same as 01:45:228 (8,10,12)
  11. 01:53:577 (35) -, 03:32:068 (22) -, 03:34:332 (40) - Finsih. no change
  12. 03:41:124 (9) - Finish. for better consistency with 02:06:030 (106) -.change to normal (106)
  13. 05:04:898 (39) -, 05:06:030 (48) -. ^ ^
  14. 04:20:747 (21) - add Finsih to follow the cymbals. no, this sound has not enough impact to finishers imo
  15. 02:15:653 (2) -, 03:50:747 (54) -, 05:14:521 (129) -, ^ ^
  16. 04:55:276 (2,6) - add finish for better consistency with prev Finsih. Fixed
  17. 04:58:106 (26) - Finish? No change
You may call me back when you are done. :D
I'm sorry for many reject finisher suggestions. maybe you have different finishers putting style with me, but I think it doesn't have problems about consistency and impact.
And pattern suggestions are so good!
Thanks for checking and modding!
tasuke912
  1. 05:32:226 -, 05:33:895 -, 05:35:978 -, Add red lines that are not checked "omit first bar line" for showing bar line.
  2. 02:00:370 - move this green line to 1/4 tick left?
And, please try making the smoother scroll changes by using green lines.some scroll changes are still so rough.
eg. 05:32:526 (21,22) - 05:33:160 (23,24,25,26) -
Topic Starter
Runa

tasuke912 wrote:

  1. 05:32:226 -, 05:33:895 -, 05:35:978 -, Add red lines that are not checked "omit first bar line" for showing bar line.
    Fixed
  2. 02:00:370 - move this green line to 1/4 tick left? Fixed
And, please try making the smoother scroll changes by using green lines.some scroll changes are still so rough.
eg. 05:32:526 (21,22) - 05:33:160 (23,24,25,26) - okay, reset green lines from 05:31:926 - , speed is overall a bit improved.
tasuke912
Final.
Patterns seem fine. and outro's scroll changes look better. nice~
  1. 05:24:426 (1) - oops, I wanted to say 1.1x. ;w;
  2. 03:04:757 - delete this line, or change to 0.95x and add 0.9x on 03:05:040 - for making the smoother scroll changes.
  3. 01:56:478 - change to 0.75x? same as 04:49:474.
  4. Try to set bg's coordinate.
    0,0,"258767.jpg",0,0 (.osu file.)
please call me back after that!
I will bubble#2. :D
Topic Starter
Runa

tasuke912 wrote:

Final.
Patterns seem fine. and outro's scroll changes look better. nice~
  1. 05:24:426 (1) - oops, I wanted to say 1.1x. ;w;
  2. 03:04:757 - delete this line, or change to 0.95x and add 0.9x on 03:05:040 - for making the smoother scroll changes.
  3. 01:56:478 - change to 0.75x? same as 04:49:474. All fixed!
  4. Try to set bg's coordinate.
    0,0,"258767.jpg",0,0 (.osu file.) Fixed. oh, that's good lol
please call me back after that!
I will bubble#2. :D ╭( ・ㅂ・)و
tasuke912
Bubbled! #2
Surono
Sorry double post, rip conection.. ~
Surono
hi, I'm here to pay the debt in the past~ *lol, hi again pro 3 mode, remember post preview mod? wwww*
this just suggestion (for hitsounding, not really mentioned patterns *I afraid if this will make destroy..*)

>Taiko New World
  1. 00:33:625 (57,58,59,60) - how about change to dkdk? is really fit to contrasting bcus 58 is kick drum
  2. 00:42:681 (119,120,121,122,123,124,125,126) - from here, you really fit with this dK? kD more fits because emphasized to kick drum ( 01:00:794 (28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35) - differents with this ) and clear to hear finisher *or if you not like D, you can keep K bcus you put power hitsound* 00:44:945 - and from here too
  3. 00:52:775 (1,2,3) - 00:52:775 (1,2,3) - dkk, and 00:53:341 (5,6,7) - dkd? flow is nice to hear imo
  4. 00:56:125 (4,5) - ctrl g? you can see 00:56:125 (4,5,6) - 5 and 6 is contrasting
  5. 00:59:662 - why this empty? you can put this with kat, for variety
  6. 01:00:936 - this similar with 01:00:511 - this, so want to change to D? 01:00:511 (28,30) - to be consistent and varies for 01:01:360 (32,34,36) - this
  7. 01:13:813 - want change this kat? vocal and kick drum is fit imo
  8. 01:14:945 - need adjusting to kat? vocal going to high and drum is correct
  9. 01:22:587 - kat? for drum and 01:22:587 (34,35) - this 2 piano pitch
  10. 01:23:577 (42,43) - ctrl g for rhytm balance?
  11. 01:43:035 - not put don again? bcus 01:42:964 - from this is area stream drum
  12. 01:54:851 - give finisher and 01:54:992 - delete this, 01:53:577 - like u did in here too.. for emphasized if u like
  13. 02:05:535 - delete, 02:05:606 (99,100,101,102,103) - kkddk, and 02:06:030 - finisher? for adjusting flow, and finisher for power
  14. 02:12:327 - not put don bcus flow stronk? and 02:14:591 - this too
  15. 03:35:110 - i think this overput on here.. delete?
  16. 04:51:455 - you cant ignore this bcus you like follow vocal, add don
I just mod this before get qualifying (and to helping improve emphasizing hitsounding and idk lol)
GLuck for Qualifying! :lol:
Topic Starter
Runa

Surono wrote:

hi, I'm here to pay the debt in the past~ *lol, hi again pro 3 mode, remember post preview mod? wwww* LoL
this just suggestion (for hitsounding, not really mentioned patterns *I afraid if this will make destroy..*)

>Taiko New World
  1. 00:33:625 (57,58,59,60) - how about change to dkdk? is really fit to contrasting bcus 58 is kick drum
    no change, these drum sounds are unclear and kddk feels good to me
  2. 00:42:681 (119,120,121,122,123,124,125,126) - from here, you really fit with this dK? kD more fits because emphasized to kick drum ( 01:00:794 (28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35) - differents with this ) and clear to hear finisher *or if you not like D, you can keep K bcus you put power hitsound* 00:44:945 - and from here too um.. that sounds not bad.. but sounds fine to me with normal hitsound now, and want to avoid big change.. sorry x.x
  3. 00:52:775 (1,2,3) - 00:52:775 (1,2,3) - dkk, and 00:53:341 (5,6,7) - dkd? flow is nice to hear imo no, at second triple, pitch is higher at 7 so k, and ddk-dkk for flow.
  4. 00:56:125 (4,5) - ctrl g? you can see 00:56:125 (4,5,6) - 5 and 6 is contrasting No, I followed guitar pitch and best for that now imo
  5. 00:59:662 - why this empty? you can put this with kat, for variety um.. i consider it, but maybe no change.
  6. 01:00:936 - this similar with 01:00:511 - this, so want to change to D? 01:00:511 (28,30) - to be consistent and varies for 01:01:360 (32,34,36) - this same as above
  7. 01:13:813 - want change this kat? vocal and kick drum is fit imo no change, It has a drum sound fit with kat but less than 01:13:955 (48) -, so no change for emphasize it
  8. 01:14:945 - need adjusting to kat? vocal going to high and drum is correct Changed
  9. 01:22:587 - kat? for drum and 01:22:587 (34,35) - this 2 piano pitch oh right, changed
  10. 01:23:577 (42,43) - ctrl g for rhytm balance? no change, not feels good to me
  11. 01:43:035 - not put don again? bcus 01:42:964 - from this is area stream drum no change, that drum sound is unclear and not strong.
  12. 01:54:851 - give finisher and 01:54:992 - delete this, 01:53:577 - like u did in here too.. for emphasized if u like ?.? no, so normal sound to put finisher
  13. 02:05:535 - delete, 02:05:606 (99,100,101,102,103) - kkddk, and 02:06:030 - finisher? for adjusting flow, and finisher for power no, i'd not like to reduce them and no reason for that, and it's lack impact to finisher to me
  14. 02:12:327 - not put don bcus flow stronk? and 02:14:591 - this too no, not exist any sound there
  15. 03:35:110 - i think this overput on here.. delete? no change x.X
  16. 04:51:455 - you cant ignore this bcus you like follow vocal, add don
no change, if i add that, i want to add some note on instrumental sounds in addition.. And at 04:51:455, vocal pitch is get lower but that's not new sound, just small vibration. so i can set no note there imo.

I just mod this before get qualifying (and to helping improve emphasizing hitsounding and idk lol)
GLuck for Qualifying! :lol:
Thanks for mod, you looks so nice lol

And sorry for many rejects, I want to avoid many pattern changes cuz it's already bubblex2
So I only changed sounds certainly good or feels needed.
x.X
Raiden
Hello o/ checking the bubbled map, sorry for huge delay but I was very busy (and I still am, but I suppose that if it's bubbled 2 it's already very good)

[Taiko New World]

that diff name lol

OD6?

00:33:625 (57,58,59,60) - This doesn't sound 1/3 to me, I'd make 00:33:719 (58,59) - a ddk with 00:33:908 (60) -
00:42:257 (117,118,119,120,121,122,123,124,125,126) - alternate d K and k D to emphasize different tones?
00:44:521 (131,132,133,134,135,136,137,138) - ^
00:52:870 (2,6) - The 1/3 would flow better if you removed these notes
01:01:643 (32,34) - k to both to emphasize higher tone than 01:00:794 (28,30) - ?
01:26:832 (62) - Remove and make 01:26:738 (61,63) - kats? That would fit the 1/3 muuuuch better
01:48:483 (1,2) - Add finisher?
02:34:120 - Can add a d, the melody is extended here
02:42:540 (5,9) - ctrl+g? Plays smoother if in between the ddd we have K instead of D, also the structure would look cooler
02:44:804 (22) - K for same reasons ^
03:53:082 (70) - Delete? It seems to overpower the song and lose the vocal emphasizing in 03:53:153 (70) -
05:11:195 (97) - k? Pattern seems a bit monotonous

Quite good map :3 poke me after you're done
Topic Starter
Runa

Raiden wrote:

Hello o/ checking the bubbled map, sorry for huge delay but I was very busy (and I still am, but I suppose that if it's bubbled 2 it's already very good) lol that's okay and thanks for come here despite of you have no slots :d

[Taiko New World]

that diff name lol lol

OD6?
: no, I want to 5.5 for this x.x
It's not so high level map and too stressful in calm part when od6

00:33:625 (57,58,59,60) - This doesn't sound 1/3 to me, I'd make 00:33:719 (58,59) - a ddk with 00:33:908 (60) - um.. but i can hear 1/3 drums there.. x.x
00:42:257 (117,118,119,120,121,122,123,124,125,126) - alternate d K and k D to emphasize different tones? You are saying change to d K k D d K k D like this, if that, i'm not gonna change. I want to emphasize powerful local sound there, not its tones.
00:44:521 (131,132,133,134,135,136,137,138) - ^ ^
00:52:870 (2,6) - The 1/3 would flow better if you removed these notes no change, i set note in the 1/3 of middles cuz pretty big drum sound is exist, and i like the flow now x.x
01:01:643 (32,34) - k to both to emphasize higher tone than 01:00:794 (28,30) - ? no change, that tone is higher but i want to give difference with after drum sound k.
01:26:832 (62) - Remove and make 01:26:738 (61,63) - kats? That would fit the 1/3 muuuuch better no change, big drum sound on 01:26:832 -
01:48:483 (1,2) - Add finisher? no change
02:34:120 - Can add a d, the melody is extended here fixed
02:42:540 (5,9) - ctrl+g? Plays smoother if in between the ddd we have K instead of D, also the structure would look cooler okay, changed that first note to K
02:44:804 (22) - K for same reasons ^ Changed
03:53:082 (70) - Delete? It seems to overpower the song and lose the vocal emphasizing in 03:53:153 (70) - no change, i think it's not overpower cuz dd is low and not have much power, and it feels good flow to me x.x
05:11:195 (97) - k? Pattern seems a bit monotonous fixed lol

Quite good map :3 WoW thanks~ :3
Thanks for modding !
and sorry for many rejecting, but most of them is i considered enough before and now, and i'm satisfying these part now.

Updated!
Raiden
The Background size is 960x768 ;w; try to find a 1366x768 one, or 1024x768, after I will flame :3
Topic Starter
Runa

Raiden wrote:

The Background size is 960x768 ;w; try to find a 1366x768 one, or 1024x768, after I will flame :3
changed to 1024x768!
Raiden
Alright, here we go!

Approved!
Charlotte
congratz Runa :)
Topic Starter
Runa
Wow Thanks!

FIRE!!
JUDYDANNY
Gratz Runa ヾ(๑>◡<)ノ"
Topic Starter
Runa

JUDYDANNY wrote:

Gratz Runa ヾ(๑>◡<)ノ"
Thanks~~ ヾ(๑>◡<)ノ" By your favor lol
Chiswell
why artist name and song name are in the tag??
Surono
Congraatsz!!1!! Sir Mastah
Akasha-
Why you added tags such like: virgin code nana mizuki which are already in artist / title? It's useless
But anyway, congratulations, this song is epic :D
Sanjenin Nagi
축하해양
Please sign in to reply.

New reply