General-
-Are the dots after "Lotus" really needed?
Normal+ -
01:01:529 (2,3,4) - the 1/1 1/2 1/1 pattern won't fit the music
01:02:215 (1) - ^
01:07:015 (1,2,3,4) - Use 1/3 here too
01:15:243 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/41557 do something like this (the timeline, not exactly THAT pattern)
And yeah, 1/2 won't work here, I'll stop pointing out the patterns
01:49:529 (3) - I'd move this a bit so it's not that hidden under (1) :/
02:17:643 - WTF? remove this fountain
02:22:557 (3) - Huh? move to 02:22:672 -
02:24:843 (2,3) - weird pattern, change it (and I mean (3))
02:26:100 (5) - Spacing
Othertwo diffs are ok. Ufo is awesome. I culd not catch anything else, but Normal needs a lot of work :/, get more mods for it
-Are the dots after "Lotus" really needed?
Normal+ -
01:01:529 (2,3,4) - the 1/1 1/2 1/1 pattern won't fit the music
01:02:215 (1) - ^
01:07:015 (1,2,3,4) - Use 1/3 here too
01:15:243 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/41557 do something like this (the timeline, not exactly THAT pattern)
And yeah, 1/2 won't work here, I'll stop pointing out the patterns
01:49:529 (3) - I'd move this a bit so it's not that hidden under (1) :/
02:17:643 - WTF? remove this fountain
02:22:557 (3) - Huh? move to 02:22:672 -
02:24:843 (2,3) - weird pattern, change it (and I mean (3))
02:26:100 (5) - Spacing
Othertwo diffs are ok. Ufo is awesome. I culd not catch anything else, but Normal needs a lot of work :/, get more mods for it