Yo Shana o/
M4M for
le FUNKAhonestly idk if you wanted me to mod 4k and I forgot to ask on PM, but I don't really mod 4k so I'll just mod 7k ayy
if I don't get too lazy this is how I mark stuff:
critical stuffvery important stuffimportant stuffnormal stuff
[General]
Metadata is correct
source:
https://remywiki.com/C18H27NO3diff settings look fine as well (I'd boost HP to 8,5 tbh, but your choice)
one thing that bugged me thoI totally assumed that's shana's 7k while actually it's kk's 7k. Add KK in diffname maybe? (KK's 7K Axities)
Columns: |1|2|3|4|5|6|7|
[that diffname I just mentioned]
holy shit I totally do not understand what that diffname means
also what the fuck is up with those chime hitsounds LOL
this sounds like me doing Caged Heart, it's so unfitting D:
00:26:779 (26779|6) -
Ctrl+H because of pitch00:30:565 - Missing 1/4 here, you've mapped it on 00:35:136 -
00:31:672 (31672|4,31708|5,31744|6) -
Totally not sure about this 1/8, 00:31:779 (31779|0,31815|1,31851|2,31886|3) - can somewhat relate to an instrument (even tho it's more of a LN material), but here it's almost inaudible. Suggesting removal00:33:136 - Another missing 1/4
00:36:208 (36208|6,36208|0,36208|3,36279|4,36279|1,36351|6,36351|3,36422|1,36422|5,36494|0,36494|4,36494|2) - Exactly same pattern as on 00:35:065 - . Mix it up maybe?
00:42:779 (42779|4,42922|2,43065|0) -
Ctrl+H, pitch00:45:065 (45065|2,45208|4,45351|6) -
^00:47:351 - You could add LN here for that fading in shuuuuuuu sound (lol)
00:48:208 - Delete one, not strong enough to warrant 4 notes + LN
00:51:922 (51922|5,52065|3,52208|1) -
Ctrl+H, pitch00:56:494 (56494|6,56636|3,56779|0) -
246 please, pitch (no ctrl+h because there's LN on 7th at the end of last LN from those three)00:57:065 (57065|6) -
End on 00:57:351 - sound clearly ends there and you can't just extend it for no reason00:58:494 - 6 notes is a bit too much considering that you're mapping beat with 3 notes and so low volume crash on 3 additional notes is ehhh. Delete one or two notes
01:12:089 (72089|1,72089|5) -
Move to 17, this sound is more suitable for bracket/trill than jack. And if jack, 3 note jack and not just 201:15:732 (75732|6,75732|3) - Move one right, this certainly doesn't sound right to jack (rest does btw so keep them)
With the LN placement that you have 01:29:494 (89494|1) - should be a 1/2 LN because of pitch change
01:29:922 - Expected 1/1 LN here for wub tbh
01:30:208 - ^
01:34:636 - I kinda like how you totally ignored the painfully loud burst here and just kept on layering LNs lmao
01:35:065 - Maybe increase the density here? This section sounds a lot more intense and it's mapped almost exactly the same. Doubling LNs will work imo. Or just make patterns harder, idk
01:43:636 - Expected 1/1 LN here again
01:43:922 - ^
01:52:922 - Burst starts here, duh
02:01:351 -
Since music focuses on those shouts here and 1/4 is very faint, I suggest something like this:02:02:494 - Suggesting something like this (jacks on 17 feel rather uncomfortable and this pattern should flow better)
02:04:494 (124494|2,124494|0,124565|2,124636|0,124708|0) -
Nononononono, this is too random of a jack. Make a [23]131 pattern to express it correctly.02:07:065 - Suggesting removal of note on 4th, overdone imo
02:20:779 - From now on you should layer double LNs because of synth that comes in here
02:29:922 -
Remove notes from 1st and 7th, not needed.02:30:208 (150208|1,150494|0,150779|5) -
Remove those notes since you layer only kick besides LNs in this part02:30:208 (150208|1,150494|0,150779|5,151065|0,151351|2,151636|4,151922|6) - Those LNs should go 3->1->5->7 according to pitch direction
02:32:208 (152208|1,152494|3,152779|5,153065|2) - 3->2->6->5
02:33:636 (153636|0,154779|5,155065|1,155351|6) -
Another set of totally random chime notes, either layer it consistently or don't layer it at all02:41:065 (161065|3) - Turn into 1/1 LN to express burst of kicks (1/4 reverse stair would be a bit too random for that part imo)
02:43:494 -
02:49:494 (169494|5,169494|1) - move to 35, same reason as on 01:12:089
02:54:065 (174065|4,174065|2) - 17 because ^
02:55:065 (175065|1,175065|6,175065|0,175065|2,175208|2,175208|5,175208|4,175351|0,175351|2,175351|6,175351|1) -
Overdone pattern. Red tick doesn't even have any strong sounds, white ticks don't have as strong basses and stuff like 02:55:636 (175636|6,175636|1,175636|0,175636|2) - and jack goes to exactly nothing. Suggesting something like this:02:55:494 (175494|6) - Another unneeded note
02:55:636 -
A full out bracket works better here02:58:636 (178636|1,178636|5) - 35, same as before
03:03:208 (183208|4,183208|2) - 17 aaaaa
03:04:065 (184065|5) - Move to 5th to shorten a very long 67 trill (connected to next suggestion)
03:04:208 -
This is expressing instruments better way imo:03:05:351 (185351|1,185351|5,185351|0,185351|6,185494|6,185494|5,185636|6,185636|5,185779|5,185779|6,185922|6,185922|5,186208|1,186208|0) - Consider Ctrl+H beacuse you've put strain on right hand on 02:56:208 - and this will work for variety
03:10:636 (190636|2) -
Start this LN on 03:10:779 - since you layer wubz here03:11:065 -
Instead of 4-chord I'd like to see double LN and 2-chord here for better emphasis on wubz03:11:351 -
And double LN here03:12:779 (192779|6,192922|3,193065|6,193208|3) -
Whoa, 1/4 LNs should not be there anymore, at most two 1/1s since sound you've expressed with 1/4 LNs is nearly gone03:13:351 -
Same as before03:14:494 - If you've not accepted 03:05:351 - you should do it here
03:16:779 -
You missed sound at 03:17:208 - and did irky double LNs, so here's a suggestion for this pattern:03:18:779 - I do think that pitch should be expressed more within LN patterns so I'm suggestiong something like this:
03:20:351 (200351|5,200351|1) -
Those LNs should NOT exist here, they are mapped to things that could be expressed only with single notes. So either do that or remove them03:22:065 (202065|2) -
^ not entierly sure about this one tho03:22:494 (202494|0,202636|1,202636|0,202779|1,202922|1,202922|0,203065|0,203208|0,203208|1,203351|1,203494|0,203494|1,203636|0) -
Trust me, you DO NOT want to leave it as it is. It's too uncomfortable to be played properly unless you have 0133 in your nickname. I mean, you can just vibro that or fluke it, but you won't get it perfectly. Spread jacks around and/or ballance them between hands.03:24:208 - idk kinda expected a LN here
03:24:779 (204779|3,205065|3,205351|3,205922|3,206208|3,206494|3,207065|3,207351|3,207636|3,208208|3,208494|3,208779|3,209351|3,209636|3,209922|3,210208|3,210494|3,210779|3,211065|3,211351|3) -
First of all, you forgot the definition of thumb awkwardness. This pattern should be used as example on how NOT to layer notes on thumb. Second of all, those LNs are mapped to sounds on diffrent pitch and are on the same column. And third, LNs on thumb with 1/4 gaps and things happening around it is the worst idea I've seen in a while. I also showed this to some of my friends and they went "what in the name of god is this". Requesting change. No, it HAS to be changed.Also I wonder why are you mapping same sound with both LNs and chords. 4-chords in places even.I honestly think it would be better if you'd just remap this whole part.
03:33:422 - 03:33:708 - 03:33:851 - Add notes there to keep it a consistent doublestream
03:33:922 (213922|3,214136|3,214351|3,214565|3,214779|3,214994|3) -
I think this spacebar usage is pretty random and can mess your reading by quite a lot. Keep it as a simple handtrill since it's 1/4 on 210bpm and you have a massive 1/8 burst right afterwards03:40:779 - & 03:41:065 - Instead of 1 additional note I think it'd be more suitable if you'd do 1/1 LNs
03:41:351 (221351|6,221636|6,221922|6,222208|6,222494|6,222779|6) -
Okay I get that this is the same sound, but that anchor is way too uncomfortable for what it should be03:46:494 (226494|0,226779|0,227065|0,227351|0) -
Why always on the outer finger and why for so long03:48:779 (228779|0,229065|0,229351|0,229636|0) -
You could at least alternate it between handsSame story repeats in second part of kiai03:59:065 (239065|2,239208|4,239351|2,239494|4) -
2x1/1 LNs instead, I think I've explained it earlier04:03:636 -
Change 1/2 LNs to 1/1 to match the wubz04:08:208 -
^04:18:494 -
Snaps are definitly wrong, this speeds up from 1/3 to 1/8 or maybe even 1/12. This is my guess on snaps, but you should poke someone who's better at this stuff to check it04:20:779 -
Too heavy chord, nerf it to 5 or 404:23:065 (263065|0,263208|0,263779|0,263922|0) -
Those minijacks are ruining the flow, you should avoid them04:25:065 - how about this:
04:26:636 (266636|0) -
Move to 4th maybe? Same reason as before04:30:636 (270636|2) -
^04:34:374 (274374|5,274374|1) -
Move to either 17 or 35, same reason as 01:12:08904:38:017 (278017|6,278017|3) -
Same as 01:15:73204:51:779 (291779|1) - Same as 01:29:494
04:52:208 -
Another 1/1 LN suggestion04:55:065 -
And again, I expected a 1/1 LN pattern like you did in some parts04:56:922 - And again you totally ignore burst lol
04:58:065 (298065|2,298208|2,298636|3,298779|3,298779|5,298922|5) -
awkward minijacks05:00:494 (300494|4,300636|4) -
^05:02:494 (302494|1,302636|1,302779|4,302922|4,303208|4,303351|4) -
^05:04:351 (304351|4,304494|4,304779|1,304922|1,305065|5,305208|5) -
^05:06:065 (306065|6,306208|6) -
^05:07:065 (307065|2,307208|2,307779|3,307922|3,307922|5,308065|5) -
^05:09:494 (309494|3,309636|3,309922|3,310065|3) -
^05:10:779 (310779|1,310922|1,311065|1) -
^ (this time even more awkward)05:11:494 (311494|2,311636|2,311779|1,311922|1,312351|4,312494|4) -
^05:13:779 (313779|5,313922|5,314351|5,314494|5,315208|6,315351|6) -
^Actually all of those apart from triple jack on left hand when holding LN on the same one jacks can stay if you map them more consistently
05:19:351 (319351|4,319494|2,319636|0) - Ctrl+J for pitch
05:22:494 (322494|6) - Sound ends on 05:23:636 -
05:29:065 (329065|6) - Move to 1st for pitch
05:33:636 (333636|6) - Should end on 05:35:065 - imo
I apologize for being so harsh and even rude at times, but some things had to be said by someone and I'm actually surprised that nobody pointed them out up until now (that's what I assume seeing it still here). Good luck!
inb4 this causes a serious drama, hopefully not ;w;