Team Grimoire - C18H27NO3(extend) [OsuMania]

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Topic Starter
[Shana Lesus]

DarkSider2442 wrote:

|1|2|3|4|
00:32:208 (32208|2) - на 4 колонку, так удобней
00:38:208 - ноту не забыл?
01:11:922 - http://puu.sh/hA2p1/dd98059e45.png попробуй так, твой вариант не очень удобно играется
02:09:351 - 02:09:922 - 02:10:494 - 02:10:779 - 02:11:065 - 02:11:351 - может стоит добавить по ноте?
02:17:351 (137351|2) - к чему этот хитсаунд?

=====| к моду не относится |======
02:29:922 - здесь можно так классно холдами замапать
03:36:208 - игроки очень тебя полюбят :)
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02:43:565 - ноту пропустил
03:01:779 - одну ноту удали
03:41:636 - добавь ноту
04:34:208 - про это я выше говорил

На 7К мод напишу чуть позже. Удачи и лови ещё одну звёздочку! :)
И да, так как некоторые части мода будут отклонены, напиши, пожалуйста, почему ты с ними несогласен.
Вадь, я удивлен, пофиксил все
кроме 02:29:922 - :D

спасибо за мод и звездочку, жду мод на 7К :oops:
Harbyter
hi shana here the mod req in game u.u


[Timing]

i feel the notes are a liiiiittle early ,offset 2498? if yes apply after the mods



[4K]

00:18:208 - remove one note? like here 00:13:636 - or add here

00:27:351 - uhm.. maybe is on purpose, btw same suggestion here remove or add a note at the previous section xD

00:28:636 (28636|3,28779|1) - suggest to ctrl+j for a better flow of pattern

00:38:244 (38244|2,38315|0,38815|1,38886|3) - nothing in 1/8 here suggest to remove

00:38:851 (38851|2,38922|0,38958|1,38994|2,39029|3,39065|0) - if you removed the 1/8 suggest to ctrlh those

00:38:779 (38779|2) - remove? i think this double here broke youre consistence at this point, since this additional note isn't for the crash or kick or other sound xd

00:42:208 (42208|3,42494|1) - ctrl+j for pitch

00:46:494 (46494|0,46779|3,47065|1) - suggest to move in 3 1 4 and 00:47:065 (47065|3,47636|0) - in 4 for better pitch

01:15:827 (75827|3,75827|1) - same snap as before in 1/12 ,move here 01:15:803 -

01:34:351 - add a 1/2 LN in col 4 for the synth?

02:47:065 - this section is too strange ,suggest to apply a 1/4 stream instead of 1/1 double xD

02:49:494 (169494|0,169565|1,169636|2) - suggest to move in col 4 3 4

02:51:922 (171922|0) - always col 4

02:54:065 (174065|3,174136|2,174208|1) - those in col 1 2 1

02:56:494 (176494|0) - col 3

02:57:065 (177065|2) - i think there isn't a need to put this note in col 3 too, move in col 2?

02:57:351 - add a note for the crash

03:22:065 (202065|2,202351|2) - for this section suggest to remove those then ,03:22:208 (202208|3) - col 2 and 03:21:922 (201922|3,202208|2) - turn in 1/1 LNs

03:34:136 - oh well, all the rating is thanks to this section xD try to reduce it? 03:34:136 - ~ 03:35:065 - removing one note at the doubles and this 03:37:351 (217351|1) - the rating will drop to 4.76

03:41:922 - add a 1/2 LN for the synth?

03:55:636 - here too

04:04:779 (244779|2,244779|0) - switch column and turn the note without hitsound into a 1/2 LN for the synth

04:09:351 - ~

04:13:386 (253386|1,253458|3,253529|1) - nothing in 1/8 here ,remove?

04:38:113 (278113|0,278113|2) - those too, move in 1/12 here 04:38:089 -



that's all /o/
Topic Starter
[Shana Lesus]

Harbyter wrote:

hi shana here the mod req in game u.u


[Timing]

i feel the notes are a liiiiittle early ,offset 2498? if yes apply after the mods



[4K]

00:18:208 - remove one note? like here 00:13:636 - or add here

00:27:351 - uhm.. maybe is on purpose, btw same suggestion here remove or add a note at the previous section xD

00:28:636 (28636|3,28779|1) - suggest to ctrl+j for a better flow of pattern

00:38:244 (38244|2,38315|0,38815|1,38886|3) - nothing in 1/8 here suggest to remove

00:38:851 (38851|2,38922|0,38958|1,38994|2,39029|3,39065|0) - if you removed the 1/8 suggest to ctrlh those

00:38:779 (38779|2) - remove? i think this double here broke youre consistence at this point, since this additional note isn't for the crash or kick or other sound xd

00:42:208 (42208|3,42494|1) - ctrl+j for pitch

00:46:494 (46494|0,46779|3,47065|1) - suggest to move in 3 1 4 and 00:47:065 (47065|3,47636|0) - in 4 for better pitch

01:15:827 (75827|3,75827|1) - same snap as before in 1/12 ,move here 01:15:803 -

01:34:351 - add a 1/2 LN in col 4 for the synth?

02:47:065 - this section is too strange ,suggest to apply a 1/4 stream instead of 1/1 double xD

02:49:494 (169494|0,169565|1,169636|2) - suggest to move in col 4 3 4 no

02:51:922 (171922|0) - always col 4

02:54:065 (174065|3,174136|2,174208|1) - those in col 1 2 1 no

02:56:494 (176494|0) - col 3

02:57:065 (177065|2) - i think there isn't a need to put this note in col 3 too, move in col 2?

02:57:351 - add a note for the crash

03:22:065 (202065|2,202351|2) - for this section suggest to remove those then ,03:22:208 (202208|3) - col 2 and 03:21:922 (201922|3,202208|2) - turn in 1/1 LNs

03:34:136 - oh well, all the rating is thanks to this section xD try to reduce it? 03:34:136 - ~ 03:35:065 - removing one note at the doubles and this 03:37:351 (217351|1) - the rating will drop to 4.76 I'm not chasing for ratings, not changed, maybe i remap this moment later :P

03:41:922 - add a 1/2 LN for the synth?

03:55:636 - here too

04:04:779 (244779|2,244779|0) - switch column and turn the note without hitsound into a 1/2 LN for the synth

04:09:351 - ~

04:13:386 (253386|1,253458|3,253529|1) - nothing in 1/8 here ,remove?

04:38:113 (278113|0,278113|2) - those too, move in 1/12 here 04:38:089 -



that's all /o/
Thanks for star and useful mod <3
Topic Starter
[Shana Lesus]

Slong150 wrote:

This map is love at first sight for me <3

Here, have a star ༽つ۞﹏۞༼つ ─=≡✧
Thank you for your support :oops:
Remillion Cross
Good luck, nice ~

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Topic Starter
[Shana Lesus]

Remillion Cross wrote:

Good luck, nice ~

Star
Thank you Remillion <3
Kuo Kyoka
Must turn on Widescreen support if you want to have full size SB <3



Good luck Shana xD Shooted star ~
Topic Starter
[Shana Lesus]

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

Must turn on Widescreen support if you want to have full size SB <3



Good luck Shana xD Shooted star ~
Thank for star Kuo <3
SB in progress :P
Eternalie
Hi there Shana-chama
hope it will help :3

Collumn 4K = 1/2/3/4
Collumn 7K= 1/2/3/4/5/6/7

[7K Axities]
hi KK~
00:17:779 (17779|2) - this note pitch is higher tham 00:17:922 (17922|6) - suggest re arranging ( if you follow pitch ofc)
00:27:065 (27065|0) - Should be 2 notes :3
01:18:494 (78494|4,78494|3) - Swap collumn ( so it doesn't conflict with 01:18:779 (78779|3) - wich isn't the same pitch) (optional)
* if you did swap it should do the same for 01:20:779 (80779|3,80779|5) - 01:23:065 (83065|6,83065|3) - 01:27:636 (87636|3,87636|5) -
01:32:208 (92208|6,92208|3) - and so on
^ feel free to ignore it , i mean well flow overall is already nice so it's totally up to you
01:29:494 (89494|0) - I think this LN should start here 01:29:351 (89351|1) - (not sure if the sound change at this point )
02:17:351 (137351|1) - not sure if the finish sound was intended ( just a notice)
02:29:065 (149065|3) - add note
02:29:351 (149351|0) - ^
02:29:636 (149636|3) - ^
I think you should keep adding the 1/1 beat note even if you press thoose 2 LNs , suddenly not having main beat is kinda special imo
04:51:779 (291779|0) - hum I think I got it for the previous one nvm it was good xD ( kinda hard to hear I had say)
05:23:922 (323922|4,324065|2) - For thoose pattern you use same all the time even the pitch isn't same
I highly suggest to Ctrl+J
example : 05:28:494 (328494|6,328636|3) - Ctrl+J then move 05:28:494 (328494|3) - to 3
[4K Capsaicin]
01:39:351 (99351|0,99351|3) - I suggest swapping collumn according to 01:38:922 (98922|3) - wich sound same as the other LN (just a suggestion tho)
04:57:351 (297351|3) - from here song is kinda awesome :O

Hmm couldn't be abble to find more ~ , sound really cool
I don't have the level on 4K lol and that 7K is pretty hard so can't really suggest more ;w;
so far, looks great to me tbh and some part are just like so good
(Teach me senpai *w*)

Wish I could give a star but I don't have any star left :'(
Good Luck KK and Shana :3/ have a nice day ^^/
Topic Starter
[Shana Lesus]

Eternalie wrote:

Hi there Shana-chama
hope it will help :3

Collumn 4K = 1/2/3/4
Collumn 7K= 1/2/3/4/5/6/7

[7K Axities]
hi KK~
00:17:779 (17779|2) - this note pitch is higher tham 00:17:922 (17922|6) - suggest re arranging ( if you follow pitch ofc)
00:27:065 (27065|0) - Should be 2 notes :3
01:18:494 (78494|4,78494|3) - Swap collumn ( so it doesn't conflict with 01:18:779 (78779|3) - wich isn't the same pitch) (optional)
* if you did swap it should do the same for 01:20:779 (80779|3,80779|5) - 01:23:065 (83065|6,83065|3) - 01:27:636 (87636|3,87636|5) -
01:32:208 (92208|6,92208|3) - and so on
^ feel free to ignore it , i mean well flow overall is already nice so it's totally up to you
01:29:494 (89494|0) - I think this LN should start here 01:29:351 (89351|1) - (not sure if the sound change at this point )
02:17:351 (137351|1) - not sure if the finish sound was intended ( just a notice)
02:29:065 (149065|3) - add note
02:29:351 (149351|0) - ^
02:29:636 (149636|3) - ^
I think you should keep adding the 1/1 beat note even if you press thoose 2 LNs , suddenly not having main beat is kinda special imo
04:51:779 (291779|0) - hum I think I got it for the previous one nvm it was good xD ( kinda hard to hear I had say)
05:23:922 (323922|4,324065|2) - For thoose pattern you use same all the time even the pitch isn't same
I highly suggest to Ctrl+J
example : 05:28:494 (328494|6,328636|3) - Ctrl+J then move 05:28:494 (328494|3) - to 3
[4K Capsaicin]
01:39:351 (99351|0,99351|3) - I suggest swapping collumn according to 01:38:922 (98922|3) - wich sound same as the other LN (just a suggestion tho) fixed
04:57:351 (297351|3) - from here song is kinda awesome :O yeees :oops:

Hmm couldn't be abble to find more ~ , sound really cool
I don't have the level on 4K lol and that 7K is pretty hard so can't really suggest more ;w;
so far, looks great to me tbh and some part are just like so good
(Teach me senpai *w*)

Wish I could give a star but I don't have any star left :'(
Good Luck KK and Shana :3/ have a nice day ^^/
Thanks for your useful mod Eternalie <3
Kuo Kyoka

Eternalie wrote:

Hi there Shana-chama
hope it will help :3

Collumn 4K = 1/2/3/4
Collumn 7K= 1/2/3/4/5/6/7

[7K Axities]
hi KK~
00:17:779 (17779|2) - this note pitch is higher tham 00:17:922 (17922|6) - suggest re arranging ( if you follow pitch ofc) fixed
00:27:065 (27065|0) - Should be 2 notes :3 added
01:18:494 (78494|4,78494|3) - Swap collumn ( so it doesn't conflict with 01:18:779 (78779|3) - wich isn't the same pitch) (optional)
* if you did swap it should do the same for 01:20:779 (80779|3,80779|5) - 01:23:065 (83065|6,83065|3) - 01:27:636 (87636|3,87636|5) -
01:32:208 (92208|6,92208|3) - and so on
^ feel free to ignore it , i mean well flow overall is already nice so it's totally up to you no, cuz some reason i forgot orz
01:29:494 (89494|0) - I think this LN should start here 01:29:351 (89351|1) - (not sure if the sound change at this point ) changed
02:17:351 (137351|1) - not sure if the finish sound was intended ( just a notice) fixed
02:29:065 (149065|3) - add note ?
02:29:351 (149351|0) - ^
02:29:636 (149636|3) - ^ well, you just need to come to that timing, and copy and paste, it will have that timing to you, you know, when you add note on there, and copy and paste with that, its will wont work: ex: 02:29:351 -
I think you should keep adding the 1/1 beat note even if you press thoose 2 LNs , suddenly not having main beat is kinda special imo i prefer resting, and on here, only long note seems enough XP
04:51:779 (291779|0) - hum I think I got it for the previous one nvm it was good xD ( kinda hard to hear I had say)
05:23:922 (323922|4,324065|2) - For thoose pattern you use same all the time even the pitch isn't same
I highly suggest to Ctrl+J fixed both
example : 05:28:494 (328494|6,328636|3) - Ctrl+J then move 05:28:494 (328494|3) - to 3 fixed

(Teach me senpai *w*) notice me senpai

Wish I could give a star but I don't have any star left :'(
Good Luck KK and Shana :3/ have a nice day ^^/
Thanks Eternalie xD


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Topic Starter
[Shana Lesus]

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

Eternalie wrote:

Hi there Shana-chama
hope it will help :3

Collumn 4K = 1/2/3/4
Collumn 7K= 1/2/3/4/5/6/7

[7K Axities]
hi KK~
00:17:779 (17779|2) - this note pitch is higher tham 00:17:922 (17922|6) - suggest re arranging ( if you follow pitch ofc) fixed
00:27:065 (27065|0) - Should be 2 notes :3 added
01:18:494 (78494|4,78494|3) - Swap collumn ( so it doesn't conflict with 01:18:779 (78779|3) - wich isn't the same pitch) (optional)
* if you did swap it should do the same for 01:20:779 (80779|3,80779|5) - 01:23:065 (83065|6,83065|3) - 01:27:636 (87636|3,87636|5) -
01:32:208 (92208|6,92208|3) - and so on
^ feel free to ignore it , i mean well flow overall is already nice so it's totally up to you no, cuz some reason i forgot orz
01:29:494 (89494|0) - I think this LN should start here 01:29:351 (89351|1) - (not sure if the sound change at this point ) changed
02:17:351 (137351|1) - not sure if the finish sound was intended ( just a notice) fixed
02:29:065 (149065|3) - add note ?
02:29:351 (149351|0) - ^
02:29:636 (149636|3) - ^ well, you just need to come to that timing, and copy and paste, it will have that timing to you, you know, when you add note on there, and copy and paste with that, its will wont work: ex: 02:29:351 -
I think you should keep adding the 1/1 beat note even if you press thoose 2 LNs , suddenly not having main beat is kinda special imo i prefer resting, and on here, only long note seems enough XP
04:51:779 (291779|0) - hum I think I got it for the previous one nvm it was good xD ( kinda hard to hear I had say)
05:23:922 (323922|4,324065|2) - For thoose pattern you use same all the time even the pitch isn't same
I highly suggest to Ctrl+J fixed both
example : 05:28:494 (328494|6,328636|3) - Ctrl+J then move 05:28:494 (328494|3) - to 3 fixed

(Teach me senpai *w*) notice me senpai

Wish I could give a star but I don't have any star left :'(
Good Luck KK and Shana :3/ have a nice day ^^/
Thanks Eternalie xD


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MEGAtive
Finally the Extended Version~ :3
:throwing stars:
Good Luck Shana :D

Pst. Add "Grimoire of Crimson" in the tags? (The Album of this version)
Topic Starter
[Shana Lesus]

MEGAtive wrote:

Finally the Extended Version~ :3
:throwing stars:
Good Luck Shana :D

Pst. Add "Grimoire of Crimson" in the tags? (The Album of this version)
Thank you very much for your support, yes, added tags album
Sakura Kyoko
Hello Shana! >w<
As promised, here is the mod for your map :3
Sorry, that it took me so long to complete it. :cry:

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IT'S TIME TO MO-MO-MOD!

Everything mentioned in my Mods is subjective and should be treated as a suggestions. If I find an UNRANKABLE issue, it'll be marked red.
When replying to the Mod, please consider telling me whether or not you've applied parts of the Mod and why you did/didn't.
If you have any further questions, feel free to ask me here or ingame.

Columns: | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |
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-General-

- From AiMod: Tag-Conflict with 7k Axities
- You could add "Sound Voltex II - infinite infection - " as your source. (on both Diff's) :)

- Notes -

- 00:22:779 - add on 3? (You've used 2 notes here; 00:13:636 - and here; 00:18:208 - too.)
- 00:33:065 - I would re-arrange the next few notes to make it a bit more comfortable to play, here is what I did; ...that avoids all the notes on Col. 1 and also makes the burst feel a little bit smoother.
- 00:40:494 (40494|1,40636|2,40779|3) - Ctrl+G for pitch maybe? :roll:
- 00:47:351 (47351|2,47494|1,47636|0) - ^
- 00:49:636 (49636|0,49779|2,49922|3) - ^
- 01:38:494 (98494|0) - move to 3 :3
- 01:43:065 (103065|3) - move to 1
- 02:45:636 (165636|2) - move to 4
- 03:28:065 (208065|0) - you had the mini-jack right before the LNs before (here 03:25:779 - and here 03:26:922 - ), which played really well, so I'd suggest to move that note to 4 :)
- 04:13:922 (253922|2) - I'd move this to Col. 2 (easier to play, but also more fluid)
- 05:08:922 (308922|1) - move to Col. 3 since there are so many notes on 2 >w<
Since this map already had so many good mods, I could'nt find anything else. I hope it helped a little and the mod isn't too small :oops:
Greetings & best of Luck for Ranked! Love this map!
Apple
Topic Starter
[Shana Lesus]

- Bad Apple - wrote:

Hello Shana! >w<
As promised, here is the mod for your map :3
Sorry, that it took me so long to complete it. :cry:

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IT'S TIME TO MO-MO-MOD!

Everything mentioned in my Mods is subjective and should be treated as a suggestions. If I find an UNRANKABLE issue, it'll be marked red.
When replying to the Mod, please consider telling me whether or not you've applied parts of the Mod and why you did/didn't.
If you have any further questions, feel free to ask me here or ingame.

Columns: | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |
-
-General-

- From AiMod: Tag-Conflict with 7k Axities
- You could add "Sound Voltex II - infinite infection - " as your source. (on both Diff's) :)this version has nothing to do with sdvx

- Notes -

- 00:22:779 - add on 3? (You've used 2 notes here; 00:13:636 - and here; 00:18:208 - too.) added
- 00:33:065 - I would re-arrange the next few notes to make it a bit more comfortable to play, here is what I did fixed ...that avoids all the notes on Col. 1 and also makes the burst feel a little bit smoother.
- 00:40:494 (40494|1,40636|2,40779|3) - Ctrl+G for pitch maybe? :roll:
- 00:47:351 (47351|2,47494|1,47636|0) - ^
- 00:49:636 (49636|0,49779|2,49922|3) - ^
- 01:38:494 (98494|0) - move to 3 :3 moved
- 01:43:065 (103065|3) - move to 1 moved
- 02:45:636 (165636|2) - move to 4 moved
- 03:28:065 (208065|0) - you had the mini-jack right before the LNs before (here 03:25:779 - and here 03:26:922 - ), which played really well, so I'd suggest to move that note to 4 :)
- 04:13:922 (253922|2) - I'd move this to Col. 2 (easier to play, but also more fluid)
- 05:08:922 (308922|1) - move to Col. 3 since there are so many notes on 2 >w<
Since this map already had so many good mods, I could'nt find anything else. I hope it helped a little and the mod isn't too small :oops:
Greetings & best of Luck for Ranked! Love this map!
Apple
Thanks for mod :oops:
[ A v a l o n ]
Hi Shana :D
here's my simple mod as requsted . . . xD
|1|2|3|4|
00:26:351 - add note ?
00:29:494 (29494|1,29779|2) - move to 1 and 4, more fit i think
00:31:208 - delete 1 note, cuz you've not use 2 notes for sound like thos for others
00:31:494 - ^ same reason, look at this 00:32:351 - 00:32:922 - you just put 1 note xD
00:33:494 - ^ same reason
hmm, OR you can add note for that i pointed out . . . so it's your choice , actually i get confused for usage of your 1 or 2 notes in red line on that section xD

00:34:351 (34351|1) - move to 4, same sound, so it will nicely to play . . . look at this 00:34:208 (34208|0,34208|3) -
00:45:065 (45065|3,45351|1) - to 2 and 1
00:47:636 (47636|0) - to 4
00:51:922 (51922|1,52065|2) - ctrl G, more better
01:12:208 - add note, i hear a cymbal here xD
01:13:351 - add note ^ and it's good to make different from kick sound (cuz kick you use 2 notes too)
01:14:494 - ^
01:15:065 - ^
01:16:208 - add 1 more LN . . . will make a different sense when you play it xD
01:25:494 - add 1/4 stream here, this is higher diff anyway . . . example http://puu.sh/hGzVy/d803b08fbf.jpg pls try that
01:29:922 - add note, same as you do in 01:32:779 -
01:30:494 - add 1 note ?
01:34:351 - make LN. same as here 01:34:065 -
01:38:494 - add note for kick, same as you do in 01:29:351 -
01:38:494 - add note, same reason ^
01:43:065 - add note ^
01:47:636 - add note ^
02:17:208 - add note, i still hear a kick sound here . . .
02:19:494 - same ^ feel weird if you leave this kick sound
02:21:779 - same ^ and many more xD xD
02:41:136 (161136|1,161208|0,161279|1) - h,, actually it's 1/8 . . . change to LN ?
02:52:351 (172351|2) - move to 1
03:03:922 - add 1 note on 3
03:33:065 (213065|2,213208|1) - to 1 and 4 for balance
03:43:636 - add 1 note, same as you do on other part
03:59:922 (239922|3) - move to 1, more balance
04:09:065 (249065|0) - extend this LN to 04:09:351 - according the effect sound
04:10:494 - add 1 note, cymbal sound there
04:11:636 - same ^
04:12:208 - ^
04:34:494 - add note, cymbal . .
04:35:636 - ^
04:36:779 - ^
04:37:351 - ^ make difference between only kick sound vs. kick+cymbal or crash
04:52:351 (292351|1,292494|0,292636|1) - delete, and make 1 more LN from this 04:52:351 - until 04:52:779 - more fit i think
05:06:351 (306351|3) - delete, and make LN from this 05:06:208 - to 05:06:494 - according the music
05:24:779 - add note, strong piano
05:27:065 - add note, cuz same sound as 05:26:779 (326779|1,326779|3) -
05:29:351 - add note, same reason as ^
05:31:636 - ^

Mod END . . . Good Luck on approval =w=)b
Topic Starter
[Shana Lesus]

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

Hi Shana :D
here's my simple mod as requsted . . . xD
|1|2|3|4|
00:26:351 - add note ?
00:29:494 (29494|1,29779|2) - move to 1 and 4, more fit i think
00:31:208 - delete 1 note, cuz you've not use 2 notes for sound like thos for others
00:31:494 - ^ same reason, look at this 00:32:351 - 00:32:922 - you just put 1 note xD
00:33:494 - ^ same reason
hmm, OR you can add note for that i pointed out . . . so it's your choice , actually i get confused for usage of your 1 or 2 notes in red line on that section xD

00:34:351 (34351|1) - move to 4, same sound, so it will nicely to play . . . look at this 00:34:208 (34208|0,34208|3) - moved
00:45:065 (45065|3,45351|1) - to 2 and 1
00:47:636 (47636|0) - to 4
00:51:922 (51922|1,52065|2) - ctrl G, more better
01:12:208 - add note, i hear a cymbal here xD added
01:13:351 - add note ^ and it's good to make different from kick sound (cuz kick you use 2 notes too)
01:14:494 - ^
01:15:065 - ^
^ added
01:16:208 - add 1 more LN . . . will make a different sense when you play it xD
01:25:494 - add 1/4 stream here, this is higher diff anyway . . . example http://puu.sh/hGzVy/d803b08fbf.jpg pls try that
01:29:922 - add note, same as you do in 01:32:779 - added
01:30:494 - add 1 note ? added
01:34:351 - make LN. same as here 01:34:065 -
01:38:494 - add note for kick, same as you do in 01:29:351 - added
01:38:494 - add note, same reason ^
01:43:065 - add note ^
01:47:636 - add note ^
^ added
02:17:208 - add note, i still hear a kick sound here . . .
02:19:494 - same ^ feel weird if you leave this kick sound
02:21:779 - same ^ and many more xD xD
02:41:136 (161136|1,161208|0,161279|1) - h,, actually it's 1/8 . . . change to LN ?
02:52:351 (172351|2) - move to 1
03:03:922 - add 1 note on 3
03:33:065 (213065|2,213208|1) - to 1 and 4 for balance
03:43:636 - add 1 note, same as you do on other part
03:59:922 (239922|3) - move to 1, more balance
04:09:065 (249065|0) - extend this LN to 04:09:351 - according the effect sound
04:10:494 - add 1 note, cymbal sound there
04:11:636 - same ^
04:12:208 - ^
04:34:494 - add note, cymbal . .
04:35:636 - ^
04:36:779 - ^
04:37:351 - ^ make difference between only kick sound vs. kick+cymbal or crash
04:52:351 (292351|1,292494|0,292636|1) - delete, and make 1 more LN from this 04:52:351 - until 04:52:779 - more fit i think
05:06:351 (306351|3) - delete, and make LN from this 05:06:208 - to 05:06:494 - according the music
05:24:779 - add note, strong piano
05:27:065 - add note, cuz same sound as 05:26:779 (326779|1,326779|3) -
05:29:351 - add note, same reason as ^
05:31:636 - ^
^ fixed

Mod END . . . Good Luck on approval =w=)b
Thanks for mod :P
AJIekceu
Привет :)

И вот, я добрался до твоей карты. Уж не знаю, что выйдет.

Колонки 4К |0|1|2|3|

Retsu go

4К много не бывает xD

00:12:208 (12208|1,12779|0) - как насчет того, чтобы к ним еще по одной ноте добавить? Понимаю, под "колокольный" звук идут, но все же. Ударные не стоит выкидывать, думаю. 00:13:351 (13351|1) - сюда, соответственно, тоже
00:13:636 (13636|0,13636|2) - ^ а вот здесь убрать одну
00:16:208 - - 00:18:208 - - то же самое
Дальше тоже :D
00:57:351 (57351|0) - точно уверен, что здесь нота нужна?
01:51:636 - думаю, не помешала бы здесь нота на 1
02:29:351 (149351|1) - начинается отсюда 02:28:779 - , а 02:29:636 (149636|2) - уже отсюда 02:29:351 -
02:34:208 - нота?
03:40:779 (220779|3) - не думаю, что здесь нужна нота. Ну да ладно, выбор за тобой
04:57:065 (297065|0) - добавь к этой ноте W. Уж очень хорошо звучит. Или F вслед предыдущим

Извини, но на 7К я не могу ничего написать. Слишком сложно и "нипанятна"

Удачи :3
Topic Starter
[Shana Lesus]

AJIekceu wrote:

Привет :)

И вот, я добрался до твоей карты. Уж не знаю, что выйдет.

Колонки 4К |0|1|2|3|

Retsu go

4К много не бывает xD

00:12:208 (12208|1,12779|0) - как насчет того, чтобы к ним еще по одной ноте добавить? Понимаю, под "колокольный" звук идут, но все же. Ударные не стоит выкидывать, думаю. 00:13:351 (13351|1) - сюда, соответственно, тоже
00:13:636 (13636|0,13636|2) - ^ а вот здесь убрать одну
00:16:208 - - 00:18:208 - - то же самое
Дальше тоже :D
вот это не принял ^, оставлю как и было, так лучше
00:57:351 (57351|0) - точно уверен, что здесь нота нужна? да
01:51:636 - думаю, не помешала бы здесь нота на 1 добавил
02:29:351 (149351|1) - начинается отсюда 02:28:779 - , а 02:29:636 (149636|2) - уже отсюда 02:29:351 - тут все в порядке
02:34:208 - нота? почему бы и нет
03:40:779 (220779|3) - не думаю, что здесь нужна нота. Ну да ладно, выбор за тобой нужна
04:57:065 (297065|0) - добавь к этой ноте W. Уж очень хорошо звучит. Или F вслед предыдущим F

Извини, но на 7К я не могу ничего написать. Слишком сложно и "нипанятна" вот 7К мне очень нужно было

Удачи :3
Спасибо :oops:
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