Thanks for your useful mod, metadata fixed
Hi Shana~タン ~\(≧▽≦)/~
Mod as requested from PM
Feel free to implement or reject if you think this is useless ~~o(>_<)o ~~No emoticon in Black = normal suggestions based on rationale of modding given below~
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(⊙o⊙)？ = unclear / questionable parts, thus cannot give a decisive recommendations~
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how about adding these to your tag
SOUND VOLTEX II -infinite infection-
Production Confirmation Commemorative Original Song Contest
here is another reference of sound voltex song with the tagging system
title should be C18H27NO3(extend) delete the "ed" at the end of your title
Grimoire of Crimson is the album name, so this should be in the source i think.
"pop'n music sorts the song using the string "カプサイシン", which reads "Capsaicin"."
i cannot find the original album, so idk, but if that information is true then you should fill that katakana on the original name and use the molecular naming on the 'romanised' name.
Timing : o(≧v≦)o~~
Audio : Σ( ° △ °|||)︴ the offset must be set on the first note that you put on your beatmap.
so put another offset here 00:01:065 - (this is the issue that i had with my 2 beatmaps and those BNs said this to me
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|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|9|10|In general, I will mod based on these considerations ♪(^∇^*)
( X ) I will not take this into consideration when modding
( √ ) I will take this into consideration when modding
( ? ) I might unconsciously take this into consideration when modding
Pitch Agreement / Relevancy : ( √ )
Hand Balancing : ( √ )
(Consistent) Patterning : ( √ )
Possibility of Long Notes Abuse : ( √ )
Ghost Note : ( √ )
Suggestions / Opinion only : ( √ )00:01:065 (1065|3) - move to 3
00:03:351 (3351|0,3494|1) - ctrl G >> PR (as written above, i think my reason area clear already as highlighted why i give certain mods, so i won't specify from this onward) fixed
00:07:351 (7351|3) - to 2
00:07:636 (7636|1) - 4
00:09:636 (9636|1,9922|3,9922|2) - ctrl H
00:12:494 (12494|3) - move to 1 PR
00:13:065 (13065|0,13351|0) - move to 2
00:13:636 (13636|2) - move to 1
00:16:494 (16494|0,16779|2,17065|1) - make it 3 2 1? pitch descents
00:17:636 - http://puu.sh/hzJMZ/4768448947.png PR fixed
00:21:065 - http://puu.sh/hzJR1/832eec508a.jpg fixed
00:23:065 -http://puu.sh/hzJRN/aa3b135716.png fixed
00:25:636 (25636|1,25922|3) - ctrl H
00:26:208 (26208|0,26494|2) - drag 1x to the right
00:26:779 (26779|3) - move to 2 fixed
00:26:922 (26922|2) - move to 4 fixed
00:31:922 (31922|2) - move to 1 or 2, better hand balance? moved to 1
00:39:636 (39636|1,39922|2) - ctrl H fixed
00:40:494 (40494|1,40636|2,40779|3) - ctrl G
00:41:922 (41922|0) - move to 3 fixed
00:42:208 (42208|3) - move to 1
00:43:065 (43065|2) - move to 1
00:42:922 (42922|1) - move to 4
00:43:636 (43636|2) - move to 2
00:43:922 (43922|0,44208|3) - move to 4 then 3?
00:45:065 - http://puu.sh/hzK2v/8cdc0a0e1c.jpg fixed
00:47:351 (47351|2) - move to 1
00:47:494 (47494|1) - move to 4
to me it seems that you confuse the 1 2 1 and 1 2 3 or 3 2 1 and 2 1 2 musicbox sound pattern, as at present imo the PR is randomly assigned.
00:52:065 (52065|2) - move to 4
00:52:208 (52208|3) - move to 2
that sound above is the same with this 00:54:208 (54208|1,54351|3,54494|1) - 1 2 1 pattern
01:12:017 (72017|1,72089|1) - are you sure you want to jack this?
01:29:208 (89208|2,89494|3) - should be 1 LN, sustained for that long. so revamp? fixed
02:11:636 - 02:48:779 - extremely recommend you to follow the pitch consistently because there aren't a lot of other notes being placed thus there should be no issue / difficulty in adjusting the placement with following PR right?
i don't think you will have any issue with identifying the pitch if you do take my recommendation. if you have i could give you a recheck after you have edited it.
03:29:636 (209636|2,210208|3,210779|0,211351|1) - the pitch should be consistently 2/4. why you only map half of them, with 4/4 length as well?
how about using short notes instead and consistently expressing all of the pitch?
something like this for example http://puu.sh/hzKxE/d2aae798af.jpg (ignore the placing, you can adjust that on your own)
03:34:065 (214065|3,214136|1,214136|0,214208|0,214208|1,214279|3,214279|2,214351|2,214351|3,214422|1,214422|0,214494|1,214494|0,214565|3,214565|2,214636|2,214636|3) - how about alternating them instead? 12 34 12 34? fixed
04:03:636 (243636|0,243636|2,243636|3,243922|3,243922|1,243922|0,244208|1,244208|2,244208|0,244494|1,244494|3,244494|2) - how about using 2 notes here, and instead put 1 long LN until 04:04:779 - to express that umm, you know what sound i'm referring...
the reason being 04:04:779 (244779|3,244779|0,244779|2) - also has 3 notes, but it has different beat emphasis. this way you clearly differentiate the beat emphasis by using different amount of keynote..
04:13:922 - until 04:20:779 - also strongly recommended to follow PR strictly because you dont put / express other sound with other notes.
04:15:351 - - here for example if you follow the pitch correctly http://puu.sh/hzKNO/6dacd64d47.jpg
04:47:922 (287922|1) - change as LN until 04:48:208 - ？ it expresses that sound better with more emphasis fixed
05:22:494 - until 05:33:636 - extremely suggest to follow PR accurately because there aren't many notes here. this would give better emphasis.
remember these are only my opinion.
since i am but no-one here, no need to take my opinion seriously :3
Excellent Beatmap!!! Nice Song!!! d(≧v≦)b~~
Good Luck for rank!! O(∩_∩)O