Team Grimoire - C18H27NO3(extend) [OsuMania]

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[Shana Lesus]

Todestrieb wrote:

Good luck on ranking! :Throw Star:
Thank you :oops:
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Kyousuke-
woah go go capsaicin!!
must ranked lol xD
Topic Starter
[Shana Lesus]

Kyousuke- wrote:

woah go go capsaicin!!
must ranked lol xD
capsaicin wants rank :P
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This map is love at first sight for me <3

Here, have a star ༽つ۞﹏۞༼つ ─=≡✧
schwarzvgrune
Hi Shana~タン ~\(≧▽≦)/~
Mod as requested from PM
Feel free to implement or reject if you think this is useless ~~o(>_<)o ~~


No emoticon in Black = normal suggestions based on rationale of modding given below~
o(≧v≦)o~~ = everything is good~
Σ( ° △ °|||)︴ = error / mistake / extremely recommended to be modified~
(⊙o⊙)? = unclear / questionable parts, thus cannot give a decisive recommendations~
O(∩_∩)O~ = other comments~
General : o(≧v≦)o~~
Mapset : o(≧v≦)o~~
Metadata : Σ( ° △ °|||)︴
https://remywiki.com/C18H27NO3
how about adding these to your tag
pop'n music
SOUND VOLTEX II -infinite infection-
制作決定記念 オリジナル楽曲コンテスト
Production Confirmation Commemorative Original Song Contest

here is another reference of sound voltex song with the tagging system
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/297458

title should be C18H27NO3(extend) delete the "ed" at the end of your title

Grimoire of Crimson is the album name, so this should be in the source i think.

"pop'n music sorts the song using the string "カプサイシン", which reads "Capsaicin"."
i cannot find the original album, so idk, but if that information is true then you should fill that katakana on the original name and use the molecular naming on the 'romanised' name.


Timing : o(≧v≦)o~~
Audio : Σ( ° △ °|||)︴ the offset must be set on the first note that you put on your beatmap.
so put another offset here 00:01:065 - (this is the issue that i had with my 2 beatmaps and those BNs said this to me
Background : o(≧v≦)o~~
Hitsounding : o(≧v≦)o~~


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In general, I will mod based on these considerations ♪(^∇^*)
( X ) I will not take this into consideration when modding
( ) I will take this into consideration when modding
( ? ) I might unconsciously take this into consideration when modding
Pitch Agreement / Relevancy : ( )
Hand Balancing : ( )
(Consistent) Patterning : ( )
Possibility of Long Notes Abuse : ( )
Ghost Note : ( )
Suggestions / Opinion only : ( )


00:01:065 (1065|3) - move to 3
00:03:351 (3351|0,3494|1) - ctrl G >> PR (as written above, i think my reason area clear already as highlighted why i give certain mods, so i won't specify from this onward)
00:07:351 (7351|3) - to 2
00:07:636 (7636|1) - 4
00:09:636 (9636|1,9922|3,9922|2) - ctrl H

00:12:494 (12494|3) - move to 1 PR

00:13:065 (13065|0,13351|0) - move to 2

00:13:636 (13636|2) - move to 1

00:16:494 (16494|0,16779|2,17065|1) - make it 3 2 1? pitch descents

00:17:636 - http://puu.sh/hzJMZ/4768448947.png PR

00:21:065 - http://puu.sh/hzJR1/832eec508a.jpg

00:23:065 -http://puu.sh/hzJRN/aa3b135716.png

00:25:636 (25636|1,25922|3) - ctrl H

00:26:208 (26208|0,26494|2) - drag 1x to the right

00:26:779 (26779|3) - move to 2
00:26:922 (26922|2) - move to 4

00:31:922 (31922|2) - move to 1 or 2, better hand balance?

00:39:636 (39636|1,39922|2) - ctrl H

00:40:494 (40494|1,40636|2,40779|3) - ctrl G

00:41:922 (41922|0) - move to 3
00:42:208 (42208|3) - move to 1

00:43:065 (43065|2) - move to 1
00:42:922 (42922|1) - move to 4

00:43:636 (43636|2) - move to 2
00:43:922 (43922|0,44208|3) - move to 4 then 3?

00:45:065 - http://puu.sh/hzK2v/8cdc0a0e1c.jpg

00:47:351 (47351|2) - move to 1
00:47:494 (47494|1) - move to 4

to me it seems that you confuse the 1 2 1 and 1 2 3 or 3 2 1 and 2 1 2 musicbox sound pattern, as at present imo the PR is randomly assigned.

00:52:065 (52065|2) - move to 4
00:52:208 (52208|3) - move to 2
that sound above is the same with this 00:54:208 (54208|1,54351|3,54494|1) - 1 2 1 pattern

01:12:017 (72017|1,72089|1) - are you sure you want to jack this?

01:29:208 (89208|2,89494|3) - should be 1 LN, sustained for that long. so revamp?


02:11:636 - 02:48:779 - extremely recommend you to follow the pitch consistently because there aren't a lot of other notes being placed thus there should be no issue / difficulty in adjusting the placement with following PR right?
i don't think you will have any issue with identifying the pitch if you do take my recommendation. if you have i could give you a recheck after you have edited it.

03:29:636 (209636|2,210208|3,210779|0,211351|1) - the pitch should be consistently 2/4. why you only map half of them, with 4/4 length as well?
how about using short notes instead and consistently expressing all of the pitch?
something like this for example http://puu.sh/hzKxE/d2aae798af.jpg (ignore the placing, you can adjust that on your own)

03:34:065 (214065|3,214136|1,214136|0,214208|0,214208|1,214279|3,214279|2,214351|2,214351|3,214422|1,214422|0,214494|1,214494|0,214565|3,214565|2,214636|2,214636|3) - how about alternating them instead? 12 34 12 34?

04:03:636 (243636|0,243636|2,243636|3,243922|3,243922|1,243922|0,244208|1,244208|2,244208|0,244494|1,244494|3,244494|2) - how about using 2 notes here, and instead put 1 long LN until 04:04:779 - to express that umm, you know what sound i'm referring...

the reason being 04:04:779 (244779|3,244779|0,244779|2) - also has 3 notes, but it has different beat emphasis. this way you clearly differentiate the beat emphasis by using different amount of keynote..

04:13:922 - until 04:20:779 - also strongly recommended to follow PR strictly because you dont put / express other sound with other notes.
04:15:351 - - here for example if you follow the pitch correctly http://puu.sh/hzKNO/6dacd64d47.jpg

04:47:922 (287922|1) - change as LN until 04:48:208 - ? it expresses that sound better with more emphasis

05:22:494 - until 05:33:636 - extremely suggest to follow PR accurately because there aren't many notes here. this would give better emphasis.

remember these are only my opinion.
since i am but no-one here, no need to take my opinion seriously :3


Excellent Beatmap!!! Nice Song!!! d(≧v≦)b~~
Good Luck for rank!! O(∩_∩)O
Topic Starter
[Shana Lesus]

schwarzvgrune wrote:

Hi Shana~タン ~\(≧▽≦)/~
Mod as requested from PM
Feel free to implement or reject if you think this is useless ~~o(>_<)o ~~


No emoticon in Black = normal suggestions based on rationale of modding given below~
o(≧v≦)o~~ = everything is good~
Σ( ° △ °|||)︴ = error / mistake / extremely recommended to be modified~
(⊙o⊙)? = unclear / questionable parts, thus cannot give a decisive recommendations~
O(∩_∩)O~ = other comments~
General : o(≧v≦)o~~
Mapset : o(≧v≦)o~~
Metadata : Σ( ° △ °|||)︴
https://remywiki.com/C18H27NO3
how about adding these to your tag
pop'n music
SOUND VOLTEX II -infinite infection-
制作決定記念 オリジナル楽曲コンテスト
Production Confirmation Commemorative Original Song Contest

here is another reference of sound voltex song with the tagging system
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/297458

title should be C18H27NO3(extend) delete the "ed" at the end of your title

Grimoire of Crimson is the album name, so this should be in the source i think.

"pop'n music sorts the song using the string "カプサイシン", which reads "Capsaicin"."
i cannot find the original album, so idk, but if that information is true then you should fill that katakana on the original name and use the molecular naming on the 'romanised' name.


Timing : o(≧v≦)o~~
Audio : Σ( ° △ °|||)︴ the offset must be set on the first note that you put on your beatmap.
so put another offset here 00:01:065 - (this is the issue that i had with my 2 beatmaps and those BNs said this to me
Background : o(≧v≦)o~~
Hitsounding : o(≧v≦)o~~


|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|9|10|


In general, I will mod based on these considerations ♪(^∇^*)
( X ) I will not take this into consideration when modding
( ) I will take this into consideration when modding
( ? ) I might unconsciously take this into consideration when modding
Pitch Agreement / Relevancy : ( )
Hand Balancing : ( )
(Consistent) Patterning : ( )
Possibility of Long Notes Abuse : ( )
Ghost Note : ( )
Suggestions / Opinion only : ( )


00:01:065 (1065|3) - move to 3
00:03:351 (3351|0,3494|1) - ctrl G >> PR (as written above, i think my reason area clear already as highlighted why i give certain mods, so i won't specify from this onward) fixed
00:07:351 (7351|3) - to 2
00:07:636 (7636|1) - 4
00:09:636 (9636|1,9922|3,9922|2) - ctrl H

00:12:494 (12494|3) - move to 1 PR

00:13:065 (13065|0,13351|0) - move to 2

00:13:636 (13636|2) - move to 1

00:16:494 (16494|0,16779|2,17065|1) - make it 3 2 1? pitch descents

00:17:636 - http://puu.sh/hzJMZ/4768448947.png PR fixed

00:21:065 - http://puu.sh/hzJR1/832eec508a.jpg fixed

00:23:065 -http://puu.sh/hzJRN/aa3b135716.png fixed

00:25:636 (25636|1,25922|3) - ctrl H

00:26:208 (26208|0,26494|2) - drag 1x to the right

00:26:779 (26779|3) - move to 2 fixed
00:26:922 (26922|2) - move to 4 fixed

00:31:922 (31922|2) - move to 1 or 2, better hand balance? moved to 1

00:39:636 (39636|1,39922|2) - ctrl H fixed

00:40:494 (40494|1,40636|2,40779|3) - ctrl G

00:41:922 (41922|0) - move to 3 fixed
00:42:208 (42208|3) - move to 1

00:43:065 (43065|2) - move to 1
00:42:922 (42922|1) - move to 4

00:43:636 (43636|2) - move to 2
00:43:922 (43922|0,44208|3) - move to 4 then 3?

00:45:065 - http://puu.sh/hzK2v/8cdc0a0e1c.jpg fixed

00:47:351 (47351|2) - move to 1
00:47:494 (47494|1) - move to 4

to me it seems that you confuse the 1 2 1 and 1 2 3 or 3 2 1 and 2 1 2 musicbox sound pattern, as at present imo the PR is randomly assigned.

00:52:065 (52065|2) - move to 4
00:52:208 (52208|3) - move to 2
that sound above is the same with this 00:54:208 (54208|1,54351|3,54494|1) - 1 2 1 pattern

01:12:017 (72017|1,72089|1) - are you sure you want to jack this?

01:29:208 (89208|2,89494|3) - should be 1 LN, sustained for that long. so revamp? fixed


02:11:636 - 02:48:779 - extremely recommend you to follow the pitch consistently because there aren't a lot of other notes being placed thus there should be no issue / difficulty in adjusting the placement with following PR right?
i don't think you will have any issue with identifying the pitch if you do take my recommendation. if you have i could give you a recheck after you have edited it.

03:29:636 (209636|2,210208|3,210779|0,211351|1) - the pitch should be consistently 2/4. why you only map half of them, with 4/4 length as well?
how about using short notes instead and consistently expressing all of the pitch?
something like this for example http://puu.sh/hzKxE/d2aae798af.jpg (ignore the placing, you can adjust that on your own)

03:34:065 (214065|3,214136|1,214136|0,214208|0,214208|1,214279|3,214279|2,214351|2,214351|3,214422|1,214422|0,214494|1,214494|0,214565|3,214565|2,214636|2,214636|3) - how about alternating them instead? 12 34 12 34? fixed

04:03:636 (243636|0,243636|2,243636|3,243922|3,243922|1,243922|0,244208|1,244208|2,244208|0,244494|1,244494|3,244494|2) - how about using 2 notes here, and instead put 1 long LN until 04:04:779 - to express that umm, you know what sound i'm referring...

the reason being 04:04:779 (244779|3,244779|0,244779|2) - also has 3 notes, but it has different beat emphasis. this way you clearly differentiate the beat emphasis by using different amount of keynote..

04:13:922 - until 04:20:779 - also strongly recommended to follow PR strictly because you dont put / express other sound with other notes.
04:15:351 - - here for example if you follow the pitch correctly http://puu.sh/hzKNO/6dacd64d47.jpg

04:47:922 (287922|1) - change as LN until 04:48:208 - ? it expresses that sound better with more emphasis fixed

05:22:494 - until 05:33:636 - extremely suggest to follow PR accurately because there aren't many notes here. this would give better emphasis.

remember these are only my opinion.
since i am but no-one here, no need to take my opinion seriously :3


Excellent Beatmap!!! Nice Song!!! d(≧v≦)b~~
Good Luck for rank!! O(∩_∩)O
Thanks for your useful mod, metadata fixed :oops:
RuberusuScarlet
ruberusu's Normal modding


from osu!chat

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  1. 03:35:065 (215065|0,215101|1,215136|2,215172|3,215208|0,215244|1,215279|2,215315|3,215351|0,215386|1,215422|2,215458|3,215494|0,215529|1,215565|2,215601|3) -
  2. 03:35:636 (215636|0,215672|1,215708|2,215744|3,215779|0,215815|1,215851|2,215886|3,215922|0,215958|1,215994|2,216029|3,216065|0,216101|1,216136|2,216172|3) -
  3. 03:36:208 (216208|2,216244|0,216279|1,216315|2,216351|3,216386|0,216422|2,216458|1,216494|3,216529|0,216565|1,216601|2,216636|0,216672|3,216708|2,216744|1) -
  4. 03:36:779 (216779|0,216815|3,216851|1,216886|2,216922|0,216958|3,216994|2,217029|1,217065|0,217101|3,217136|1,217172|2,217208|0,217244|3,217279|1,217315|2) -


03:40:065 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3084899

03:43:636 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3084904

04:20:779 (260779|3) - add finish

05:17:065 (317065|3,317208|0) - move to 41 :arrow: 12
05:33:065 (333065|1,333208|2,333351|3) - ^234 :arrow: 123 ?

good luck
Topic Starter
[Shana Lesus]

RuberusuScarlet wrote:

ruberusu's Normal modding


from osu!chat

|1|2|3|4|

  1. 03:35:065 (215065|0,215101|1,215136|2,215172|3,215208|0,215244|1,215279|2,215315|3,215351|0,215386|1,215422|2,215458|3,215494|0,215529|1,215565|2,215601|3) -
  2. 03:35:636 (215636|0,215672|1,215708|2,215744|3,215779|0,215815|1,215851|2,215886|3,215922|0,215958|1,215994|2,216029|3,216065|0,216101|1,216136|2,216172|3) -
  3. 03:36:208 (216208|2,216244|0,216279|1,216315|2,216351|3,216386|0,216422|2,216458|1,216494|3,216529|0,216565|1,216601|2,216636|0,216672|3,216708|2,216744|1) -
  4. 03:36:779 (216779|0,216815|3,216851|1,216886|2,216922|0,216958|3,216994|2,217029|1,217065|0,217101|3,217136|1,217172|2,217208|0,217244|3,217279|1,217315|2) -


added

03:40:065 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3084899 fixed

03:43:636 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3084904

04:20:779 (260779|3) - add finish added

05:17:065 (317065|3,317208|0) - move to 41 :arrow: 12 moved
05:33:065 (333065|1,333208|2,333351|3) - ^234 :arrow: 123 ? moved

good luck
Thanks for useful mod Rube :oops:
DarkSider2442
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00:32:208 (32208|2) - на 4 колонку, так удобней
00:38:208 - ноту не забыл?
01:11:922 - http://puu.sh/hA2p1/dd98059e45.png попробуй так, твой вариант не очень удобно играется
02:09:351 - 02:09:922 - 02:10:494 - 02:10:779 - 02:11:065 - 02:11:351 - может стоит добавить по ноте?
02:17:351 (137351|2) - к чему этот хитсаунд?

=====| к моду не относится |======
02:29:922 - здесь можно так классно холдами замапать
03:36:208 - игроки очень тебя полюбят :)
==========================

02:43:565 - ноту пропустил
03:01:779 - одну ноту удали
03:41:636 - добавь ноту
04:34:208 - про это я выше говорил


На 7К мод напишу чуть позже. Удачи и лови ещё одну звёздочку! :)
И да, так как некоторые части мода будут отклонены, напиши, пожалуйста, почему ты с ними несогласен.
Topic Starter
[Shana Lesus]

DarkSider2442 wrote:

|1|2|3|4|
00:32:208 (32208|2) - на 4 колонку, так удобней
00:38:208 - ноту не забыл?
01:11:922 - http://puu.sh/hA2p1/dd98059e45.png попробуй так, твой вариант не очень удобно играется
02:09:351 - 02:09:922 - 02:10:494 - 02:10:779 - 02:11:065 - 02:11:351 - может стоит добавить по ноте?
02:17:351 (137351|2) - к чему этот хитсаунд?

=====| к моду не относится |======
02:29:922 - здесь можно так классно холдами замапать
03:36:208 - игроки очень тебя полюбят :)
==========================

02:43:565 - ноту пропустил
03:01:779 - одну ноту удали
03:41:636 - добавь ноту
04:34:208 - про это я выше говорил


На 7К мод напишу чуть позже. Удачи и лови ещё одну звёздочку! :)
И да, так как некоторые части мода будут отклонены, напиши, пожалуйста, почему ты с ними несогласен.
Вадь, я удивлен, пофиксил все
кроме 02:29:922 - :D

спасибо за мод и звездочку, жду мод на 7К :oops:
Harbyter
hi shana here the mod req in game u.u


[Timing]

i feel the notes are a liiiiittle early ,offset 2498? if yes apply after the mods



[4K]

00:18:208 - remove one note? like here 00:13:636 - or add here

00:27:351 - uhm.. maybe is on purpose, btw same suggestion here remove or add a note at the previous section xD

00:28:636 (28636|3,28779|1) - suggest to ctrl+j for a better flow of pattern

00:38:244 (38244|2,38315|0,38815|1,38886|3) - nothing in 1/8 here suggest to remove

00:38:851 (38851|2,38922|0,38958|1,38994|2,39029|3,39065|0) - if you removed the 1/8 suggest to ctrlh those

00:38:779 (38779|2) - remove? i think this double here broke youre consistence at this point, since this additional note isn't for the crash or kick or other sound xd

00:42:208 (42208|3,42494|1) - ctrl+j for pitch

00:46:494 (46494|0,46779|3,47065|1) - suggest to move in 3 1 4 and 00:47:065 (47065|3,47636|0) - in 4 for better pitch

01:15:827 (75827|3,75827|1) - same snap as before in 1/12 ,move here 01:15:803 -

01:34:351 - add a 1/2 LN in col 4 for the synth?

02:47:065 - this section is too strange ,suggest to apply a 1/4 stream instead of 1/1 double xD

02:49:494 (169494|0,169565|1,169636|2) - suggest to move in col 4 3 4

02:51:922 (171922|0) - always col 4

02:54:065 (174065|3,174136|2,174208|1) - those in col 1 2 1

02:56:494 (176494|0) - col 3

02:57:065 (177065|2) - i think there isn't a need to put this note in col 3 too, move in col 2?

02:57:351 - add a note for the crash

03:22:065 (202065|2,202351|2) - for this section suggest to remove those then ,03:22:208 (202208|3) - col 2 and 03:21:922 (201922|3,202208|2) - turn in 1/1 LNs

03:34:136 - oh well, all the rating is thanks to this section xD try to reduce it? 03:34:136 - ~ 03:35:065 - removing one note at the doubles and this 03:37:351 (217351|1) - the rating will drop to 4.76

03:41:922 - add a 1/2 LN for the synth?

03:55:636 - here too

04:04:779 (244779|2,244779|0) - switch column and turn the note without hitsound into a 1/2 LN for the synth

04:09:351 - ~

04:13:386 (253386|1,253458|3,253529|1) - nothing in 1/8 here ,remove?

04:38:113 (278113|0,278113|2) - those too, move in 1/12 here 04:38:089 -



that's all /o/
Topic Starter
[Shana Lesus]

Harbyter wrote:

hi shana here the mod req in game u.u


[Timing]

i feel the notes are a liiiiittle early ,offset 2498? if yes apply after the mods



[4K]

00:18:208 - remove one note? like here 00:13:636 - or add here

00:27:351 - uhm.. maybe is on purpose, btw same suggestion here remove or add a note at the previous section xD

00:28:636 (28636|3,28779|1) - suggest to ctrl+j for a better flow of pattern

00:38:244 (38244|2,38315|0,38815|1,38886|3) - nothing in 1/8 here suggest to remove

00:38:851 (38851|2,38922|0,38958|1,38994|2,39029|3,39065|0) - if you removed the 1/8 suggest to ctrlh those

00:38:779 (38779|2) - remove? i think this double here broke youre consistence at this point, since this additional note isn't for the crash or kick or other sound xd

00:42:208 (42208|3,42494|1) - ctrl+j for pitch

00:46:494 (46494|0,46779|3,47065|1) - suggest to move in 3 1 4 and 00:47:065 (47065|3,47636|0) - in 4 for better pitch

01:15:827 (75827|3,75827|1) - same snap as before in 1/12 ,move here 01:15:803 -

01:34:351 - add a 1/2 LN in col 4 for the synth?

02:47:065 - this section is too strange ,suggest to apply a 1/4 stream instead of 1/1 double xD

02:49:494 (169494|0,169565|1,169636|2) - suggest to move in col 4 3 4 no

02:51:922 (171922|0) - always col 4

02:54:065 (174065|3,174136|2,174208|1) - those in col 1 2 1 no

02:56:494 (176494|0) - col 3

02:57:065 (177065|2) - i think there isn't a need to put this note in col 3 too, move in col 2?

02:57:351 - add a note for the crash

03:22:065 (202065|2,202351|2) - for this section suggest to remove those then ,03:22:208 (202208|3) - col 2 and 03:21:922 (201922|3,202208|2) - turn in 1/1 LNs

03:34:136 - oh well, all the rating is thanks to this section xD try to reduce it? 03:34:136 - ~ 03:35:065 - removing one note at the doubles and this 03:37:351 (217351|1) - the rating will drop to 4.76 I'm not chasing for ratings, not changed, maybe i remap this moment later :P

03:41:922 - add a 1/2 LN for the synth?

03:55:636 - here too

04:04:779 (244779|2,244779|0) - switch column and turn the note without hitsound into a 1/2 LN for the synth

04:09:351 - ~

04:13:386 (253386|1,253458|3,253529|1) - nothing in 1/8 here ,remove?

04:38:113 (278113|0,278113|2) - those too, move in 1/12 here 04:38:089 -



that's all /o/
Thanks for star and useful mod <3
Topic Starter
[Shana Lesus]

Slong150 wrote:

This map is love at first sight for me <3

Here, have a star ༽つ۞﹏۞༼つ ─=≡✧
Thank you for your support :oops:
Remillion Cross
Good luck, nice ~

Star
Topic Starter
[Shana Lesus]

Remillion Cross wrote:

Good luck, nice ~

Star
Thank you Remillion <3
Kuo Kyoka
Must turn on Widescreen support if you want to have full size SB <3



Good luck Shana xD Shooted star ~
Topic Starter
[Shana Lesus]

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

Must turn on Widescreen support if you want to have full size SB <3



Good luck Shana xD Shooted star ~
Thank for star Kuo <3
SB in progress :P
Eternalie
Hi there Shana-chama
hope it will help :3

Collumn 4K = 1/2/3/4
Collumn 7K= 1/2/3/4/5/6/7

[7K Axities]
hi KK~
00:17:779 (17779|2) - this note pitch is higher tham 00:17:922 (17922|6) - suggest re arranging ( if you follow pitch ofc)
00:27:065 (27065|0) - Should be 2 notes :3
01:18:494 (78494|4,78494|3) - Swap collumn ( so it doesn't conflict with 01:18:779 (78779|3) - wich isn't the same pitch) (optional)
* if you did swap it should do the same for 01:20:779 (80779|3,80779|5) - 01:23:065 (83065|6,83065|3) - 01:27:636 (87636|3,87636|5) -
01:32:208 (92208|6,92208|3) - and so on
^ feel free to ignore it , i mean well flow overall is already nice so it's totally up to you
01:29:494 (89494|0) - I think this LN should start here 01:29:351 (89351|1) - (not sure if the sound change at this point )
02:17:351 (137351|1) - not sure if the finish sound was intended ( just a notice)
02:29:065 (149065|3) - add note
02:29:351 (149351|0) - ^
02:29:636 (149636|3) - ^
I think you should keep adding the 1/1 beat note even if you press thoose 2 LNs , suddenly not having main beat is kinda special imo
04:51:779 (291779|0) - hum I think I got it for the previous one nvm it was good xD ( kinda hard to hear I had say)
05:23:922 (323922|4,324065|2) - For thoose pattern you use same all the time even the pitch isn't same
I highly suggest to Ctrl+J
example : 05:28:494 (328494|6,328636|3) - Ctrl+J then move 05:28:494 (328494|3) - to 3
[4K Capsaicin]
01:39:351 (99351|0,99351|3) - I suggest swapping collumn according to 01:38:922 (98922|3) - wich sound same as the other LN (just a suggestion tho)
04:57:351 (297351|3) - from here song is kinda awesome :O

Hmm couldn't be abble to find more ~ , sound really cool
I don't have the level on 4K lol and that 7K is pretty hard so can't really suggest more ;w;
so far, looks great to me tbh and some part are just like so good
(Teach me senpai *w*)


Wish I could give a star but I don't have any star left :'(
Good Luck KK and Shana :3/ have a nice day ^^/
Topic Starter
[Shana Lesus]

Eternalie wrote:

Hi there Shana-chama
hope it will help :3

Collumn 4K = 1/2/3/4
Collumn 7K= 1/2/3/4/5/6/7

[7K Axities]
hi KK~
00:17:779 (17779|2) - this note pitch is higher tham 00:17:922 (17922|6) - suggest re arranging ( if you follow pitch ofc)
00:27:065 (27065|0) - Should be 2 notes :3
01:18:494 (78494|4,78494|3) - Swap collumn ( so it doesn't conflict with 01:18:779 (78779|3) - wich isn't the same pitch) (optional)
* if you did swap it should do the same for 01:20:779 (80779|3,80779|5) - 01:23:065 (83065|6,83065|3) - 01:27:636 (87636|3,87636|5) -
01:32:208 (92208|6,92208|3) - and so on
^ feel free to ignore it , i mean well flow overall is already nice so it's totally up to you
01:29:494 (89494|0) - I think this LN should start here 01:29:351 (89351|1) - (not sure if the sound change at this point )
02:17:351 (137351|1) - not sure if the finish sound was intended ( just a notice)
02:29:065 (149065|3) - add note
02:29:351 (149351|0) - ^
02:29:636 (149636|3) - ^
I think you should keep adding the 1/1 beat note even if you press thoose 2 LNs , suddenly not having main beat is kinda special imo
04:51:779 (291779|0) - hum I think I got it for the previous one nvm it was good xD ( kinda hard to hear I had say)
05:23:922 (323922|4,324065|2) - For thoose pattern you use same all the time even the pitch isn't same
I highly suggest to Ctrl+J
example : 05:28:494 (328494|6,328636|3) - Ctrl+J then move 05:28:494 (328494|3) - to 3
[4K Capsaicin]
01:39:351 (99351|0,99351|3) - I suggest swapping collumn according to 01:38:922 (98922|3) - wich sound same as the other LN (just a suggestion tho) fixed
04:57:351 (297351|3) - from here song is kinda awesome :O yeees :oops:

Hmm couldn't be abble to find more ~ , sound really cool
I don't have the level on 4K lol and that 7K is pretty hard so can't really suggest more ;w;
so far, looks great to me tbh and some part are just like so good
(Teach me senpai *w*)


Wish I could give a star but I don't have any star left :'(
Good Luck KK and Shana :3/ have a nice day ^^/
Thanks for your useful mod Eternalie <3
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