00:01:065 (1065|3) - move to 3
00:03:351 (3351|0,3494|1) - ctrl G >> PR (as written above, i think my reason area clear already as highlighted why i give certain mods, so i won't specify from this onward)
fixed00:07:351 (7351|3) - to 2
00:07:636 (7636|1) - 4
00:09:636 (9636|1,9922|3,9922|2) - ctrl H
00:12:494 (12494|3) - move to 1 PR
00:13:065 (13065|0,13351|0) - move to 2
00:13:636 (13636|2) - move to 1
00:16:494 (16494|0,16779|2,17065|1) - make it 3 2 1? pitch descents
00:17:636 -
http://puu.sh/hzJMZ/4768448947.png PR
fixed 00:21:065 -
http://puu.sh/hzJR1/832eec508a.jpg fixed00:23:065 -http://puu.sh/hzJRN/aa3b135716.png
fixed00:25:636 (25636|1,25922|3) - ctrl H
00:26:208 (26208|0,26494|2) - drag 1x to the right
00:26:779 (26779|3) - move to 2
fixed00:26:922 (26922|2) - move to 4
fixed00:31:922 (31922|2) - move to 1 or 2, better hand balance?
moved to 100:39:636 (39636|1,39922|2) - ctrl H
fixed00:40:494 (40494|1,40636|2,40779|3) - ctrl G
00:41:922 (41922|0) - move to 3
fixed00:42:208 (42208|3) - move to 1
00:43:065 (43065|2) - move to 1
00:42:922 (42922|1) - move to 4
00:43:636 (43636|2) - move to 2
00:43:922 (43922|0,44208|3) - move to 4 then 3?
00:45:065 -
http://puu.sh/hzK2v/8cdc0a0e1c.jpg fixed00:47:351 (47351|2) - move to 1
00:47:494 (47494|1) - move to 4
to me it seems that you confuse the 1 2 1 and 1 2 3 or 3 2 1 and 2 1 2 musicbox sound pattern, as at present imo the PR is randomly assigned.
00:52:065 (52065|2) - move to 4
00:52:208 (52208|3) - move to 2
that sound above is the same with this 00:54:208 (54208|1,54351|3,54494|1) - 1 2 1 pattern
01:12:017 (72017|1,72089|1) - are you sure you want to jack this?
01:29:208 (89208|2,89494|3) - should be 1 LN, sustained for that long. so revamp?
fixed02:11:636 - 02:48:779 - extremely recommend you to follow the pitch consistently because there aren't a lot of other notes being placed thus there should be no issue / difficulty in adjusting the placement with following PR right?
i don't think you will have any issue with identifying the pitch if you do take my recommendation. if you have i could give you a recheck after you have edited it.
03:29:636 (209636|2,210208|3,210779|0,211351|1) - the pitch should be consistently 2/4. why you only map half of them, with 4/4 length as well?
how about using short notes instead and consistently expressing all of the pitch?
something like this for example
http://puu.sh/hzKxE/d2aae798af.jpg (ignore the placing, you can adjust that on your own)
03:34:065 (214065|3,214136|1,214136|0,214208|0,214208|1,214279|3,214279|2,214351|2,214351|3,214422|1,214422|0,214494|1,214494|0,214565|3,214565|2,214636|2,214636|3) - how about alternating them instead? 12 34 12 34?
fixed04:03:636 (243636|0,243636|2,243636|3,243922|3,243922|1,243922|0,244208|1,244208|2,244208|0,244494|1,244494|3,244494|2) - how about using 2 notes here, and instead put 1 long LN until 04:04:779 - to express that umm, you know what sound i'm referring...
the reason being 04:04:779 (244779|3,244779|0,244779|2) - also has 3 notes, but it has different beat emphasis. this way you clearly differentiate the beat emphasis by using different amount of keynote..
04:13:922 - until 04:20:779 - also strongly recommended to follow PR strictly because you dont put / express other sound with other notes.
04:15:351 - - here for example if you follow the pitch correctly
http://puu.sh/hzKNO/6dacd64d47.jpg04:47:922 (287922|1) - change as LN until 04:48:208 - ? it expresses that sound better with more emphasis
fixed05:22:494 - until 05:33:636 - extremely suggest to follow PR accurately because there aren't many notes here. this would give better emphasis.
remember these are only my opinion.
since i am but no-one here, no need to take my opinion seriously :3