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Kawamura Yumi - Moving Go On ~Soko Kara Mieru Mirai~

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Tatsuo
Sorry for the long wait on my mod.
I don't mod during the weekends because I'm busy.
ANYWAY, let the modding begin~

[Overall]
Where's your "easy" difficulty? Need something under three stars~
Your BPM is wrong. It's just an even 130. Also, your offset is wrong... I have NO IDEA what you are mapping to on your easier difficulty. Your timings are just completely off... I can't mod this until you fix your timings. It's just too off.

PM me when you have done that.
Teras

I_Tatsuo_I wrote:

Sorry for the long wait on my mod.
I don't mod during the weekends because I'm busy.
ANYWAY, let the modding begin~

[Overall]
Where's your "easy" difficulty? Need something under three stars~
Your BPM is wrong. It's just an even 130. Also, your offset is wrong... I have NO IDEA what you are mapping to on your easier difficulty. Your timings are just completely off... I can't mod this until you fix your timings. It's just too off.

PM me when you have done that.
Tatsuo. Are yoy saying my timing fix is wrong? :O It sounds perfect to me imo. But I guess I'm at fault for not explaining properly about he timing either.. wut O.o
Torran
OSU! Timing Help!
  • 1. BPM 100 , Offset 1080
    2. BPM 130 , Offset 20265
Good Luck!
Kurai
Hi~

[Quintessance]
00:44:380 (1) - Move 1/4 earlier and extand by 1/4
01:07:341 (5) - add finish ?


[Ourobouros]
00:38:611 (1) - Move 1/4 later
00:42:303 (1,2) - ^
00:44:380 (1) - Move 1/4 earlier and extand by 1/4
00:47:380 (2) - move 1/4 later
00:48:188 (4) - Move 1/2 later
00:57:649 (2) - ^
00:58:226 (3) - Move 1/4 later
01:14:495 (2) - ^
01:25:688 (2) - Move 1/4 earlier
01:36:649 (1) - Extand by 1/4
01:38:726 (2) - Reduce by 1/4 and move 1/4 later

[Caduceus]

00:31:688 (2) - Move 1/4 later
00:36:649 (5) - Why not a spinner here ? :3'
00:48:188 (4) - Move 1/4 later
01:05:957 (7) - Add a finish at the begin of this slider, that sound better
01:09:945 (Timing section) - Inherit this timing section
01:50:326 (Timing section) - ^
01:09:880 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1) - Move to the next white tick
01:11:841 (5) - Move 1/4 earlier
01:14:610 (4) - Move 1/4 earlier and reduce by 1/4
01:16:111 (6) - Move 1/2 earlier and extand by 1/2
01:17:380 (1,2) - Move 1/4 later
01:20:841 (7) - Move 1/4 earlier and extand by 1/4
01:26:725 (4) - Move 1/2 earlier
01:44:096 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Move to the previous tick
01:45:072 (4) - Move 1/4 later
01:48:765 (4,5,6) - ^
01:50:326 (Timing section) - Inherit this timing section
01:50:326 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Move to the previous tick
01:57:765 (4) - Move 1/4 later
02:06:303 (2) - ^
02:09:994 (3,4) - ^

When You do all of that, replace ALL NOTE with the DiSTANCE SNAP. That's very important. They are lot of spacing error in your map. If you replace the note with the distance snap, this error will disappear from your map (do that after doing my mod) and your map will surely become a good map :)

Good luck and star~ ^______________^
Topic Starter
Hijiri Tezuka

Kurai_ wrote:

Hi~

[Quintessance]
00:44:380 (1) - Move 1/4 earlier and extand by 1/4 Done
01:07:341 (5) - add finish ? Done


[Ourobouros]
00:38:611 (1) - Move 1/4 later Moved
00:42:303 (1,2) - ^ Moved
00:44:380 (1) - Move 1/4 earlier and extand by 1/4 Extended
00:47:380 (2) - move 1/4 later Moved
00:48:188 (4) - Move 1/2 later Moved
00:57:649 (2) - ^ Keeping
00:58:226 (3) - Move 1/4 later Done
01:14:495 (2) - ^ Done
01:25:688 (2) - Move 1/4 earlier Done
01:36:649 (1) - Extand by 1/4 Done
01:38:726 (2) - Reduce by 1/4 and move 1/4 later Done

[Caduceus]

00:31:688 (2) - Move 1/4 later Done
00:36:649 (5) - Why not a spinner here ? :3' That space is too short for a spinner!
00:48:188 (4) - Move 1/4 later Done...
01:05:957 (7) - Add a finish at the begin of this slider, that sound better Sorry but it dosen't fit the song ;o;
01:09:945 (Timing section) - Inherit this timing section Done
01:50:326 (Timing section) - ^ Done
01:09:880 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1) - Move to the next white tick Done ;o;
01:11:841 (5) - Move 1/4 earlier I hope you're right
01:14:610 (4) - Move 1/4 earlier and reduce by 1/4 Done
01:16:111 (6) - Move 1/2 earlier and extand by 1/2 Done?
01:17:380 (1,2) - Move 1/4 later Fixed
01:20:841 (7) - Move 1/4 earlier and extand by 1/4 Done
01:26:725 (4) - Move 1/2 earlier Done
01:44:096 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Move to the previous tick Doneth ;o;
01:45:072 (4) - Move 1/4 later Done
01:48:765 (4,5,6) - ^ Same as above
01:50:326 (Timing section) - Inherit this timing section
01:50:326 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Move to the previous tick You kill me yet again
01:57:765 (4) - Move 1/4 later Done
02:06:303 (2) - ^ Done
02:09:994 (3,4) - ^ Done

When You do all of that, replace ALL NOTE with the DiSTANCE SNAP. That's very important. They are lot of spacing error in your map. If you replace the note with the distance snap, this error will disappear from your map (do that after doing my mod) and your map will surely become a good map :)
Mapper Note: This song punishes me instead of rewarding me when I use distance snap, I normally use my dear friend distance snap but here our love was too weak. But eh, AIMod ain't complaining

Good luck and star~ ^______________^
Kurai
Hi~ Me again :O

[Quintessence]
00:58:572 (2) - Spacing
01:11:265 (3) - ^
01:11:726 (4) - ^
01:26:034 (3) - ^
01:32:034 (1) - ^
01:32:726 (2) - ^
01:33:188 (3) - ^
01:33:880 (4) - ^
01:34:341 (5) - ^
01:35:265 (6) - ^

[Ourobouros]
00:22:111 (4,5,6,7) - Spacing
00:58:803 (4) - ^
00:59:265 (5) - ^
01:01:111 (3) - ^
01:13:572 (7) - ^
01:14:957 (3) - ^
01:15:880 (6) - ^
01:19:803 (1) - ^
01:21:880 (4) - ^
01:26:034 (3) - ^
01:30:188 (4) - ^
01:33:418 (3) - ^

[Caduceus]

00:26:957 (3) - Spacing
00:27:418 (1) - ^
00:34:803 (1) - ^
00:51:418 (x) - add note ?
00:56:957 (1) - Spacing
01:03:188 (7) - Move 1/2 later
01:10:341 (2) - Spacing
01:10:803 (3) - ^
01:14:034 (3) - ^
01:14:495 (4) - ^
01:15:418 (5) - Reduce by 1/4
01:17:265 (1) - Spacing
01:19:111 (4) - ^
01:20:726 (7) - ^
01:23:034 (3,4) - Finish ?
01:28:341 (x) - Add note here (/! spacing)
01:30:880 (7) - Extand by 1/2 ?
01:33:880 (5) - Spacing
01:35:265 (7) - ^
01:35:957 (8) - ^
01:46:111 (x) - Add note
01:46:803 (1) - Spacing
01:49:341 (5,6) - Finish here ?
01:58:226 (1) - Move 1/4 later
02:00:650 (2,3,4) - Spacing
02:02:727 (5) - ^
01:50:497 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Not snapped

Hum... AIMod complain for me O_°. Are you sure to use always 0.8 for the distance snap ?
brikel
Hi~ Hi~

[Quintessence]

00:44:265 (1) - move the end point at 00:45:649 by fixing first point and add circle 00:46:111 ?
01:26:034 (3) - move the end point at 01:26:265 and
01:26:726 (4) - move the 01:26:495 with same shape?
01:34:341 (5) - move the end point 01:34:572 and add circle that?
01:35:265 (6) - move the first point 01:35:495 by fixing end point?
01:38:726 (2) - move the ent point 01:39:418 by fixing first point and
01:40:111 (1) - move the spinner at 01:39:649 ?

[Ouroboros]

00:44:265 (1) - move the end point at 00:45:649 by fixing first point and add circle 00:46:111 ?
01:01:111 (3) - move the slider at 01:01:572 and add circle that?
01:02:034 (4) - move the circle at 01:02:265?
01:38:726 (2) - move the ent point 01:39:418 by fixing first point and
01:40:111 (1) - move the spinner at 01:39:649 ?

[Caduceus]

00:44:265 (1) - move the end point at 00:45:649 by fixing first point and add circle 00:46:111 ?
01:13:341 (1) - move 01:13:572?
01:13:572 (2) - move 01:13:803?
01:35:265 (7) - move 01:35:495?
01:38:726 (2) - move the ent point 01:39:418 by fixing first point and
01:40:111 (1) - move the spinner at 01:39:649 ?

Um.... beat that's slightly varied from the written music. :o
And..... 2 times erase 2 difficulty's modding :cry:
But.. good song... star~
Topic Starter
Hijiri Tezuka

Kurai_ wrote:

Hi~ Me again :O

[Quintessence] Your complaining about me stacking notes? Leaving them as it is
00:58:572 (2) - Spacing
01:11:265 (3) - ^
01:11:726 (4) - ^
01:26:034 (3) - ^
01:32:034 (1) - ^
01:32:726 (2) - ^
01:33:188 (3) - ^
01:33:880 (4) - ^
01:34:341 (5) - ^
01:35:265 (6) - ^

[Ourobouros]
00:22:111 (4,5,6,7) - Spacing Fixed
00:58:803 (4) - ^ Fixed
00:59:265 (5) - ^ Fixed
01:01:111 (3) - ^ Fixed :|
01:13:572 (7) - ^ Leaving
01:14:957 (3) - ^ Fixed....a bit
01:15:880 (6) - ^ Fixed(?)
01:19:803 (1) - ^ Leaving
01:21:880 (4) - ^ Leaving
01:26:034 (3) - ^ Leaving
01:30:188 (4) - ^ Leaving
01:33:418 (3) - ^ Fixed

[Caduceus]

00:26:957 (3) - Spacing Leaving
00:27:418 (1) - ^ *See above*
00:34:803 (1) - ^ *See above*
00:51:418 (x) - add note ? No
00:56:957 (1) - Spacing No
01:03:188 (7) - Move 1/2 later Done
01:10:341 (2) - Spacing Done
01:10:803 (3) - ^ Moved :|
01:14:034 (3) - ^ Leaving
01:14:495 (4) - ^ Leaving
01:15:418 (5) - Reduce by 1/4 Done
01:17:265 (1) - Spacing Leaving
01:19:111 (4) - ^ Done
01:20:726 (7) - ^ Leaving
01:23:034 (3,4) - Finish ? Done
01:28:341 (x) - Add note here (/! spacing) Done
01:30:880 (7) - Extand by 1/2 ? Done
01:33:880 (5) - Spacing Leaving
01:35:265 (7) - ^ Leaving
01:35:957 (8) - ^ Leaving
01:46:111 (x) - Add note Done
01:46:803 (1) - Spacing Leaving
01:49:341 (5,6) - Finish here ? Done
01:58:226 (1) - Move 1/4 later Done
02:00:650 (2,3,4) - Spacing Fixed
02:02:727 (5) - ^ Leaving
01:50:497 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Not snapped Resnapped

Hum... AIMod complain for me O_°. Are you sure to use always 0.8 for the distance snap ?
Well, when I press Alt it say 0.8 so is it 0.8?
Topic Starter
Hijiri Tezuka

brikel wrote:

Hi~ Hi~

[Quintessence]

00:44:265 (1) - move the end point at 00:45:649 by fixing first point and add circle 00:46:111 ? Done
01:26:034 (3) - move the end point at 01:26:265 and I don't get you, sorry :o
01:26:726 (4) - move the 01:26:495 with same shape?
01:34:341 (5) - move the end point 01:34:572 and add circle that? Huh???
01:35:265 (6) - move the first point 01:35:495 by fixing end point? Umm...added a note
01:38:726 (2) - move the ent point 01:39:418 by fixing first point and Leaving since it fits the rythm
01:40:111 (1) - move the spinner at 01:39:649 ? Plled it back 1/4th hope that's good enough :)
[Ouroboros]

00:44:265 (1) - move the end point at 00:45:649 by fixing first point and add circle 00:46:111 ? Done
01:01:111 (3) - move the slider at 01:01:572 and add circle that? Have to pass, sorry
01:02:034 (4) - move the circle at 01:02:265? Done
01:38:726 (2) - move the ent point 01:39:418 by fixing first point and *See Quintessence*
01:40:111 (1) - move the spinner at 01:39:649 ?

[Caduceus]

00:44:265 (1) - move the end point at 00:45:649 by fixing first point and add circle 00:46:111 ? Done
01:13:341 (1) - move 01:13:572? Done
01:13:572 (2) - move 01:13:803? Doneth
01:35:265 (7) - move 01:35:495? LOL, I moved this in the earlier mod XD
01:38:726 (2) - move the ent point 01:39:418 by fixing first point and Again, refusing to move ;o;
01:40:111 (1) - move the spinner at 01:39:649 ? Sorry, no

Um.... beat that's slightly varied from the written music. :o
And..... 2 times erase 2 difficulty's modding :cry: Sorry about that ^^;
But.. good song... star~
hime_nikki04
Star ~

These are just suggestions. You don't have to change anything if you don't want to. Lovely beatmap, by the way...

Quintessence Level
This is just a difficulty thing but perhaps you could extend the slider at 00:40:572 so it lasts until 00:41:265.
Extend the slider at 00:42:418 one beat.
Extend the slider at 00:54:880 one beat.
Extend the slider at 00:57:880 one beat.
Move the slider at 01:35:265 so it starts at 01:35:149.
Extend it a beat.

Ouroboros Level
Add a finish hitsound to the spinner beginning at 00:44:265.
Add a finish hitsound to the spinner begining at 00:52:572.
Extend the slider at 00:57:649 one beat.
Shiro
Major issues in the map: it is highly recommended to fix them.
Minor issue in the map: you don't have to follow them exactly, but I recommend you to.
Suggestions: those are personal opinions, feel free to follow them or not.
Comments.
If there's one red line in the whole mod post, or three blue lines, I won't star the map.

Overall:
There's an empty .osb file, remove it.
All three diffs must be the same length. Map until the end for Easy and Normal.

Easy:
00:21:303 (3) - [form] Move this one one grid (lvl 3) right so that it lines up with (2) and looks better.
00:22:111 (1) - [spacing] Slightly too close to previous object. Move 00:22:111 (1,2,3) - one grid (lvl 3) right.
00:22:111 (1,2,3) - [form] Move those one grid down so that (1) lines up with (4) and looks better.
00:38:726 (1,2,3,4,5) - [spacing] What distance snap did you use for that section ? I suggest you re-space it with 0,8x distance snapping like the rest of the song. It doesn't affect gameplay much, but it will look a lot nicer.

00:47:495 (3) - [spacing] Too close to previous object.Try moving it 3 grids (lvl 3) down. (you'll have to respace the next notes)
00:56:495 (5) - [spacing] Too close to previous object. Place (5) where (6) is and move (6) under (5) so they line up.
00:57:880 (1) - [spacing] This is an anti-jump, which is confusing for Easy maps. And if you fix ^ it will get even closer to previous combo. You can leave it as it is though, since it's a new combo, and there's a little time gap between the two notes.
00:58:572 (2) - [spacing] Too close to previous object. Fixing it is up to you and depends on where you placed (1) if you changed its location.
01:00:418 (1) - Same comment as 00:57:880.
01:00:418 (1,2) - [form] These aren't stacked properly.

01:08:265 (1,2,3) - [spacing] Those are too far apart. Avoid this kind of "jump" in Easy.
01:14:957 (3) - [spacing] Too close to (2), move it one grid (lvl 3) down and one right.
01:19:341 (4) - [spacing] Too close to (3).

01:20:726 (1) - Same comment as 00:57:880.
01:21:188 (2) - [spacing] Too close to (1). Move it three grids (lvl 3) down.
01:22:803 (4) - [spacing] Very slightly too close to (3). Move it one grid right.
01:25:572 (2) - [spacing] Too far from (1). Move it two grids left. (if you do move 01:26:034 (3) - one grid right)
01:28:341 (1) - [form] Move it one grid left so that it lines up with (2).
01:32:034 (1) - [form] This slider is hidden by the previous one. It looks bad, and can be confusing to play. You have to place it somewhere else on the map, paying attention to its distance to the previous one.
01:32:034 (1,2,3) - Those are too close to each other.
01:34:803 (6) - [spacing] Too far from previous object. Move it three grids (lvl 3) left.
And one down so that it lines up with (6).
01:35:265 (7) - [spacing] Too close to previous object.
01:35:265 (7,1,2) - [form] Those three sliders overlap, which is very unpleasant to the eye.
I highly advice you to choose a distance snapping (less than 1x) and stick to it for the whole song, for the Easy diff at least.

Normal:
There are a lot of spacing errors in this one too... Choose a distance snap value, then stick to it until there's a break (after which you can change that value or not). Check all your map and re-space everything. Be careful however, a map with too strict distance snapping can be boring. Allow yourself some jumps or anti-jumps sometimes (not too hard though).

Hard:
00:25:572 (3,4,5) - [form] Those are too far apart: draw (4) and (5) closer. Generally speaking you should avoid changing the distance snapping whithin combos.
00:43:111 (3) - [spacing] Too close to previous object. Use distance snapping to fix it.
00:43:803 (4) - ^
00:52:688 (4) - ^ Distance to (3) should be the same as the distance between (3) and (4).
01:03:418 (7) - [spacing] Too close to previous object.
01:11:726 (5) - ^
02:02:726 (6) - ^
02:05:495 (1,2,3) - [spacing] Uneven spacing.
02:10:111 (3) - [spacing] Too close to previous object.
02:11:034 (5) - ^

02:12:303 (8) - [form] This slider is overlapped by two notes, it looks awful although it's still playable. Try rotating this slider by 90° counter-clockwise.

Overall, the map had too many spacing errors to be fun to play.

You can ask a remod anytime.
Kurai
Arf, Me again :)

[Quintessence]

00:21:303 (3) - [Nazi] Move 1 grid right ?
00:22:111 (1,2,3) - [Nazi] Move 1 grid right and down
00:39:649 (2) - Little spacing error
00:40:111 (3) - Little spacing error
00:41:265 (5) - [Nazi] 1 grid down and 1 grid left
00:47:495 (3,4,5) - Spacing
00:48:418 (6) - Spacing error
00:56:495 (5) - Spacing error
00:58:572 (2) - Spacing error
01:08:265 (1) - Spacing error
01:08:611 (2) - Spacing error
01:08:957 (3) - Spacing error
01:11:265 (3) - Spacing error
01:13:572 (1) - Spacing error
01:19:341 (4) - Spacing error
01:22:803 (4) - Little spacing error
01:23:149 (1) - Move 1/2 earlier and extand by 1/2
01:25:572 (2) - Little spacing error
01:26:034 (3) - Spacing error
01:26:726 (4) - Move 1/2 Later (/! Spacing)
01:30:188 (4) - Remove and move 01:30:418 (5) 1/2 earlier
01:32:034 (1) - Spacing Error
01:32:726 (2) - Spacing Error
01:33:188 (3) - Spacing Error
01:33:880 (4) - Spacing Error

[Ouroboros]
00:39:418 (2) - Spacing Error
00:40:803 (6) - Spacing Error
00:43:111 (2) - Spacing Error
00:50:495 (2) - Spacing Error
00:56:495 (4) - Spacing Error
00:58:572 (4) - Spacing Error
01:02:265 (4) - Spacing Error
01:13:572 (7) - Spacing Error
01:19:341 (3) - Spacing Error
01:22:572 (5) - Spacing Error
01:26:034 (3) - Spacing Error
01:27:649 (6) - Spacing Error
01:29:726 (3) - Little Spacing Error
01:30:188 (4) - Spacing Error
01:33:418 (3) - Spacing Error

[Caduceus]

00:22:111 (5) - New combo ?
00:43:111 (3) - Spacing Error
00:56:957 (1) - Spacing Error
01:08:265 (1) - Spacing Error
01:11:726 (5) - Spacing Error
01:21:880 (1) - Spacing Error
01:28:341 (x) - Add note ?
01:28:457 (1) - Spacing Error
01:32:495 (2) - Spacing Error
01:32:726 (3) - Spacing Error
01:46:226 (5) - Spacing Error
01:49:341 (5) - Spacing Error
01:49:803 (6) - Spacing Error
01:50:497 (1) - Move 1/2 later and reduce by 1/4
01:58:341 (1) - Move 1/4 later
02:04:112 (8) - Little spacing Error
02:06:418 (2) - Spacing Error
02:07:342 (3) - Spacing Error


Erf, Use correctly the Distance Snap please o_o'
AdRon Zh3Ro
[*]Change?
[>]Change!

Hmm...

Quintessesce:
I ignored some spacing issues due maping style, but:
>2:05:957(5) Spacing

Caduceus:
>39:996(4)Spacing
>1:03:187(7) ^
>1:06:765(8) ^
>1:14:265(4) ^
>1:15:187(5) ^
>1:18:880(4) ^
>1:22:803(3) ^
>1:23:207(4) ^
>1:26:264(5) ^
>1:28:515(3) ^
>1:29:149(5) ^
>1:29:957(6) ^
>1:32:842(3) ^
>1:49:111(5) ^
>1:53:380(5) ^
>2:00:996(4) ^
>2:02:495(6) ^
>2:11:669(7) ^

Well, thats all for now...
Teras
Oyashiro, ignore what I said about not making a diff for ya. I will finish the one I started. Giving you the update again. With corect bpm and offset. In progress.

Let's rank it, shall we?

Download: Kawamura Yumi - Moving Go On ~Soko Kara Mieru Mirai~ (Oyashiro Beatrice) [God].osu
Topic Starter
Hijiri Tezuka

Teras wrote:

Oyashiro, ignore what I said about not making a diff for ya. I will finish the one I started. Giving you the update again. With corect bpm and offset. In progress.

Let's rank it, shall we?
*Glomps you*
Teras

Oyashiro Beatrice wrote:

Teras wrote:

Oyashiro, ignore what I said about not making a diff for ya. I will finish the one I started. Giving you the update again. With corect bpm and offset. In progress.

Let's rank it, shall we?
*Glomps you*
Noes
Teras
Sigh.. there are probably some overmapped parts. I dunno..

Download: Kawamura Yumi - Moving Go On ~Soko Kara Mieru Mirai~ (Oyashiro Beatrice) [God].osu
Teras
I would call my diff a hard. Some parts aren't even hard. <.<
Gonzvlo
General
  1. Countdown is not enabled on [God].
  2. Tags must be the same for all the difficulties, fix it.
  3. [Caduceus] has different combo colours, you should use the same for all thr difficulties.
Quintessence
  1. Drain Rate can be decreased by 1 or 2 ticks.
  2. 00:40:572 (4) - Curve this slider a bit more, Looks better imo.
  3. 00:46:111 (1) - Too soon after spinner. It's hard for beginners.
  4. 01:00:418 (1,2) - Unstack (2) please, Beginners can't read this.
  5. 01:23:149 (1) - This spinner should start here: 01:23:034 & end here: 01:24:418
  6. 01:24:880 (1) - Too soon after spinner. (Read 00:46:111)
  7. 01:26:034 (3,4) - Unstack (4) please.
  8. 01:34:341 (5,6) - Unstack (6) please.
  9. 01:43:341 (1) - Read 00:46:111.
Caduceus
  1. 00:49:803 (7) - New Combo
  2. 01:15:418 (5,6) - What? This is not following the music. (5) ends here: 01:15:418.
  3. 01:26:726 (5) - Change this slider to something like this:
God
  1. 00:41:495 (1,2) - These don't match the music imo.
  2. 00:58:572 (1) - Remove New Combo.
  3. I think that slider speed changes are not necessary at all , you could map w/o them.
Mmm Well, Have a Star & Good Luck~
Leorda
Yo

[Quintessence]
This diff needs more hitsound

00:42:418 (1) - Sound better if you extend this to 00:42:880
00:49:803 (1) - Extend it to 00:50:149? Sound better to me if you extend it

01:10:803 (2,3) - Spacing error
01:13:572 (1) - End at 01:13:803?
01:18:188 (3,4) - Spacing error
01:25:572 (2,3) - ^
01:32:034 (1,2) - ^
01:34:341 (5,6) - ^
01:43:341 (1,2) - ^
01:45:188 (3,4) - ^
01:53:034 (3,4) - ^


[Caducesus]
00:22:111 (5) - New combo?
00:24:649 (2,3) - Spacing error
00:26:669 (1) - Move forward to 00:26:726
00:26:784 (2) - Move forward to 00:26:841

01:02:726 (6) - Extend to 01:03:072?
01:17:265 (1,2) - Spacing error
01:23:611 (1) - Move to 01:23:726
01:25:111 (2,3) - Spacing error
01:25:572 (3,4) - ^
01:30:188 (6,7) - ^
01:32:034 (1,2) - ^
01:33:880 (4,5) - ^
01:48:418 (6,7) - ^

01:50:726 (1) - Ugly slider
01:50:726 (1) - ^

01:53:264 (4,5) - Spacing error
01:56:495 (6,7) - ^
01:57:418 (8,1) - ^

02:09:188 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Ugly pattern

[God]
01:29:265 (11) - New combo?
01:33:880 (8) - Repeating slider at blue tick has wrong sound, make sure the repeating slider is fit to the beat or rhythm
02:13:111 (1) - This spinner is not silence perfectly!


Nice song
STAR
Teras

Gonzvlo wrote:

God
  1. 00:41:495 (1,2) - These don't match the music imo. It fits better than you think. >.<
  2. 00:58:572 (1) - Remove New Combo. Done.
  3. I think that slider speed changes are not necessary at all , you could map w/o them.
I do think they fit, and therefor I will keep those.

Mmm Well, Have a Star & Good Luck~
Thanks for your mod!
Teras

Leorda wrote:

Yo

[God]
01:29:265 (11) - New combo? Nah.
01:33:880 (8) - Repeating slider at blue tick has wrong sound, make sure the repeating slider is fit to the beat or rhythm
02:13:111 (1) - This spinner is not silence perfectly![/color] Doesn't really matter.
Thanks for your mod.

Download: Kawamura Yumi - Moving Go On ~Soko Kara Mieru Mirai~ (Oyashiro Beatrice) [God].osu
Topic Starter
Hijiri Tezuka
Thank you mods for your work, did as much as I could.
Sleep Powder
[Quintessence]

btw, I don't get the difficulty name

01:15:418 (5) - Shorten to previous red tick.
01:30:188 (4) - Shorten repeat to previous red tick.
01:38:726 (2) - Make the slider a flip of previous slider.
02:11:957 (1) - Make it a normal sampleset finish instead.

[Caduceus]

00:35:726 (4) - Spacing is too far (compare to 2,3 )
01:20:726 (6) - Spacing is too close.
01:34:341 (5) - ^
01:38:726 (2) - Make the slider a flip of previous slider.
02:02:034 (6,7) - Spacing.

[God]

00:34:803 (1) - New Combo ( even tho the colors looks so pretty~ @_@ )
00:57:188 (12) - Add New Combo
00:57:880 (1) - Remove New Combo
01:28:341 (8) - New Combo
01:33:880 (8) - ^


Overall, I thought the mapset was good. The guitar parts (like most mapped guitar sections) seem a bit weird but you mapped it well enough for it to be easy to play. Almost seems rankable.

Starr'd
Luneko
Hi~

[General]
You need a diff under 3 Stars!
You have lots of Spacing errors, please recheck your spacing. The errors i mentioned are not all your spacing errors.

[1Day]

01:26:726 (4) - Add 1 repeat?

[2Days]

00:35:265 (2,3,4) - Spacing
01:17:265 (1) - ^
01:23:034 (3,4) - ^

[3Days]

01:34:803 (9) - New Combo
01:38:726 (1) - ugly slider q.q


Map needs some work before it can be ranked
There are many spacing errors.
But have a Star~
Kuroneko-sHerald
[General]
Resize "lighting.png"? I think that it becomes a bit large when playing.

[New Dawn]
02:12:880 (1) - Please spacing.

[2Days]
01:28:572 (3) - Move 1 grid right. (grid size level 3)
01:35:495 (10) - Move 1 grid up.
01:38:149 (2,3) - ^
01:40:111 (3) - ^
01:39:880 (1,2) - Move 1 grid down.

[3Days]
02:17:495 - Make "Soft" this timing point.

Good song and nice map.
Star~
Topic Starter
Hijiri Tezuka
Bumping to keep alive. Damn Osu! won;t connect >.<
HakuNoKaemi
Arcane-Circles brush party 8-)

[Skin]
Spinner-Circle it's not centered, problably because you've manually done it right?

Hitcircle-overlay... where is it?

[New Dawn]
(sure it's a Super Easy?.? calling it Easy is better)
00:38:726 (1,2) - Spacing ( 1,6x now) reduce to 0.8x
00:48:418 (4,5) - ^

01:25:803 (2,3) - Spacing (0,9x now)
01:49:341 (5,6) - Spacing (1,2x now) reduce to 0.8x
{Graphic}
Long slider... linear? Better do some Sliderart (try with Numbers) when it happen to have many long slider :!:, example:
01:16:111 (5) - Arched Slider
01:17:495 (1) - sure to use a 0.5x Sv section instead to create a 3 ( 3 days :lol: ) sliderart?
SPOILER
280,96,77495,2,0,B|312:80|360:80|384:88|400:120|392:152|336:176|336:176|392:200|400:232|384:264|360:272|312:272|280:256,1,400

01:26:726 (3) - sure to use a 0.5x Sv section instead to create a Waved sliderart?
[img]http://puu.sh/1KdF][/img]
Just use imagination to substitute the rest of the long linear slider with sliderarts :D, it will be more awesome

[1day]
Need to be controlled with Distance Snap ( pass all the diff )
I see this a Normal (not Easy as you wrote in the op)
This had better graphic :D
Good Rhythmn :D

[2days]
It's an Hard .-. (you wrote Normal+ in the Op)
00:41:957 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing
00:56:726 (5,1) - i feel jump is not good here
The rest of the diff have a really bad spacing... so generally I can't play and say what jumps are bad... The rhythmn is good

[3days]
It's Insane ( you wrote "Hard" in the Op )
Was graphically better, saw nothing wrong in the rhythmn, i can't play Insanes and for this i can't test the flows

Won't star till you correct the Spacing in the 1st 3 diff's
HakuNoKaemi
Will recheck, expect a present in the next 12 hours
HakuNoKaemi
[New Dawn]
00:39:188 (2,3) - Spacing(now is 1,2x)-reduce to 0,8x with curving Slider (3) , remember to correct the spacing after when you fix it
01:01:572 (2,3) - Spacing
01:02:265 (3) - 2 grid right ( to correct spacing )
01:05:957 (6,7) - 7 grid left ( to correct spacing )

generally you should try to work more on spacing ... but now I can star :D

[Video]
The video you have contains audio... and i decided to find a video for you and encode it to remove the audio :D
The Offset of the video is -50 ( change it from the .osu file )
http://puu.sh/1Lf8
Topic Starter
Hijiri Tezuka

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[Video]
The video you have contains audio... and i decided to find a video for you and encode it to remove the audio :D
The Offset of the video is -50 ( change it from the .osu file )
http://puu.sh/1Lf8
The video is laggy and jumps a lot of frames, it even makes my computer go slow outside the editor which the original video didn't do. Sorry ;__;
2391645784
good job ,ranked it!!! :) :) :) :) :) :)
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