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AncuL
if you have "Geometry dash" as the source then you dont need "Geometry dash" as the tag

no kd
Topic Starter
Janko

AncuL wrote:

if you have "Geometry dash" as the source then you dont need "Geometry dash" as the tag

no kd
oh. ok. thanks :D
lenpai
Ohoho Geometry Dash.

Ok, I'm not good at patterns but here is a must notice.
If you look at your map starting at this section 000:14:780 there are pretty overpowering (in amount) right hand trills. Since people usually point out balance, there should also be long trills in the left hand
Examples of these trills:
00:27:905
00:34:585
00:41:147
Ok, they're not bad but there's just like one long trill on the left hand while there a four on the right. You might want to fix it by balancing the trills and/or converting some to jumps
looking good
00:14:663 should have a continuous stream like 00:13:842 not sure though if the one in 00:13:842 must be redone
00:15:600 hard stuff like this should be in the later part of the song
I see some patter changing. If you want a better one, I strongly suggest following a difficulty curve that is going up
Can't mod EZ stuff :(
Topic Starter
Janko

Lenfried- wrote:

Ohoho Geometry Dash.

Ok, I'm not good at patterns but here is a must notice.
If you look at your map starting at this section 000:14:780 there are pretty overpowering (in amount) right hand trills. Since people usually point out balance, there should also be long trills in the left hand
Examples of these trills:
00:27:905
00:34:585
00:41:147
Ok, they're not bad but there's just like one long trill on the left hand while there a four on the right. You might want to fix it by balancing the trills and/or converting some to jumps
looking good
00:14:663 should have a continuous stream like 00:13:842 not sure though if the one in 00:13:842 must be redone
00:15:600 hard stuff like this should be in the later part of the song
I see some patter changing. If you want a better one, I strongly suggest following a difficulty curve that is going up
Can't mod EZ stuff :(
Ineresting mod. thank you very much ^^
Fresh Chicken
M4M Arrived :3

[General]

Only turn on Widescreen support in MX diff. Please turn off :3


[MX]

00:00:132 - Don't need three notes in here. Here isn't powerful pitch

00:06:460 - Add one for consistency

00:13:257 - Don't need three notes.

00:13:725 - ^

00:14:194 - ^

00:14:663 - ^

00:28:022 (28022|1,28022|2) - Why two notes suddenly? o.o

00:38:335 - ^

00:43:022 - ^

00:43:725 (43725|0,43725|1) - Don't need two notes. Not good at pitch

[SEE's HD]

I won't catch patterns. Because. It's so repetition pattern. ㅠㅠ
I suggest rearrange patterns. It's kinda board :p

Good luck :)
Topic Starter
Janko

_FrEsH_ChICkEn_ wrote:

M4M Arrived :3

[General]

Only turn on Widescreen support in MX diff. Please turn off :3 ☑ OK
I forgot about that xD



[MX]

00:00:132 - Don't need three notes in here. Here isn't powerful pitch ☑ OK

00:06:460 - Add one for consistency ☑ OK

00:13:257 - Don't need three notes. ☑ OK

00:13:725 - ^

00:14:194 - ^ ☑ OK

00:14:663 - ^

00:28:022 (28022|1,28022|2) - Why two notes suddenly? o.o I thought that this is good but I changed it

00:38:335 - ^ ^

00:43:022 - ^ ^

00:43:725 (43725|0,43725|1) - Don't need two notes. Not good at pitch ☑ OK


[SEE's HD]

I won't catch patterns. Because. It's so repetition pattern. ㅠㅠ
I suggest rearrange patterns. It's kinda board :p

Good luck :)
Thx ^^
FLint[FX]
00:02:007 - Remove 3 - The First Two Patterns Have 2 Notes So Remove 3 For Balance
00:13:491 (13491|0) - Move to 3
00:20:991 (20991|1) - ^ 4
00:23:803 (23803|0) - ^ 3
00:30:366 (30366|0) - ^ 3
Suggestion - Use Patterns Properly / Or Re Arranged Your Patterns
GREAT WORK / GREAT MAP~ Good Luck
:)
Topic Starter
Janko

FLint[FX] wrote:

00:02:007 - Remove 3 - The First Two Patterns Have 2 Notes So Remove 3 For Balance
00:13:491 (13491|0) - Move to 3
00:20:991 (20991|1) - ^ 4
00:23:803 (23803|0) - ^ 3
00:30:366 (30366|0) - ^ 3
Suggestion - Use Patterns Properly / Or Re Arranged Your Patterns
GREAT WORK / GREAT MAP~ Good Luck
:)
All applied. Thanks :D
Frim4503

col:1|2|3|4|5|6|7

00:38:100 (38100|1) - move to 1. feels good in 1 IMO
00:01:069 (1069|1) - i sggest to remove this. cuz it didn't follow anything
^applied to other part with have the same sound

00:13:725 - make it simple like this http://puu.sh/iDq0H/5f3b3dba9e.png
00:30:600 (30600|2) - what is this ? suhould end here 00:30:835 -
^like other part too

00:44:194 (44194|2) - remove. more fit the song
00:14:780 (14780|3) - remove. what are you following ?
00:31:069 (31069|0) - remove. this is ghost note i think
^also 00:32:944 (32944|0) - 00:32:944 (32944|0) - 00:32:944 (32944|0) -

for MX dif i think it's ok :D
Topic Starter
Janko

Frim4503 wrote:


col:1|2|3|4|5|6|7

00:38:100 (38100|1) - move to 1. feels good in 1 IMO ☑ OK
00:01:069 (1069|1) - i sggest to remove this. cuz it didn't follow anything
^applied to other part with have the same sound ☒ NO

00:13:725 - make it simple like this http://puu.sh/iDq0H/5f3b3dba9e.png I changed it but I modified your idea
00:30:600 (30600|2) - what is this ? suhould end here 00:30:835 - ☑ OK
^like other part too I don't know what's going on so nothing changed

00:44:194 (44194|2) - remove. more fit the song ☑ OK

for MX dif i think it's ok :D
Very good mod. Thanks
LothusFangirl
Hi :)
Add kiai - 00:15:132 to 00:30:132
00:15:014 - add note?
00:11:264 - add note
00:11:499 - add note
00:38:686 - add note
00:38:921 - remove note
00:43:139 - add note
I love Geometry Dash
Btw , Nice map :)
Topic Starter
Janko

zZ_Natsu_Zz wrote:

Hi :)

00:11:264 - add note
00:11:499 - add note
00:38:686 - add note
00:38:921 - remove note
00:43:139 - add note ☑OK ALL ACCEPTED
I love Geometry Dash
Btw , Nice map :)
Thanks ^^
AlisceaSparku
Hi~!
From my queue :D

Nothing to say much about this map :o
[MX]
00:26:147 (26147|2,26264|1) - ctrl + h, for hand balance

[HD]
00:01:303 - i recommend putting a note here. The sound is well heard after all
00:03:178 - ^
00:05:053 - ^
00:08:803 - ^
00:10:678 - ^
00:12:553 - ^
00:16:303 - ^
00:18:178 - ^
00:20:053 - ^
00:21:928 - ^
00:23:803 - ^
too lazy to ctrl + c everything lol

Hope these can help.
Good luck with your map! :D
Topic Starter
Janko

AlisceaSparku wrote:

[MX]
00:26:147 (26147|2,26264|1) - ctrl + h, for hand balance ☑ OK
THX \o/
Xenophilius
Hi! From Mod 4 Mod.

Layout:

4k: |0|1|2|3|
  1. 00:00:600 - I suggest to add 1 note because the sound here is the same of 00:00:132 -
  2. 00:01:069 - Same as above ^
  3. 00:01:538 - Same as above^
  4. 00:02:475 - Same as above^
  5. And so on, since 00:13:257 - all white lines have the same sound, so I suggest to add 1 note
  6. From 00:15:132 - to 00:42:788 - here the second and the last white line of each measure have the same sound of first and third but with the addition of a clap sound, so I think you have to use 2 notes for first and third white line and 3 notes for second and last ones. I also suggest to use clap hitsound on 3 notes white lines.
  1. 00:02:007 - Suggest to add LN until 00:02:241 - Because 00:01:538 (1538|1,1772|2) - follow the melody but ony 2. And here the melody is composed by 3 notes. You can add a LN or change a note to LN.
  2. 00:03:882 - Same as above ^
  3. 00:05:757 - Same as above ^
  4. 00:07:632 - Same as above in other similar parts ultil the end of the map
  5. 00:14:780 (14780|3) - This note is for the drum, right? So, if it's right you should add another note here 00:15:014 - because the drum also feels here
  6. This diff miss Kiai time.
  1. 00:27:553 (27553|3) - Delete there's no sound for another note here, thes 3 notes melody start here 00:27:788 -
  2. 00:29:897 (29897|0,30132|3) - I don't recommend using LN here because you need another LN here 00:29:663 - to follow the 3 notes melody. best thing to do will be deleting 00:29:897 (29897|0) - because a LN for the final note it's ok, but 2 LN and not the start isn't so good.
  1. 00:14:194 (14194|3) - I suggest to change this to a normal note since you have never followed before in this diff this sound with a LN. And also it'll be more easyer to play for EZ players

That's all for my mod, I'll wait for your. Thatsh - Xepher <- This is my map for Mod 4 Mod
Topic Starter
Janko

_Xenophilius_ wrote:

Layout:

4k: |0|1|2|3|
  1. 00:00:600 - I suggest to add 1 note because the sound here is the same of 00:00:132 -
  2. 00:01:069 - Same as above ^
  3. 00:01:538 - Same as above^
  4. 00:02:475 - Same as above^ ☑^OK
  5. And so on, since 00:13:257 - all white lines have the same sound, so I suggest to add 1 note ☑OK
  6. From 00:15:132 - to 00:42:788 - here the second and the last white line of each measure have the same sound of first and third but with the addition of a clap sound, so I think you have to use 2 notes for first and third white line and 3 notes for second and last ones. I also suggest to use clap hitsound on 3 notes white lines.
  1. 00:27:553 (27553|3) - Delete there's no sound for another note here, thes 3 notes melody start here 00:27:788 - I changed it but I modified your idea
  2. 00:29:897 (29897|0,30132|3) - I don't recommend using LN here because you need another LN here 00:29:663 - to follow the 3 notes melody. best thing to do will be deleting 00:29:897 (29897|0) - because a LN for the final note it's ok, but 2 LN and not the start isn't so good. ☑OK
  1. 00:14:194 (14194|3) - I suggest to change this to a normal note since you have never followed before in this diff this sound with a LN. And also it'll be more easyer to play for EZ players ☑OK
Grazie :)
ddfgit
GEOMETRY DASH YOUTUBER ON SCREEN IS: WeoWeoTeo (level Fast as Lightning)
for some1 who need this :3
Topic Starter
Janko

ddfgit wrote:

GEOMETRY DASH YOUTUBER ON SCREEN IS: WeoWeoTeo (level Fast as Lightning)
for some1 who need this :3
You're good. I did not know where I got this screenshot xD

after a long search... I found it!! https://youtu.be/b8VopgL-IVo?t=41s
streeteelf
Too lazy to reply to every mod, so just sayin' "all applied" instead of copying every post and answer this. :P

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448,192,24272,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,24507,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,24507,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,24975,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,24975,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,25210,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,25210,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,25327,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,25327,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,25561,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,25561,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,25678,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,25913,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,25913,128,0,26147:0:0:0:0:
64,192,26147,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,26147,128,2,26382:0:0:0:0:
448,192,26382,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,26382,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,26850,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,26850,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,27085,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,27085,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,27202,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,27202,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,27436,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,27436,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,27553,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,27788,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,27788,128,0,28022:0:0:0:0:
448,192,28022,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,28022,128,2,28257:0:0:0:0:
64,192,28257,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,28257,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,28725,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,28725,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,28960,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,28960,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,29077,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,29077,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,29311,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,29311,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,29428,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,29428,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,29663,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,29663,128,0,29897:0:0:0:0:
64,192,29897,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,29897,128,2,30132:0:0:0:0:
192,192,30132,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,30132,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,30600,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,30600,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,30835,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,30835,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,30952,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,31186,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,31303,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,31303,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,31538,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,31538,128,0,31772:0:0:0:0:
192,192,31772,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,31772,128,2,32007:0:0:0:0:
64,192,32007,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,32007,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,32475,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,32475,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,32710,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,32710,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,32827,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,33061,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,33178,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,33178,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,33413,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,33413,128,0,33647:0:0:0:0:
64,192,33647,128,2,33882:0:0:0:0:
320,192,33647,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,33882,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,33882,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,34350,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,34350,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,34585,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,34585,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,34702,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,34936,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,35053,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,35053,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,35288,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,35288,128,0,35522:0:0:0:0:
192,192,35522,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,35522,128,2,35757:0:0:0:0:
64,192,35757,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,35757,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,36225,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,36225,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,36460,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,36460,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,36577,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,36811,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,36928,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,36928,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,37163,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,37163,128,0,37397:0:0:0:0:
64,192,37397,128,2,37632:0:0:0:0:
320,192,37397,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,37632,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,37632,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,38100,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,38100,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,38335,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,38335,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,38452,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,38452,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,38686,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,38686,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,38803,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,38803,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,39038,128,0,39272:0:0:0:0:
192,192,39038,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,39272,128,2,39507:0:0:0:0:
320,192,39272,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,39507,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,39507,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,39975,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,39975,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,40210,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,40210,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,40327,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,40327,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,40561,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,40561,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,40678,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,40678,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,40913,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,40913,128,0,41147:0:0:0:0:
320,192,41147,128,2,41382:0:0:0:0:
192,192,41147,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,41382,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,41382,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,41850,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,41850,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,42085,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,42085,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,42202,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,42202,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,42436,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,42436,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,42553,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,42553,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,42788,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,42788,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,43022,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,43022,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,43139,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,43139,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,43257,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,43257,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,43725,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,43725,128,0,44663:0:0:0:0:
64,192,43960,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,44077,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,44311,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,44428,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,44663,1,0,0:0:0:0:
Rivals_7
Hi~ Sorry for a very late mod ><
You requested in my queue before........

1|2|3|4

[General]
Seems No problem..............

[EZ]

00:21:928 (21928|2,22163|1) - ctrl+g. for variation. cuz You use this pattern here - 00:25:444 (25444|2,25678|1) - and - 00:19:819 (19819|2,20053|1) -

00:36:694 (36694|0) - make this single note. You use single too here for the same sound - 00:34:819 (34819|3) - 00:32:944 (32944|0) -

00:41:850 (41850|0) - to 3
00:44:897 (44897|2) - to 2. more variative imo

[NM]

00:03:413 (3413|0,3647|3) - col 3|1 Respectively. for pitch relevancy
00:05:757 (5757|1,6225|0) - Col 1|2 Respectively. ^
00:12:788 (12788|2,13022|3) - ctrl+g. ^
00:17:592 (17592|0) - it's actually no sound here. (25% playback)
00:19:467 (19467|1) - ^
00:19:585 (19585|2) - to 2 if you accept above
00:22:163 (22163|2) - to 1. cause you put a low pitch here - 00:22:632 (22632|2,22632|3) - so it will represent that the sound is seems like lowering.
00:24:038 (24038|0) - to 4. same reason
00:22:163 (22163|2) - to 1. ^
start from here - 00:25:210 - seems you change your pattern style following see's HD.
00:21:342 (21342|0) - no sound.
00:38:335 (38335|2,38452|3) - to 1|3 respectively
00:39:038 (39038|2,39272|0) - 4|3 respectively
00:44:897 (44897|2) - not too audible. only players with headphone can hear it. reccomend to delete this...

[See's HD]

Too Many Repetitive pattern. Many Parts on this diff that can be Improved

HP OD 7,5.

00:00:600 (600|1) - to 3. avoid jack
00:01:303 (1303|0) - to 4. ^
00:02:475 (2475|2) - ^2. ^
00:03:178 (3178|3) - ^1. ^
00:04:350 (4350|3,4585|2,4702|1) - 3|2|3 Respectively for variation. Pls Don't use a repetitive pattern like you did before. and then move - 00:04:936 (4936|0,4936|2,5053|1) - to the right one column
00:06:225 (6225|0,6460|1,6577|2) - 2|3|2 Respectively, Same reason as above. and then move - 00:06:811 (6811|3,6811|1,6928|2) - To the left one column
00:08:803 - Is there any reason you didn't add note here while you put notes here - 00:06:928 (6928|2) - ? Its actually the same sound. This will make diff seems inconsistent.
00:17:475 (17475|2,17475|1,17710|0,17710|1,17827|3,17827|2,18061|1,18061|2) - Pls Don't repeat the same pattern you already did that here - 00:15:600 (15600|2,15600|1,15835|1,15835|0,15952|3,15952|2,16186|2,16186|1) -
00:18:178 - Missing note here
00:21:225 (21225|2,21225|1,21460|1,21460|0,21577|3,21577|2,21811|1,21811|2,21928|0) - Change it somehow pls. Don't repeat the same pattern
00:24:975 (24975|3,24975|1,25210|0,25210|1,25327|2,25327|3,25561|3,25561|1,25678|2) - ctrl+h. see the pattern before. you only just mirrored this - 00:25:913 (25913|1,25913|3,26147|0,26147|2,26382|1,26382|3) -
00:26:850 (26850|0,26850|2,27085|2,27085|3,27202|0,27202|1,27436|2,27436|0,27553|1) - I recommend to change it somehow....
00:34:350 (34350|3,34350|2,34585|0,34585|1,34702|2,34936|2,35053|0,35053|3,35288|0,35288|2,35522|3,35522|1,35757|2,35757|0) - Change this part somehow.....No repeated pattern pls...

[MX]

I honestly think That MX Diff isn't really needed at all. The reason is the song is quite calm. Pressing 3 notes and stairs could be kinda weird here.
(this is just my personal opinion tho, you can ignore this)

00:03:647 (3647|1,3647|2) - Move this to left. Avoid triple jack notes
00:21:928 (21928|0,22046|1) - ctrl+g
00:22:397 (22397|0) - to 2
00:44:897 (44897|3) - not audible

Good Luck :)
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